Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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It is based on the Polynesian concept of mana. You gain mana both by your lineage and by your deeds. We see this in the Under the Sea sidestory:


And things Yrsillar said on Discord:


So you probably couldn't get a king's mana unless you were born into the role or unless the job opened up somehow and you proved yourself equal to it.

Yeah, exactly, not acclaim, caste well done points enforced by the system . Close , but not what I was talking about.
 
I think the simplest voting based cultivation thing would be a form of Fisher King.
Leader is the embodiment of their people, so who ever gets elected gains a fraction of the strength of all of their supporters.
 
It wasn't a lie exactly, but it wasn't the whole truth either. "Zhengui, it's fine to have some selfish motivations to you know?" Ling Qi said gently.

The flowers withered, replaced by creeping vines spreading in a quick mat through the dirt. "The sect is too small," Gui muttered.

"I, Zhen am meant to reign," Zhen hissed. "But I am also too small. There are many big kings and no room for Zhen."
Hmmm... I guess when your Father is called a Volcanic Tyrant Tortoise you are going to have some dreams of ruling. Zhengui seems to be enjoying this long trip out into the wilderness and getting out of the shadow of the Sect, and I hope he gets some ideas on what he'll be doing around our little slice of land. A Cyan or Indigo Zhengui is going to be a mighty force to reckon with when he is holding court over this territory.
 
Hmmm... I guess when your Father is called a Volcanic Tyrant Tortoise you are going to have some dreams of ruling. Zhengui seems to be enjoying this long trip out into the wilderness and getting out of the shadow of the Sect, and I hope he gets some ideas on what he'll be doing around our little slice of land. A Cyan or Indigo Zhengui is going to be a mighty force to reckon with when he is holding court over this territory.
I think that for a Spirit being a King is different than what it means to humans. I'm thinking that it means something like being a dominant power in a region of variable size, with that area drawing heavily from that spirit's themes in some way. For a more conventional Spirit Beast this probably usually means having a bunch of kids/being the local apex predator, but for Zhengui or a more spiritual spirit, it might be more indirect.
 
[X] Clockwork Blades (Cai Renxiang, Xia Lin, Xia Ren)
[X] Heroes and Soldiers (Xia Lin, Gan Guangli)
 
The Cobbler and the Viper
Liu Xin fled through the woods, his robes flapping in the wind.

He heard the snap of a twig to his right, and the flash of steel. Immediately he dipped his hand into a sewn on pocket, and flung out the contents channeling a trickle of qi. The fine grained sand that he had flung hissed white hot, the cloud expanding to engulf the boy that had come bounding out from the trees.

He howled, the sword dropping from his hands as he clawed at his face, and Liu Xin darted in, fist already drawn back for a punch. The heated grit in the air stung his skin but didn't burn. One hard jab, strike under the ribs, push through. When he stumbled, strike the knee. The boy toppled over, and Liu Xin fled past him.

It was a good thing that even before the Ministry had come, he had learned to fight. The rootways were a rough place, you had to be a little rough to get by. Liu Xin was more than a little rough. He bounded over a fallen log, the strength of cultivation in his legs launching him a good three meters before his feet touched the forest floor.

He'd had to get rougher in the last year, after his shitty old man had caught him experimenting with Tanner Shou's son and disowned him. Liu Xin's tight expression curled into a scowl as he took a sharp left, away from the sound of crashing feet and tearing underbrush.

Dammit, this was all because he couldn't control his mouth. He'd heard that sluggard Hou Jin complaining about how unfair the Elders were, and a comment had just slipped out.

Hou Jin had a lot of money and just as many 'friends'.

His feet beat against the forest loam, and he felt something snatch at his ankle. Running as he was he could only curse as he saw the rootlet that had curled around his ankle, sparking with qi. He rolled as he hit the ground, managing not to lie land flat on his face, but only just. Brambles tore at his robe and his shoulder cracked against a tree trunk before he sprang to his feet.

They had him surrounded. He counted eight of them, including Hou Jin himself. He scanned his surroundings, noting the knives, swords and clubs readied in their hands. One of these clowns, he could take, maybe even two or three. He hadn't been slacking off in the Elder's lessons after all. Eight was too many, maybe he could break to the left…

"Such a desperate little rat," Hou Jin was red faced, his cheeks quivering with outrage and exertion, but the fatty still walked with a swagger that set Liu Xin's teeth on edge. "Your beating is going to be so much worse now, you know? You should have known your place and accepted your punishment."

That earned some dark chuckles from his thugs, and Liu Xin glanced around, the rough bark of the tree at his back scrapping against his robe. Hou Jin had demanded his month's spirit stones for the insult. As if the damn silkpants needed them. "Right, right, how foolish for this humble peasant to ignore your lordships kindness," he said dryly. His eyes darted back and forth trying to determine which of the thugs would go down the easiest. He still had one more pouch of burning sand.

The fucker didn't even acknowledge his sarcasm, merely cracking his knuckles threateningly. "Indeed, you should have known better than to cross this young lord," he sniffed. "So give thanks for the lesson."

Liu Xin bared his teeth. He had already hidden the stones, and the pills he'd scavenged. "If Sir piggy is so great, I don't see why we need the audience," he sneered.

Stars exploded in his vision, and his head cracked against the back of the tree. Liu XIn tasted blood in his mouth. Hou Jin looked down at the flecks of blood on his knuckles in disdain. Liu Xin hadn't even managed to react.

It wasn't fucking fair, this whining fastass had started so far ahead and he dared complain about their lessons?

"Taking out the trash is what servants are for, fool," Hou Jin said coldly. One of the thugs raised his club. They wouldn't kill him, but this was going to suck all the same. It was now or never, Liu Xin's hand dipped into his pocket and…

Facing as they were, only Liu Xin saw the strip of shadow peel away from the tree.

Everyone heard the horrifying noise as the boy raising the club's arm jerked to the side and fell limp at his side, dislocated and useless. His startled scream had the other's wheeling. A second crack, and black blur cracked across a disciples face, deforming his nose and sending teeth flying. A girl with a knife stabbed out at the blur, and her wrist bent backward with a hideous crack. The tallest of the thugs, a boy half again Liu Xin's height went down with a falsetto scream as a dainty knee drove three times into his groin, ending with a sickening pop.

"W-who dares!" Hou Jin bellowed, even as a jeweled sword appeared in his hands, the shimmer of a defensive art crackling in the air.

The blur resolved, and Liu Xin stared blankly at the slender girl standing there in the middle of the four sobbing disciples. Her robe was plain and black, only the silver lining marking her a disciple. Her skin was unearthly pale, but for the gleaming dark scales that marked her brow, and her long hair was a lustrous black.

Her pale yellow eyes fell on him, and Liu Xin swallowed hard.

He had met this girl before, she was part of the elder's advanced lessons and they had been paired for sparring several times. She was cruel and vicious, and rumor had it she was part snake, a member of some powerful family from another province. He was always left on the ground after their spars, barely able to walk. Yet before he hadn't resented her for it. Unlike the rest of the nobles, there wasn't any malice in it, and she'd never made a complaint when he fought the same way.

"Liu Xin, you are late for tea," her voice was cold and brusque, without a hint of emotion.

You could have heard a pin drop in the clearing, but for the groans of the wounded. That was right yesterday, she had approached him and stated that they were going to take tea together. He'd found it bizarre but today's events had put it out of his head.

"Excuse me! What do you think you are doing, assaulting us like this! You cannot expect to just…" Hou Jin began to snarl.

Her eyes flicked in his direction and the words died in his throat, his face going a blotchy red and white. "Hou Jin, fifth son of the fourth son of the Head of Clan Hou, Counts of the Eighth Peak in the Celestial Peaks. Prospects, mediocre. Status, Irrelevant. Be silent when your betters are speaking."

Liu Xin felt laughter bubbling in his throat as Hou Jin sputtered and the remaining disciples milled in confusion and fear. "I was a little held up."

"I see this. I will forgive your slight given the circumstances. You will improve yourself in the future," Xiao Fen said seriously. "Come, I will not extend our reservation again."

"Lady Xiao-" Hou Jin began again.

Xiao Fen's form blurred and his words cut out into a wet gurgle as her tiny fist buried itself in his throat. Hou Jin fell to his knees, gagging violently as the veins on his neck blackened and crackling frost spread across his skin.

"I said be silent, trash. It was not a request," Xiao Fen said harshly. She turned without a further word to leave.

Liu Xin stood straight and took a step to follow her. None of Hou Jin's friends moved to stop him. He met the closest boys eyes and it was the other disciple who lowered his head. He hurried to catch up to Xiao Fen.

"Thanks for the assist," Liu Xin said carefully, as he caught up, eying her warily.

"Thanks are unnecessary. Continue cultivating so that you do not require assistance against such worthless individuals again," Xiao Fen.

Liu Xin nodded, his thoughts spinning as he tried to figure out just what the hell was going on. He hit upon an idea, a very worrying idea. He wondered if his mouth was going to get him beaten anyway. "Just uh, so you know. I'm not inclined to women." He'd heard noblewomen sometimes did things like that, and however strong she was he didn't intend to be anyone's toy.

Her eyes turned toward him and Liu Xin flinched. "As a Xiao I have no use for carnal relations, outside reproduction," she said without a hint of embarrassment.

"Oh, uh, that's good," Liu Xin said awkwardly as they walked through the forest. "So….why?"

"My Mistress ordered that I make a friend," Xiao Fen said matter of factly. "Having reviewed the disciples present this year. I have determined that you will be my friend. Your battle instinct and drive are admirable."

"Thanks, you've got a mean jab," Liu Xin said blankly, processing the crazy girl's words. "So you mauled a Count scion because I'm your friend?"

"I silenced trash because he did not know his place," Xiao Fen replied easily. "I stepped into the situation because you are my friend. Having spoken with my Mistress on the subject, I determined that this was correct action. Do you believe I erred?"

She was completely nuts, Liu Xin thought faintly. "N-no, friends are supposed to help each other out."

"Very good," Xiao Fen said, finally showing an emotion, a touch of satisfaction showing in the upward quirk of her lips. "Now tea. It is necessary for friends to share their non-vital interests."

"Right," Liu Xin said dizzily as they stepped out of the woods. Just what had he gotten himself into.
 
Xiao Fen's form blurred and his words cut out into a wet gurgle as her tiny fist buried itself in his throat. Hou Jin fell to his knees, gagging violently as the veins on his neck blackened and crackling frost spread across his skin.
She was completely nuts, Liu Xin thought faintly. "N-no, friends are supposed to help each other out."

"Very good," Xiao Fen said, finally showing an emotion, a touch of satisfaction showing in the upward quirk of her lips. "Now tea. It is necessary for friends to share their non-vital interests."

"Baroness Ling gives me the simplest of tasks"

*smug hissing ensues*
 
Bai Xiao Fen frowned and glanced away, her indignation draining away, looking faintly shamed. "There were several… set backs. However, my current sparring partner did not crumble under the cultivation regime I set him after I informed him of our friendship. I believe I have acquired an acceptable friend."

She was completely nuts, Liu Xin thought faintly. "N-no, friends are supposed to help each other out."

"Very good," Xiao Fen said, finally showing an emotion, a touch of satisfaction showing in the upward quirk of her lips. "Now tea. It is necessary for friends to share their non-vital interests."
...

This was exactly as amazing as Xiao Fen's previous words promised.
 
Xiao Fen's comments/responses are wonderful. I loved both " I stepped into the situation because you are my friend" and their frank discussion after Liu thought that she was doing this because she was interested in him. Talk about unusually worded complements.

Xiao Fen's dismissal of Hou Jin as irrelevant based on his position within his own clan was chilling because we are used to that tone and approach from the arrogant young master opposition to the protagonist but less so to it from allies.
 
Xiao Fen's dismissal of Hou Jin as irrelevant based on his position within his own clan was chilling because we are used to that tone and approach from the arrogant young master opposition to the protagonist but less so to it from allies.
Based on his position in his clan, his personal accomplishments and his attitude I think. As in "you are trash, you act like trash and why the fuck do you think your trash position in trash family will cover that deficiency?"

Which is more neutral than "my clan is awesome, lick my boots" of youngmasterness.

PS. Also "my youngmasterness is thicker than your youngmasterness" is long and proud tradition of protagonists and their allies. As in it isn't same trope when used against enemy youngmasterness who started first.
 
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