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With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Twelve)

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Mr Zoat said:
"Mister Schreiber, there's no easy way to say this. But I have reason to believe that you are a clone of Adolf Hitler."
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"Who?"

"I know this is shock-. Wait, you don't know who Hitler is?"

"Is he some sort of German rockstar? A small wordplay on music, like the Beatles?"

"He was... He was the leader of the Nazis-."

"Still leaning towards rockstar."

"... And.. and he lead Germany to massacre millions of people through a brutal dictatorship. He is arguably the most infamous person in the past century. How is it you've never heard of him?"

"My studies on international musicians-turned-dictators has been fairly light. If you would give me some time, I could look up this Hitler and give you a more informed opinion on how me being a clone affects me."

"I'm going to regret this, but I'm not sure how this day could get much more odd."



I don't feel like making OL's quotes orange. Deal with it.
 
First, a historical one:
Mr Zoat said:
Misssus King
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Missus

Then for this update:
Mr Zoat said:
observable results, he spoke
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Should either be a full stop and capital letter or a semicolon. In this case I lean for the former.

Mr Zoat said:
adventurous role models ."
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Extra space before the full stop.

Mr Zoat said:
Where you involved
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Were

Mr Zoat said:
far fetched
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far-fetched
 
somnolentSlumber said:
that particular one was missed

i refreshed the post less than a minute ago and it is still there
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Ah, sorry, just double checked what you meant. Thank you, corrected.
Coda said:
First, a historical one: Missus
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Darn.
Then for this update:
Should either be a full stop and capital letter or a semicolon. In this case I lean for the former.
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I think the comma better reflects the way he said it.
Extra space before the full stop.
far-fetched
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Thank you, corrected.
 
Historian said:
Turns out the wards are designed specifically to wipe any memory of Hitler.

He's not being watched or controlled by the Nazis, he's being kept from them. Cue a Jewish Rabbi Magic Commando Force coming down on Paul & Co.

To save Clone-Hitler.

I love this fic.
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That would be fun indeed. Though I still hope that Clone!Hitler becomes a superhero. Maybe Paul could give him a ring in the future? Because just consider the whole situation. A legitimately superheroic clone of Hitler.

Maybe he'll do it as a means to redeem the legacy of his genes or to spite his creators?
 
Yog said:
That would be fun indeed. Though I still hope that Clone!Hitler becomes a superhero. Maybe Paul could give him a ring in the future? Because just consider the whole situation. A legitimately superheroic clone of Hitler.

Maybe he'll do it as a means to redeem the legacy of his genes or to spite his creators?
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Floating ice doom fortress. Burning Martian. Demon hordes. Mates with Constantine. Mates with Hitler. Worshipper of Eris. Gave Hitler superpowers. Got Zeus divorced. Did something implausible to the moon for no real reason.

It fits with the rest of his supervillainy.
 
Yog said:
That would be fun indeed. Though I still hope that Clone!Hitler becomes a superhero. Maybe Paul could give him a ring in the future? Because just consider the whole situation. A legitimately superheroic clone of Hitler.

Maybe he'll do it as a means to redeem the legacy of his genes or to spite his creators?
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You know, with the title of Triumph of the Will, well, green lantern hitler clone...
 
I fully expect the first line of the next update to be something along the lines of, "Oh, is that what this is about? Yes, I know that."

Possibly followed by, "That's why I don't grow a moustache."
 
Hey, come to think of it: how have Artemis and Robin been coping with their superpowers? I feel like they haven't mentioned it much.

Has anyone besides them actually gotten powers from Paul? I don't think he's actually used the Garrick formula yet.
 
Clone Hitler is getting a bit unwieldy to say, let's do a portmanteau, how about Clitler... no wait that's not gonna work... this is will take some thought.
 
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Historian said:
Hey, come to think of it: how have Artemis and Robin been coping with their superpowers? I feel like they haven't mentioned it much.
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Robin said quite some time ago that he's adapted to it well enough that he doesn't wear his power limiters all the time. Robin himself hasn't seen enough screen time to demonstrate the actual super strength on-screen.
 
@Winged One is slowly going through the thread, still. 2 hours ago he was at the part where Paul is in Tartarus, which is about halfway through the thread. Bets on how long it will take him to catch up?
 
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