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Escalation (part 11)
31st May
17:54 GMT


My eyes are shut, but something is trickling down my face. Eye goo? Blood? I don't think it can be rocket fuel; it isn't on fire. The heat isn't really a problem for me… Not yet at least. I might suffer from oxygen deficiency eventually but my insides are nearly as heat-resistant as my outside. My neck aches and I'm sure that if I could see it I would see Major Kelly's fingerprints gouged into my flesh.
Heal.
Fortunately, the pain from my abused neck is being drowned out by… Agh… The pain from my eye sockets. Not at unanesthetised autodisembowelment levels yet, but the day is young.
Heal.
Stay here or get moving?
Heal.
I'm in what I presume to be a castle. One maintained by the British government as a black site. The castley bits of castles aren't usually all that big, so charging out of the doors and smashing my way along the corridors is certainly a viable option. On the other hand, there are almost certainly more robots out there. There may also be regular Human soldiers -only a concern in the sense that killing them might make me look bad- and metahumans of various sorts. I.. am.. in no shape to fight someone in my weight class.
Heal.
I'm not sure exactly how much of the British super-establishment is on board with Project Evil, but… Even those who aren't would probably be on board with assisting in stopping me if they find me rampaging around a secure facility. Doubly so if I'm dripping with the blood of their countrymen. Of Chester's associates, the only one who really worries me is Tri-man. Super speed and super strength are difficult for me to overcome at the best of times, and.. now… Isn't. Fortunately for me, he has Thundermind's problem of being too much a public figure to be able to disappear for long periods of time. A call has probably gone out, but it'll take him a while to get away from whatever's occupying him and.. then travel here…
Heal.
On the 'stay put' side I've got Father Box and a power ring that are currently non-functional. If I can change that then I can either escape or -my preference- wreck havoc upon the deserving. Sinestro?
Heal.

Heal.
Nothing.
Heal.
Okay then. "In blackest day or-. Uhuh-uhuh."
Heal.
I wince, then gasp as that involves putting pressure on the damaged tissue around my eyes in a way they are not shy about sharing with the rest of me. OWFUCKINGOW!
Heal!
Okay. Talking out loud is a no-go for now.
Heal.
The flames… I think they're dying down a bit. I don't remember seeing any flammable material in the room, so it's just the quick-burning fuel, robot remains and… Probably Kelly-remains and my eyes.
Heal.
When this is over I'm going to be on my third pair of eyes! Thirty years I lived with one perfectly good pair but I'm on this stupid Earth for a couple of months-!
Heal.
I stab my daiklave into the floor and check myself over with my hands. Something stuck on the left side of my torso… Maybe on that side of my face as well, but I have no intention of prodding it to make sure. The robots had some sort of glue spray? It's still sticky in places while in others it's set like rubber and.. across my left arm it appears to have been burned and crystallised. Heh. If I could see what I was doing, I could use it to put a protective cover over my eye sockets, but then… If I could see what I was doing then I wouldn't need to.
Heal.
No other injuries in evidence. I pick the daiklave up once more and cautiously make my way towards the door. I'm getting a little short of breath as well. The room.. didn't look well-ventilated. Can't hear anything much from the far side-. I nearly trip as my right foot bumps into something. I crouch down, feeling… Part of a robot, I think. There's no chance I could repair it or use it as a weapon like this, but maybe… I grab hold of something on the chassis that feels load bearing. As a shield, it's inadequate. As a projectile, it's… Better than nothing.
Heal.
I rise to my feet. Okay, door should be about three metres that way, nearest wall should be there. I could just stride out of the smoke looking like a killing machine, but I'm.. just not feeling it at the moment. I swing the daiklave slowly, trying to use the flat of the blade to determine exactly where the wall begins… There. I stop to listen again.
Heal.
Nothing.
Heal.
I swivel my waist, preparing for the throw. One… Two… Three. I bring my left arm around and hurl the remains of the robot down the corridor outside. Then I listen. No shots, no yelps and no frantic scurrying to the side. Either whoever is there is exceptionally well disciplined or the corridor is empty. Right then, best foot forwards. I step to the side so that I'm standing directly in front of the opening. I should be visible now. No, still nothing.
Heal.
I step forwards one pace. Then another. As I pass through the opening there's a slight drop in temperature and an equally slight rise in air quality. Running my left hand along the wall I can feel the lumps of stone I sliced through when I cut through the door's anchor points earlier and that is the door itself. Worth picking up? I crouch down, feeling it with my left hand. It's not resting flat on the floor, there should be a handle… My probing hand encounters a wheel mechanism. That should do for the moment. I heave it upwards, metal scraping against stone as it comes upright. The wheel turns under the door's weight before stopping at its furthest extent.
Heal.
Mm. Very awkward. I'm just about strong enough to hold it in place, but the grip is decidedly suboptimal. No, have to make do. I hold it so that it covers a good deal of my chest, then extend my daiklave like a blind man's stick. Which it literally is, I suppose. Tap, wall over there. Tap, wall there too.
Heal.
With me removed from the field, command defaults to Doctor Robbins. The Mountain itself should be perfectly secure, with both technological defences and with the muscles and claws of the Genomorphs. I may have sent Chester to assist Miss Amane but I'm reasonably confident of her ability to look after herself if it comes to it.
Heal.
The one I'm really worried about is Lynne.
Heal.
The Centre for Paranormal Research isn't a military institution. There are a couple of security guards, but they're there to throw out nuisance visitors or protestors, not fight paramilitary units. Against untrained and unarmed metahumans, walking up to them with a gun and shooting them dead before they know what's going on is a perfectly viable technique. And if they can shut down a Father Box they can almost certainly shut down her telepathy.
Heal.
Tap. Tap.
Heal.
And sure, if anything happens to her then this country can forget about a smooth transition of power as I run through Westminster like a blender… But that wouldn't bring her back.
Heal.
Tap. Tap.
Heal.
Why did Major Kelly refer to me as 'alien'? I mean, yes, I am… Father Box?
Heal.

Heal.
Okay, I'm not an alien, but I've been telling everyone that I am and I certainly look like one. Why the heck is that a problem for him? Everything these people know about Apokolips comes from me. Doesn't it? They wouldn't know that they should be worried about an Apokoliptian unless I told them, and if they don't trust me why would they trust my information about us not being trustworthy.
Heal.
Tap. Tap.
Heal.
Maybe he's just speciesist. I mean, alien is three syllables, saying my name would actually have been-.
Heal.
"Hello, alien."
Heal.
I stop, turning my head in what I think is the direction of the voice. "Miss Dolmann." Owowow. Fight through. "Would you be so good as to point me to the exit? I've been kidnapped by men of low character and I fear for my safety."
Heal.
"We're going to get you. You're in a secure facility and extra forces are en route. You can't escape."
Heal.
For a moment, I consider doing the 'I'm not locked in here with you' line. But my throat really hurts. "'Kay."
Hea-. No. I try pushing my essence into Father Box, the resolute unflagging drive to conquer married to the intellect to do so intelligently. Nothing.
Tap. Tap.
Heal.
I start walking again. I wonder if I can sense the magic in this structure? Maybe get some idea of where things are? My magic-sense is pretty much limited to 'there is a concentration of power here', but even that-.

"You're going to die, alien!"
Heal.
"Y-. Yep. You said."
Heal.
I rest the knuckles of my right hand against the corridor wall and try relaxing my grip on my own body. Can I.. feel.. anything..? Ugh, sort of. There's power here, but it appears to be all around in more or less uniform strength. It probably isn't, but the distinction is too subtle for me to detect. Drat. I bring my daiklave back to the ready position and start walking again.
Heal.
Then I hear the roar as another rocket fires.
 
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For a moment, I consider doing the 'I'm not locked in here with you' line. But my throat really hurts. "'Kay."
Awww, you're actually making me feel bad for him here. That "Kay" is so tiny, it's kind of cute.

Not related to this update, but @Mr. Zoat, if you've seen some of Justice League: Action yet, do you think a version of Paul would end up there, and what kind of ring would he have?
 
I'm still really impressed they could shut down both a power ring and a father box, possibly with a general purpose ward since they didn't seem to know exactly what he would have on him. Given that a flipping lord of chaos needed to get a specific magical reagent that he mentioned was a bitch to track down to mess with a power ring that's kind of a concerning amount of power.

Espicaly the father box. New gods know about magic and incorporate some of it into their tech with the whole divine nature thing, this kind of mojo is near the top on a galactic scale.
 
You know, I think Grayven is actually more relatable then the paragon.

He has more emotional connections to the story, and seems to get in a great many more situations where his power level is appropriate to the threat.
 
I'm still really impressed they could shut down both a power ring and a father box, possibly with a general purpose ward since they didn't seem to know exactly what he would have on him. Given that a flipping lord of chaos needed to get a specific magical reagent that he mentioned was a bitch to track down to mess with a power ring that's kind of a concerning amount of power.

Espicaly the father box. New gods know about magic and incorporate some of it into their tech with the whole divine nature thing, this kind of mojo is near the top on a galactic scale.
I expect we'll find out that Father Box and Sinestring are both perfectly fine and functional, with the ward merely interfering with his ability to communicate with them. Possibly even by turning his own telepathic shields against himself.
 
I think this is the point where picking a direction and smashing everything between him and outside is a viable tactic. He's going to be fighting basically everything in the place anyway, and unless he plans to wait for his eyes to heal he's not getting out any faster by minimizing property damage.

Oh, and for those wondering, there is invistext in this update, but it's the word "heal" at every line break and this one other line:
For a moment, I consider doing the 'I'm not locked in here with you' line. But my throat really hurts. "'Kay."
Hea-. No. I try pushing my essence into Father Box, the resolute unflagging drive to conquer married to the intellect to do so intelligently. Nothing.
Tap. Tap.
 
I expect we'll find out that Father Box and Sinestring are both perfectly fine and functional, with the ward merely interfering with his ability to communicate with them. Possibly even by turning his own telepathic shields against himself.

that's still shutting down new god tech, stuff that is literally designed to function on divine battlefields. Even if it's not a direct attack and is focusing on the link that's still hella impressive.
 
I don't think he's relatable, but it's nice for him to have opposition that's actually slowing him down for a change. It adds tension and implies that the outcome could go either way even if we know that won't happen.
 
that's still shutting down new god tech, stuff that is literally designed to function on divine battlefields. Even if it's not a direct attack and is focusing on the link that's still hella impressive.

Also something that would be useful against Darkseid.

Unless there's a weakness somewhere to exploit. Possibly a leyline thing.
 
Then I listen.

Being blind really sucks when you're also devoid of your shiny techno-toys. Least Grayven's got natural toughness going for him? And his swords?
As far as I can tell, Grayven just died in a hail of rocket fire, and whatever pieces are left will be carted away for dissection and study. The British government, having obliterated its sole significant opponent and gained control of his ring and Father Box, will presumably harvest his daughter's brain and use it to take control of all humanity, before heading out to spread horror and their personal Dark Eldar flavor to the rest of the universe.

I'm looking at the string of logic that's taking place, and the only way I can see the main character winning is through continuous external interference. This is something that can work just fine if I'm reading it as a continuous sequence, but it tends to provoke boiling salty rage from me if it's happening in a still-ongoing scenario. Hence, I'm taking a break from this thread for a few days.
 
Merlins castle perhaps? The thing could be warded out the arse by demons and queen of the fae, with wards designed to grow stronger over the centuries?
 
that's still shutting down new god tech, stuff that is literally designed to function on divine battlefields. Even if it's not a direct attack and is focusing on the link that's still hella impressive.
Yep, and it would need to be given the known risk of picking up Lynne or Chester in their trap too. They're known to be very strong telepaths. So something that prevents a mental connection would be absolutely crucial, even if it wasn't effectively removing the ring and box from the picture.

I bet Grayven is about to be very glad of his armour, incidentally.
 
Yep, and it would need to be given the known risk of picking up Lynne or Chester in their trap too. They're known to be very strong telepaths. So something that prevents a mental connection would be absolutely crucial, even if it wasn't effectively removing the ring and box from the picture.

I bet Grayven is about to be very glad of his armour, incidentally.

something that just shut down mental connections wouldn't do much. Both the father box and the ring have sapient AI's. They are capable of a limited amount of independent action. For example working out a way past a jamming field or just talking to their user.

Rings can access some basic functions without a user, enough for Sinestro to at least look around and tell graven what he sees.
 
The evidence that other people could verify for themselves? Grayven doesn't have any methods of gathering data that aren't available to other people. Ra's and his league got better stuff than Grayven did, and they don't even use magic or xenotech.
Anything anyone else provides could have been planted by Grayven for them to find.

Because Power Ring.

In fact the only way I can see him actually convincing anybody of his story at this point would be if he put himself under Wonder Woman's lasso of Truth.
 
I love this update. Especially how Grayven shows that he's only pretending to think he's from Apokolips because of Father Box, and how British he is being when talking to Miss Dolmann.

When this is over I'm going to be on my third pair of eyes! Thirty years I lived with one perfectly good pair but I'm on this stupid Earth for a couple of months-!
I laughed so hard here.


couple possible corrections:
With me removed from the field, command defaults to Doctor Robbins.
I know you have your idiosyncrasies when it comes to writing the way people think and talk, but this sentence really need a comma here.

with both technological defences and with the muscles and claws of the Genomorphs.
That should probably be either "with both technological defences and with the muscles and claws of the Genomorphs."
or "both with technological defences and with the muscles and claws of the Genomorphs."

Unless you mean to say that there are exactly two technological defenses, and that the Genomophs aren't related to the "both".
 
What is all the "Heal" about? Is that something healing Grayven? Or his attempts to heal himself?
Given this part:
For a moment, I consider doing the 'I'm not locked in here with you' line. But my throat really hurts. "'Kay."
Hea-. No. I try pushing my essence into Father Box, the resolute unflagging drive to conquer married to the intellect to do so intelligently. Nothing.
Tap. Tap.
It appears to be him.
 
Weapons should be weapon.
I know you have your idiosyncrasies when it comes to writing the way people think and talk, but this sentence really need a comma here.
Thank you, corrected.
That should probably be either "with both technological defences and with the muscles and claws of the Genomorphs."
or "both with technological defences and with the muscles and claws of the Genomorphs."

Unless you mean to say that there are exactly two technological defenses, and that the Genomophs aren't related to the "both".
No, I think that's fine.
 
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