Broken Adventure
- Thread starter theaceoffire
- Start date
- Crossover
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- Location
- Cambridge MA
Hmmm.
I was thinking, if you gave Sarah a key right now, and then a warning that the key should not be used because the Warehouse was exposed to the Void and highly dangerous and might even kill her just from standing near an entrance, Sarah seems like the kind of person in the kind of position that would have her immediately start thinking about how to weaponize that.
Adam's subconscious is blocked from spending CP, but trying to get around that restriction seems like something it might try to do based on his personality, and Adam seems like the kind of person that might hesitate to retract upgrade options offered by his subconscious even if he thinks they're a bit questionable as long as she likes them, so it feels like his subconscious might start trying to generate helpful upgrade options that would freak Adam out a bit.
In this case, prompted by her wondering how to weaponize the Warehouse's dangerousness, perhaps:
Void Vent (-200 wp, -50cp) Provides a portable hole that, when attached to a surface, can be toggled on or off to form an opening to the outside of the Warehouse into the Void. When active, conceptually erases everything in a rough cone in front of it.
WARNING: Can kill the Jumper through nearly any perk. Likely to destroy souls. Resurrection perks may not function perfectly, if at all. No benefit will be gained from things destroyed by the Void that would normally be gained from destroying things. Pierces nearly all forms of damage resistance, including fiat protections, including on items. Extent and range of destruction is unpredictable. The Void can permanently damage items, abilities, and other perks affecting things within the destroyed region. Observing the Void through any method is not advised. May kill or draw the ire of local gods and similar entities.
I don't think Sarah would use it, but I think having the option (available, even if not purchased) would make her feel better. Also, it would be mildly amusing.
Norr
Misophist
- Location
- Any chair
Reminds me of that one Naruto fanfic (Naruto Genkyouien) where using void powers creatively was completely broken. I don't think that would work for Sarah though.
If there are stories from the jump chan's PoV they're not that popular for whatever reason (likely an inability to make the character unrelatably relatable) so no clue.
However, we've had so much "Adam doesn't understand why people treat him like a ticking timebomb." that at this point, even a cliche as it might be, here is a legitimate reason to do the story PoV from someone else's that it might actually count as refreshing. Hence why myself and a few others keep suggesting the PoV switch.
I mean, yes, it would be interesting to see a jumpchain from Jump-[kun]'s PoV, but we, the reader, are coming into this point of the story from so much "Adam don't understand [insert meme] " that some of us kinda want to see from the outsider's perspective, dealing with Adam's Adam'ness. It just so happens that that would result in a typical Jumpchain story telling.
However, we've had so much "Adam doesn't understand why people treat him like a ticking timebomb." that at this point, even a cliche as it might be, here is a legitimate reason to do the story PoV from someone else's that it might actually count as refreshing. Hence why myself and a few others keep suggesting the PoV switch.
I mean, yes, it would be interesting to see a jumpchain from Jump-[kun]'s PoV, but we, the reader, are coming into this point of the story from so much "Adam don't understand [insert meme] " that some of us kinda want to see from the outsider's perspective, dealing with Adam's Adam'ness. It just so happens that that would result in a typical Jumpchain story telling.
Vhalidictes
(Verified Demon)
- Location
- Las Vegas
He already is an eldrich ROB that accidentally mind breaks the people he's trying to help... But he doesn't really realize that.
Edit: what the post above this one says. The jumpers viewpoint is really interesting.
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PyroTechno
The Procrastination Pokemon
I'd just like to point out that I called this whole plotline six months ago
Hey, ROB. I didn't see you there. I don't suppose you could be convinced to leave the sane people alone?
- Location
- United States
- Pronouns
- He/Him
Actually, that's a really good point and is probably why I really enjoyed the Patriarch as a character in the last arc. He was just so unflappable and friendly and put up with so much of Adam's nonsense.
- Location
- NA
At this point you've managed to wander into Taylor Varga levels of tension(Read:none), Coil was dealt with almost completely by accident, the Gangs are a none issue, the S9 got off screened and the Endbringers have all defected(so much for an epic confrontation).
I'm still enjoying it but I have to wonder where you could possibly take the Wormverse. *shrugs* meh only one way to find out.
- Location
- Here
<Looks up post number...>
//Lowers sunglasses.
You've got a long, long journey. Safe travels!
Archon_Prince
{Knight of the Round} {slightly concerned}
- Location
- your mind
- Pronouns
- Servant/Saber
your going to have a bad time
- Location
- United States
An interesting direction. I'm kinda sad he lost his Cultivator self, it would have been awesome to see them fuse one day into a final form. Or perhaps it will still occur once his shard self gains a more conceptual form. And of course the shard piece is now acting as a ROB to facilitate a jumper. That's amusing. Curious how that will go relationship wise. I'm still sad we never got Sister Quan.
Archon_Prince
{Knight of the Round} {slightly concerned}
- Location
- your mind
- Pronouns
- Servant/Saber
this is the pinnacle of jumpchain or dimension / kaleidoscope fanfics
its all coming together bois, back where we started a single fire power and a dream
its all coming together bois, back where we started a single fire power and a dream
Archon_Prince
{Knight of the Round} {slightly concerned}
- Location
- your mind
- Pronouns
- Servant/Saber
and a long journey it was, i just finished the threadmarks and HOLY SHIT! the 'i have become so power that now you too, can become ROB' but with the entire journey.... and not bullshited, it was glorious.
i appreciate the entire existence of this fic more then you will ever know
also, will we see the disciple again, i want to see her and sister quan to see how they changed
That sounds interesting, I would be interested in that.
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- Location
- Australia
Like those apocalypse system novels? Or those novels on royalroad where a system is introduced randomly on an otherwise normal earth, introducing them to the multiverse. Might be interesting to subtly increase Adam's 'Kingdom' that way.
Agreed, some sort of system apocalypse would be amazing.
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