This is less off brand Denarian than exactly the sort of thing they do. One of the only consistent features they have in monster form is the angel's eyes on the forehead.Her Third Eye, a Portent Of Her Power, emerges violently into the Mundane splitting open from Her forehead vertically, made of Obsidian and Emerald— The Unblinking Infernal Eye glows gently with a strange fel light, her hair grows long, color fading away into a snowstorm white, before coming to life under the will of The Empress To Be— all the while,
To tell you how I got there, the third eye manifested, in Hindu mythology and faith symbolizes the locus of occult power and wisdom, and like…our Crown is Eyes. Occult Wisdom is our Deal, Manifesting a carved jewel that looks like/is an eye and does cool glowing was what I could think of here that didn't edge too far into the Coin Boyz whole energy. Those eyes are hellfire, if I remember my reading, a pair that sit directly above the brow, for every single one of them.This is less off brand Denarian than exactly the sort of thing they do. One of the only consistent features they have in monster form is the angel's eyes on the forehead.
That association is going to get really old really quick even without us leaning into it as hard as possible.
More "archdevil on a leisurely walk."We're already screaming "demonically empowered" who knows how to look for it
The issue being that Molly actually is educated on Denarians, not informed at all about Hinduism outside of demonically granted Occult and her own canonical choice of Japanese for incantations suggests she's more likely to cosplay Queen Beryl.To tell you how I got there, the third eye manifested, in Hindu mythology and faith symbolizes the locus of occult power and wisdom, and like…our Crown is Eyes. Occult Wisdom is our Deal, Manifesting a carved jewel that looks like/is an eye and does cool glowing was what I could think of here that didn't edge too far into the Coin Boyz whole energy. Those eyes are hellfire, if I remember my reading, a pair that sit directly above the brow, for every single one of them.
Now, I can understand where you're coming from. It is a bit shit that Coino And The Puppet Show are stealing our whole eye thing and it makes us look bad
But I don't know what to tell you, We picked the literal crown of burning eyes right at the start, there's no escaping the eyeball thing my friend, gotta show up somewhere or what's the point of explicitly having an eyeball thing? Ignoring it because it's inconvenient and makes us look bad is disingenuous, in my opinion. we are already playing a Creature of Darkness, metaphorically powered by a infernal nuclear reactor merged to our soul.
We're already screaming "demonically empowered" who knows how to look for it, nobody will treat us like we have a good reputation until we Earn a Good Rep in the Mystical Side of things. Going to Gramps The Magic Hitman for a check up is part of that. Ideally, by the time we actually earn our Shintai, the people in the know will know what we aren't, and what we are, at least locally, which is my primary concern.
That's true! However, the only Yokai I could think of with an Eyeball thing was Hyakume and no offence to them, but they literal lumps of flesh with eyes and nothing else, so not really Molly Energy, and the Dodomeki a Lady Yokai who has eyes all over her arms, which is very cool but I wasn't feeling it at the time of the write up. I'm happy to take suggestions as to a replacement eyeball thing, but I refuse to ignore the fact we explictly chose to have an eyeball themed thing right from the get go.The issue being that Molly actually is educated on Denarians, not informed at all about Hinduism outside of demonically granted Occult and her own canonical choice of Japanese for incantations suggests she's more likely to cosplay Queen Beryl.
Queen Beryl actually does have a fancy jeweled crown with a single big fancy stone right where a third eye would be. A Cat's Eye style crystal adorning a crown in the same style would get that eyeball imagery without it being actual eyeballs, and it being part of a crown rather than a mutation or something would get across the part where our eyeball crown is also literally a crown, and not us being possessed.The issue being that Molly actually is educated on Denarians, not informed at all about Hinduism outside of demonically granted Occult and her own canonical choice of Japanese for incantations suggests she's more likely to cosplay Queen Beryl.
Oh, I understand the logical reasoning for it.@uju32 the reason the loss of appearance has not caused more trouble than it did is because she also gained even more than she lost in Charisma and Manipulation, as long as she can talk to people she is actually more able to sway them and that is before she breaks out the magic powers. Teenagers care about image a lot, but that is a broad social standing thing and not just that the game puts under the umbrella of appearance.
1)No, thats inaccurate.It's not true normally.
At present, however, some considerable portion of the White Council is still in Chicago, Senior Council members and Wardens included. There's a war on, some weird shit just went down in Arctis Tor, and the Blackstaff might have just shared information that could be interpreted as there being some sort of spiritual parasite going around grafting itself to the souls of practitioners (this is admittedly a poor interpretation of the facts, but the Telephone Game and office politics are alive and well).
With all of that in mind, it would not be a surprise, assuming Ebeneezer narced on us, for there to be multiple Wardens sent to deal with us. I don't think that is very likely, but I've got the benefit of meta knowledge, whereas Molly is a 17-year old kid with too little information and a healthy dose of existential dread.
Thats why the Merlin held the proxy votes for five of the seven seats on the jury.Proven Guilty said:The Merlin regarded this positioning for a moment, eyes narrowed, and then addressed the room, in Latin. "Wardens, close the circle. Warden Dresden, please step forward and introduce us to your guests."
I gave Molly's hand a squeeze of reassurance, then let go of her and stepped forward. "First thing," I said, looking around at the dozen or so Wardens present, plus a few other noncombatant Council members who had been in the area or who were on the Senior Council's staff. "Is there anyone here who doesn't understand English?"
The Merlin folded his arms, a slight smile curling his lips. "Council meetings are conducted in Latin."
1)A lot of people and factions enjoy the benefits of the masquerade, and would be lethally pissed at us for compromising it.I understand what you're saying and I want you to understand that I kinda don't give a shit because big monsters are fucking cool and is there an actual masquerade that will be enforced upon us?
When the tigers broke free would be a pretty useful charm especially since it's only 2 dots(I didn't realise it was so cheap).
Also didn't realise it was named after a Pink Floyd song.
Never it let it be said I can't take notes! The Queen In Rags now reads as below:(Edit: To be clear, I mean explicitly a jeweled crown as an adornment, not something popping out of our head.)
Yeah, Molly is big on crystal foci compared to Harry's very traditional Staff and Blasting Rod. She uses mangled Japanese for incantations vs Harry's mangled Latin. Her mindscape is a Star Trek bridge commanding a modern city.Queen Beryl actually does have a fancy jeweled crown with a single big fancy stone right where a third eye would be. A Cat's Eye style crystal adorning a crown in the same style would get that eyeball imagery without it being actual eyeballs, and it being part of a crown rather than a mutation or something would get across the part where our eyeball crown is also literally a crown, and not us being possessed.
(Edit: To be clear, I mean explicitly a jeweled crown as an adornment, not something popping out of our head.)
The mangled Latin is from his first teacher, as wizards cannot casually speak the language they use for magic. And Latin is the language the WC uses to speak to each other. The bad Latin was deliberate sabotage.Yeah, Molly is big on crystal foci compared to Harry's very traditional Staff and Blasting Rod. She uses mangled Japanese for incantations vs Harry's mangled Latin. Her mindscape is a Star Trek bridge commanding a modern city.
I think it's more that Molly didn't emotionally feel a big change, after all it's not like she got uglier, she just became/feeling scarier. While the strangers at school have given her space, she still talks to her friends in a normal way, no teacher has specifically caught her attention for nothing (apart from the instance with P.E.), no one is spreading nasty rumors about her etc (this is all from what I've noticed in her narration)Oh, I understand the logical reasoning for it.
I just had my doubts about whether its would have mattered, especially given how much at that age is driven by feeling instead of logic. We are talking about the girl who had her ex(who she does care about) sleep with her friend, and who is crushing on her father's friend and work associate.
This.Yeah, Molly is big on crystal foci compared to Harry's very traditional Staff and Blasting Rod. She uses mangled Japanese for incantations vs Harry's mangled Latin. Her mindscape is a Star Trek bridge commanding a modern city.
And her father regularly comes home injured from fighting demonic beings.
If she has a controlling say on what her Shintai looks like I expect more pop culture and media references than mythological
I dont believe this is true, as I can find no citation for it.The mangled Latin is from his first teacher, as wizards cannot casually speak the language they use for magic. And Latin is the language the WC uses to speak to each other. The bad Latin was deliberate sabotage.
Eh, fair enough.I think it's more that Molly didn't emotionally feel a big change, after all it's not like she got uglier, she just became/feeling scarier. While the strangers at school have given her space, she still talks to her friends in a normal way, no teacher has specifically caught her attention for nothing (apart from the instance with P.E.), no one is spreading nasty rumors about her etc (this is all from what I've noticed in her narration)
So, for me, the situation is quite reasonable.
1) Since there is normally one wizard in Chicago, Harry, I consider more than one Council member and a dozen plus Wardens as a significant portion of the WC.1)No, thats inaccurate.
There were maybe a dozen Wardens and only two Senior Council members(the Merlin and the Gatekeeper) available in Chicago for Molly's trial in canon, and they only came there because Dresden called a Conclave as regional Warden commander, pulling them from elswhere.
Thats why the Merlin held the proxy votes for five of the seven seats on the jury.
Everyone else, Ebenezer, Listens to Wind, Liberty, the evacuee students, their escorts, Michael?
All showed up later in an emergency evacuation via the Ways. The whole plot of Proven Guilty with the fetches and all wouldnt have happened if there had been a force of wardens on standby in the city.
2) The Blackstaff is the Senior Council's hitman, not their intelligence specialist.
Esoteric intelligence is the province of Rashid ie the Gatekeepeer.
3)The White Council has laws about how their Wardens can use magic.
If they rule that Molls is human, they cant use magic to kill her. If they rule that she is not human, she cant be prosecuted under the Laws of Magic.
We don't need to ignore the eye theme, hell one of the ideas I proposed was basically all about being a giant eye.To tell you how I got there, the third eye manifested, in Hindu mythology and faith symbolizes the locus of occult power and wisdom, and like…our Crown is Eyes. Occult Wisdom is our Deal, Manifesting a carved jewel that looks like/is an eye and does cool glowing was what I could think of here that didn't edge too far into the Coin Boyz whole energy. Those eyes are hellfire, if I remember my reading, a pair that sit directly above the brow, for every single one of them.
Now, I can understand where you're coming from. It is a bit shit that Coino And The Puppet Show are stealing our whole eye thing and it makes us look bad
But I don't know what to tell you, We picked the literal crown of burning eyes right at the start, there's no escaping the eyeball thing my friend, gotta show up somewhere or what's the point of explicitly having an eyeball thing? Ignoring it [Clarifying Edit: The Thematic Ascetics of Our Exaltation] because it's inconvenient and makes us look bad feels disingenuous, in my opinion. we are already playing a Creature of Darkness, metaphorically powered by a infernal nuclear reactor merged to our soul.
We're already screaming "demonically empowered" who knows how to look for it, nobody will treat us like we have a good reputation until we Earn a Good Rep in the Mystical Side of things. Going to Gramps The Magic Hitman for a check up is part of that. Ideally, by the time we actually earn our Shintai, the people in the know will know what we aren't, and what we are, at least locally, which is my primary concern.
I realise that this is like the gems in PMMM but less shittier but my first though when I read it was Aeldari Spirit Stones from WH40kAll mortal creatures of the Kingdom bear a Soulgem that can be used to commune with the owner's spirit and even resurrect them from the dead. These may be lost or stolen (and monsters will generally do their best to do so), but are very difficult to destroy. A Soulgem can also be used as a magical focus. However, if the bearer dies from old age or chooses to forfeit their life, the Soulgem will crumble to dust in due time as the spirit passes on.
Also just read this and now I'm wondering whether you're trying to make a CraftworldI'm also mulling over the idea of something like a futuristic city-sized space station or starship floating in an endless starry skybox.
1)They arent here right now.1) Since there is normally one wizard in Chicago, Harry, I consider more than one Council member and a dozen plus Wardens as a significant portion of the WC.
2) He's also a several centuries old wizard who has had access to Council archives for decades, at least, but likely centuries. Just because he doesn't specialize in forbidden lore doesn't mean he doesn't know some scary shit.
3) Magic can be used to incapacitate without breaking any Laws. After that, killing the muggle way is easy.
^^^We don't need to ignore the eye theme, he'll one of the ideas I proposed was basically all about being a giant eye.
I think DP said that they're in town rn, not sure if we're going to meet them or not but that up to the GM.They only show up for the trial and leave shortly after. Less than 24 hours. Possibly less than 12 hours.
Just a touch of Abyssal in there, but there's always been a bit of crossover in their esthetics, imo so that's no issue. A pretty sold bit if fluff!For the purposes of constructive criticism; is this close to how infernal fluff is supposed to look, or was I really off base?
This is a nice hell!Size, Geography, & Climate: Huge (-2 pt.), Difficult Terrain, Harsh Wilderness
* Almadelmundo takes the form of a large archipelago. The Soul-Realm is surrounded by pitch-black seas and a ring of solid ice, preventing sailors from crossing the border without a long trek on foot through haunted, lightless wastes. The sky is black and starless, with the occasional aurora created by the flow of magic. Nonetheless, the seas somehow reflect a field of bright, unseen stars.
* There is no sun, but a single moon that's almost as bright, passing through all of the lunar phases on a regular day-night cycle. It appears to be directly above the centre of the Blessed Isle.
* The Blessed Isle is the central, largest, and most hospitable island. In the Bordermarches, the light of the moon grows dim, the climate is colder, and the wilderness becomes ever more dangerous.
Population: Balanced Ecosystem, Human Populace, Resident Devils (-1 pt.), Deadly Beasts (-1 pt.), Deadly Flora (+1 pt.)
* The Soul-Realm is full of fantastical creatures, as beautiful and deadly as anything to be found in Faerie. Settlements are under constant threat from monsters and dark spirits (like killer scarecrows!), which constantly emerge from ancient barrows and ruins, from beneath the sea, and from the outer night beyond the ice wall. Other spirits are benevolent guardians that cooperate with humans.
* According to native historians, Almadelmundo was built on the ruins of the ancient Ebon Kingdom, and its remnants can be found scattered throughout the archipelago - in these Darkened Places, the true, infernal nature of the Realm is revealed.
Social Structures: Modern (City States) or Archaic
Technology: Archaic (Early Modern)
Loyalty: Indifferent
* For some reason, most magical talents are women who manifest their abilities dramatically at a young age. Those who graduate from the Citadel become Sentinels, tasked with defending the Realm against the monsters constantly besieging it, and adopt a spirit companion that complements their abilities, thematics, and personality.
* The Blessed Isle is dotted with city-states equipped with sailing ships, quality steel, and early firearms. The Sentinels try to keep peace between the Princes who rule them, though nonetheless they squabble and feud.
* Most settlements in the Bordermarches are fortified or well-hidden and have a lower level of social and technological development, due to the constant threat of attack by dark spirits.
* The Demon Empress has not yet revealed herself and may treat with the good and wicked creatures of the Realm in any guise that she pleases.
Features: Grand Grimoire (-1 pt.), Endless Suffering (-1 pt.)
* Magic is so thick in the air within the Kingdom that it flows like auroral rivers in the sky - fed by the tides of the elements, the waxing and waning of the moon, and the wishes and prayers of the living, each a separate colour in the boreal rainbow.
* The Citadel is the grand magical academy at the centre of the Blessed Isle, stocked with all the arcane tomes, ritual spaces, and reagents anyone might need. Many smaller academies and shrines exist throughout, while Darkened Places have their own troves of censured and forbidden lore for those brave or foolish enough to look. That is, the Realm is an ideal place to learn or practice almost any kind of magical art.
* All mortal creatures of the Kingdom bear a Soulgem that can be used to commune with the owner's spirit and even resurrect them from the dead. These may be lost or stolen (and monsters will generally do their best to do so), but are very difficult to destroy. A Soulgem can also be used as a magical focus. However, if the bearer dies from old age or chooses to forfeit their life, the Soulgem will crumble to dust in due time as the spirit passes on.
Designing Hells is one of the things we do in this thread, right? This is the fantasy or vaguely magical girl-themed draft. I came up with the preliminary name meaning 'world-soul' or 'soul-of-the-world' for this soul-world design, because I am very creative and good at naming things and not getting things backwards. I tried not to be too cruel to the inhabitants other than having them constantly besieged by monsters, but if it's still too bland, well maybe it could be made spicier.
I'm also mulling over the idea of something like a futuristic city-sized space station or starship floating in an endless starry skybox.