- Location
- Hampden Park
Oh, that was silly of me. Okay, I've corrected that to 21:49. That it?
With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Twelve)
- Thread starter Mr Zoat
- Start date
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- Location
- Oblivion
By "Grayven" you mean the Sinestro AI in his power ring right?
Atrocitus needs a therapist...
Yea, but at least the old school one's knew the location of their ritual sites.
After all, how else could they die horribly at their infernal masters whim? :lol
Actually, Zoat mentioned that Earth 12 Paul is an Orange like Paragon and Renegade. Only he has no personal lantern to recharge with and relies more on money gained through asteroid mining to solve his problems.
- Location
- Greece
Ok yeah
In that case lets say he time difference is 16:10
So he woke up at 21:49 GMT-6 = 27:49 GMT in jail then he was brought at U50 at 27:49 - 16:10 = 11:39 GMT and then he did research until 12:29 GMT so for almost an hour.
And for the return trip the snip starts at 12:39 GMT and after the transition it would be 12:39+16:10 GMT = 28:49 GMT = 22:49 GMT -6
So lets say the first part of that snip lasted 5 minutes and everything seems fine.
(in the end I could choose the difference as something like 16:14 but that would be nitpicking)
Ok about the Paragon dates.
This one
Is 4 days after the 22 so it translates on 11th January and 11:14 GMT-5 = 16:14 GMT so the above date is 11th January 00:04 GMT so this one is fine
One the other hand this:
Is 2 days later after the 22 so it translates to 9th January and 11:56 GMT+3 = 8:56 GMT so that translates to 8:56 -16:10 = -8:46 GMT = 16:46 GMT -24hours
So the above date is 8th January at 16:46 GMT
Since the next few have small time differences:
This is 8th January at 17:53 GMT
This is 8th January at 18:11 GMT
And this is 8th January at 18:19 GMT
On the other hand the following 2 are ~ an hour later so
This one is 8th January at 19:09 GMT
And this one is 8th January at 19:29 GMT
Finally this one is at 16:19 GMT -5 = 21:19 GMT
So this one is at 21:19 - 16:10 = 05:09 GMT
And since 24th is 2 days after the 22 the above translates to
9th January at 05:09 GMT
All of the above are between this
Which is the last part of Stars, Crossed Part 1
And this
Which is the start of Stars, Crossed Part 2
In other words with the exception of
All the other Paragon snips are chronologically at the start of the episode
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- Oblivion
There is not a shrink in the entire cosmos qualified to take on that hot mess.
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- Oblivion
Saint Walker could do it.
Ganurath
Literal Enthusiast
- Location
- A Valid Location
- Pronouns
- He/Him
Eh, it's nothing Gilderoy Lockehart couldn't handle.
You say that like it's a bad thing. How could a home truly be complete without the charred bones of your former (or if they're very unlucky - current) enemies?
When you genuinely EARN the title saint (not you k'now murder a bunch of pagans) and combine that awesome with a power ring then there is not a lot you can't do. Could anyone else do it is a more practical quest.
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Empiricist2
Let's play doctor!
- Location
- Baton Rouge
The Atom? Bumblebee?
BlackLantern2814
Hello darkness my old friend.
- Location
- Earth
Every Lantern does, after some time.
Some more, some a little less, but every one does.
- Location
- Hampden Park
Actually, he.. couldn't. He tried in Universe 1, and Atrocitus rejected his comparison between the deaths of their families because while Walker's was a tragic accident, he knew who was responsible.
- Location
- Hampden Park
So, bottom line is I need to move SI options 6 and 7 up to just under the first five? Okay, I'll get that done tomorrow morning.
Fool's Canon (supplementary, Renegade option)
- Location
- Hampden Park
1st April
23:47 GMT +9
The great thing about being the focus of a Tentacle Ogre orgy is that there's no need to worry about what you're going to say the morning afterwards. Everyone's clear what they're there for and you're all going to be heading back to your own homes at the end of the evening's festivities.
I look around the shop. "So… How have you been?"
The fact that I don't live anywhere near Aichi meant that the chance of just running into someone I'd met there was minimal, but… This is the Japanese city I know best. And I knew that this shop had a personal shopper service and stayed open late. Seemed like such a good idea at the time.
"I… Haven't been back since you stopped going, if that is what you are asking Mister Grayven."
Hara Takako is the manager here and was one of my more.. ardent admirers, right up until the point she nearly… No, did, cause herself a rather nasty injury on… Me. I healed her with the ring, but the screaming and blood rather put a dampener on the festivities. I did warn her not to try something like that.
"I think you can probably get away without using the 'Mister'. Given…"
"Oh no, that would be quite improper."
I raise my left eyebrow slightly. I once used seven construct tentacles to… Okay, I guess it's.. probably a company directive or something. Don't I.. remember something about the Japanese being big on those?
"Was it..? Did what happened between us drive you away?"
"No, not… For me, it wasn't a lifestyle choice. It was something fun to do in my spare time. I met a woman who wasn't part of that scene and… That was that."
She nods. "Is the young lady her daughter?"
I look over to where a young Japanese woman with blonde hair -bleached rather than natural, but done well- is helping her pick out items of clothing that are to her taste. "No. Lynne… I'm adopting her."
She looks a little surprised. "I realise that I only saw you in one.. role, but it does surprise me that you are the paternal sort."
I nod. "Surprised me a bit."
"You know…" She looks me over. Ooh dear. "They may be busy for some time."
"Could well be."
"There is an.. office…"
"Ahh. I'm afraid that Jade and I are monogamous." She nods disappointedly. "But.. if you like, I can give Guy Gardner your phone number?" I still go to the anger management classes. Lynne's presence makes it doubly important now. "He doesn't look like an Ogre but he can make tentacles just as well as I can."
She looks thoughtful. "Maybe I could ask him to wear a mask."
"I'll.. pass that along. Um." I wiggle my right forefinger in the direction of the personal shopper. "What did she do to get lumbered with us?"
"Miss Amane is a wonderfully vivacious young lady. I was certain that she would be able to help you and whoever it was you were buying for." Ms Hara watches her for a moment. "She only works here part time now. She was scouted by a modelling agency and I imagine that she will leave us entirely once that contract generates enough work to justify it."
"Ah. Then I am honoured that we are considered suitably armigerous to deserve her attentions."
She looks me over again, this time a little less amorously. "Will you be purchasing anything for yourself?"
"Do you stock my size? I mean, I know that I'm not as big as I used to be, but I'm a fair bit bigger than your usual customers."
"Still…" The tone says innocent enquiry. The expression- "Too big, Mister Grayven?" -says something rather different.
"No. You just have to be careful with the fit."
Ms Hara smiles salaciously. "I can imagine. We have a tailoring service, and we can order clothing in to your specifications if you find a style that you like."
"Then…" I nod. "Certainly. It would hardly do for me to let the side down by dressing shabbily when my daughter is so chic."
"Let us see if Miss Amane has finished her first set of selections." Ms Hara leads the way away from the counter and towards the young women's clothing section. Should I pick something for Jade? That would probably be a good idea. Nothing too racy or fetishistic… A dress? Blouse? Oh, I'll ask Miss Amane what she thinks.
There's a small and neatly folded pile of clothing on a cushioned seat near to where Miss Amane and Lynne are going through a rack. "…pierced ears? I think these would look so cute on you." She holds up a couple of surprisingly large earrings in the shape of a fleur-de-lis.
"Oh no, I'm dad-vetoing that. No self mutilation until you're eighteen." Lynne just rolls her eyes -I'm calling that a success- while Miss Amane turns to look at me with genuine nervousness in her eyes. I shake my head. "It wouldn't work, anyway. We heal our injuries too fast. The hole would be gone-" I flap my right hand at my own right ear. "-before they could put a placeholder stud in."
Miss Amane's eyes dart from me to her employer and back again. Then she performs a shallow bow, hands clasped at her waist. "I apologise, Prince Grayven."
Bit melodramatic of her. "That's fine. No way you could have known." Her own ears bear some sort of cross design. Being Japanese she's probably not Christian. Maybe she just likes right angles? I think I heard something about the Japanese liking symmetry? "Lynne? Found anything you like so far?"
"Uh-huh." She looks at the pile. "Is that alright?"
"Of course it is, poppet. Buy what you like."
"Miss Lynne." Ms Hara smiles at her. "Why don't you pick that up and come to the changing rooms with me. Miss Amane, Mister Grayven has expressed an interest in acquiring a new wardrobe himself."
I didn't.. go that far. Oh, the sell-me-the-shop thing. Can't really complain. I'll admit that my non-armour clothing isn't something I've paid a great deal of attention to. On Apokolips it's basically 'body armour or leotard' and my wardrobe wasn't much better organised back on Earth Prime.
"Yes, Madam Hara. Prince Grayven, please come this way?"
"Lynne, I'll be right over here-" I point as Miss Amane leads me towards what I assume is the men's section. "-if you need me." She nods as Ms Hara picks up the clothing and leads her towards the changing rooms. "Lead on, Miss Amane."
I follow her across the shop floor, past the-. Huh. "Isn't men's clothing over there?"
She glances back for a second. "Yes, Prince Tentacle Ogre." Hah! Oh, Japan. "But I am afraid we will need to take your measurements first." She leads me over to a slightly remote part of the shop towards what looks like a tailor's work area.
"What exactly did Ms Hara tell you?"
Miss Amane looks away, and I think I saw a blush. "Madam Hara did not tell me anything. I heard… Rumours. About you. And I saw the news report that you killed the monster Klarion."
"And what do you think about that, Miss Amane?"
"There's nothing wrong with liking sex, even with a.. Tentacle Ogre."
"Hahaha! No, I meant about Klarion."
She walks over to a work bench and picks up a tape measure. "He was evil. Killing him was a righteous deed. Could you please take off your shirt?" I hold my arms out to the side as I send my shirt to subspace. She unwinds part of the tape and walks up to my right arm. "Did.. someone ask you to kill him?" I raise my eyebrows. Not quite sure where she's going with that. "I mean, did someone offer you… Something? You know… This, or that?"
I suppose that the Light did. "I was compensated, but.. I wouldn't have killed an innocent. He had it coming."
She steps behind me to put the tape around my chest. "I.. believe in you, Prince Grayven. Would you do the same thing again?"
"Yes. I mean, I'd prefer it if the legal side was a bit better organised, but some people need killing."
"Okay." The tape is no longer around my chest and I extend my left arm. "And Tentacle Ogres like Japanese girls best, is that right?"
"Hahaha. I'll.. admit to a certain fondness, but, ahh… First, they were all consenting adults." I turn to face her. "And I wasn't offered-." I blink. "What happened to your clothes?"
23:47 GMT +9
The great thing about being the focus of a Tentacle Ogre orgy is that there's no need to worry about what you're going to say the morning afterwards. Everyone's clear what they're there for and you're all going to be heading back to your own homes at the end of the evening's festivities.
I look around the shop. "So… How have you been?"
The fact that I don't live anywhere near Aichi meant that the chance of just running into someone I'd met there was minimal, but… This is the Japanese city I know best. And I knew that this shop had a personal shopper service and stayed open late. Seemed like such a good idea at the time.
"I… Haven't been back since you stopped going, if that is what you are asking Mister Grayven."
Hara Takako is the manager here and was one of my more.. ardent admirers, right up until the point she nearly… No, did, cause herself a rather nasty injury on… Me. I healed her with the ring, but the screaming and blood rather put a dampener on the festivities. I did warn her not to try something like that.
"I think you can probably get away without using the 'Mister'. Given…"
"Oh no, that would be quite improper."
I raise my left eyebrow slightly. I once used seven construct tentacles to… Okay, I guess it's.. probably a company directive or something. Don't I.. remember something about the Japanese being big on those?
"Was it..? Did what happened between us drive you away?"
"No, not… For me, it wasn't a lifestyle choice. It was something fun to do in my spare time. I met a woman who wasn't part of that scene and… That was that."
She nods. "Is the young lady her daughter?"
I look over to where a young Japanese woman with blonde hair -bleached rather than natural, but done well- is helping her pick out items of clothing that are to her taste. "No. Lynne… I'm adopting her."
She looks a little surprised. "I realise that I only saw you in one.. role, but it does surprise me that you are the paternal sort."
I nod. "Surprised me a bit."
"You know…" She looks me over. Ooh dear. "They may be busy for some time."
"Could well be."
"There is an.. office…"
"Ahh. I'm afraid that Jade and I are monogamous." She nods disappointedly. "But.. if you like, I can give Guy Gardner your phone number?" I still go to the anger management classes. Lynne's presence makes it doubly important now. "He doesn't look like an Ogre but he can make tentacles just as well as I can."
She looks thoughtful. "Maybe I could ask him to wear a mask."
"I'll.. pass that along. Um." I wiggle my right forefinger in the direction of the personal shopper. "What did she do to get lumbered with us?"
"Miss Amane is a wonderfully vivacious young lady. I was certain that she would be able to help you and whoever it was you were buying for." Ms Hara watches her for a moment. "She only works here part time now. She was scouted by a modelling agency and I imagine that she will leave us entirely once that contract generates enough work to justify it."
"Ah. Then I am honoured that we are considered suitably armigerous to deserve her attentions."
She looks me over again, this time a little less amorously. "Will you be purchasing anything for yourself?"
"Do you stock my size? I mean, I know that I'm not as big as I used to be, but I'm a fair bit bigger than your usual customers."
"Still…" The tone says innocent enquiry. The expression- "Too big, Mister Grayven?" -says something rather different.
"No. You just have to be careful with the fit."
Ms Hara smiles salaciously. "I can imagine. We have a tailoring service, and we can order clothing in to your specifications if you find a style that you like."
"Then…" I nod. "Certainly. It would hardly do for me to let the side down by dressing shabbily when my daughter is so chic."
"Let us see if Miss Amane has finished her first set of selections." Ms Hara leads the way away from the counter and towards the young women's clothing section. Should I pick something for Jade? That would probably be a good idea. Nothing too racy or fetishistic… A dress? Blouse? Oh, I'll ask Miss Amane what she thinks.
There's a small and neatly folded pile of clothing on a cushioned seat near to where Miss Amane and Lynne are going through a rack. "…pierced ears? I think these would look so cute on you." She holds up a couple of surprisingly large earrings in the shape of a fleur-de-lis.
"Oh no, I'm dad-vetoing that. No self mutilation until you're eighteen." Lynne just rolls her eyes -I'm calling that a success- while Miss Amane turns to look at me with genuine nervousness in her eyes. I shake my head. "It wouldn't work, anyway. We heal our injuries too fast. The hole would be gone-" I flap my right hand at my own right ear. "-before they could put a placeholder stud in."
Miss Amane's eyes dart from me to her employer and back again. Then she performs a shallow bow, hands clasped at her waist. "I apologise, Prince Grayven."
Bit melodramatic of her. "That's fine. No way you could have known." Her own ears bear some sort of cross design. Being Japanese she's probably not Christian. Maybe she just likes right angles? I think I heard something about the Japanese liking symmetry? "Lynne? Found anything you like so far?"
"Uh-huh." She looks at the pile. "Is that alright?"
"Of course it is, poppet. Buy what you like."
"Miss Lynne." Ms Hara smiles at her. "Why don't you pick that up and come to the changing rooms with me. Miss Amane, Mister Grayven has expressed an interest in acquiring a new wardrobe himself."
I didn't.. go that far. Oh, the sell-me-the-shop thing. Can't really complain. I'll admit that my non-armour clothing isn't something I've paid a great deal of attention to. On Apokolips it's basically 'body armour or leotard' and my wardrobe wasn't much better organised back on Earth Prime.
"Yes, Madam Hara. Prince Grayven, please come this way?"
"Lynne, I'll be right over here-" I point as Miss Amane leads me towards what I assume is the men's section. "-if you need me." She nods as Ms Hara picks up the clothing and leads her towards the changing rooms. "Lead on, Miss Amane."
I follow her across the shop floor, past the-. Huh. "Isn't men's clothing over there?"
She glances back for a second. "Yes, Prince Tentacle Ogre." Hah! Oh, Japan. "But I am afraid we will need to take your measurements first." She leads me over to a slightly remote part of the shop towards what looks like a tailor's work area.
"What exactly did Ms Hara tell you?"
Miss Amane looks away, and I think I saw a blush. "Madam Hara did not tell me anything. I heard… Rumours. About you. And I saw the news report that you killed the monster Klarion."
"And what do you think about that, Miss Amane?"
"There's nothing wrong with liking sex, even with a.. Tentacle Ogre."
"Hahaha! No, I meant about Klarion."
She walks over to a work bench and picks up a tape measure. "He was evil. Killing him was a righteous deed. Could you please take off your shirt?" I hold my arms out to the side as I send my shirt to subspace. She unwinds part of the tape and walks up to my right arm. "Did.. someone ask you to kill him?" I raise my eyebrows. Not quite sure where she's going with that. "I mean, did someone offer you… Something? You know… This, or that?"
I suppose that the Light did. "I was compensated, but.. I wouldn't have killed an innocent. He had it coming."
She steps behind me to put the tape around my chest. "I.. believe in you, Prince Grayven. Would you do the same thing again?"
"Yes. I mean, I'd prefer it if the legal side was a bit better organised, but some people need killing."
"Okay." The tape is no longer around my chest and I extend my left arm. "And Tentacle Ogres like Japanese girls best, is that right?"
"Hahaha. I'll.. admit to a certain fondness, but, ahh… First, they were all consenting adults." I turn to face her. "And I wasn't offered-." I blink. "What happened to your clothes?"
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Finagle007
[Verified Great Old One]
- Pronouns
- He/Him/His
*bangs head against wall* Zoat's been to the weird places on the internet again...
Just got the chance now to post but
@ Red Lantern Reality:
"Do you see Ambush? Do you see what happens when you punt an SI from their correct reality! This is what happens when you punt an SI from their correct reality!"
Hit Japan just a little too hard.
@ Red Lantern Reality:
"Do you see Ambush? Do you see what happens when you punt an SI from their correct reality! This is what happens when you punt an SI from their correct reality!"
Hit Japan just a little too hard.
- Location
- Florida
Clothes ninja vanish.
- Location
- USA
you mean japan?
Emerald Oracle
Chaos, yet harmony. Death, yet the Force
- Location
- The Else
...congratulations Japan. Your odd culture has produced a young woman who thinks that offering herself sexually to the strange Tentacle Ogre is the best way to remove inconvenient obstacles!
More seriously, I will be interested to see how this plays out now that Grayven ain't mantling no more. Without the Grayven Shard screaming in his head to CONQUER it'll be telling I think.
More seriously, I will be interested to see how this plays out now that Grayven ain't mantling no more. Without the Grayven Shard screaming in his head to CONQUER it'll be telling I think.
Lordamnesia
What are we doing again?
Badum bum ching! Ganurath will be here all night folks!
- Pronouns
- she/her
Octopuses and squid aren't fish.
Krazyfan1
Worrying for the future.
- Location
- Australia
too bad he cant use the ring and magic to just...make a tentacle thing for them to have...
make one, give it to them (after making sure its safe, i.e sleeps most of the day or something), and bam, he doesnt have to do a thing anymore, they get tentacles, he gets the space he needs, everyone is happy
make one, give it to them (after making sure its safe, i.e sleeps most of the day or something), and bam, he doesnt have to do a thing anymore, they get tentacles, he gets the space he needs, everyone is happy
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