Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Gaius Antonius 91 - Sinking, Part 1
Gaius Antonius 91 - Sinking, Part 1​

There was silence, at first, when the invaders arrived. Thirteen in total, one for each of them, and no two looked quite alike. Some wore a face of solemn duty, some projected confidence, some sneered imperiously, and some had faces alight with the thrill of battle. Miles above, the Nascent Souls discussed something, but they kept their presences well-hidden, so that they would not accidentally harm the Juniors below through exposure to their Wills.

The space in which they found themselves was a void, an invisible flat floor beneath them and some impossible light source illuminating their bodies. Each one of them cast light, enough to be seen clearly in this otherwise featureless place. It was remarkable only in the utter lack of anything to pay attention to; an antechamber, nothing more.

Gaius knew that if he let the trash talk start flying before he said anything, he might not be able to command everyone's attention. Therefore, he stepped forward, took a deep breath, and announced himself with all the pizaz he could muster. "Welcome!"

Every head in the room turned to the Empty King, and he relished in the attention. "Welcome, you pillagers, to our little competition. Before we get to the introductions, I have a question to ask y'all."

To the shock of his teammates and enemies alike, Gaius walked forward, until he was halfway between the two groups, and spread his arms to either side. "Who's the strongest!?"

Jeers, laughs and protests emerged in response, but so did shouts of encouragement, as several answered in the affirmative or raised their hands. Several people on his team looked like they wanted to step in and dissuade The Seeker, but all of them knew the truth: of all the Experts and Expert-equivalents here, Gaius was the most powerful. He was the most suited to pull such a stunt.

Gaius continued his speech once the Hunters quieted down a bit. "I mean it, I want a serious answer. Only the strongest will do: step right up and lose your life!" He shouted, pointing at himself with his thumb to accentuate the statement.

"As if, demon. What do we have to gain from rising to your provocations?" One Hunter asked with a huff.

"Only pride, but ain't that the root of all of this anyway?" Gaius answered, shrugging sarcastically. "Plus, I'm the second-strongest Single Pillar King. I'm worth more good-boy points than anyone here besides Miss Shining Hope!"

He whirled around, looking at Rina with a grin and a wink, then turned back to his audience. "But she's already taken, so it looks like you fellas will have to settle for little ol' me. But! But but but!" He stopped, holding up a finger to halt any potential interruption. "You'll have to go all in on this bet. See, I'm not interested in just sending you home. I ain't gonna hit your token, I'm gonna kill you."

Many scoffed at the arrogance of this proclamation, or cried out in anger at the disrespect. "It's just a trick. He's going to avoid the token for a while to make his opponent lower their guard, then strike it." Said one Hunter to the others. "They're clever creatures, if nothing else."

"You can believe that if it makes you feel better. Maybe then you'll have the guts to step up!" Gaius heckled, soaking in the hateful jeers of the Hunters. "But know this! If your token is broken, and you go back to your side and see my opponent with a broken token of their own, they'll be the one who broke it!" He declared, pointing accusingly at his enemies.

Gaius' voice rose in intensity, taking on a crueler pitch. "It'll be because they were a coward, and broke their own token when they realized they couldn't win! For the rest of your days, you'll carry that shame! Now let me ask again: who's the strongest!?"

Three people answered in the affirmative this time, outraged enough to accept the challenge, and all looked to one another. "...give us a few minutes." Said one, who grabbed the other two and pulled them aside.

Satisfied, Gaius turned around and walked back toward his team, who were now regarding him with no small amount of apprehension.

Lipita chuckled softly, dabbing at the iridescent tear leaking from beneath her covered eyes. Senior Gaius had never been one to shy away from a fight, possessing an utter self-assurance that she now recognized in the mirror and in the eyes of the exalted company she stood in here. Here was a Golden Devil undaunted, one of the Imperial Optimatoi for whom relative weakness against the barbaroi of the Fifth Sea was an assumption sorely in need of correction.

Gaius stopped in front of Lipita, not saying anything. Indeed, it was as if the King had just spoken words of such immense gravity that he had used up his own capacity for speech. After a moment of contemplation, he came to a simple conclusion. "You've done well, Lipita." He said quietly. "You're strong. You've exceeded every expectation I ever had. No matter what happens today, I want you to know that."

Lipita smiled widely, bared teeth projecting eagerness. "I know just how much strength I required to reach this place and I want more, so much more. Today is a day Heaven and its favored will remember to their regret. Divinity can be broken and taken as spoils and I intend to leave here much richer."

"That's the spirit." Gaius chuckled, though his voice was just a bit melancholic.

Behind him, Gaius heard a faint rumbling sound. Something, perhaps spacetime itself, quaked ever so slightly, as Matthias and one of the Hunters were swallowed up by a fold in space. It wasn't a tunnel like the gateway to the Qiguai Realm, so much as the void around them seemed to warp and compress until they were engulfed and taken to… wherever they'd be fighting.

"So it's begun…" He mused quietly.

Amaranth's face took on an almost wolfish grin. "Sure seems like it has." The King stared into the distance, his sight chewing through the distortion caused by the warped space, until his face twisted up into a frown. "Damn, this place is big."

"Mm. Bigger than I thought, if it's just gonna separate us anyway." Gaius replied, looking around with his arms crossed and finding, to his surprise, that he could not see any edges. "Probably a trick to it."

This was, he knew, Amaranth's unsophisticated but well-meaning way of comforting him. There would be nothing to do but push through, so why not relax a little bit in the moments before, to set their minds at ease?

Gaius turned to his old friend and smiled fondly. "Anyone over there look interesting to you?"

Amaranth simply put a hand on his chin, and let out a contemplative "Hmm...". Then, after taking cursory glances at the rest, his eyes were finally drawn to a figure covered in patches of— something. Gaius tried to make out more, but the more he looked at them, the more they didn't seem to make any sort of sense. It was almost like there was a block between the flow of information between him and the objects themselves. Or, perhaps, there was nothing there to begin with and he was simply imagining things.

"Now that's something, alright." Amaranth said almost as in a daze. Gaius understood perfectly, because in that moment he was captivated by the same thought: What would happen if Amaranth gave that bizarre existence a fight? Would all of his attempts at consumption be equivalent to just trying to eat air? No, even air had substance that could be absorbed. This was somehow even worse.

It certainly seemed like a bad matchup, that much was sure. He grinned.

Gaius chuckled at his friend's decision. "Bold as ever. Mankind was born to grow through struggle; you made a good choice."

Antonius(The other one) left with his opponent, accompanied by that same shaking. Now that they were pairing off in earnest, the tension in the air seemed to grow even more. "You done over there, or do you need more time to put your makeup on?" Gaius called out to the three from before, who were still engaged in a fast-paced, whispered debate.

As one, the three Hunters turned to glare at Gaius, annoyance writ across their features. "I'm going." One finally said. The other two didn't seem happy with this - most likely, they wished they could hash this out some more, but didn't want to appear weak and indecisive for any longer.

The man who stepped forward was of notable stature, though he was not quite the biggest one there. He was perhaps two inches taller than Gaius, and broader in the shoulders by a third or even half again. He wore a purple sash over white robes, all close-fitting and simple. What ornamentation was there was tasteful, and none of it sacrificed practicality and ease of movement. He had a short, well-groomed beard which tapered to a point in front of his chin, and his wavy, dark green hair came to a stop a few inches below his neck.

His features were handsome on the whole, albeit marred by a few scars. He didn't seem to be carrying any sort of weapon either, though he did wear a purple headband etched with incredibly small and elaborate arrays, as well as a large silver brooch around his neck. All in all, this was the kind of person you could tell was strong, just by looking at them.

"Varun Vasistha, Hammer of the Sage. I'll take your challenge, you so-called King." He spat, face twisted in an exaggerated display of disgust. How amusing; it seemed this man also liked playing to the crowd.

"Be seeing you, hopefully." said Gaius, bidding Amaranth farewell before turning to his opponent. "Fine by me!" He declared, approaching Varun until they were a scant few feet away. As they sized each other up like bulls preparing to lock horns, the world around them began to fade away, and the void quaked once more.

The darkness folded in on them, then receded, and the shaking stopped, revealing what would be the site of their battle. Beneath their feet, a vast expanse of white stretched out in every direction, covered in an inch of water which stubbornly refused to be absorbed by the ground. Pillars of white minerals stretched up from the ground here and there, numbering in the hundreds. The midday sun shone down from above, reflecting off the wet ground and turning it into a mirror of the sky above.

Taking a few steps back, Varun crouched down, careful not to look away from Gaius for a moment. He brushed his middle finger against the ground, raised it to his mouth and licked it. "Salt? How interesting." He said to himself.

"How do you figure it chose this? Do you think each one is a different place?" Gaius asked, stroking his chin in thought.

"I'm not sure. Perhaps it reflects the hearts of the fighters." Varun replied, getting to his feet and tucking his brooch in under his robe. "I like this one though, it's quite peaceful. But, getting down to business…"

Varun pulled a strip of purple cloth out from his pocket, reached around to his left shoulder and removed his token, then attached it to the cloth. Humming under his breath, the Hunter pulled off his headband, then quickly tied the cloth onto his head into a turban, positioning the token on the back of his head. Finally, he tied what had previously been his headband around one of his impressive biceps instead. "There. You won't hit it by accident now, right?"

"Hmm…" Gaius peered around his opponent's side, inspecting the token. "Definitely won't hit it, but what if you fall back and hit the back of your head?"

Varun sighed, growing annoyed with all of this pageantry. "I'll make sure to protect it if I fall, and if I can't, we'll count that as me fleeing."

Gaius' face split into a manic grin. "It'll have to do. Now, let's begin."

Varun took in a deep, deep breath, his chest doubling in size at the peak of his inhalation, then slowly let it back out. His face, previously rather calm, took on a much fiercer, more determined look.

The gap between starting point and impact was closed almost instantaneously. Varun's choice of opening blow was a vertical straight punch, sacrificing the destructive power of a twisting blow for a quicker motion. He struck with his right hand, the same side as his forward leg, which lunged out several feet in an aggressive offense - like his choice of punch, this choice of stance was one which aimed to bring the blow in contact with the opponent in a shorter amount of time.

With the tiny window of time he had to respond, Gaius leaned his head to the side and thrust his open palm horizontally, diverting the blow away. He smoothly transferred that motion into an elbow strike, but Varun caught the elbow in his other hand, then shoved Gaius back. He launched a roundhouse kick which was solidly blocked by Gaius, who responded in kind with a front kick.

The exchange of blows was furious and without pause, and no qi techniques were used beyond the most basic of performance-boosting Body Arts. This was not yet truly deadly combat - it was a warm-up, intended only to judge the basic capabilities of the opponent. In that regard, the two were equal.

By Gaius' estimation, their physical specs were almost entirely the same, which was impressive enough given that only one of them was carrying a body-enhancing bloodline. The speed at which Varun moved despite his bulk was especially worthy of praise. The two fighters threw an equal number of blows, none of which landed cleanly, though from the glancing hits, Gaius surmised that Varun was a bit stronger, but he had a bit more endurance.

But if that was the case...

Gaius dodged a punch by a couple of inches, then countered with a low kick that struck Varun's thigh before he could launch the kick he was planning on using. He started turning his head just before a fist impacted it, rolling with the blow and reducing its impact to a small fraction of what it would have been. He siezed the offending limb with both hands and jumped, intending to trap Varun with his legs and pull him down into an armbar. Recognizing the maneuver, Varun instead fell forward before the hold could be completed, aiming to simply smash Gaius' back into the ground.

Gaius was already twisting his body, and instead landed on his side next to Varun, who landed on his forearms. He took the mount position right away, beginning the complex process of systematically dismantling his opponent's guard. Recognizing his loss of control, Varun reared back and struck at Gaius' head with an elbow, only for the King to immediately relinquish his grip and lean back himself, letting the blow miss him by almost nothing.

If this was all this supposedly great Hunter could bring...

Gaius' left hand grabbed his opponent's arm, and his punishing right hook struck the man's face, drawing the first blood of their bout from a split lip. Without even looking, he jumped over a sweep he knew was coming, then stomped on Varun's ribs with both feet, the heavy blow propelling him into the air. As the King landed several feet back, his opponent clutched his midsection and struggled to his feet, wheezing.

Varun took up a stance once more, but Gaius did not; he stood there, a look of disgust on his face. "You lied, didn't you?"

"...what?" Varun asked, dumbfounded by the sudden dialogue but gladly taking the moment to regain his breath.

"You're losing the warm-up; ain't no way the best Hunter is this weak." Gaius snorted, looking down on his opponent through half-lidded eyes.

That got to Varun right away. His eyes narrowed and his neck stiffened in anger, veins and tendons standing out beneath the skin. "Who says I'm losing? You landed a couple of hits, but we're just getting started! How could you be this arrogant!?"

In response to his opponent's sheer, naked aggression, Gaius finally took a stance; one just as aggressive. "Nah, I've got you figured out now. It's only gonna get harder for you from here on out."

The reason for Gaius' confidence was the thin layer of water around their feet. By listening to how it splashed with each footstep, all sorts of valuable data could be gleaned about how his opponent was moving, which only served to accelerate the rate at which his predictions grew in accuracy and depth. It was like taking a test with half of the answers already filled in.

Gaius jumped over Varun's sliding kick and kneed him in the head, driving the Hunter back. He immediately took control of the engagement, pushing him back with a series of punches and kicks that were barely blocked. When Varun struck back with a crushing right straight, Gaius took one step to the side and slammed his fist into the ribs he had already bruised, halting Varun's movements. Immediately, he seized the outstretched arm and threw his opponent over his shoulder, slamming him into the ground. As agreed upon, Varun guarded the back of his head with his forearm just before impact, protecting the token.

Before Gaius could crush Varun's skull, the Hunter shouted a wordless bark of anger, releasing a shockwave which blasted Gaius into the air. The Devil flipped a few times to bleed off some angular momentum, before aligning himself properly and landing gracefully twenty feet away. Varun was already getting up, none the worse for wear. Good; at least he was sturdy.

As Varun got back to his feet, wiping the blood from his nose and analyzing his opponent closely, Gaius sneered in disappointment. "The strongest Hunter oughta be better than me in a fistfight. Stronger, faster, more skilled too. I wanted someone who surpassed me in every way, and you just don't cut it!"

"I get what's going on; you're predicting my movements with your Dao Magic, aren't you?" Varun asked, cracking his neck with an annoyed expression. "I think you misunderstood the point of the warmup, Devil."

"What, I was supposed to turn off my Emanations? They're as much a part of me as my limbs, dipshit. Leaving them on is the default." Gaius laughed. "It's your fault for not being able to feel them - guess that's the downside to the Twelfth Heavenstage, huh?"

Rather than looking discouraged, Varun simply looked more determined than ever to meet the challenge before him. This blow to his pride was only sharpening his edge; he was quite mentally sturdy, it seemed. "To think you can use your power on me even though your Emanations can't touch my body directly. You must be sensing the vibrations of the air infinitesimally close to my skin, which means you're quite skilled." He remarked, reaching under his robe to pull out his brooch.

"You're damn right I'm skilled; I've practiced with my magic every day since I got it. No one in the whole Clan works harder than me!" Gaius proclaimed, making no move to advance or interfere with whatever his opponent was doing. "...'cept maybe Wei Feng." He added after a moment of thought.

"Then it's a good thing I ended up fighting you. You're too dangerous to be left alive. Keeping you people around as resources is deeply foolish." Said Varun, who reached behind his head and carefully detached his token before setting it down a few feet away from him.

"Oh? Do we got a hardliner over here? A wannabe genocider?" Gaius planted one hand on his hip and cocked it to the side. "What, do you just really not like the shape of our faces? The way our food tastes? The color of our skin?"

For all Gaius tried to keep his tone light and playful, he couldn't help but let quite a bit of venom slip into his tone at that last part. Honestly, the way the Trial had been modified to remember a sporting event, it made it easy to forget how much he absolutely loathed these people. How many people would an Expert this strong be murdering this year, if not checked by a change in the Trial's rules and an opponent of Gaius' caliber?

"I know the ancient legends, Gaius. How your people came to destroy us all, to strip us of everything." Varun growled, narrowing his eyes. He reached into his hip pocket, retrieving a tiny mace no more than one foot long, and set that down too. "You'll still do it, if you get the chance, but the Randhawa Dynasty, those idiots who control the Iron Pillar, use you to generate karma for their children instead of removing the threat. They think you're beaten, that you'll never rise up again."

"Y'know, you're right about one thing, Hunter. We will rise up again." Gaius grinned, drawing the Dream Sword from his hip. "However we treated your people before, it's gonna be much, much worse. And once we've used you all up, I will personally sink your entire continent into the ocean for how your people have humiliated us. Now hurry and power up already!" He shouted, his three blue eyes glaring intensely.

If Gaius' threats affected Varun, he didn't show it, calmly pouring a small amount of qi into his brooch, which radiated a huge amount of energy in response . "With an unbreakable body, I shall strike down all evil. Wake up, Gleaming Garb." Varun intoned, pressing down on each of the nine gemstones in a specific order. One by one, they all recessed into the brooch through some internal mechanism and began to glow, until all of them were pressed in. It let out a strange, high-pitched vibration, and one by one, pieces of Varun's body were swallowed up by a suit of thick silver armor which teleported into existence around him.

That suit was impeccably built and impressively thick, giving off a feeling of solid immovability. The heavy plates bore all manner of fine decoration, practical arrays carved into beautiful swirling patterns. Leaping, snarling beasts, ornate weapons, natural disasters and more were displayed on the front of the armor, making it look like a relief as much as it did a piece of protective gear. Perhaps most distinctively, the front of the helmet was molded into a human face, permanently frozen in a look of cold, imperious stoicism. From the seams of the armor, a faint violet light seeped out, glowing from within.

Walking back to his token, Varun carefully picked it up, then attached it to the back of his helmet, after which he picked up the tiny mace. "How kind of you to wait for me to transform, knowing your life is at stake. Or perhaps that too is a matter of pride." He said, voice distorted by his helmet and magnified from within.

As pressing as the danger of his current situation was, Gaius could not help but be distracted by a nagging in the back of his mind telling him that he was looking at something important. It wasn't exactly easy to miss, after all - the way that armor had manifested was something he'd seen before. It was the same as Shi Jiang's Eternal Raiment.

"My my, now ain't that familiar?" He chuckled, giving his opponent a once-over. "Mommy and daddy gave you that good shit, huh?"

Varun sighed at that jab, the sigh of a man who'd heard a comment a thousand times before. "I won't deny it; I'm a child of privilege. I was given this armor by my family. My weapon, on the other hand, I won fair and square by combat!"

Varun's qi surged into his tiny mace, which immediately responded, growing to a terrifying size until it rested on his shoulder. The shaft, more than two inches in witch, seemed large even in Varun's broad palms, and stretched out some size feet from the pommel before widening into a solid sphere seven inches in diameter. The smooth bludgeon was tipped with a wickedly sharp spike, which added another foot to the weapon's length. The entire thing must have weighed well over sixty pounds, perhaps even reaching seventy, with about three quarters concentrated in the head.

Gaius let out a loud, piercing wolf whistle, as if he were a pervert openly ogling something that caught his fancy. In a way, he was: that was one hell of a weapon; even without his spiritual sense, the sheer feeling of overwhelming brutality the mace gave off was impossible to miss. That was the kind of weapon that songs were written about; even his own Dream Sword couldn't compete in terms of sheer presence.

"Come on, big guy!" He exclaimed, drawing his Dream Sword and shaping it into a long, sturdy two-handed sword. He empowered himself further, summoning several Aegis fields around his limbs and body simultaneously. They were thin and hugged him closely; not overwhelmingly sturdy, but allowing a good amount of protection without reducing his range of movement or getting in the way of his own strikes. "Let's do this!"

"Yes." Varun said back, deadly serious. He held the mace in both hands, his grip tight but not excessively so, and prepared to charge. "Let's."

The scene was truly beautiful, Gaius thought to himself. One of the most striking sights he'd encountered in all of his days. The brutal beauty of his opponent, the sun reflecting off the mirror-like ground beneath their feet, the tense atmosphere of two mighty warriors facing off, both wary of the other's abilities. It really was the perfect stage for such a momentous battle.

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Ninth was probably the right choice, Redmoon figured.

There were thirteen enemies in total, some of which would most likely be stronger than others. In fact, it was almost certain that the most powerful enemies would be going near the beginning and near the end, with a leaning toward the beginning. After all, a few strong enemies might enjoy waiting until the very end, as a sort of climactic final challenge for anyone brave enough to wait for them. However, more of the strong ones would go early on, eager to snap up braver opponents while the picking was still good. As such, a weak opponent was most likely to be found after the halfway mark, but before the last three.

The man standing before her was tall, with a slim, clean-shaven face and close-cropped hair. He looked rather youthful from the outside, but looking into his eyes, Redmoon could see the wariness that came with experience, even though his body language looked carefree. He wore a well-fitted breastplate, gauntlets and greaves, but the rest of his body was protected only by thick cloth - a moderate compromise between mobility and protection. The only aspect of his clothing which did not seem overly practical were his sleeves, which were quite spacious and flowed loosely. "You. Pale girl. I have a question to ask you." He announced, jutting out his chin proudly.

"Yes, what is it?" Redmoon asked, unaffected by the Hunter's braggadocio. He seemed to have been expecting some kind of more substantial reaction, and scoffed at her lack of interest.

"You seem a little out of place is all." The tall Hunter chuckled. "How did the Iron Pillar, warped as it is this year, even designate you as a target or bring you here?"

"There are pills for just about anything, sir." She replied, retaining the same disarming smile. "Even ones that can fake the Blood of Bronze for a while."

"Sure, I can buy that, but why would you even come here!? This is a killing field!" He shot back incredulously.

"I don't know, you don't seem that threatening, personally. Only a minor risk." Redmoon answered, the dimples growing almost imperceptibly wider and higher on her face. It was very slight, and yet made her look remarkably less friendly. "If you're worried about the lack of reward, don't be. I have... collateral, for anyone who fights me. Shall I show you?"

The hunter went from smug and annoyed to just angry, scowling down at this girl who dared disrespect him openly. "Sure, show me. Please, give me more of an incentive to punish you for your words." He spat.

It was odd, the way he stalked forward without his feet making any sound. It wasn't a unique trait of this particular Hunter; no one's footsteps made any sound, probably because they weren't really walking on anything. Still, she probably ought not to ignore the obnoxious gentleman for too long, or he might cause a very troublesome scene.

Holding up the ring Gaius had gifted her, Redmoon tapped three times on the flat circle atop it, establishing a connection with the other end. "Senior Sister Scylla, could you please come out now?" She asked politely.

On command, a familiar bronze-scaled (not so-)Rainbow Carp appeared in the air around Redmoon, summoned forth from the teleportation ring. She preened, presenting herself vainly before the gathered Hunters, most of whom appeared disgusted at the sight. "Hey there boys, I'm the real prize here. Kill little Miss Redmoon, and you get to butcher and eat me, then turn in my scales for positive Karma~!" Scylla proclaimed in a mocking tone.

"It is as she says." Redmoon confirmed more sedately. "I have borrowed the ring with which to summon this Rainbow Carp, which has been infused with the Blood of Bronze and is thus an eligible target for the Trial. Right now, her status as a Sacred Beast more than cancels out Heaven's curses toward the Bronze, but if you peel off her Bronze scales, those will be worth as much as the body of a very powerful Devil Expert. And her flesh will no doubt make for a most succulent meal and an excellent cultivation aid."

That was only half-true, really. Scylla was the "prize" for defeating Redmoon, but it wasn't like the carp would let herself be killed. Redmoon's opponent would have to beat both of them to claim their prize.

"If you're relying on tricks like that, then you're definitely weak." The tall Hunter scoffed, taking several steps forward. "I'm not sure who put you up to this or why, but I, Sanjit Saran, will take that offer. I like seafood anyway."

"Carps live in rivers, not the sea, you stupid asshole!" Scylla jeered, before vanishing back into the ring, teleported back to wherever she had been before.

"Please forgive my Senior Sister's rudeness. I, Redmoon the Purity King, Accept your challenge." The woman in white declared, walking forward until she stood a few feet from Sanjit. He was quite a bit taller than her, probably about as tall as Gaius, and similarly thin. In fact, his cocky demeanor was similar to her temporary master's as well - an amusing coincidence.

The void shook, then enveloped the two of them in total darkness. When it receded, it revealed to them a truly striking vista. They stood within a massive temple of red-brown stone, its dim interior lit by huge firepits and lit sconces. Huge pillars connected the floor to the ceiling and towering statues of fierce warriors lined the walls. In the center of the chamber was a great circular altar, its purpose unclear but no doubt sinister.

"Oh my, that's impressive." Sanjit remarked, taking big steps away from Redmoon without turning away from her. He allowed his eyes to wander this way and that, but kept her in his peripheral vision at all times. "Is this a real place? Or just a dream?"

"If I had to guess, I would say it is a dream." Redmoon supplied, idly casting her Emanations about in case her senses were being deceived. This space had physical substance, at the very least, but it was too... perfect, free of even the smallest imperfections. It was the idea of a temple, not one built by human hands. "It does not feel... earthly, in the same way as the physical world."

"Oh? So no spirits or kings will be mad at me if I smash it up?" Sanjit chuckled, grinning sadistically. He immediately took up a fighting stance, raising one hand to face height and the other to chest height and bouncing on the balls of his feet. "That's good. I'll paint you all over this place."

Such arrogance, and for what purpose? This man, who thrived off of starting conflict and provoking others, brought disharmony into the world for no reason at all. Furthermore, by participating in the Centennial Trial, he intended to perpetuate acts of murder against people who had not wronged him solely for his own gain. Sanjit was already tainted with sin; it was imperative to remove him from the world for now, so he could redeem himself in the new one.

"Alright Scylla, it's time to begin." Redmoon commanded, tapping the teleportation ring three times.

Nothing happened. There was no whoosh of suddenly displaced air, and nothing at all appeared out of the ring. Redmoon tapped it again. "Scylla? Can you hear me? The fight has started, it's time to come out."

"No, it's not time to fight. Not for me, at least." Scylla retorted.

Redmoon's stoicism finally broke, her eyes bugging out and her gaze snapping down to stare at the teleportation ring in disbelief. "What do you mean? Gaius gave me this ring so that we could fight together in this competition."

Scylla's response was as cold as her blood. "He gave you this ring so that I could act as bait, otherwise you couldn't compete in this contest." She explained, causing a pit to open up in the young King's stomach. "If you're actually going to be a capable general, you should prove yourself now and win. You need to earn what you've asked for."

"That's quite a devious trick, Senior Sister." Redmoon said back, voice just as if not more cold than the carp's. "Very well, I will handle this myself."

What a cruel world this was, where even heavenly beasts meant to represent virtue and safeguard mankind could become duplicitous. Indeed, Scylla had become impure the moment she was exposed to human influence, and now reveled in vice. She loved to dominate weaker creatures, hoarded treasure, drank herself stupid constantly - she was everything a dragon was supposed to not be.

"What's wrong; you get stood up?" Sanjit laughed, making an exaggerated look of mock sympathy. "Your dance partner leave you all alone with the big bad Trial Hunter?"

Somehow, the Purity King wasn't as surprised by this turn of events as she should have been. It was, frankly, a perfect political move. If he wasn't strong enough, then the deal would not be worth it, and Gaius would have disposed of a potential future enemy under completely plausible circumstances. If she was strong enough, then Gaius would continue to make use of her in the future. No doubt there would be many more of such borderline-suicide missions in the future. In fact, Redmoon was glad to not be fighting along Scylla; it was best to not associate with a creature like her more than necessary.

Unsheathing her greatsword, Redmoon took up a defensive stance, preparing herself to fend off whatever attacks her opponent would bring to bear against her. Her abilities were especially potent for ambushes and quick battles, but in recent years she had made moves to diversify her skillset, so that she wouldn't be so vulnerable in direct, head-to-head battles. But 'less vulnerable' still didn't mean that a duel like this was ideal for her; this would be an uphill battle.

Redmoon dashed forward, covering the gap in moments, and swung horizontally. Sanjit leapt above her strike, flipping backwards in a graceful arc and tapping the side of her sword with his fingertip. She swung again just as he landed, only for him to dash away again. She made to pursue once more, but Sanjit flicked his wrists, causing several small glass orbs to fly out from either sleeve into his open hands. The hunter filled them with his qi and threw them in a wide pattern, causing a wave of small explosions to cut off Redmoon's approach.

When the smoke cleared, Sanjit was standing in the open palm of one of the statues, lounging casually as if he were some pet mouse in the man's hand. "If you want to take me on, you've really gotta be faster than that!" He called out, his voice filled with mockery.

It was bait, but Redmoon had no real choice here but to take it. She sighed under her breath, cursing her luck that she would be fighting a fast ranged combatant of all things. She could do mid-range, but struggled at anything beyond that; it just wasn't her specialty. The King resolved to change her approach; she would plant a trap, bait Sanjit into it and trap him, allowing her to finish him off.

As she dashed toward her waiting opponent, Redmoon ran her palm along the edge of her blade, cutting it open and coating the edge in her blood. She began to manipulate it, sharpening the ichor and enhancing its fluid properties, so that she could fire it off as a projectile when the time came. Sanjit leapt off of his perch, and Redmoon jumped up to meet him, drawing back her sword--

Where was her sword? Somehow, impossibly, Redmoon was unarmed.

In that moment of confusion, Sanjit's foot collided with Redmoon's face, breaking the King's nose and throwing her back. As she hit the ground, Sanjit threw more glass spheres, and in response, she plunged her hands into the ground. A mass of thorny vines, from which deep red Bloodroses sprouted, burst out of the ground, intercepting the projectiles.

They were numerous, but individually they lacked power. They were more meant to wear an enemy down and disorient them, she guessed. The spheres detonated against the wall of thorns and failed to breach through, and Redmoon turned to run around it, only to see Sanjit already there, throwing a punch. His fist collided with her solar plexus, driving the wind from her lungs and sending her into a desperate retreating defense.

Redmoon batted away Sanjit's punches and kicks, trying to get her bearings and figure out what was going on, only for the Hunter to back away after a few seconds and retreat. Redmoon declined pursuit, instead running the other way and casting her spiritual sense about to search for her sword. It wasn't difficult - the weapon's signature was unique in its blankness, an utterly nondescript chunk of reality. Somehow, Redmoon's sword had lodged itself in the hand of one of the statues - the same hand Sanjit had been in earlier.

Some sort of technique that moved things around, then. Redmoon moved swiftly, calling her blood, which was still on the sword, back to her body, bringing the sword with it. She turned to face Sanjit, who now leaned on one of the pillars, and held her hand in preparation to catch the sword. Slowly walking away from the pillar, Sanjit clicked his tongue twice, and suddenly the King's body was wrenched forward. She flew toward the pillar, trying to halt her movement by dragging her feet but only serving to carve furrows in the ground.

Redmoon impacted the pillar just as a cluster of spheres went off in her face, quite painfully. They weren't so harmless as point blank range, she thought as the shockwaves burst the blood vessels in her face and scorched her skin. The King was driven into the pillar, and in that moment of weakness, Sanjit made to strike her. This time, she didn't let him, summoning a spike of Bloodrose thorns which drove upward in front of her and nearly impaled Sanjit, forcing the Hunter to bend backward and fall on his ass to avoid being impaled through the head.

Redmoon once more called to her sword, which finally reached her, and swung it the second her hand felt the hilt, launching a crescent-shaped blade of blood at Sanjit. From that compromised position, it should have been impossible for him to dodge, and indeed he didn't. He simply stopped being there in the first place. In that moment of utter confusion, she failed to sense Sanjit's presence right behind her before it was too late.

The Hunter's fist cracked across her jaw, and he ducked down to dodge her retaliatory strike, touching the ground with one hand. Redmoon brought her sword down to lop off his head, but Sanjit vanished once more. Then, she heard him click his tongue twice, and her head was slammed into the floor hard enough to make a crater a few feet across. Stars exploded into being before the King's vision, but even more than the pain of that blow, she was filled with a sense of annoyance.

Not only was this man a sinner, but he refused to even face judgment with the slightest degree of fairness. If Sanjit had his way, Redmoon would die without having the chance to strike him even once.

"You've already figured my two signatures out, right? Or at least, mostly." Sanjit said. Redmoon sat up, turning to the source of the voice to find him, unsurprisingly, smirking at her. His face was handsome, but any charm he might possess was overwritten by his sheer smarminess. "I mean, to become a King, you must have at least a bit of brains."

"The first is short-range teleportation. To do it so fast, it must not have a very long range. Perhaps one hundred feet." Redmoon answered immediately, getting her bearings and trying to throw together a new plan of attack. "As for the second, you mark two points with your qi by touching them; a target and a destination, and at a time of your choosing, you can make the target fly toward the destination instantly. The first allows you to easily set up the second."

"Bravo, bravo!" Sanjit exclaimed, clapping his hands loudly. "You really are a great talent. It's a shame you asked for a real fight when you weren't ready."

Redmoon scoffed at Sanjit's backhanded compliments, exhaling forcefully to blow all the blood out of her nose. "I don't have time to wait to be ready. The people of this world are long overdue for salvation."

The token was right there, on the left side of Sanjit's chest, tantalizingly close. If she could touch that, it would all be over. And yet, she was also drawn in by the temptation to kill her enemy, remove his soul from this impure world right away, even if that would be much harder to do. Then again, considering Redmoon had yet to land a hit of any kind, one could say that both outcomes were very far away at the moment.

She called out to her blood; the droplets splattered on the pillar, on the ground below her, dripping down her face, and the larger stain on the far wall from her missed attack earlier. It all flowed toward Redmoon, swirling around her and becoming a shroud of power. That was the great thing about Blood Arts; the longer the fight went on, the more blood was spilled, and the more powerful they became.

Sanjit teleported again, but this time Redmoon was ready, tracking his position carefully with her Emanations. He first appeared above her, dropping spheres, then behind her. She didn't even look up, simply firing off her mantle of blood in a small hail of needles which knocked the attack out of the way, leading them to explode harmlessly all around Redmoon. Instead, she turned around immediately, stabbing at Sanjit's token. Yelping in surprise, he dodged to the side a bit, causing the blade to cut his shoulder instead of striking the token.

Water spilled from the wound, and Redmoon immediately felt her qi reserves refilling slightly. Sanjit fell back and tossed a glass sphere, which Redmoon deftly dodged before pursuing him. Rather than teleport away as she suspected he might, the Hunter simply held up a pebble between his fingers. What in the world was he-

Redmoon cried out in pain as an explosion scorched her back and made her stumble. Ah, of course, he could alter the trajectory of his attacks too. How lovely; one of those do-anything techniques.

"You gotta be more creative!" Sanjit taunted, throwing a salvo of spheres at his off-balance opponent. Redmoon's sword, being rather prodigious in size, blocked several of the orbs, but two hit home. They burst on contact, assailing her body with small explosions and nearly driving her to her knees.

Before she could recover, Sanjit was already teleporting in, assailing her with blow after blow, which she mostly fended off, though one hit home, leaving a new mark on her chest. Retreating back and teleporting into the air to avoid her counter-slash, he tapped the ceiling, then immediately clicked his tongue twice. As he fell, she was yanked up and forward, and the Hunter threw another salvo of exploding spheres to intercept her when she reached her destination.

The impact jarred Redmoon, to the point that it felt as if her very bones were shaking, and blew her away into the chest of one of the temple's huge statues. She held onto its shoulder, catching her breath as she considered her next move.

Sanjit's attacks were not overwhelming in strength; he was focused much more on speed than on power. What made him dangerous was how confusing he was to fight, and how difficult it was to land hits. He was an endurance hunter, wearing down his prey carefully before going in for the kill. When he wasn't fighting one on one, she imagined Sanjit played more of a support role in combat, harassing the enemy, pushing them into unfavorable positions and pulling his allies into favorable ones.

"I don't suppose you'll run out of those?" She asked, hoping her opponent's predilection for banter might buy her another moment or two to catch her breath.

"I'm afraid not. Replication treasure." Sanjit explained, tugging on one of his sleeves.

"Lovely."

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The first clash was both swift and fierce, simultaneous kill-shots thrown right out the gate and narrowly avoided by both parties, as both of them got the idea to stab at the other's face. They narrowly dodged one another's weapons, sliding past one another and leaving trails of water in their wake. They spun back around to face one another, Gaius catching Varun's mace on the flat of his blade and pushing it away before retaliating with a horizontal slash that Varun blocked with a thick silver gauntlet. Impressively, the armor took no damage at all from the Dream Sword, which possessed enough innate cutting power to pierce through the flesh of the strongest Core Formation enemies, and cleave through the bones of middling ones.

Varun brought the mace around again, using its momentum to whip it around his back as if it were a staff rather than re-orienting it. Gaius threw up an Aegis to block it, already winding up his counterattack - only to feel hardly any impact at all. The huge mace bounced off of his defensive technique harmlessly, as if it were a pebble. Gaius' stab missed, as he had been expecting to be pushed back and thus overextended, and Varun took that opportunity to slam a mighty punch into the King's solar plexus.

Gaius stumbled back, dismissing the Aegis he had formed in front of his left hand, only to suddenly be struck in the chest by an invisible force which came from seemingly nowhere. An invisible bomb? No, there was no shockwave at all - this was pure momentum, an effect with no cause. The force of the hit blasted Gaius backwards, and Varun ran after him in pursuit.

In the following moment, Gaius' experience allowed him to put it together. A strike which inexplicably generated no force, soon followed by a force with no strike generating it. Had Varun delayed the energy of his strike until a moment of his choosing? No, it had been the moment Gaius dissipated his Aegis, so that delayed strike must have had the ability to brand itself onto whatever it hit. Remove the surface which held that force, and the force would be released.

The time it took Gaius to perform that analysis was roughly one tenth of a second.

Letting his feet burrow into the ground to drag through it and slow his movement backwards, Gaius came to a stop beside one of the towering pillars scattered across the arena. Up close, he found that it was unsurprisingly also salt. Perfectly mundane salt, at that. He pressed his palm to the pillar and suffused it with his qi.

"You're damn good. Alright, let's take it up a notch!" Gaius called out, drawing upon the technique he had worked so hard to create in preparation for this event. "Stars of Gold!" He intoned, and the world commanded. The pillar was unmade in a blinding flash, converted into thousands of motes of light, which themselves congregated into over a dozen much brights, concentrated points. With a wave of his hand and a flex of his will, Gaius launched those concentrated points at his charging foe as thin, bright yellow laser beams.

Varun didn't just run through them, but neither did he abort his charge. He held his arms up to guard his face and juked this way and that, avoiding some of the beams but being hit by many others. The armor didn't even glow with heat in response; the beams just bounced off, fracturing this way and that and dissipating around him. Then, Varun reached Gaius, swinging downward, and Gaius sank into the ground to avoid it.

Moving through solid matter had grown far easier for him than it used to be. Gaius' experience with Earth-Gliding had helped in the development of Stars of Gold, but now it was obsolete. He simply propelled himself with an Aegis field around his body whilst destroying any matter in his way, ensuring smooth travel which could pass through both solid and granular barriers. So long as the material was not qi-infused, turning it into light was effortless; the more qi there was, the harder it got.

All of that to say, Gaius sunk into the ground, popped back up behind Varun, and slashed his neck in a fraction of a second. The Hunter stumbled back a step, reeling from the impact but far from decapitated or even cut, and swung again at Gaius in response, breaking through several layers of Aegis and knocking him back once again.

Gaius bounced off the ground once, then rolled up to his feet and skidded to a stop, water spraying around him, only to find Varun not pursuing at full tilt, but approaching slowly with a balanced stance. Gaius turned the Dream Sword into a mace of his own(albeit less oversized than Varun's, comfortably fitting in one hand), and approached at a similar pace. He reached down and checked his ribs, and was relieved to find them bruised but not yet fractured.

"Little attacks like that won't work!" Varun boasted, briefly spreading his arms to reveal himself totally unharmed. Not a single scratch or burn mark could be seen on that bright silver armor of his. "The Gleaming Garb was made from the body of a Spirit-Severing Devil. It's been passed down through the Vasistha Clan for a hundred thousand years."

Gaius wished he could say that that revelation didn't affect him at all, but in all honesty, everything about this guy was getting under his skin. He'd love nothing more than to carve him to pieces, but this was not a fight that could be approached recklessly. If that armor really was what Varun said it was, then that only rang even more true. So as much as he would have liked to take on the entire team at once and butcher them all, the King accepted that not even he could do that, and that the rules didn't work that way anyhow. He would have to be content with this one opponent, and approach him methodically.

"Spirit Severing Gravebronze... no, it would be Gravesilver, wouldn't it? You don't even realize how much you lucked out." Gaius growled, jumping over Varun the moment he entered the Hunter's attack range and avoiding a sweeping blow which pulverized the salt pillar next to him, not felling it so much as smashing it to pieces. He spun mid-air, turning to face his opponent as he wrapped his Dao Emanations around his body. When he landed, Varun was already coming, but this was something he only required a tenth of a second to do.

"Eye contact is burning, eye consciousness is burning. Spring forth, Dao Vestment!"

As Gaius transformed, he continued to fight. Varun launched another shockwave from his mouth, which the King threw up an Aegis to block. He was less inclined to block the mace strike which followed, instead stepping to the side and spinning to strike Varun in the back with his mace-shaped Dream Sword, which combined with the momentum of his charging, armored foe to send the man tumbling. Varun quickly performed a one-handed handspring to get back to his feet, but by then Gaius' body had finished transforming.

Now in the form of his Dao Vestment, Gaius dismissed most of his clothes to expose more of his membrane-clad skin and sense the world with even greater clarity. He then took to the air on his new wings, landing atop a salt pillar. "You ain't bad, even accounting for the equipment. I guess you'll do as a test subject for my lance."

"As you release more power, you only get more unsightly!" Varun spat, glaring up at Gaius. "Go ahead, let's see it!"

"Okay." Gaius chuckled giddily, licking his lips.

Varun fired off a shockwave from his mouth, smashing the pillar on which Gaius stood and prompting him to fly further into the air. In response, Varun began charging up another, much more powerful shockwave. Judging from the previous uses of that technique, Tabula Rasa predicted what it would look like when it fired. A rather huge blast - twenty feet or more across - that would do quite a bit of damage if Gaius took a direct hit. Nonetheless, he had no intention of dodging this one.

Seeping out of his veins and emerging from his pores came a deep red mist of vaporized blood, swirling around Gaius in a beautiful spiraling pattern. With an exertion of his will, Gaius transformed that blood-mist into motes of light. Bloodflame was the primary means through which the power of the Blood-Forge was expressed, but fire was not the only way to generate heat. These motes of crimson light, infused with the curse placed upon Gaius' heart, radiated energy, and thus heat, and that heat had all the same properties as Bloodflame.

Gaius concentrated those red motes all together into a single dense, bright point on the tip of his index finger, a thrumming nexus of immense power. This, the combination of Ji Shin's gifts and his own lifetime of labor and training, was his ace in the hole. Gaius added more and more of his blood, making the density of the energy at his fingertip grow more and more. Varun fired off his own attack, his feet sinking into the ground from the recoil. Locked in place by his own attack, Varun could not dodge.

"Tear down all Messiahs. By the decree of the King, they shall be crucified unto death. Let divinity be soiled by this lance! Golgotha!"

Simply put, it plowed straight through Varun's attack. The beam, as thick as a finger and glowing with intense power, blasted straight through the shockwave and struck the armored Hunter in the center of the chest, bursting into crimson fire on contact which engulfed most of the Hunter's body. Though the attack had no kinetic energy, being made of light, it nonetheless knocked Varun on his ass from the sudden shock of immense, literally soul-searing pain. The beam died out after a second, its energy used up, and Varun writhed on the ground, still shocked by the sudden damage.

"How'd ya like that, loser!?" Gaius called out, crossing his arms and keeping himself afloat with steady wingbeats. "That's a real champion's attack right there!"

Even with his face concealed, it wasn't hard to see that Varun was shaken. Spiritual pain was far more difficult to build a resistance to than physical pain, because it was always agonizing. The soul was essentially one big weakpoint, so any damage to it was interpreted by the mind as something critical and horrible. And of course, that had not been a small attack; Gaius had put nearly a quarter of his blood into that blast, which meant Varun was lucky to have not died instantly.

More than any of that, though...

"How did you do that!?" Varun gasped, unable to comprehend what he had just been hit by. "An Expert can't do that! What kind of trick did you pull!?"

"Trick? Heh, guess you could call it that." Gaius chuckled, squatting and resting his forearms on his knees so as to more leisurely look down on his enemy. "When I use my blood as a weapon, it becomes a flame that burns the soul. Turn that into light, and you've got a beam of light that strikes the soul and the body." As the King spoke, he slowly broke into a predatory grin. "Oh, and my blood also cancels out Heaven' energy. That's Golgotha."

He took a moment to let the Hunter stew in his words and understand what all of that really meant. After all of the effort he had put in to develop the ultimate weapon, Gaius really wanted to rub it in.

A beam of light, the universe's supreme, unsurpassable speed. In other words, it could not be dodged by reflex, only by prediction. It burned with a heat that scorched the soul and the body, so defense wasn't as effective; whichever of the two was less durable set the limit of how much the target could take. It used Gaius' blood as fuel, making it far more qi efficient than something with that much destructive power had any right to be, which meant it could be used even when his reserves were flagging. Finally, the Bloodflame which made it up was suffused with the power of the Shadow; a subversive force which undermined heavenly power, both in this world and others, which meant the miraculous power of heavenly protection couldn't stop it.

"In other words, it's an ultimate technique: undodgeable, unblockable, and irresistable." Gaius stated plainly, finishing Varun's thought for him. "I made it to kill Heavenly Stars, not some two-pump chump like you!"

He lashed out with another Golgotha beam, this one smaller than the last, having been charged for the minimum amount of time and using much less blood. It grazed the shoulder of Varun, who had thrown himself out of the way the moment he saw Gaius' finger pointing at him. Even that brief contact had him seizing up in pain. Before the Hunter could even touch the ground again, Gaius fired another red beam from his third eye, striking Varun in the chest. Once more, the armored warrior caught on fire, tumbling back and writing in agony.

"All your effort, all your training, it don't mean shit!" Gaius shouted. "No one works as hard as me! I wasn't given this ultimate attack, I invented it! Built it one piece at a time! I did it 'cuz I had the ambition to do it!"

Beneath the mask of triumphant smugness, Gaius was filled with turmoil. As wonderful as it felt to dominate this invader, the King couldn't help but admit that there was also a hollowness to this sort of victory. Was it really so easy? Was it going to end right away, now that Gaius had revealed his trump card? He supposed it was indeed quite powerful, but still, that was disappointing.

Varun chuckled weakly, using his hammer to give himself more leverage and get to his feet, which caused Gaius' air of confidence to crack a bit. "You think you're the only one who's come up to me, boasting about an invincible technique? When big fish in small ponds step up to me, I pull this out."

"Oh? Ya got something to show me?" Asked Gaius, getting back to his feet and turning up his chin. "Let's see it!"

The air seemed to grow cold, though objectively, the temperature didn't seem to have changed. Gaius could swear he could faintly hear the rattling of chains at the edge of his senses. "Cruel Edict!" Varun called out, his voice echoing with great power as something weighty began to fall upon Gaius' spirit. "No using Bloodflame, or you will lose control of your qi for fifteen seconds!"

Gaius' eyes went wide. Had he heard that right? Was it a bluff? No, there was something lodged inside of him, resisting all of his efforts to get it out - a powerful, persistent curse. "You can use curses too? Real talented guy, aren'tcha?" Gaius called out, jumping off his pillar and landing with a splash in front of Varun. Underneath his attempts to be casual, Gaius was both furious and unsettled.

The Hunter seemed to detect this, and took visible satisfaction in tearing down the King's ego. "Yes, and I'm quite good too. This is how I deal with techniques that counteract my style: I seal them. I can only seal one at a time, so I waited for you to show your trump card."

Being unable to use qi for fifteen seconds - that was a thing that was more deadly against some opponents than others. Against one swinging around a gigantic bludgeon who could overpower a weakened foe and smash his head into paste with repeated downward blows in that amount of time, it was a death sentence. Varun was right - In essence, Gaius' ability to use Bloodflame, and thus his sure-kill technique, had been sealed.

"Fine, I'll sink back down to your level." Gaius snorted, shifting the Dream Sword's shape once more. This time, it became a war pick, a brutal and beaked thing which would hopefully, if Gaius could swing it hard enough and land a strike with the right timing, break through that infuriatingly tough armor.

The melee continued once more, more furious than ever. Varun's stamina was as freakish as his strength, and Gaius was equal in both departments. The Dao Vestment pushed his abilities farther in every way, but the Gleaming Garb closed that gap. Varun's near-invulnerability allowed him to commit to offense, taking risks in the hope of landing strikes. All in all, Gaius probably landed five hits for every one that Varun did, and those hits the Hunter did land were blunted by the rapidly-deploying Aegis.

Strike, strike, strike, strike. Gaius purged himself of hesitation, fighting with all of the prowess he could muster. He drove Varun back over and over, striking the head, the body, the limbs. It was exhilarating, working his body to its limits against someone who didn't break so easily; such things grew more rare for him the stronger he became.

Gaius struck Varun in the side of the head, then parried the mace aside and slammed the beak of his war-pick into his foe's armpit, where the armor would no doubt be thin. It still didn't piece through, much to his displeasure. Jumping over his opponent to avoid the next strike, he grabbed Varun by the face and used the leverage to slam both knees into the larger man's back, bending him backwards. He then kicked out Varun's knees and changed the Dream Sword back into a mace, preparing to back him atop the head from behind.

Suddenly, Varun sent a pulse of qi down his weapon, causing the shaft to go from rigid to soft, becoming akin to some kind of impossible metal whip. He swung it horizontally at full force, causing it to whip around his body and strike Gaius in the back, knocking the wind from his lungs and making him wheeze in pain. Varun then spun around, returning his mace to its original shape and striking his opponent again, knocking Gaius away and creating some distance.

The King got to his feet, but Varun was already in melee range, capitalizing on that surprise attack and not giving his opponent the chance to regain his balance. As Gaius fell back, Varun pursued; his deadly, heavy weapon swinging this way and that, every attack a potential injury. "Haven't you noticed yet? You're getting sloppier the longer the fight goes on. Your Emanations are getting weaker too!" He declared, slamming his mace into the ground and making a small crater.

What a stupid bluff. Dao Emanations didn't weaken over time, they never ran out. The Dao Vestment was also far from reaching its limit either. Gaius didn't rise to the provocation, instead ducking under a sweeping strike and retaliating with a blow to Varun's side, right above his kidney, prompting a grunt of pain. He continued his assault, striking the knee next to force his opponent's head downward, then the head itself.

Except, the Dream Sword didn't hit the head - Varun swayed back and dodged Gaius' strike, which shouldn't have happened - Tabula Rasa had predicted a direct hit, as had Gaius' own judgment. He counter-attacked with a stab, aiming to ram the spike that topped his mace into Gaius' chest. The King dodged to the side, turning it into a grazing hit, the spike carving a deep gouge into his side. Varun followed up with the weapon's other side, hitting Gaius in the midsection and knocking him back, setting up a strike with the mace's head itself that slammed the King into the air.

Hmm. This was definitely very odd. Tabula Rasa wasn't working as well as it should have been - wasn't predicting as accurately, or as far in the future, as it should have been. In fact, now that he thought about it, he was having trouble understanding his opponent's movements in general. Simple feints were tripping him up, and his own strategies were slipping his mind.

Gaius landed, and immediately threw up the most powerful Aegis he could, blocking a downward mace strike from Varun and slamming the beak of his weapon into the side of the Hunter's head. Varun stumbled back, his neck at a painful looking angle, and Gaius wound up another strike, preparing to follow up that successful blow. Any such notions of regaining the momentum were unfortunately cut short, however, by a worrying sound of flesh being pierced.

The pain followed right after, and Gaius stumbled back, clutching a newly-gained hole in his stomach and trying to stifle the bleeding. Varun attacked again, breaking through a hastily-raised Aegis and hammering Gaius' side, sending him sliding across the ground for twenty feet. How? How hadn't he seen that coming; he wasn't the sort of person to be baited like that!

"Your will is already breaking down; most people would have succumbed to ego death by now." Varun explained, cracking his neck and sighing with relief. "The Mindbreaker Maul destroys your consciousness with every hit. Your fighting skills have collapsed. That's what you get for not taking me seriously and breaking my token!"

"So that's how it is..." Gaius muttered to himself. He began to laugh - he just couldn't help it. It was unbelievable that this of all opponents would be put before him. It was perfect, literally perfect, for this circumstance. "So that's it, huh? That's amazing!" He yelled out gleefully, charging at the Hunter.

"You've already gone insane. You're finished!" Varun shouted back, charging to meet him.

The truth was, Gaius already had ways of dealing with this handicap. He could create bindings to bring down his opponent and hit him while he was vulnerable, then fall back to avoid retaliation, and repeat that over and over. He could grapple Varun, drag him a thousand feet beneath the ground and abandon him there to suffocate. He could... no, actually, his head hurt too much to think of any more ideas than those two, but the point was that Gaius was not so far gone that he couldn't think of any alternate approach.

But there was no need. This was absolutely fine. Facing a weapon like this, which would sink his consciousness into the deepest possible depths, was the greatest possible gift for him.

The momentum of the battle couldn't be any different now. Gaius held the advantage in strength and speed, but his flagging coordination and difficulty thinking ahead meant Varun could lead him into traps time and time again. He took blow after blow, being knocked back and rushing back in, and Varun made no move to try and finish him off quickly. He would wear the King down nice and safely, now that he had fallen into a death spiral.

Just a little more, Gaius thought, though thinking about anything was getting hard to do. It was like someone had cracked open his skull and poured a sticky, sugary syrup all over his brain. It was all so slow, so hazy. Already, his body was acting more on instinct than his own commands, avoiding attacks and striking back based entirely on the reflexive neural pathways built from his experience.

The deeper his mind sank, the more he could feel it. A great belligerent mass at the bottom of his mind. Those precious dregs which had sunk to the lowest possible depths. It was getting closer and closer, an oppressive psychic weight threatening to burst forth from within as the cage that confined it grew smaller and flimsier.

Just a little bit more, until he couldn't think at all. Until he could no longer remember why he needed to be thinking less. Once his mind sunk low enough, he would touch the presence bubbling up inside him. The same aching thing that gave him endless headaches when his progress was too slow or he didn't follow his beliefs. The same snarling, snapping thing that drove him to anger against any who questioned his way of life. It grew a little more with each passing day, that not-yet-presence, that shadow of unreality that pushed him, painfully, to grow stronger every single day.

The Dream Sword struck home, his stab bouncing off of Varun's breastplate and deflecting off to the side. Gaius noted distantly that at some point the Dream Sword had reverted back to its default state. Well, whatever. Varun's hand lashed out, seizing Gaius' wrist and twisting it until he was forced to let go of the weapon. Gaius' other hand took action, hammering punches into Varun's face which knocked his head around, but he did not let go.

Tossing Gaius several feet into the air, Varun grabbed his mace and slammed it into his opponent, sending the King flying. The world grew yet dimmer. Almost. Something was coming. An electric sensation, grinding against his very self from the inside. He heard a deep roaring, though he could not tell whether it was the sound of water pressure or the guttural cry of some massive entity.

Ah, flying felt so peaceful.

"Hurry up and die!" Varun cried out triumphantly, picking up the Dream Sword and hurling it point-first at Gaius. It struck true, impaling him through the chest as he flew through the air. Unable to focus enough to use any techniques that could help him, Gaius slammed into the top of a salt pillar, crashing through it. The impact altered his trajectory, slowing his horizontal movement and bouncing him further into the air.

"And here's another one!" Varun exclaimed, sending a surge of qi into the haft of his weapon, until it lengthened and once more grew pliant and flexible. Swinging it above his head a few times to build momentum first, the Hunter then swung his mace-turned-flail vertically in a wide arc. It lengthened further, to hundreds of feet. The head crashed down upon the airborne Gaius, hammering the Dream Sword deeper into his chest and fully impaling him, then smashing him into the ground.

Ah, there it was.

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This one doesn't have an author's note because it's the first half of something I wrote as one big chunk. The author's note is attached to the end of the second part. I figured it was so long that it would be rude to post the entire thing in one gigantic chunk, so I decided to split it in two. Luckily for me, there happened to be a pretty natural cliffhanger almost exactly halfway through this monster.

For those of you who have gotten this far, I guess you could treat it as an intermission if you want. Take a break if you'd like and read the second half when you're ready. Or don't read it, I dunno, I'm not your dad.
 
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Gaius Antonius 92 - Sinking, Part 2
Gaius Antonius 92 - Sinking, Part 2​

Shatterstar Hill was the sort of place you talked about, looked at from a distance, or wrote books about, not the sort of place you actually visited. It was, after all, dangerous and volatile to any who did not have experience wrangling time-aspected qi. Thankfully, the two women who were present here today were more than familiar with it.

The location had garnered its name due to its bizarre appearance; thousands of years ago, a Nascent Soul's attack had shattered a small mountain and kicked up a huge cloud of debris. Much of it was dirt and dust, but large stones and even boulders had also been thrown high into the air. In the moments after, another Nascent Soul belonging to the Heavenly Time Shatter Sect had frozen that region in time. In the battle where this event had taken place, the Nascent and his opponent had mutually killed one another, leaving the technique still active, drawing the qi out of the earth to keep this moment frozen.

The result was a huge pillar of stone and dirt, frozen in mid-air, never to fall. It was extremely inefficient, depleting a significant amount of qi from the local leylines each year, but the local Cultivators lacked the strength to break the technique. Time Shatter disciples would sometimes be taken to this place, where only they were able to exist safely, in order to study the intricacies of time techniques.

Chen Jinhua, the head of Research and Development for the Counter-Devil Task Force, climbed a series of stones as if they were stairs, confidently ascending without even checking her feet. She had been to this place a few times before, and had learned to handle its eccentricities without much issue. She was dressed more plainly than normal, in simple pants and tunic of rough cloth with sturdy leather boots. It wouldn't do to wear something more fragile, which might be aged into tatters if the time qi around her did something funny. Combined with her thin figure and plain looks, this outfit gave her a somewhat masculine appearance that Chen Jinhua felt ambivalent about. She wasn't some jade beauty who fussed over her appearance, but she generally did want to look nice, and tried to comport herself with grace even when hard at work running an experiment or supporting her comrades on the battlefield.

The person with her was a lot less confident, climbing with her hands as well as her feet and constantly checking around to see where she was, even as she regulated the flow of her own qi perfectly and kept herself unaffected by the field. She was dressed fairly conservatively for her station, if not as plainly as Chen Jinhua, wearing robes of powder blue, nothing in the way of jewelry or adornment beyond her excessively long hair. Her face was rather pretty in the sort of way that spoke for itself and didn't need more than a little bit of makeup to be presentable at a party; the sort of classical, storybook-like beauty that befitted a Single Pillar King like her.

The really unusual thing, though, was the massive braid into which her hair was tied. It was over a foot thick, tied with immense complexity, and fell down to her mid-thighs. The sheer amount of hair on the King's head was incredible, and many wondered how exactly she took care of it. It was by far the most distinctive thing about her, and tended to make her the center of attention even when she didn't want to be.

Upon reaching a height which she decided was suitably dramatic for the day's lesson, Chen Jinhua came to a stop, balancing perfectly on a pebble no more than two inches across. Her hanger-on carefully made her way to a small, relatively flat boulder and sat down on that, looking to her teacher expectantly.

"I've brought you here today because I want to train your ability to multitask." Chen Jinhua began, putting on her best authoritative voice. "You will listen to my words while also maintaining the integrity of your qi to keep the dangerous qi field around you at bay. Do you understand."

"Yes Ma'am!" The student nervously responded, nodding her head several times.

"Alright, then to begin I would like to ask you a question: how exactly would one quantify Dao Magic?" Chen Jinhua asked, earning a frustrated look from her Junior. Unwilling to back down from the extremely open-ended question, she hopped up and took a seat on a piece of frozen rubble, crossing her legs.

"That's... not a question that's easy to answer, Senior." The other woman replied, crossing her arms and tilting her head, causing her weighty braid to fall to that side.

"Hu Huimin, for the rest of your days, asking and answering hard questions will be a big part of your life." Chen Jinhua tittered, pulling out a long smoking pipe and lighting it.

Frankly, it was shocking how much Chen Jinhua had come to enjoy teaching, when before she'd had no patience for Juniors who couldn't figure things out. Perhaps it was just because the one she was teaching today was the kind of person she'd spent quite a bit of her life studying; she was teaching, yes, but in a way she was experimenting at the same time. It was like adding sugar to a bitter black tea, in a way.

It also helped that the woman before her was someone who picked up things very quickly. She had to be, to have become a King at the age of one hundred. Yes, this person could legitimately be called a genius, a monster, a prodigy, in the same sort of way that Shi Jiang could. Chen Jinhua was not a monster, but she was, in her humble opinion, extremely fucking smart, so having someone who could keep up made the whole affair far less frustrating.

Hu Huimin, the Remembrance King, had risen to prominence a forty years prior in battles against the Strength Purity Sect, appearing out of relative obscurity and defeating several Experts during her last decade as a Condensor. Shortly after, she had risen into the Thirteenth Heavenstage and promptly ascended to the position of Single Pillar King a few years later, at the age of exactly one-hundred. Her progress in that strange half-realm had been similarly brisk, and just eighteen years after ascending she had reached the Second Reinforcement. All in all, phenomenal growth.

Still, Cultivators who rose quickly lacked the experience of those who had taken longer to reach the same Great Realm, and so the counter-Devil task force had volunteered to aid in Hu Huimin's education, providing her with free lessons on a broad range of disciplines and tossing her bits of excess budget like a man throwing scraps of meat to a dog. Hu Huimin, ever-studious, had picked up on the lessons quite fast. Already she had grown proficient beyond her years at utilizing Dao Magic in a way that most Kings needed simple, raw experience to figure out. That was the least they could do for the second Time Shatter King, even if it was far less than what had been afforded to the last one. Shi Jiang, who was quite invested in her progress, would accept no less, and his influence was enormous for a mere Expert.

It had not really been a momentous occasion; someone had just decided to go for it, and then she had done it. Hu Huimin had become the second Single Pillar King to arise from the Heavenly Time Shatter Sect, after Wei An so many years ago. After Wei An's death, and as such the great waste of the resources that had been devoted to support him, the Sect as a whole had devoted less resources toward supporting unorthodox Cultivators, which meant far fewer had been willing to make the attempt.

She was strong, of course. No one reached the Thirteenth Heavenstage without accumulating a substantial amount of power along the way. This was actually a bit of a problem for the task force, as Kings universally being outliers in one was or another meant that there was no established baseline for how strong a King 'should' be. It didn't help that the sample size was so small; while the exact number of Single Pillar Kings in the region was unknown, it was generally estimated to be a number between twenty and twenty-five. Nearly a third of those, inexplicably, were Golden Devils, who were physically abnormal already, which made gathering data even more troublesome.

Their task force was built at least partially for that purpose, at least. Their primary goal was to study the unreadable fate of the Golden Devils in order to gain greater insight into both fate and the timeline at large. However, because the sheer number of Kings in the Golden Devils' ranks was such a massive outlier, especially given how much more difficult their tribulations were than anyone else's, studying the Kings was a huge part of that investigation. As such, their group in general, and the famous Shi Jiang in particular, were responsible for quite a big part of the Sect's knowledge of the Single Pillar Path.

Hu Huimin sighed, smoothing out the front of her robes as she composed her thoughts. "Alright. 'Dao Magic' is a term referring to any superhuman ability that is derived directly from an individual's Dao, rather than the manipulation of qi into discrete techniques. These abilities are always unique from one individual to another, with the exception of raw Emanations. The potency of a person's Dao Magic directly correlates with the density of the Dao Emanations that are expended to power its applications." She explained, flying through the definition with ease and certainty. She had memorized it, after all, just as perfectly as she memorized all other potentially useful information. "Those who have attained the Twelfth Heavenstage have a high resistance to Dao Magic, with the effects of Dao Magic on such a Cultivator being roughly equivalent to Emanations an order of magnitude less dense being used on a non-Twelfth Heavenstager."

Chen Jinhua said nothing, simply tilting her head slightly in a silent command to keep going.

Hu Huimin gulped, put off by her apparent lack of success. "Oh, right! The simplest form of Dao Magic is to release Dao Emanations directly, which have the ability to paralyze the body and soul of anyone in Qi Condensation and Foundation Building who has not attained the Twelfth Heavenstage. The difficulty a victim has with resisting this paralysis, like all other applications of Dao Magic, correlates with the density of the Emanations released. This application is known as the most primitive form of Dao Magic because any King is capable of performing it."

"That's pretty good, but you didn't answer the question: how can we quantify Dao Magic?" Chen Jinhua cut in, being sure to stress the question this time so that her charge would think more critically.

"Um... specialized equipment has been developed in recent years that can measure Emanation density, which is measured in Meta-Becquerels?" The King said nervously, knowing full well that just stating facts her teacher already knew wasn't what was being asked for. Hell, Chen Jinhua had helped invent that equipment, so it wasn't like she had anything to gain from being told about it.

"The point I'm trying to make here, Junior, is that Dao Magic is a system which rigorously defies scientific classification." Chen Jinhua stated. "You told me so much about Emanations themselves, and how they interact with Twelfth Heavenstagers, but said almost nothing about all other forms of Dao Magic. All you said was that they're unique, and that they don't involve qi."

Flushing with embarrassment, Hu Huimin bowed as low as she could without standing up. "I'm sorry Senior, I'm not really sure how to answer the question more than that. I could tell you about the observed pattern of improvement at each Reinforcement stage, I suppose?"

"There's no need, I've made my point: there are so many aspects of Dao Magic that aren't well-understood." Chen Jinhua sighed. "For instance, the seemingly arbitrary limitations of it. Hu Huimin, Can you let out some Emanations for me, and direct them straight up without letting them touch anything around you?"

"Um... no, I can't do that yet." Hu Huimin answered bashfully.

"And why not?" Chen Jinhua asked with a smirk. "Why is it easy to use Emanations one way and hard to use them another way? Why is this beyond you at the Second Reinforcement, when you'd be able to do it rather easily in the Third?"

"I don't know how to answer that, Senior. It just feels that way." Hu Huimin replied.

"If you can't even explain yourself, then do you really have an excuse? Just do it." Chen Jinhua shot back, enjoying getting a rise out of the young King.

"I'm telling you, that's not something I can do!" Hu Huimin insisted, crossing her arms. "I haven't been doing this for long; I can radiate Dao Emanations at different strengths, but I can't send them in only one direction."

Chen Jinhua continued her lecture, barely listening to her charge's complaints. "What is Dao Magic, and how does it work? In contrast to the use of qi, which is well-understood from a scientific standpoint, the manipulation of reality through the power of the Great Dao is far more difficult to study. Besides working through the medium of Emanations, Dao Magic is always different from person to person, and that goes double for the Single Pillar Kings."

"It is... hard to explain, I'm sorry." Hu Huimin sighed, fidgeting in place. "My Magic comes to me pretty intuitively, and I mostly just command it to work. It has rules, and I know what they are without having ever been told."

"And that's why, as opposed to the techniques employed with qi, the application of the Dao is called Dao Magic." Chen Jinhua nodded gravely, stopping to take a puff from her pipe. "Even after all these years of study, there's so much we don't understand, though I would bet you we're ahead of any nation in the region in that department."

From the pocket of her pants, Chen Jinhua retrieved a flat box, which she opened to reveal a ring about six inches across. It was made from onyx, mostly flat but with rounded edges, and inscribed with dense arrays. There was no decoration whatsoever; all form and no function. She used telekinesis to float it down to Hu Huimin, who hesitantly took it.

"Put it on. and slide it up to your bicep. It will adjust to fit." Chen Jinhua commanded.

"And what does it do, exactly?" The King asked, curiously turning the armlet over this way and that. "I'm not familiar with this sort of array configuration."

"In theory, it's a Dao Magic amplifier." Chen Jinhua explained. "Or rather, it's a thought amplifier, which in a roundabout sense makes it a Dao Magic Amplifier. Try it on."

Hu Huimin diligently followed, sliding the treasure up her arm underneath the loose sleeve of her robe. As Chan Jinhua had said, the armlet automatically adjusted its width, going on with no discomfort and fitting perfectly. Immediately, the King's eyes went wide and darted around as she attempted to adjust to what from her perspective must have seemed like the world slowing down a bit. In reality, it was only her own thoughts speeding up.

"Can you do it now?" Chen Jinhua asked, leaning forward propping her arm up on her knee and resting her head on her hand. "Focus your Emanations toward the sky, I mean."

Slowly, Hu Huimin looked up, pointing her hand straight up as well. With a surge of will, she released the power of her Emanations, invisible but unmistakable. At first they flew out in all directions, which would no doubt leave most Condensors and Experts in the area feeling very uncomfortable, were they not by themselves. Little by little though, Chen Jinhua felt that pressure lessen, as fewer Emanations spilled out randomly and they began to focus into a cone pointed toward the sky. She had done it.

Chen Jinhua clapped her hands, snapping Hu Huimin out of her focus. The Emanations died off as the King focused her attention back on her Senior. "Dao Emanations have no limit in their supply, but do in their rate of output. This output can be roughly calculated as 'comprehension multiplied by will'." Chen Jinhua explained, pointing at her charge's arm. "In that sense, by amplifying will, we can amplify the output of Dao Emanations, allowing a King to temporarily boost their Dao Magic to the level of a King one Reinforcement higher. As a bonus, speeding up your thoughts also improves your reaction time. Tap it twice with three fingers to turn it off."

Chen Jinhua did so, freezing for a moment as her thoughts suddenly returned to normal. "So what you're saying is, the way comprehension works is different than with qi techniques? With qi, you just need to have enough comprehension to use the technique, and more doesn't help, but with Dao, having comprehension creates more power, and so does will."

"Pretty much. The fact that that thing works more or less proves that the power is all from a mental source." Chen Jinhua answered, smiling at the armlet's success with a sort of grim satisfaction that was probably the most positive emotion Hu Huimin had seen from the scholar in quite a while. "My personal hypothesis is that qi and Dao are... counterparts, I suppose. The halves of some true omnipotent force."

The King tilted her head quizzically. "Halves? But they don't really fit together, do they?"

Flipping her pipe around, Chen Jinhua began to draw on thin air, leaving behind glowing lines where the pipe passed through. "Qi is infinite in its applications, but limited in its supply. You have a certain amount and you use it up to change the world around you, within the limits of your comprehension and training." She drew one half of the yin and yang symbol, then began work on the other. "Dao is infinite in its supply, but limited in its applications. A Cultivator with a manifested Dao endlessly creates Emanations, with the output growing as they get older, advance their cultivation or increase their Dao comprehension. But each person can only do certain things with their Dao Magic, and there's nothing that can be done to grow that besides using it creatively."

Chen Jinhua finished her drawing of the yin and yang symbol, her point clearly made. "If one combined the endless versatility of qi and the perpetual generation of Dao Emanations, they would have an omnipotent force that never depletes and can accomplish anything. That, to me, is what the Great Dao must be." With a wave of her hand, Chen Jinhua caused the drawing she had made to fade away and took another drag from her pipe. But something like that is beyond human ability."

"Fascinating..." Hu Huimin mused, no doubt thinking of her own Dao Magic. Hers was, if anything, the opposite of that theoretical Dao; it was fairly specific in what it did, albeit very powerful within that niche. "So an ultimate being would be one with an endlessly versatile Dao. One that could be applied to anything, is always active, and never runs out."

"Something like that."

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"It's me."

There was salt water in his eyes, in his mouth, in his nose. The sharpness of the salt, laced with the metallic taste of his own blood, was overwhelming. Beyond that, Gaius was aware of very little; he certainly wasn't aware of where he was or what was going on. The sun was so very bright; he couldn't see anything at all, so great was that blinding radiance.

Unbidden by any conscious effort, the Aegis sprung up around Gaius in a spherical bubble, then began to lift him into the air. His mind, sunk to the lowest depth yet, was preoccupied by only a single thought; nay, a certainty. Impaled by his own blade, his will eroded, the pieces of a puzzle Gaius had solved long ago without even realizing it fell into place.

Ten ring synchronization was impossible. Ten was the number of perfection, and so only an absolutely perfect match would allow one to form a ten ring synchronization with a Gravebronze tool; in other words, a tool made from their own body. Someone with the same soul but a different body, or the same body but a different soul, would only get nine rings at once.

The baseline material of the Dream Sword... was Gaius' own body. A product made from his own body had fallen into the hands of the Quintia of the distant past, then been passed down through their line and put into the family's treasure vault. Why? So that it would fall into Gaius' hands, returning to the true self.

"I am the Dream Sword. I am the path. I write the story."

Bloodflame poured unbidden from Gaius' veins. Every drop of blood he had was drained away and turned into fire. His body locked up in response to Varun's curse, but he couldn't move anyway. Gaius' soul and flesh alike began to melt from the heat, running like an egg yolk as he began to turn into a meaty slurry. The Dream Sword, oh so malleable, was affected too, melting into liquid metal and mixing with the soup Gaius was becoming until the two were indistinct.

Obviously, this should have killed Gaius, and yet his consciousness persisted, preserved without a brain within his own Emanations. The King's awareness was no longer trapped fully within his own body, so he could see how, from the outside, the inside of the Aegis bubble was impossible to perceive. The brightness of the ultra-concentrated Bloodflame, made by burning up all of Gaius' bloodstream at once, caused it to turn nearly white, casting a crimson glow all around and letting out heat that could be felt even through the barrier. Perhaps wary of a self-destruction, ray of heat, or some other sudden and dangerous attack, Varun stayed back and held his ground, waiting to see what would happen and maintaining a defensive posture to protect himself from it.

However, even through that inexpressive helmet, the Hunter was clearly shocked when the orb shrank. All of a sudden, it compressed from more than two meters in size to a diameter about the width of a coin. That space could no longer physically contain Gaius' body without instantly crushing him into pulp, and yet, impossibly, it did, as it did not dissipate as it would have had he died.

The quality of the Dao Emanations coming from within the orb changed massively. Not only did the sheer density of them become several times higher, but it was as if they had an edge. They seemed to rip at everything around them with destructive intent, and even Gaius, as abstract of a being as he was in that moment, felt a stinging pain from his own barely-controlled power. Quickly, everything became clear; he remembered what his plan had been, and felt the satisfaction of knowing it had succeeded.

The heat of his Bloodflame grew even more, until it began to soften the ground around the sphere which contained his consciousness, slowly turning it into semi-solid, low-temperature magma. He spoke. the sound didn't come from anywhere in particular, but was carried by his Emanations. "Looks like it worked. You tried to drown my mind, but where the psychotic drowns, the mystic swims free. You've furthered my evolution."

"What is this!? What the hell are you!?" Varun shouted, holding up one arm to shield his face from the heat.

"Throughout Heaven and Earth, I alone am The Seeker. Fall upon me, Maou Vestment!"

In response to Gaius' declaration, the bubble suddenly grew to its previous size, then dissipated along with the Bloodflame. A sphere of smooth bronze, three meters across, loudly fell to the ground, making a small crater. Water sprayed all over from the impact, creating a beautiful sight that made that moment seem to last far longer than it did.

What emerged from that sphere didn't move like a human being, or look that much like one. Rather than a living organism, it seemed more like something that had been sculpted but not given detail; the suggestion of a creature. He had a head but no face, a groin but no genitals, knuckles but no wrinkles. The armored membrane over his skin, which had been thin before, was far thicker, enough to make him resemble a solid piece of white gold in the shape of a person.

That was not the only change, though. His tall frame had been exaggerated to a staggering seven feet, a pair of sturdy bull horns stretched out from either side of his head, and a long whip-cord tail extended from the base of his spine, swaying back and forth restlessly. From his back, a large pair of wings emerged as they had in his Dao Vestment form, currently folded up tightly. These wings, however, had no feathers; they were unsightly things of membranous skin and talon-tipped bone.

In his mind's eye, Gaius saw a familiar face. Broad in the forehead, in the jaw, in the cheekbones - broad everywhere, really. A face so masculine it almost entered the realm of parody, but stopped just short. Extremely handsome, with large, bright gold eyes beneath a heavy brow. His hair was thick, lustrous and curly. It was the sort of face that was so beautiful it was ugly, and so heroic it pissed you off. It was a face Gaius had seen once before.

"JOVI CALLISTA! YOU SON OF A BITCH, WAS THIS YOUR DOING!?" Gaius bellowed, laughing like a madman, throwing his head back and reveling in the incredible sensation of being alive in a body formed entirely from his own Dao Magic. "I haven't even shaken your hand yet, but I guess you'll be my ally someday! Well, I'll be damned, you really came through!"

Two thirds of the way down his blank face, it split open along an unseen seam, the featureless flesh shaping into something more concrete. A jaw formed, followed by lips, a long and slender tongue, and sharp fanged teeth. The King opened this new mouth wide and roared wordlessly, proclaiming his triumph and aggression to the world. In the center of his forehead, the skull split open to reveal a single vertical eye, not that he really needed eyes anymore.

"You indulge in so much worthless shit!" Varun called out, running at Gaius full-tilt now that he obviously wasn't about to self-destruct. "Transformation, precognition, matter control, 'sure-kill' techniques, it's all so trite - just fight me head-on!"

"Head on? You think you deserve that!?" Gaius yelled, sinking into a powerful, offensive stance: leaning forward, legs bent one hundred degrees, one foot far in front of the other and hands up by his face. His warped physiology only served to make this position even more aggressive, like an animal the instant before it pounced.

Varun struck first with the butt of his mace, which Gaius lowered one hand to block, then with a kick, which was knocked askew by his other hand. He smoothly transitioned, spinning and launching a back kick with his other leg. Rather than defend, though, Gaius acted preemptively, stepping in and seizing his opponent's leg. He wrapped one arm around Varun's thigh and another around his calf, then spun in a half-circle and flung the Hunter.

Varun caught himself on one knee before he could fall, already beginning to rise, but Gaius was already there, his knee crashing into Varun's armored face. "You deserve to die in agony, and that's what you're gonna get!" The King shouted, hammering his foe with blows from above his guard. Varun scrambled back, trying to create distance, but Gaius was too aggressive.

Thinking fast, Varun balanced on his hands and kicked out with both legs, only for Gaius to swiftly dodge to the side, grab the Hunter's ankles and swing him over his head, slamming him into the ground. Once more, Varun hastily tucked a forearm behind the back of his head just in time, protecting his token.

Realizing the vulnerability of his position, Varun blasted his opponent with another shockwave, only for Gaius to raise his hand, a large Aegis already forming, and block the blow. At the moment of impact, the shield deformed, inverted, and became a bubble several feet across, which then compressed to only a few inches in diameter. "You kill doctors and scholars who've never touched a sword! You kill First Heavenstage children!" The King roared, jumping into the air and throwing his opponent's attack back at him at the same time.

The impromptu bomb struck Varun at point blank, kicking up a cloud of mist and dust and pushing Gaius farther into the air. He extended his wings, letting them catch the updraft, and landed on a pillar. "This ain't a sporting event, this is an execution!" He yelled into the cloud, where he could faintly make out Varun getting back to his feet, shaken but still in one piece. Damn, that armor really was something else. "It's just a shame I got a pretender and not the real strongest!"

The rush of newfound power was truly unreal. The boost in performance about the Dao Vestment was similar in scope to how far that Dao Vestment was above his base form. No, more than that, he had magnified his already magnified specs; in absolute terms, the second jump was actually bigger than the first. But it wasn't just that; his tank was refilling. New qi was being funneled into his body from some unknown source, replenishing his reserves over time, same as his will. His Emanations, too, were exploding out in a nearly uncontrollable fashion, as though the nozzle through which they passed had grown several times wider.

This was real Dao Magic: a transformation which magnified absolutely everything, a state far beyond the scope of a normal Dao Vestment. Gaius' version of the Dao Vestment incarnated him into Gaius Antonius, the idealized, perfected self that The Seeker must forever chase. However, a Dao that was perfect from the start could never be fully manifested by the Magic of a mere Fourth Reinforcement King. He could grow closer, but he could never reach that absolute state. So, it reasoned, that if he could shorten the distance once, he could shorten it again; enhance a form that was already, itself, enhanced.

That had been the theory behind the Maou Vestment, a limit-breaking form only achievable in a moment of supreme enlightenment. Gaius' plan had been to face a superior foe who would dominate the fight and push him into a corner, forcing him to grow in order to survive. Instead, he had found himself against an opponent who didn't have enough strength to do that, but whose signature weapon was perfectly suited to inducing such a state anyways.

It couldn't possibly be a coincidence. For some reason, Varun Vasistha had been perfectly placed on Gaius' path, the same way a blade forged from his own Celestial Bronze had been. This was not the time to contemplate such mysteries, however; this was the time to figure out what he could do now.

"How about you get a taste of this!?" the King exclaimed, before opening his mouth wide. Perhaps a bit theatrically, Gaius exhaled a huge cloud of golden motes which spread out in a narrow cone. When those motes got near Varun(and more importantly, far enough away from Gaius), they began to change, becoming a sickly pale yellow gas which spread through the area and blanketed the Fifth Sea Warrior.

"I really did it." Gaius remarked, feeling a rush of excitement flow through him. "I made mustard gas, even though I don't know its chemical structure. With my expanded comprehension, just knowing what something looks like and what it does is enough to make it with Stars of Gold now!"

"It doesn't matter! Don't get too cocky, demon!" Varun scoffed, emerging from the thick toxic cloud with a confident stride, none the worse for wear. "My helmet filters toxins. Did you think I wouldn't be prepared for the most obvious way around my armor?" He spread out his arms, holding his heavy mace one-handed with casual ease.

"This doesn't work, that doesn't work, this other thing doesn't work!" Gaius growled. "You sure are a tough nut to crack, ain'tcha?"

"You said it yourself: this isn't a sporting event." Varun rested his hammer on his shoulder and gestured in his direction with his free hand, wordlessly telling the King to come at him. "I'll use everything at my disposal. For the sake of the world's safety, all demons must be wiped out, and you're one of the worst demons of all."

"Then let's see it! Let's see if you can wipe me out!" Gaius retorted, leaping down from his perch to assail his opponent. As he fell, he materialized a spear in either hand, then threw them one after the other. Varun knocked them both out of the air, but it left him open to Gaius' next attack, a kick which snapped his head back.

He'd already proved that his ability to create matter was at a much higher level in this form, thanks to improved qi comprehension. Now, it was time to take that and test out something much scarier. Focusing his will into his arm below the elbow, Gaius... destroyed it. Or rather, he turned it into motes of light. Then, pulling the motes back in, he reformed it in a different shape. Normally, that would be an unthinkably complicated process, but a body made of solid Dao Magic was much easier to shape through intention. This new appendage came together not into a hand, but a blunt spike, a lengthened nub of bone with a tip perhaps one inch in diameter, similar in shape and function to the beak of a warhammer.

Drawing Varun's guard up with a left-handed feint, Gaius lunged forward with his right side instead. He slammed the altered hand right into his opponent's face. The result was immediate and satisfying; Varun was knocked back several feet from the full force of Gaius' haymaker, groaning in pain in a way he hadn't from previous punches. He fired another shockwave, which Gaius jumped over.

This time he changed his foot, reshaping it into a raptor's talons. Clamping onto the Hunter's shoulder, Gaius took to the air and carried Varun off with him. Before the Hunter could properly react and hit him with the big scary hammer, Gaius immediately spun around several times mid-flight before throwing him into a pillar, which toppled over from the force of the impact.

Not wishing to give his opponent a chance to adjust, Gaius changed his hand and foot back into their proper shape, diving after his opponent and continuing the close-combat assault. After several more volleys of strikes, Varun finally seemed to adapt to the pace of Gaius' movement, blocking several strikes and slamming his mace into the King's side, which cracked a few ribs. Gaius slid back ten feet and stopped moving for a moment, his torso briefly deforming as he replaced those ribs.

"That ain't gonna work!" Gaius laughed, preparing to rush back in, only to suddenly stop moving. It wasn't that he chose to stop; he was unable to move at all. His perception grew dim and hazy, all of it replaced by an intense pain. Something inside of him was twisting, stretching, on the edge of tearing; everything felt so horribly wrong.

Ah, that was right, he'd almost forgotten; this was an impossible transformation which broke his normal limits. By putting on the same vestment twice, he had become a living paradox. His whole body shook and quaked, his Emanations weakening and his qi signature seeming to be everywhere and nowhere simultaneously. Varun was probably going to take advantage of-

Suddenly, a massive impact struck Gaius' leg at the knee, breaking it backwards and sending him to the ground, then another hit him across the head, snapping off one of his horns and making the world explode with colors. As much out of instinct as it was out of conscious decision, Gaius sank into the ground, avoiding the killing blow. A moment after that, the sensation of being unmade came to an end.

Gaius' awareness burst back into its normal state, prompting a huge gasp of air from him. He rocketed back to the surface, bursting out with such force that he was propelled into the air and landed atop a pillar on his intact leg. Varun responded immediately, blasting the pillar with a shockwave, but by the time it hit, Gaius was already re-creating his leg in the proper shape. He jumped off the crumbling pillar, getting right back into the melee.

Unable to use Bloodflame and having lost his sword, Gaius' only recourse was to simply pummel his nearly-invulnerable opponent until he gave out. His blows smashed into Varun one after another, overwhelming his attempts at defense with terrifying power and horrendous precision. Some were with newly-created weapons, others with altered body parts, and yet more with bog-standard barehanded martial arts. He switched between them seamlessly and breathlessly, a jaw-dropping demonstration of total combat mastery.

His movements were not only unpredictable, but carried raw speed and power in excess of before. It was simple mathematics: by Gaius' estimation, his strength and speed both grew by a factor of about 1.6 in Dao Vestment, his every action buoyed by his overflowing Emanations. Maou Vestment, which forcibly layered another instance of Dao Vestment onto itself, thus enhanced him by a factor of 1.6^2, or 2.56.

However, despite the gap in performance, Varun soldiered on with impressive determination. That moment of weakness, in which Gaius' focus had slipped and his Maou Vestment had nearly killed him, had given his opponent an important lesson: Gaius could only keep this form up for a limited amount of time. Exactly what the time limit was, Gaius couldn't say for sure, but if Varun could outlast the form, he had a chance at victory.

This back-and-forth dance went on for some time, a furious exchange of blows in which Varun consistently remained on the disadvantage, but received no major damage, allowing him to bounce back again and again and land hits where he could. Not that those hits did much to Gaius besides delay him further, but under this harmful new transformation, that was already dangerous. Gaius would have liked to simply wrestle his opponent to the ground and break his limbs, but staying still wasn't viable either, thanks to those powerful shockwaves. For the moment, there was nothing more to do but continue the fight and look for more advantages.

In the meantime, there was something strange creeping in at the edges of Gaius' perception. It shouldn't have been possible, given he was in a closed off space, but perhaps it wasn't as isolated as it seemed. After all, for the Iron Pillar to send the competitors to their individual zones, there had to remain some sort of connection between them all, even if in three dimensions they seemed totally distinct.

But whatever the reason was, the King could faintly feel them all. The fighting spirits of his comrades, struggling to survive and to crush their opponents. Surging qi, flaring wills, thirteen in all. Twelve other competitors, plus the Grand Elder. None of them were at full strength, obviously; some were flagging more than others, but all were wounded in some capacity.

More than their strength, though, Gaius felt their limitations. All of those walls and barriers between them and their full potential, like so much grime, building up and congealing since the birth of the universe. It was said that all people were infinite and omnipotent, and that cultivation was the method by which one reached one's true self; never more did that feel so clear to Gaius as it did right now.

There was another being here, actually, one he recognized instinctually as a Devil. Only, there was no solidity to that presence; it was merely an afterimage, the impression left on the world after that person had already left. Whoever they were, their strength was so great as to feel like a full person merely from that. They tasted of sorrow, of regret, of bitterness and failure, and of a great determination to undo all of that. Ah, a ghost, only half-awake and half-aware, acting on instinct alone.

What if he just... reached out and knocked those walls down? Not all of them, certainly, he couldn't hope to do that even with a thousand times more power than he had. But right now, in this impossible form, in this impossible place beyond space and time, Gaius felt more real, more alive, than he had ever been.

Rina, in particular, was a unique existence among the others. Beneath the paper-thin layer of humanity that was her flesh, there was an idea, complete and well-formed enough to exist on its own, without so many pesky physical laws to bind it. It was like an infant that had finished gestating and was now ready to breathe the same air as its fellow humans. He understood now what the Golden King had been aiming to do here.

It wasn't just Rina, even if she was the most dramatic case. Each and every one of these people had a new step, a better version of themselves, slumbering beneath the surface, ready to break through if not for all these layers and walls of weakness and doubt in the way. It was an affront to him, to see such great people, with such strong ambitions, dreams and desires, limited by something so mundane and limiting as reality.

And so, Gaius began to speak; not through his mouth, but through his overflowing Emanations. He pushed at them, in the higher dimensions his eyes couldn't perceive, and felt the walls of this place giving way. His comrades came into greater focus. Even as he continued to fight, avoiding Varun's strikes and hitting back with all the diabolical strength he could muster, the Hollow King made an announcement at the same time.

"All of you. Heroes, Devils, warriors of great ambition, you have to wake up. The potential within you is still sleeping, the greater self you were meant to be! Let it out! None of you understand the power of the Great Dao. Not the Grand Elder. Not the Shining Hope. Not even that old ghost who just left."

He could feel it already, the quaking in their souls. Too much pressure, and he might cause some catastrophic reaction; already, the bubble in which this competition was being held was pressing back against his intrusion. It might unmake him and everyone here if he, in his fumbling, touched the wrong place. Or perhaps he would break open a breach in this dimension, letting unreality come flooding in; maybe that was too arrogant of him. If that incomprehensibly strong ghost hadn't done that, then it was sturdy to withstand whatever a mere King could do.

But then, could he even be classified as a normal King anymore? Best to hurry up. He pressed harder, clawing and ripping at his fellows, tearing the barriers blocking their potential out of them in big, heavy chunks.

"Feel my Emanations inside of your bodies and minds. Don't fight them, go along with them! Feel the sleeping power within you! Pull yourselves higher and higher, and grab ahold of the future with your own two hands! WAKE UP!"

----

Redmoon was not having a good time today.

Lying there on what might be a literal sacrificial altar, with who knows how many fractures, trying her best to keep breathing and stay awake through the haze of pain, she could not help but reflect upon her journey thus far, and how it had brought her here. Perhaps she had reached for too much, too fast. Perhaps the Altar Lord had seen more in her than there really was. After all, nowadays Kings were not as miraculous as they used to be - she'd gotten too cocky.

But then, wasn't that the point of being a King in the first place? Redmoon would not, could not accept that notion, nor could she ever lay down her pride. Her goal was to bring forth a new, pure world - she couldn't get discouraged by something like this. And so, through the exhaustion and the pain, the Purity King got back to her feet.

"I think we're just about done. Are you ready to let me kill you yet?" Sanjit called out, cracking his knuckles languidly. He casually stood upside-down on the roof of the temple, lording his untouchability over his opponent gleefully.

That said, for all of his boasting, the Hunter hadn't come out completely unscaled either. She'd nicked him several times, and even managed a deeper cut across his thigh, robbing him of a significant sum of qi. Furthermore, Sanjit's teleportation was surprisingly cheap, but it was not free; using it over and over was tiring him out, as was his attraction technique. She could, in theory, still win a battle of attrition, if her body didn't give out first. The fact that it hadn't already succumbed was a small miracle in itself.

One bright side: she had quite a bit of spilled blood to work with now. She gathered a mass of it into a tight point and launched it as a lance, which Sanjit teleported out of the way of. The instant that happened, she fired off a ring of blood around her, hoping to hit the Hunter no matter where he had appeared. To her left, she heard him curse, alongside the sound of flesh being sliced and the sensation of her qi reserves refilling a bit.

Suddenly, Sanjit was right in front of her, his foot appearing mid-kick less than an inch from her face and crashing into her. Redmoon went sprawling, and before she even came to a stop, she was struck by another explosion, sending her tumbling until she lay at the edge of the firepit, the heat of the nearby flames tickling her back unpleasantly. "Redmoon, I want you to admit your loss and let me kill you." The Hunter called out, spinning one of his spheres on the tip of his finger. "I want to take your life away as casually as taking a piss."

Hm. She should have been able to react to that kick. It would have hit her no matter what, but normally she would be fast enough to partially move out of the way and roll with the blow, greatly reducing its impact and allowing her to strike back. That she failed to react at all until she was already hit was a sign that her reaction time had drastically fallen. She really was at her limit. Everything hurt.

"Wake up!"

A pulse. A ripple. Something stirring, something she couldn't name.

"The potential within you is still sleeping, the greater self you were meant to be! Let it out!"

A writhing. A snarling. Something growing, a battle cry echoing forth from deep within.

It was awful. It was beautiful. A nauseating lurching took hold deep inside of Redmoon's body, forcibly shattering wall after wall with no concern for her own comfort or safety. Her Emanations quaked, becoming unstable, rapidly oscillating up and down in intensity.

"Maybe this'll help you go to sleep!" Sanjit laughed, teleporting in between a wall and a heavily damaged pillar. He propped his back up against the wall and used his legs to push the pillar with all his might until it broke. The huge stone column fell toward Redmoon, poised to crush her to death.

She was a purifier, a destroyer of wickedness. What in the world was she doing, being made a fool of by a weakling, a charlatan with nothing to his name but a few overpowered parlor tricks!? That wasn't right at all; someone who fell prey to a feeble sinner like him could not even save themself, let alone others!

Dao Emanations exploded out of Redmoon, in far greater density than she had ever managed before. To her, they seemed nearly endless, a river of untapped power which flowed out from her very mind. And, without being taught, she knew exactly what to do with it.

Redmoon turned the palm of her right hand upward, curling her fingers as if she were holding the underside of a fancy cup, with the stem between her second and third fingers.

"Chalice."

The Emanations which had been overflowing from her body in all directions retracted, concentrating, swirling together in her hand. She poured her qi into that same hand, mixing the two power sources together in the same vessel until the emanations took on a physical form. They stirred up the air, creating a powerful, violent cyclone in the palm of Redmoon's hand. A Divine Wind.

At her unspoken command, it lashed out, mighty gusts striking like the tendrils of some massive monster and blowing the pillar to pieces. One of them struck a glancing blow against Sanjit, who had been about to teleport away. To his horror, he now found that he could not. Another burst of wind attacked from a different angle, plowing into the Hunter and carrying him along, dragging him across the wall before flinging him away.

"Gah! What's all this then, Redmoon? Were you hiding your secret technique!?" Sanjit shouted indignantly, deftly dodging blast after blast of wind. He really was quick on his feet, Redmoon distantly noted. The speed of a hare, ever desperate to avoid the jaws of the wolf.

After a few seconds, Sanjit's qi, previously neutralized, came roaring back, and he grinned, preparing to make his counterattack. Preemptively setting up her next move, Redmoon turned her hand over, causing the Divine Wind to immediately stop blowing. Next, she made a half-circle with each hand and joined them together, finger-to-finger and thumb-to-thumb, making a full circle.

"Wheel."

From beneath Redmoon's feet, stirring from nothing, the Divine Wind surged and swirled, creating a tornado one hundred feet across. Only she, standing in the center, was safe from that rending assault. Sanjit teleported in above and behind her and was immediately struck, the qi surrounding his body being forcibly dissipated as he was flung helplessly into the air. The shocked look on his face was worryingly intoxicating; she shouldn't be reveling in this battle too much, Redmoon reminded herself.

Dismissing the manifestation of the Wheel, Redmoon made another sign, pressing her index, middle and third fingers together and pointing them all at her airborne opponent.

"Arrow."

The wind once more obeyed her command, blowing out from her fingers in a straight line ten feet wide. It reached Sanjit before he could reactivate his teleportation, once more destroying whatever half-formed techniques he was cycling and blasting him back. He smashed into the wall at hundreds of miles per hour, making a substantial crater.

Sanjit fell to the ground, coughing up blood from a damaged lung. No doubt several of his ribs had broken after an impact like that; he wasn't particularly sturdy. Redmoon aimed her fingers again, firing off another huge blast of Divine Wind, but Sanjit leapt into the air, just barely getting over the danger. He threw a dozen glass orbs at Redmoon in a haphazard fashion, setting off a dazzling and very loud series of explosions.

By the time the flash died down and the King could see clearly again, Sanjit had already scampered off. A few seconds passed, after which the disruption wore off again. The Hunter wouldn't face directly again after this; he'd taken a bad hit, and didn't seem like a very courageous sort. Things would get a bit trickier from here on out.

"You're already wounded, you know. I have no reason to dignify you with a fair clash." Sanjit sneered from atop a fallen statue, teleporting away before her retaliatory blast of wind could strike him. "You're a close-range fighter, and this new gimmick doesn't change that. You have no ranged attacks fast enough to hit me without surprise. I'll simply continue to strike you until you go down." He continued, now behind her, his tone growing ever more arrogant and contemptuous. Once again, he teleported away before her blast could strike him, and another cluster of explosions struck Redmoon from above.

The King fell to one knee, gritting her teeth against the pain. She'd just gotten these abilities a few minutes ago; she didn't know how to use them creatively yet. There were no doubt countless ways to blend the Divine Wind with her pre-existing techniques, but she would need time to experiment. The only way she was getting out of this was by playing the cards she had in the right order, at the right times. Redmoon once more forced herself to stand, narrowly dodging another assault from her constantly mobile opponent. One of the bombs suddenly changed direction and came back at her, but this time she was ready for that trick, and dodged once more.

"You have no resolve at all, Hunter." She declared, balling up her fists and extending her thumbs. "Resolve will bring us into a new, purified world, and it's with resolve that I will win this battle." Pointing one thumb down and the other one up, she touched the tips together, stirring up her Divine Wind once more.

"Double Vajra."

The pain was immediate, and clarifying. Being struck by her own hostile Emanations helped Redmoon to understand an aspect of herself which she had never before been able to consider directly. So this was what her killing intent felt like to her enemies; it was frightening, she had to admit, being on the other end of such benevolent violence.

The wind tore at her flesh like razors, rapidly draining her qi and rending her with dozens of painful cuts. Sanjit cried out in pain and tumbled across the ground, losing both his balance and the rapid teleportation he'd been maintaining. Running and teleporting at the same time, if the one doing so had enough coordination to pull it off, would no doubt make one incredibly hard to hit, but such a state required intense focus which was easily disrupted. The sudden, painful attack, plus the snuffing out of his technique, shocked Sanjit and left him unable to respond for a moment.

Redmoon covered most of the distance between them in that moment, until only another twenty feet of distance remained. She felt Sanjit spin up his technique once more and responded, summoning another Wheel. This time, as she flung him into the air, she jumped into the current of wind herself, letting herself be launched in the same direction.

She slashed at the Hunter in mid-air, drawing a nasty-looking gash across his chest and knocking him back to the ground. Sanjit righted himself before he could strike the ground, managing to fall on his feet. Seeing Redmoon falling towards him with a downward slash, Sanjit charged up a huge blast to blow his opponent away. Undeterred, the King held the back of her fist against the blade of her sword, summoning up her Emanations once more.

"Sword."

This time, the Divine Wind wound around her blade at incredible speeds, transforming it into a miniature cyclone. Redmoon swung with all of her strength, smashing right through the attack and cleaving through Sanjit's arm. His hand went flying, spurting not blood, but only pure water. In that one attack, she had sucked out nearly half of her opponent's blood supply and broken it down into qi.

He screamed, as most people would, clutching at the stump where his arm had just been and trying not to succumb to unconsciousness or shock. For just one wavering moment, Redmoon saw bloodlust in his eyes, an urge to stay and avenge this injury, no matter the risk. The emotion passed almost immediately; this Hunter was not that sort of beast. Redmoon tried to finish him off, but Sanjit's own fist struck his token before her blade could reach his neck, and then he was gone.

Redmoon collapsed to her knees, awash in the thrill of victory, as well as the relief of her life no longer being in danger. Her head hurt... a lot. Oh wow, it hurt quite a bit actually, more than it should have even with all the hits she took. The King doubled over, clutching at her head at images, concepts and ideas that were not her own flashed uncontrollably through her mind. Her body quickly processed the huge amount of qi she had taken from Sanjit, but she could feel something else floating in that mass too. Some hard, solid lump, difficult to digest, causing her insides to alight with fire.

Was this the work of those horrible Emanations Gaius had put out; were those making her take in more than usual, more than what was safe? Or was it another side-effect of Redmoon's own growth, and the increasing sophistication of her Dao Magic?

Space was not as uniform as it was perceived. It imperceptibly flexed and relaxed constantly, like a giant fabric or a great ocean which swallowed all. The fastest route between two points was a straight line, but not all straight lines were equal. There existed dimensions and directions which the human mind normally could not process, ones which her brain was being forced to process. By reaching into the fourth, the third could be folded, bringing two distant points into direct proximity. One need only pass through that now non-existent distance, then release the hold.

The lump shrank, slowly dissolving, becoming one with the hunter, the predator, the carnivore, the taker.

"I see..."

----

There came a certain point where a fight lost its novelty. That wasn't to say it got boring, certainly, but that patterns began to develop, ones which were followed again and again. Some things could be done differently, but the push and pull of strengths and weaknesses would, after a period of experimentation, develop a framing within which every decision in the fight had to be made.

For instance; in terms of the resources each man had on hand, Varun clearly held the upper hand, and no compunctions about using it. Gaius' heavy blows, which came mercilessly and struck the other man again and again, would have killed him a few times over by now if not for Varun's armor. His mace, too, broke Gaius' bones and sent him flying whenever it managed to successfully hit him.

For all of Gaius' other advantages, this was one which could not be ignored. With his Bloodflame sealed away on top of that, he had no choice but to chip away at Varun ever so patiently. Oh, the storm of blows they were throwing at one another could hardly be called 'chipping away', but that was another thing about fights: you could never get the full picture of one unless you were in it.

Gaius kicked Varun in the midsection, driving him back and pursuing. He swayed back to avoid a mace strike, then punched his armored foe square in the face, pressing him against a salt pillar. He pressed the attack with a flurry of blows, the Maou Vestment's reinforcing Emanations allowing his body to perform at a level that would be unthinkable to him normally. He drove Varun into the pillar like he was hammering a nail, until the whole thing collapsed, raining white crystals down upon their heads.

Varun swung again, striking a crystal as it fell and launching it toward Gaius, who deftly shattered it with his fist. This disturbed the strike that had been branded onto it, which unleashed itself into Gaius' face, breaking several of his teeth and sending him flying onto his back. That damn branding; it was an incredibly difficult move for Tabula Rasa to predict, as it could be used at any time on any swing, and applied to any surface.

But even so, this wouldn't take much longer; Varun was running out of steam. Gaius spat out his broken teeth, quickly reforming his jaw into an intact state, and got back on his feet. Varun, his breathing heavy and his stance unsteady, shook his head rapidly, no doubt trying to fight through a concussion.

No matter how invincible one's armor was, it would not literally stop all energy. If it did that, it would be impossible to move at all - there had to be some give. As such, armor too durable for someone in the same Great Realm to break was more like a durability multiplier, reducing the damage of a blow to a small fraction of what it would have been. An edged blow could be deflected partially or entirely - and most armor was in fact molded for this purpose - which caused the vast majority of the weapon's force to be negated. Blunt force, on the other had, had a larger striking area and could not be as effectively deflected; much more of that would get through.

In other words, barehanded attacks could never be totally negated, so long as the attacker's own body did not break in the process. And in Maou Vestment, that was not a problem; he was a true shapeshifter, albeit one who did not yet comprehend his own limits, and thus he could repair most physical injuries by simply remaking himself to be whole again. Gaius would be careful in this live test, using only the applications which were both relatively easy to perform and certain to be effective.

Not only that, but the armor which had caused this fight to drag on for so long in the first place was finally falling under the sway of Gaius' Dao Magic. It had taken a long time, relatively speaking. The structure of Gravesilver was exponentially more complex than that of Gravebronze, and this armor had no doubt been worked on by only the most truly exceptional of craftsmen since it was first forged. Even so, flaws did exist in its structure. Locations where it had been damaged and repaired, as well as locations where an old injury on the Devil themself had manifested in microscopic weak points. But now, Tabula Rasa had taken that information and added it into the predictive process, guiding Gaius' strikes unerringly.

Gaius charged back into the fray. As he narrowly dodged a ferocious hammer swing, his fingertips dissolved and reformed, becoming the ugly, half-mechanical products of some demented surgery. His fingers terminated in drills, each of which came to a wickedly sharp point. It came to him rather easily, how to make this, even though he had never seen it in real life. Perhaps he was just more enlightened than normal in this state.

He jabbed, striking at those tiny weak points with finger-strikes again and again. Varun, try as he might, could not land a hit, growing ever more desperate and furious as the exchange went on. The Hunter roared, bringing his weapon down on the ground and setting off an explosion which launched Gaius into the air.

Now that some distance was made, Gaius gathered the light around him and made a dozen tiny drills, identical to the ones which tipped his fingers, and commanded them to spin. He launched them with both great force and fine control; Varun knocked half out of the air, but the others struck home, stubbornly whirring and pressing into his weak points like vengeful insects.

Gathering his qi into a shell around his body, Varun roared with exertion, creating another shockwave. This one, rather than directed, was spherical, clearing the air around him of those projectiles. Softening his mace into a flail again, he swung at Gaius over and over, attacking with frantic speed many times per second. With surgical precision Gaius dodged them all, quickly closing the distance.

As the Devil approached, Varun suddenly made his weapon rigid once more and slammed it down, only for Gaius to reach up and catch the head of the mace with his hands. Ordinarily such a thing would be suicidal, given how quickly that huge sphere degraded one's will, but that was no issue now. Gaius had an endless supply of will, flowing into him from nowhere. Having stopped the attack, Gaius struck out with a now drill-tipped tail, boring into a particularly worn-down spot on Varun's abdomen. After a moment, something finally gave way.

With an ominous crack, fractures appeared in the Gleaming Garb, a spider's web reaching this way and that. One weak point giving way exacerbated the others, compromising the structural integrity of the armor as a whole. Finally, a pathway opened. The endless series of simulations running through Gaius' mind began predicting a course toward his inevitable triumph.

Varun would fire another shockwave. Gaius leapt backwards preemptively, shielding himself with his wings and summoning an Aegis in the fraction of a second before it happened, allowing the attack to launch him backwards through the air. After precisely 3.7 seconds, he spread his wings, slowing his trajectory just enough to collide with the salt pillar behind him feet-first without going through it. He kicked off, propelling himself forward and toward the ground, which he smoothly submerged himself into.

He emerged a moment later, creating a spear with Stars of Gold and driving it into a crack in Varun's armor. Varun broke the spear in half with his knee and elbow, then counter-attacked with his mace. Gaius fended off another series of strikes as Varun spun his mace this way and that, attacking from all angles and at all ranges to try and drive him away. His opponent did not grow weaker as the fight went on, but instead attacked with greater and greater ferocity as he was pushed into a corner. Nonetheless, it was still not enough; the optimal path through was clear to him, playing out before his vision like a rehearsal before he even performed it.

Spinning out of the way of a thrust to drive his elbow into Varun's temple, he then kicked out the Hunter's leg, sending him to one knee. He then quickly rolled over Varun's back to avoid his next swing, then pinned the mace in place with his armpit and his elbow. Finally, he shaped his fingertips into sharp, thin claws and rammed them through a crack in Varun's armor.

Finally, he heard the squelch of pierced flesh. Finally, he felt his opponent's body give way before superior force. Finally, he saw hot, red blood spill from the Hunter's body. Varun pitched forward and dropped his mace, and Gaius kneeled down to his level, grabbing his opponent's shoulder and ramming his claws deeper into Varun's chest.

Gaius leaned forward, wrapped up in the sheer intimacy of this moment, with his hand feeling the warmth of another person's insides. The Seeker began to whisper in his opponent's hear as he choked and gasped. "You're strong, you know. Damn strong. You've got all sorts of shiny skills, lots of determination, and you're smart too. Just one problem." His lips pulled back into a savage, fanged grin, the face of a true Devil. "You just ain't as strong as me. This is why I asked for the strongest. You oughta just unseal my Bloodflame and give yourself a quick death, 'stead of chewing on your misery like this."

Indeed, no one could deny that Varun was not a capable warrior. He was dangerous, thoroughly and holistically, and could definitely defeat most of his teammates, though tokens complicated the matter. It could have been a wonderful fight, if Gaius was weaker. A part of the King was bitterly disappointed that he couldn't have had something to draw out everything he was capable of, even if his gambit had succeeded.

But before Gaius could press the attack any further, something terrible happened: his body locked up once again. He shook and trembled, limbs twisting this way and that as his body fought the urge to spread all of its particles across the universe in an equidistant pattern. That would probably be very bad to do. Varun blasted Gaius point-blank with a shockwave, breaking several of his ribs and puncturing a lung. He was blasted backwards into a salt pillar, which broke in half and fell on him, adding insult to injury.

As Gaius fell to his knees vomiting blood and working on the brief but difficult process of recreating his torso, Varun was also having a very bad time. That last attack had some serious damage; he had felt his opponent's insides being torn up quite vividly, in fact. With wounds like that, plus an ailing soul and a body covered in bruises from all those hits his armor had only mostly absorbed, Varun wouldn't be fighting for much longer at all.

Of course, Gaius had even less time left. This form should have already fallen apart. The strain of forcing a logical paradox to remain in existence was killing him - literally. The next time Gaius lost his grip on the Maou Vestment, he would be unmade.

"Fifteen... no, ten seconds! You've run out of time, I can feel your qi signature falling apart!" Varun shouted, staggering back to his feet as blood poured out from the holes in his armor and mixed with the water around his feet. He picked up his weapon, gripping it with both hands. "You'll rip yourself out of existence in ten seconds!" His qi blazed like the sun, pouring endlessly into the Mindbreaker Maul. A lesser weapon would have exploded from the sheer amount of energy, but it held it without complaint, churning with incredible power.

"That's all I need!" Gaius cackled, concentrating his donated qi into his arm, which immediately discorporated. When it came back together, it could hardly be said to resemble an arm at all. A massive, bulging mound of muscle and metal many times larger than an ordinary arm, topped by a mining drill three feet across. Gradually, it began to whir, Gaius rearing it back as Varun bore down on him.

This was good, the King thought as he charged back. For all he hated Varun's guts, and those of every other invader, he could not deny that the Hunter truly looked beautiful right now. A human life, blazing with determination as it fights for life, for pride, for principle, for ambition. This was when a person truly became something sublime; something asserting its existence, rather than coasting through it. I am real. I am real. I am real.

I am more real than you.


The shining sun illuminating their struggle, the sky reflected beneath their feet, the two warriors reached one another, braced their feet, and swung with all their might. The drill-arm met the hammer-

And blew it away. Varun skidded past Gaius empty handed and allowed his weapon to be knocked out of his grip. There had been no clash at all; the weapon had simply bounced off as if it had barely any momentum behind it at all. All of the qi that Varun had poured into the strike seemed to have vanished at the point of contact.

But there was no time to contemplate this, as the King had finally reached his time limit. As intense pain filled his body, which threatened to rip-tear-twist-crunch itself to peaced, he had no choice but to finally let go. Like a piece of elastic that had been stretched far too tight, the Maou Vestment came undone the second Gaius' iron grip on that transformation was released. And, of course, his transformed arm went back to normal, disturbing the brand Varun had left there containing almost all of his remaining qi.

As Gaius' transformation dissipated, the delayed strike went off, obliterating everything around it in a huge thunderclap. The ground was cratered fifty feet across, spraying water everywhere with such force that it turned to mist. It was a perfect maneuver.

...If not for the fact that when the form of the Maou Vestment dissipated, there was nothing behind it. It burst apart and left behind only empty air.

As Varun stared in uncomprehending shock for a single, vulnerable moment, a blade slipped through one of the cracks in his breastplate and into his back. Gaius stood behind Varun, reduced back down to his normal form and holding a sword whose blade was so paper-thin and delicate, the slightest wrong move might snap it. But it was also thin enough to get through that crack and into Varun's lung, which it had done.

The Hunter crumpled to the ground, already spitting up mouthfuls of blood into the inside of his own helmet. It welled up inside of that indestructible suit, dripping through the numerous cracks where the flow had previously stemmed. Gaius took several steps back, drenched in sweat but otherwise unharmed - beyond the wounds he already had when he transformed.

"I can make hard light, dumbass! What made you think I couldn't make it in the shape of myself!?" Gaius jeered, slapping his thigh and letting out peals of cruel laughter.

"You wouldn't even give me the dignity of exchanging finishing moves. It's my fault for expecting better of you." Varun mumbled, voice overcome with frustration but resigned to his fate. Even in as dire straits as he was, the Hammer of the Sage still didn't reach behind his head to break his token.

"You don't deserve no fuckin' dignity!" Gaius yelled, summoning up what qi he still had. "But speakin' of finishers, you're all dried up now, ain'tcha?" Gaius smirked, pointing his palm at Varun. "It's over."

Bloodflame engulfed Varun's body for a moment, driving him to his knees, before the curse that had latched onto Gaius earlier took effect and snuffed the technique out. "Wow, it really did take away my ability to control my qi. I can't feel it all!" Gaius exclaimed, impressed by how total the spiritual numbness was. "Maybe if you'd specialized in curses instead of swingin' that stick around, you wouldn't be dyin' on the ground right now."

After precisely fifteen seconds, Gaius' qi came back under his control, and he blasted Varun again. Over and over, he burned Varun with all the strength he could muster in those split-second flashes, and each time, the signal, the self that was Varun Vasistha faded a little more.

"I was right. I was dead on." Varun wheezed, trembling on his hands and knees as his soul was gradually blasted away. "You'll destroy everything, you demon bastards. Why did you have to come here? You ruin everything you touch."

"Dying curses? You're fuckin' feisty! You still aren't running away, I'll give you kudos for that!" Gaius shouted. He continued his attacks unabated, every fifteen seconds on the spot, forcing his wounded and tired body to remain standing as he crushed his opponent bit by bit. The Cruel Edict only served to siphon out the last remnants of Varun's qi even more. The water around Varun was evaporated by each blast, then more water flowed back into the new dry spot, only to be vaporized again by the next blast.

In between his cries of pain, Varun's parting words were surprisingly coherent and composed.

"May you take everything you want!"

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"May you live as you wish!"

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"May you wear the crown as long as your tender neck can bear it!"

fwoosh

"Then, at your moment of greatest triumph, may you lose it all and die a cruel, miserable death!"

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The flames roared in strength, and this time, the curse did not snuff them out. They persisted, feasting on the tinder that was Varun's soul even as they did nothing to melt or blacken his armor. Gaius let it burn for another minute, until he could feel his supply of blood running dangerously low, then finally cut the stream off.

It was done with. They hadn't given him the strongest hunter after all, most likely, but in the end things had worked out. He had attained greater strength, won his fight, and punished an impertinent invader who dared to come here to massacre his people. All that was left was the traditional victory dance of the Cultivator: looting.

After taking a minute to simply catch his breath, Gaius got down on one knee, flipping Varun's body over and searching for some kind of straps or latches he could lose to take his armor off. Before he could get anywhere, however, a quaking similar to what had occurred before the pair were taken here began - this time centered around the Hunter's body. Gaius got to his feet and stumbled backwards, trying to get out of range of whatever was about to happen. After the amount of exhaustion and abuse he'd put himself through, he wasn't sure how much fight he had left in him, if any at all.

Ultimately, there was no self-destruct, anti-theft attack, or anything of the sort; Varun and his weapon simply vanished. Gaius cursed, stomping his foot and kicking up small plumes of water. Damn it, that was some incredibly valuable loot! "Guess that was pretty smart of 'em." The King sighed, planting his hands on his hips.

Nothing left to do now but wait to be sent back.

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This fight is one I've been thinking about for... half a year, I think? Maybe not that long, but a long time, ever since the Special Trial became a thing. In order to make the showdown more dramatic, I asked to take a -20 penalty to Gaius' fate roll before the fight. In terms of actual mechanical benefit, all this did was retroactively heal one of the others by one step, but the reason I did it was just to make it more dangerous.

Gaius' original plan was to face off against the strongest possible opponent with no chance of escape, in order to forcibly evolve his Dao Magic and potentially trigger a jump into the Fifth Reinforcement. While he didn't manage the latter, he did unlock the Maou Vestment, which is some insane shit. Varun was far from the strongest of the Hunters(he's the fifth strongest, iirc, since these guys were listed roughly from weakest to strongest), but his weapon happened to be perfectly suited to what Gaius wanted to do, so it worked out. Gaius was also handicapped the whole time because he didn't have access to Scylla, ignored potential ways to kill him early on because he wanted to be pushed into a corner, and deliberately killed him the hard way after transforming because he wanted to test out his new abilities.

Mechanically, I just got rid of the 6-impact Dream Sword and replaced it with the 6-impact Maou Vestment, because Stars of Gold can already create weapons on-demand which are at Gaius' strength level, which covers most of what the Dream Sword does anyway. In total, Gaius now has a net Impact of 30: -6 for insanity, 6 for Scylla, 6 for the Maou Vestment, 6 for the Blood-Forge Constitution and 18 for Stars of Gold. Since a King in the Fourth Reinforcement is equivalent to a Foundation-level Cultivator with twelve small realms from their base capability, that means Gaius' total combat ability is that of a Foundation Establishment Cultivator with 22 small realms' worth of power. Sounds crazy strong, but he's actually eleven small realms behind Wei Feng in effective combat power. No matter how high you climb, there's always someone whose kung fu can kick the shit out of yours.

As for all of this other trippy stuff, it's mainly foreshadowing for future twists. Why did Gaius, in his half-lucid state where he was generating additional Will through this mysterious transformation, call out Jovi Callista? How did he somehow feel the echoes of Heraclius? Why was a dagger made from his own corpse sent back in time and put into the Quintia family vault for him to find? Tune in next time... or in like two years, for some of those.

But basically, in this new form, Gaius' emanations grew in strength to the point that they could penetrate the barriers between the sub-dimensions. They then resonated within his allies and caused them to awaken their inner potential and win their battles. Part of the reason why this happened this way is that of the thirteen seeds taking part in the contest, ten of them got extra cultivation from their fate rolls - a very unlikely result.

I also invented a thirteenth Trial Hunter from whole cloth to give Redmoon and Scylla something to do to further Redmoon's development, and to demonstrate what Gaius' emanations did to everyone with an NPC in case anyone else wants to pick up that ball and run with it themselves. Redmoon has actually become my NPC now - Alectai gave her to me because his insanely good rolls have caused Rina to leap so far ahead in strength that Redmoon will never be a threat to her. I've got some plans for her though.

As for Varun himself, I can't help but feel a little bad for the guy, since I wrote him specifically to job against a new form. He essentially exists to be a test subject for what the Maou Vestment can do. I wanted someone who acts righteous but is ultimately pretty rotten, to contrast Gaius acting at his most antagonistic here but still fighting to protect his people and his loved ones. Though his abilities are all quite strong, he is ultimately countered pretty effectively by Gaius' powerset, and wouldn't have lasted as long as he did if he wasn't mostly immune to physical damage.

It is ultimately just mostly immune though. I'm someone who dislikes the notion often seen in fiction that if your armor is sturdy enough, you just can't be hurt, and that the only way to hurt a person in armor is to break said armor first. Ultimately, there is some amount of force which will still be hitting your body even if your armor stops a blow from actually penetrating your flesh. That's why blunt weapons work better against heavy armor - the momentum hits the opponent through the armor, as opposed to an edged weapon, which will be deflected away rather than the armor directly taking that force.

I also invented an entirely new NPC Hunter in order to give Redmoon something to do, since she is ostensibly here. I was able to use her fight here as an example of what Gaius' stunt with his Emanations actually did to the other Seeds to prompt that sudden and intense growth in cultivation. Since Alectai has given her over to me, I needed to figure out what her Dao Magic did, so I based it loosely on the Buddhist Wisdom King Vajrayaksa, the wrathful manifestation of Amogus Amoghasiddhi. He is associated with wind, purification, fearlessness and the moon. Each of the Divine Wind's configurations is based on one of the objects he holds in his six hands.

Wow, this author's note ran kind of insanely long. I guess I just had a lot of thoughts bouncing around in my head that I wanted to communicate, since I've been looking forward to writing this fight and formulating ideas for it for so long.
 
[ ] Array Carving - Arrays are Formations that do not require cultivators to maintain. Defensive arrays, Qi Gathering arrays to help cultivation, and so on. Selling Arrays is rare, but incredibly lucrative. Your Sect/Clan's defenses will be sublime, but offensively... well, the less said the better. The moneymaking potential is very high but heavily variable.
Arrays are a kind of usually fixed magical artifact that can produce a certain effect in a certain area. They're generally less flexible than other artifacts (you cant pick up the Glass Spear Array and go wandering around the way you could with a magical glass spear), and less durable, but much easier to produce for the same level of effect.
Initially, I thought those quotes meant Arrays function as infrastructure. However, after seeing arrays on small, moveable objects in the side stories, I think I misunderstood what you were saying. Could you please clarify how arrays function and how they differ from artifacts? Thank you!

Aliki Floros is a Monster.

This is objectively, biologically correct--spat out in the aftermath of the Trials in the deserts of the borderlands, lost and halfway feral--she was discovered by a crippled, wounded Legionnaire who couldn't make it to safety, and adopted in the aftermath as the eldest of three children. It was perhaps not the wisest choice in the eyes of the orthodoxy, but something about the ragged girl tugged on the heartstrings.

Even in her youth though, Aliki Floros was never normal. She bore black hair of great weight, resisting all attempts to style or cut it. Her canines were large and extended, and her smiles held the promise of a predator sizing up her prey. Her eyes were a brilliant scarlet--her very namesake--and shone slightly in dim light.

And yet she was also a sleepy girl, affectionate with those who gained her trust--a hard worker who wasn't very bright but compensated with a certain inherent insight.

Yet her nature was not something that could be hidden. She could not eat normal food--only fresh meat would satisfy her hunger--and that only for a short time. Her senses were sharp, and she had a nose that could sniff out all manner of strange things in time. She was brought in to Doctor Hermod's practice--a Foundation Establishment Cultivator of the Clan who retired to the secular world to live out his final days--for analysis, and possible treatment.

What he found caused him to nearly discard a life of medical study.

The girl bore a constitution never seen before in the Clan's records. Blood in the form of a clear, viscous fluid, pumped in and out from one of seven mysterious organs, aligned with her Chakra points. Her troublesome hair was nothing less than an extension of some unknown plant matter.

And it hungered.

She was simultaneously a great opportunity, and a great risk--these were body modifications seen usually only on the most extreme Blood Path adherents--upon a mortal child not even of majority yet.

He took her in as an apprentice--both to watch her, and to further study her strange constitution. He found the child an apt pupil--compassionate without being foolish, diligent without being excessive. Though her understanding of the medical field was rooted in a simple 'It's better for people to live than not, right?' philosophy instead of something higher-minded, her sharp senses led her to diagnosing many tricky problems--and the extra money brought in helped cover the cost of feeding her.

But only to a point.

As she matured, the meat of mortal creatures no longer did much to push back against her hunger. Magic Beast meat was effective--but far beyond what could be justified paying her. She needed greater backing if she were to survive--and only the Golden Devils had the funding to support such an appetite. Doctor Hermod sent her along with the recruitment caravan, carrying letters of recommendation and copies of his research into what he had dubbed the 'Clear Yin Constitution'

It was sufficient that the Clan was willing to adopt her into their numbers, accepting her as an Aspirant who sought to master the medical field.

But as many would say--the innate nature of a person can never be changed, a fate set in stone by the Heavens.

Whether she can overturn this or not? Is anyone's guess.

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Overall High Concept: Biological Monstrosity given a good upbringing and nurturing to establish a love of medicine and a firm grasp of right and wrong. This doesn't change the fact she was engineered to be an apex predator by a fossilized yandere who wanted Senpai to notice her ever so much. Impact enhancements will bounce between medical breakthroughs and further atavistic evolution of her horrific constitution, and its perfect affinity to the Blood Path.
When I read your description of Aliki, I was disappointed because I thought you picked a good seed I wouldn't be interested in. Then I read your omakes featuring her and now she's one of my favorite good seeds.


Taking a free seat in the outdoor dining area, Xiuying muttered a quick prayer of gratitude to the heavens for the food before digging in. Upon the first bite, Xiuying realised that she was but a fledgling noodle chef, an individual who only understood nothing but a tiny sliver of noodle soup and probably never will, as dozens upon dozens of truths set Xiuying's dark unknowing mind alight with knowledge.

Soup! What Xiuying had erroneously thought of as broth, was in fact something that can only be called soup! The unctuous, thick composition of liquefied bones, due to heat, pressure, and technique, can be nothing besides a soup! It is something that can be a dish by itself! A meal that is rich, hearty, and consumed eagerly with any form of accompanying starch! Fresh bread can be dipped into it to glorious effect. Potatoes can swim in it, lending their creamy texture and subtle sweetness, for a divine combination. This soup could even make Dawn Cry Congee taste good! Xiuying had no doubt that, if allowed to reduce, it would become a sauce that is triumphant upon the most base of grains!

However, it is not upon the most base of grains.

The noodles, as well, could be a dish all their own. A composition of subtle sweetness, chew, and pronounced depth. Eating it alone would be a boring affair, yet one can do the same with an excellent piece of baked bread, or freshly prepared, aromatic rice. While the soup had a body all its own, the noodles provided the canvas for it to perfectly flow on the mouth. It is the perfect blank canvas for the soup to be laid upon. It is a painstakingly crafted material meant to accentuate the vibrancy, depth, and bounty of another. The unsung heroes that supported the grand weight of the whole structure, that managed to take the extremes of a soup composed of bone and half-a-dozen ingredients, along with all the toppings, and constrain them for the sake of the eater!

It is easy to love the broth, but Xiuying would most certainly return for the noodles alone.

But, that is not all.

The toppings were not mere additions to satisfy one's desires for texture and change. The bamboo shoots had been fermented, providing both the acidity of a pickle and a resounding crunch, but also a strong earthiness, reminiscent of mushrooms, but nowhere near as harsh. Beansprouts naturally found themselves between teeth, and when crushed, became bursts of refreshing bursts of fresh flavour. Then, of course, there is the egg. The outsides were pliant to the teeth, providing more texture than flavour, but that changed once the orange, molten yolk came into play. It was a fatty accentuation that was intoxicating and sticky to the tongue, which urged Xiuying to take healthy slurps of the soup, until her palate was cleansed of the wholesome richness.

Of course, with a palate wreathed by the heavy soup, one must consume more noodles.

The cycle was a demanding, heavy, and challenging one, but one could easily forget it due to the medley of flavours. Consuming noodle, soup, and amenity together was a whole scene of a play. Adding, or subtracting, from the combination allowed Xiuying to derive more and more. The sips of water cleansed the palate more than beansprouts ever could, granting a new start that was strongly reminiscent of the first bite. The addition of garlic at the halfway point turned the noodles into a scarce resource, to be husbanded carefully, as the soup's flavour deepened to a point where supping upon it alone is nearly an impossibility. Then, of course, one can choose to take part of a singular bites, or sips, of the ingredients on their own, albeit influenced by the now-spiced broth.

Consuming ramen, Xiuying found, was an experience akin to reading a book, but one that evolves with each thought and action taken by the reader. The heroes can be one ingredient or the next, supported easily by the rest of the cast. Through sips of water, the whole story seemingly returned anew, but retained the foundation of the old. Finally, upon the addition of garlic, the tone became nigh impossible, with the soup going from a hearty addition to a nigh impossible antagonist against which all the remaining ingredients compete to overthrow…to the point where the reader must become the hero, by having the courage to drink all of the soup, regardless of its fierce flavour!
I didn't know that it was possible to make reading about someone enjoying a dish interesting. Could you please recommend other stories like that? Thank you!
 
Initially, I thought those quotes meant Arrays function as infrastructure. However, after seeing arrays on small, moveable objects in the side stories, I think I misunderstood what you were saying. Could you please clarify how arrays function and how they differ from artifacts? Thank you!
An array is a technique that has been "pre-cast" by recording it into writing. It's a sort of spiritual coding, in which you use a combination of qi infusion and mathematics to form a carving which will take whatever qi is put into the array and automatically shape it into the desired technique.

A technique cast through an array generally isn't as efficient as one cast through one's own mastery, and not having access to said array means you lose access to said technique. Furthermore, they generally have a fixed amount of energy they can take before they overload and break down, determined by many factors like the quality and complexity of the engraving, the quality of the materials and the strength of the arraysmith. Despite all of these limitations though, arrays are nonetheless invaluable for how much they can expand a Cultivator's repertoire, and how an automatic array can create an effect without the Cultivator being there by drawing on ambient qi.
 
Apologies for asking a question about something so long ago but why would killing him shatter their token?
It's a rule put in place to stop higher level Hunters from wiping out vast numbers of lower level Devils, which would quickly deplete their population. If you're a hunter and you kill a Devil of a lower cultivation than you, you're immediately sent home.
 
It's a rule put in place to stop higher level Hunters from wiping out vast numbers of lower level Devils, which would quickly deplete their population. If you're a hunter and you kill a Devil of a lower cultivation than you, you're immediately sent home.

Oh yeah I recall that now^^. For example the Brotherhood tried to do this in a megacollab vs a young (FE) hunter. Making a formation where their oldest and more fragile members move to the front of the group then start to insult the cultivator that was superior in quality/talent/realm vs every single one of them.

That was the first impression that the Good seeds that were part of said project had of them. So, they looked very insane (a very accurate description)^^.
edit: @astergremlin so here a example^^. I forget to send the ping.
 
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Flavius Eirenikos Hunting Part 1
Flavius Eirenikos
Hunting Part 1

Flavius knew the mountains. Not in their entirety, not as much as he wished, but he had been traveling them and studying them obsessively since he'd become a cultivator. Now he applied that knowledge to his search, checking in hiding places and hidden away paths that few knew even existed. Even so, the search felt somewhat futile.

Flavius was a reasonably competent qi condensation cultivator, but he was searching for a sect that presumably had resided in these mountains for years, led by someone in the foundation building stage. Worse, his actual tracking abilities were average at best. He knew techniques to find specific minerals within rock and earth, but that was no help when searching for people.

Even so, Flavius searched. He tried to think like a blood sect bandit leader, a coward who would strike and then run far away. Unfortunately, the further they ran, the harder it would be for him to find them. Flavius knew that they would be slowed down by individuals of lower heavenstages, but that didn't matter when he had no trail to follow. Picking it up again would be almost impossible for him.

Flavius' entire existence was dedicated to overcoming impossible tasks. That didn't mean he could do so without preparation, however. Thus, what halted Flavius' search was not hunger or exhaustion, but rather a need for funds. He had no techniques for tracking the sect, but with enough spirit stones he could hire someone who did, or buy an item that served a similar role. Unfortunately, given the trail had run completely dry, his options for actually finding a blood cultivation sect led by a foundation establishment cultivator were somewhat out of his budget.

His only option, then, was to take even more jobs. This was not so much different from the norm, of course, he'd been regularly taking jobs during the length of his stay with the Shining Goat Sect. Now, he simply took harder missions, and more frequently. Flavius' friend Zhong Ma was happy to give him whatever jobs he asked for. The merchant didn't go out leading trade caravans as much as he had even a year ago, though Flavius had a feeling Ma'd far prefer that to the piles of paperwork his friend was always buried under. It was something Flavius knew weighed on his friend. The man had said so himself, after all.

"I'm glad you've been around so much lately, Flavius. Running this kind of business, it's too much for any one man. At least, any mortal one! So it's all about knowing who to trust."

He had been sitting at his desk, sorting through piles of paperwork. Flavius had nodded his understanding, "You told me that's why you liked to lead caravans. And because you enjoyed negotiations."

"It's true! But you know, since then I've expanded further. Keeping everything running here is more important than ensuring the success of any one caravan. It's probably better off this way, anyways. Even I can't be trusted when I'm too deep in my cups after all!"

Despite his jovial tone, Ma's face had fallen into a surprisingly serious cast, "But most of the people I can hire, they're only in it for the money. I can't blame them, I'm the same way after all. Still, it keeps me up at night, sometimes. If I did lose everything, who would stick around to help me get back on my feet?"

Perhaps it was a sign of his advancement in understanding others that Flavius had made the next connection, "But you do trust me?"

Ma'd given him a funny look, "Well of course, Flavius. You're my friend, after all. But even beyond that, I know your goals. You aren't down here in the muck with the rest of us, fighting for enough coin to live a good life. Your eyes are locked on the skies."

Then he'd finally pulled out whatever pieces of paperwork he'd been looking for, "Now, this is a map with all the pickup and drop-off points. And here's a requisition slip for the packages you're delivering. Don't open any of them! Even I'm not sure what's in them, and the client is paying a premium to make sure it stays that way. And when you get back, let's have some drinks, huh? Seems like we both need to take some time off and relax."

And that was that.

It was just another thing to think about, as Flavius worked. Trust, mortality, the fear of death. The people he didn't want to lose. He'd told something to Ma, once. What was it he'd said? Oh, right, "I should have died long ago, and instead I began to live."

He'd meant those words, then. Yet, why was it that now, after he should have died seventy-two times, he felt almost like he had before he'd climbed the mountain? Why did he feel, beneath his iron determination, so strangely empty? Who could he trust to keep himself alive until he reached his dreams, when death felt so much like an illusion?

He was too caught up in his own head, and Flavius didn't like it. Yet, his current job of delivering packages was just too boring, even if it paid well. Rather, the pay was for confidentiality rather than any particular danger, at least for a qi condensation cultivator of his heavenstage and experience. Naturally, Flavius had set himself a challenge to get some training in while completing his mission. Even if he was feeling out of sorts, after all, Flavius wasn't the kind of person to slack off.

Which was why he was currently hanging off the side of a cliff face, right next to the stairs carved into its surface. The mountains of Spiritfall Stairs were named as such for the eponymous stairs, which allowed for even mortals to traverse them with enough time. Without those stairs, however, they were as treacherous as could be, with sheer cliff faces, slick muddy slopes, and all kinds of natural hazards. It was only reasonable, then, for a cultivator like Flavius to forgo the stairs entirely.

But there was a problem. As he moved from hold to hold, not a drop of sweat fell down his face. His muscles did not burn. His heart was totally steady. If that was all, it would be alright. When climbing like this, it was best if he was totally calm. After all, if he wasn't, it probably meant something had gone wrong. However, he wasn't in a focused state, either. This wasn't the zen of someone who knew that one wrong move would lead to death. Rather, he was moving up the mountain as easily as if he was walking on the ground. There was no danger felt.

The only choice was to make things harder for himself. First, he stopped using a single one of his feet, letting it hang as he climbed with only three points of contact at most. Flavius was initially self-taught as a climber, but as with cultivation he'd sought out teachers not long after his first time climbing the mountain. He'd only had limited success, his cultivation outpacing mortal masters and his drive pushing him past the dabbling of other cultivators. Still, he remembered the lessons he'd received.

One of the first things he was taught about rock climbing was to always maintain three points of contact with the wall. Scaling a sheer surface wasn't like walking along the ground, after all. Rather than helping him stay rooted, gravity was constantly acting to throw him off the wall. With short or easy climbs, it was possible to just muscle through to the top, but climbing was also about endurance. Climbing with only strength was a good way to burn out before reaching the top. Thus, the true skill in climbing was in proper weight distribution. Flavius had to put as much of the weight as he could on his legs, which were naturally used to supporting his body under gravity, rather than his arms. Furthermore, in an ideal situation, he would angle his body such that gravity was helping to keep him on the wall rather than push him off by using proper placement of his feet and hands.

Of course, that was a simplified explanation, and with high level climbing even the three point rule could be dismissed in certain situations. Even so, removing a leg in such a high difficulty climb should have made things much, much harder. And it did. It was just that even the increased difficulty didn't actually feel dangerous for Flavius.

This was frustrating, but Flavius couldn't be too surprised. The simple fact was that he'd trained his body for endurance, and he doubted a fall from this height would kill him even if he did slip off. The Spiritfall Stairs were a trade route, and therefore spirit beasts in the area were semi-regularly culled. He didn't feel there was a significant chance of him falling, and even if he did, he'd almost certainly be alright, even without his life saving treasures.

So, naturally, he put a hand behind his back and kept climbing. If the legs were the primary holders of weight when climbing, arms were used to maneuver and stabilize. With one arm and one leg out of use, his body would naturally start to swing away from the wall, making everything much harder. Furthermore, in order to move up, he'd have to balance himself on one foot at times. More specifically, because most foot holds were actually very small, it was more like balancing on just a few toes.

Any mortal climber surely would have fallen and died at this point. Flavius, however, was a body cultivator, and so he continued to make his way up the mountain. It was, he had to admit, starting to get difficult now. This wasn't an easy route, there was a reason people had built in stairs. He'd planned his climb out ahead of time, but with only one hand and one arm that plan was impossible to follow, so he was just making up a new route as he went along. There was a serious risk that he could go down a suboptimal path, one that led to a point where there was no way forwards, at least without using his earth shaping arts. Even without a physical strain, the mental strain of plotting out his route in advance even as he climbed was significant.

So why couldn't he focus on it? Of course, he was planning a few moves ahead, but his attention kept shifting towards other things. It was a dangerous loop, as his thoughts led to his inability to focus, which made him angry at himself, which led to more concern over his inability to focus. None of those thoughts were conducive to the climb.

Impulsively, he removed his second hand and began to jump. This, truly, was the height of recklessness. With no hands and only one foot, there was nothing keeping him clinging to the wall. In order to move up, he had to jump, but without his hands it was almost impossible to ensure he jumped straight up, rather than also moving away from the wall. Indeed, Flavius would have fallen immediately if not for his Shining Goat Art: Double Jump Prance. With it, he could jump off the wall, then jump once on the air and back towards a new foothold. Even then, he couldn't slow down for a moment, because he was never actually stabilized. Flavius was constantly falling, he was just jumping up in the moment before his foot slipped and he plummeted towards the ground.

This was dangerous. Not only was it physically exhausting and very risky, it was also burning large amounts of qi. If he slipped at this point, he might now even have enough to protect himself when he hit the ground. So why, now, were his thoughts even more scattered than before?

It was like the higher he climbed, the further his thoughts reached. He couldn't help it. Flavius wondered how his parents were and how his friends back at the Dawn Fortress were doing. He worried about Qiang and Qiao, and tried to puzzle out what Qiang wanted to talk about when he returned. He raged at the Butchering Chefs Sect, and his own inability to track them down.

This was bad! If he didn't focus up, he could really die here!

And yet, unbidden, another thought worked its way into his head: so what? So what, if he died? After all, wouldn't he just wake up again during the Raid on Goat-Cat Spiral Village, facing off against Devouring Dragon and Cannibal Executioner?

He was so distracted by that last, piercing thought, that he didn't even notice the giant nest until he slipped and fell directly into it. The tumble at last snapped Flavius out of his spiral, from shock if nothing else. Even then, embarrassingly, he didn't realize he'd landed next to a corpse until it began to crumble around him. He only caught sight of the last of its remains as his eyes focused on the rapidly disappearing corpse. He could tell it had once been some sort of massive spirit beast. A bird of some kind, though what species Flavius didn't know. If it had been alive when he'd stumbled into its nest, Flavius had a feeling it could have killed him in his distracted state, or at least forced him to use one of his treasures.

But, thankfully, that wasn't the case. The beast was dead, its body crumbled to dust, except a single feather that dropped to the ground beside him, long and filled with qi. Flavius picked it up curiously. Even touching it was soothing, and Flavius felt his eyes start to droop as if he'd gone a week without sleep. Easy enough to ignore, but calming even so. It was strangely centering, in fact, his racing thoughts brought to a more reasonable tempo.
Flavius let out a breath he hadn't even realized he'd been holding. He wasn't feeling better, but he was at least functional again. How convenient, to find such an item here. But then, that did raise an important question. What had killed the spirit beast the feather had come from? If it had been a Golden Devil patrol, surely they wouldn't have just left the body behind, right?

Looking around, Flavius could see that the nest itself was clearly not in the best of shape. Many of the branches making it up had been snapped or torn up, though the overall structure remained intact. There was no evidence of eggs, though whether that was because there hadn't been any or just that they'd been taken Flavius couldn't say. And then there was the cliff face the nest had been built on.

The nest had been built on a stony ledge, though truthfully Flavius wasn't sure how it stayed anchored to the stone. With its size, it should have fallen off. Instead, it hung, jutting out from the mountain like a discus sticking straight up from the earth. Examining the cliff face around the nest did not answer the question of how it stayed in place. It did, however, answer who had killed the beast.

To anyone else, the claw marks carved into the stone would have provided a clue, but no more. Yet, Flavius recognized them. It had been years, but Flavius could still remember the day he had almost lost his life with perfect clarity. It was, in a way, one of the defining moments of his life.

Yes, he would know those claw marks anywhere. But that just raised an even more important question: what was Man Eater doing here?
 
Originally, I didn't ping anyone because there was no rush to threadmark my omakes. When I reread the instructions for Good Seeds, I saw occipitallobe said it was mandatory to either ping someone to edit or edit myself. For the future, should I ping someone even if the fates were just rolled? The pinned post at the top says it's preferable to edit the spreadsheet for yourself, but the FAQ it links to says it's a work in progress to get spreadsheet access for every Good Seed. Personally, I would prefer if I didn't have to bug someone every turn to edit the spreadsheet on my behalf.

@Alectai
Omake Link: My first omake can be found in the background which is at the link The Will to Succeed.

Requested Bonus: LST

Cultivation Aims: 13th Heavenstage

Turn Notes: If one of the missions doesn't have enough Qi Condensation cultivators, please assign me to it. Otherwise learning how to make artifacts.

Based on what I've read in story and what I remember occipitallobe saying, it feels like there should be a drawback to going Single Pillar. I can't think of a reason why Single Pillar isn't objectively better than the Orthodox path. Am I missing something?
 
Based on what I've read in story and what I remember occipitallobe saying, it feels like there should be a drawback to going Single Pillar. I can't think of a reason why Single Pillar isn't objectively better than the Orthodox path. Am I missing something?
Eh, there are several such as lifespan issues and incredibly dangerous tribulations, but the biggest drawback of the single pilar path and all unorthodox paths really are cultivation times.

Our crop of kings may look strong, but if for example Rina would have gone full orthodox she would have been well into nascent soul by now.

Its trading quest time strength for hopefully greater epilogue relevancy.
 
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Originally, I didn't ping anyone because there was no rush to threadmark my omakes. When I reread the instructions for Good Seeds, I saw occipitallobe said it was mandatory to either ping someone to edit or edit myself. For the future, should I ping someone even if the fates were just rolled? The pinned post at the top says it's preferable to edit the spreadsheet for yourself, but the FAQ it links to says it's a work in progress to get spreadsheet access for every Good Seed. Personally, I would prefer if I didn't have to bug someone every turn to edit the spreadsheet on my behalf.

@Alectai
Omake Link: My first omake can be found in the background which is at the link The Will to Succeed.

Requested Bonus: LST

Cultivation Aims: 13th Heavenstage

Turn Notes: If one of the missions doesn't have enough Qi Condensation cultivators, please assign me to it. Otherwise learning how to make artifacts.

Based on what I've read in story and what I remember occipitallobe saying, it feels like there should be a drawback to going Single Pillar. I can't think of a reason why Single Pillar isn't objectively better than the Orthodox path. Am I missing something?
One more thing: you never specified what his Cool Thing is. It's fine if you don't have a MacGuffin or something like that in mind; it can be more ephemeral or abstract. Basically, what is the asset which sets your Good Seed apart from an ordinary Cultivator?
 
One more thing: you never specified what his Cool Thing is. It's fine if you don't have a MacGuffin or something like that in mind; it can be more ephemeral or abstract. Basically, what is the asset which sets your Good Seed apart from an ordinary Cultivator?
Oops. Thanks for letting me know I forgot my Cool Thing for Epieus. Is there anything else I need to do before I can be added to the spreadsheet?

Cool Thing: Mechanically Epieus can judge the quality of inanimate object and see the flaws instantly. Narratively, he can see the density, flow, and type of qi through his five senses and uses his artifying skill to determine what's going on.

I'm not sure at what point a bloodline crosses over from a cool thing to needing an impact purchase. Would I need to buy impact for this? I think his preferred problems solving solution almost always involving an artifact falls under high concept not cool thing right?
 
Requested Bonus: LST

Cultivation Aims: 13th Heavenstage

Turn Notes: If one of the missions doesn't have enough Qi Condensation cultivators, please assign me to it. Otherwise learning how to make artifacts.

Cool Thing: Mechanically Epieus can judge the quality of inanimate object and see the flaws instantly. Narratively, he can see the density, flow, and type of qi through his five senses and uses his artifying skill to determine what's going on.
Forgive me if I'm overstepping but it would be helpful of you could edit this info into your seed background post. That way any collaborator would be able to easily grasp the essentials for your good seed. One last critical piece of information would be adding which turn Epieus starts in.

Edit: Seeing as you made the suggested changes, I've added you to the Turn 16 line up. You asked about a Training Juniors Collab. It's a joint Omake that gives a boost to a good seed who hasn't reached the 9th Heavenstage when they are paired with one who is in Foundation Establishment. It's highly recommended for getting to 13th quickly. If you're interested let me know or any other good seed who qualifies
 
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Forgive me if I'm overstepping but it would be helpful of you could edit this info into your seed background post. That way any collaborator would be able to easily grasp the essentials for your good seed. One last critical piece of information would be adding which turn Epieus starts in.

Edit: Seeing as you made the suggested changes, I've added you to the Turn 16 line up.
I have difficulty picking up on social norms without someone explicitly telling me. Thank you for telling and adding me to the spreadsheet.

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You asked about a Training Juniors Collab. It's a joint Omake that gives a boost to a good seed who hasn't reached the 9th Heavenstage when they are paired with one who is in Foundation Establishment. It's highly recommended for getting to 13th quickly. If you're interested let me know or any other good seed who qualifies
Thank you for the advice. I'm interested in doing Training Juniors Collabs. I'm planning on waiting until I catch catch up so I avoid spoilers. I assumed that when I caught up I should ask in thread who was interested in doing a Training Juniors Collab with me. Since you said "let me know or any other good seed who qualifies", I'm wondering if should I mass tag people, do a group PM, or am I reading too much into what you said?
 
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Oops. Thanks for letting me know I forgot my Cool Thing for Epieus. Is there anything else I need to do before I can be added to the spreadsheet?

Cool Thing: Mechanically Epieus can judge the quality of inanimate object and see the flaws instantly. Narratively, he can see the density, flow, and type of qi through his five senses and uses his artifying skill to determine what's going on.

I'm not sure at what point a bloodline crosses over from a cool thing to needing an impact purchase. Would I need to buy impact for this? I think his preferred problems solving solution almost always involving an artifact falls under high concept not cool thing right?
A sort of natural analysis ability? That's fun, I like it. Lots of potential there.

What exactly counts as impact is intentionally vague. The mechanics are barebones to allow for greater writer freedom. Ultimately, Impact is just a rough measurement of how effective someone is in a long-term strategic sense. It's not always 1:1 combat power; it could be broadly defined as 'overall usefulness'. Good Seeds are also generally a bit stronger than their actual cultivation and impact might suggest; as each is the protagonist of their own sub-narrative, they each will generally have a little bit of plot armor. You could think of this as a few points of invisible impact.

Ultimately it's left mainly to your own discretion. As far as Cool Things go, yours isn't excessive in any way. I'd say it's fine.
 
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So I know that Manuel is that old cultivator who was suprised to make it this far but I've been wondering - Is he anywhere close to getting to Late NS? He has had some luck recently and honestly with the spear he could get a huge boost. Would it take a Nascent Action to have a closed door cultivation session?
 
I'm pretty sure he's not close to Late Nascent.

He only hit Mid-Nascent 300 years ago, and any really good treasures we've accumulated for raising up Nascents since then are likely to have gone to our second Nascent.
 
That and we picked slow talent for Manuel so he probably isn't reaching late until near the end of his lifespan if he even survives that long.
 
Yeah.

With all the insane shit we're picking up on the side, it's less out of the question than would otherwise be the case, but it's sure not going to be easy.
 
Flavius Eirenikos Hunting Part 2
Flavius Eirenikos
Hunting Part 2

For the first time since he set out to find the Butchering Chefs Sect, Flavius Eirenikos had a lead. Man Eater, a powerful qi condensation blood path cultivator, was lurking nearby. He had killed a spirit beast, leaving its corpse to rot on the cliff face. A wasteful act, but one in line with what Flavius would expect for such cultivator of the blood path.

Still, it was a tenuous lead at best. Flavius knew Man Eater had not been at the attack on Goat-Cat Spiral Village. Or at least, Flavius had not heard tell of anyone matching his description. Man Eater had prowled the Colossus Footstep Paths before, so it wasn't impossible that he was here independently of the Butchering Chefs Sect. In fact, Flavius didn't even know if Man Eater was still around. The spirit beast's corpse had crumbled to dust the moment Flavius touched it, so it had clearly died some time ago. This might have even been from before Flavius encountered Man Eater all those years ago.

All that said, it was the only lead Flavius had, and he was determined to follow it.

Climbing up the rest of the cliff face was easy as could be. Even so high up that a fall would mean death, when Flavius wasn't being reckless he could scale the sheer rock more safely than a mortal man walked on solid ground. It was a deeply frustrating truth, normally, but the feather in his pocket soothed away the sharp edges of emotion. Truly a fortuitous find.

In only a few minutes, Flavius pulled himself up over the edge of the cliff, onto solid ground. He took a moment to look back, drinking in the sight of the ground so far below. People dotted the Spiritfall Stairs, specks compared to the colossal majesty of the mountains. He could see for miles, and yet even at the edge of Flavius' vision further mountains struck into the sky. Truly beautiful.

But Flavius didn't have time to admire such natural beauty forever. He needed to see if he could pick up Man Eater's trail. Flavius had already acquired some tracking techniques from the money he'd made during delivery, and he put one of them to use here.

"Earth Sensing Art: One Mile Map"

Flavius struck the ground beneath his feet, a pulse of qi flooding down his arm and into the dirt. From there it spread out, radiating from the central point, reaching a radius of one half-mile. Then, it bounced back, returning with a flood of information.

Flavius sagged on his feet. That one technique had left him significantly tired, more so than the climb by far. But then, it was only to be expected for such a powerful technique.

Within a half-mile radius, Flavius's qi had traced along the ground, painting a map in his mind. It only told him the variations in level of the earth, but even that was a massive amount of information. Usually, this technique was used to find footprints, but in this case Flavius was searching for something else.

With a steadying breath, Flavius set out. It wouldn't due to stick around to close, he had just revealed his location to anything that could sense qi in the radius. And there were plenty of dangerous spirit beasts in the area. Flavius doubted they could kill him, but he didn't want to waste time killing them all. He'd wasted far too much time already.

It didn't take long to find what he was looking for: a claw mark carved into the earth. There were no remains here, but that wasn't terribly surprising. The nest had been hidden away and hard to reach on the side of a cliff, but the ground here was flat and covered in green shrubbery. Even this high up there was a functioning ecosystem, if one made up entirely of spirit beasts. Any body left behind would have been devoured long ago.

The cleaved earth had not faded, however. Nor, indeed, were the other signs of combat. Shattered stone littered the ground, and the greenery seemed like newer growth. Flavius suspected everything in the immediate area had been shredded or shattered.

Man Eater's claws were truly fearsome.

Still, this was proof that the lead could be followed. With a deep breath, Flavius used the One Mile Map technique once more, searching for a new sign of Man Eater's passing. Another success.

Of course, that technique alone wouldn't be enough to track down a person from so far away. But Flavius had a few more tools in his toolbox. It took some doing, but he managed to follow Man Eater's trail without losing it.

Quickly, Flavius found himself ranging far from the Spiritfall Stairs. He climbed up and down rock faces, beyond where any cultivators kept the wildlife culled. Flavius never went anywhere that would leave him fully outmatched, but he was growing increasingly less confident he could handle himself if he ran into too many spirit beasts in succession. Still, he never hesitated for a moment.

A few things were quickly becoming clear to Flavius. First, Man Eater was a territorial ambush predator. He'd lurk in a location for an extended period of time, striking from the shadows and eviscerating his target. It was a strong strategy, but a strange one for a blood path cultivator. Man Eater had to, well, eat man. He had little to gain from hunting powerful spirit beasts, perhaps maybe funds from selling their remains. Yet, from what Flavius could tell Man Eater left the bodies behind. It was a mystery.

Even more mysterious, he was clearly moving into areas of greater danger over time. Flavius had understood the impulse to move away from areas commonly patrolled by the Golden Devils, but it had been over ten years since Flavius had encountered him. No one was seriously hunting Man Eater anymore, at least prior to Flavius' picking up his trail. Why range this far out? It didn't make any sense.

The third thing became clear later than the others, as Flavius stood over a stinking corpse, purple with poison. A human corpse.

Man Eater was hunting other blood path cultivators.

It was only luck that Flavius discovered Man Eater's new (or rather, old) quarry. A blood path cultivator wouldn't eat a spirit beast, but he would happily devour a human being. Man Eater would have consumed every part of the body, and left not even bones. It would have been indistinguishable from any other sight where Man Eater had fought.

But this particular corpse was inedible. It had belonged to a beautiful woman once, but now the skin was a deep purple, and the stomach torn open. Otherwise, it was perfectly preserved. Insects had gathered to the open wound, but any that had landed was as dead as the corpse they'd sought to feed on. Flavius gave it a wide berth.

Man Eater didn't use poison, he wouldn't ruin his own meal. That meant this woman had poisoned herself, or simply been naturally toxic. Either way, nothing had been able to touch the body and live, and so it was still here, preserved, ready to be found.

There was only one blood path sect Flavius knew of that could be in this area and had the knowledge to make a poison so strong. The Butchering Chefs Sect.

Man Eater had led Flavius right to them.

Though the heavens detested the Golden Devils, Flavius couldn't deny that he'd had fortune on this particular hunt.

From there it was practically easy. Man Eater's own tracks were increasingly hidden, unsurprising given that he was now hunting skilled human prey. The Butchering Chefs sect was large, however, and they could only cover their passing so well. The trail would eventually go cold, of course, as it had after the Assault on Goat-Cat Spiral Village, but Flavius wasn't going to let it go that long. He wouldn't let the Butchering Chefs sect escape.

It was exhausting and surprisingly dangerous work, but Flavius knew he was moving much faster than the sect he was hunting. Sure Bloody Lotus was in the foundation building stage, but most disciples of the sect were qi condensing like him, and Flavius was at the ninth heavenstage. Even so, it was another two weeks of travel before he found more than trampled greenery and faint hints of bloody qi.

As he traveled, the high shrubland dipped down into a strange forest. The trees were unlike any he had seen before, the bark twisting in on itself and the branches spiraling out at odd angles. These trees were covered in pines, but these were not green as one would expect, but instead a black do deep it seemed to suck in the light around it. Flavius could feel qi radiating from them like pin pricks on his skin, and as he passed through them he found the pines sucked up sound as easily as light. It was a thoroughly unsettling place, though Flavius suspected he would have to bring some samples back to the Dawn Fortress in case this was a new species he'd discovered.

Preoccupied with thoughts of how to harvest seeds from the strange trees and senses muffled by their pines, Flavius didn't notice the dying man until he was almost on top of him.

The man was lying in a pool of his own blood, eyes wide with pain and terror. His mouth was flapping open and closed, but the only sounds coming out were sobbing screams. Probably due to the fact that his arm and leg had both been rather messily removed, though the missing limbs were nowhere in sight.

And those eyes, those wide, frightened eyes, were not looking at Flavius. They were looking over his shoulder.

Flavius spun.

Claws skidded down his bronze arms, sparks flying. Flavius lashed out with a punch, and his attacker jumped back, ambush a failure. But Flavius knew better than to let him escape his eyes.

"Man Eater. I have been looking for you."
 
Cerina Polya 14 - Year 292, Turn 16 - The Doors, Yuan Part 2.

Cerina Polya 14 - Year 292, Turn 16 - The Doors. Yuan Part 2.


Wiping the sweat from her itching brow Cerina did her best to follow the Yuan guide through the sweltering underground hallway. The heat came from the waste energy and reddish light spilling off of the defensive arrays inscribed into the walls - clearly the Yuan were perfectly happy with filling an entire floor with fire and magma to defend what they were heading towards. They reached a rectangular antechamber, almost certainly a kill box, its roof supported by thick octagonal pillars.

"And here we are. Through this door, miss," the Yuan man said. Unlike her he seemed entirely unaffected by the heat, without a drop of sweat to be found on him. His brown-gray hair swung in a thick ponytail as he led her through the antechamber to the heavy iron door at its end which guarded their destination. She passed through with a respectful nod and on the other side found an artillery room bustling with a small crew of Yuan clansfolk.

They buzzed around what was clearly the back end of a massive Spirit Cannon. The breech was large enough for someone to walk into it easily, matched to the size of the humongous cannonballs that lined the room. The rest of the barrel was hidden in the mountain rock. From what she understood the cannon extended through the side of the mountain and then emerged into the open air. Aimed directly at the Man-as-Mountain Array.

One of the cannonballs was currently cracked open along a reinforced hinge and this revealed an upholstered red seat inside. She was going to be shot out of a gigantic cannon. A wave of brief excitement sped through her and chilled her spine. "You chose the Ascendant Speed option on your insertion ticket. Take your seat if you would, miss?" Her guide said, closing the heavy iron door behind himself. He politely gestured at the opened cannonball. Cerina did several quick breaths, almost hyperventilating from eagerness, and then stepped forward.

With a swirl of yellow cloth she settled into the cushioned seat. It was a strange one, designed with a deep person-shaped depression for her body and limbs to fit into. Tightly packed, like a jewel in a box. Unfortunately she was an uncomfortable jewel as her height forced her to scrunch up and nearly kiss her knees, while her shoulders strained against the cushions containing them. The Yuan man looked at her with concerned amber eyes, face creased with a small frown.

"Hmm, the straps and cushions will need adjustment to account for your size," he said. She nodded. After some careful maneuvering and negotiation he managed to get her properly strapped into the complicated harness. She didn't fit quite right, but it was close enough, she hoped. Reaching up to the other half of the ball, he looked down at her, face grim. "I would advise using whatever reinforcement arts you have, miss."

He sounded dubious this was a good idea, but the amount of money she'd dropped on the ticket and her cultivation rank made the bureaucracy authorize it regardless of his misgivings. "I'm ready!" She told him brightly. She'd have said more to try and reassure him, but he closed the ball up before she could. The other half also had padding, though there was enough room to allow her to breathe and wiggle a bit. Deep clanks rang beneath her feet and a whirring noise spun up all around her. She felt the ball move, being picked up and rockied gently as it was carried across the floor.

A voice echoed distantly through the metal walls of the ball. "Preparing to load. Miss Polya, please brace when the countdown begins," her guide told her.

Cerina's bubbly voice echoed from within the steel casing. "I will! I'll be fine, I promise!" There, he should be reassured now.

Yuan Benshao looked at his fellows and sighed. "Load her up." She probably would be okay, freak that she was.

Probably. Bellyaching like this just made him a worry wart. Fed up with his own feelings, he took a breath and decided the girl wasn't his problem, a rush of blissful relief washing through him as he exhaled his worries on a laden sigh. He smiled as the breech slid closed and locked into place behind her. A very heavy clang reached Cerina in the ball, or perhaps shell was more accurate, she didn't know, and she puffed some more while almost bouncing in place. Yuan was waiting.

"Five," came through the shell. She clenched her legs and guts.

"Four."

"Three."

"Two." Cerina took in a huge breath, Qi cycling through her metallic skin like static as she tensed her shoulders.

"One. Fire!" The titanic bang was cut short suddenly, her ears failing, and instead she felt the sound and the recoil crush her body and the cushioning together, shaking her like she was tumbling down a cliff. She soared in a deaf silence, throat and lungs straining to scream as her inner ear complained about the spinning. Her clenched muscles pushed blood into her brain and kept her stomach from leaping out of her throat in mutiny.

As she rose the pressure crushing her nose into the cushion dropped and then there was a soundless pop that shot through her head and a flood of Qi from the walls. She very quickly reoriented into a position she thought was upright, still flying, the force on her twisting until it was pressing her up. Neck and head straining against the top of the shell, instinct was screaming she was going to die smashing into the ground any second now. But fear was silly when you had magic right at your fingertips. Cerina braced for impact as hard as she could.

It came abruptly, a sudden blink in her perception as the stop shook her like jelly.

Did she just pass out for a second? She rolled her head cautiously. Her neck was sore but unbroken from the whiplash and she could feel everything where it needed to be. She could hear her breaths again, loud in her stiff red cocoon. She huffed, then had a fit of giggling.

"Weeeeeee!" She yelled belatedly. That was an absurd amount of fun. She wanted to do that again, but watch Shu go through it at the same time. Katha would probably be boring about it. Mia would be fucking hilarious. But, sadly these were impossible desires. She started poking around for a door release. She was puzzled they hadn't told her about one, until she realized the array she could feel buzzing against her skin laid along the seam of the shell and was waiting for an input of Qi. With a "Hah!" she pulsed her Qi and pushed open the shell door.

She rolled out, yellow robes flapping around her legs, and came to a stop on a field of blue-white flowers and soft black dirt. Forested hills rippled across the landscape and one very prominent one thrust itself at least three times taller than the rest. A circle of stones, rendered tiny from this distance, stuck up like a crown from the hilltop. Seemed like a sensible place to head towards, but first, she wanted to satisfy her curiosity on how she wasn't goo.

She found the shell neatly sunk into the dirt like it had grown up from the ground instead of descending like a meteor. The flowers were undisturbed and smelt faintly astringent. The shell was completely inert, simple well-forged iron. Whatever array magic had protected her was now silent. "Weird," she muttered, then took a drink from a canteen tucked beneath her robes. She turned and began her long walk towards that faraway hill, the shadowed bulk of the shell framing her against the rising sun.

***

She reached the top of the hill after a calm and rather beautiful walk beneath a soft orange and blue early morning sky. Brisk winds blew across the flower fields, shook the tops of the trees, and energy thrummed through her Eye. The air itself was thick with potential. The ground was soft on her feet, the trees' bark rough on one side where the wind must blow frequently and smooth like paper on the other.

There were large rocks dotted here and there throughout the forest, big gray things. Bare of moss, quiet and undisturbed sentinels. There were birds around, singing to honor the sun, but no large animals that she could sense. Her climb steepened. Eventually she reached her goal, and found that halfway up this hill's slope the forest ended in a meadow. She scampered up like a bouncing mouse, eager to reach the top.

At the top of the hill was a bulge of green covered earth. Surrounding that was a ring of nine standing stones, each one a jagged rectangle of dark gray-green rock, and outside this sacred ring more of those gray stones poked up from the earth. Each of the standing stones bore a symbol, glassy and black from the heat used to inscribe them. There was a leaf, a doorway maybe, a carriage or perhaps a boat, a horse, a dragon, a bird, an altar, a scroll, and a sword, if she was interpreting them correctly.

She sat down on one of the gray stones to ponder which monolith to choose, chin balanced on her fist. She sat there for several minutes, considering how to actually open or use one of these things, her senses muddled by the wind and the energy of this secret realm. She couldn't really tell anything about them other than that they were powerful and sacred in their own right. Unfortunately, the muddling also prevented her from noticing the interloper until he was racing up the hill behind her.

Too fast to stop.

Cerina only had enough time to turn at the sound of pounding feet, understand a huge burly bald man with a massive block of steel in his hands was rushing towards her, and hit the deck. "OUT OF THE WAY DITHERING MAIDEN!" He shouted. His gross, dirt covered feet smashed through her stoney seat and then squished her down into the earth.

"Pluh," Cerina spat dirt and lifted her sore head from the ground, her ears ringing. She caught the tail end of his tunic disappearing into the leaf-marked stone. Seriously? She sighed, picked herself up, dusted herself off and found another good stone to sit on. This time she kept her head on a swivel.

"Gonna show you, Imperator damned rude bastard moron…" she grumbled, huffing. The pout on her face was enormous. "Just you wait."

And wait she did, for hours, slowly cleaning the dirt out of her hair and off her clothing, the day passing by slowly under the weight of her impatience. The sun crawled through the languid mid-afternoon before the leaf-stone woke up and started glowing. Her gaze narrowed upon it, her mood having soured to a sharp little blade of spite.

The Sorrowful Blacksmith re-emerged from the trial with a fist raised high and a yell of triumph. "I'm alive! Thank you ancestors!" He was about to kneel and kiss the earth before he saw Cerina and froze.

She sat upon her rock, one knee raised to prop up her arm, lounging. Her face was impassive as she bit into an apple and swallowed it, chunk by chunk. "Hi there," she said icily between bites. Her vengeance would be delicious.

The Blacksmith suppressed a shiver at her tone. He rose from his half crouch, raising his huge chunk of talisman decorated steel and faced her down boldly. She realized his weapon was an actual anvil, wrapped in holy ropes and dangling talismans. "I am Laotie, of the Gong family, of the Sorrowful Blacksmith Sect. Who are you?" He stated his name like it was a line in the sand.

She was going to cross it.

Cerina's lips twisted into a sneer. "Cerina Polya, of the Golden Devils." Her tone could barely contain the distaste she had for the asshole in front of her. The air temperature rapidly dropped as winds began to whip around her. "Why did you knock me down and steal that trial from me?" She asked, her Intent as sharp as her fangs and pressed directly into his neck.

He gulped, the tanned skin over his muscles flexing. This close she could tell the fool was in the 10th Heavenstage and the weight of her spiritual pressure was making sweat run down his bald pate. But he raised his head under her pressure and snarled back at her, veins pulsing across his forehead. "You dithered and I did not. I took it because you did not defend it properly." He raised the anvil a little higher. "Now! Away with you, Devil!" He shouted.

"No," she growled. She leapt, and her Qi screamed in her wake.
Weirding Mountain Art: Boar-Felling Gust!

Cerina's glowing roundhouse kick smashed into the sacred anvil. The blessed ropes did not hold, the sacred metal did not hold. In a heartbeat her foot shattered the treasure in an explosion of metal and crushed Thick Head's temple. He did not have a chance to scream, slammed into the earth by the domineering, overriding force of her blow. The paltry earth of the slope did not stop his body's path and he was forced through it, swallowed up by the ground and carving out a trench with his body as he fell.

Cerina watched in satisfaction as he skidded down the slope in a fantail of dirt far enough to hit an upthrust prominence of rock, shoot up it, and go cartwheeling through the air in a ballistic arc. "Hmmph," she grumbled with a smile when the asshole collided with a pine tree and finally came to a stop amidst the wreckage. Patting her hands free of dust, she started sauntering down the slope.

Prick was going to give up some loot for knocking her down and getting dirt in her hair.

The walk took her a couple of minutes and during that time she did not sense the Sorrowful Blacksmith's Qi rouse at all. He wasn't dead though and the satisfaction of precisely calibrating the force of her blow put a spring in her step. When she finally reached his prone form, she found his legs sticking out from under a section of the trunk. The entire piece creaked and groaned as she hefted it up with one hand and then tossed it back up the slope with no effort.

Asshole's body twitched as she beheld him, freed from the weight. His head was rapidly swelling, deep bruising and blood obscuring one side of his face entirely. His clothing wasn't doing great either after his ride down the hill. Reaching down she wrapped a hand around what remained of his collar and gave him a shake.

"Wake up," she commanded.

He did not respond. She pouted. "Wake up wake up wake up wake up wakeupwakeupwakeup…!" She shouted, punctuating every word with a slap to the uninjured side of his face.

"Blugh ghah what ow ow ow ow ow ow please mercy!" He shrieked, writhing uselessly in her grip as Cerina manhandled the Blacksmith.

"Give me your loot," she commanded.

"What?" He asked, confused, brain still recovering from its wild ride and sluggish with a truly incredible concussion.

"Give. Me. Loot," Cerina enunciated very carefully, shaking him with each word.

The Blacksmith paled.

***

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……!" The Blacksmith's scream was music to her ears as it faded away into the sky.

Cerina paid it no mind. Flatiron Gong Smasher, or whatever his name was, was on a trip to somewhere far away and she had officially stopped caring about the annoyance. He'd probably be fine when he landed, with how hard his head was. She giggled with glee at the two pieces of loot she had taken from him.

In one of her pockets she tucked away a strange golden coin he'd called the Ninefold Dao Reflecting Coin and in her hand she had a herb he hadn't named. She raised the leaf. "What the hell is this thing? It looks like a basil leaf but smells like my bone stock…," she scratched her head, staring down at the somewhat innocuous leaf. He'd claimed to have gotten it from the trial, and it certainly smelled like it had a bunch of Qi in it. She raised it to her nose and took another exploratory sniff.

It didn't smell like any poison she was familiar with. It just smelt like bones and bone stock, with a hint of herbal green. And a very powerful buzz in her nose from the Qi density. Shrugging, Cerina tipped her head back and swallowed the whole headsized leaf in one gulp. "Eggghhh… oh lord," she winced, twitching at the extremely powerful herbal bitterness, almost overcome by a powerful urge to sneeze. For a piece of revenge, it was not delicious.

Pinching her nose and holding it in she shook her head vigorously to banish the sensation. The Qi of the herb quickly settled in her stomach and then leaked out towards her lungs and back up her throat to her sinuses. Grabbing it all up, Cerina began to breathe deeply and found the Qi in the air rushing towards her bones.

She guided the flow of the throbbing energies now entering her with every breath, finding it very easy to settle into her skeleton. It made her feel heavy and weird as she walked back up towards the hilltop, starting with the bones of her feet feeling like they were clanking around in her skin with a phantom weight. The sensation spread through the rest of her body in waves and flickers of distorted weight, before eventually settling into a steady pulse.

Surprise rippled through her when she realized there was a light at the top of the hill, something in the circle of standing stones now active. It must have turned on after the Forehead exited his trial? She had admittedly been distracted. She sped up, rising up the slope in leaps and bounds, returning to the top in moments.

And there she found that a different standing stone in the circle was active. This one had the image of two pillars and a lintel over them. A gateway, or maybe a threshold. Completely uninformative too, a door on a portal. Regardless, it was glowing and she wasn't getting run over by another asshole by dithering. Running forward, she leapt into the stone. It rippled like water around her body, the symbol upon its face flaring brightly behind her.

Cerina found herself falling, a howling blackness rushing past her. In the distance, everywhere she looked, there was an iridescent shimmer like oil in the sun. Pressure crushed her front and back like she was back in the cannonball again, forcing her to push back or be smashed like a bug. She fell, trapped between life and sudden ignoble death, pinned in an unfortunate liminal state. As she watched, the oily sheen in the blackness grew closer and closer and closer, until it was just beyond the tip of her nose. Inside that flickering shimmer, she saw twisted colors and vague shapes. Reflections, maybe? Or something worse?

She did not know, and did not have time to figure it out before the oily blackness parted around her to reveal the Door. The pressure abated as her feet alighted on the white stone prominence thrust out before the white Door. The Door was bare of ornamentation - white stone in a thick frame and lintel, with an iron ring for a handle, a simple square that stood out from a cliff of black rock. Cerina pulled her gaze away from the Door through force of will, and stared off towards the top of the cliff.

The interstice she found herself in extended infinitely upwards, vertigo striking her instantly and viciously. As she wavered and collapsed on her ass, she could swear the stone far above and all around her was shifting. Twisting and bubbling, pressing in on her from the corner of her eye. That near lethal pressure began to rise again and she shook her head, looking away quickly from the abyss. She returned to her senses laid out on the ledge of stone, looking up at the Door.

"Well, okay then. No looking at the black rock," she muttered. It was kinda like not thinking about pink scorpions. But she was used to doing that so she'd deal. With the Qi of that weird herb still buzzing in her bones she stood back up and made her way to the Door. Pulling it open was easy, the iron solid and real in her grip. On the other side was a hallway of duller white stone, almost gray. It was dreary and the ceiling unpleasantly low. She nearly thunked her head on the beams that supported it. Somewhere ahead came voices, muttering quietly in some hidden discussion.

There was a muffled boom of thunder.

She kept her qi close, opening her senses cautiously and arrived into a rectangular room carved from more of the dull white-gray stone. She had emerged from one of the longer sides, and across from her were arranged five new Doors. They were huge, the size of barn gates easily, though they were shaped more like drawn back curtains on a stage. All five were open and they showed people rushing about, juggling props and costumes and lights and a half dozen other items which Cerina was completely unfamiliar with.

There was a lot of green being worn in this theater troupe.

On the far left was a Door that opened onto a long and dreary rain soaked cobble road. Thunder boomed. A carriage was being pulled down the street by a beautiful brown horse, cutting through the rain. It was heading towards the looming back of a theater. There was a door, half open and from it golden light spilled across the street, illuminating a thin slice of the scene. An indistinct man was exiting, cutting an imposing figure through that light.

The next Door showed people in a panic, all of them gathered around a great and dramatic red haired and green eyed actress collapsed on a divan. Her ankle was buried under cushions of ice as she berated the staff desperately tending to her. At the back of the room a great green cloak hung from a costume stand, well-fit for the tall woman.

The third Door was the same dressing room. This time there were fewer staff and a stiffly mustachioed and gray-haired man who had squished his muscular frame into a black suit, trying to fit a much shorter and petite brown-haired woman with huge platform shoes as she sat in a high seat. She must be a backup actress then. The cloak was draped off her shoulders and dragged across the floor. No matter how many pairs of shoes the man went through, the cloak still clung and tugged at the floor.

The fourth Door revealed a stage decorated with a set piece like a catacomb tunnel, before an almost empty auditorium. In the middle of the seats sat the same suit wearing man. Was he the director? On the stage itself was the leading actor, who she thought cut a similar form to the figure from the first Door, and two supporting actors. The Director watched the performance of the backup girl playing the monster, lurching awkwardly across the stage after the three. He shook his head, his muffled voice yelling at the players on the stage.

The fifth and final Door, furthest to the right, was the true performance before a packed audience. The final act as the monster chased down the leading man, cornering him alone in the depths of the crypt. There he raised his ancestral sword in desperation, blade glowing with cleverly reflected light, and struck at the monster. There was a splatter of red, then a stream flowing across the stage to drip drip drip over the edge, the audience in a sudden uproar at the accident.

Like a huge yellow ghost Cerina slid into the great hall of Doors. It felt very strange to move in this space, something was dragging at her limbs. She pushed through the sensation, marshaling her Qi, and forced her way into the first Door. She was immediately soaked to the bone, her bright yellow cloak reduced to a sad straw color, the thunder shaking the sky overhead.

"Lady Skobelle! Lady Skobelle!" She heard the call through the thrashing rain and saw the man, the lead actor, waving his hat at the carriage. His hair was a slick black in the light, he had tanned skin, and he wore a gray coat and pants with a green shirt.

Cerina moved towards him, following after the carriage at a trot. She felt strangely weak, almost bereft of Qi. She watched as the carriage door slid open with a sharp clack. "Merrcio! You bastard! In the rain!? Where is my umbrella?" Shouted a shrill voice as the lady of the carriage emerged. They continued to banter, the woman clearly disliked the man.

And Cerina knew immediately that the lady was going to roll her ankle if she was not saved. Things suddenly made sense. She burst forward and pushed as hard as she could against the weakness in her limbs. With a graceless leap she leapt upon Lady Skobelle, sweeping the red haired woman up in a bridal carry as she started to stumble.

"My goodness!" The lady shouted.

"Who are you!" The leading man exclaimed. Both were completely startled by her sudden appearance out of the rain. Cerina set the lady down and stepped aside to speak to them both, when suddenly a sharp pain burst from her chest. She clutched at it, groaning breathlessly, her vision flickering black.

"Stranger? Miss!?"

She did not hear them as her heart shattered in her chest, pulling her back into shimmering blackness.

***

She awoke standing back in the room of five Doors, pain throbbing through her chest and up into her head. She clutched at it, wincing hard. The floor wavered in her vision, nausea churning her guts. Something grasped her core, a hot claw that rapidly seared and twisted her nerves with pain. She was not prepared when it pulled.

Cerina howled, falling to her knees as something vital was torn from her body. Her hands shook before her eye, and she could see the stains of patina and wrinkles developing on those fingers. Her lifespan! What had she gotten wrong? Looking around in desperation she saw the second, third, and fourth Doors.

In the second, Lady Skobelle was pleased, dancing freely in her cloak. Meanwhile, Cerina herself lay on the couch, watched over by a concerned Merrcio. Everyone else ignored her to watch the lady in awe and envy.

But in the third Door, Cerina was nowhere to be seen and Merrcio was helping Lady Skobelle get dressed for the rehearsal as the stagehands bustled about the pair. As Skobelle stared haughtily down at him from her seat Cerina saw the woman's heeled shoe digging into Merrcio's shoulder, drawing blood. The backup actress was huddled in a corner, hair frizzy and eyes haggard as she frantically worked on a sign.

And in the fourth scene there was true fear in Merrcio's movements, the Director disappointed and shaking his gray-haired head. The girl who had acted as the backup actress for Lady Skobelle before was waving a sign with Love painted on it in huge red letters. What did that mean?

And then before she could find an answer or check the fifth Door, everything reset and played out as if she hadn't intervened. The lady hurt her leg. The fallen lady harassed the staff. The Backup Girl was back in the awkward platforms. It all ended in blood.

Okay, a time loop. She could deal with that.

Shaking her head, Cerina turned inwards, gasping hard. Surprisingly the pain faded rather quickly and her breath returned. She refocused.

She sort of understood the play. A horror story, a man haunted by a lover who had either died or become a monster. But some of the details were incredibly important and she didn't have everything she needed yet. Her heart went out to the man, and the other actors, who were so afraid of Lady Skobelle. What she thought was the obvious good thing turned out to be not.

"Right, so… let her hurt her ankle?" Cerina mused. She stood up and was about to dive back into the Doors when she reconsidered. That strange distortion to her movements remained. What was it? She experimentally moved her leg back and forth, watching it carefully. It felt like… she had another leg?

Another leg that had to stay still, right where she was. Faced with this, another cultivator may have tried to puzzle out how to dispel the strange feeling or how it could be connected to the weakness they felt in the dream-like events beyond the Doors. But Cerina did not think like that - she simply went with it on instinct, chasing the sensation as it dug into her lizard brain.

Qi was part of the awareness of a cultivator, and using that fact she tried to spread her qi between her body and this phantom she could feel. Who was to say the phantom was not her actual body. Perhaps what she thought was real was a fake? Trials could do almost anything, including cloud the senses. She took a careful step and tried to guide her perception along both the phantom and the real.

And she saw the split, cascading up her leg in a flash, until something pulled apart and suddenly she was staring at the back of her own head and also staring into the rainy street. Now there were two of her. Watching the scenes in the Doors from two perspectives made her head spin a bit. One of her bodies couldn't move very much though, leaving it only able to look around. A perspective on the future.

Whispering calming nonsense words to herself, Cerina centered her mind into the body that could move and crossed the threshold of the leftmost Door. She left her immobile other-self behind in the hub. It was like experiencing an echo, of herself, her emotions, and a flicker of her senses. Through that connection, she could see herself in the first Door and knew that the action in the four later Doors continued unchanged.

Idly she wondered how the trial was able to achieve this. But she did not have the attention to constantly interpret what her other-self was seeing. She would have to check in occasionally to see how her future fared.

Inside the first Door she walked down the street at a sedate pace and watched the carriage pull to a stop by the theater's back door. She watched the conversation happen, and the lady stuck her long and graceful leg out into the rain to descend. Even as Merrcio's hand caught the lady's, her ankle slipped out from under her, the heel of her shoe breaking. The woman collapsed, wailing.

Cerina ran forward through the rain, seeming to appear suddenly to the two mortals. "I can help! Sir, let's get her inside!" Her authoritative voice made the man's head snap to her face, and then he obeyed immediately. As she did this she checked her other-self; she caught a glimpse of herself in the second scene - she was leaping out from a hiding place behind the cloak stand to call out to the Director as he stood in front of a line of female stagehands.

"Ah! Yes, miss!" Merrcio said and helped her get Lady Skobelle into her arms and then guided them both into the warm theater. The scene swam in color around her, stage hands suddenly freezing in shock and distress, and Cerina was quickly swallowed up by a confusing swirl of color.

She directed her other-self to the third Door. It did not show her present however - and the drama in the fourth and fifth Doors continued largely as if she had never been here. None of the people around her addressed or noticed Cerina as she stood behind the cloak. The Director was speaking to the supine Lady Skobelle. "Madam, madam, I must reassure you it is a small, simple injury!"

"Ahh! Ahh! You say this and yet it feels like my leg will fall off! How will I perform like this for the play? Ruined! I am ruined!" She whined. A stagehand by her head placed a warm cloth on her brow while others tended to her foot with ice and a cushion. The Director sighed like a man wishing for death, almost a groan, his gray hair mussed by constantly running his hands over it.

"Madam, here, I have a drug for you that will dull the pain," he said tiredly, taking a tincture from the leading man Merrcio as he walked up. When the Director offered it to the lady she took it eagerly, downing it in a gulp. Her head lolled back, eyelids fluttering. And she quickly lost lucidity, mumbling quietly to herself. The Director ran a hand over the back of his head again and then grasped his chin, brow furrowed in deep thought.

"Director. Surely you have a plan?" Merrcio asked, nervous and almost timid.

The Director waved a hand. "Yes yes! I do man, pull yourself together! I am thinking who may be her best backup." The Director's eyes first moved to the great green cloak the tall Skobelle was meant to wear, and then he snapped his fingers. "Ladies, line up!" At his command all the girl stagehands snapped to attention in a clean line. The girl with the sign was at the end of the line closest to Cerina. She was also the tallest female stagehand, though still a foot shorter than Lady Skobelle. The Director scanned them all and when his gaze reached that sign girl his mouth started to open as he raised a hand to point at her.

Leaping out of her hiding spot Cerina stuck her hand above her head. "I can do it! I'm bigger than Lady Skobelle!" She blurted. The Director blinked at her, suddenly noticing her. Two dozen heads all turned to look at her as well, equally surprised. Her other-self noticed a faint, vague image of herself appear in the third scene. Good to know she was actually on the right path.

"...yes, you are. Who…," he started to ask.

Merrcio jumped in. "What does it matter! We need someone, anyone! This play cannot stop and no one else is tall enough. You, can you act!?" He sounded like a man possessed by desperation.

"Give me the script!" Cerina said with incredible false confidence. First time for everything, right?

"Heavens preserve me, fine." The Director slapped a pile of papers into her outstretched hand. "Read that!" He said venomously.

Cerina grabbed the huge green cloak from where it hung beside her and swung it over herself in a swirl of rough green cloth. Clutching its collar in one hand, she then snapped the script straight, scanned her eyes over it, and cleared her throat.

What came out was inhuman.

"Oh why?! Attio, WHY! Why do you abandon this bestial figure, does this passionate howl not reach your cold heart?" It was a voice torn apart on her needle teeth and hissing breaths. A monster with her heart in her throat. On sheer boldness alone Cerina had decided to be the creepiest woman she could be.

Checking outside, her other-self saw her presence in the third scene strengthen. She saw Merrcio was turning away from her to speak to Sign Girl and the future Cerina started twirling joyfully in the cloak. Still no sign of her in the fourth and the fifth.

Inside. "No! No Cleo! My heart is torn asunder at your howling. I feel for you, as no man has felt before," Merrcio responded with a rousing speech as Attio, his hand rising to reach out to her. "But this cannot go on. You must rest! Let me go!"

A grating screech, made awful by impending loss, crawled from her throat. "Truly? Truly!? Draw your blade and show me it is true!"

As she spoke, she knew she'd made it. Outside, the second Door was fading to inky black and her presence became solid in the third. Inside, the scene change was heralded by the faint sound of the Director clapping politely and the colors swirling again in a confusing smear.

She found herself seated, green bandages being wrapped around her feet by Merrcio. He looked up at her. "Thank you, Miss Polya. For appearing when you did," he sounded incredibly awkward, but very sweet and earnest.

A few of the stagehands and supporting actors hurried around them, some engrossed in conversation and others delivering costume pieces as everyone prepared for the rehearsals. The Sign Girl was painting huge prompts on her sign for the next scene, several drafts already tossed aside, her brown hair bound up in a bun and blue eyes intent with focus.

Cerina smiled back at Merrcio. "You're welcome. As strange as this experience is, I'm having fun," which was genuine. A strange, but very fun trial.

He smiled back at her tentatively. He was a very beautiful man, with a smooth jaw and fine cheeks. His green eyes, tan skin, and black hair all fit so neatly together she was fascinated as an artist and painter. She stood up, and was considering what to do as he also stood and turned to the Sign Girl.

"Laria, I'd like to see what you have," Merrcio said. Cerina went to twirl and dance, but as she did, something happened in the crowd behind her and she felt someone trip into her.

"Ah! Careful now," someone shouted. Cerina cursed, distracted by this unexpected interruption almost sending her tumbling over. Unfortunately, before she could recover, she felt her heart seize. A pain like her ribs cracking yanked her into the shimmering blackness abruptly. She'd missed her chance.

She slammed into wakefulness as more hot claws tore at her stomach, more lifespan pulled away from her. Throttling the screams in her throat she rolled over, breathing hard, and let her mind churn. She really didn't like how this trial was trying to teach her things. That had not gone like her other-self had seen. Why?

A subtle change had caused an unaccounted for ripple. She remembered the impact, she remembered the stagehands moving around her - in a slightly different pattern than her other-self actually 'predicted'. Thinking it over she realized that the stagehands never moved entirely as foreseen by her other-self. It was more fuzzy. Like the interactions of many individual decisions all added up in hard to predict ways which made the future less than absolutely certain.

She blinked up at the Doors again. Her gaze fixed on the third Door, where she saw herself recovering from her stumble. Merrcio watched her, Laria scribbling Love on her sign again and giving a satisfied nod.

Then in the fourth, there was a problem. A lack of connection between her and Merrcio. He was not afraid, but there was clearly a lack of something within him. He was looking towards the prompts far more than he should, as if unsure of what to do or… maybe how to feel. The fifth, well. She winced at what the bored audience chose to throw at her and Merrcio.

That image of her dancing in the cloak and the Love scrawled on the prompt sign gave her an idea.

***

Once again she sat in the fitting chair. The first two Doors had gone perfectly. She had a plan to win now. Merrcio was finishing up with bandaging her feet, smiling up at her. Here's hoping the leading man played along.

"Merrcio. Dance with me?" She asked him, shocking him stiff and causing several stage hands to look at them both curiously, eyes and ears eager for gossip.

He stood up gracefully and grasped the hand she had extended to him. "Certainly! But why?" He asked quizzically.

"I want to make sure my balance is good. For when I have to chase you, in the rehearsal," she answered, grasping his hand in hers. There were a few titters at her words and his surprised expression from the crowd. Laria the backup actress was now paying attention as well, brush hovering over the sign on her lap and blue eyes alight with interest.

Merrcio blushed, his expression wonderfully awkward for a moment. "Ah, I see!" He said, and then pulled. "Well, follow me then?"

She nodded, resting her free hand on his shoulder. His free hand went to her waist and the stagehands retreated to the walls to give the two space. A spin here and a dip there, graceful waves of green cloth swirling around the sleek black trousers he wore, everyone watching with excitement and joy.

He had to gaze up at her with her height and indeed with her longer legs and inexperience at dancing there was an unavoidable awkwardness to her movements. But this man was a devoted if unexceptional actor - as they danced he committed to it fully, the awkwardness smoothed out by his efforts and experience. He danced with his heart on his sleeve and that heart said that he was earnest and desperate and thoughtful. A good man. She idly wondered if she was attracted to this man as a girl might be. But…

Her heart was steady, calm. The air was full of sweat and chemical powders and cloth, not daydreams of sweet perfumes and colognes. Her hands did not tremble in his and the beat they danced to was easy and slow. She could feel his heart, thready and fast in the palm of her hand. His blush had not gone down, awkwardness and surprise shifting into a kind of fascination on his face. It was a strange feeling to see that, in contrast to her own calm.

Perhaps she could choose to turn that fascination into attraction, she wasn't quite sure how since men were not her forte. But that would not help her mission, and she only felt acceptance and respect for him. He'd be a good friend and that thought made her steps drag slightly, a sadness locked behind her stoic and calm smile. He was an illusion, a phantom brought up from some forgotten point of history or a creature created by the trial, and either way he would cease to exist when it was solved. That made her brow wrinkle with anger, quickly hidden behind a smooth mask of calm.

As they spun and spun, twirling across the dressing room, the stagehands started to clap and cheer, enthusiasm kindled by the energy of the room. Cerina could not fall into that energy - she had to apologize to this new friend, tell him that she would disappear like smoke when this play was all over and could not save him. A self-destructive urge, it would surely ruin this cycle. It was into that energy that Laria interrupted.

"I got it! I got the prompt! Come see!" She shouted, holding up her sign. Cerina and Merrcio broke apart, Cerina's mood lifting at the news. The scene broke apart in a swirl of color and noise. Outside, the third Door darkened.

Cerina emerged into the fourth scene, hidden in a recess to stage left. Attio and two other men were just in front of her, also off stage, waiting for the signal. They were a ragged band, bloodied and tired, harrowed by their long night of horrors and dark revelations. Their bonds surely strained and tested. Now there was to be a test of some kind. A final moment of friends as the final conflict approached. To reaffirm their feelings.

She used the time she had to scan her lines for this scene as she waited, and also checked the audience. There she saw the Director and Laria in their proper places, with a big stack of prompt signs at Laria's feet. Laria raised her sign. GO!

The three ran across the stage, Merrcio pushing and supporting his wounded friend, a tall and wiry red haired scholar of a man while carrying a torch in his other hand. Then they stopped. "Go, Salamas. Terrick, take him to the doctor," Merrcio as Attio said, and pushed his scholar friend into the thickly muscled arms of the black haired blacksmith and pointed up the stairs that stood on the right side of the stage.

"Attio! Are you seeking death!?" Salamas the scholar objected, then wheezed and coughed, clutching at the claw wounds in his side.

Attio shook his head. "No. I will not die tonight."

"You have given me strength, and her voice has made it clear in my mind," he took a heavy breath, steeling himself. "...I must face her here in this tomb. My heart cannot let go of what it knows, no matter how I try to apply reason in denial: I have wronged her, and I must try to make it right."

Terrick the blacksmith looked at Attio and firmed his grip on Salamas. "What of the sword? It is your only hope," his voice was dour, his expression already planning the funeral.

Unexpectedly, Attio gained the tiniest smile. "Now that my heart is true and my mind clear, the magic in this sword will guide my hand to success."

Hope in Salamas' eyes. He laughed, a strained and yet hopeful chuckle, and tried to straighten. "Then there is hope for this night!"

Terrick took a moment longer, his eyes going to the shadow on the wall stretching towards them. "I trust you, sir," he said, grim expression gone. The two men then lurched away, Salamas leaning on the blacksmith. At the top of the stairs, Terrick turned back and spoke again.

"Attio! My lord! I will lock the gate now. I will return when I have given Salamas to the doctor." There was a great clang of metal at the top of the stairs. Light shined down through the bars of the gate.

"Good! Hurry!" Attio cried back.

Cerina saw the prompt Laria raised. NOW.

"Yessss. 'Hurry'. To what Attio, my love?" Cerina as The Monster growled, stalking onto stage. "Your pleading for your freedom? Your life? Those are mine now."

In the audience Laria held up a third sign. FORBIDDEN ALLURE, it read.

Attio turned to face her. "Everything you have done in your pursuit has been wrong, Cleo. Rest, return to your tomb," his tone was almost despondent. "I… I cannot join you," and yet in his voice, there was a subtle quaver of temptation. Of fascination.

"NO!" She screamed back and lunged forward to tower over the hero. He stumbled back, waving the torch to ward her off.

"If you will not go to the tomb yourself, then I must force the issue!" Attio said and he turned, fleeing through a doorway set beneath the stairs. Down towards the tomb of the Monster.

She followed, the world swirling around her in distorted colors. The fourth Door dimmed. Almost there, she reassured herself. Both halves of her took a breath. Inside she was on the stage. The set had changed. Instead of a catacomb it was now a tomb with a sarcophagus on a dias in the center. Merrcio as Attio stood before the tomb, while she as the Monster strode through the door at stage left. A spotlight gazed down upon her, and another lit Attio.

She checked her other-self one last time. They were speaking and he went to draw his sword.

Attio spread his arms, welcoming her and drawing her attention back inside. "Here you are. It can end now Cleo."

From her scans of the script she knew what came next. "Yes. Get in the tomb Attio. Let me take you away."

He shook his head. "No."

"Oh why?! Attio, WHY! Why do you abandon this bestial figure, does my passionate howl not reach your cold heart?" She cried.

"No! No Cleo! My heart is torn asunder at your howling. I feel for you, as no man has felt before," Attio said, his aching sadness and longing making the audience lean forward in their seats. Now the two of them were only a few steps apart, his hand rising to reach out to her and almost entwining her fingers. "But this cannot go on. You must rest! Let me go!"

A grating screech, even more awful than before, tore its way free. "Truly? Truly!? Draw your blade and show me it is true!"

He reached down to his hip and then -

Light.

So intense, Cerina was forced to flinch and turn aside. Her scream was half genuine, a howl that became a whistling screech. The pain made her forget what she was supposed to say next. Improvisation! "No! No! How can your heart hurt me so?!" She sobbed, collapsing.

Bless his heart, Merrcio caught the thread of her improv anyway. "Because its not yours anymore."

The audience gasped and Merrcio as Attio, the ascendant hero stepped forward. Cerina as Cleo, monster no more, sprawled on the floor. Now she remembered what came next. "Forgive me?"

"I do," he said. With a grave solemnity he raised the sword and struck at her. Once more, into eternal sleep. The audience burst into applause as she was 'struck down', the sword pinned by her arm and hidden inside her cloak

But this was not the end of the scene. As they looked at each other, the audience a distant wall of noise, Merrcio as himself leaned down and spoke. "You'll be going, won't you? Now that we've reached the end?" His voice was barely a whisper. There was a strange awareness in his eyes, ages older than they were before.

She flinched, surprised. Oh. Oh he knew. He knew this would all cease to exist, didn't he? Her head fell. "I'm sorry," she said. It was a pointless apology - this wasn't her fault and there was nothing she could do to change it.

But, it hurt her to see this man hurt so deeply. He gently clasped her hand as the curtains fell to the roaring applause of the audience. Where no one could see, he gave her a little nod of relief.

The fifth and final Door faded to black.

Cerina's selves snapped back together.

"...bye," her whisper echoed alone in the chill air of the hub room. She breathed deep and rolled her neck and sighed at the cracks it made. She felt a lot better, the weight of her imposed aging and the sealing of her Qi suddenly lifted. Looking down at her hands, they were without patina and wrinkles. She tested the doll-like joints and felt no pain. Everything had been put to rights in her body. But the anger at not being able to make a friend due to the laws of the world? That hurt.

She'd make it alright though. It'd just take effort, and time.

With her examinations finished the trial responded with a great crack and grind of stone. The Doors slid shut like the curtains they resembled and as each one closed it faded into the stone. When the last one was gone there was a sharp crack and the wall split down the middle, cuboid sections rising and pulling apart to reveal a small half-circular chamber. In that chamber was a rectangular pedestal rising up from the floor.

On that pedestal the trial offered up a shining silver ring, with the words The Foresighted Eye inscribed on a small brass plaque. Her duly earned reward then. Cerina snatched it up and slid it onto her left middle finger, the silver adjusting magically to fit. Probing it with her Qi she found that it responded like breathing, a minute trickle required to activate it. She went to raise her hand and she felt a sense like deja vu as she witnessed a phantom of her hand move up and away, twirling her fingers exactly how she had intended. It was a lot like experiencing that separation of the self she had just gone through.

Marveling at the strange sense for the future that this ring gave her, her ears perked up as the grinding returned and a path opened up into a looming darkness. It seemed the trial wasn't quite done with her yet.

Her smile was toothy and spiteful.


And We Are So Back. This one was me getting far more philosophical because the fact that she has to respect the people who's lives she changes is critically important to her Dao, even more than the manipulation of what will be.

I do wish I could do more with Merrcio, he had potential. I might have to do some narrative experimentation with the Shattered Servant in the vein of bringing him back.

The Dao-Reflecting Coin is her turn 16 tribulation treasure.

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It's not dead? It's not dead! OMG I caught up after the thread stopped posting! I was so upset it ended on such a cliffhanger.
 
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