- Location
- Hampden Park
Thank you, corrected.I may be wrong, but from what I read later I got the impression that here you meant to say 'Jade doesn't meet our eyes'.
Thank you, corrected.I may be wrong, but from what I read later I got the impression that here you meant to say 'Jade doesn't meet our eyes'.
Thank you, corrected.forming words
still catches me
practised
selection criteria
Later paragraphs mostly refer to the laser eye Martian as male, except "she might be aware"
reactivate my
clutches at it
thirty years' experience
if you want
Bleed-tech
I always thought
J'onzz's
Other stuff the Assembly did.Why would that stop other telepaths from reading his mind? They can read non-telepaths, why not a subconscious telepath?
Grayven has excellent relationships with US government officials at various levels. And a matter replicator.How did a transformed Pony not born on Earth or affiliated with the Justice League get that so easily?!
Thank you, corrected.Bullock's eyes
it's pointed in
Extra space.
Funny thing, I actually noticed that one because on my phone it resulted in a line break.
taught me:
No idea.
Thank you, corrected.
No, that's correct.Paul seems to be continuing his unspoken thought here; it doesn't really fit the previous spoken words.
Thank you, correct.started being shown
Alternatively, is this
supervillainous
let me guess:
an exhalation
Georgia
The SI took a few seconds to think about it and decided that 'it' was more appropriate.
Thank you, corrected.forming words
still catches me
practised
selection criteria
Later paragraphs mostly refer to the laser eye Martian as male, except "she might be aware"
reactivate my
clutches at it
thirty years' experience
if you want
Bleed-tech
I always thought
J'onzz's
Other stuff the Assembly did.Why would that stop other telepaths from reading his mind? They can read non-telepaths, why not a subconscious telepath?
Grayven has excellent relationships with US government officials at various levels. And a matter replicator.How did a transformed Pony not born on Earth or affiliated with the Justice League get that so easily?!
Thank you, corrected.Bullock's eyes
it's pointed in
Extra space.
Funny thing, I actually noticed that one because on my phone it resulted in a line break.
taught me:
No idea.
Thank you, corrected.
No, that's correct.Paul seems to be continuing his unspoken thought here; it doesn't really fit the previous spoken words.
Thank you, correct.started being shown
Alternatively, is this
supervillainous
let me guess:
an exhalation
Georgia
The SI took a few seconds to think about it and decided that 'it' was more appropriate.
I suspect that she has more insight into her own behavior and motivations now.
But he returns to saying "he" in the following chapters.The SI took a few seconds to think about it and decided that 'it' was more appropriate.
And the first thing in my mind is:I reach across the table with my left hand and lay it on her right.
skewed.I think something has become eschewed in my mind when I read this:
Normally I'd say "Damn it Jade! Super powers woman!""No. At least, not anytime soon. Paul said that having a central power battery makes it less.. dangerous, but I don't… Really want to feel like that again."
How so?But at this point OL's power ring is practically just a glorified gun.
But at this point OL's power ring is practically just a glorified gun. Get yourself some magic instead.
That the most effective thing in his arsenal tends to be "Throw bullet at it." That he can drop singularities, and gravity bombs, and massive four point sonic attacks, but at the end of the day, something some disgruntled punk on a backwater planet made in his garage trumps it all. (ALL HAIL THE ALMIGHTY CRUMBLER!) Also, yes I know Paul doesn't like to destroy things
Meh.
Double Meh.And the tea he served to Konvikt came from his rings' subspace pocket
The dreaded triple Meh.after which Konvikt used a ring to rebuild a town and heal the injured bystanders.
Swiss army gun?
Dang it all.Alan nods. "Are you going to take them to China tomorrow?"
I sit back. "Nope! This is a job for the Justice League, or more specifically for the Justice League's Chinese member. Unless I rejoin the team or join the League, not only do I not have to involve myself in this sort of problem, I'm not legally supposed to."
The Shocker: Legit. By Max Landis before he became a professional screenwriter.I never read it, but I'm reminded of a fic I heard about years ago where the Shocker pulled a Heel-face turn, and his admittedly impressive vibration tech just stunned the pants off of guys like Tony Stark and Reed Richards with its "amazingingness"
Gender can be a complicated issue.
Shocker: Legit was amazing.I never read it, but I'm reminded of a fic I heard about years ago where the Shocker pulled a Heel-face turn, and his admittedly impressive vibration tech just stunned the pants off of guys like Tony Stark and Reed Richards with its "amazingingness"
The SI doesn't know.@mrzoat? Was wondering, was the enchantment on the gun, the projectile (assuming there WAS a physical core), or both?
Was curious if it/they are a once-off design or can be reprimed.
I mean, them only having one shot would make sense- given how much power/durability klarion had I could totally see a group of artificers spending days/years charging single-use weapons that either completely discharge or outright burn out their power structures/ "circuits" when discharging, in exchange for being able to hurt the twisted little maniac...
You have to spell the username right. It's "Mr Zoat", not "mrzoat".Edit Godammit that's not It how it works. Imunna memorise the quirks of B.Bcode even if it kills me >.<- err- what is the thingy for directly mentioning a username again? Memory allways goes to hell around 3 AM
I'm surprised Ol isn't more interested in networking with these guys, by all indications they seem to have a pretty advanced If ideologically problematic spell casting tradition. They may not be useful for getting magic into the mainstream, but someone who can make magical weapons that high end is at least useful to know. For example he could have them swap secrets with another one of his magical acquaintances.
Witches. Not wizards.
two storeys tall
IN MY HOME?!
"Pair" could be treated either as singular or plural, but needs to be consistent. Either "look decidedly" or "emerges from".
impacts suggest
both hands
a local phenomenon
hits me, slicing
gravity shears
coming on to her
two months' time
falls through
Who's inadequate now?!
through glasses
first came through
an aquatic
fingers unlaced
understand that
Philippus'
and bring her back
high up in the air
Tell me:
This sentence seems incomplete.
they'd probably be
a childhood... has me braced
I'll be honest:
deposited next to him
Neither Richard, Canis nor
first things I see are
: green-orange
stick it inside
What are you doing?!
The Shocker: Legit. By Max Landis before he became a professional screenwriter.