- Location
- Wishing I was somewhere much colder, I asssume.
Some of the Guardians can actually be pretty reasonable on an individual basis.I don't think the Guardians are capable of realizing that kind of thing.
Some of the Guardians can actually be pretty reasonable on an individual basis.I don't think the Guardians are capable of realizing that kind of thing.
The differences in how Atlanteans handle titles comes up in the episode after next. Poseidonis has the one marrying into the crown getting an equal level title, though the one born to it has precedence.It's entirely possible that Atlantis has different rules considering the rules aren't even consistent across European countries. And even in England, since the wife of a King Regnant is a Queen Consort, there's been talk now and then about making it symmetrical so that the husband of a Queen Regnant (e.g. Elizabeth) would be a King Consort.
Thank you, corrected.and filled with
From being comatose
of a formerly pristine chunk
office buildings
on to public practice
that under other circumstances
point my right index finger at
marines' forces
Think I'm okay using it as a verb.
The paragraphs about the child on J swap freely between he/it/they. Should this be consistent?
is laid out
up to my height, flip the lid
system appears
day of my first daughter's birth
using to fly
capable of
know that they were safe
is dressed in the same
veins appear
ring cuts out
should take a break if her sister does
don't suppose that they would have
it's possible
Koriand'r's ring
Koriand'r's soul
and then solidifies
Koriand'r's construct armour
then
, you'd
She turns back
is less important than
practising
Galactica
crumbler
Then he
and sends it back
defenders' sides
as it reaches
I surrender
Thank God!Ooh, I've caught up with the point where the story was at when I started reading. Guess it's not surprising that I'm seeing less typos in the latest chapters (though a different pair of eyes might).
Thank you, corrected.between soldiers, squads all
serves as a reasonable insulator
This still isn't ideal, given the next few phrases. Perhaps the whole sentence needs a rework?
the weapons' own
the same is true of
grandparents' bodies
explodes in
out of the way
get to the control centre
An image of the belligerent
in this case is
who were fortunate enough to survive
marine complements
more that I don't
watching as the robot guns
Doctor Robbins'
walk past
are sound yet I am
we were a technologically sophisticated
that the idea of
really quite pretty
the oddity, their
It's how their language works.Why does the Llarr conversation use broken English via power ring?
Thank you, corrected.prove to be a major boon
boughs and leaves
the Thanagarians' weight
leaf fronds
physics which make
Or else, if "physics" is singular, then change "apply equally" to "applies equally" later in the sentence.
no interest in dealing
kinda weird
I'm suddenly reminded of the "secret" ending for Far Cry 4.
Are you a professional editor? Just curious.Ooh, I've caught up with the point where the story was at when I started reading. Guess it's not surprising that I'm seeing less typos in the latest chapters (though a different pair of eyes might).
Thank you, corrected.
No, the tether is dragging him.slice through his link to his scramjet constructs and drag him
Thank you, corrected.
"Even when we hunger for the destruction of our foes we must always strive for their conversion. A living ally is of infinitely greater worth than a dead opponent." - General Cirin, Crimson DarkYou know, Sun Tzu might have had it wrong.
The supreme acme of skill isn't to win a battle without fighting, it's to recruit your enemies to fight with you.
Oh, I can see that now you point it out.
Nope, just an amateur pedant
For one, the Reach is apparently freaking huge while the OLC and associates are scaling up from the ground up and that buys them a lot of time to develop countermeasures if nothing else. They probably haven't survived this long without being somewhat good at it.So, story-wise, what are the chances that Alan will flat-out refuse to take a lantern made by a weaponer of Qward if he learns where it came from? Because I can see this happening. He already refused several morally dubious ways to prolong his life. "Recruited an omnicidally evil alien to make you a lantern in exchange for providing him with data to make even more horrific weapons of mass destruction" is not very moral, at least depending on the spin of it.
Bling-wise I am really curious about where this is going. Paul has recruited the Weaponer, one of the best weapon makers in the universe. He has access to Controllers, one of the best tool makers in the universe. At least Hephaestus seemed to be interested in going to space, and is a supreme magesmith; Vulcan might be interested too. Paul has access to a number of OCP materials and technologies (I outlined this before), both "mundane", "scientifically hyperadvanced" and "arcane". He has, on numerous occasions, stated that he is planning on reequipping his corps and darkstars. For story reasons, Reach obviously won't be steamrolled over. But, realistically, Paul and co should be able to produce equipment that would put them quite ahead of the Reach in terms of offense, defense, utility and movement speeds. I am really curious about how this is going to be handled and how Reach will escalate to compensate.
It's probably been mentioned before on other occasions, but dear lord the Morden vibes...
You really have to ask this, Guy? After everything else Paul has pulled?
This recruitment would seem a bit unrealistically easy, except that Paulphidian just tanked a superweapon. Gotta take someone like that seriously.
And remember, canonically, he managed to create quasi-permament WHITE LIGHT constructs.Haha, neat. This is like the best outcome. The Weaponer's great.
They can also do exponential growth pretty damn well. Better than Reach, really. What with orange lantern self-sustaining constructs. Hell, it would not surprise me if "assimilate self on death" could be added to the rings' functionality (optional and consensual, obviously), and we already know that orange light constructs can make more of themselves.For one, the Reach is apparent freaking huge while the OLC and associates are scaling up from the ground up and that buys them a lot of time to develop countermeasures if nothing else. They probably haven't survived this long without being somewhat good at it.
Did Truggs allude in any way to the Orange Night that Abra Kadabra so fears?
If I recall correctly, Orange Night that Kadabra knows about comes from when Reach tried to use / ally with / subvert Larfleeze in their attempts to destroy / conquer Green Lantern Corps. At least I remember @Mr Zoat saying something like this. It wasn't initiated by Paul, and, so far, it seems that all downstream time travelers come from futures without Paul.Did Truggs allude in any way to the Orange Night that Abra Kadabra so fears?
Cause I'm thinking that those two come from different futures with a pivot point in the 'present' centering on Paul.
Orange Night that Kadabra knows about comes from when Reach tried to use / ally with / subvert Larfleeze in their attempts to destroy / conquer Green Lantern Corps.
Dr. Magnus: do i get a say in this?
new chant?This is our cause. This is our fight.
Let none who live dispute our right.
Powered by need, our tireless might.
Guides all souls with orange light.
Nope, it's always been their shared oath.
If I recall correctly, Orange Night that Kadabra knows about comes from when Reach tried to use / ally with / subvert Larfleeze in their attempts to destroy / conquer Green Lantern Corps. At least I remember @Mr Zoat saying something like this. It wasn't initiated by Paul, and, so far, it seems that all downstream time travelers come from futures without Paul.
Here you go....You do not recall correctly, unless there's a WoG that I missed. Literally all we know is that Kadabra mentioned Orangest Night, and Truggs mentioned the Reach; nothing appears to have connected these two future events.
Also, is this the Orange NIght? Random Orange lanterns flying around assimillating whoever they get their hands on?No, that was Larfleeze. See, in the original timeline (the one Truggs and Abra come from) the Reach went looking for things that could fight Lanterns. They made representations to Apokolips, Qward and Okaara to try establishing a relationship. It went about as well as you might expect.