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That's awesome then, time for some character interaction. Or does no-one have agency unless OL is involved?
It's well-established that characters do indeed have agency off-screen in WTR. It just doesn't get shown in the fic unless OL is involved. (But OL does NOTE that he's sometimes surprised by things that happened off-screen.)
 
Actually, the first person they'd reach out to would be the American magic using superhero Giovanni Zatara. For some reason they're having trouble getting hold of him.
"Miss Zatara, we would very much like to speak to your father on matters of national importance."

"I'm sorry, but you can't do that right now. He's unavailable."

"Miss, we really need to speak to him now. Is there any way at all to release him from his current duties?"

"I'M WORKING ON IT."
 
Today's field exercise involved members of the team being paired with a member of the Justice League whom they don't normally work with. Beryl's squiring for Superman, Kon's prowling the mean and probably under-levelled streets of Star City,
To be fair, if Artemis (who has been Dannered for months, now) is patrolling there regularly, the remaining criminals would have at least tried to adjust to compensate. Probably still under-levelled even if they have, but not by quite so much.

I can see why they got paired up together.

The purpose of the exercise was to make people work with those who's preferred way of operating is different from their own.
Well, it reads like the Barbarian and the (Not-So-)Squishy Wizard, so that one works.
 
Actually, the first person they'd reach out to would be the American magic using superhero Giovanni Zatara. For some reason they're having trouble getting hold of him.
OL really needs to find a sympathetic US District Attorney. Or visit Jonathan & Martha Kent. Succeed or fail, there is going to be fallout over the Nabu issue. Something that might help would be getting the complicit members of the Justice League to realize that covering up the lich lo-jacking anyone, let alone the US most prominent superhero, was not their call to make any more than deciding who the law should apply to, and who it shouldn't. And the way Zatanna had to cover for their lies to a family friend because they had not done the legwork to be competent in their cover story was rather fucked up.
 
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Personally, I expect someone to be smart enough and incorporate scry wards into updated money design af some point, thus giving all their citizens scry protection.
Unintended side effect:

Bank teller: "This is weird. There hasn't been a single customer all day."

Customer outside the bank: "What the hell happened? I swear the bank used to be here, now there's just an empty lot."
 
Undermined (part 6)
18th June
09:43 GMT -6


"Peacock!" Ms Thal throws open the double doors leading to their St Roch residence. "We have returned from battle!"

I follow on behind her, the remains of the robot floating in an orange aura. The location of the Hawks' residence in St Roch is known to the general public -pretty much unavoidable when you fly in and out of it- so Ms Thal didn't bother with any sort of subterfuge on our journey back. I think she rather likes the attention we got.

Mister Hol looks up from his workstation, the holographic display in front of him playing a recording of our fight. Looks like it's from Ms Thal's point of view. He's wearing his basic uniform, but without the armoured plates or helmet. "Yes, I saw." He peers slightly to the side, getting a better look at it. "Thank you for bringing it back more intact than normal."

Ms Thal stops just in front of him and waves her new sword back and forth. "Where do we have room for this?"

"Oh, just put it on the bench there. I'll get to it in a little while." He gestures to the side with his right hand, indicating a work station as he gets up for a closer look at what's left of the robot. "I'm more interested in the robot's flight system. Powered flight of that sort on a planet like Earth could-."

"Hey!" Ms Thal shoves him lightly with her left hand to get his attention. "This is a battle trophy. I'm not letting you dissect it, I'm putting it on display."

"You still need to put it on the bench. I'll need to check that it isn't booby trapped before you hang it on our wall."

She stares him directly in the eyes. "There better not be a single scratch on this."

He nods, turning fully to face her with his wings slightly extended. "I'll try to stick to non-invasive methods, Magpie."

"See that you do." She leans into him, reaching up to put her hands behind his head and pull it down to a more kissable-.

I turn around, looking for a sensible place to put the robot. Ah, that's a… Holographic imaging tank. Okay. I run one last radiation scan over the head part. No electrical activity, no concentrations of heat, no alpha, beta or gamma radiation and… I take my rune stone out one of my armour's pockets and hold it close to the surface. A slight reaction, but it doesn't look like there are any aggressive enchantments running on it. That done, I deposit it at the far end of the tank and then repeat the process on the lower part before going back to trying to make sense of the smaller parts. I didn't get a great recording of where they came from and a lot of them were damaged by the impact and the heat. I think these.. sort of.. purple plasticy bits came from here-.

"Oh, don't bother putting them in there." I look around as Mister Hol lifts his face away from his wife. "The holotank's only worth using for large pieces. I can look at the shrapnel later if I need to."

"Right you are, sir. Ah." I look at the next table over. "Is there alright?"

"Certainly. Just grab a container first."

Container, contain-ah. I pick up a small plastic tub and deposit the shrapnel into it before putting it on the table. "Anything else, sir?" I look around to see Ms Thal leaving through a door in the far side of the room.

Mister Hol has already moved up to the control systems on the holotank. "No, you're dismissed. Showers are through those doors and on the right."

I… Don't know anything about Thanagarian attitudes to nudity, but-.

"Shayera will be using the one in our room."

"Oh. Right, yes. But I wasn't planning to have a shower, sir."

"No?" He glances up. "Even in a short fight, you can work up quite a sweat. Particularly in fully enclosed power armour. I suppose it's not a problem for me as long as you keep the armour on, but you may find that other people don't look on it too kindly."

"A benefit of environmental shields, sir." I return my armour to subspace. "I'm fresh as a daisy underneath."

"Convenient." He presses a few buttons and the scanners on the holotank go to work. Nothing I can't replicate with the ring, but the drawback to having as much data as I do is that there's too much stuff. Mister Hol has his workshop to look for things that are likely to be there. Plus, it doesn't take ring charge. "Something like that would certainly make life aboard Thanagarian navy ships a good deal more comfortable."

"I'm sorry to say, sir, that the shield is part of the whole thing. Force field based personal cleaning units have a… Patchy history."

"I know. The last time Thanagar tried to implement one it took a layer of skin off the user one time in three. Green Lantern was talking to me about America's space program, and I found it a little depressing that we still use essentially the same system."

"There are forms of techno-organic armour that deal with the problem rather well, sir… But you might not like who you have to deal with to get it."

"Do you intend to keep calling me 'sir'?"

"Sir?"

"I don't hold any particular rank in the Justice League and I'm not a member of the Thanagarian police force any longer. You aren't required to address me as 'sir'."

"Very well, sir. What would you like me to call you?"

He looks up again, a smirk on his lips. "I thought the local form of address was 'Hawkman'."

I exhale, bowing my head. "Yes sir, but to be frank I've always-."

He frowns. "To be what?"

"Frank. Er, open and honest? Oh! You're getting a-" I wave my right hand back and forth between us. "-translation. It usually manages a best match for non-literal turns of phrase."

"Hah. Have you any idea how duplicitous it sounds to need to specify that you're being honest this time? Why would anyone believe you?"

"I suppose… Sometimes people talk about a subject obliquely? Or hold things back?"

"I only speak two Thanagarian languages, but I don't think that either of them has a phrase like that."

"Is that a… Thanagar thing, or do the Lizarkon languages have the same feature?"

"I don't know." He presses a button and a cutaway image of the robot appears. "You'd have to ask one of them. Hm."

"Something interesting, sir?"

"The basic structure is quite a lot like the robotic duplicate of Shayera that was built last year by-."

"Johnny Law, sir. I contacted the prison where he's being held, and they confirmed that he's still there."

"Good work. Similar basic structural layout… But the controlled plasma reaction is nothing like anything I've seen on Earth before. The gravitic slingshot could have come from Earth, but only from a handful of places." He presses other buttons, magnifying particular systems. "To get the effect you observed when the robot moved or attacked, the plasma would have to be expelled at extremely high pressure. But that's not consistent with the comparative lack of damage to the surrounding environment."

"Some sort of exotic containment system, sir?"

"Probably." He nods to himself. "You're.. going.. to keep calling me that, aren't you?"

"I was planning to. But if you'd prefer 'Peacock'-?"

"'Sir' is fine. Now,-" He leans forwards. "-let's take a closer look at this."
 
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huh, hawkwoman is coming across as surprisingly savage. Maybe she's having a rough day? I can't imagine OL kinda tripping up what seems to be her main form of stress relieve is making it any better.
 
I'm capable of using the wiki. I was more wondering how they came into touch with the existing League. Was it just a happenstance meeting, with Supes showing up like 'great work, birdpeople!'?
Actually it was the Flash, but more or less. The SI was painfully accurate with his 'know a guy' description of League hiring policy.
 
Exactly why I'm not a fan. It's absolutely incoherent.

For those who aren't fans of the comics, there are two hawkmen-sorta.

Carter Hall- reincarnated egyptian prince and archeologist who runs around without a shirt and a bird mask.

Then there's Katar Hol- alien cop from Thanagar who doesn't wear a shirt and wears a bird mask.

Except thanks to retcon after retcon after retcon, where one stops in the timeline and the other starts is a big timey whimey ball that staring into too long should come with such warnings as- Can cause cranial explosions, alien abductions, lycanthropy, and vampirism.

And to add to it, Carter Hall and Katar Hol might also be the exact same person (Making Katar Hol a reincarnation of an egyptian prince who reincarnated as Carter Hall archeologist, in addition to being an alien cop), as well as being the avatar of the Thanagarian hawk god who might also be Horus by another name.
 
For those who aren't fans of the comics, there are two hawkmen-sorta.

Carter Hall- reincarnated egyptian prince and archeologist who runs around without a shirt and a bird mask.

Then there's Katar Hol- alien cop from Thanagar who doesn't wear a shirt and wears a bird mask.

Except thanks to retcon after retcon after retcon, where one stops in the timeline and the other starts is a big timey whimey ball that staring into too long should come with such warnings as- Can cause cranial explosions, alien abductions, lycanthropy, and vampirism.

And to add to it, Carter Hall and Katar Hol might also be the exact same person (Making Katar Hol a reincarnation of an egyptian prince who reincarnated as Carter Hall archeologist, in addition to being an alien cop), as well as being the avatar of the Thanagarian hawk god who might also be Horus by another name.
Eh, Zoat gave Donna a logical backstory. He'll be fine.
 
Actually it was the Flash, but more or less. The SI was painfully accurate with his 'know a guy' description of League hiring policy.
Hiring policy? Are they paid as a job? I think recruitment might be more accurate for what seems to be a volunteer organization with strict membership requirements.

Edit: Or maybe that's a Brittishism...
 
This is one case where an information leak in the League files would be useful, as Paul has likely put that info in there. In fact, if I was him, I'd make "recognize your supervillain" wiki, and put the info on Darkseid's page. "Has access to soul-corrupting automatic area of effect mind control".
"Heartless, brutal tyrant that seeks to use said mind control to reduce entire universe to his willing slaves. He is a interstellar threat who commands vast legions of warriors equipped with highly advanced weaponry and are utterly loyal to him alone. Superhumanly durable and strong on par with Superman, and can fire annihilating energy from his eyes that never misses his target. Can and has reduced entire planets to lifeless wastelands. If seen on or near Earth, do not approach him, do not interact with him, do not provoke him. Flee the area as quickly as possible and contact the Justice League and U.N. Security Council immediately."

On a related note, assuming they haven't done it already I think it might be a good idea for Paul, the Hawks, and the other Lanterns to brief the UNSC on the various interstellar threats Earth might have to deal with.

OL really needs to find a sympathetic US District Attorney. Or visit Jonathan & Martha Kent. Succeed or fail, there is going to be fallout over the Nabu issue. Something that might help would be getting the complicit members of the Justice League to realize that covering up the lich lo-jacking anyone, let alone the US most prominent superhero, was not their call to make any more than deciding who the law should apply to, and who it shouldn't. And the way Zatarra had to cover for their lies to a family friend because they had not done the legwork to be competent in their cover story was rather fucked up.
This too.
 
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