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Also one of the standard compulsions made her want to sleep with him? Even assuming she meant that platonically that seems odd.

I'd bet on it being her conscious mind realizing what he could mean and jumping to the worst possible conclusion, and then the brand making her happy to do it.

OL's reaction is entirely appropriate. That is chilling.
 
Also one of the standard compulsions made her want to sleep with him? Even assuming she meant that platonically that seems odd.
She used to be a slave and "harem dancer", so it seems logical her mind would go in that direction.


Typos:

I know nothing more about what they a seeking in our treaty now than I did when I arrived.
"are"

It's build like a combination of fort and warehouse complex, thick walls protecting large open rooms and wide corridors.
"built"

Not a lot of Spider Guild cuisine on records, but I hold out my right hand and create what is essentially an invertebrate salad with.. mould sauce.
"record"
 
She smiles cheerfully. "I would be delighted to sleep with you, master."
The ring wouldn't translate euphemisms, and "sleeping with someone" is English, or at the very least Human. Since she is at least part cat, this was likely entirely non-sexual.

I mean, Zoat is messing with us 100%, but that doesn't exclude the possibility of it being sensible in-universe.
 
Well at least he can actually talk to her now beyond having a happy mind controlled slave around.

Maybe try and get her on the idea of him being a good guy that wouldn't mind being friendly with Omega Men.
 
The ring wouldn't translate euphemisms, and "sleeping with someone" is English, or at the very least Human. Since she is at least part cat, this was likely entirely non-sexual.

I mean, Zoat is messing with us 100%, but that doesn't exclude the possibility of it being sensible in-universe.
Not necessarily. That would be true in our own universe, but many of the various alien species in the DC universe are very, very human-like. Though it's probably best to say humans are like them, I guess. And considering how many humans wind up in pretty normal-by-human-standards sexual relationships with aliens, it's not entirely unlikely for them to have a phrase somewhat similar to "sleeping with," as the reason it's used is pretty blatant.

As OL said to Wonder Woman once upon a time. You'd never expect alien life to be so similar to humans. Or something like that.

Or she could have just said it in a very polite, non-crude way and the ring translated it to the closest English equivalent, I guess. But my first explanation is less boring.
 
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The ring wouldn't translate euphemisms, and "sleeping with someone" is English, or at the very least Human. Since she is at least part cat, this was likely entirely non-sexual.

I mean, Zoat is messing with us 100%, but that doesn't exclude the possibility of it being sensible in-universe.
Except OL made a point of how it's a universal translator. It even lets him communicate in body language using appendages he does not have. I highly doubt euphemisms are beyond it.
 
Hey @Mr Zoat I was going through the updates I found these Renegade updates:
Should these not be a different color?
Maybe red or a combination of colors like this one:
It's usually the SI that has no color for his dates
Hey @Mr Zoat, apart from this I also found that here:
the 'And you lost it' part has bb-code color 'color' instead of green or something.
Also these should be Sephtian
Thank you, corrected.
 
@Mr Zoat here are the epubs I made up to now.
The Season 1 epub is completed and up to date as of 10/05/2017
The Season 2 epub is completed and up to date as of 10/05/2017
The Season 3 epub up to date with the latest chapters and corrections

epub for Season 1 (Episodes 01-26) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (corrections added up to 10/05/2017)
epub for Season 2 (Episodes 27-52) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (corrections added up to 10/05/2017)
epub for Season 3 (Episodes 53-54) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (chapters up to 10/05/2017)


Alternatively you could use this:
epub for Seasons 01-03 (up to episode 54) on MediaFire and GoogleDrive
Seasons 01 and 02 are completed and with corrections as of 10/05/2017 and Season 3 is up to date with the latest chapters and corrections

Note: The Alt versions have background color deep blue and default text color white. Also the transparent text has a darker color as both the background and the text color, and it is also in black borders.
Also both versions have XenForo like threadmarks between episodes while the Alt Versions has similar threadmarks on the individual chapters
Thank you, updated.
 
Well, those spell-eaters, which cause spellcasters trying to cast anything on their wearers to feel like their souls are being pulled out, will in no way cause some hilarious misunderstandings when coupled with local "Beast of Okaara who steals souls" myths.
 
This is a mean cliffhanger!

Also one of the standard compulsions made her want to sleep with him? Even assuming she meant that platonically that seems odd.

Maybe catgirls bond by cuddling with friends or something and the compulsion was about being friendly?

The ring wouldn't translate euphemisms, and "sleeping with someone" is English, or at the very least Human. Since she is at least part cat, this was likely entirely non-sexual.

I mean, Zoat is messing with us 100%, but that doesn't exclude the possibility of it being sensible in-universe.

Felicity's character was a harem slave in other incarnations, and like Holly she ended up falling for (to some extent) the first guy in her life who was basically decent to her.

Also, I think this is the first time Paul's branded someone since he turned his testosterone back on, and he did recently turn down Jade's offer. The fact that he wouldn't ever consciously do it doesn't make that desire go away.

Add in Felicity's currently being subject to avarice-based mind control and the stuff she's likely had done to her in the past...

Also, trans-species relations are not uncommon things in the Vega system, and non-con ones even more so. See: some of Starfire's incarnations' pasts with the Gordians.

And she may not have literally said sleeping in her language, and the ring translated to a common euphemism. Or, you know, sleeping and that have no reason to not be related activities for other mammalian-ish species as well.

And having that "cheerful smile" and her use of the term "master" ... she's probably wanting to do what she thinks OL wants because it'll be the least painful route available in her situation. But I'm definitely seeing Stepford Smiler flashbacks to her slave days in her head.
 
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epub for Season 1 (Episodes 01-26) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (corrections added up to 10/05/2017)
epub for Season 2 (Episodes 27-52) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (corrections added up to 10/05/2017)
epub for Season 3 (Episodes 53-54) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (chapters up to 10/05/2017)
Shouldn't Chapter 53 be part of Season 2 instead of Season 3, narratively speaking, since SI hadn't left Earth yet?
 
Felicity's character was a harem slave in other incarnations, and like Holly she ended up falling for (to some extent) the first guy in her life who was basically decent to her.

Also, I think this is the first time Paul's branded someone since he turned his testosterone back on, and he did recently turn down Jade's offer. The fact that he wouldn't ever consciously do it doesn't make that desire go away.

Add in Felicity's currently being subject to avarice-based mind control and the stuff she's likely had done to her in the past...

Also, trans-species relations are not uncommon things in the Vega system, and non-con ones even more so. See: some of Starfire's incarnations' pasts with the Gordians.

And she may not have literally said sleeping in her language, and the ring translated to a common euphemism. Or, you know, sleeping and that have no reason to not be related activities for other mammalian-ish species as well.

And having that "cheerful smile" and her use of the term "master" ... she's probably wanting to do what she thinks OL wants because it'll be the least painful route available in her situation. But I'm definitely seeing Stepford Smiler flashbacks to her slave days in her head.
Paul doesn't have subconscious desires. That's what enlightenment means in this verse. He's constantly perfectly aware of all his desires
 
Also one of the standard compulsions made her want to sleep with him? Even assuming she meant that platonically
She's been branded by a ring of avarice, not ethics. She most likely wants to serve him to the fullest extent of her skills, knowledge, and abilities, with little regard to her personal health, safety or future well being (beyond a desire to avoid anything that will make it harder to serve him in the future, like a severe injury).

That includes sex, which she will assume is something he might be interested in, since with rare exceptions this is a universe of Ridiculously Human Aliens, and he is male.

It's also possible that the brand is allowing her to openly express a desire she would normally be circumspect about. EG: Given your levels of wealth and power you are an excellent prospective mate. Or: Exchanging sex for safety is an acceptable last resort. Or: Sleeping with you will make it easier to rob you later. Or: I'd much rather sleep with you than get impregnated but that totally-not-a-xenomorph behind me.[/QUOTE]
 
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