dhasenan
always lowercase
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- She/Her
Should be: "I am not unaware"? Otherwise this seems incredibly disingenuous.
With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Twelve)
- Thread starter Mr Zoat
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Should be: "I am not unaware"? Otherwise this seems incredibly disingenuous.
- Location
- Philippines
I feel as if Icon is woefully underused in Young Justice fanfics.
- Location
- Hampden Park
Thank you, corrected.
Hey, uh, Paul, Paul? adventures in space say what
I think he hit two out of four with the Citadelians, and he did say (and while I was against that even in context) regardless of other factors...
zhuull
SB still lying to protect Racists what else is new
Don't think that "not" is supposed to be there.
Spoken like a true lawyer.
shepsquared
Erratic Aussie
- Location
- Melbourne, Australia
It's not like the show used him or Rocket all that much. I'm honestly not sure why they were included.
- Location
- Adelaide, Australia
This feels... wrong somehow when I read it. Either the word 'elementally' should be replaced or something should be put after it because it seems incomplete as is.
Ganurath
Literal Enthusiast
- Location
- A Valid Location
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- He/Him
"Okay, fine, I'm against the mass slaughter and such of thinking beings."
Chaoswind
Lord of nonsense
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- Latin America
Pretty much, but that horse has been beaten to dead.
Lets just move along and agree that Paul can be a raging hypocrite when it suits him and that is completely fine because his ring is orange.
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- madison
I think he means as an institutional thing. He views short term mind control as simply a somewhat distasteful tactic. As for mass murder, well the thing with the citadel was his intervention. It was certainly a grey enough act to debate, but I don't think it makes him hypocritical. the part of his space adventures/war crimes you could point at as a point of hypocrisy was when he worked with a lot of pirates rather than forcefully freeing their slaves.
KillingYouNicely
I've seen things. They weren't really interesting.
- Location
- Australia
To me, this feels like it should be either 'and now his powers have changed him so much that' or 'and now he's enough of an elemental that'. It just feels as though there's a missing word or two as is.
The Bushranger
In the Danger Zone
- Location
- TSAB Asura
Aside from snarky comments about diversity quotas...probably? Because S1 YJ had to deal with the Wonder Woman-based version of the Bat-Embargo, and therefore couldn't include Donna Troy. Since that left a slot open on the wish list, Rocket was subsituted in instead.
For S2, they had more leeway, and with Cassie Sandsmark joining the Team, Rocket was no longer needed.
- Location
- Australia
It could work better as "elemental-y", since that better indicates the idiolectic nature of the phrase.
"Martian" I think.
"elemental", or "enough of an elemental"
Count Rushcore
Self-Requested Ban
Again?
Also, the net gain was positive and a general reduction of mass mutilation, slavery and murder.
- Location
- Germany
Yeah, the point was to stop the Citadelians etc. Just like every modern army condones mass murder and destruction in the hopes of preventing more mass murder and destruction.
Dangermouse and Count Duckula were both on Nickelodeon here in the States. I saw it, and now can't unsee it.
Count Rushcore
Self-Requested Ban
Touché.
Now let's not go through this song and dance again, alright?
- Location
- Hampden Park
False imprisonment is a crime. Imprisonment is what happens when you commit a crime.
No, as 'human' shouldn't be capitalised either. I realise that this is a change in policy from me.
I realise that it's an informal way of expressing the idea, but that is correct.
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