Valkur
The True Valkyria, Valkur!
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Need a beta reader for my new omake. Help needed!
EDIT: PM's preferably would be nice
Omake - To be determined?
For decades now the proliferation of Junior Military schools with heavy specializations on survival and combat ability have opened in great numbers throughout the planet. Many graduating cadets find themselves a step higher than their peers in upon conscription and most stay in the service until death. Today we meet with Lieutenant Mellisa Von Crantz who is a descendant to the still aging Herbert Von Crantz of the Cadian colonists. Today we explore the life of this young lady from the point of view of the school and her early career in the military.
Melissa was the cadet commander and valedictorian of the Isenwall Military School in Hollin, Lindon. The School is a Junior Officer Academy with top class professors in the fields of mathematics, logistics, navigation, and of course tactical combat. Like many people of Lindon Melissa grew up in an environment where watching for danger was paramount. She was the subject of regular attacks daily by Carniflowers, Phase Tigers, and in the instances where she left the Hive Illusionary Pines.
Regardless Mellisa would press on with the will of the Emperor and grew through the ranks of the Academy.
[Reporter]: What made Melissa Von Crantz so success in your school Commandant?
[Commandant]: Well a number of things really but chief among them was her attitude towards life. In her words, she would never accept giving up or allowing her fellow cadets give up in anything. In the schools mandatory volunteering hours she could be seen manning the phones for suicide prevention in the school and in the Hive's Sucide prevention services also.
[Reporter]: When did she start doing that?
Commandant: As Early as 15 years old for the school and 17 for the Hives. I think on the average week she would spend 20 hours on suicide prevention and still continue to have a 3.5 GPA in our school.
Melissa was also known as in the school as 'Mother Tiger' and 'Cranky Maid' by her cadets illustrating the amount of care and snark her fellow cadets regard her with. She was very well known to keep her people marching in line and to help each other in times of need for anything from combat to academic studies and beyond.
[Former Cadet]: This one time a guy from our squad said he was leaving because he couldn't pass chemistry or Calculus in the school and that he was going to withdraw and take the classes elsewhere. He was a good guy but painfully slow in learning harder topics and we all thought it would be better if he did leave to somewhere easier. Somehow though Crantz found out and ordered the whole squad to have a study session and paired the best performing cadets with the worst performing cadets to help him out during our extra time in the school.
She never let us walk away from each other after either because she still calls us over to the bar to hang out and stuff. She really is a cheerleader man i'll tell you.
Melissa also gained the nickname 'Gentle Fist' from her opponents in the Gubernational hand to hand tournament. Her record was being part of the top 3 competitiors every single year and coming in first place by beating out a Schola Progenium cadet who would later become her commanding officer in the army. We go not to Captain David Shultz of the Helltroopers.
[Reporter]: In Avernus we hear alot about the violence that comes married to the unique fighting styles of our people. Why was she given the nickname 'Gentle Fist'?
[David]: *Chuckles* Well because when you went down it would be as fast as an aggressive fighter coming out for a one combo knockout but instead of breaking your body she would punch you in such a way that the body failed without it hurting. It was like being paralyzed when you were hit like if you were stung by some weird wasp. I remember that after her first couple of fights the referee's would call for an immediate check on her fists for something. It was almost surreal how good she was in taking out her opponents.
[Reporter] Can you tell us how fight with you and Melissa went?
[David] To be honest it was a very fatal mistake that I made due to having won the competition for so many years in a row. I know that sounds condescending but I beg you to listen to this truth. I remember leaving my feet with less attention as I slowly got closer and closer at the opening bell. She followed me up to close the distance and instead of having a standing battle she kicked my knee to the side and forced me on a knee. Before I could react she came in hit me with her opposite hand with a chopper putting in all of her weight behind it. The rest was history and I was too stun to notice why I was on the floor.
For the record though, In our spars in the barracks i'm 13-0. I still have a reputation for graduating out of the Schola Progenium to keep up.
[Reporter] Sounds like an violent romance in the making Captain.
[David] *Laughs* You think so? Ha!
During the Academy it was well known that Melissa lost her mother to a Phase Tiger ambush when she was only 13 leaving her to the care of only her father who spent more time working to pay for the tuition bills at the Academy. In these trying times she looked to none other than her two role models Samantha Khol of the Avernus Spine Regional Command and Syr Rotbart the Governors only heir and a Brigandier General in the Helltroopers. She says that at the time she tried to connect to as many people as possible about the pain she felt during the loss of her mother. Going so far as to send written letters with Khol and Rotbart.
Miraculously they and other responded in kind which brought Melissa much needed help in those maturing times. It is the goal of Melissa now to one day to serve under Samantha Khol and Syr Rotbart before going on to becoming Grand Marshal of the Avernus PDF one day.
For decades now the proliferation of Junior Military schools with heavy specializations on survival and combat ability have opened in great numbers throughout the planet. Many graduating cadets find themselves a step higher than their peers in upon conscription and most stay in the service until death. Today we meet with Lieutenant Mellisa Von Crantz who is a descendant to the still aging Herbert Von Crantz of the Cadian colonists. Today we explore the life of this young lady from the point of view of the school and her early career in the military.
Melissa was the cadet commander and valedictorian of the Isenwall Military School in Hollin, Lindon. The School is a Junior Officer Academy with top class professors in the fields of mathematics, logistics, navigation, and of course tactical combat. Like many people of Lindon Melissa grew up in an environment where watching for danger was paramount. She was the subject of regular attacks daily by Carniflowers, Phase Tigers, and in the instances where she left the Hive Illusionary Pines.
Regardless Mellisa would press on with the will of the Emperor and grew through the ranks of the Academy.
[Reporter]: What made Melissa Von Crantz so success in your school Commandant?
[Commandant]: Well a number of things really but chief among them was her attitude towards life. In her words, she would never accept giving up or allowing her fellow cadets give up in anything. In the schools mandatory volunteering hours she could be seen manning the phones for suicide prevention in the school and in the Hive's Sucide prevention services also.
[Reporter]: When did she start doing that?
Commandant: As Early as 15 years old for the school and 17 for the Hives. I think on the average week she would spend 20 hours on suicide prevention and still continue to have a 3.5 GPA in our school.
Melissa was also known as in the school as 'Mother Tiger' and 'Cranky Maid' by her cadets illustrating the amount of care and snark her fellow cadets regard her with. She was very well known to keep her people marching in line and to help each other in times of need for anything from combat to academic studies and beyond.
[Former Cadet]: This one time a guy from our squad said he was leaving because he couldn't pass chemistry or Calculus in the school and that he was going to withdraw and take the classes elsewhere. He was a good guy but painfully slow in learning harder topics and we all thought it would be better if he did leave to somewhere easier. Somehow though Crantz found out and ordered the whole squad to have a study session and paired the best performing cadets with the worst performing cadets to help him out during our extra time in the school.
She never let us walk away from each other after either because she still calls us over to the bar to hang out and stuff. She really is a cheerleader man i'll tell you.
Melissa also gained the nickname 'Gentle Fist' from her opponents in the Gubernational hand to hand tournament. Her record was being part of the top 3 competitiors every single year and coming in first place by beating out a Schola Progenium cadet who would later become her commanding officer in the army. We go not to Captain David Shultz of the Helltroopers.
[Reporter]: In Avernus we hear alot about the violence that comes married to the unique fighting styles of our people. Why was she given the nickname 'Gentle Fist'?
[David]: *Chuckles* Well because when you went down it would be as fast as an aggressive fighter coming out for a one combo knockout but instead of breaking your body she would punch you in such a way that the body failed without it hurting. It was like being paralyzed when you were hit like if you were stung by some weird wasp. I remember that after her first couple of fights the referee's would call for an immediate check on her fists for something. It was almost surreal how good she was in taking out her opponents.
[Reporter] Can you tell us how fight with you and Melissa went?
[David] To be honest it was a very fatal mistake that I made due to having won the competition for so many years in a row. I know that sounds condescending but I beg you to listen to this truth. I remember leaving my feet with less attention as I slowly got closer and closer at the opening bell. She followed me up to close the distance and instead of having a standing battle she kicked my knee to the side and forced me on a knee. Before I could react she came in hit me with her opposite hand with a chopper putting in all of her weight behind it. The rest was history and I was too stun to notice why I was on the floor.
For the record though, In our spars in the barracks i'm 13-0. I still have a reputation for graduating out of the Schola Progenium to keep up.
[Reporter] Sounds like an violent romance in the making Captain.
[David] *Laughs* You think so? Ha!
During the Academy it was well known that Melissa lost her mother to a Phase Tiger ambush when she was only 13 leaving her to the care of only her father who spent more time working to pay for the tuition bills at the Academy. In these trying times she looked to none other than her two role models Samantha Khol of the Avernus Spine Regional Command and Syr Rotbart the Governors only heir and a Brigandier General in the Helltroopers. She says that at the time she tried to connect to as many people as possible about the pain she felt during the loss of her mother. Going so far as to send written letters with Khol and Rotbart.
Miraculously they and other responded in kind which brought Melissa much needed help in those maturing times. It is the goal of Melissa now to one day to serve under Samantha Khol and Syr Rotbart before going on to becoming Grand Marshal of the Avernus PDF one day.
EDIT: PM's preferably would be nice
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