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Nice small gods reference.

Feels like it broke down somewhere though.

I cant imagine "tren" would have acted differently had he simply stumbled across a random tortoise.
 
If the Mother Box's influence continues like this, Grayven might find himself on a long, slow slide upwards to Lawful Good status.
 
You mean-." He makes a sort of rasping/coughing noise. "You mean, like the other guys?"

I look back to where what's left of his late colleagues are lying on the ground. One got mashed against the wall when the carriages jack-knifed and the other bled out when I fired at the train with my fusion cannon.

Pictured: the would-be founders of the Psion Sentient Liberties Union
 
Does everyone remember how Grayven locked himself out of the rewards of the Befriend Themyscira questline that Paul greatly benefited from? If Grayven is lucky we'll see a reverse of that here in which Grayven picks up a Psion (or Psion experiment) as an ally.

I wonder what the Psions would do if they had a captive emotional embodiment to experiment on .
 
Does everyone remember how Grayven locked himself out of the rewards of the Befriend Themyscira questline that Paul greatly benefited from? If Grayven is lucky we'll see a reverse of that here in which Grayven picks up a Psion (or Psion experiment) as an ally.

I wonder what the Psions would do if they had a captive emotional embodiment to experiment on .

He could always run into Gorius Karkum, female Psion who became a green lantern in the comics.

As for Psion experiments, in REBELS they actually made symbiotic Starros they dubbed Dark Stars.
 
He could always run into Gorius Karkum, female Psion who became a green lantern in the comics.
Looking her up, only female Psions are capable of empathy. And they spend their lives being constantly raped by the males. However, it appears in this story that they don't have females anymore:

They almost certainly can't. They're not exactly clones, but they mix genes in laboratories, the resulting Psionlings get raised and dehumanised -or whatever you call it- in mechanurseries and then join the labour force in a monstrous society that actually bred most of the species in this region just to perform long term biotech research.
 
It's actually a Blade Runner reference; I don't know if Pratchett parodies the same source, it's been a while since I've read Small Gods but this is definitely the Voight-Kampff test. I believe the idea is that it measures stress response while asking a human-imitator to justify an inhuman act.
Hmm. No reason it can't be both? Small Gods definitely includes the tortoise flip. And I'm pretty sure Blade Runner has nothing specifically about tortoises.

On the whole, I wouldn't have said Grayven was looking for an emotional response, nor trying to distinguish human from imitator, so much as looking for a moral response. The Psion did, in fact, display emotion in the scenario, but since it was mostly orange, he failed the test.
 
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The "i" in ping is missing italics.
That was intentional.
Think you meant "begin" here.
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Hmm. No reason it can't be both? Small Gods definitely includes the tortoise flip. And I'm pretty sure Blade Runner has nothing specifically about tortoises.
Yeah, it does.
 
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"I will want more data before reaching a firm conclusion. But you may consider me provisionally interested."
I really like this bit. Those initial letters combined with their use earlier in the chapter, it's clear that he really wants this to be the case, but is holding that desire in check pending more details. Mmm. Love it.

point vaguely at her… "Front.. blob… Thing."

Beep.

"Really? Oh, that's actually helpful. Okay, we're assembling in the embarkation room-."

Rev beep.

She turns and accelerates ahead of
I can't tell if those Sphere bits were supposed to be italics and just got missed, or were supposed to be italics plus emphasis and so wrapped around to appearing non-italic.

What's the point of mass killing if you don't get to enjoy it?
That's our Graven, alright.

The "i" in ping is missing italics.
Considering it's more work to get only parts of a word to be in italics....
 
Two points: I actually feel a little bad for Tren, because he seems like a kid who pulls wings off of flies because his psychopathic daddy tells him how smart he is for doing so. He really did seem...innocent. Not kind or good, mind. Innocent. I don't know what the race he referred to is, though, so maybe he'd already done more than tortured cats because he was told it was clever. In short, I think he or somebody like him might be redeemable, given reason to understand that sapients are valuable in their own right. You can have a good-aligned sociopath as long as he's got a strong sense of enlightened self-interest. Empathy is a short cut to the more useful aspects of enlightened self-interest, but sufficiently intelligent sociopaths can learn the same things. (Psychopaths, no, because they enjoy torture for its own sake. Tren, here, seemed to enjoy it because it proved he was good at something his superiors found praise-worthy. Like a kid who enjoys excelling at sports or math or puzzles or chess because he enjoys the challenge and has been told it's a worthy one.)

Second, here's how you mix fear and avarice: Fill people with the terror of what you will take from them. Your greed for their stuff combined with their terror of the avaricious monster come to claim it.

You can't do it while being a good person, though. At least, I don't see how. Avarice as motive for inspiring fear is just generally going to require disregard for others' rights.
 
You can't do it while being a good person, though. At least, I don't see how. Avarice as motive for inspiring fear is just generally going to require disregard for others' rights.
Can you just want to make people scared? I can tell how that would be a precarious mindset because you wouldn't want to slip into fear for its own sake and that might be what Grayven is dealing with, especially since he's out of practice channeling Orange.
 
Second, here's how you mix fear and avarice: Fill people with the terror of what you will take from them. Your greed for their stuff combined with their terror of the avaricious monster come to claim it.
That sort of juxtaposition really isn't easy, and the Renegade's level of ring skill is much lower than the SI's. Mastery isn't called that because most Lanterns ever reach it.
 
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