The Long Night Part One: Embers in the Dusk: A Planetary Governor Quest (43k) Complete Sequel Up

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Here's a pretty crackpot suggestion: I wonder if we could convince Nurgle that Tzeentch was involved in the plot to rescue Isha? Screwing over Nurgle would definitely be in-character for Tzeentch, and ensuring that Isha was rescued is so important that it might just be believable that Avernites/the Eldar would work with Chaos to do so.

It would serve the dual purpose of undermining Chaos's unity, and would also potentially distract Nurgle from Avernus and us a bit as well.
 
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Here's a pretty crackpot suggestion: I wonder if we could Nurgle that Tzeentch was involved in the plot to rescue Isha? Screwing over Nurgle would definitely be in-character for Tzeentch, and ensuring that Isha was rescued is so important that it might just be believable that Avernites would work with Chaos to do so.

It would serve the dual purpose of undermining Chaos's unity, and would also potentially distract Nurgle from Avernus and us a bit as well.
We don't need to do that, Nurgle can come to that conclusion fine on its own.

Hell Tzeench may even believe it.
 
He did do it though. He delayed both the message and then Nurgle himself so that the team had enough time to escape.
He was also going to be behind Ahrah, but we killed him.

Yeah, but I'm pretty sure he means more directly involved like master minded it.

Tzeench (I hope) wasn't, but making Nurgle think he was focuses him on Tzeench as opposed to the Eldar.
 
Here's a pretty crackpot suggestion: I wonder if we could convince Nurgle that Tzeentch was involved in the plot to rescue Isha? Screwing over Nurgle would definitely be in-character for Tzeentch, and ensuring that Isha was rescued is so important that it might just be believable that Avernites/the Eldar would work with Chaos to do so.

It would serve the dual purpose of undermining Chaos's unity, and would also potentially distract Nurgle from Avernus and us a bit as well.
@Durin
1. Is this idea of mine viable?
1.a) Would it actually do anything to distract Nurgle/Abaddon from Avernus and the Trust, and limit the fallout we can expect?

Separately:
2. How much will increased attention on Avernus lead to increased attention on the Imperial Trust, including after Ridcully's identity is revealed? Our tech hasn't been revealed, so there's no obvious advantage to conquering the Trust, but the fact that a human seer helped the rescue attempt might be seen as hugely suspicious, even if he didn't have active plans to invade us.

3. Related to 2, how much should we expect extra spy efforts against the Trust to increase, and how much would this counteract the efforts of the loyalist Alpha legion?
3.a) If the difficulty is greater, would this affect the cost of an Eldar favour for permanent counterintelligence assistance against spies and infiltrators, which was 1 major favour last time I checked?

4. Could we divert suspicion from the Trust by having the Alpha legion loyalists spread rumours that Ridcully was possibly a disguised Eldar acting as the Empire of Ashes' chief liaison on Avernus?

5. In conjunction with or alternatively to 4, if we spread rumours that Ridcully was "on the run" accused of being a heretic/traitor, who was hiding out with the Lizardmen or the Planet Mind, would that also divert suspicion from the Trust as a whole?
5.a) If Ridcully was actually hiding out with another faction on Avernus instead of us, rather than us just pretending that he was, with him staying in touch and working for us via comms/telepathy, would that reduce the casualties we could expect from a Nurglite incursion, since they wouldn't have a reason to target us in particular?
5.b) Do we know which factions on Avernus, if any, might agree to this?
 
A Bloody Parade


Long live the Imperium the Domain of Chaos and abbadon the WarMaster, True Champion of Chaos. Maker of Chains. Breaker of Saints, and master of thousand titles.Today of glory to the gods he is in Cadia,s capital Hive, on his capital world to hold a ceremony. Billions of mortals will be Sacrificed, Tens of Thousands of marines wait to be Sacrificed, even The cursed Eldar wait to be sacrificed for the GODS on Cadia.

In the Capital HIve there is a Macabre Parade of blood and devotion. First comes Honor duels and Hunts are held for Khorne. Followed by a presentation of Armored Vehicles Spreading smoke and disease loving from Nurgle. Tzeentchian Sorcerers make a presentation of illusions and Feats of Magic to wow crowds, Slaanessh Cultist Impale themselves as signs of devotion to their god. While locked step Guardsmen march in the parade with each being the same. Their god is looking at them through their own eyes. This is a Devotion to the gods for the ages to mark this glorious day.For today Chaos shall change the Galaxy. Across the Galaxy brother of Chaos come together to Celebrate this Victory for chaos.

Suddenly things change on cadia as if something powerful has come there. The Worshippers of Nurgle go crazy and start to trample on everyone or anything in their way. Binding Holding Demons of Nurgle come apart as Plague Bearer and worse come out killing everything in their way. Warp Portals start to open up as Sorcerers of Nurgle grab anything near them to sacrifice. The Planet can Feel the Presence of Nurgle eyes as Multiple Exalted come to Cadia. Someone screams ' they are here to kill the War Master' And Pandemonium breaks out.

Berserkers start to kill anyone they can, fighting for blood and glory to Khorne. Slaanesh Space marine appear from portals coming to test their mettle against others. The Legions of the Abomination march in step laying covering fire and advancing. Tzeentchian Sorcerers leave only for Demons to appear on the planet as Tzeeentch appears to stop Nurgle's plot against the war master. Across the planet groups break out those fighting for Nurgle, those fighting for the War master and those fighting because they can.In spaceships open up fire on each other and Bombard hives as declarations against Abbaadon are made. It is pure chaos and the gods Laugh.

The planet is then rocked by mulitple continents destroying explosions killing . In space an explosion in the middle of the fleet happens, making a whole in the planetary defenses large enough for a fleet to get through. Then unexpectedly an army of Lions appeared and began to slaughter the crews of the ships in orbit not destroyed. As the Captured mortal and Space Marine are brought aboard the Spirit of Vengeance they fan out trying to get on others ship so they can escape. Some to ram them into chaos ship others into Cadia. Still more to try to flee.

Aboard the Spirit of Vengeance a long term plan gets enacted as 3 Blood Angels carry a Statue that takes every bit of their will to fight against a Statue of Sanguinius that is special. They fight across the ship and board a thunder Hawk. as they start to flee the system they See the Strangest thing. A giant lion with an eldar, a girl, a lizard, a Ghost and a Green something on its back coming toward them.

@Durin a short omake on how I think the Mass bombing on this day would go.Also I want to see if we can save a primarch

it called the Vengeful Spirit
 
By the way, where doe this Child of Hate comes from? I suppose that it comes from an Omake bu I cannot find it...

Can you link me to the Omake, please?
 
So, here's an interesting question. Isha, as we know, has been locked up by Nurgle since Slaanesh was born, kidnapped while the newly born Chaos God was murdering and devouring his/her/its/their way through the Eldar Pantheon. Importantly, she has remained in one piece all this time, we think. So, my question to you all, is this: do you think it's possible that Isha has been receiving the power from the Eldar that she normally would have been, just unable to use it until now? She's clearly still got some power left, as her healing the team demonstrates, but depending on if she's been stockpiling all that faith ever since she was kidnapped, she could be have an incredible amount of power stored.
 
So, here's an interesting question. Isha, as we know, has been locked up by Nurgle since Slaanesh was born, kidnapped while the newly born Chaos God was murdering and devouring his/her/its/their way through the Eldar Pantheon. Importantly, she has remained in one piece all this time, we think. So, my question to you all, is this: do you think it's possible that Isha has been receiving the power from the Eldar that she normally would have been, just unable to use it until now? She's clearly still got some power left, as her healing the team demonstrates, but depending on if she's been stockpiling all that faith ever since she was kidnapped, she could be have an incredible amount of power stored.
She's a created goddess as such has her own internal power source thus always has juice for things like healing although how this power differs from domain and faith power is unknown.

Whether or not she was getting faith is unknown, but she has been spending power, working on cures, the door etc. so probably not as much power saved up as you think.
 
Well, the dice have been kind this time. The most important rolls were above average, at around the 75% percentile in terms of what was expected. The 77 sucks, but at least it wasn't on HWWO's gtfo roll.
 
In the Storm of Despair the outer layers of defences collapse as the Architect of Fate spends attention elsewhere, allowing the Orks to break in. Their Orks resulting foolhardy charge leads to them being caught between the forces of plague and the inner defences, and suffering losses that for any other group would be fatal, but for the Orks are merely encouraging. As Nurgles forces press the assault into Tzeentch's inner defences the alarm from the Blighted Mansion reaches his ears, delayed first by the Laughing God and then by Tzeentch. Immediately Nurgle and his host begin to withdraw, abandoning the assault.
This should be Storm of Magnus.
 
Smith's Freedom
Smith's Freedom

Valanar the Craftsman had never been in so bad a situation as this, even when his subjugation had started. Locked within a crystal prison, situated upon a constantly moving ritual circle, bound to a planet whose geometry and layout cared nought for common sense or understanding of the material universe.

Also, he was there to die.

He'd known from the instant of his birth that his death was probably inevitable, and in fact given his thousands of years of life, by divine standards, he had managed to live far beyond the average life expectancy for a minor deity. Then again that standard was set at a few hours usually so perhaps far beyond was a bit of an understatement.

Not that it helped him in this situation, because he didn't want to die. He wasn't willing to give in to his fate just yet and in fact, he never was. He was determined to keep on living and he might even have a way to do it.

He was after all a god of the crafts, a master of making. But to make well one must also know how to destroy and so he'd studied his prison well noting the weaknesses within its structure, the central lattice that must be broken and if it were then the entire assemblage would come crumbling down. He just had to do it nine times, then he'd be out of the prison and thus of the alter.

As for escape...well he had another few thoughts on that front.

And so he went to work, making tools from his teeth and nails, expending all of the power he had available to him, as one by one the lattices started to break, as the prison reformed itself, again and again, each time adapting to his attempts as he very carefully kept himself from feeling the excitement. From feeling hope.

After all, it was in the hope that Tzeench got you.

Then he reached the final layer, the ninth and was finished. His power was exhausted, his tools blunted. He had nothing left and he knew Tzeench had planned it like this exactly. There was no way the god that delighted in dashing other's hopes would not have planned for him to escape and to fall just short. If he could use the power that bastard Yharim locked away from him it would be different but he was still bound to the accursed slave driver. Limiting his strength so that he could not even think of trying to resist him, and feeding off of his power…

With a howl, he launched himself at the well of strength that he should be able to take and staggered as it came surging into his hands, as he finally noticed that the chains that bound him...were gone.

Dead and gone, in a way that could only mean one thing, that Yharim was dead. Dead at long last.

With a shout of joy, he took up his tools one more time, his palms bleeding as he attacked his crystalline cage and with a final exertion shattered it into shards.

He fell forwards and down, landing heavily on the currently fur like floor, his body wracked with scars from the rain of crystals, as he pushed himself to his feet. Off in the distance he could make out the shapes of the Orks as they laughed and cavorted, smashing through the defences of Tzeench as if they were so much paper, while close at hand the servants of the chaos god themselves started and advanced on him.

Filling his lungs with air, he shouted out, calling to the child like gods, promising them the greatest toys in the galaxy, if they could, but reach him, grinning as the Lords of Change paled at the thundering footsteps, of two massive children.
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Some people refuse to die like cockroaches.

@Durin
 
The Silver Tongued One
The Silver Tongued One

Zaeed was an old god. In fact, out of the Concordant, he was the oldest god there was, old enough to know that this was not the first time he'd died. But, she'd always come back, in the end, after all, there were always mercenaries and they always needed a sponsor. They, he, she, it...they were a good sponsor, even if at times they were just imaginary, but mercenaries were a superstitious bunch. It was enough to get by on.

But this time...might just be their last time. The ritual, a bigger event than anything ever done to them before. If anything could truly kill them, obliterate the very idea of Zaeed from existence then this would do it and they...didn't like that idea.

Bound to Yharim they might have been, but they liked living. Or at least not dying. But, with their mercenaries dead or scattered, any chance of rescue seemed slim, or at least it had. Then the distinctive disciplined smell of the Krork had hit his nostrils just as they'd thrown him into the arena.

And then there he had fought, at his fullest potential, or at least as close as Khorne could manage. As far as he could tell this was essential to the ritual, that he die his blood flowing from wounds inflicted in honourable combat against worthy foes, before her skull was removed to be offered to the skull throne in a place of high regard beneath Khorne's vast bulk. A nice bit of propaganda, one the daemons that flung themselves into the arena certainly bought into, but the sacrifice themselves was a little less cooperative.

Still, he couldn't just lay down and die, instead of planning would need to be seen too, as he studied the exalted overseeing the ritual, preparing for his moment as the sound of the Krork started to grow closer, cutting through the waves of daemonic interlopers, putting thousands of years of experience to use and combining it with tactical drawing upon his domain.

After all, they were a mercenary. Dodging out of the way at the right time was just part of the service. Although it did help that he was almost able to hide completely within the scrum, as mortal, daemon and everything in-between, ripped each other, as blood flowed in rivers through channels cut into the ground, funnelling it towards a vast bubbling brass basin.

Then as the explosions intensified, boiling into a crescendo, she decided to act, as he noticed the chains laid upon them by Yharim completely fall away. A grin twisted their face as power Khorne did not know they possessed filled them, and they launched into an overwhelming attack.

It was burning through their reserves at a terrifying rate, but that was the price that needed to be paid then so be it, and as he thrust his sword through the neck of the final Bloodthirster he turned to the stands skull in hand and roared.

Roared that he was not satisfied, roared that she demanded a proper foe and screamed to be let loose against the forces of the Krork, the ultimate bringers of war and death that stood just over the horizon.

And oh did their words bite. For they burrowed into their skulls, and made their nests their, worming within and taunting them, no matter how they tried to force them from their minds.

And so the infighting began as a wave of Khornate berserkers fell upon the daemonic legions, the unbound mortals fighting with the ensorceled and compelled daemons for possession of him, the physicals to bare him to the front lines, the daemons to keep him here until the ritual was complete, and there they stood, in the background egging on both sides.

Over the shoulder of Kharn the Betrayer they were set, as the greatest berserker charged towards the front lines, Gorechild in hand, as he looked back towards the pursuing Bloodthirters, silver tongue wagging.
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The dapper mercinary's final gig.

@Durin
 
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Surfing
Surfing

The transition from the pox yards to reality was brief enough that nothing really changed, especially as the skies of Cadia immediately turned pus yellow, as gaping weeping portals flashed into existence, as He-Who-Walks climbed into the sky at speed, his form hidden from any degree of reasonable detection, as they clung onto his fur, raining down death from above in near-infinite variety.

She couldn't speak for the others, but she was having to stop her self from whooping with exhilaration, as they climbed further into the clouds, enjoying air that was tainted and polluted, but oh, oh so pure compared with the filth of the Mansion of Nurgle.

As it was she couldn't keep a silly grin from her face as they climbed, while she rained down a billion forms of death, exploiting her newly deepened reserves, armour and the infinite endurance granted by Isha to the maximum, simultaneously keeping up her barrage, aiding He-Who-Walks and the rest of the group.

At the same time she was wracking her brain for any new ways she could increase their speed, for while they were slow and impeded by their attacks Nurgle's daemons were implacable and the were managing an impressive pace and the longer they took the more mortal pawns started to bring their own powers to the fray as sorcerers and monsters began to launch their own attacks enthralled by the promise of power from the desperate god.

They needed something big, something...something like a trick she had pulled when she had first reintroduced herself to humanity centuries ago.

She hadn't even needed to sense Ridcully's hasty nod as she reached into the bag, bringing forth a single fingernail-sized shell coated in durable resin that in microscopic text bore the signature of the Termite Giltifranz the four thousand nine hundredth and twenty eighth of their line. As well as some rather creative insults towards chaos.

Screaming backwards to He-Who-Walks she said only one thing "SURF" and fired the exterminatus warhead to the ground, focusing her entire attention towards reinforcing and shaping the barrier surrounding them as much as they could, in preparation for the world ending bang.

She'd seen what exterminatus torpedoes could do. She'd personally destroyed worlds, but she'd never anticipated just how...impressive the genius of the termites was. And that was from someone who'd watched them create missiles the size of grains of sand.

The eruption tore the heart out of Cadia, wiping out continents, sending cracks spiralling through the already battered and wretched planet, throwing vast chunks into the void, as the horrifically abused atmosphere began to vent outwards into the void, rupturing like a vast balloon.

The Exalted continued onwards headless, Nurgle pouring even more strength into them, but their entourages were blown completely away, only a few honoured stragglers clinging onto the coattails of their masters following in their wake.

As for them, well with a whooping scream they were sent flying onwards, propelled on the stellar destruction as she, Ridcully and the Child hung on for dear life, as He-Who-Walks was catapulted towards the heavens, but somehow barely managed to control himself, not only gaining speed in the short term but when at last he began to run maintaining a pace that would have been impossible without Isha healing the damage he was inflicting to his body before it even started to manifest.

Grin wider than ever she looked at Ridcully and the Child, before reaching into the bag, drawing forth a handful of the warheads, before sharing them out.
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Huh the last one is exactly 666 words

Also sick moves bruh

@Durin
 
The Interplay of Ingenuity and Fire Power AKA: Here comes the Monky!
The Interplay of Ingenuity and Fire Power AKA: Here comes the Monky!

The Doctor binding his face tutted, as the gash continued to bleed profusely despite their immensely careful tending and the power of the War field reinforcing his body further. A gift left to him by one of the enemies of special danger known as An'ggrath before a good hit from a grav tank sent it flying backwards. Still, the fact he lived did nothing to improve his mood, or his failure at their reversal of fortunes.

As he had predicted the forces of the Blood God had redoubled their defence now that they were within their perimeter and were wearing down his forces at an unsustainable rate, while the casualties they inflicted upon the daemons were always reduced to nothing. For there were always more, always hundreds more for everyone that they slew.

They were failing again, failing their duty once again and he...he would not allow that.

He looked to his chief engineer and wrangler and with a nod confirmation was given, the pair of generals starting to bark out orders to their subordinates, beginning the activation of their "special" options.

He was ashamed he had to use them already, but in this situation, it was better to get it over with than to leave them for the enemy to capture. No, he would activate the superweapons, designed by the Jokareo Research and Development labs, gather his forces and punch through to the VIP.

After that he'd see, what his options were, exfiltrate, or try to inflict more damage on the enemies operations, although he had a feeling in his gut that the choice would soon be taken from him. After all, the dead can hardily retreat unless they're Aeldari.

Steeling himself, he readied his combi rifle, the weapon shining with the force of a nova, as he continued to stream orders through the War connection, aiding his generals and NCOs, in their own individual struggles, while all of a sudden the blood dried on his cheeks.

Across the fronts, the effects were far more dramatic, as the forces of the Blood God froze in perfect harmony as the prediction from their psyche profile synched up perfectly with reality. Key to their mentality was the idea that the blood must flow, no matter who it flowed from. Well the blood was no longer flowing, in fact it was coagulating as soon as it hit air, forming perfect scabs.

In the minds of the daemons, there could be no greater insult to their god as their rage reached hither too unforeseen heights, their calls for blood screeching forth into the night and then suddenly...nothing.

A different device, that prayed upon their own rage, causing it to feed upon itself, ripping the daemons apart by their very essence until nothing was left. If you were calm like his soldiers then nothing would happen, but anything that felt even the slightest bit of rage would suddenly vanish.

The brass walls of the citadel then suddenly turned soft and ran like melted cheese as their inherent metallic nature was liquified by a massive radiator, as missiles filled with pure waargh energy launched at fractions of the speed of light towards the Exalted, locked on to their resonances and unerringly following them.

Then the waves of gravity and talk hit the daemons, as a weapon inspired by the Tyranidic swarms darkened the sea with incessant babble and gravity increased to a thousand times its natural weight, as the daemons started to be crushed into paste.

Maybe this wouldn't be such a disaster after all...he thought.

After all, he had plenty of superweapons left to deploy, the Jokaero apparently could hold one heck of a grudge.
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UNLEASH SIMIAN RETRIBUTION!

@Durin
 
@Doomed Wombat At this point you're basically a Skaven-slave scribe, toiling away for the pleasure of your capricious overlords. "Yes-yes, write more!" we cry. In all seriousness though, keep up the good work, you're killing it.
 
I don't have the right mindset for military fiction, but anyone writing Krork vs Khorne omakes might want to try delving into the Soldier vs Warrior dichotomy.

It didn't come up much in the War in Heaven, because the Necrons were competent enough to mostly stick to the Soldier mindset, but the Krork may have seen the Warrior mindset pop up from time to time in the the more Khaine-attuned of their Aeldari comrades. Khornates are all Warriors, even the General Rippers who started out commanding Soldiers. There's bound to be a way to exploit that.

And Khorne has that big, fancy, potentially perma-killable Avatar now - there's still a remote chance Khorne might come out of this worse off than even Nurgle, or even not at all.


Also also, there's a good chance we're going to blow up one of the greatest worlds of Chaos Undivided. The sacrifice of one of the symbols of "Chaos working together" might just be one more thing that Malal, god of "Chaos doing the exact opposite of working together", exploits.


1. Should we expect the other Chaos Gods to also have this information? Or will Nurgle keep it a secret?
2. What about their human followers? Will Abaddon know about Ridcully for example, and start looking more closely at the Imperial Trust?
3. When Ridcully's identity is discovered, will we have any warning?
4. What are the expected odds of Nurgle launching a punitive daemonic incursion on Avernus when he finds out Ridcully's identity?
4.a) If we expected a Nurglite daemonic incursion on Avernus, would the Eldar give us any help for free, since it would be happening because we helped to rescue Isha?
1. given thatthey will be running thugh Undivided Cadia everyone will have it
2. ditto
3. if Ridcully notices yes
4. 100%
4a. yes
Whelp. We were already on Hard Mode, just from choosing Avernus - the next thread is going to escalate quickly to Dante Must Die mode, if it isn't already there in the first post.

Our super sneaky navy chief will be googling "how to hide a planet," when he hears that Nurgle is coming to Avernus.
Wasn't there a planet-scale cloaking device in the techs we got from the first conclave?

He was also going to be behind Ahrah, but we killed him.
What was Ahra going to do if we hadn't killed him, and why?

And by "why", I mean both "why does Ahra think he's doing it" and "why is Tzeentch setting Ahra up to do it".
 
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ok, first off: @Durin if we had made/not-made the different DC's for the final emergency jump...would we have say:
<80): trapped ->>> dead or worse
80): went where? also trapped, but can roll to survive long enough to roll again (probably with penalty due to strong infections)
100): on cadia (we got 117 which is ALMOST 120...so maybe we landed in a less dangerous part? (IE: not in the middle of a fort)
120): a planet not in abbadon's domain.
140): on Avernus

do I have that right?

BTW: theres a non-zero chance that HWWO keeps almost-flobbing the escape rolls...causing him to appear on various chaos worlds over and over (rather then escaping straight to Avernus)...

and of course bringing the nurgle hoard along with him (and leaving shattered planets behind as they repeatedly use exterminatus weaponry)....

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meanwhile in dark imperium negaverse, before Abbadon gets the full info-dump:
"WHY ARE MY PLANETS RANDOMLY BLOWING UP!?!"

lastly:
in before isha rolls a nat-100 on the heal-door action and now there's a random fricking DOOR that nurgle can't quite un-heal completely.
...did Isha crit-roll?

yes its a dryad-door but its STILL A DOOR DANG IT

edit: heres hoping that we get a chance to look at the dryad's statsheet.

:rofl: :o :lol: :) :rofl: :lol:
 
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