Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Demetrius Ceres - Adventures in Yuan Secret Realm
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Demeterius Ceres - The matter of ownership
The matter of ownership


Demetrius is someone who makes enemies easily, and it's almost always his fault. Doesn't help that he does a catch and release thing to farm valuables.

Omake Bonus - Cultivation Years
I only need to produce the equivalent of 4000 words for Demetrius to ascend to Core at the start of the next turn.
 
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Demetrius Ceres - Thunderbolt and lightning very, very frightened of me
Thunderbolt and lightning very, very frightened of me




If this isn't enough to start Demetrius as Core from the beginning of this turn, I don't know what it would take.


About Demetrius's Dao

He was not supposed to walk the Path of Extinction. He was leaning heavily towards subjugating nature and all its vile inhabitants. That was my plan, but then Jin Muyi aka the sentient plant monster almost killed everything. Demetrius connected the dots about what had happened since he was keeping tabs on Jin, and being on the receiving end of the clan's gag order confirmed his suspicions.

From that moment on he decided that all plants and beasts are inherently evil and should be wiped out.

Fun Fact: On a scale from 1 to 10 determining his hate for something, a common tree found in someone's garden would be a 5, and the Alter Lord would be a solid 4.
 
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Diogenes Aparámillos - Good Seed Background
Diogenes Aparámillos

The Aparámillos family had never been really prominent among the Golden Devil Clan, as a family at least. Their founder had been a wandering Cultivator from the Plains, who several hundred years ago had arrived and joined the Golden Devils Clan for a time. Though his strength was great, he was uninterested in permanently signing on to the Golden Devils, and in time left the Clan after his wife passed away. His descendents, despite inheriting some of their Ancestor's special bloodline that allows them to transform into a stronger and metallic state, ended up rotting away in relative obscurity. The Clan leadership, somewhat annoyed wit how the so-called 'Undefeated In The East' had left so casually, extending only the most cursory of support as the family became an average family in the Clan.

This is the family Diogenes was born into. His family name, a bad joke. His father and mother, seemingly content with being average Qi Condensation level Cultivators. This was the level the Aparámillos family had fallen to, and despite his parents and other family's acceptance of that, it rankled Diogenes. Their Ancestor had been a man undefeated, a Cultivator of amazing skill and power! Why had his blood faded away so easily? So Diogenes began his training, and found himself growing distant from his family as the Blood of Bronze failed to appear within him. But the time came, and the family began to travel to the main citadel for the inductions. Diogenes joined the Munifex with minimal incident, and began to Cultivate, finding himself leaning toward becoming a Sword Cultivator.

Then, it happened on his first real mission. A clash with bandits began to go badly, his companions being overwhelmed, and a blade struck Diogenes through the arm, aimed at his heart. It was over. He was going to die. For a moment, there was peace as the blade began to pierce his chest... and then Diogenes realized what that meant.

He was accepting it. He was accepting his mediocrity - the fact he'd amount to as little as the rest of his family, die here like just another rat in the sand. And from his heart, disgust boiled through him, and anger at the fact that this was it, this was all he would ever achieved. And at that incredible surge of rejection that surged from his heart, something awoke within him...

And he changed.

Silver boiled out of his body, flowing across his skin and melting into it before forming itself into something like living armor. The bloodline inherited from that wandering Ancestor, having gone dormant within his own blood, melded with the Blood of Bronze and awoke into a humanoid but monstrous transformation. With a casual twist of his arm, he snapped the blade within it, and with the return strike he crushed the bandit's ribcage.

For the first time in his life, Diogenes tasted Power.

High Concept: An average mook Cultivator descended from a massively powerful wandering Cultivator who spent a century or two with the Golden Devils Clan. Despite starting out a mook, he managed to awaken the Special Unique Mix of the Cultivator's special gimmick(which was that he turned into this) and the Blood of Bronze. He's super salty at the fact his family has fallen to mediocrity and has, more damningly, accepted it, and currently wishes to make the name actually mean something for the first time in centuries. Is now Motivated(TM). Basically a Rival type who'd repeatedly clash with the protagonist.

Starting Perk: Devil Silver Body(Name Pending). In essence, a full change of the flesh, coating it in an odd silvery metal that melds back into it to change him into a humanoid monster looking sort of like this:

(link to sauce)

It'd basically be a Super Mode that grants three things - self-evolution(allowing the form to adapt and grow in power, size and other traits via training and other things)), self-regeneration(self-healing - p obvs), and self-replication(it can form living things and enhance living things with the metal produced by the transformation). Starting out, beyond whatever power boost it'd grant, all Diogenes would actually have access too is the self-regeneration, and he'd be unaware of the other two traits of his Bloodline.

Probably could be used to make some really bitchin' pills by other enemy Cultivators if captured, though. Furthermore, most of the traits of his Ancestor's Special Thing are long forgotten by the family, leaving him little idea of figuring out how his transformation works.

Current Objective: Reach the 13th Heavenstage, and master his Bloodline transformation.

Current Status: 9th Heavenstage. One of the Indomitable 13, managed to survive.

@occipitallobe Made a Good Seed that's Basically Vergil Descended From Master Asia And Super Salty About It
 
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Diogenes Aparámillos 1 - One Sky
> editing before posting

what dark sorcery is this
the sorcery of "It's 3 in the morning and a friend said it's all good, so Imma post it now"

Diogenes Aparámillos
In
One Sky

Deep in the heart of the territory of the Golden Devils lies a great forest. In ages past, it may have been green once, but now it's trees lie dry and as stone, transformed by the sand of the desert. Many were but pillars of rock, at this point, but the farther in you came the more…. Lifelike they would seem. Branches would be more whole, leaves would begin to appear, as if they were growing from the stone branches. In nearby villages, it was even whispered that at the heart of the forest lie trees with bark of Gold and Silver, leaves of Jade, and fruit formed from single, pure gemstones! Many a mortal fortune seeker would wander in, seeking that very thing, only to never return.

Those stories don't really matter, to me. All I care about, right now, is peace and quiet, and this forest is isolated enough that no-one's going to come and disturb me. As I leapt from tree to tree, speeding through the forest, my mind drifted inward, back to that single question that had begun to percolate within me from the first moment my body had begun to itch when I drew Qi into it.

Why did Cultivation hurt?

I'd asked around, early on, but had gotten little to no satisfying answers. Usually, it was explained as purification - as the body painfully rejected the impurities that built up naturally within it. Some made references to Heaven's Will, that the pain was heaven attempting to dissuade mortals from setting foot on the path of immortality. And...they all made sense, but they didn't feel complete. For some reason, I felt these answers had a piece of the truth within, but there was something missing, something incomplete in these answers, and that more than anything else was frustrating.

And so, I traveled out here, to this out-of-the-way stone forest, with what stock of Spirit Stones I could scrounge together to allow for my Cultivation to advance, and searched for a decent place to set down. Finally, I found it - a place that looked like it had been carved, the ruined remains of stone trees lying haphazardly around like someone had gone logging and then forgotten to take the trees with them. Coming to a stop, I placed the bag I'd carried all the way out here, setting it on the ground as I took a seat, drawing forth one of the many low-quality Spirit Stones within and beginning to carefully draw out the Qi within.

One after another, I drew out the Qi within the stones, turning over the question that had defined my Cultivation even as I cycled the energy though my meridians. Day became night, became day, became night again, time blurring together as the question burned within my mind, and the Qi burned within my body. And yet… I came no closer to an answer. Hundreds of possible solutions entered my mind, and yet none of them fit. None of them felt like they were any closer to the truth then I already was. At some point in my cultivation, my Devil Silver Body had activated, metal boiling up from my bones to sheathe my skin, and yet my Cultivation did not advance. Pathetic… truly pathetic. Is this all I can do?

The answer came with the feeling of steel being drawn.

My eyes snapped open, but not to perceive the forest as it now was. Before me, two Cultivators faced down, one wielding a sword of Legion make, and the other wielding a weapon shaped like a simple house key. They clashed, power matching power, and yet to the senses of my Qi, there was only one there. The Cultivator of the Legion felt no different from the empty air, his Qi seeming to be nowhere and yet everywhere like his strikes. Was this… Sword Will? The Legion Cultivator... why was he there, yet not? Where was his own Qi?

...Wait.

To Cultivate, one draws the energy from Heaven and Earth into their own body, into the pool that was their 'Own Qi'.

My mother...for the longest time, she would break out in hives upon touching an onion. For some reason, her body viewed onions as hostile invaders, to be purged violently - no matter the cost to my mother. Even her Cultivation could only blunt this, not prevent it.

Could that be it? Could it truly be that simple?

A Cultivator draws on the 'Qi of Heaven' and the 'Qi of Earth', a foreign energy. The body recognizes it is foreign, just like one would recognize pollen as foreign when you inhale it, and seek to purge it. The Qi of Heaven and the Qi of Earth would, thus, wage war within one's own body, against one's 'Own Qi'. This was it… this was the answer I needed!

But… now the problem was fully seen, how to cure it? Well, that was simple, was it not? All I needed to do… was cut. I turned my will inwards, deep within me, seeking my 'Own Qi'. At the end of the day, there was really no difference between my 'Own Qi' and 'External Qi'. Deeper and deeper I went, until I found it - the lake of power that was 'Myself', separated by a barrier of storm from the greater ocean outside.

There was One Sea, One Sky.

In that instant, at that edge of understanding, the Devil Silver Body became but a blade, and I stared at the wall of storm that separated the Qi that was Mine and The Qi that was The World's.

One Destiny.

I faced the wall, from the mere lake that was my own Qi, and I cut.



I know not how long I spent in that place, but when I came aware, the palace I had been meditating in had been ravaged, like a storm had washed over the area, tearing great stone trees from the ground and scattering those fallen logs like toothpicks around me. I felt…

Great.

I picked up the last Spirit Stone, and drew its power into me. It would still take years from this point, but… I now had set my first foot upon the path I was to follow. Now to walk, until I may someday glimpse Mount Tai.


AN:
So yeah, this omake has been in the works for a while, and actively fought me until I figured out what Diogenes was actually about as a character. This is what happened way back in either Turn 3 or 4, when Diogenes got really lucky and went from 1rst Heavenstage to 9th.

Not sure where to put this request tbh, but I'd really like a Lifesaving Treasure please.
 
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Diomedes Cestus - Good Seed Background
@occipitallobe here is my try at a good seed-
Diomedes cestus - the son of a minor qi condensation loose cultivator and noble from one of the mortal kingdoms under the clan he has decided to join the legios once it was discovered he has some talent for cultivation.


Current Status 216 Years Old, A seventh pillar establishment Expert , Centurion of the 137 legion
Health-healthy
Lifespan-520
Cultivation aims:Emperor pillar

Special treasures:
Heaven and earth method-
increases efficiency of cultivating both body and qi- +9 impact
Bracelets Of Self-Mastery and Of Self-Sacrifice- A pair of bracelets capable of allowing conversation between soul, qi ,and flesh -+0 impact folded into The heaven and earth method

Starting bonus: Heaven and earth method- a cultivation method that cultivates both body and qi simultaneously for more power and defense
Cultivation-Year Equivalent - 209 years (+27)
Health
- Healthy
Life saving treasure-3


Current combat strength- FE 15
 
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Diomedes Cestus 1 - Duty
Diomedes cestus was traveling in a wagon towards his goal, feeling the harsh desert sun upon his back.
The nearest golden devil clan outpost was still hours away leaving him with his thoughts and doubts.

When the news about the golden devil clan declaring they would be recruiting new disciples has reached the cestus family his father declared that all with talent in their lands will be sent to join the clan.
He knew that with the infamous one hundred years trials fast approaching those that will be part of the clan forces will be hunted down by the monsters that were the cultivators of the fifth sea.
He knew that for all of his talent he will still be nothing more than slightly stronger prey when the time comes.

In his fears, he approached his father, an eight-step qi condensation cultivator himself, in his cultivation chambers in the family manor and Shamefully begged him about hiding away his talent and waiting for after the trials before cultivating and joining the clan forces.
His father was quick to disabuse him of that notion.
He remembered his father's face back then, a terrible combination of anger, rage, and most striking of all disappointment.

His father spoke of how he was saved by a cultivator from the golden devil clan years back after he was attacked by a disciple from the Battle Blood Cannibal sect, normally a death sentence for a loose cultivator like him
the legionnaire saved his life at the cost of his arm.
"Duty" his father spoke, was what saved him that day for the legionnaire declared it his duty to protect those in his clan territory from their enemies, ignoring the man status as a loose cultivator.

He spoke of how the very kingdom they lived in was protected by the legions from the depredations of both the Cannibals sect and the various beasts of the desert that would have destroyed them without a second thought.
"Duty" he spoke was the only thing that kept his family and the mortal kingdom that they lived from being annihilated as so many others did.

And as dusk was setting in and the gates of the Golden devil clan outpost was coming into view, Diomedes staring at the sheepskin scroll his father has pushed into his hands smiled bitterly and pushed down his fears.
As he remembered his father's words he resolved himself to do his duty and attempt to aid the clan with nothingless than his best.
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this is my first attempt at writing something and i would appreciate any ideas for improvements.
Diomedes while afraid at first decided to join the clan forces to repay them for their protection of the mortal kingdom where he lived.
@occipitallobe
for my omake bonus i choose an improvement for his cultivation talent.
Edit-since apperantly generic cultivation talent upgrade might not work if its possible I choose an cool thing- old sheepskin scroll details a cultivation method that increases the efficiency of cultivating both body and qi simutanously.
 
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