Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Damocles 4/Magnus Centenius 28 - Double, Double, Toil and Trouble
Damocles 4/Magnus Centenius 28 - Double, Double, Toil and Trouble

The child known to all save himself as Damocles had buried himself quite uneventfully in the affairs of the Clan for the past few decades. He'd done as his elders bid at every turn with little complaint, running errands for Foundation officers within the Dawn Fortress and familiarizing himself with the internal layout via a strict regimen of running laps and assisting the legion whose job it was to clean the interior of the massive structure. He trained in weapon arts and unarmed fighting with the bronze centurions of the training pits. Atop all of this, he cultivated fanatically, spending sixteen hours a day in meditation, immersing himself in the flow of qi. To facilitate all of this, he hardly slept, spending so little time in the quarters that had been allotted to him that he hardly remembered where they were. His uncommon level of focus helped to mitigate the negative side effects of this deficiency, but he was still constantly tired, often snatching quick cat naps in random corners or imbibing stimulant-packed brews that tasted as if they'd leaped from the deepest abyss of some sulfurous hell.

His efforts had rewarded him well - indeed, he had reached the Ninth Heavenstage through little more than grit and applied commitment in under two decades, almost seven times as fast as some of his peers. For an instant upon attaining the stage, he had contemplated stopping there, using the attention his prodigious speed had garnered him to acquire contemplation-boosting reagents and simply craft his first Pillar. It would not take him long, and he would surely be afforded a position of security and resources with which to further grow.

He'd turned away from that path, of course - there were higher heights to reach.

His progress slowed as he approached and surpassed the Tenth, not for any lack of effort on his part but instead for a far more mundane, yet intractable reason. He was running short on funds, even with the wealth gifted to him from seniors like Auspicious Nine. His Contribution Points slowly and steadily wore themselves away, and he was forced to spend precious time and energy making up for the lack.

It was not that Damocles was a frivolous spender, or a gambler, or a drinker, a businessman or a socialite. He lived in an austere manner, spending little on himself and less on others. The thing that had really been eating away at his finances was one thing only - equipment.

Damocles had possessed specks of pure entropic energy in his ergasias meridian points when he was first admitted into the Clan, an indication of latent power in some part of his being expressing itself prematurely. As he had grown in strength and widened his essence channels, he'd begun to have outbursts of destructive force that arose whenever he exerted himself too fiercely. While he'd managed to control himself enough in most circumstances that he was not a danger to those around him, he found that he could not stop the expression of his powers entirely, and anything he touched that he directed any form of attention to was subject to a small, but constant, stream of entropic qi. It took considerable discipline to studiously not notice the clothes he wore, and any weapons and armor were a nonstarter - even if he didn't exert himself, Damocles would corrode away an ordinary weapon in days, and armor in less time.

He was nothing if not stubborn, however, and refused to let this limit him, going through dozens upon dozens of ever-higher quality commissions from respected forges, any and all that were available for Essence Gathering level cultivators. None lasted long, and the costs of his persistence quickly added up, driving him into self-imposed poverty and slowing his rate of advance. He could have stopped his expenditures at any time, of course, simply learning from one of the many empty-handed styles taught by the innumerable masters the Clan had willing to teach, but he refused. The idea of simply giving up and accepting his limitations was repugnant to Damocles, and the memory of being defeated by Ire-Raised Beater, whose blows he had failed to ward away, still caused him frustration. Thus, he continued to train with spear and shield, even as his touch blackened and broke them over and over.

For a while, time drifted by, and Damocles found himself stuck in something of a rut, seeing no way past his self-imposed bottleneck. His cultivation slowed, and though he redoubled his training to compensate, it began to take a toll on his health, and he made no headway. It was just as he seemed doomed to stagnation that news of Duanzao Lao made its way to the Dawn Fortress, and Damocles saw the path forward.

When the Jingshen had fallen, a choice had been levied to the members of the former merchant clan - assimilate into the Devils, or be exiled by force. Most had taken the latter option, absconding to the Great Battlefield to be taken in by other clans and sects. Some had accepted the Blood of Bronze. Others had refused to give up lands that they saw as theirs, and fled into the wilderness, becoming bandits. Duanzao Lao had been one of those, an apprentice under the tutelage of Tánlì Qiú, a Three-Star Blacksmith in the Foundation Building realm. Tanli had proven himself to be a thorn in the side of the Clan, using his smithing skills to arm his followers with potent weapons en masse that they then used to attack trade caravans and outlying settlements before melting back into the desert. Some unknown means shielded them from a portion of the region's qi-draining effects, allowing them to hide where the Clan could not follow. What came to be dubbed the Sandstorm Centipede Gang successfully bedeviled the Golden Devils for many years in such a manner.

Eventually their luck ran out, of course. A caravan that they ransacked happened to be transporting one Julius Keravnos, a Core Formation elder who was attempting to travel to a niece's wedding while incognito. Miffed at the interruption of such scoundrels, Julius laid the Sandstorm Centipedes to waste, fatally wounding Tanli Qiu and sending him and the few other survivors fleeing into the wastes to die.

Tanli Qiu did die, but not in the manner that Julius had anticipated. Duanzao Lao, who did not share the same stubborn loyalty to the Jingshen cause that Tanli possessed, slew his erstwhile master and ate of his flesh, using a blood art he had secretly procured to absorb the better part of Tanli's smithing expertise, growing to the beginning stages of Foundation in the process. While the process was not without its inefficiencies, Duanzao obtained enough knowledge through his fell deeds to proclaim himself a Two-Star Blacksmith in skill, if not one that had been recognized by any actual authority. He'd stayed mostly undercover since then, despite Golden Devil efforts to root him out - he rarely ventured out of whatever lair he'd made for himself, instead arming other Blood Path gangs and allowing them to wreak havoc on whatever they wished in exchange for a cut of the loot. He hadn't been seen in person for nearly a century.

Now, however, evidence of Duanzao Lao's existence surfaced once more. A caravan just outside of Golden Devil core territories had been raided by a group headed by a cultivator matching his description, and the senior aspirants of the Optimatoi were universally abuzz at the opportunity, as the bounty on Lao's head was considerable for cultivators of their level. Damocles had, by chance, been among the first to hear the news, and set out immediately to prepare. He knew it wouldn't be long before Duanzao vanished once more, and if he was ever going to adequately resolve the drain on his finances, he had to act soon.

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The home of Magnus Centenius more closely resembled a settlement in its own right than it did the home of a single cultivator. A grand multistory inn stood proudly at the front of the complex, a shining restaurant and tea house perched atop the whole affair. Lights shone merrily and gentle music wafted from within, and the silhouettes of people could be seen moving about on every floor. It was richly decorated, and the prices displayed prominently on the ground floor were eminently reasonable, even for those among the Clan that were not blessed with wealth. One could obtain a meal, play a rousing round of Go, buy drinks, gamble, win, gamble more, lose, and have a room for the night at a rate that was not half as financially damaging as some of the more luxurious establishments in the Dawn Fortress. As a result, it was very busy, with the chatter of happy patrons that could be heard from the street outside.

Damocles bypassed the inn and its merriment, for though the master of this place was well known and he could very well have gotten someone to point him to wherever Magnus was, he preferred the idea of no one knowing he'd come to visit, lest his plan perhaps be intuited by someone. An unlikely event, but he had too much at stake to take a chance. In any case, he disliked the idea of using his status as a Golden Devil to attempt to get through to Magnus, not least because he didn't exactly look the part (as much as that could be said for a cultivator). He'd grown into a tall, thin, gangly man, with stubbornly pale skin and a long face that was well suited to fit itself into overlooked corners. The Bronze had hardly expressed itself at all in him despite his cultivation rank, and he'd at times had trouble getting people to believe he was actually a member of the Optimatoi, for any symbols of rank he wore on his person inevitably deteriorated and fell away.

Upon quiet feet he slunk past the bustling lights and into the rest of the complex, darting between shadows and pressing against walls, his eyes peeled for guards. There were a number of figures standing sentinel around some of the buildings - the treasure hall saw easily the most of these, followed by the proudly-proclaimed auction hall and a collection of thoroughly drab, square buildings that were likely designated for storage of some kind. In stark contrast, the poison and medicine halls, each arrayed across from one another, were scarcely supervised at all. What the rationale for this was, Damocles did not know, but it was an opportunity he would not pass up.

The poison hall was shaped like an immense eight-pointed star, each hall representing some facet of the elder cultivator's philosophy and methodology. The quiet hum of qi-gathering arrays could be felt operating within each of them, twisting and twining the energies of creation into different formations and tonal consistencies. To Damocles it was like hearing a finely-tuned orchestra of ever-ringing bells, each note blending into the next seamlessly. He could feel their eddies on his skin as he got closer to the central building, and he redoubled his effort to keep the crudely-churning flame that was his qi tamped down.

By now Damocles had expected to have to navigate his way around some sort of obstacle, and the lack of opposition had his nerves on edge. As he paced through the shadows cast by the overhang of the main entrance, the temptation arose within him to abandon this course of action, to instead simply burn his way through the wall of one of the lesser halls and take what he needed. He hadn't any knowledge of what Dao might inform Magnus' decision-making, but he had enough knowledge of elemental theory and feng shui from the Clan's basic training to make a somewhat accurate guess at which halls were likely to be which. He could be in and out in minutes, with none the wiser until he was long gone.

He stomped down ruthlessly on his cowardly urges with an upswell of contempt. Control yourself, he chided himself internally. Shirking from simply meeting with someone your senior ill becomes you if you mean to confront Duanzao Lao and come out alive. Shaking his head, he stepped up to the set of double doors and found them not even locked - indeed, they swung open silently at a mere touch, revealing the hall beyond.

The first and most potent impression made by the poison hall was the smell. The mingled odors of thousands of ingredients had permeated the air over the decades and imbued it with a distinctly pungent atmosphere - Damocles had to resist the urge to sneeze as he breathed in, and he could feel a slight burn as the residual essence present within ate away at his nasal passages. He proceeded forward through a low, squat hallway formed of smooth grey rock, clearly designed for function rather than presentation. Small dark vents punctuated the ceiling every few feet, and the quiet rumble of air circulation provided an underlying coat of sound that masked Damocles' footsteps, but not the distinct sound of someone at work that he could hear up ahead.

He walked towards a malignant green glow, ignoring turns that led to subsidiary halls. He could feel eddies of elemental qi condensing within each, and yet within the center of the complex, there was something far more complex and powerful that he could feel pressuring the edges of his being as he got closer. A conglomerate of qi, impeccably balanced and tuned for a purpose that was beyond his ability to discern. Guided by this feeling of approaching a melody in motion, Damocles turned a corner and found himself in the central poison hall, and faced with the master of toxins he had come seeking.

The hall was taller than any room he'd been in thus far, backlit by the caustic green glow of a cauldron at its exact center. Complex sigils were carved into intricate, interlocking arrays on the floor, interrupted at even intervals by eight pillars of ebony wood that held up the ceiling like a pagoda. The walls, also constructed in an octagonal fashion, were festooned with shelves that held every imaginable sort of ingredient - pickled parts of Spirit Beasts from all across the region, variously-colored bags of dust of indeterminable origin, vials of liquid that shimmered, glinted, fizzed, or smoked.

Magnus Centenius stood with his back turned to the younger cultivator, laboring busily over the noxious concoction in the cauldron. He resembled nothing so much as a gargantuan spider made of wood and bone and bronze to Damocles, the ordinary figure of a human frame suspended in the midst of a dozen pairs of artificially-constructed arms. Some were affixed to his flesh by unseen means, some were attached to his armor, and some rejected the facade of normality and simply floated next to his torso. Each set of them was different - one was comprised of horrendous, twitchy, elongated bones with several joints that rolled and rotated with fluid ease like gigantic fingers. Another array resembled blocky planks of wood that ground together like stone as they moved and pistoned in a thoroughly robotic fashion. Yet another was simply a great mass of chains that had come together into something resembling a tentacle, with each strand of chain splitting off at the end into individual manipulators. They all moved to their own unique rhythm, as if controlled by a separate intelligence. At times they moved in synchronicity with each other, and just as quickly they jerked apart as if they intended to tear the man between them in twain. Magnus himself seemed deceptively small and helpless, the lack of fleshy arms of his own creating the image of a man trapped, puppeted by the products of his own mad genius.

Magnus was thoroughly engrossed in his work, using each of his forest of limbs to perform a different task. One arm grasped a thick metal paddle and stirred the glowing green liquid in his cauldron in slow, precise sweeps. Others laid facsimiles of hands with too many joints on the sides of the iron and glowed a warm cherry red, heating the solution to an even temperature. Limbs darted here and there, picking precise pinches of seemingly random ingredients off of the walls and casting them into the pot in a staccato rhythm, and still others traced empty patterns in the air, leaving traceries of qi behind them that Damocles could faintly perceive as intersecting with each other in some way. All the while, Magnus' body remained motionless, suspended just above the ground and slightly over the cauldron, his steely gaze steadily fixed upon the mixture.

Damocles waited there for some time, watching the poison master at work, but could not discern the intricacies of anything Magnus was doing - whatever poison the Foundation Expert was brewing, its complexities were beyond the deduction of a rank amateur with no prior knowledge in the subject. After several hours with no sign that Magnus had noticed him, however, Damocles' patience grew thin and he made to step forward. The courtesies of respect were present for good reason, but he was on a time limit.

He had scarcely shifted his weight off of his back foot when Magnus' qi flared in a surge of directed intent, and the stern voice of the Corpse Poison King rang out through the hall. "Foolish junior," it rang in harsh tones that bespoke the sting of chemicals and the cold calculus of an architect. "Are you not aware that is most suicidal to disturb a poison crafter when he is in the pivotal stage of crafting a potent elixir?"

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Several hours and one extraordinarily in-depth lecture later…

Magnus loomed large over the kneeling form of Damocles, a grim specter held aloft by a mass of ropy appendages, hung by the uncompromising force of his own genius. "This concludes my standard-issue safety briefing, junior," he boomed. "Do you understand its contents, or must I repeat myself?"

Damocles pressed his forehead into the floor. "No, senior. This junior has listened and understood. You need not expound further for this one's benefit." Not when you've gone on for so long already, he grumbled internally. He wasn't so foolish as to voice such a sentiment aloud, of course.

Magnus' impression remained impassive. "And in the future, if you should encounter any air filtration arrays of the third degree or above, you will remain…"

"On the rimward side, senior, and refrain from expelling particulates too close to the line of delineation." In other words, avoiding breathing on or near the things - evidently, some of the toxins Magnus worked with were potent enough that the protective arrays he'd put in place to contain them had to concentrate all their energy on keeping the substances from reacting with anything around it, and thus were extremely delicate and prone to potentially-fatal mishaps if disturbed to even the smallest degree.

The elder cultivator nodded, seemingly satisfied. "Good. Now then, what have you made your way into a poison master's lair in the dead of night for? Need someone dead? Or perhaps you are one of those fools who thinks I can brew an elixir to make a fairy fall in love with you?"

Damocles clambered to his feet and shook his head. "No. I need to incapacitate a mid-Pillar Construction bandit without killing him, and I've got no chance of doing so through brute force. I have no time to cultivate further before my opportunity is lost, so I must use trickery. I need a paralysis poison infused into my blood and kept dormant until the time is right. No other poison maker that I know of has the required expertise, save for you."

A pale green eyebrow quirked upwards as Damocles explained. "You hold much ambition within yourself, junior," Magnus rumbled, his forest of limbs carrying him back and forth as he peered at the younger legionnaire from multiple angles. "And not much regard for your own well-being, it seems. You are correct that I am one of the few masters you could feasibly reach that possesses the capability to do such a thing, it's true. The question therein is whether I could do it without permanently damaging some of your nerves, or even your meridians. The poison required for such a task is potent, and it would be immensely painful."

Damocles stared back at Magnus through flat, dead eyes ringed by scarred skin. "I can handle pain."

"It's not your resolve I doubt, junior, only your sensibility," the poison master retorted. "And your savings. Flytrap Armadillo Essence will be required for the appropriate infusion, and as uniformly Foundation-level beasts, their expense is likely well out of your price range, unless you have someone sponsoring you - and given the way in which you've approached me, I rather think this isn't the case." He brought a limb of rippling quicksilver up and scratched idli at his chin. "I will do what is necessary to help the Clan, but I'm also a businessman. What do you have to give that's worth the value of my efforts?"

In response, Damocles held his lanky, pale hands up, palms facing Magnus. Twin dots of purest midnight burned there with a fierce, hateful intensity, stinging the eye even to look upon. "Pure entropic qi," he intoned. "I know little of potions and poisons, but given I can't seem to go two days without one researcher or another approaching me about its unique effects, I suspect it would be of some use in your enterprise. I'm willing to donate as much as you would feel equal to the commission I ask."

Magnus suddenly surged closer, carried by a tidal wave of arms as he gazed intently at Damocles' palms with an avaricious gaze. "My my," he rasped, his voice suddenly melodious and smooth. "Now there is an ingredient the likes of which I have not seen in some time." His eyes flickered up for a moment to meet those of Damocles, before locking into the junior's qi points once more. "And no one else knows you're here, you said?"

Damocles, having an unpleasant feeling that he knew where this was going, nodded anyway.

Magnus steepled his fingers with four pairs of arms. "So you've come here unannounced, in the dead of night, with no one to know if you've gone missing, and are waving a very lucrative ingredient under my nose with the admission that you need my help." His eyes blinked, metallic-like irises shining like coins. "I do believe someone should have given you a warning to not show your hand so fully in a negotiation, junior. What incentive am I given to not simply imprison you and harvest as much essence as I'm able to? The uses I could procure from it would be more valuable than anything you could currently produce - more than your life itself, were it to come to that."

Damocles was a pessimist at heart, and had anticipated running into such a scenario for quite some time now - people, after all, were never more than a moment away from turning on each other if given the proper incentives, and so Magnus' words did not surprise him. More than anything, it stung that he had been forced into a position of such revolting dependency - something that would never happen again, had he any say in it.

Relying on others was tantamount to welcoming vulnerability into yourself.

"Three reasons," he said, suppressing a quaver in his voice that came partly from fear, partly from anger. "Firstly - if you imprison me to harvest my qi you will only retain access to a junior's output, with all the impurities and lack of refinement that implies. I'm not even in the Eleventh Heavenstage yet, so you can't even be assured that this is the highest quality qi I could offer. Assist me and I will grow stronger, more capable of not only providing you with valuable reagents, but also other forms of assistance."

"Second. The bandit I intend to act against is one that has affected the business interest of many in the area, and who only stands to become more of a nuisance as time goes on. You yourself have had delayed shipments as a result of his raids, I believe. It is in your interest to allow me to deal with him."

"And thirdly." Damocles' eyes met those of Magnus, a flicker of fear hidden behind a layer of flinty resolve. "To harvest my qi, you'd need to keep me alive, and nothing can hold me forever. Should you choose to do this, I will devote my every waking moment to freeing myself, and extract proportionate retribution on you once I do. This I pledge on my dao-heart."

There was silence for a moment, broken only by the bubbling of some unknown cauldron in another room as Magnus and Damocles stared at each other. A tension built in the acrid, green-tinted air, the auras of the two gently pushing at each other in a way that promised the onset of irrevocable violence.

Then Magnus threw his head back and laughed uproariously. "By the Bull," he roared. "You certainly don't need any instruction in speech-making." He cackled once more, the tension thoroughly broken. "I admire your gumption, junior," he said, stroking his bronze-tinted beard thoughtfully. "Reminds me of myself in the start of my entrepreneurial days. Daring, ambitious, not afraid to risk life and limb in pursuit of an idea. A foolish young boy, more likely to get crippled or killed than make a name for himself. A talent like your deserves nurturing, I reckon. If nothing else, we might help you make it to Foundation before you start trading limbs for power."

"So you'll help me with what I need?" Damocles ventured.

The elder cultivator nodded. "The opportunity to work with an untainted source of entropic qi would be worth it in and of itself. The fact that you'll be getting rid of that bastard Duanzao Lao into the bargain is an added bonus."

"I never said -"

"Bah, as if it'd be anyone but him. With him gone, my profit margins will likely go up by entire percentage points. Entirely worthwhile, even if I gain nothing else from it, which I will."

Damocles lowered his hands. "That is true. I imagine you'll be wanting to proceed with the qi extraction before anything else, then?"

Magnus grinned. "Straight to business, I see. While I admire your drive, I thought the two of us might discuss the topic of alcohol first."

For the first time that night, Damocles was caught wholly off guard. "…eh?"

"Beyond my abilities as a superb poison maker, I am, bar none, the foremost Foundation-level brewmaster in the Clan," Magnus stated in the tone of one who has gone beyond boasting and made irrevocable fact of their claims. "While I will keep half of the entropic essence we extract for my own private experiments, I intend to try my hand at using the other half to fulfill some recipes I've had in mind for quite some time, and seeing as you're the one who's going to be donating part of themselves, I thought you should have some input on its production, and I may even provide you with a sample of the finished product. Do you drink?"

"Er … no," Damocles said, getting the feeling that his answer didn't necessarily matter.

"Bah, nonsense," Magnus retorted, confirming the suspicions of the junior. "One sip of my finer brews and you'll change your opinion faster than Heaven would smack us into the dirt if it could. Besides, being drunk will make the process of infusing the poison into you easier." He began to drift away on his cloud of limbs, waving Damocles after him.

"You have brews that can numb my pain that severely?" Damocles asked, following reluctantly behind the elder cultivator.

"Don't be silly, junior," came the reply, somehow sounding both amused and disappointed. "That will be agonizing no matter what you do! Being drunk will make it easier for me - I will need some way to entertain myself while you're spasming and wailing. That, and the alcohol will keep your liver too busy to try and remove the poison I'm adding to your blood. But come, we can deal with that later - for now, we will go to my distillery, and discuss matters of real import." With that, Magnus scuttled off, a hydra of hands carried around a corner and out of sight.

Fighting the now constant feeling that he was committing to an idea he'd regret in the future, Damocles followed. "This will be worth it," he muttered to himself as he went. "Only those who limit themselves to mediocrity abide by the conventions of sensibility."

"That's the spirit, junior," Magnus replied, surprising Damocles, "What, you think my senses are so dulled that I couldn't hear you muttering when you're standing next to me? Now hurry up, I've been playing with mixing drinking with spirit fruits rather than using them as the base for the alcohol. Should weaken some of them enough that you won't explode from excess Qi." Magnus descended into his own mutters about juice to whiskey ratios and Qi concentrations.

Try as he might, however, Damocles could not stop the subtle shaking in his hands as he walked.



Xan A/N: This collab was an interesting experience! Just past our starting point, LordEdric had his computer demolished by an impudent baby, so I was faced with the task of portraying someone else's character accurately, which I most certainly wanted to do - our characters are part of us, even infinitesimally so, and I didn't want to do any disservice to the work he's put into Magnus. It involved reading through pretty much every omake and collab he's done, talking with LordEdric on discord as I wrote, and overall trying to mesh the two characters and their aesthetic in such a way that it flowed decently. And not to toot my own horn, but I reckon I did okay, if I say so myself. Damocles has been something of an isolated character thus far, and while I've got a rudimentary plan for a story arc following this, adding another actual character for him to interact with was somewhat illustrative of how doing that can illuminate facets of our characters that we wouldn't otherwise see, or think to portray. All in all, I had a lot of fun writing this, and I'm glad LordEdric was able to get his computer fixed in time to leave his mark on it too.

It's almost a shame that Training Juniors doesn't work past 9th Heavenstage, this would have been a perfect way to sneak another one of those in. Ah well!

Xan

I kind of feel bad having to leave a good chunk of the writing to Xan, but I do like how he did Magnus. And I did have fun making Magnus even more Dwarf like.

LordEdric

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Aretaphila X14 - Trials of Nature’s Son Part 3
Aretaphila Myia X14
Trials of Nature's Son Part 3

The Soaring Dune Flotilla was yet another turning point in the life of Xin Wei Long. As a young man, Lin Han had been a mediocre adherent of the Water Temple of the Xin Kingdom. An insignificant ant in the weakest vassal of the Golden Devil Clan, themselves formerly the weakest power of the Desert Tripartite. Itself the most impoverished part of the Virtuous Flipper Region, and so on and so forth. Did it ever end?

The man who had been born of Lin Han wondered. Beyond the dead sea. Beyond the Turtle World. Was there perhaps more and greater beings that overshadowed all he had once known, just waiting for him to reach a new plateau before shattering the foundations of his confidence and accomplishment anew all over again?

He did not know. But still, as he skirted through the frosted dunes to where a skiff lay cunningly hidden to join the Commodore in returning North…Xin Wei Long could not help but wonder.

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"The Jingshen Bei," Jingshen Bei Wan spoke, the Grand Son of Heaven joining him to gaze at the coming dawn, "What do you know of us?"

"Not much," The elementalist replied, "Your Founder was brother to the other founders of the Jingshen Clan, though only one of them became a Nascent Soul. The Bei took the Western mines, and were the most military minded of them. From there…" He gestured outwards.

"Hmm," Two hands, wrapped in faded silks, clutched behind the small of the old man's back, "A shame that so little was shared with you within Cloudy Jade City. There's a bit more to that story. Our pride, in fact. Let me tell you why the Bei Elder became the most militaristic of his brothers - the man possessed an affinity for warfare, unique among the Jingshen of that first generation, as they fled to the desert."

Xin Wei Long said nothing, watching the dunes pass and the sun continue to rise. Eventually, the Expert continued his story.

"The Jingshen were originally of the West - We came from the northern plains, but were forced out due to the intrigues of the Gemstone Justice, and the dangers of the demonic powers near the Ghost-Curse Vein. Back then, the Ma Clan were a tribe of butchers, for all their pretensions at empire." The Commodore smiled, "How times have changed, yet remain the same."

"What does this have to do with the Bei Elder?"

"Where the father and brothers saw crimes and danger, the Bei Elder saw a learning opportunity. As it so happens, the Ma Clan share some overlap with the Jingshen's old stories - the tale of a divine king, ruler of the storms and breaker of iron. A great sword that chilled the soul of any who laid eyes upon it, accompanied by an army of archers unequal to all the rest of the world."

He snorted, "More serendipity."

"Breaker of iron?" Xin Wei Long had no clue what the epithets had to do with one another, but surely such a legendary command of the elements would have left an enduring legend in the rest of the region, right?

The Commodore shook his head, "That's all we know. Other than ourselves and the Ma, no one else knows the story of the Rain King. Foolishness, really." His hands gripped more tightly, "It is only in recent years that some of us have come to believe that the old stories refer to a costly battle that badly reduced the Golden Devils, forcing them to hole up within their mountain homes before the coming of the Demonic Soup Chef."

"Foolishness indeed," Nature's Son shook his head, "If more knew, then perhaps we could have discovered the secret to harming the Golden Devils so." Even as he said it, a hole opened up within his breast - raw curiosity, a desire to know.

"What was this man's name?"

Jingshen Bei Wan paused, then turned to face the younger man, Favored of Heaven.

"We do not have a name for him." Flinty black eyes, burning with resolve stared into his own, "But the Ma named him 'Temujin', and in the absence of anything better, so do we."

...

The Soaring Dune Flotilla were beyond audacious, as things turned out - there were only so many safe routes in the Northern lands, and none could safely be traversed on foot due to the draining nature of the desert. It was for this reason that a sole, single road lead from the Jingshen Lands up north into the mountains, the caravan that had taken this trip was not made to pay tariffs in the traditional sense - rather, the caravans were forced to allocate a number of Spirit Stones with which to fuel the Arrays and Tools which enabled cargo and passenger both to survive the trip.

Dangerous, and only mildly profitable. The Magic Oak Sect were generous for a demonic power, even if they were foes of the Jingshen themselves. But that mattered little in the face of profiteers, and that trade was one of the most reliable ones for the Servant Elders of Cloudy Jade City. A path towards wealth that no proper Jingshen pursued, and yet another card that the Golden Devil Clan were unaware of, never bothering to pay for the cooperation of the Jingshens' longest victims.

After all, why go North? The route to the plains was far less treacherous, and for all the evil that the Golden Devils would commit in depriving the Jingshen of their rightful wealth, the Invaders at least took their promises of security seriously.

That was why, when the Soaring Dune Flotilla had been worse than decimated during the opening stages of the Sorrow of the Desert, they had retreated to the sole place that none would ever bother to look - a hidden hanger, a rich Spirit Stone mine that lay behind a region crisscrossed with Qi Draining Sands, only possible to traverse at speed and at extreme expense. The very geography forming an ideal defense for the final redoubt of the Jingshen Resistance.

Clouds carried by the northern winds obscured the sun, casting all into qi-aspected shadow as its energies were greedily dragged into the earth, the distance great enough that by the time they fell to ground level the Qi was stripped enough that it could be assimilated without issue.
The skiff flew in between a set of particularly tall sand dunes, the helmsman of the craft expertly maneuvering between the obstacles with the ease of practice before directing them straight into a wall of gently falling sand.

Xin Wei Long shut his eyes, and held his breath as the particulate washed over him for a mere second, before a great breeze pushed against the Grand Son of Nature, blasting the grains of the desert off his Favored body.

"Welcome to the Black Gold Oasis," The Commodore said with pride as the elementalist opened his eyes, the older man's arms spread wide to reveal an expansive cavern. A stupendously massive dry dock occupied every visible inch - scores upon scores of airships suspended within, and each of them being endlessly looked over and maintenanced by cultivators and array smiths.

"Remarkable," Xin Wei Long said honestly, "Are these all from the war?"

Jingshen Bei Wan shook his head, "We spent many years after the fall of the desert replenishing our losses. The Black Gold Oasis was always intended as a forward operating base to hold against the Magic Oak Sect. The unique positioning and nature of this spirit meant that we were out of position to truly strike back against the Devils, save for when they sent their Juniors en masse to harass our lands behind the front lines of the invasion."

He spat back into the falling wall of sand.

"Pathetic."

Nature's Son continued to look upon the array of martial might before him, feeling impressed at the sheer concentration of craftsmanship and martial might around him. Even if he could one day suppress this military power as easily as overturning his hand, he would only ever be a single Qi Sorcerer, and thus unable to project his power with the same speed and coverage that the Soaring Dune Flotilla could!

If the Commodore had stood by his side in the Xin Kingdom, Nature's Son would have feared no Xuan, and certainly no Devil!

"This is the strength of a former Great Power," The man in question said, observing his guest's attentions, "We had planned around matching our wealth and innovation against the brute, thuggish strength of our adversaries. But they moved more swiftly in their treachery, and abused their blasphemous powers to raise up another Nascent Soul in secret." He shook his head, "Were it not for those perfidious and cowardly actions, the Jingshen would have had the time to leverage our greater strength."

Xin Wei Long turned back towards him, "How?"

The Leader of the Resistance smiled toothily, his teeth showing.

"Let me show you."

...


Like majestic birds, or perhaps cunning bats, a dozen's dozen of shadows flitted across the star-lit sand of the former Jingshen lands. Flying in tight formation, their shapes were obscured by the darkness of night - captured yin energies distorting star and moon light, having it pass through their forms without directly interacting with them. A discovery made long ago by the Bei Elder - most senses relied upon the Law of Light, merely processing a reflection of where it fell upon and enveloped them. As Light was of Yang, then the natural opposite - Yin - could be used to confound it.

An easy enough conclusion to make, but one that the Arraysmiths of the Resistance had toiled mightily to realize. Far too late to turn the perfidious shadow against its greatest wielder, but after the element's betrayal at the Invaders hands, those engineers and craftsmen found themselves uniquely motivated to bring to heel what had once been taken for granted.

Thankfully, the Black Gold Oasis always had an abundance of Yin energies on hand, powering their artifice.

But as the raiding force crossed the desert, Xin Wei Long found himself curious. Even if the ships were cloaked and swift, once they entered close range with their targets there was no way the Arraycraft of the Golden Devils would fail to detect their airships. He himself had spent many years acquainting himself with the nature of the defenses that Waycastles possessed, and the settlements that were springing up around the Jingshen's old holdings would doubtlessly benefit from their standardized schema.

Still, though the ships bent light, the other elements of the Laws of Earth were unaffected.

Five Elements, Heaven Above and Earth Below. Then Yin and Yang.

Nature's Son considered lending his own abilities, but the Commodore had laughed. Clapped him on the shoulder.

"Glad to see the initiative, but we couldn't ask for a Guest to exert himself like that," The older Expert's eyes had twinkled, "Not yet, anyway."

Thus, the flotilla proceeded. The whispers of the wind and the shifting of the sands are the only sign of their passage beneath the night sky. Hours pass, and eventually the clouds part - a glimmer of moonlight descending upon the desert to reveal an aberration among the dunes. A series of walls, constructed of compacted sand layered over with a mesh of array script.

"Construction site," Nature's Son muttered in recognition. It was something he had seen many times during his journey, standalone constructions out in the desert saw tons upon tons of sand raised up and used as temporary obstacles against the predators and Spirit Beasts that roamed while a more secure and permanent foundation was prepared. Xin Wei Long's fists clench, popping with the force of the gesture.

The shadows split apart. Many slow, as others move forward in accelerating wings, beginning to encircle what he knew now to be the destination. But how will they attack? Though the dunes were far from their most impregnable defense, they drew up the sands themselves, ensnaring and entrapping whatever sought to breach them. The airships simply weren't hardy enough to survive ramming several tons of empowered sand, let alone escape intact.

What was the Flotilla's plan?

In moments, the shrouded craft complete their formation, and in concert all move at uniform speed once again. Encircling the construction, qi beginning to fill the air with the thrumming of prepared arts.

To his side, dozens upon dozens of crewmen managed to pull out bows. Some crafted of spirit beast horn. Others brilliantly carved of spirit stone. The Experts among them withdrew their own works, composite, etched with array script.

Jingshen Bei Wan revealed his own weapon - a cunningly shaped thing of glass, shot through with veins that glowed with power. As one, the Jingshen Bei nocked their weapons. As one, they aimed them into the sky.

"Volley!"

As one, they loosed.

A cloud of missiles fell upon the fortification. Death from above circumventing the defenses of the perimeter entirely. The thudthudclangthud of hundreds of arrows descending like rain in a storm caused his internal Water Pillar to twitch, ever so slightly.

The Commodore smiled at him, as the volley came to an end. With it, the Devils responded.

Part of the wall blew open, revealing twenty-one Golden Devils, already moving into lockstep. Xin Wei Long frowned as threads of qi strung between the Invaders, shimmering gold as their individuality was subsumed.

Forming a giant entity, glad in bronze and spearing both spear and shield.

"Hoplite Formation," Nature's Son muttered in awe. As a former vassal of the Golden Devils, and one who sought to keep himself as unnoticed as possible on his way north…Xin Wei Long had never before had cause to see it in action.

"It's not so impressive," The Commodore of the Soaring Dunes replied with a smirk, "Let me show you how we deal with that."

The great Bronze construct strode forward confidently into the encirclement, spear striking out deliberately towards the shadowy, flitting airships. The Hoplite did not bellow. Did not taunt. Only wordless roars of anger bellowed into the night sky.

In futility.

The airships of the Soaring Dune Flotilla were not meek lambs, awaiting a wolf to slaughter them!

They were a pack of wolves, slavering for the feast before them!

As the Hoplite ventured further and further away from the fortification, the encircling shadows darted around the new target, forming a new encirclement. Its diameter just beyond the furthest reaches of the Qi Construct. The Hoplite Formation was strong, yes. Mighty beyond compare for what made it up. But ultimately, it was still a Golden Devil.

And the greatest weakness of any Devil is their lack of agility, even with their prodigious strength.

Airships dove in, strafing at the sides of the Hoplite as its occupants fired arrow after arrow into its unprotected mass of qi. Their whooping and hollering and taunting carrying far into the night sky even as more and more arrow hafts sank into the false flesh of the colossus before them.

When the first arrow-riddled corpse fell out of the Hoplite, the wolves scented blood.

The Hoplite, which had struck so aggressively and stood so domineering until now switched tacts; instead of endlessly stabbing and sweeping, the shield of the Formation took center stage in its fighting style - endlessly repositioning its thickest side to as many airships as possible.

But that had been a mistake. The helmsmen of the Soaring Dunes Flotilla were too skilled, too swift. Faster than the Hoplite could turn and reposition itself, the airships strafed the opposite end of the shield itself. More and more arrows sunk into the qi construct with reckless abandon.

The sand grew slick with Golden Devil blood. Invader blood. Corpse upon alien corpse fell into the sand, and with each new death the Hoplite grew just a bit weaker. Just a bit less domineering.

Twenty corpses littered the sands, and only a single Expert stood defiantly at the end. Their Qi all but guttered out, but corpse-arms still gleaming dully.

Commodore Jingshen Bei smiled, then fell to the desert with glass bow in hand, and he nocked his arrow.

"Where's the second one?" He called out to his quarry, arrow pointed away from the Golden Devil.

"Centurion Outi was struck in your initial volley," A soft, attractive voice chimed. A woman. She might have been beautiful, but Nature's Son had learned his lesson on the value of making assumptions off that alone.

The Commodore hummed, before aiming his bow forward, bowstring pulled taut.

The womanly expert charged, desert sand exploding behind her with the force of her charge.

A shining glass arrow flew, sinking deep into the charging woman's breast. Her body stumbled, skipped, then plowed through the sands before coming to a rest at last. At the Commodore's feet.

The night sky was split by the cheers and adulation of the raiding force, and Nature's Son couldn't help but get caught up in the shouting as well.

...

Xin Wei Long came upon the Commodore later in the site, now revealed to be built over a cavernous mine, which had only been in the process of being widened and stabilized by the workers present. The older man stood alone, knees pressed against a work bench as a bronzed figure was sprawled across its top. In his fingers were curled blond trusses, a knee dug into the small of the back of the corpse. Nature's Son took a look at the face, expression stilled in death.

"He's young."

"Yeah," Jingshen Bei Wan said with a groan of effort, "Damned Invaders are benefiting from the Great Era too. They keep making these Centurions younger and younger every year." The older man spits to the side, his free hand reaching behind his back to withdraw a wicked knife, steely and gray with array script swirling over its surface.

"I'll be right with you." He promised.

The knife sunk into the exposed throat, and with the ease of long practice began the process of disassembly.

"There's a rumor, you know." The Expert said, arm sawing back and forth, "The key ingredient to making their corpse-arms isn't the heart or the muscles or anything." The hand strains, begins moving more vigorously, "So we tried to get to the bottom of it. Any weakness is good for us, you know?" A hard pant, a grinding sound, "We never did find out the whole reclamation process. But what we did discover is that the only times a Golden Devil body are consistently not melted down after death?"

A crack. A tear. A scream of pried apart flesh and bone.

An affectionate pat to an object in hand.

"It's when they're missing these babies."

Xin Wei Long glanced away again, seeing the skulls hanging upon the prows of the respective airships. He shuddered, realizing the true macabre nature of those decorations at last.

"So!" Jingshen Bei Wan replied as he set his prize to the side, "What did you think?"

"Effective," Nature's Son answered sincerely, "I've never heard of a Golden Devil Formation being defeated so bloodlessly before."
The older Expert smiled, "Yeah. These kinds of guerilla actions had been the point of the Flotilla from the start. Find isolated pockets of our enemies, surround and ambush them. Destroy them through mounted cavalry. Then return to safe harbors."

"Your archery was impressive," Xin Wei Long continued, "I remember asking about it when you picked me up, in fact." He gestured towards the glass forged bow hanging from the older man's back, "But you instead talked about the Ma Clan?"

Jingshen Bei Wan nodded, his expression turning wistful even as he held his prize out to drain out over the ground, "That was necessary, dear Guest. The Bei Elder was an archer by profession, having spent his youth entranced by our stories of Temujin, and spending time traveling the Plains seeking to hone those same skills. First taking him to the practitioners who would go on to form the Arrow and Flowers Sect, he became a superlative marksman, even within Foundation Establishment. To that end, the Jingshen Founder looked upon his son's talent, and commissioned a treasure be crafted for him with all the wealth that a power of the Gemstone Justice Sect could muster." The Commodore's empty hand reaches back to heft up his own bow.

"Is…" The younger Expert gestured towards the proffered weapon.

"No," Jingshen Bei Wan shook his head, "This Threaded Vein Glass Bow is merely a replica of that great treasure. The original played upon the strengths of the Elder's own archery style - endlessly calculating the positioning of the battlefield and his targets, predicting every movement. Relentlessly hunting down and drawing his foes into his line of sight." He sighed wistfully, "Always ensuring that each arrow landed when and where he had intended it."

"Sounds impressive. But what does this have to do with the Ma Clan?"

"They, too, possess an archery tradition. And when they first came across the Cursed Ghostly Vein, they caused a great clamor as they sought to displace our Jingshen Clan from our holdings in the far north of the plains." A finger points westwards, towards that presumed ancestral homeland, "Naturally, the Jingshen Founder took exception to this, and checked the at the time Ma Emperor through the power of his cultivation and alliances. But this was a tenuous state of affairs, for the Ma were many, and of a wicked bent. It is not for nothing that the Horse Slaves were considered a Demonic Power at first."

Nature's Son nodded, already picturing the scenario in his mind. The hapless Jingshen, forced to confront a great wave of demonic cultivators in their prehistory, another set of Invaders preceding their current predicament.

"By now, the Bei Elder had advanced to Core Formation, and as an archer he was considered without peer in the Virtuous Flipper region. Endlessly besting even the Archers of the Plains, winning tournament after tournament and much renown to give teeth to his families endless accumulation of treasure."

A shake of the head, accompanied by the steady pitter patter dripping liquid from his outstretched hand.

"The Ma, even as their perfidious Emperor was held in check…Their rabble were not. And as raiders do, they descended upon the noble merchants of our ancestral homelands. Their archers endlessly felling many innocent caravans, stealing wealth from where it truly belonged." Teeth grind with inherited enmity, "Until the day the Bei Elder decided to strike down the horse slaves himself. Standing atop a mountain, he laid eyes upon the Great Battlefield, three spatial rings filled with arrows on hand, the Clear Compass Bow ready. And for three days and nights, the Bei Elder fired arrow after arrow into the plains. He never moved, yet his strikes never erred. You've seen the Devil's Glass Spear Array in action?"

The image of a great pillar of jagged glass soaring through the air like an eagle flits through Xin Wei Long's mind, the swiftly descending missile striking a blood path cultivator dead in the chest, his torso evaporating with the force of the blow.

"Yes."

"Imagine that, but far more magnificent. Repeated endlessly, like a great rain of the things. The Bei Elder reaped the horse slaves like wheat before the scythe, before they finally took their collective heads from between their captured woman's legs for long enough to mount a response." He spits again, this time into the drying pool of crimson liquid before him.

"A cadre of mounted archers dispatched to slay him. Each of them in Core Formation, but none his match! No, the Bei Elder was not cut down. He was merely checked. The Horse Slaves Core Formation elders too swift to catch easily, and their own skill with the bow sufficient enough to endlessly present a threat to that hero even at such extreme distances, even if they lacked his raw accuracy. A number of techniques and mean tricks were likely used to harass and pressure him."

"Did the Righteous Path not assist them?"

"Did they assist us forty, sixty years ago Junior?" The older man sneered, "But no. By then we Jingshen sought to pay for protection. And oh yes, the Righteous Path took our money. Not just from us, though. The Ma Clan paid an immense weregild. All our pillaged wealth and holdings, in exchange for fealty to the Righteous Path forever and forgiveness for the crime of displacing us."

A pause, as the words sank into Xin Wei Long. He had understood that the nature of Heaven's Justice was at times only loosely upheld by those who claimed to walk the Righteous Path. But to hear it laid out so baldly…

"What of the Bei Elder, then?"

A snort, "Our illustrious ancestor survived, of course. Then, ever the pursuer of his art, he spoke to the Ma themselves, walking alone into our former lands to do so. It was from those visits that he learned of our shared legend of Temujin. He saw that as a sign, swore eternal friendship with them, and walked away with the secrets of their own mounted archery.

"Just in time for the Jingshen to be exiled from the Plains powers by Gemstone Justice for 'defaulting on debts owed', let that be a lesson to you, Junior. If someone says that your money is really their money, then they are a perfidious thief. Whether it is a banker, whether it is the taxman. Only the Jingshen can be trusted to fulfill such a role! Everyone else just abuses their power to unjustly rob you."

He shakes his hand vigorously, the tussle of blond hair in his grip flapping about wildly to emphasize the point.

"The Devils especially." A thumb gestured behind him, towards the incomplete mine even now being ransacked by the members of the Flotilla, "This is just us taking back what we are owed." A black eye warily observed the Grand Son of Nature.

"There were some things that caught my attention, Commodore."

"Oh?" He gestured with his bow, "Speak your questions, then."

"How did your Jingshen cross their way into the desert?"

Jingshen Bei Wan snorted, "Even back then, the Golden Devils knew better than to offend our Jingshen Clan. If they'd dared to charge us like they did after moving into the desert, the Righteous Powers would have driven them thence centuries earlier, mark my words!"

"And the Clear Compass Bow? Was that lost to the Devils as well?"

A content smile split the elder man's face for the first time in the conversation, his bow being placed aside to withdraw a new knife. This one curved, its tip filed away into a scraping point.

"Our ancestors inheritance is beyond the reach of the Devils, Junior." The knife is effortlessly twirled between dexterous fingers, "Before the Sorrow, our greatest scion inherited it, and took it to prove himself by breaking the Iron, as did ancient Temujin in the times of old." With satisfaction, he plunges the knife into his prize, the tip only dimpling the skin.

"My younger brother Wulong took the bow, along with our most critical remaining clansmen west to Strength Purity lands." His arm wrenched back and forth with the effort of trying to sink the knife in, "From what we have heard, after defeating the Iron Prodigy and crippling her, he has since proven his dominance over his peers in the Blood Defiance Federation. Our most critical heritage is beyond the reach of the Devils, and so we of the Resistance can fight with all our strength without hesitation."

Heaven nudged the thoughts of it's Favored, "Because there is nothing left you need to protect, correct?"

"Exactly right, Junior." The Commodore of the Soaring Dune Flotilla worked his arms for slightly longer, before eventually returning his knife to its sheathe.

"This is a bit embarrassing, but could you help me clean this?"

Nature's Son nodded easily, flame and wind flensing flesh from metallic bone.

When the airships departed before the arrival of dawn, they did so while carrying a trove of spirit stones, and twenty two freshly cleaned bronze skulls.

...

It would be a mistake to assume that the Soaring Dunes Flotilla were a ragtag bunch of freedom fighters. To the contrary, the Jingshen themselves refused to operate in the squalor that he had often found various villages and lesser mortals in the former Xin Kingdom living in. The Black Gold Oasis was affluent on a level that Nature's Son had never before seen - it quickly became clear the reason for the Resistance's high performance and morale was due to great care being taken to their amenities. Even more so when regarding their logistics.

The natural proceeds of the Oasis went purely towards empowering and fueling the artifice that enabled a high standard of living in the isolated, subterranean military complex. And it was precisely that - a complex. The dry dock of the Oasis alone was not merely a thing of maintenance and ensuring that the airships would remain intact. They were the endpoint of a massive underground industrial pipeline, the exiled and rebellious artificers of the former Great Power doing all they could to recreate the self-sufficiency of the Jingshen Bei's old home, if at a lesser scale.

That is why, only a few months into Xin Wei Long's stay there he was pleasantly surprised to receive a gift.

"You've given me my own airship?" Nature's Son asked Jingshen Bei Won, "Why?"

"The Heaven's Fury is something of a passion project by our shipwrights," The older Expert had explained, knocking his knuckles against the freshly smoothed wood of the machine, "It's not suited for usage by a typical helmsman, and is intended to be use as few Spirit Stones as possible for its fuel."

Heaven's Favor nudged its Chosen's thoughts, "So you're essentially stiffing me?"

The Commodore snorted in disdain, "You already receive an enormous share of plunder in order to fuel your cultivation, Guest Xin. Our Logistics department has no stomach for spending more money on you than is needed."

"And what, precisely, is needed?"

"Enough to break you into Core Formation, Guest Xin." He gazes thoughtfully at the smaller, sleeker airship. Its sails are shaped as streamlined blimps in imitation of the Soup Sect style, a number of cunningly worked metallic ports lined along the hull. Too small for any weaponry Nature's Son can think of to be mounted, the wooden exterior is similarly reinforced at critical points with gleaming array-inscribed spirit steel.

"...Why?"

"Why indeed?" The elder Expert smiles mysteriously, keeping an admiring gaze on the smaller craft before him, "Let me show you aboard." With an empowered leap the Commodore crossed onto the deck of the Heaven's Fury, and he proceeded to receive a tour. The airship was small, smaller than the Grand Son of Nature had expected - though he had expected the craft to be fitted for holding a larger crew, that had proven to not be the case.

"An experimental Five Phase Pentagram Engine," The finely inscribed machinery that took up the majority of the space beneath the deck, "It is intended to take a mass of neutral-aspected Qi and serve as fuel for the ships functions as well as a resource pool for you to draw energies from in order to exercise your Sorcery to its fullest extent. This was quite the dilemma for our shipwrights, as the space this would have demanded would have required a considerable stockpile of spirit stones in order to keep the engine operational for any appreciable amount of time."

"Did that require too much space, or something?"

Jingshen Bei Wan looked at the younger Expert with an expression of disdain, "Were you not listening, Guest Xin? This design was intended to keep you from needing to rely on our logistics to fuel your ability to contribute to our operations. It would defeat the point entirely if we were forced to give you an advance on spirit stones you have not yet even earned! On top of the investment represented by designing this ship and its systems in the first place!"

Xin Wei Long hears nearly inaudible mutters about 'upjumped sand peasants' but magnanimously chooses to give the older man some face. He was still being treated well as things stood anyway.

"This one apologizes," A clasp of the hands and slight bow, and the Commodore was appeased.

A clap of the hands, and a cheerful smile banishes the foul mood as if it had never been, "So long as you understand, Guest Xin! Now, as I had been saying, that had been an issue, one that has thankfully been averted in full. For you see, it turns out that as we put out feelers for potential alternative means, the Servant Elders had apparently stumbled upon a singularly unique resource."

With an easy gesture, a door coldly gleaming with metallic qi resolved itself before Xin Wei Long's eyes. With a precise rapping of knuckles, the mysterious portal opened silently, revealing a bright - Heavenly - light that resonated deeply with the whispers that had accompanied Heaven's Favored since he had been reborn.

"The Elders in question had been able to secure a most curious resource," The older man continued, hand shadowing his eyes against the brightness before him, "A treasure that only a hundred years ago would have been considered too precious to ever be lost, left to fall through the cracks.

"A fragment of Five Element Tribulation, crystallized upon the ascension of a Single Pillar King."

The former heir to be of Xin stilled.

It couldn't…possibly be?

He turned to stare at Commodore Jingshen Bei Wan, the other Expert's proud gaze meeting his own.

...Could it?

A small shake of the head, and a pressure that he hadn't even noticed unwound itself from his shoulders.

"Not of the Silver King, unfortunately. That would have been far too serendipitous, and impossible besides. Lady Jingshen Jiao was driven off and away, and back then Single Pillar Kings were still unique and irreplaceable existences for the perfidious Devils." He sighed, "No. This is a fragment of Tribulation Lightning from the breakthrough of the less commonly known 'Consuming King'" He accompanied this sobriquet with exaggerated finger quotes, "Who had a partner on hand to store such things for whatever ends. Which was eventually considered low priority enough that it was transported into the Northern Desert for 'educational purposes' in whatever the Devils have planned for the Underworld Spirit Palace."

"But the Servant Elders managed to obtain it instead?" Xin Wei Long asked wonderingly.

"Just so," The Commodore nodded, "In exchange for us taking on a few specific targets at their request, the Servant Elders provided us with this fragment, along with wishes for it to "find its fated recipient"." The Expert paused, before gesturing towards the source of Heavenly Light before them.

"What do you think?"

Nature's Son turned to look towards that not-so-blinding light, his blood pumping thunderously in his chest. Pressure rose, his blood roaring. He took a step into the chamber, heat rising, spreading through his limbs as he approached the source of that Heavenly energy.

A second step robbed the hold of Gravity from him, his steps becoming light. His thoughts, formerly disordered, aligned with startling clarity of purpose - the Grand Son of Nature must complete that approach. The whispers of Heaven's Favor became insistent, grasping. Recognition of kin, of power. Opportunity and greed put an end to all doubt, and with reverent, hurried steps the light ceased to be so bright. Alien.

Something within the dantian, the soul of Xin Wei Long clicked, and the bright Heavenly light fell away from his eyes as he stared upon a multifaceted, jagged not-crystal. Beautiful and wild. Austere and vicious. Five lights shown prismatically, ever changing and feeding into one another. Resting upon a great pedestal flowing with qi-stone infused ink-written array script, the Five Elements Heavenly Fragment reached out to the Heavenly Favor within him. And in that moment of connection, he understood.

"This…" A hand hovered wonderingly over the fragment, its energies flowing through the ephemeral connection between the two, "This is alive!"

The Commodore snorted, "Thought so. We couldn't make use of it until our engineers started to build the Heaven's Fury for you. The Engineers thought it was a matter of digestion, but I knew better." Eyes flash knowingly at the younger cultivator.

"That fragment of Heaven's Fury was waiting for you, Xin Wei Long. This ship is your fated partner. You're meant for it."

"And it means I won't have grounds to ask for any more spirit stones from the Black Gold Oasis, right?"

A chuckle, "Now you're getting it."

Heavenly energies descended upon the Grand Son of Nature's dantian. The Five Element Pillars within grew excited, agitated from the nourishment. The Earth Below Pillar drank greedily, drank deeply, and in virtuous cycle the Six Pillars feedback form and function and enlightenment to their wielder.

In wonderment and satisfaction, Jingshen Bei Won watched Nature's Son step into the peak of Foundation Establishment. Now more certain than ever that this wild bet of his was fated to succeed.

There was no need for him to digest his gains. The Tribulation Spirit recognized its kin, and easily integrated the strength into its chosen wielder. With the Heaven's Fury as its vessel, it would become the Guardian of the Grand Son of Nature, and ensure that this Chosen would meet his glorious, glorious destiny.

"How would you like to take it out for a shakedown voyage?"

For the first time in many, many years…A heartfelt smile crossed the younger Experts lips.

...

"The Battos Family, ironically enough." The Commodore began the mission briefing, "Are the philanthropists who provided us with the core of our new airship." He gestured towards Nature's Son in doing so.

"Did they do it for free, sir?" A random Jingshen Bei captain shouted.

The Commodore ignored the interruption, but his grin told the story still, "And part of the agreement for being provided this donation? Why, we go and show these self-declared researchers a first hand opportunity to obtain data on its usage!"

A few amused chuckles, Xin Wei Long included, accompany this declaration as a pile of loose sand arises from a podium at the center of the briefing chamber, forming a map of the region. It shifts, focusing on the western part of the former Jingshen lands, magnifying to encompass Cloudy Jade City, the Jingshen Bei Mine, and Haoshen Fort. The image resolves again, showing an expanse of space north of said fort, situated near the road that used to serve as the premier travel artery between the mine and the Scorpion Road.

"As most of you are aware, the Golden Devils have parceled up our core family lands as a sort of competitive territory for them to offload the newly ascended families within their perfidious ranks to struggle for dominance and wealth. The majority of our strikes have been calculated to destabilize this Theater Scale Gu Pot, and prevent any such force from entrenching itself enough to consolidate their strength so as to safely move towards driving us out. The primary beneficiary of this strategy has been Cloudy Jade City, of course." He points towards the location in question.

"As such, the Servant Elders provided us with intelligence and a base of operations within the City from which to acquire necessary resources as well as additional recruits." A nod to Nature's Son is - again - given, "The Battos, however, reflect a changing trend in the inter-family politics of the perfidious Devils. A subordinate family of the Duca Family - who are apparently a rising major power in the Golden Devils now - they were able to secure a better than average location with which to set up their operations, and were able to acquire the resources necessary to hold out against most hazards."

The Commodore paused, before grinning wickedly.

"Most known hazards, that is."

"But aren't we a known hazard?" A particularly slow Jingshen called out again.

"Why do you think we always took pains to only send out a fraction of our true strength?" The older Expert shook his head, "The Golden Devils are only aware of out of date information on the Flotilla, and the Black Gold Oasis is a well hidden secret even among the Jingshen clan themselves. Not even the Servant Elders are aware of our hidden power!!"

The implications become clear - the Servant Elders had likely intended to play both sides against each other. The Battos Family represented a powerful rival interest in their part of the desert, and enjoyed the backing of an enormously entrenched faction among the upper echelons of the Golden Devils themselves. Should Cloudy Jade City ever truly come into conflict with the Battos, then the Servant Elders would be crushed as easily as turning over a hand!

The Flotilla was hardly any better! A force that had held out for decades, competently led with precious few assets revealed and even fewer casualties! The "Desert Tiger" was a legend in his own right among the Jingshen of the desert, even if his true identity was unknown!

Naturally, the former Servant Elders could not allow the Commodore to create a rallying point for the remaining Jingshen splinters in the desert. There were powerful blood pacts that forced the Servant Elders to - if not completely obey - then at least not willingly betray the secrets of the main family! Should the Soaring Dunes Flotilla become the new Main Family of the Jingshen, then who would the Servant Elders complain to should Jingshen Bei Won seek to secure his grip over them?

The natural solution therefore presented itself - by presenting the Flotilla with a rare treasure they had no use for, and had stolen from their other rival, they would be able to use the Flotilla to in turn weaken or eliminate the Battos, thus eliminating evidence of their crime! And in the process weakening and eliminating both of their principal rivals in the region!

Though the current circumstances were not ideal, Cloudy Jade City's Elders still remembered those days of frustration and bitterness at the hands of the Jingshen line! When faced with a Tiger to your left and a Dragon to your right, it's only natural to let the pair fight each other rather than risk either one turning on you!

"The Servant Elders were generous with providing us intel on the Battos compound, gathered when they obtained the Five Elements Heavenly Fragment only a few weeks ago." The sand shifted once again, displaying the beginnings of a great compound situated around a minor mine, "As you can see here," A line drew from overlarge mining equipment to a sprawling residential complex in construction, "The Battos are prioritizing their central dwellings, intending to integrate their home into the mine directly from the start. Presumably to research the properties of the desert." He chuckled, "What sort of a fool wastes time with studying Spirit Stones when they have wealth to make from them?"

A chorus of chuckles arises in the briefing room, before dying down.

"In the meantime, however." A finger drew circles around three larger buildings in the compound, already completed, "We have identified the temporary living quarters for their family. The garrison for the forces seeking to base themselves out of the future Waycastle, for now serving as guards. And, of course." A finger dropped heavily down on a squat, sunken building. Its low walls seeming to hug the dug out quarry of the newly opened spirit mine.

"Their newly constructed laboratory, which we have designated as the primary objective, due to the Battos Family Patriarch reportedly spending nearly all hours within its premises."

"What can we expect on site when we arrive?" Xin Wei Long asked at last.

"Good question, Guest Xin!" A finger tapped the garrison, which enlarged and revealed a flag standing proud over the building - A green field interrupted by a turtle shell split in half.

"We are looking at a detachment from the 817th Legion Shellcrackers. Our sources tell us that it is expected to be at least at Century strength, which is a One Hundred Man squad in the parlance of the Devils."

"Will they be led by a Core Formation?"

"Unlikely," The Commodore replied with a shake of his head, "The Legion is apparently fairly newly risen, and its Core Formation leader is out in the East, presumably working on something closer to the Devil's administrative heart in their Dawn Fortress."

"Heard something about that actually, Commodore." A new voice pipes up, and the CO gestured for him to speak, "Apparently there was a big move by some hotshot among the younger Devils. Some kind of deal to take control of the Three Forts, and a lot of the ambitious ones are up in arms over the decision."

A shiver ran up the spine of Nature's Son. A creeping sense of familiarity took hold of his senses.

"Ha!" The older Expert barked out a laugh, "Their misfortune is good for us, then! Those Invaders may be united against all foes, but when competing amongst themselves they throw away that vaunted honor of theirs! Not even they are beyond selling their own mother for an extra spirit stone!"

Another wave of laughter erupts, and after some minutes the Commodore motions for silence once more. So great is the assembled Jingshen's respect for the man that even this slight admonishment was taken with grace and dignity. After all, without the Commodore they would have long suffered the indignity of expulsion, unable to even fight back!

Chatter died down, and three arrows are drawn to the Primary Objectives.

"Much like other settlements we've raided in the past, the Battos Compound is surrounded by an active Dune Churning Wall Array, with a larger and more comprehensive wall under construction at a considerable distance away to serve as the border of their future settlement."

The map zooms out once more, showing a vaguely circular border for the limits of the construction work, with a smaller circle near the center that would be the eventual heart of the settlement. A dark arrow is drawn, looping in from the south of the settlement before driving straight into the heart of the settlement, after crossing the illustrated barrier of the center splitting into three prongs - one of which is notably smaller than the others.

"We shall approach from the south, as that appears to be the least guarded direction of the Battos and 817th detachment, after reaching the operational zone we'll split into three different detachments." Two thicker lines stretch towards the barracks and temporary residence, while a much thinner one hones in on the laboratory.

"While the first detachment under me shall hit the garrison, the second shall hit the Battos Family's temporary residence, burn it to the ground, and butcher them with no survivors. Is that clear?" A rumbling cheer and affirmation meets this query, and with a smile turns towards the Grand Son of Nature.

"Guest Xin, you shall be handling the Battos Patriarch directly. You'll likely want to take what you can of his research, but at the very least you shall be better equipped than most to handle him. It is for this reason that you possess the Heaven's Fury."

Xin Wei Long stiffened in his seat, gaze turning steely as he looked upon Jingshen Bei Won.

"You intend for me to go after a…"

"Peak Expert."

"Peak Expert in their place of power, alone?"

The older man smirked, "You're a Peak Expert yourself, you know?"

Nature's Son snorted, "Only recently ascended." He was no fool, he had no intention of risking his life. New partner or not!

"That ought to be enough," The Commodore said placatingly, "The Battos Patriarch has stagnated at cultivation for the past decade, focusing as much as he has on his research. Nor is he an array smith of any particular note. He is merely an avid researcher, focused on theory." A finger tapped the sunken laboratory once more, "We've been told he mostly came to our Jingshen lands on a whim, and cares little for larger affairs in the territory." His face grew ugly.

"But that may not always remain the same. The Devils have proven adept at raising up more and more Core Formations lately, fat off the wealth of our plundered lands, no doubt."

"So this is largely a practice run for me, then?"

Jingshen Bei Won shook his head, "No, no. A shakedown is still necessary for you and your ship. But…" His hands rotated, "Did you not once cripple a Core Formation Elder with your own two hands, Guest Xin?"

Nature's Son stilled.

"That…" He paused, mulling over his words, "Was a very long time ago, Commodore."

The Song resonates. It's echoes strumming doubt and fear. In times past, performing to his true strength, true potential had attracted foes he had not yet been ready for. Exposed him to humiliations that he bore the scars for to this day. In reaching once more, the echoes of that Voice come closer, clamor louder.

"Surely you're not afraid, Heaven's Chosen Son."

"Never." He lied.

And you should be, too. If you knew what manner of monsters you seek to provoke with this.

"Then can we count on you to dismantle the Battos Patriarch while the rest of us deal with everyone else?" Nature's Son nods, "Then look at the bright side! Chances are that the majority of wealth will be kept in that laboratory, so you'll at least have first pick of the best share of the loot!"

Xin Wei Long hummed at this. One of the oldest tricks in the book - where logic could not sway a potential mark, instead appeal to their greed. Nature's Son knew this is what was being employed against him. But as the moments passed, he realized something.

It was working.

He nodded.

"Excellent, Guest Xin!" The Commodore clapped eagerly, "Then dismissed! The rest of you, your assignments will be posted to your quarters. We launch during the next cloud cover!"

...

The Nature's Fury was a unique airship in many respects. While most of the flotillas other deployed craft departed from the Black Gold Oasis laden with spirit stones to fuel them through their circuitous route to avoid detection, Xin Wei Long's personal airship had no notable air stores for fuel.

Nor a crew, for that matter.

Heaven's Chosen had no experience piloting a normal airship of the Flotilla anyway, but he had learned enough by observation and interaction to grasp the forces at play, as well as how an airship moved through the air. So it was as he laid hands upon the steering wheel of his personal airship, that a now-familiar connection snapped into place, between Nature's Son and the heart of the Nature's Fury.

The Spirit at the center of his partner. His very own Guardian Soul.

Earth, Water, and Fire flitted through the bond, and the corresponding phases of his Elemental Dynamo resonated with the Qi. Earth lightened, the grip of the Law of Gravity loosening. Water, next. What moisture exists in the air gripping the airship, buoying it. Within the heart of the Five Phases Engine, Fire roared to life, traveling through purpose built channels to vent the heat and force of the energy into two great ports situated at the back, and a number of smaller ones near the back and rear. Xin Wei Long felt the gentle pull of Qi from his dantian, the Pillars of his soul resonating with his partner. Fire was drawn out endlessly, amplified by the shard of Heavenly Tribulation, and then channeled it through its artificial meridians in a pair of great gouting jets which reduced all unfortunates who could stand behind it to be slain instantly by the pressure and heat of release.

The Heaven's Fury lifted from the drydock, and with great fanfare soared through the sandfall that hid the Black Gold Oasis from the world.

The airship shuddered, and Nature's Son was struck by the simple wonder - the feeling of the open air, crisp with the suffusive Yin energies around him. The wind on his face. All taking a new meaning, for the very first time. A sense of liberation. Freedom at last from the chains that had bound him for so very, very long.

Up ahead, the cool air lent itself to the flight of the other airships of the Flotilla. Flitting back shadows darted across the dunes in numbers greater than any that Xin Wei Long had yet seen since coming to the north. His airship shuddered, the pull on his qi already subtle enough to be comfortable.

With a sense of descending ease, two arms spread out wide. Feeling as much of the night breeze as he could.

Yin energies spring forth from the bow, and the Heaven's Shadow is reduced to a shadow as well. It feels both natural and not, and with that satisfying yet contradictory feeling in his breast Nature's Son charged forward.

The flight of the Soaring Dunes was circuitous. The Devils had the obvious arteries heavily watched, and thus any direct approach south from Cloudy Jade City was doomed to alert their targets of their coming. Though the Golden Devils had adapted too poorly to resist the Flotillas efforts to stop them, they had adapted all the same. With ample warning time, defenses could be hardened. Reinforcements could be mustered. A Core Formation could arrive on the scene, and slaughter them all.

Thus, the Jingshen Bei circled around the rear of their former home, relying on territorial knowledge to guide the fleet through secret ways hidden among the desert. Approaching from the Northwest, they flew to the space in between the Battos Family and Haoshen fort, before abruptly veering North, drawing a line straight for their objective. With no sign of any Golden Devils having spotted them. No sentries alerted, no alarms raised.

Wood is drawn from Nature's Son, the physical body of the ship becoming an extension of his will. It throws its considerable weight off course, the cunning artifice of the Black Gold Oasis shipwrights revealing themselves, the water qi skidding the craft and easing its passage through the air. The heat of Fire was no longer channeled through the ships internal channels - now a much more subtle draw of that resource was funneled into the balloons above the body of the aircraft - heated air providing considerable lift, even as shifting momentum provided guidance and propulsion.

The Yin energies enshrouding the craft held true, even as the shadowed airship flitted towards the opened mining shaft at the heart of the settlement. The squat, adobe bunker already within his sight. Arrays covered the construction quite thickly. Reinforcement. Privacy. An admirable rush job for a hired engineer, but only that, perhaps.

A day ago, Xin Wei Long would be at a loss on how to lay siege to such a fortification. But that day had passed by, and his partner eagerly supplied him with the knowledge of how to proceed.

Earth give shape and weight, wrapped around a core of freshly grown wood within the depths of the ship. A spark of Fire at its heart, and guided by the keen edge of Metal.

The Qi drawn from his Meridians was considerable, but nothing too lethal. Beneath his feet, the Five Phases Engine kneaded that Qi through its Heavenly fragment, amplifying those donated energies through the cast off of its own Virtuous Cycle! The Tribulation Spirit guided the amplified energies through its channels once again, the weapons flash fabricated, spawned whole from the body of the Heaven's Fury itself.

The night was still dark, the moon shining brightly.

A shadow gave way to flickers of silvery light, and like falling stars they soared down upon the base earth. Weighty and mighty, did eight weapons fall with screaming descent, their metal tips cleaving deeply through array script reinforced stone, each digging more deeply than the last as they buried themselves deeply into the sunken facility.

The hearts of flame erupted upon impact, drawing deeply from the core of solidified Wood Qi, fueling the Fire Qi's own explosive growth, creating a flagration and then detonation. Eight strikes. Eight explosions. The lab lay upon the ground. Cracked, damaged, unable to field reinforcements.

"Let's give them another."

Eight more screaming attacks launched forth, and this time, the fortified laboratory was cracked open like an egg.

"You fool!" A voice came from within the crumblings of the site, "Years of research, ruined!" Nature's Son circled his partner around, eyes fixed upon the shape of a Golden Devil Expert shaking his fist at the skies, the man screaming to the point where foam and flecked spit seemed to physically form and launch into the air in a futile attempt to capture the Heaven's Fury.

There is nothing you need from this creature

And that was true. The airship angled itself towards the enraged Golden Devil.

There is no need for honor, when dealing with it. Invaders know nothing of the concept.

The presumed Battos Patriarch took a step back.

Eight more missiles screamed forth, and in an instant the Laboratory and its owner were consumed by a cacophony of explosions.

...

"Heavenly energy when striking against offenses (i.e. "Tribulation") is a phenomenon ruled by quasi-sentient intents propagated as extremely advanced programming into said manifestations. The more discerning and imbued the actions are, oftentimes are similarly mostly the least affected by potential facets or imitations of personality. The sole observed exception to this observed phenomenon (Nascent Soul and Spirit Severing breakthroughs) are the ascendancies of achievers of the Four Olympian Keystones ("13th Heavenstage"). Recorded instances state that these manifestations of Nascent Soul-grade retaliations manifest in exotic and specifically tailored fashions - oftentimes specifically calibrated to introduce doubt to the nascent cultivators intended Way. In many ways, I speculate that the 13th Heavenstage represents the assertion of a separate territory beyond the reach of the Heavenly forces, and that this affront is what leads to the disproportionate investment in said "Tribulation". To overcome the retaliatory stroke is to repel an invader, thus establishing the Single Pillar cultivator as sovereign over their world. It is from this truth that I postulate the term "King" arises from, and thus find it quite applicable indeed."

Xin Wei Long stumbled back, foot sliding on smoldering scraps of metal and stone, sparking with energies even after the violent destruction of the arrays containing them.

"This fool was studying Apostates?" An eye glanced back towards his partner where it had landed when Nature's Son had disembarked. With an effort of will, he accessed the intact console containing the Battos Patriarch's remaining research. He searched for the most recent project records next.

"Studying the Five Element Retaliatory Phenomenon has been largely a waste of time. The crystallized energies do not react with anything, possibly a hold over from their previous state of quasi-sapience. It is strange, but as a phenomenon it has inspired me slightly in regards to a much grander project - the efficacy of draining the Heavenly energies more directly. The nature of the Great Era has proved inspiring! Heaven nurtures, and the earth grows in response. With the intention of the human element being the intended target and beneficiary of both pressures made clear, it becomes clear that even if larger accumulations of those energies are drawn to chosen individuals ("Chosen") the majority of the spill off is free to be absorbed and drained without discrimination. That not only includes ourselves, but even the land beneath our feet! It might be possible to draw these mindless, unattended forces in and concentrate them into a pillar similar to what the Kings use. Call it the "New World Ordering Array". But what would be a substitute for the presumed human element? Perhaps "

Xin Wei Long blinked, "Perhaps…? Perhaps what, you useless corpse?!" The ramblings of the Golden Devil had been an unexpected boon! Providing additional context on himself, and the nature of the path and insights he had chased down! Ever since he had stepped into the peak of Foundation Establishment, with the creation of his Heaven Above Pillar, Nature's Son had realized that there was space in his dantian for a final, eighth Dao Pillar!

"Couldn't you have moved just a bit faster, old man?!" The Qi Sorcerer dashed out of the ruins to where the sizzling charred corpse of the former Expert lay sprawled in an upturned plume of sand.

"Useless!" A kick, "Old!" A punch, "Fool!" Another kick, denting the cooling metallic flesh, "Why couldn't you have ignored me for a few more minutes?! At least finish your own damn thought before letting yourself get interrupted, idiot Devil!"

Panting in frustration, he turned away from the corpse to head back to inspect the site once more, when a glint of bronze and gold flickered at the edge of his senses.

A great Hoplite formation, larger and more intricately formed than any Xin Wei Long had ever seen before in his life. Where before most such formations had only been masses of dark qi forming only a bronze shield and spear, this new construction featured a comprehensive lamellar armor, around which he saw the shadowed airships of the Flotilla buzz around, firing volley after volley to no effect.

One shadow broke away from the encirclement, darting to and fro in the air as it prepared its own attack run, eventually diving for the obvious weak point of the formation - the neck, exposed where the armor would be thinnest.

The shadow became a blur, a black star descending, but as it made its final approach the bronze giant shifted ever so subtly - its great bronze shield interdicting itself between the neck and its would-be attacker.

Then it shoved, and the shadow sputtered, then faded away in the face of bronzed rays of light.

Debris and bodies of Xin Wei Long's comrades fell to the sand in an ungainly heap.

He took back to the air almost immediately, another blur. But this one sleeker. Carrying a much deeper aura of threat than the rest.

The Flotilla had been in communication silence since the operation began, but there was no need to pass messages at this point. Heaven's Favor whispered the truth of the matter into his ears - The residence had been empty, evacuated each evening once the Battos had learned that their elemental fragment had been stolen en route.

What had been one hundred Devils was now twice that, the Invaders having husbanded their true strength as well.

"So," a voice, booming and metallic, issued forth into the night air, "The final barbaroi raiders reveal themselves at last to these noble soldiers of the Imperial Optimatoi?"

The Refined Hoplite stood firm, taking up a wide stance with shield and spear.

"That makes this simple, then. Let me thank you, barbaroi raiders. I am Tribunus Laticlavius of the DCCCXVII Legio, Oeneos Battos. In life you suppressed many of our Battos family's rivals and future obstacles, clearing our road to ascendence in your former Jingshen Lands. In death, you shall give our Shellcrackers new glory by which to lead the Persephone Despoina into the future!"

The air grew thick with hostility, with bloodlust. The night sky filled with the smell of blood being spat at the temerity of the offense! What Persephone?! What glory?! This was Jingshen lands! These would always be Jingshen lands! The audacity, the offense!

Such emotions grew thick through the air, and Nature's Son felt himself oddly in tune with those pervasive sentiments.

"How will you rise up, Devil?!" A voice called out, and Xin Wei Long discovered it to be his own, "When your Battos Patriarch is but a charred corpse, his skull soon to be added to our prows!"

A snort came from the great figure, its stance still firm, "Because of you, Soaring Dune Flotilla. Far more than the Core Formation Elders that resorted to mere banditry and wretched cannibalism to escape the might of the Clan, your force alone remains a disciplined fighting force. One that survived the invasion mostly intact, and if your numbers here are any indication…Even stronger! While the former patriarch may have been fooled by Cloudy Jade City, this Tribunus was never convinced! Not for one moment, one second!"

Bronze eyes flared within the metallic giant, its helmeted face turning to stare at the Grand Son of Nature.

"Greed is ever the downfall of you barbaroi, and your naked lust for treasure is what led you Jingshen to contemplate war against our Imperial Optimatoi in the first place! Just as your perfidious greed drew you into inevitable defeat at our hands, so too could you not resist the lure to fall into our snare!"

Ghostly bronze scraped in the air, the Refined Hoplite Formation tensing once more, the qi in the air growing ripe with the promise of violence.

"Now, Soaring Dunes Flotilla! Become the whetstone that will enable our glorious Shellcrackers to overcome that treacherous Old Hag of Dawn!" Punctuating the words, the bronze spear of the hoplite swung with monstrous force, far beyond the level of any among the Flotilla.

"Core Formation!"

The true might of the Devils in conjunction. They and they alone were able to unite in sufficient numbers that their combined strength could overcome the gap in Great Realms! A truly heretical ability, to concede the glorious self and subsume one's individuality for the sake of another! Not sacrifice! Not noble! Enslavement, surrender, foulness!

But even so! The strength such violations of the natural order provided were quite real!

The strength of a Core Formation cultivator propelled the arm of the construct, shattering the carefully arranged encirclement, scattering the enshadowed airships utterly. The lighter frames buffeted by the wind propelled by the massive spears passage in space, and sending dozens of ships tumbling through the air!

Screams rang through the night, as more bodies fell to water the sands beneath them.

A garish laughter piped out, the great qi construct moving far more dexterously than a creature of that size ever could had it been made of flesh and bone. Even so, arrows upon arrows were loosed. Endless shining volleys fell upon the Refined Hoplite like shooting stars, with a singularly brilliant bolt lashing out against the bronze, forcing the Formations massive shield to angle itself to defend.

"DO NOT FALTER, SOARING DUNES!" The voice of Jingshen Bei Won echoed across the battlefield, "THE DEVILS ARE NOT INEXHAUSTIBLE! WE ONLY NEED TO DRAIN THIS GAUDY FORMATION, AND THEN THEY SHALL BE AS VULNERABLE AS ANY ONE OF THEIR KIND BEFORE OUR BOWS AND PROWS!"

The Heaven's Fury repositioned itself. It's Captain and sole crewman seeking the same weakness to exploit that a previous craft had failed to do - the neck beneath the projection of the head. If the self declared Tribunus was in any way connected to the rest of that Hoplite variant, it would be from the head. His instincts sang their agreement, where else would such an ostentatious and ambitious figure place himself, then if not the crown?

As Nature's Son resolved himself, a thin black arrow impacted the housing of the ship's wheel, attached to it was a scrap of paper.

Strike with my third arrow.

Another brilliant comet issues forth from the swarm of shadows, and the variant Formation shifts again to catch it upon its shield, the endlessly volleys hitting against the qi formed lamellar almost ineffectually.

The eyes of the Formation alight once more, the head shifting back and forth with a steely gaze as it keeps track of a single ship among the dozens encircling it. Its great spear becomes less active, only furtively stabbing out to catch targets of opportunity now that the threat has been assessed.

Xin Wei Long coaxes his ship forward, positioning the craft so that it is at a level with the shoulder of the giant Hoplite's spear wielding arm.

He sees the moment that qi begins to form a corona, even stronger than the last shot that the Commodore had launched. And with eagerness the guiding intelligence of the Formation stabs forth, extending its spear out in a picturesque thrust to strike down the sole identified threat.

A single, deep breath.

Earth, to give shape and weight. Metal, to pierce through and guide. Water, to remove all obstacles and flow forward uninterrupted. Wood, to fuel all that was to come.

Repeat the prayer five times, and Heaven responds. The Tribulation Spirit magnifying intent and a desire to strike down the foe before him. Though he was once a King of a small land, here in the nadir of his life the Jingshen Bei had given Nature's Son a fresh start. A chance to begin anew. Heavensent.

And with the strength of that same Heaven, he would protect them in return.

"Kindness and Offense, repaid twice over!" Xin Wei Long snarls, and he feels a pull for the final ingredient.

Fire.

"Fire!"

The Heaven's Fury stills, shudders, and then with a roar eight steely bolts loose themselves through the air, traveling like lightning. Then another roar. And then another. And then yet again. A fifth volley declares its ascent, and forty bolts soar through the night sky.

Yet a Golden Devil is not blind when in command of a Formation. Indeed, they still benefit from the senses of awareness of their subordinates, however muted the attempted coordination may be upon their acting intelligence.

Sensing danger, the lunge is abandoned, the shoulder of the variant Hoplite contracting into a defensive delta, seeking to protect sensitive vitals. The soaring constructs are tipped in coldly gleaming metal qi. Empowered by Heavenly intent and hatred of the perfidious Golden Devil Clan, Invaders from another star. Ghostly Bronze buckles from the killing intent of Heavenly Fulmination, eight lances of brilliance digging in, cracks appearing throughout the sacrificed limb as the water qi guides the digging weight granted by the earth ever more momentum.

Then the fire qi cooks off.

Eight explosions erupt, and ghostly flesh and armor are flung into the night sky before evaporating into ambient energy. The burnt corpses that had been too slow to evade the point of impact did not vanish so cleanly, their constituent chunks and viscera falling upon the desert sands like a hail of charcoal.

The spear arm visibly sags, the posture of the Hoplite having to readjust itself to the unexpected loss of energy and bodies fueling it. Amorphous black Qi shone with a new luster, bronze surfacing to replace what was lo-

Eight more missiles sink in, marring that new surface utterly.

With panicked, impossible movements the Formation detaches the arm, and interposes its great bronze shield in between itself and the amputated limb as the attacks detonate, the explosion slamming against the massive qi construct with a powerful conflagration.

The third volley does not get the chance to dig in to the hardened pseudo-bronze, instead eight points of metallic qi slam against the Hoplite with great force and destructive energies, impossibly knocking the Formation off balance. Yet with a roar, the pondrous course is reversed, and the stance is firmed, One leg planted forward, one slanted back Thus as attacks twenty-five through thirty-two detonate, their flames and concussive force are scattered across the stalwart surface of the shield. Baleful eyes glow, and Oenos Battos focuses his full attention upon the final volley, and the perfidious Barbaroi who had dared strike at him with the stolen power of a Single Pillar King.

A needle is threaded through the night sky with superlative skill, laced with killing intent and the certainty of the aged hunter, the throat of the colossus is pierced by a subtle knife, severing the connection between mind and body for a fraction of a fraction of an instant.
The stance loosens, the final volley screams.

A giant falls, its glorious bronze visage shattered and scorched by heaven's wrath manifest.

With a thunderous crash, sand and stone are sent upwards, the insubstantial qi of the Formation still providing its own weight.

"Is it…over?"

"Treachery…TREACHERY!"

A new pressure emanates from the fallen colossus, rising with anger and indignation.

"You revolting thieves, you barbaroi! How dare you use stolen strength against our glorious Prime Hoplite! You should have meekly accepted your fate like the beaten dogs you are, JIIIIIINGSHEEEEEEEEEEEEN!"

The energy composing the fallen formation undertook a qualitative shift. The forces brought to bear, as a familiar sensation assaulted his senses, and rippled through the amorphous mass of the defeated Hoplite.

"A breakthrough to Peak Expert?!"

"Honorless dogs!" Oenos Battos roars, "You won't be leaving here alive! This insult will be avenged! Our Glory shall be regained!" Brilliant golden light erupts from the crumpled colossus, and with a keening cry in stereo two vast wings raise into the air!

"Behold!" Two voices trill, "The Two-Headed Golden Eagle!" The light shatters, revealing an august plumage. Great rending claws keenly gleaming, as four gleaming eyes focus with baleful intent.

"First, you," Water and Fire Qi are channeled into the Five Phases Engine, "Thief!"

Gouts of flame lurch from the front of the Heaven's Wrath, and Nature's Son begins his retreat, Earth and Metal focusing intently onto a single hole at the very furthest point of the airship's prow.

The twin-headed eagle cries, its glorious wings flap, and the reinvigorated Formation barrels straight for its target at incredible speeds.

"Steady…" Xin Wei Long mutters, he and his Guardian Soul strenuously guiding the ship in reverse, as they align the prow with its intended assailant.

Fabrication complete!

A steely glimmer manifests upon the airship's hull, a massively condensed mass of stone recessed behind it. The metal qi begins grinding against itself, endlessly churning in a predetermined fashion, guided by intricate Array script as the stone is chewed apart, fist sized chunks torn away and shaped. Sharpened and infused, condensed further.

"Stone Cannon!"

The Heaven's Fury rocks in recoil, a steely light tracing its arc through the night sky with the speed of true lightning. Where metallic gleam meets golden radiance, the illusion of solidity is shattered - the Eagle's momentum is halted with a cry of pain, its four baleful eyes widening in lambant shock.

Energies condense a second time, and in a panic the wings of the eagle tuck, its colossal body rolling through the air as it cracks in report.

Now, break through Master!

The momentum shifts, fire energies rerouted back to the great channels leading to the ship's stern, two great gouts of flame erupting as the airship charges forward. Towards the enemy Formation.

A third shot fired, this time into empty space. Yet the Eagle still made way, unwilling to risk facing the increasingly deadly frontal approach. Three times now, was the Devils' pride humbled. Three times, was he forced to kneel. Each time a small humiliation, but the Tribunus was no fool.

He was merely adaptable.

Aerial combat was rare beneath the level of Nascent Soul, but it was not unheard of. In the desert the Twin Headed Eagle was nearly unequaled in its realm, the power and temperament of the Core Formation entity too swift and too vicious to be caught. Thus, better to discard face now for glory later rather than waste time on a pointlessly suicidal charge! If the rules don't favor you, then change the rules!

And as powerful as this sole airship was proving to be, the reckless nature of its actions made things clear:

Its captain was a novice in the third dimension of combat!

A burning shadow soared into the cloudless sky, trailed by a soaring eagle loosing its hunting cry.

Higher and higher they rise, black bleeding into crimson, bleeding into gold and black again. Soaring past the clouds, soaring towards the stars, the distance between them shrinking more and more, as the columns of flame grow ever so slightly thinner. The compulsion of the Law of Gravity tightening its grip ever harder.

Distance closes.

The Eagle soars over the shadow, its talons grasping lazily at the balloons giving its buoyancy, yet even as they barely miss the Formations intent becomes clear:

A dozen glittering spears, fallen onto the deck. Ten Devils, ready to die. Nine Legionnaires. One Centurion. The boarding party charges forward to the minimally covered wheel of the ship, shields raised high as they grip the fallen weapons of their comrades.

Yet the ship is alive, it's animating soul intelligent and hateful.

The wood of the deck warps, forming roots and tendrils that ensnare even the weighty bronze of the Invaders. The Five Phases proceed, and brilliant flame erupts upon the entrapped figures, their mighty bronze bodies resisting the heat, but not the pain.

"Get off my ship!" Nature's Son says with strained voice, summoning chunks of hardened earth to batter the boarders even as he desperately attempts to track the progress of the Golden Eagle, its twin heads crying in anticipation as it circles back through the air towards its prey from port side.

Though they burn, the Blood of Bronze does not yield easily. With dogged determination, the Alien endlessly stomps forward. Advancing upon Nature's Son, and splitting his attention. These ten are already dead, and they intend to get their money's worth for the sacrifice. The barrage of stone intensifies, once, twice, three times. The weaker Qi Condensations begin to bend, to buckle.

Xin Wei Long targets her knees, desperate to shatter them.

A thread of bronzed qi extends from their sole Expert, his charcoal visage twisted to reveal a grin of pearly teeth. In alien tongue, he begins to chant. And something within Nature's Son rises up in warning.

You cannot allow them to complete this act!

On instinct, he acts. A calloused, tanned hand - so different from how it once was - thrusts outward, away from the ship wheel. The palm turns upward, and it is as if Nature's Son holds them all within his hand.

His qi seeps into the burning wood, the most basic of basics of its manipulation returning to the forefront of his mind.

"Branch Falling!"

In the same instant, he spins the wheel, and the ship begins to tilt dangerously to its side.

Several things happen in that moment.

The boarders muster up the will to unite their strengths even through their respective agonies, and give birth to a Hoplite Formation. Not as ostentatious as the thing felled earlier in the fight, but with reach enough to skewer Nature's Son where he stood.

The wood of the deck curled upwards in a violent burst, forming a half shell beneath the ghostly "feet" of the Hoplite.

The Heaven's Fury continued its tilt, finally turning into a bizarre, corkscrewing barrel roll.

A great squawk and scream of rage erupted in stereo from this distance.

Xin Wei Long curled his open palm into a middle finger, even as he desperately held onto his airship with the other.

The Law of Gravity is merciless. It can only be resisted. Fought against. Ignored. It does not know beseechment. It does not know favor. It only knows one thing.

Down.

And even were the Law of Gravity of a discerning type, rather than an unthinking rule of nature. Would it ever extend its hypothetical grace to the alien? To the Invader?

Nay!

Thus did the nameless Contubernium descend. Perhaps, if their discipline had held true, they could have done as the larger cohort had done and formed an Eagle of their own to arrest their fall. Yet the fires raged still, the Formation not extinguishing nature's fury - now fed by the amputated wooden body of the airship they had sought to spend their lives suppressing.

Now, like any infection against a healthy body, it was burned out.

The cloudless sky shook with the furious cry of the Eagle, one voice mournful, the second sonorous in its outrage. Death! Death to the barbaroi! The guilt was obvious! The offense was unequaled! Twin wings curled against the air, august plumage alighting with renewed strength! Talons gleamed keenly, and as the moment of grief passed, vengeance was the only thing reflected in that lambent gaze!

Xin Wei Long's feet found purchase in the deck of his ship once more, the ponderous barrel roll it had taken twisting the aircraft so that its prow nearly aligned with the soaring Twin Headed Eagle once more.

Two hands settled upon the wheel in firm grip, and Nature's Son gazed across the gulf in space separating him and his partner from their pursuers.

"DEATH!" Over a hundred voices cried in symphony.

"DEATH!" They repeated, a condemnation and a promise.

A steely glint entered the Grand Son of Nature's eyes.

"But not for me!"

A shrill cry in stereo rose up, piercing the ears of all those who could hear for a thousand li around.

Twin plumages struck against the air, and the Formation soared up into the arrow, beaks tearing at the sky, building up momentum as they ascended and acquired additional height.

Five Phases roiled in harmony between the Guardian Spirit and its Master.

The Eagle reached the apex of its climb. Four eyes gleamed with the strength of the third Great Realm. For a moment, all was still. A pregnant pause as the Law of Gravity was yoked to the will of the Invader.

A hunting cry pierced through the heart of Xin Wei Long, his eyes shaking with the strength of the killing intent aimed against him.

And the Eagle descended.

Majestic wings swept back to narrow the profile, talons tucked in like a swooping raptor upon its prey. The only sound the scream of the wind being pierced through, sent tumbling as the sky shuddered with a muffled boom, already left behind in the wake of its assaulters passage. The phenomenon repeated itself thrice more, and with a flicker of motion, its talons twitched on approach.

"Fire!"

The frame of the Heaven's Fury shuddered once, twice, thrice! Three volleys of bolts issuing forth, and arcing directly into the path of the Eagle's own attack run!

But the great Formation did not deviate. Did not so much as twitch even as the far slower moving projectiles swam through the skies towards its august countenance. Instants passed as the distance closed. The great Eagle growing faster and faster. It's killing intent sublimating into something far richer as the terminal moment approaches.

As gifted as Nature's Son was with qi this could not go on forever, he knew that this was the deciding moment. Either the Devils would fall.

Or he would.

Thus, those volleys constituted most of his remaining reserves, having had no time to acquire Spirit Stones with which to restore himself - Jingshen logistics at work.

The terminal distance was crossed. Water qi guiding the weapons to the flesh of the great Eagle in the final moments, yet the Devilish bird did not so much as flinch, even as it dove into the depth of the volleys.

Not fast enough!

The earth qi invoked their own imitations of the Law of Gravity, swinging their momentum into directly falling upon the descending eagle–

When it spread its wings open at last in a glorious golden moment of radiance. Spears and shields fly out from its form, slamming into the approaching volleys with their own scattered shot…

And it worked.

In panic, the Fire within each weapon cooked off, seeking to buffet the Golden Eagle with its explosions. In pain, Xin Wei Long fed nearly the last scraps of his reserves into the mass of earth and metal upon his ship's prow, more and more Stone Bullets tunneling through the heat and smoke, punching through to finish it off!

But a triumphant cry met his efforts, a soaring single-headed Eagle emerged from the flame and stone, once more poised in a terminal dive as it fell upon the Heaven's Fury!

"It used the explosions to propel itself!"

Another Stone Cannon struck the side of the Formation, clipping off a substantial mass of its right wing. Black Qi dribbled out of many wounds, dispersing into the air as if it had never been. But the air was too unstable from the repeated shocks - the explosions he himself had caused now paired with the signs of the Eagle's own passage preventing Nature's Son from lining up a killing shot.

"Death!"

A single gleaming talon stretched out, and two damaged wings unfurled as the Eagle arrived. The wind beat at the august plumage, and it swooped upward, the surviving claw slashing deeply into one of the balloons that helped keep the airship aloft. Heated air rushed out explosively, equalizing with the frigid air of the night sky, and the violent action propelled the bird further up, spiraling majestically.

"I just need to reangle before it comes around for another pass!"

"BARBAROI!" Oenos Battos screams, "You have driven me and mine to the brink! But know this! The Turtlecrackers shy not from sacrifice! We shy not from glory!"

"What is he up to now?!"

"Even as a mere Foundation Expert, you wield strength to threaten, no, kill two full Centuries unaided!" The Eagle continued its ascent, even now slowing as it reached its apex, even though it made no effort to reposition itself for an attack run, it remained stubbornly directly above the Heaven's Fury.

"WE SHALL EXTINGUISH YOU HERE! AND YOUR DEATH SHALL BE THE ACHIEVEMENT OUR GLORIOUS LEGATUS SHALL USE TO DENY THAT SILVER BITCH THE ERINYES!"

"What?" A chill ran through his skin once again, at the mention of the Turtlecrackers mysterious foe.

"FOR THE IMPERATOR!"

"""For the Imperator!"""

A growing feeling of threat overwhelmed whatever composure Nature's Son had left. A profound urgency gripped his spirit, and he drew all his remaining strength into a single pillar.

"TURTLE SLAYING CATAPHRACT!"

At the apex of its flight, the Eagle's wings extended, the Formation lighting up once more with an austere, august corona of gold and black. An alien majesty descended, a new bronzed star in the sky. Short lived, yet brilliant.

The wings grew ever brighter, the light reaching an incredible intensity before reaching an apex.

At which point, they shattered.

Golden feathers fell, disintegrating into motes of golden light. The wounded body of the eagle losing cohesion with the intensity of the transformation, condensing, shrinking. A singular point of killing intent that was all or nothing.

One way or another, this fight would end here!

Their lives would be well spent! Their deaths, glorious!

A spear pierces through the shroud of bronze light, heralding the emergence of a shining horseman, clad in bronze upon a mighty steed. Its four muscled legs gallop, impossibly finding purchase in the night sky, descending downwards at incredible speed.

Nearly two hundred roars cried out in victory, their final charge coming for the threat that their gambit had dug out into the open. Whether Chosen, Favored, or just a freak of nature, this threat to the Clan could not be allowed to reach Core Formation!

In the blink of an eye, the distance between the lance and its target is halved. There is no time to fire back, and even if there were, that would not be enough to divert the course of their death charge.

The Pillar of Fire lurched within the dantian of Xin Wei Long, and he communicated all that he could to the Tribulation Spirit he was connected to. The wood of the ship grew less lustrous. The metal became scuffed. The ship itself became heavier.

But the Five Phases Engine grew hot. Hotter than ever before. A single burst of energy concentrated for a single moment. Xin Wei Long was many things, but his eyes were not ready to track an opponent at such speed, and he knew in his Dao-Heart that were he to time this poorly the Kataphraktoi would merely adjust its charge to impale his ship and kill him regardless.

Thus, he prayed.

"Please…"

Please...

The Devils final declaration finally reached him, delayed compared to the speed of their final charge. And even then, he waited for the space between moments.

"Now!"

Now!

Two souls as one, united in purpose and guided by Heavenly Favor acted. Two great pillars of flame erupted from every open vent and hole along the rear of the airship, and lurched the Heaven's Fury forward at high speeds, sending Xin Wei Long flying flat on his ass from the sudden exertion of force, far beyond the tolerance of any Peak Expert.

The shouts of triumph finally met his ears, and his eyes snapped open with fear in his heart.

But there was nothing above, as the sound abruptly changed to screams of rage and despair.

Nature's Son walked to the side of his ship, and glanced over the edge, barely in time to spot the moment where the glorious Golden Kataphraktoi exhausted its energies at last, and began to crumble into scores upon scores of gleaming bronze forms.

The lustrous golden aura dimmed the last at the point of the thrust lance, resolving into a richly proportioned figure, his gleaming bronze armor only marred by the great rent torn through his torso, his right side a ruin of pulped flesh and bone. His right leg similarly gone, cleanly severed at the knee.

Lambent eyes met his own even from across half a li away, and on a whim Xin Wei Long raised his hand in farewell.

"JIIIIIIIIIIIIINGSHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE-"

"I'm not a Jingshen," Nature's Son muttered as Oenos Battos' death cry echoed into the night sky, the battle over at last.

"I just work for them."

A.N.: This was originally intended to go up in a joint post with another 15k word chonker, but by the time I was plugging away at it I managed to get a chance to kickstart my quest again for a bit, and now that Occi's posted the Collab and moved us into the endgame for the turn I figure that I may as well leave this out in the hopes I can pivot from an IQ update to finishing that up soon.
 
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Janus - The Good, The Bad, and The Bronze
Initial Desert
Golden Heartland, Year 240

"I don't understand. Is the entire joke just tricking them into saying 'these nuts'?" Jieyue asked.

"No, it's- watch the road, watch the road!" The cart slammed hard to the right, rocking onto two wheels as she flared the reins at the spirit bulls pulling us down the mountain path. "Gold's Balls, woman, watch where you're driving."

"Would you be hurt by a collision at these speeds?" Jieyue frowned. "I assumed you would be fine, and only Si and myself would be at risk."

"First of all, suicidal strategies is a bad strategy in our line of work." She shot me a disbelieving look. "Hey, my strategies aren't suicidal, they just look that way. The other guy wants to kill me way less than he wants to get his dick punched into his dantian, so we just stalemate. Then I punch him in the dick." Jieyue shook her head and sat up in the seat, speeding the bulls on with a steady expression. "Second of all, no, you say 'these nuts' but whatever they said is what set up the joke."

"I don't think I understand," she said.

"See, that's your problem, Xie," I pointed at her. "Always trying to understand shit. Sometimes, you just gotta do it and see."

She made a face when I called her name, but didn't respond, instead humming something under her breath. The bulls kicked it up, the speed pushing me back in my seat as her Demonic Tune took hold of them. "Hey," I said, pushing myself to my feet and looking across the valley at the switchback route ahead, and the Righteous spies trying to escape us with some kind of cloud-shoe artefact. "If you can just line us up, I can probably make this jump."

"I can catch them," she said.

"Are you sure? Because it doesn't really feel like we're getting any closer."

"I can catch them," she repeated confidently. "It's not my first race. But-" Jieyue glanced at me, my feet balanced on the edge of the seat. "-you should sit down."

"Fine," I said, dropping into my seat. "It's your shoh fuck!"

The bulls bellowed loudly and tripled in speed, hooves shattering stone and veins bulging across their backs! Jieyue's voice cut the air as she belted out the Tune, full of qi!

"I came up from the bottom, and into the top!
For the first time I feel alive!
I can fly like an eagle, and strike like a hawk!
Do you think you can survive...the Top?"

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"How like a Devil to resort to such base fighting techniques," the scion of whatever the fuck sneered at me. "You call throwing your debased Devil body around like that an art?"

"Hey, as long as it works," I shrugged.

He struggled to his feet from the crater I'd planted them in, the tournament arena pulverized except for the one stone tile I'd left to keep myself technically still inside the ring. The crowd cheered as the young and valiant local hero stood up to the evil foreign demonic cultivator, blah blah, all of them can go collectively eat ass. A single one, they don't deserve their own individual asses to eat.

Wait, he was saying something to me.

"-know that I will one day become strong, strong enough to top even you." Pause. "But until then…will you not share your name?"

I smirked. This fool. This moron. This absolute buffon. "Bophades."

He looked at me in confusion. "Bophades who?"

I looked back at Jieyue, about to destroy this man's entire life.

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The party of Righteous cultivators looked at us with disdain, as we passed their spies into their hands. I wasn't important enough to know the politics behind how this shook out but, despite our break to go fleece a tournament for some kind of Sun Archer cultivation treasure Jieyue wanted but was too humble to ask for help with, we were still the closest scout squad to the century we'd handed our quarry over to. Which meant it ended up being our job to meet up with the Righteous fucks.

So, we were here handing the bastards over while our obviously inferior opposites pretended like they knew what they were doing. I mean, honestly, just because they outnumbered us eight to three and had half their group hidden behind nearby rocks, did they think they had the advantage? Bastards wouldn't know the first thing about desert survival if it bit them in the ass. Like we didn't know how to see past the "walk single-file in the sand" trick. What was this, amateur hour?

Oh wait, they're trash-talking us, something interesting might be happening.

"Your ability to catch my junior brother despite his clearly superior class is admirable," the leader said, actually tilting his head back so he could look down his nose. He was the same height as Jieyue so I guess he needed it but from where I stood, he just looked stupid. Still, I was leaving Jieyue to handle this so how stupid he looked wasn't my problem to deal with.

"Hardly," the brother spat. "Nor will I forget the sour treatment I've suffered as a result of your actions, devil. My name is-" Nope, I'm not remembering that shit. Lalalalala. "-tell me yours."

Jieyue looked back at me for a moment. What was- oh shit. Yes. Yes. I stood up straight, nodding my approval. She turned back to the group, looking across their faces, then faced the brother. "Tsau Kong."

"Tsau Kong?" he frowned.

Jieyue turned back to me with that same smug smile - and I knew she finally got it.

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DEEZ. Because overexplaining the joke is a joke, and a meta-joke (the best kind of joke): Bophades is pronounced similar to 'Both of these', and Tsau Kong is similar to 'Suck on'. After tricking someone into saying these (or something similar), you respond with 'these nuts' and then you win the conversation. Use this knowledge wisely; it's a strategic weapon not meant for regular discussion.
 
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Jianjun Quan: On the Replication Jar
Jianjun Quan: On the Replication Jar

He couldn't believe his luck, frankly. He'd expected to need to jump into a Secret Realm to come across something like this. Now, it wouldn't help him Cultivate faster directly, but here's the thing, there are so many things that are hard to come by that people would pay a pretty penny for, either literally or in Contribution Points, that came in small amounts and weren't very big. Many of those things were 'mortal' items. He wondered if, say, a huge number of diamonds would be of value to the clan. Regardless, he was going to be busy helping the Clan prepare for the Trials by replicating a large number of low-tier medicines that were hard to come by, in exchange for cultivation materials to at least keep himself at par, and to fill out some more medicinal lore he might have missed.

He'd also have to talk to some poison mistresses for advice on the best poisons to prep in case he did, in fact, have to fight some time soon now that he could reliably make more of them. Sure, he could just make a drop of cyanide fill the entire jar and toss the contents at an enemy, but he doubted that would work on anyone past Qi Condensation, and was unlikely to kill anyone who in his Realm. While he lacked their specialty in poisons, well, Medicine was essentially a specific dose of Poison, and if nothing else, he could rent the Jar to them so they could duplicate some of their favored poisons in exchange for the advice. Who knows? If he was really lucky, word would get around and Minervina herself might offer some pointers. On that note, could the Replication Jar be used to duplicate special Treasures and Relics, so long as they fit inside? He had a vague recollection of hearing about a tiny boat that could fit in one's hand to allow the bearer to escape a dangerous situation. Sure it would come out of the Treasure-holder's Qi, but surely there were some who would consider the price worth it? Or perhaps some Elders who wanted to give their heirs a leg up. The Jar didn't seem to care if you had a relevant Dao for the items in question, after all.

He should also ask about finicky bits of construction that were small enough to be Replicated. He wasn't sure who to ask specifically thought. The Builders tended towards fairly large-scale projects, but maybe they'd have some ideas? He'd heard good things about clocks, but also that they had a huge number of internal pieces and that they tended to be a bit fragile as a result. Small but finicky things like that were a potential Spirit Stone mine with the Replication Jar.

Then there were more cloak-and-dagger applications. Stealing a seal, duplicating it, and then replacing the original before it could be missed might be in the cards, for example. Worst came to worst, he could always let Lady Duca have it for a while. Surely she could derive some interesting uses for it. He suspected it would end up as one of her tools if he died unless he specified otherwise or it was destroyed in battle anyway.

Plus, he could make his surgical tools out of silver for a pittance, taking advantage of the antibacterial properties. Surely that would be of value to his fellow doctors! Vitamin supplements for mortals could also be quite helpful. Who said that there was no point in having the Replication Jar make pills? A lot of medicines for mortals came in small doses, so he could probably get decent mileage out of that.

Still, he couldn't help but wonder about that old woman's identity. She never gave him her name, and the jar was the only reason he didn't believe that was some kind of bizarre vision quest. Was that a Nascent Soul in disguise, or maybe a Will? Maybe a long-dead Clan Elder who approved of his goals and decided to test him to see if his convictions were drawn from spite alone or if there was more to it than that and leaving him the Jar when he passed the test? Well, he supposed it didn't actually matter much. The real question was how to use the Jar she'd given him.

Hm, he should start with...

AN: Whoops. I think I forgot to make an Omake for him this Turn. Oh well, gonna preempt that. Anyway. I'd like an LST so I can have him jump into the Secret Realm for the Cultivation Boost.

Part of the difficulty here is that, well, I don't believe tech is quite so schizo as Naruto, but I'm not 100% on what would be common knowledge enough in potential applications for someone with as eclectic a knowledge base as a Noble Knowledge Sect prisoner to know when he's focused so heavily on medicine since getting out.

I can think of a ridiculous number of uses for this thing IRL. You get one bar of gold, and you're set for life. Or a diamond, for that matter. Obviously, things are rather different for Jianjun, for a number of reasons. People don't quite value gold and silver in the same way, though he can still get something out of them. I expect there to be issues with LST/Impact treasure replication, if only for game balance reasons, and likely due to the 'soul bond' common to many of the latter, but even if Jianjun is limited to purely mundane materials, he could probably make some Contribution Points just loaning it out to the clan for replicating precious metals and rare medicines.

I'd bet Destacia could think of some weird shit that needs a ton of gold that Jianjun could, if not trivialize, certainly make a lot easier if he spent a few years just replicating gold. So yeah, I can see why this thing could set up a Cultivator for life. I wonder if he could take a sample of someone's blood and replicate it for blood donations as a very crude form of vaccination? Don't think they know about blood types yet. Would it be a potential Blood Path vector though? All the issues on that end recently have me a little paranoid.

1060 words, discounting this line.
 
Demeterius Ceres - The matter of ownership
The matter of ownership


Demetrius is someone who makes enemies easily, and it's almost always his fault. Doesn't help that he does a catch and release thing to farm valuables.

Omake Bonus - Cultivation Years
I only need to produce the equivalent of 4000 words for Demetrius to ascend to Core at the start of the next turn.
 
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Flavius Eirenikos - Recovery
Flavius Eirenikos
Recovery

The days after the Assault on Goat-Cat Spiral Village were difficult, to say the least. Flavius was unharmed, but he was solidly in the minority there. The village was littered with corpses, and while many were of the blood path, others were not. Such a slaughter turned Flavius' stomach.

He could handle death, of course. Flavius had killed with his own hands even before the assault. But the methods of the blood path were exceptionally distasteful to him. They sought growth not through their own efforts, but through the consumption of others'. Such unearned power would surely fail them in time, in the face of those who had worked for theirs. Indeed, Flavius had seen it happen many times over, both on a personal scale and in the wider workings of the world. The blood path could gain power very quickly, but it could not ever truly win.

Even beyond that, people who he had eaten and trained with had died in the assault. Flavius was only greatful that Qiang and Qiao hadn't been in the Village at the time. Perhaps that was selfish of him, but it was true. Flavius had grown and learned from the fighting, but it was not something he wanted his friends to face. As cultivators, they could not, would not avoid such bloody conflict forever, but Flavius was pathetically glad they had avoided it that day.

For good or ill, Shining Goat and Shadow Cat had agreed. The first few days, they had all focused on repairing the village. Flavius spent the time moving corpses, repairing houses, and cleaning blood from the streets. But the day before Qiang and Qiao were expected back, the two heads of the village had taken Flavius aside, away from the prying eyes of the village.

"We cannot allow this attack to stand." Shining Goat spoke with an uncharacteristic seriousness, though truthfully Flavius was glad he was speaking at all. The man had spent their time repairing the village in a somber silence.

Flavius gave a firm nod in agreement, "As a member of the Golden Devils Clan, I cannot allow such a large blood sect group to run rampant."

Shining Goat gave Flavius a smile, showing a bit of mirth, though it was still clearly emerging from deep sadness, "What, it can't just be because you like us?"

"That is also the case, of course. I could not overlook an attack on ones who have shown me such hospitality, even if I was not connected to the Golden Devils."

"You're really no fun to tease, Flavius. Qiang says you have fun reactions, but I can never get anything from you." The foundation establishment cultivator spoke casually, but it left Flavius feeling somewhat concerned. He didn't want to cause the man further grief, after all.

"I can give stronger reactions, if you would prefer, though I admit I don't know what else you wanted me to say."

"We didn't pull you over to ask you to give better reactions to my husband's antics." Shadow Cat smoothly interjected, though she seemed rather amused by the whole interaction. Flavius couldn't help but feel like he was missing something, but he was happy to let it go. Sometimes, Flavius just didn't understand people.

"This attack can't be allowed to stand," Shadow Cat continued, "but we can't leave the village defenseless searching for the Butchering Chefs Sect. I doubt Blood Lotus will attack again, but her gang isn't the only threat in these mountains. Most of our disciples aren't strong enough to survive if they get ambushed during the search, and those of us who are need to stay here and guard the village."

Flavius quickly caught on, "But I'm not vital to the sect's defenses, and my Life Saving Treasure means I'm at much less risk. Besides, I can probably stand against anyone in the blood path below Foundation Establishment, at least well enough to escape."

She nodded, "Exactly. You're quick on the uptake when it comes to matters of cultivation, at least."

Before Flavius could ask what Shadow Cat meant by that, Shining Goat butted back into the conversation, "You shouldn't feel obligated to accept this, of course. There's still a risk, and while we'll happily reward you we can't afford to recoup the loss of even on Life Saving Treasure as things stand right now. You've already risked your life for our village, we don't expect you to risk it further."

That man could be foolish sometimes, "You've already given me more than any number of Life Saving Treasures could be worth. I feel that my grasp on cultivation has grown more in the past few months than in the last few years combined, after all."

It was a remarkable claim, given Flavius' swift rise to ninth heavenstage, but it was true. Even if his cultivation had advanced rapidly, he had not found any techniques that suited him before discovering the Shining Goat Sect and its teachings. Flavius would happily have traded his Life Saving Treasure for the Golden Goat Arts he had figured out.

"Besides," he continued, "I may not need to use my treasure at all. I may have only just started climbing the mountain of cultivation, but I'm confident in my ability to defeat others at my level."

Shining Goat didn't protest further, "Then we will be in your debt. We only ask that you uncover where the Butchering Chefs Sect is hiding and relay the information back. If you tip them off by attacking prematurely, Bloody Lotus will just move their camp, even if you survive."

"Very well. When should I set out?"

Shadow Cat grinned, "Why don't you wait until Qiang and Qiao come back? You're quite good at rebuilding houses with your Earth Shaping Arts, and I suspect they'll be angry if they hear you came back and then left before they returned."

Truthfully, Flavius was glad to hear it. He wanted to see his friends before setting out himself, if only to be certain they were okay.

Their conversation ended soon after, and Flavius spent the rest of the day aiding with the construction of new buildings. It passed in a blur, but he found himself remarkably tired afterwards. He was far from a master of the Earth Shaping Arts, and using them all day was a drain on his qi. Even more than that, he had to learn to shape the earth in very precise ways, and create structures that could stand the test of time. It was a novel form of training, and if it weren't for the circumstances he'd have been happy to discover it. Instead, he just filed it away in his mind along with all his other training techniques and continued on.

That night, Flavius meditated. He did so not just to cultivate, but also to contemplate the events of the attack. He was attempting to project a strong image, but he had experienced death seventy-two times during the attack, not to mention some truly excruciating torture. It was not the kind of thing he could leave unaddressed.

In his mind, he carefully analyzed the events of the perceived loops. He remembered the feel of blood lightning searing through his flesh, the pain of his head being crushed, the exhaustion of dying over and over again. But there was something missing, wasn't there? He remembered the deaths, the pain, and then opening his eyes again as if nothing had happened. He had even taken his own life to avoid being tortured, because he'd known that he'd just wake up again. But... that was wrong, wasn't it? If he died now, he'd actually, really die, right?

But then, on the mountain, he should have died, and he didn't. And against Man Eater, he should have died, but he didn't either. He'd never feared death, but Flavius had never wanted to die, because if he died he could never climb above the heavens themselves. And he knew, logically, that if he died, now, that would be the end. So why didn't he feel that way?

He wasn't sure. Flavius did not sleep that night, meditating until morning, but he found no answer to his concerns.

The next day, the heirs to the Shining Goat Sect returned. Qiang and Qiao had approached the village in good spirits, excited to tell tales of their victories at the Thousand Year Moon-Bathed Valley. Then they actually saw what had become of Goat-Cat Spiral Village, and their faces rapidly paled. As one, they ran towards their home, seeking out their parents. Flavius watched from the sidelines as the family reunited, and reassured each other of their survival. It felt strangely intrusive, for all that they were standing out in the open. By the way he saw the nearby disciples turning away from the display, Flavius knew he wasn't alone in that feeling.

Yet, after they finished checking with their parents, the two immediately made their way over to him. That was surprising. Why should they come check on him, rather than people they had known their entire lives?

"Flavius, you're okay, right? Mom and Dad said you weren't hurt in the attack, but–" Qiao didn't seem to know how to finish the sentence, but Qiang was happy enough to pick up her slack.

"Of course he isn't hurt. Someone who beat both of us wouldn't get injured by some mere blood path bandits, right?" Despite his confident words, Qiang looked at Flavius with a strange nervousness.

"You don't need to worry, the enemies I faced trapped me in an illusion, so I didn't suffer any real injuries." Flavius tried to flash them a smile, though he suspected it looked more like a grimace.

"I hate fighting illusionists," Qiao grumbled in commiseration, "They always make it so annoying trying to hit them, and once you do they just go down in one hit."

"Yeah," Qiang added in solidarity, before something occurred to him, "hey, wait, I use illusions! Don't let some blood sect cultists give illusionists a bad name!"

Flavius felt his smile turn more genuine as the two bickered. It was nice to see that his friends weren't as impacted by what had happened. It probably helped that the cleaning and repairs were so far along by the time they returned.

"Don't worry, Qiang, I would never mistake your arts for those of the blood sect. The two I fought wielded unearned power. Their array was admittedly impressive, but they could not conceive of someone fighting past suffering to win. Once I broke it, they fell easily enough. You are strong, unlike them. You're willing to put in the work.

Flavius expected his friend to preen at his honest words, but instead Qiang seemed rather flustered as he responded, "W–well you know, I am pretty cool I guess."

Flavius hadn't noticed until now, but Qiang's face was actually quite red. Had he been burned on his journey?

Qiao laughed, "It looks like Flavius found your weakness, aye Qiang?"

He shoved his sister, though she didn't budge, "Shut up! It's not like you'd react any better, anyways."

Flavius watched in confusion until, in a flash of understanding, he figured out what was going on. He looked Qiang straight in the eyes, and repeated the words his father had said to him some months back, "Taking a compliment is an important skill. If it is your weakness, I can help you train it."

Qiao choked and Qiang flinched as if struck. The sister recovered first, stifling laughter, "You absolutely should!"

Flavius nodded seriously. He knew Qiao was just amused by her little brother's suffering, but she wasn't wrong. After Flavius had realized his difficulty with taking compliments, he had praised himself repeatedly in the mirror until it felt natural. A training partner would make it even easier for Qiang to learn this lesson.

Thus, he began his verbal assault, "You are naturally very talented with the Shadow Cat Arts. You have an incredible grasp of the Nine-Lives Slaughter Blade despite it being a Foundation Establishment level technique. You are talented in matching both the unorthodox cultivation strategies of the Shadow Cat Arts with standard body cultivation, without allowing either to falter. This is something I am certain I could not manage, so I find it particularly impressive."

Qiang's face was growing more red with every word. Truly, he needed help with his training if his resistance to even Flavius' mediocre complement techniques was so low.

Flavius continued, determined to aid his friend, "You defend the honor of your family and sect admirably. You have a healthy sense of pride, but you don't let it cover up your kindness. You are scarily good at finding good spots to sunbathe. When you do so, the sunlight shines in your hair like moonlight in the night sky. Sometimes you forget to brush it and it sticks up almost like two cat ears, which is quite cute—"

He trailed off as he noticed Qiang had stopped giggling and was now staring at him blankly, as if her brain was processing and was threatening to overheat almost as much as Qiao's face. Suddenly, it seemed that whatever she'd been turning over in her head clicked into place, and she started cursing, "Fuck! Damnit, why is it always the hot ones? It makes so much sense though, shit."

He gave her a strange look, "Did I say something wrong?"

She gave an angry sigh, "No, it's not you. I just, I just need to go help in the reconstruction or smash someone's face in."

She turned to leave, shooting back one final line as she ran away, "Come back in one piece so I can win our next fight!"

Flavius really had no idea what that was about. Perhaps the reality of the attack had just only now sunk in for her? He supposed their conversation was rather jovial given the circumstances, though he'd been enjoying the excuse to turn his mind towards lighter matters.

Before he could ponder it further, Qiang finally recovered enough to speak, though he had started hiding his hands behind his face in a manner rather uncharacteristic of him, "You can't just— that is to say— I— here, take this!"

He thrust something into Flavius' hands. It seemed to be some sort of marble, midnight black but with a light seemingly coming from the center. It also, strangely, had two small triangular bumps on one side.

"This is the Cat's One Life Marble," Qiang spoke quickly, "it's a Life Saving Treasure that can bring you back if you die, but only once. I got it from Fleet Foot as thanks for providing aid at the Thousand Year Moon-Bathed Valley."

Flavius stared at the small item with awe, "I can't accept this, it's far too valuable."

"Just take it and come back alive. And when you come back we're going to have a talk!" It seemed that Qiang had regained his usual demeanor for just a moment, but the moment he met Flavius' eyes he blushed again. Quickly, the cultivator of the Shadow Cat arts mimed throwing something at the ground, and a burst of smoke obscured Flavius' vision for a moment. It quickly cleared, but by the time it did Qiang was gone.

It seemed Flavius' impromptu training session was too much for his two friends. He sometimes forgot that most people weren't quite as enthusiastic about such things as him.

Spinning his new Life Saving Treasure between his fingers, Flavius looked out towards the gates of the village. Now that his friends had returned, it was time to set out on his mission. He turned to return to his room first. He'd already largely packed his things, and would almost certainly be out of the village within fifteen minutes.

He was already looking forward to his spar with Qiao and whatever Qiang wanted to talk about, after all, and the faster he set out, the faster he could return.

And so the quest to 40k words begins anew! I'd like to request a Tribulation Treasure for my omake reward this turn.
 
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Barred Secret Realms: Bloody Crevasses
Barred Secret Realms: Bloody Crevasses

There are a number of Secret Realms that, rather than being guarded jealously by their owners, are agreed by the majority of powers to be sealed off as best they can be. One such Secret Realm is the Bloody Crevasses. Once a crown jewel of the Blood Path empires of old, the Righteous sects and Golden Devil Clan eventually forced the Blood Path away from it, set a guard on it, and gradually sealed it away, back when Spirit Severing Cultivators actually existed on the dead Turtle-Child. In time, it was all but forgotten, even to the Blood Path.

Now, with the surge of Blood Qi from the shattered Altar, many of the creations of the Soup Chef have reawakened, including this one. With the old Spirit Severing binding having weakened with age, as no Spirit Severing cultivator existed to maintain it, it shattered entirely with the rush of the power familiar to the Secret Realm. Now the Righteous Sects find themselves recklessly attacked to reach it.

Currently, it is guarded by the Blood-Defying Heavenly Sect, a Minor Sect of Cultivators of legendary resistance to the Blood Path. Compared to any other faction affected, their casualties to the surge of Blood Qi were few. Even their mortals suffered few losses, often electing suicide when those that did succumb regained their senses. They are a such a minor group because they have one specialty and one specialty only: screwing over the Blood Path. Their Daos and Arts center entirely on this, to the point that many of the Blood Path's enemies have consulted them during the heights of it's power, but like a mirror losing it's shine as a cloud passes over the sun, their prominence fades as the Blood Path is pushed back, and they had nearly faded into obscurity at several points when the Blood Path lashed out at the architects of their most recent downfall.

Now, their original purpose, to prevent the Blood Path from accessing this Secret Realm, has returned, and they have unprecedented support from the Righteous and Golden Devils alike. The Secret Realm is a simple place. The Soup Chef discerned a means of converting the blood of the Turtle Child into Blood Qi at a calamitously inefficient rate, but for the Blood Path, who can no longer absorb Beast Cores, it was of value, and so he set up an artifact of some kind to do so, feeding off the wasted Qi from the process, leaving the artifact itself resistant to Arts normally of supreme effectiveness against the Blood Path, as it's nature is some hideous hybrid of Blood Path and Beast Core consumption. The fact that the Soup Chef founded the Blood Path via consumption of the Turtle Child is likely the only reason this was possible at all, despite his mad genius.

The basic structure of the Secret Realm is thus: rocky hills, the elevation changing constantly, with blood pooling at the bottom. Now, the specifics have changed greatly, as the Bloody Crevasses have stockpiled Blood Qi for millennia without anyone to use it, generating Trials and even Bloody Beasts, as the Beasts inhabiting it were nicknamed, to better train any Blood Path who enter. The one saving grace is that, for some reason, most Blood Path are wildly unsuited for the Trials, which generally seem to be about whether you are willing to do what is necessary to combat something worse, rather than taking an easy path to power. The Altar Lord has expressed interest in visiting however, and even if it's a bluff, the Righteous can't risk it. Particularly not when the Blood-Defying Heavenly Sect is absolutely certain there are artifacts within that could benefit the Altar Lord, potentially letting him fight on the level of a Spirit-Severing cultivator. Gifts Soup Chef left for his followers just in case, is the common presumption.

Based on the scouting of the Blood-Defying Heavenly Sect, the only ones who can reliably enter without corruption, other than it's complete saturation in Blood Qi, it's not actually very different from, say, the Yuan Secret Realm or the Man-As-Mountain Array, as long as you ignore the seemingly endless blood and the corrupting nature of the place for anyone not already of the Blood Path. Meaning it would likely be almost exactly the same for the Blood Path. This seems to disturb them greatly, leading more than a few to privately wonder what was going on in the Soup Chef's head.

Regardless, it's a strategic concern for the ongoing war between the Righteous and Blood Path powers, as allowing the Blood Path to reach it could be a game-ender. The good news is that the potential to casually achieve Nascent power via a Secret Realm crafted by the Soup Chef is too tantalizing a promise for the Blood Path to remain very cohesive beyond wanting access, with rivals sabotaging schemes to get there first. Oddly, the Altar Lord has done little to quell these outbursts unless they seriously hamper the wider war effort.

AN: An idea I had for a Secret Realm people actively prevent anyone from using, awakened by the last hurrah of Blood Path that kicked off the Great Era. Rina's not using it, because she's not willing to bend for the Blood Qi curse, and because she expects that she'd be hit with further effects to twist her into a puppet for the Soup Chef. This isn't like the Caves. This was made by the Soup Chef for the Blood Path from it's very foundation, and just going in is risky for the Sect that has based their entire existence on countering the Blood Path. It reeks of a poison chalice.

The Secret Realm was made to let Soup Chef raise up huge numbers of high-tier Blood Path cultivators with relative ease, but his path isn't very conducive to people like the Altar Lord, since Cultivators are tremendously selfish by nature, and the Blood Path only exacerbates that, as opposed to the Golden Devils who work to leash it. Altar Lord is, in fact, interested, but he knows that Blood Path power is only going to wane as Heaven's Law reasserts itself now that the Altar is gone, so he's got to be careful about who gets access to the massive stores of Blood Qi he'll never have access to again once they're used up, meaning he's forced to play politics. He's confident most of the others would be rejected by the artifacts within and so it's not a problem on that front, but Blood Qi has never been very discriminating.

Hm, could we make a super-sized version of the Pill Destasia made to force Heaven and the Turtle Emperor apart? Heaven is sort of the Turtle's Will, after all. Maybe Bhrigu would have some ideas?

1145 words, discounting this line.
 
LST. The idea IC would be as prep for the Trials, but when they don't happen, he'll jump into a Secret Realm for the Cultivation. Unless you think I should grab the Tribulation Trearure early?
An LST is usually a good investment.

You're at 20 years to breakthrough to Foundation establishment, so the only real difference a tribulation treasure would make would be to let you breakthrough at the start of turn 16 rather than the end. At this point those effects are mainly narrative as we have a fairly good spread of talents in both the Foundation Building and Qi realms. For reference with your impact you'd be equivalent to FB 3, rather than your current Qi 17.

So unless that really appeals to your creative process I'd say an LST is a better investment. That would put you at 3, maning you could fairly safely go to a secret realm when you reach foundation establishment on turn 17 (assuming you don't roll badly on turn 16 and burn one).
 
An LST is usually a good investment.

You're at 20 years to breakthrough to Foundation establishment, so the only real difference a tribulation treasure would make would be to let you breakthrough at the start of turn 16 rather than the end. At this point those effects are mainly narrative as we have a fairly good spread of talents in both the Foundation Building and Qi realms. For reference with your impact you'd be equivalent to FB 3, rather than your current Qi 17.

So unless that really appeals to your creative process I'd say an LST is a better investment. That would put you at 3, maning you could fairly safely go to a secret realm when you reach foundation establishment on turn 17 (assuming you don't roll badly on turn 16 and burn one).

I'll do that then.
 
Hi guys! I don't want to submit my Good Seed now because I don't want to risk him dying to bad rolls before I catch up. @occipitallobe is it okay to post as I write or should I wait to catch up?
Hello and welcome!

The fates for the current turn are decided, so you'd be starting next turn anyway. Turns last a substantial amount of time (probably at least a month, sometimes longer) so I think you'd be fine posting your seed now and post as you write.

If you're concerned about catching up we can put a note on your seed to delay their introduction until you're caught up, and you can ping myself or one of the other thread collaborators for us to remove this once you have finished catching up.
 
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As Fates are done for turn 15 already, your seed will be set to join on turn 16 even if you post them now, so there shouldn't be any risk of them dying to bad rolls this turn. You should have plenty of time to write some stuff for turn 16 if you put them up now.
 
Yeah, just create a character and you can start writing them now. Their fate won't be rolled for like two months or more, and the more you write the bigger your multiplier gets, so you'll have lots of time to stack the deck. I'm also pretty sure there's a secret modifier for people's first turn, because I've never seen a seed get horribly owned on their first turn unless they started in a Trial or went straight into a Secret Realm.
 
Oh! and if you're up for it, see if you can get some Teaching Juniors collabs set up. Those things will do all sorts of good stuff for you.
 
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Epeius Ariston - Good Seed Background + Omake 1
Thank you for all your advice!

Oh! and if you're up for it, see if you can get some Teachign Juniors collabs set up. Those things will do all sorts of good stuff for you.
What is a Junior collab?

Name: Epeius Ariston.
Requested Bonus: LST

Cultivation Aims: 13th Heavenstage

Turn Notes: If one of the missions doesn't have enough Qi Condensation cultivators, please assign me to it. Otherwise learning how to make artifacts.

Cool Thing: Mechanically Epieus can judge the quality of inanimate objects and see the flaws instantly. Narratively, he can see the density, flow, and type of qi through his five senses and uses his artifying skill to determine what's going on.

Starting Turn 16.

His primary problem-solving tool is building an artifact.
The Will to Succeed​

On my first day, I ran to the training grounds hoping to avoid being late and saw my classmates waiting for the elder to arrive. I let out a sigh of relief and tension left my body. Immediately afterward, I felt a presence that commanded my attention. When I instinctively looked at the source, I saw an older man.

He said "I am Elder Sophistes and I am responsible for building your foundation. Follow me." He jogs and I rush to stay by his side. As my breath shortens, determination fuels me to push on. My legs start complaining, I push on and notice he is a distance away. My legs transition from a dull ache to searing pain, and in the back of my mind, I realize I'm being lapped. It's harder and harder to lift my legs so I focus on placing one foot after another. Missing a step, I stumble forward, desperately leaning back to avoid falling, but I overcompensate and topple backward. I see the ground rushing up to meet me and Elder Sophistes catches me. He tells me "Good job pushing yourself. Rest until you can run again." As my breath steadies, I attempt to rise, but my shaking limbs persuade me to wait until I regain strength before running again. The next time, they're steady and I run until Sophistes catches me again. And again and again and again. Right before I started running again, he told us it was time for a short break.

Looking at my clan members, I notice they collapse to the ground, appearing exhausted, but their limbs aren't trembling and their breaths barely shorten. After a few minutes, he ends the break and instructs us to work on our upper body. He points to the rack on the right wall, where square metallic objects are placed on top. Then he instructs, "Grab one weight and lift it," demonstrating that we're expected to lift it in front of our chest. I witnessed Elder Sophistes tapping the weights of struggling students, who then stopped struggling. As I try to grab it with both hands, I braced myself and slowly lift it. Right before I'm ready to try walking with it, he taps mine and it lightens to merely the second heaviest thing I carried.

I slowly lift up my weight. Unlike when I ran, I can't even start at the elder's pace. When I'm 3/4 of the way up to the peak, I hear Elder Sophistes chiding a different student for dropping their weight instead of slowly lowering it. I decide that not only am I not going to drop it, but I'm going to go even slower on the way down. While lowering the weight, I feel my arms start to shake, but I ignore it and successfully complete the repetition. On my way up, the shaking of my arms intensifies, but it's ignorable. On the way down, I feel burning which I ignore. On the way up it's a struggle to ignore the burning. On the way down, I dropped the weight and frantically try to get out of the way of the weight on the path to hit my foot, but my exhausted body is too slow. The instant before it hits my foot, Sophistes catches it and tells me "Good job pushing yourself. Continue when you can just like when running." After the class finishes the tenth set, he tells us to take a much-needed break, and the relief is palpable. Again my classmates act a lot more tired than their body says they are oddly enough.

Elder Sophistes announces that we will be doing push-ups. As my classmates scramble into the position he models, I drag my body into the position. He tells me to hold the position as long as I can while everyone else lowers themselves to the ground and then up again. I get into the position and immediately fall because my hands and feet slip. Despite my exhaustion, I managed to hold the position for a brief moment on my third attempt. Although it was only for a short time due to my exhaustion, I still held it! Again, again, and again.

Sophistes dismissed us and I walked over. I said "I don't need to be home for hours, could you please continue teaching me?"
He asked "What's the point? Your talents lie elsewhere."
I said " I don't give up just because it's hard. I know it won't be pointless because while my talents lie with creating, being talented at something merely means you need less work to get the same results. With enough dedication and effort, I can excel. Besides, if I surrender simply because it's easier, how can I determine whether I'm genuinely incapable or if I merely needed to put in more effort?"
He said "Those are good arguments and they're not the reason I'm going to give you one-on-one lessons. I'll tell you if you haven't figured out the real reason by the time you no longer need extra attention." As his hand made contact, I basked in his qi, soothing my sore muscles and rejuvenating my energy.
Then he said "Run."

AN: This is my first ever Omake so please offer advice and be brutal so I can improve! Thank you!
 
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What is a Junior collab?
You can write a collab with someone in foundation building and get 20 Cultivation years, though only when you are below the ninth heavenstage so mostly newcomers. Only once per turn (you can still collab, but no extra bonus), though I *think* you can do it again in the next turn if you are still below the 9th heavenstage but don't quote me on that.
 
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Oh! and if you're up for it, see if you can get some Teaching Juniors collabs set up. Those things will do all sorts of good stuff for you.
You can write a collab with someone in foundation building and get 20 Cultivation years, though only when you are below the ninth heavenstage so mostly newcomers. Only once per turn (you can still collab, but no extra bonus), though I *think* you can do it again in the next turn if you are still below the 9th heavenstage but don't quote me on that.
Should be the case, but with the current Great Era bonuses you're pretty much guaranteed to get to or past the 9th in a single turn if you do a Training Juniors collab, I'm fairly sure.
Wow! It's really powerful to give so much cultivation progress in a turn. Unfortunately, I'm early enough in the story I'll definitely get spoilers if I do a Teaching Juniors collabs with anyone. When I caught up, I'll see who's interested in doing one with me.
 
Wow! It's really powerful to give so much cultivation progress in a turn. Unfortunately, I'm early enough in the story I'll definitely get spoilers if I do a Teaching Juniors collabs with anyone. When I caught up, I'll see who's interested in doing one with me.
I respect the reading grind - however, to be technical, you could very well get away with a collab and not be spoiled in the least, since there's no requirement on what you actually write. You could have Epeius building a gizmo and the other collab person comes walking by and casually points out something he's doing wrong, which happens to give Epeius a Revelation about How Cultivation Works or something. No need for plot spoilers there.

That said, there is a lot of neat stuff in the story, so it ain't a bad idea to read it anyway.
 
I respect the reading grind - however, to be technical, you could very well get away with a collab and not be spoiled in the least, since there's no requirement on what you actually write. You could have Epeius building a gizmo and the other collab person comes walking by and casually points out something he's doing wrong, which happens to give Epeius a Revelation about How Cultivation Works or something. No need for plot spoilers there.

That said, there is a lot of neat stuff in the story, so it ain't a bad idea to read it anyway.
Thank you for the suggestion! I appreciate your help problem solving. Weirdly, I actually enjoy reading all the discussion and side stories. If I haven't caught up when it gets close to the month that was estimated earlier for me, I'll try doing it the technical way.
 
Epeius Ariston 2
As I collapsed onto the ground, gasping for air, Elder Sophistes asked, "Do you know why your breath is shallower than before you ran?" I shook my head. He explained, "The reason is that your body needs more air, so it's desperately trying to take it in as quickly as possible." However, taking deep breaths is much more effective. Also, how you breathe matters. Practice breathing in through your nose and out through your mouth. I ran a greater distance and needed less time to rest after collapsing. When it became habit, the Elder told me to lift weights.

Right before I raised the weight, Elder Sophistes tapped the upper part of both my arms. He instructed me to avoid tensing my biceps while I lift the weight. Now it felt like my arms could move so much easier. He explained, "Tensing your arms while trying to move them causes your muscles to fight against each other."

He said, "You're going to perform five foundational exercises, one for each muscle used in a push-up. The first exercise is called a sit-up. To perform a sit-up you lie flat on the ground, bend your knees in front of you, and place your hands on your chest" demonstrating the movement. After I assumed the proper position, he draped a transparent sheet, much heavier than it appeared, over my body.

As I pulled my head forward and lifted my knees, I could feel the sheet pulling my body down. I pushed myself to lift harder, ignoring the slowing pace, until I could no longer continue. The weight was just too much. Dejectedly, I lowered myself to the ground, shocked I couldn't even manage a third of a foundational exercise, despite my classmates easily accomplishing the advanced one.

Elder Sophistes told me, "How you do something is equally important as what you do." He guided my legs so that my feet were as close to my legs as possible. Then, I felt him poking my belly button, and he said "Focus on using those muscles when lifting your head." I focused on my belly button and felt a horizontal line of muscles tensing as I pulled myself up. "Ow!" I felt pain as my head hit my knees. The Elder said, "That's why it's important to be aware of your surroundings." Determined, I tried again and attempted to split my attention. What actually happened is I kept on picking one thing to focus on. At least I didn't bang my head again.

After my fifth repetition, the Elder handed me a piece of wood and a carving knife. Then he said, "You need to rest your mind. Meditate through carving wood." I asked, "How do I do that?" He instructed me, "Exhale while cutting the wood, and inhale when you pull the knife back." I asked, "What is exhaling and inhaling?" He said, "Exhaling is when you breathe out, and inhaling is when you breathe in." I decided to begin with an easy smoothening of the upper right edge. I took a deep breath, placed my knife on the wood, and as I exhaled I cut. Halfway through my exhale, I realized the cut was too shallow when I stopped feeling resistance. I finished exhaling, inhaled, and tried again with a deeper cut. This time it worked. I inhaled brought the knife back, exhaled cut, inhaled, brought it back…

The Elder's voice snapped me out of my reverie when he instructed me to try the sit-ups again. I got into position, focused on using my core strength while splitting my attention and it worked. Again, again, and again.

The Elder got on a bench, picked up a stick with circles on either side and lifts the stick directly above his chest, then lowers it. He got up and I take his place. As he hands the stick to me, I braced myself for the weight and attempted to push up. No success. When I attempted to push using my stomach muscles, I noticed improvement. Elder Sophistes told me, "Place your elbows under your forearms." This time I succeeded.

He pointed to a pole attached to a rope, which is attached to a bar, and told me to push it down. I pushed down keeping my elbows in line with my arms, drawing strength from my stomach, and splitting my attention. The bar moved down a lot, but I couldn't push it all the way down. Elder Sophistes suggested, "Try leaning in."

He pointed to a rope attached to two rectangular pieces of metal with indentations in it and told me to lift myself up by pulling on the rope. I reached up and can't touch it. I tried going up on my toes, and I barely managed to get my fingertips over it. I tried pulling myself up and veered to the right. Fortunately, before I hit the metal I managed to catch myself by pushing my hand against it. When I leaped, I finally got a good grip on the rope. I yanked and barely moved. I tried focusing on my stomach and there was no improvement. Concentrating on my arms helped a little. When I leaped, I went pretty far up. What if I pushed against the metal? My feet slid into the indentations and I accomplished a pull-up.

"Good job, Epeius, for figuring out the trick to this exercise!" Elder Sophistes praised. Then he told me "Earlier, you completed the fifth exercise by holding the push-up position."

I paused to think. In every previous exercise, I learned something new that dramatically reduced the difficulty. How could I make planks easier? Previously, I struggled to keep the position because my hands and feet slipped. What if I focused on keeping them in place? Also, when I pulled myself up, I could move more by paying attention to my arms. I should also use my new breathing technique and relax my muscles.

I got into the position and held it. My arms and legs started trembling, and I ignored them. I felt shaking in my back and focused on my back. the shaking went away. After some time, a burning sensation developed in my back. While I managed to hold on for a time, eventually it was too much. I saw a smile of approval from Elder Sophistes. He said "You improved a lot. Try again."

The Elder recommended I should relax and rest for the remainder of the day. I said I have math homework relating to how much qi is stored where in the body and how long it takes to restore it. My parents require me to get that done before having fun. He said, "I'll discuss it with them."

AN: I aimed to depict Epeius continuing his repetitions after successfully completing weightlifting, pull-ups, triceps pushdowns, and planks, focusing on showing rather than telling. How do you think I did?
 
Gabriel Pompeius 13 & Iskander Pallikari 17: Honing the Blade
Gabriel Pompeius 13 & Iskander Pallikari 17: Honing the Blade

The Twisted Antler, Emporikipolis, Year 310

Many things could happen in a year, or ten for that matter. The Trial bells rang an unprecedented seven times, and then nothing happened. A time-honored cycle had been averted thanks to the incomprehensible genius of Manuel Konstantinos and the heroism of the Optimatoi's finest. And everything afterward, with Old Gold's trap sprung on those who sought to take advantage of the Clan's presumed troubles…

Many things happened, and Gabriel hadn't found much time to pursue his personal quest. Or to meet with an old friend until now. The waiter respectfully led him through the elegantly appointed surroundings towards the table where Iskander waited.

Iskander looked… well, not much different, but better dressed. Gabriel remembered back when his old friend was so fastidious with his money that his best clothes were whatever uniforms he was given and didn't have to buy. He'd put on finer clothes today, a well-tailored tunic with fine stitching, paired with a tasteful gold brooch. He was better groomed too, his hair oiled and combed back, which paired well with the more confident set of his face. Whatever had happened to Iskander under Cerina Polya's tutelage, it seemed to be treating him well enough.

"Gabriel! Get over here, how long has it been!?" Iskander called out, slapping the top of his table and getting to his feet. "You look great!"

"Well, the family's become more supportive." Gabriel murmured before joining his friend. "You look quite refined yourself. Membership in the Silverine Bracers appears to suit you well." His friend had chosen to not renew his contract with the 518th Legion, and after a year's break, Gabriel had been surprised to learn Cerina had headhunted Iskander.

Which was not to say it wasn't well deserved, Gabriel felt. He himself had no reason to leave the Plainswalkers, staying out of habit. "I hope Senior Cerina hasn't been running you too hard?"

"I'd say she runs everybody too hard, until they get used to it. Then she runs 'em harder." Iskander chuckled. "But I guess I've made it so far - and so have you! I was scared your qi would never get back to normal after you took that hit for me back in the day. What year was that again?" He cupped his chin, screwing up his eyes.

"Ah, but we'll have plenty of time for that!" Iskander laughed, pulling up a fine oak chair for Gabriel and sitting back down in his own. "I'm not letting you leave until we've caught up on the last ten years."

Things progressed from there at a rapid pace. Food and drinks rolled in at an alarming rate, and the only thing more alarming than that was how easily they put it all away. The Tenth Heavenstage made everything much… simpler, in a word. The body's limits fell away like leaves in autumn.

Skewers of meat. Multiple plates of noodles. A roasted pheasant. Gyros overflowing with lamb and vegetables. Fresh-baked bread with all manner of things to slather on it. Several varieties of beer and spiced wine. It was a true feast, a new course coming in every 45 minutes or so, allowing for the pair to make up for a whole decade's worth of being apart.

Perhaps one day, they would be so old that a decade felt like a relatively brief stretch of time, but they were hardly there yet. That said, for all of their enthusiasm, there was a certain amount of drink that no amount of physical fortitude could entirely withstand.

As they went on, the conversation shifted from explanations of things that had happened since they last saw one another, to discussions of current events, to reminiscence of good and not-so-good times past. The wait staff slowly lost their patience with the two, but never so much as to ask them to leave, given how many orders they were making.

"And then that's when we realized, my right eye was in my left socket, and my left eye was in my right socket!" Iskander shouted, face flushed and laughing like an idiot. He drained the last of his glass merrily, then set it down hard.

Gabriel managed to avoid that kind of extreme, but there was plenty of color in his face and his smile seemed fixed onto his face. "That doctor had quite a lot to answer for." He chuckled. "His reputation must have been truly ruined." He picked up a goblet, swirled the remaining liquid around lazily, and then sipped it down. His mind wandered over languidly to gather new thoughts, relaxed by the measure of intoxication he'd reached.

"So… what are your next plans?"

"Plans, eh?" Iskander leaned back, looking up to the ceiling. "Mm, gonna stay the course for a while longer, I guess. Don't really got anything better available, and I'm still making good progress."

After a moment, a look of contemplation came over Iskander's face. Paired with the intoxication, it looked odd, as he tried to find focus through the haze around him. "Well, there was one thing."

Gabriel leaned forward, intrigued. "Hm? Do tell."

Iskander's tone wasn't quite a whisper, but it was quieter, like he was telling a secret. "The Yuan Realm's opening up in five years. And they say it's safer now that it's ours. Not safe, but safer, you know."

Gabriel smiled conspiratorially. "Funny you should mention that…"

***

Pompeius Family Estate, Earlier That Year

"Is there a problem, boy?" Felix's gaze seemed to come down like a heavy weight.

Gabriel lifted the tea cup with care, sitting across from his grandfather. "I'm surprised, I suppose." He'd returned to the family estate for once. Family was family after all, and it was becoming to avoid them forever, for better or worse. The reception had been unexpected. Old Nestor had been as effusive and welcoming as he'd always been. No surprise there.

His cousins were oddly polite. Polite, not in the formal way of etiquette, but… respectful. His parents had been overjoyed to see him, and reassured him how proud of him they were.

But his grandfather… First, Felix told him to have a training spar, and Gabriel did so with his grandfather, using all of his techniques against the elder Pompeius and his gruff, exacting attention. And now, this private meeting.

"Why?"

Gabriel blinked at the question. "Why? After what happened…"

"Gabriel," Felix sighed heavily, "Cultivators are often eccentric. All the more as they ascend the great realms. And omens, well, divination is a thing. But when a youth only just awakens his qi and starts talking about dedicating himself to following something he can't even describe at all but 'knows' is something transcendent, gives it an outlandish made-up name? That's worrisome."

"But." he favored his grandson with a smile now. "You became a Good Seed. Reached the Tenth Heavenstage, surpassing your father, at a quarter of his age. A third of my age, when I reached the Ninth, for that matter."

Gabriel felt a great weight seem to start evaporating from his shoulders, but he couldn't find comfort in it yet. "I'm not giving up my search though. I know it's real. Are you no longer concerned about the damage to our reputation?"

Felix snorted hard. "Boy! Our family prizes honor. Our family prizes dignity. But we don't forget that success matters as well. I was only afraid you'd go and get yourself killed off doing something idiotic while still an Aspirant."

Gabriel flushed. He hadn't been that bad, had he?

"But that's no problem now." Felix's smile held bared teeth. "Perhaps you'll find what you're looking for and show us all. After all, people talk about our failure to produce Core Formation Elders, and…"

Gabriel stiffed as if struck by tribulation lightning. "Grandfather! Have you…"

"Almost. I'm in the Great Circle now, and I've pulled every favor I had to ensure a place in the slots for the Man-As-Mountain Array. Not this coming one, but the next. No more than a few decades." The older man explained.

"Isn't that cutting things close?" Gabriel worried. Felix Pompeius was well over four centuries old now, and the family certainly couldn't afford anything like life extending treasures.

"It's just time, grandson." Felix replied. "As long as I break through, what does it matter? There'll be so much more afterward. Even waiting fifty years to get access to a Secret Realm is more than worth it. What better means to overcome the greatest of challenges, than its secrets and bounties?"

Secrets. Bounties. A long standing puzzle suddenly snapped into place in Gabriel's mind. The omen that had no answer, but the implied direction to foreign lands. Even if they were now vassals, Yuan Clan territory absolutely counted as such. And what better place to find insights for the next step in his journey than a Secret Realm?

Gabriel grinned. "You're absolutely right, grandfather."

***​

"So I'll be going there when it opens." Gabriel finished explaining.

A shift in the atmosphere occurred, one that was imperceptible to anyone but them. Iskander's demeanor was as if he had somehow, in an instant, sweated out most of the alcohol in his system. Their eyes met involuntarily, and as shameful as it was to admit, there was a brief feeling of danger and paranoia.

Only half the danger in a Secret Realm came from the construction of the Realm itself. The other half came from how they seemed almost purpose-built to incentivize banditry. After all, it was generally much easier to let another person brave the trials required to gain access to some great treasure, then assault them when they were exhausted. Because it was a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to rise above one's station, even a Golden Devil, indoctrinated into loyalty to the Clan from a young age, could easily be tempted. Upon learning that another person would be in a Secret Realm at the same time as you, this reflexive feeling was only natural.

Still, that was all it was: a reflex. The tension drained out as quickly as it had built up, and Iskander leaned forward, resting his elbows on the table and steepling his fingers together under his chin. "Wow, we had the same idea, I guess…" He mumbled, clearly trying to figure out how to approach this. "Some people say that if you get a ticket, you shouldn't talk about the trip to anyone, but I can't live that way. I would never betray a Clansman, and I know you wouldn't either."

"I never imagined you would for a moment." Gabriel assured Iskander, with a calm smile. Iskander was a good friend, after all, and an honorable individual anyway. A tad prone to getting his Flying Swords destroyed, in Gabriel's experience – but hopefully time had allowed him to transcend that one bad habit.

A thought crossed his mind. The two of them closely knit, already each planning on visiting the Secret Realm. "Should we…" He paused, trying to examine it through a semi-inebriated consciousness. It was an unorthodox thought. At least his family hadn't heard of it before. But given the essence of the Optimatoi, standing together, surely some people had done this before?

"We might enter together."

"Hmm…" Iskander picked up a skewer and bit off the last remaining piece of meat on it, chewing slowly as he pondered that proposal. "That'd blunt a lot of the risk. You never know what skills will be tested in a place like that, and we'd cover each other's weak spots pretty well. Eh, why not!?"

Iskander wiped his hand clean on his napkin and held it out to Gabriel across the table. "Let's make a promise then. Whatever each man earns, he keeps. We won't covet each other's winnings, we'll protect each other from whatever dangers we find, and we'll stick together as long as we're in the realm!"

Gabriel took the offered hand and clasped it firmly. "I, Gabriel Pompeius, swear this, on the honor of my family and as a member of the Imperial Optimatoi. May the Imperator's justice fall upon me, should I break faith." It was admittedly an antiquated oath, but one he felt fully appropriate for the seriousness of the pledge between them.

***​

Five years was both a lot of time and not that much. Not much, in the sense that no amount of preparation could make one prepared for every single potential problem, and so all they could do was prepare for broad swathes of problems. A lot, in the sense that neither of them could simply stop taking missions to focus solely on training for such a long scratch of time.

Rather than going into some kind of seclusion, both men halved their usual load of missions, accepting the lessening of their cultivation progress in that period of time, and devoted most of their much-expanded freedom to preparation. This took many forms: training together, training individually, doing exhaustive research on the Yuan Secret Realm itself and its history, and consulting on possible strategies. Taking into account both individual training and time on missions, the two friends only really spent about one out of every nine days actually training together on average.

It was, in essence, a 'full overhaul' - not just learning new techniques, but refining their core skill sets from the ground up.

Iskander, who all too often found himself forced to supplement his sword skills with guerilla warfare against foes whose sword fighting capability exceeded his own, started over from the absolute basics, re-training himself one move at a time to try and work out whatever kinks he could find. This was something he'd been putting off doing for a while, simply due to how time-consuming such a process would be, and out of a fear that he would temporarily become weaker while in the process of starting over. Whenever he had the free time, he would drill again and again, with ever-stricter margins for success and error. He slashed at falling leaves, at birds flying by, at raindrops, even at lightning bolts (a bad idea, never to be repeated). His qi, which had for so long already moved with startling alacrity, grew even swifter, able to concentrate itself into a tightly-bound point of energy in the blink of an eye.

Would he keep cheating whenever he found a more skilled opponent? Absolutely; he was probably physically and spiritually incapable of ridding himself of such ruthless pragmatism. But hopefully it would come to that a little bit less often moving forward.

Gabriel had to step back and reconsider himself. His fighting style was a melange of mystical techniques plastered on a halfhearted mix of the sword, and body cultivation. Each did serve a purpose, and yet, it was not fully cohesive either. He needed a ranged damage dealing technique, yet the elements weren't appropriate. After meditating on this while using the Ten-Channel Distillation Art, he came up with the concept of a 'pure qi' technique, a bolt without special features or weaknesses. Its versatility would make it an offensive counterpart to the Legionnaire Ward's protections.

Gabriel thus set to work bringing his vision into existence, while incorporating it with brute repetition of his swordsmanship, his body cultivation, and other techniques. It lacked Iskander's focus on optimization, rather, trying to unify the disparate more evenly together.

Of course, there was much more to this preparation than merely honing their individual skills; they also needed to be ready to live in a place where their safety would never, ever be guaranteed. There were a few ways to do this, none of them all that pleasant. Hikes through the Turtlebone Mountain foothills were one way in which the pair practiced survivalism, bringing with them no supplies beyond one waterskin, one sword and one set of rugged clothes each and wandering through the spirit beast-filled wilderness for over a month at a time. The two also sparred with one another under strange conditions, such as in cramped, dark caves, atop narrow pillars, or a raft floating down the river. Once in a while, one would even ambush the other while he slept, to hone their ability to respond swiftly when caught off-guard.

During this time, Iskander taught Gabriel some of the sneaky tactics he had developed; ways to plant traps in the middle of a battle without being noticed, how to pretend to be more or less injured than one really was, and how to manipulate an enemy into thinking you're planning something entirely different than you really are. Gabriel in turn walked Iskander through how to minimize qi expenditure, strengthen his spiritual sense, and generally improve his comprehension.

It was going well. There was really nothing to complain about, except for a certain sense that it was, perhaps, going too well. Iskander seemed to be an endless font of ideas for how to train, to the point that it stretched belief how he could come up with such a perfect lesson plan. Every few months, Iskander would present a whole host of suggestions and ideas, and when pressed, he would dither rather than give a straight answer. The most Gabriel could get out of his comrade was that he 'got some tips from a Senior.'

Gabriel held his tongue, as it would just be rude to pry too much, but the 'tips' seemed to come at oddly consistent intervals. It wouldn't be too unusual for Iskander to have simply found an enthusiastic tutor, but that would only raise more questions. First, why was the swordsman so reticent to give any details? Second, how was he paying for it? A teacher capable of drafting such well put together lesson plans, ones which addressed both of their needs perfectly, wasn't someone who could be hired for cheap.

Iskander's frugality had loosened up a bit in recent years, sure; at least to the point that he was willing to stop dressing like an Aspirant. But still, he had no financial backers, nor any Cultivator relatives. All of Iskander's Contribution Points came from his own missions, either completed on his own or with the Silverine Bracers. His new contract was a rather loose one, to be sure, but no way was a mere Decanus being paid a guaranteed income.

To put it simply: there was no way Iskander could afford a teacher good enough to offer such instruction. It was a wrinkle which ate away at Gabriel, a thread poking out of the tapestry of their alliance that threatened to unravel the entire thing if it was pulled. Was it better to leave such a thing alone, or would he be better off investigating?

Gabriel stared across a stretch of desert reaching out beneath a cliff as he considered the matter. Strictly speaking, none of these anomalies contradicted the oath they'd swore. That said, the lingering hints that Iskander would have an ulterior agenda certainly threatened the spirit of them.

A loud hoot drew his attention as an owl soared down. It dipped near him before soaring off into the sky. Gabriel regarded it and nodded. That omen was clear enough. A symbol of wisdom and insight presented itself, which was an unsubtle directive to seek the truth. He turned and walked away, certain, if concerned about the outcome.

***

Pompeius Family Estate, Year 311

Gabriel ushered Iskander into the room before closing the door behind them. "So, what do you think?" Gabriel had told Iskander that if they were entrusting their lives to each other, that his friend should meet the Pompeius family. Iskander unsurprisingly accepted, and found himself being taken on a tour of the estate.

Old Nestor had been effusive towards the guest. Lucius and Julia were overjoyed to meet their son's close friend. The cousins were polite. Uncle Marcus and Cicero gauged Iskander and seemed to not find him wanting. His grandfather had examined Iskander thoughtfully, making no comment on his stance.

Iskander, who was looking around in mild shock, took a moment to realize he'd been asked a question. He looked off to the side at a large painting depicting an old battle in the mountains, each brushstroke a masterwork which infused the piece with a feeling of bitter struggle and hard-won triumph. Perhaps he was trying to gauge what the cost was. "Probably… probably the fanciest building I've been in, aside from some public ones. This is amazing!"

"And yet, we are but a minor family for all our age." Gabriel commented, before turning his attention to something else on the other side and going over to it. "Though there is something special about this room, Iskander. Care to guess what it is?"

Iskander looked at Gabriel askew at that, screwing up his face into a bunched-up look of consternation as he cast his gaze about. He much preferred to be the one catching others off-guard than to be the one caught off-guard himself, after all. Gabriel could even feel Iskander's spiritual sense moving around this way and that, carelessly passing through him in what would generally be considered a minor faux pas. Iskander didn't seem to notice, as intent as he was on solving this puzzle.

He first tried the walls, gently running his fingertips along them, only to find ordinary wood and paint. Next, he checked the furniture, sitting on each chair, couch and loveseat one at a time. Then he rummaged through the cabinets, fingers shaking as he handled millenia-old pottery with extremely delicate care, looking for whatever might be off. "Couldn't be a 'fake room', or something, right? What would that even look like? If it's got four walls, a ceiling and a floor then it's a real room…" He muttered quietly. "Armored, maybe? Hidden iron walls in between the normal walls, so you could use it as a shelter? I don't think I'd be able to tell that unless you told me."

"It's actually quite simple." Gabriel answered. "It's the room we use for official negotiations, as any family in the Clan does. And as is common practice to facilitate discussions, it includes an array that forces those inside this room to speak truthfully." The amusement disappeared from his face. "It's quite active now, Iskander. Take a seat." Gabriel gestured as he sat down in one of the chairs. "We need to talk."

Iskander's eyes went wide, first in confusion, then in shock. "W-what? Come on man, you know this ain't necessary!" He protested, laughing nervously. "What have I ever lied to you about, huh?" He forced himself to smile, though from his body language he was clearly shaken.

Gabriel's stony expression showed what he thought of that. "'Tips from a Senior?' Spare me. The sheer quantity and quality of the 'recommendations' you always bring would require an elite tutor, but I know you lack the wealth and connections to afford any of those. Add to that your constant evasions on the subject. I can draw several possible implications from this, none of which are in favor of you being honest or boding well for our oath."

A pause, intentionally drawn out before Gabriel pressed the point. "Well?"

"That's, uh…" Iskander's lips snapped shut, not opening no matter how much he strained, until he stopped attempting to speak. His breathing quickened, sweat pouring down his face. "I-it's… I can't…" He looked around, as if someone would appear out of thin air and help him.

Quickly, Iskander went from nervous to the verge of full-blown panic. "This… it's not something I can-" His lips snapped shut again, and he stumbled backwards, hyperventilating. "It's dangerous to talk about! Dangerous to even know about! But…" He finally stood still for a moment, taking a deep, shaky breath. "Is anyone else listening? Is this being recorded or eavesdropped on or something? I can't break our promise, but… it has to be only you who hears this."

Iskander finally took a seat, looking utterly defeated. "Even that's too much, but if I have to tell you I will. You'll understand why I'm being like this when you know."

Gabriel raised an eyebrow. "Of course the array doesn't record anything, that would defeat the whole– no. It's just us." Beneath the impassive exterior, he began to fear his worries were validated. What had Iskander gotten himself into?

Iskander looked into Gabriel's eyes with what was probably the most serious expression he'd ever shown him. "My, uh… the place where all of these lessons come from. It's something an Elder would give up a limb for. Permanently. You probably think I have some secret tutor I'm meeting all the time, to get lessons like that, but the truth is I can only talk to them once a month."

He swallowed heavily before continuing. "I'll just tell you. My teacher is, uh… one second." Iskander began mumbling incomprehensibly and counting on his fingers, growing ever more frustrated as he went. "Take the five, line it up with the two. Five-six-seven. Okay, seven. Then put the eight-zero-zero back in. Then… uh…" He looked up at Gabriel like he was drowning. "What's 7800 divided by 1560? Like… three and a half?"

Gabriel stared at him blankly, once the context of the numbers became apparent, before reaching out with his spiritual sense to check the array. Somehow, it was still functioning in full working order. "Iskander. Are you telling me you have a teacher that is five times older than the Grand Elder?"

The disbelief in Gabriel's voice was total. 7,800 years was… beyond the scope of a Nascent Soul's lifespan. Nay, that was the pedigree of a Spirit Seeking cultivator. No seriously, WHAT HAD ISKANDER GOTTEN HIMSELF INTO?!

"Uh… yes." Iskander said, shrugging. "Well, he spent most of that time as a sword, but he was a Nascent Soul before that. Now please, let's stop talking about this where there are other people within a hundred miles. Since you know now, I'll introduce you to him soon."

***​

They didn't meet again for another two weeks, and when they did, it was under rather tense circumstances. Iskander and Gabriel rode on horseback for two entire days, out into a particularly remote stretch of wasteland. Nothing could be seen in any direction, save for a towering rocky mesa, like someone had dropped a big block of stone into the middle of the dunes.

"I'll introduce you to him up there." Iskander had said, before immediately leading his friend up on a rather difficult climb. "It's… hard for him to exist, since he's so worn down. He's linked himself to me, so he can talk to me when he's awake, but doing anything else ain't easy."

The stone bit into Gabriel's hands as he began the ascent, well, nibbled, against a cultivator of his level. There were too many questions he wanted to ask, so he decided to start at the beginning. "How did you first meet… him?"

"He was in a pile of junk, if you can believe it." Iskander chuckled, straining to reach a handhold far above him. "I saw this old… thing, so rusted I could hardly tell what it was. But for some reason it felt like someone was asking for help." Finally grabbing hold of what he was reaching for, he quickly pulled himself higher. He wedged his foot into a crack and took hold of a small, sturdy-looking outcropping, then reached down to offer his other hand to Gabriel.

Gabriel accepted it, and Iskander helped leverage him out further. "Or perhaps, compelling you?" He cautioned warily. Cultivators of that age can affect the minds of lessers like you and me so easily." He found another handhold, levering himself up further.

"Eh, maybe. Wouldn't put it past that geezer; he does push me hard." Iskander replied casually, hoisting himself to the side to avoid a patch of stone that looked like it might crumble easily. "If he did, I forgive him. I never would have kept up with someone as amazing as you without his help."

"You overestimate me." Gabriel protested, shaking his head. "And underestimate yourself. You're a Good Seed on your own merits. Even the best teacher can't make a jade talisman out of dull stone."

Iskander smiled at that, though it wasn't clear if he really believed it. Regardless, they reached the top without too much fuss.

And what a view it was when they got there! There were no clouds in sight, just an endless expanse of blue skies over yellow sand, the ground before them bathed in the shadow of the mess cast by the evening sun behind them. It was the sort of place where miracles happened.

Iskander took a deep breath and then smiled. "Mm, this'll do. Almost no ambient qi, no distractions, nothing. It'll be a bit easier for him now. That and, I'm now 100% sure we haven't been followed."

Reaching into the pouch at his waist, Iskander pulled out something not too different from what he had described: a lump of rust-covered metal. Looking closer, Gabriel could see that it was some kind of cross shape, and a circular dent was on one end, where once perhaps a gemstone might have been embedded. It was also the perfect shape for Iskander's hand - in that case, it was probably a sword's hilt.

"This." Iskander began, holding the object up so Gabriel could see it better. "Is the Wailing Conqueror. Or, it was - just a hilt now. It used to look even worse than this, but I cleaned it up as best I could. Can't exactly hand it over to a professional."

With that, he held the hilt out with his palm upwards, offering it to Gabriel. "Take it. You'll have to hold it if you wanna talk to him."

Gabriel nodded, before taking a breath. Then, resolutely, he reached out, and clasped the hilt of the sword, withdrawing his hand from Iskander's.

At first, it didn't feel like much of anything at all. The hilt's surface was as rough as it looked, scraping discordantly against the callouses on Gabriel's hand. There was no sensation beyond that, and his spiritual sense didn't detect anything either. Wait, no, there was a sort of spark there, deep inside, a fleeting signal that was nearly imperceptible. One part flame to ninety-nine parts ash.

"Senior! Come on, wake up already, you've already overslept!" Gabriel chided, reaching out and poking at the hilt. "We gotta talk about something, old man."

The signal grew in scope, as if emerging from some shell which had been blocking his awareness. It could hardly be called strong, though; there was almost no force at all behind that disconnected consciousness. What sat in Gabriel's hand really were the last dregs of an old soul.

Iskander tilted his head, visibly reacting to something, though whatever it was, Gabriel couldn't hear it. "Look, you're gonna be mad at me, but let's agree to put the scolding off for a bit, alright? I kinda… kinda got found out." He said sheepishly. "B-but it was just by one person!" He cut in quickly, before he could be interrupted.

Immediately, the swordsman winced under the assault of some unheard verbal rebuke. "Look, look, he hasn't told anybody, and he says he's not gonna!" He shouted. "But I gotta prove to him that you're real, okay? Please talk to him; he's holding the hilt right now, so you should be able to make him hear you."

After another moment of silence, something finally reached Gabriel's ears, or more accurately his brain. The signal was precise, with absolutely no waste of energy; a weak pulse that didn't travel farther than perhaps five feet. "You there, can you hear me?" It said, gravelly and stern. "Seems like you've got us by the balls. I was hoping my student could keep a secret for at least a single century, but he couldn't even manage that." His tone was openly annoyed, but beneath that was clear apprehension; this was someone who had no choice but to rely on others, and wasn't happy about it.

Gabriel acted quickly to defuse the situation, rather than tempt the potential wrath of an old monster, no matter how diminished his current form might be. After all, limited power for a Nascent or Spirit Severing quasi-soul was still leagues above two mere Qi Condensation disciples. "Elder, Iskander was upholding an oath, and I pushed him to this. This junior is Gabriel Pompeius, and I am utterly grateful for you teaching my friend, despite his impudent attitude."

"Oh are you?" the voice chuckled nervously. "You sound sincere, at least, but the sincerity of a child is a fragile thing. I won't stake my safety on the goodness of your heart. If you really are the only other person who knows about me, then let me at least earn that altruism."

That was… surprising, an old monster feeling they needed to earn something. Gabriel quickly decided though that if it was what the Elder wanted, then that would be what the Elder got. "As you wish, Elder."

"Mm, yes, I've come to a decision." The old spirit mused quietly, before snapping. "Iskander!"

"Y-yes, Senior?" Iskander replied, so fast it seemed more like an autonomic reflex than anything.

"You were dumb enough to get us caught, and this boy was smart enough to catch us. As a punishment to you and a reward to him, I'll be focusing my instructions on Gabriel for the next year." The spirit said, in a tone that was casual but would brook no argument. "We've still got more than a year before the Yuan Realm, right?"

"Yes, Elder." Gabriel confirmed, a slight smile growing at the edge of his mouth. "Approximately three and a half at this point."

"Perfect! Then in that case, I am Lai Bohai, head of the Unconquered Tiger Sect, champion of Meteor Valley and founder of the Crag Spider Revolution, not that that name or those titles mean anything in these parts." His tone changed remarkably quickly, becoming diplomatic, bordering on cheerful. Perhaps Lai Bohai had developed such a quirk as a result of so rarely being awake. Being able to move on from inconveniences and foul moods quickly would ensure none of those precious hours were wasted. "Since you know about me, and you'll be looking after my student. I've decided to give you some lessons; today will be your first."

***​

'Lessons' was certainly one way of putting it. Due to how limited his ability to be aware of his surroundings and communicate with others was, Lai Bohai's lectures were incredibly dense and long, sometimes exceeding six hours. It was sort of like teaching through brute force. See, the old monster wasn't an especially talented educator; he just had accumulated so much knowledge in his life that by cramming a huge mass of the relevant information into a student's head, he could prompt great progress from them.

The training didn't change that much, ultimately; each month, they began a new plan of specialized exercises to mend whatever flaw the two had noticed in their abilities in the previous month. The main change was that now, Gabriel had enough context to understand how the strange advice Iskander would bring to him every month always worked so well.

In the end, it was the fifth meeting with Lai Bohai that made the biggest difference.

Gabriel sat in deep meditation in a small oasis, surrounded by exotic trees with leaves of all possible colors. It was the sort of place where even the most materially fixated of people would feel deeply soothed, both physically and spiritually. The hilt of the Wailing Conqueror rested in one open palm, balanced loosely across his knee as he sat in the lotus position.

"Hmph, I get it now. It's a positive-negative issue, that's the wall." Lai Bohai suddenly spoke up. The statement was so lacking in context that you might think he was mumbling to himself, if not for the clarity and certainty with which he spoke.

Gabriel had been relieved to learn that Lai Bohai turned out to be a mildly irascible but otherwise reasonable ancient cultivator. After a meeting or two, Iskander noticed Gabriel looking much less worried. The Pompeius scion now figured his friend had been extraordinarily lucky and made a point of saying that to him, but that was all. "What do you mean, Elder Lai?"

"That bolt. A form of pure destruction, applicable in all situations, able to both injure the opponent and negate techniques because of its purity. Ambitious, but…" The ghost trailed off, considering his words. "I've felt you practice it, and it's not efficient enough. About three-tenths of the qi you put in is wasted. Your comprehension seems good enough to handle it, so I've been wondering why. I think I've got it."

"I see," Gabriel nodded thoughtfully. He hadn't devised a name for it just yet, feeling that something was missing, given the vaguely unsatisfied noise Lai Bohai made when Gabriel first demonstrated the technique. "The positive-negative issue. Is it because I'm trying to achieve something contradictory?"

Lai Bohai laughed joyfully at Gabriel's answer. His laugh always sounded the tiniest bit violent despite the teacher's best intentions - like a blade being sharpened. "Hah! Smart boy, very smart. Iskander's sharp too, but not in the same way. Don't you tell him I said that though." He calmed down, clearing his nonexistent throat. "That's right, your actions and intentions are at odds. You're thinking 'I'll use pure qi to destroy', but that ain't exactly what you're doing, even if you think it is."

After pausing for another moment, no doubt deciding how to put this such that a Qi Condenser would understand, Lai Bohai continued. "Qi is the prime creative force; it can only create. To destroy, it must create a phenomenon which itself causes destruction… except that's not true either. There's no rule saying qi can't create an effect with no cause. Positive and negative. You're trying to subtract a positive number when you should be adding a negative number."

Gabriel frowned as he listened to Lai Bohai's explanation. The information was very interesting, and he could understand the metaphor. Skipping that intervening step would provide the necessary efficiency, but making that into something practical completely escaped him. "Then, how would I accomplish that, Elder Lai? Your praise aside, I'm not smart enough to know how to break causality."

"To tell you the truth, neither am I." Lai Bohai snickered. "But techniques exist to bridge the gap between comprehension and action. You create restrictions, requirements, rituals, little bits and pieces of self-hypnosis that bring the idea into focus." He explained. For all he tried to be his usual grumpy self, it was clear as day how much he liked confusing his Juniors.

"It could just be a matter of perspective. If you reframed it as 'a bolt which instantly induces rapid entropy' or 'a bolt which causes mutual annihilation', you'd lose a small fraction of the technique's purity, but make it easier to comprehend. On the other hand, if you like it just the way it is, you could make a restriction. If you've gotta do something extra for the technique to work, then you'll start to think in terms of 'I do X, I can perform a technique which creates the phenomenon of destruction', it'll come to you more easily."

The old ghost paused his monologue after a moment, checking to see if he'd been understood. "Or you can sit in a dark room for a decade or two until you can wrap your head around the concept and cast the technique as-is with no restrictions. That's always an option."

"True, and there's no great rush." Gabriel commented casually. "A thirty-percent waste is something to fix, but it's not an imminent matter of life and death. I can take time to decide on the best course of action." He bowed his head respectfully, even if there was no physical body to direct it to. "Thank you, Elder Lai. It's easy to see how swiftly Iskander progressed, under your tutelage."

"Hmph, it's hardly just my work." Lai Bohai scoffed. "Did the boy ever tell you how he gained that regenerative technique? Quite a marvel, isn't it?"

From his tone, Gabriel could tell that the question was rhetorical. It wasn't like the effectiveness of such a thing even needed questioning though. Iskander had obtained a regenerative ability that worked automatically and restored the body without compromising the ability to cultivate.

The ironic flaw of healing techniques, beyond how expensive and difficult they were to use, was that a badly injured Cultivator likely wouldn't be capable of mending themself, because of that injury which required mending. An autonomous healing technique, which would activate on its own without needing to be consciously cast, solved this issue. And thus, to Cultivators, that sort of ability was extremely precious, spoken of with near-mythic awe and desire. The faster healing and ability to survive more severe wounds provided by the Blood of Bronze was a very tame case, but this aspect was often considered much more valuable than the enhanced strength and toughness.

Iskander's regeneration may not have been especially fast yet, but the technique would in time grow into something amazingly useful.

"Such a fundamental alteration to the body is best done as early as possible. After all, a Cultivator's body and spirit both get more rigid as they develop. The farther you walk, the narrower your path becomes. It was pretty damn difficult to internalize too."

Gabriel understood well enough, given they'd just discussed a similar issue.

"So, how do you make automatic restoration a part of yourself, something your body does without conscious thought? Something every piece of the body knows how to do, without even a nerve signal?" Lai Bohai asked, his voice taking on a tone of grim satisfaction. "You take a Cultivator in the Fourth Heavenstage - Third doesn't have enough qi, ya see - and make him heal himself continuously. And the only way to make him do that is with continuous damage."

Gabriel winced hard. "Ah." He knew all too well how Iskander practiced like a demon was right behind him, ready to eat him for slacking off. Neither did he feel inclined to ask about the specifics – his imagination was capable of painting a worrying enough portrait.

Lai Bohai continued, too wrapped up in his story to respond to Gabriel. "I really don't have any power at all, you know. I'm just a soul with no qi of my own besides what I drain from Iskander to keep myself around. When I don't have someone to help me like that, I have to burn myself away, which is how I got so diminished. Fuck…" The bitterness in his voice was impossible to miss. While the former swordmaster was relatively (emphasis on relative) humble, to fall from such heights of power into complete helplessness would anger and embarrass anyone.

"My point is, I can't force that boy to do a damn thing. Day after day, he willingly locked himself in a room full of burning coals and poured water on them to make steam. The temperature must have been around two twenty, two thirty, something like that. Enough to boil the skin quickly but burn the flesh and the eyes slowly. He went down into that hell for eight hours every day, for months, and you know why? Because I told him Wood techniques came easily to him, just like they did to my old friend, and he asked me to teach him the greatest Wood technique I knew of."

And it turned out Gabriel's prediction had been a few shades short of what his friend actually did. "Of course he did," Gabriel lamented, torn between respectful and alarm. "Iskander can be cunning, very cunning, but then there are times like these that he resembles nothing more than a bull-headed blockhead." Like night and day, the trapmaster and the unsubtle fellow who had screamed Lai Bohai's tutelage to Gabriel in all but name, yet Iskander pivoted between the two like clockwork.

"I'll tell you, I haven't had many disciples that devoted; I could count 'em on two hands, if I had any hands!" Lai Bohai laughed. "He's got an inferiority complex, because he's trying to become a Nascent Soul to resurrect me but 'isn't a genius'." The last part was said with amused mockery. "I suppose he's right about that. His instincts, his natural abilities, his comprehension… you couldn't classify Iskander as a genius in any of that. But honestly, geniuses are overrated. When things come too easily, you don't build up that grit, that will to live with all the desperation of a cornered animal. Iskander has that, and it's as precious as diamond."

Things were silent for a few hours after that, as Gabriel returned to his meditation. After a while, however, Lai Bohai spoke up one last time. His voice was beginning to fade away, getting harder and harder to make out. It seemed his day of wakefulness had come to an end.

"The reason Iskander works so hard… you wanna know it? It's because… he made a promise. A promise to save me." The old ghost laughed somberly. "Him, a Junior Aspirant who didn't know nothin' about nothin', promised that to me… a man who fought ten thousand battles. That's… how seriously he takes promises, all… because his mother told him to never break one. Thick-headed little shit, ain't he?" Lai Bohai sighed, his voice filled with fondness.

"Gabriel, listen closely…" Lai Bohai declared, his voice getting difficult to hear. If it weren't so deserted and quiet in this place, Gabriel wouldn't have been able to hear him at all. "Iskander will give up his life to protect yours… to keep the promise he made to you… so look out for him, would you?"

"He's my friend, of course I will, Elder Lai." Gabriel would have been indignant at the implied suggestion if he didn't recognize the depth of feeling in Lai Bohai. "Besides, I swore a promise too. I take those seriously, if not to the lengths he does."

***

Outside the Man-As-Mountain Array, Year 315

The administration of the Man-As-Mountain Array had changed drastically in the past decades, along with the Yuan Clan's political status. Hetaireiarches Sarantapechos had forced the Yuan to relinquish the lion's share of access to the Secret Realm. Now, only the Golden Devils and their vassals could feasibly make use of it. The former purchased tickets in advance at Contribution Boards, or to be more precise, vouchers that would be exchanged for tickets on site.

Only half the slots per opening were available this way though. The other half were sold directly in Yuan territory, as much to specifically not offend the Yuan Clan by denying them access to the Realm in their own lands, both to provide fair opportunity for Golden Devil vassals in general. In practice however, many Yuanmen weren't so interested in the tickets – at least for the slots, anyway.

"THIS IS ARRANT BANDITRY!"

This new business model was one which scalpers had a much easier time taking advantage of. This time around, a large portion of the tickets had been snatched up the moment they went on sale, by Yuanmen who then resold them to applicants after the legitimate ones had already been sold at greatly marked up prices.

As Iskander and Gabriel, fitted in newly-purchased gear for the struggles ahead, approached the Secret Realm's entrance, they spied one such individual. She certainly wasn't dressed for combat, as this woman had no intention of using the ticket she had purchased in the first place.

"I'm afraid you're incorrect, sir. Banditry is a crime, whereas I have not broken the law at all." She explained, smirking. "If you want to enter the Secret Realm, you can either purchase one of my tickets or find someone else who's still selling them. Those are your options."

The man with whom she was arguing, a warrior dressed in the traditional Hong Xuan style, wasn't happy with this arrangement in the slightest. "Trickery like this can't possibly be allowed. Dishonest merchants who won't even risk their lives in the Secret Realm can buy tickets in bulk? Preposterous!" He shouted, looming over the Yuan woman.

"I didn't write the rules, sir, I'm just making my way in the world and taking the opportunities I'm given." She tittered, not intimidated in the slightest by the man's aggressive posture. "Now, do you want to purchase a ticket or not. If you don't have enough spirit stones on hand, I'm happy to accept credit…"

Iskander looked away from the sight of the man being fleeced, suddenly seeming to be very interested in the lush greenery lining the road on either side. "I can't watch this, makes me feel kinda sick…" He muttered, fiddling with his belt to occupy his hands.

He still wore the plate of a Decanus, but it had been deliberately weathered and tarnished so that it wouldn't shine, and he wore a brown mantle atop it to further camouflage himself. He carried two swords at one hip and one at the other, as well as two more at his back as backup. His belt was laden with compression pouches containing all sorts of tools and trinkets; a little 'just in case' here, some 'you never know when you'll need it' there. He'd cut his hair short, into a squared style that made him look more severe than usual, since there might not be time to groom themselves in the realm.

For his discomfort, he received a brisk tsking from Gabriel. "My dear naive friend, truly you have never been beyond the Desert. We are the exception that proves the rule, imposing such restrictions on matters of commerce from the Dawn Fortress. Even in the lands of the Righteous Path, self-interest always comes first. There's only one leash on business practices: do you think you can handle the consequences?"

The other man wasn't wearing armor, swathed instead in a dark gray cloak. As ever, Gabriel kept the one gladius sword in comparison to Iskander's several blades. While currently hidden beneath the cloak, he too had a pair of pouches. 'A handful of things we could spare from the Pompeius vaults,' was all he said on the matter. His hair was cut short as well, but no change in style, save for spread forehead bangs.

"That's really a shame." Iskander sighed, crossing his arms and shaking his head. "I mean, on the battlefield anything goes, but that's because your life is at risk. Shouldn't people treat each other better than that when they're safe?" He reached into one of his pouches and fished out his own ticket. This precious object ultimately wasn't that grandiose in design, being a thin gold rectangle with arrays carved on the back and 'Yuan Secret Realm Ticket - 214,893rd Activation' written on the front in a simple, blocky style of script.

"You got yours?" Iskander asked, looking at his ticket as if he could find some sort of revelation within.

"Of course." Gabriel assured him, slipping his fingers around his ticket and fishing it out.

"Then I guess we just wait. Got a few hours to go, and we can't be inside while it's starting up." Iskander remarked, looking down the road, where a couple of miles away a waist-high barrier of dark stone bricks marked the Yuan border. Or more specifically, the border of the Man-As-Mountain Array's barrier.

That was the curious thing about the array's activation – the whole country's population had to briefly leave when the array activated, as the massive influx of qi would briefly heat the whole country up to over two hundred degrees for a little over an hour. After that time elapsed, all of that qi would be expended to activate the 'blessing of plenty' which would persist for the year. Experts were hardy enough that most of them simply stuck around, but most Condensers simply waited outside, and mortals who couldn't make the journey had to spend the year hiding in underground shelters – not just against the brief spike of lethal heat, but against the dangerous spirit beasts whose population would explode.

Luckily, the pair of them had managed to pick out an area that wasn't too crowded. Perhaps twenty other Cultivators could be seen within the range of their enhanced vision, milling about in preparation for the realm's activation. When the time came to enter, their tickets would be checked by the Secret Realm Custodians – an elite corps of masked Experts gifted with treasures of teleportation which drew upon the Man-As-Mountain Array's qi to function. They numbered less than a thousand, but on their own, they handled the vetting and processing of every entrant, and entry into their ranks was considered one of the Yuan Clan's highest honors.

"Hey, we did enough, right?" Iskander asked idly. "Or, I guess, do ya think we did everything we could have? Did we miss any opportunities, or am I just being paranoid?"

Gabriel considered it. The promise. The years of preparation. Lai Bohai-enhanced training. "We had an opportunity anyone in the entire Virtuous Flipper could scarcely imagine." He commented in a low voice. "If that wasn't enough, then what would be?"

Iskander considered his friend's words, then nodded. "Mm, ready as we could be, then." He declared, smiling warmly. "Well, nothing more to do but go at it!"


RageQuit's A/N: Man, this took a while! Fortunately, it's done, and I have a break to recharge the mental engines. I loved No's suggestion of Iskander and Gabriel doing the Yuan Realm as a duo, on top of the plans I already had. Gabriel is going to make a significant leap forward, you see…

no. Had a lot of fun with this. Doing collabs has gotten harder after I was moved to the night shift, but I was determined to see this one through. It's always fun to tie two characters' fates together, and since Gabriel and Iskander's friendship had already been established and they were both entering the same Secret Realm on the same turn, we thought it would be fun to have them literally go in together. Lai Bohai interacting with characters other than Iskander was also something I was excited to get to - Gabriel understanding the caliber of person he's talking to serves to highlight how Iskander is actually quite rude. He's nice, but he has no sense of decorum with regards to rank. Highlighting this also makes Lai Bohai's frankly insane amount of permissiveness toward Iskander's rudeness funnier.
 
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