Threads Of Destiny(Eastern Fantasy, Sequel to Forge of Destiny)

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Adhoc vote count started by EternalObserver on Feb 2, 2022 at 1:13 AM, finished with 83 posts and 61 votes.


Surprisingly close
 
[X] Check up on the Kid, if they are up to something, better to know.

Hui being diiicks is nothing new, let's try to find a good thing in this mancave of bad breath.
 
"She knew where I was from," Su Ling grunted.

Ling Qi's eyebrows rose. "Why did that come up."

"She offered to introduce me to some people. People who might know some things I'd be interested in," Su Ling bit out grudgingly.

Ling QI nodded slowly, not expecting Su Ling to say anything more in this semi-public space. "And what did she want from you."

"Would you believe she wanted me to meet her younger brother?" Su Ling said with a barked laugh. "Fuck, I don't even know what I don't know. Something is up here."

Ling Qi grimaced, nodding in understanding. That was weird. No offense to Su Ling, but she wasn't well, that sort of talent.

This titbit from earlier suggests that at least part of the Diao want to maybe revive the old blood of their clan.

Be that as it may, we have a name to uphold and here is a perfectly viable child to steal!

[X] Check up on the Kid, if they are up to something, better to know.
 
"Fuck them Huis."

I'd rather spend time engaging with a potential character than spend it sifting through the literally slimy refuse and echoes of what those bastards did to cause this. They're only worth paying attention to as examples of what not to do, and even then only barely. And since we usually aren't allowed to revisit whatever doesn't get picked in binary votes like this, I'd regret not learning about whatever's going on with the child more.

[X] Check up on the Kid, if they are up to something, better to know.
 
This does put a very different spin on things.
Instead of a spirit who just happens to be malicious, we seem to be dealing with a spirit who is reacting to what was done to them.
None of this make it right to what she does to people, but it does put it in different context, and that context is not really that different from, to use as an example, a river spirit who floods because their offerings and rituals were ignored one year.
 
[x] Check up on the Kid, if they are up to something, better to know.
[X] Sneak up on the Kid, show them why you don't try and spook a stealth cultivator.
 
[X] Keep teasing memories from the shrine, there's definitely a deeper something here.

We just had a chapter where Diao Linqin explained how her clan were the "pampered pets and beaten dogs" of the Hui, and how that was the reason for their keeping to Imperial pride. Another where Diao Hualing was interested in Su Ling's fox pyromancy divination, as it was similar to the Diao's own ancient Arts. She mentioned she knew where Su Ling was from, wanted to introduce her to people Su Ling would be interested in as well as her younger brother. And now presumably a Hui made a Diao desecrate their own shrines to their Great Spirit, presumably their ancient patron and source of their pyromancy. Were the Diao fox-blooded once before the Hui erazed their history? What could this mean for the Diao and Diao Hualing's plans for it?

We have narrative to suggest this but Ling Qi doesn't know this chapter's likely relation to that, which makes it non-actionable. We can't use it, we can't ask Diao Hualing or Diao Linqin. We can't use it as the key supporting argument that'd bring the Diao to our Weilu Moderate Emerald Seas Identity ideology that's central to our forming political faction. This is some really interesting stuff story-wise with the potential to become more so. This is how we drag Su Ling into our politics, like the horrible, horrible person we are, and keep her present in some storylines so she isn't left behind narratively.
 
[X] Sneak up on the Kid, show them why you don't try and spook a stealth cultivator.

[X] Check up on the Kid, if they are up to something, better to know.
 
We can try to keep digging through the echoes of the past, and that will almost certainly help somehow.
But personally i'd rather seek out what seems to be an actual person, who could offer more than just memories.
There is a change to learn about more than what was done, maybe find out what was before, or find a way forward that would be more than just trying to get rid of the symptoms of past transgeressions.
 
[] Check up on the Kid, if they are up to something, better to know.

ADOPT ADOPT ADOPT ADOP-


I change my mind, we are not deciding Ling Qi's reaction and Diao deep lore is too enticing for me to pass up.

[X] Keep teasing memories from the shrine, there's definitely a deeper something here.
 
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[X] Check up on the Kid, if they are up to something, better to know.

Su Ling is more about the individuals than the logic of politics. The small fox should be more significant to furthering her Way, it'd be more heartfelt when she sees it compared to the Hui torturing an entire community into a mockery of what it was.

Everyone already know the Hui are the worst.
 
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