*SHCK-!*

Kyubey is abruptly replaced by a shower of blood as a sharp length of metal passes through his head at roughly Mach 2. Tira is unable to withhold a shriek as little chunks of flesh spray across the otherwise pristine Canvas, tainting the floor with spatters of red.
Well that's incredibly gory, but hopefully also kinda cathartic.
Your shock abruptly flips over to disgust as Kyubey runs up to his barely half-intact former body and promptly begins eating it. Oh, what the fu-
Wow, he grossed out the witch. Even the witchtinces didn't seem interested anymore after that display.
"Of course it couldn't be that easy..." Sayaka hisses.
I feel ya Sayaka. There's no satisfaction in reducing something into red paste if they just get back up without even commenting on the pain.
"And I'd prefer that you shove yourself down the nearest working garbage disposal, but we can't always get what we want, can we?" Sayaka snaps, evidently too angry to be similarly grossed out.
Have I recently mentioned how much I like your Sayaka? She's got a way with words.
You take a moment to process that, then slump.

...so then. You really are a lone island of sanity, drifting in an endless sea of madness. For a moment, you thought that maybe since Kyubey has an actual word for "abnormal" witches like you, he might have meant... but no. It's exactly as you'd already figured.
Yeah that's a shame, but you knew it was a long shot anyway.
"Could you perhaps provide more detail on some of these 'facsimiles'?"

You glance over at Tira, not having expected her to interrupt. If Kyubey is surprised by her reentering the conversation however, he doesn't show it.
Of course she's interested, she's still being eaten up by guilt.
"SHUT UP!!!" Sayaka screams from the bottom of her throat, her sword now hanging loose in her hand, the weapon's edge scraping against the floor of the Canvas. "I don't want to HEAR IT! I don't want to hear about timelines, or replicas, or any more of your horrid, life-destroying LIES!"
Yeah, hearing she's even less of a person then she thought she was, and as a reminder she thinks she's a zombie, was not something she was going to respond well too. Nor should she.

Though I'm gonna point out that Kyubey is spouting guesswork and ideas, not facts. He thinks Sayaka and Tira are familiars, but how the novela categorizes them suggests otherwise. Likewise, he doesn't know why there's an extra Sayaka and Tira, just that their witch came from an alt timeline.

Honestly I wouldn't be surprised if was just saying things that would piss her off in hopes that she'd let some information slip.
"If I feel I've been tricked?!" Sayaka shouts over him, somehow still escalating in volume. "Ever since I agreed to your screwed-up contract, things have just kept going from bad to worse, and worse, and WORSE! And every time I think I'm starting to get a handle on the latest bit of misery I've got no choice in, and that maybe things can finally start getting at least a little better, something else happens to show me EXACTLY how wrong I was!"
Poor girl's emotions really are just chew toy.
You twist and spasm as the grief continues to swell, trying over and over to shove it away, but it's as though something is holding it, forcibly keeping it in place, something that you don't think is actually you, or if it is then it's a part that's currently rebelling-
Interesting.
"It's All."

Something surges.

"Your."

Something cracks.

<SaYaKA-!>

"FAAAUUULLLT!!!!!!"
Okay.

'Something cracks', at least, implies that her Soul Gem just broke. I was pretty skeptical that her Soul Gem was around, but that much was confirmed at least.
The remaining ribbon tied around both her your collar and neck like a noose, along with the tasseled, bookmark-like cords restraining her your arms, are ignored as the erratically-shifting background stabilizes into a replica of her your concert hall, the haunting sound of the violin you so treasured beginning to echo from both within and without.

From beneath the empty hollow of your three-eyed helmet, you glare out at the target of your weaker self's wrath.

𝄡 Go to Hell with your squires

<...what-?>
So this has lots of implications. Um. I don't know if I know the words for this.

Trying this out. Ashtaroth's mind can and is dominated by whatever has the most power inside her. This is why our, the readers, perspective doesn't change, but Oktavia gets to be in charge. This would mean that Ashtaroth isn't the witch, she's what's controlling the witch. The witch herself just provides information and the occasional strong urge to do something.

On Oktavia, she was definitely carrying out Sayaka's will, that is turning Kyubey into hamburger. She herself was also mega pissed at Kyubey, and she could use the telepathy network, and could speak. Which I'm sure is only possible because of Ashtaroth, Oktavia is very run of the mill far as Witches are concerned.

And Kyubey was just confused plain old confused, which is nice.
You turn. Far below, your weaker self gapes up at you like the fool she is, suddenly bereft of the grief and rage that brought you to the surface in the first place. To her side, the artist cowers, while the doll she holds stares up at you without even a spark of recognition.

Memories like cracked glass surge to the forefront at the sight of the latter, sharp enough to cut steel; bearing down on you with the weight of the world.

You look away.
Wow, okay, Okky is just bein all sorts of down on Sayaka, which is herself, according to her. I guess having an external version of yourself you can safely pin all your issues on makes it easier to not be self-loathing?

She doesn't seem to have a problem with Tira, but what happened to Mami is just not something she can handle, weirdly enough.
Though your fate is tragedy, it shall not be this one.

You raise your sword over your helm. You cannot simply sever the connection she has forced upon you, cannot simply leave now that she has bound you so. You are as much a part of her as she is of you now; a reality as inescapable as any other.

But you would rather die in chains, than be forced to eternally move forward with her story.
I can't tell if this is just suicide or an attempt at defiance that will end in a murder-suicide. It's like she wants to exist in a state of constant despair, but only on her terms.
A sword nigh-identical to yours in all but size and decoration strikes the flat of yours and bursts, knocking your attack off course. You slowly turn on your weaker self, who meets your gaze with sureness that you know she does not feel.

"L- Leave her alone!"
Just said this, but I must say again, I really like this Sayaka. She just such a good kid at heart, even with all the shit that's happened to her.
Summoning more of your tainted wheels, as empty of color as your own former destiny, you send them whirling forth to crush both her and the artist alike — but the latter has conjured her own blade by now, which rends them to pieces with neither struggle nor effort, while the limbs of Mami Candeloro the witch she carries magnify and smash the rest to splinters.
Again, really can not emotionally face what happened. So weird.
"She may only be second to Kyubey for why everything has gone wrong for me lately-!"
Hmm, so the list is like:
1. Kyubey (Source of damn near all this misery)
2. Ashtaroth (Source of this specific subset of misery)
3. Sayaka herself (The one that ultimately signed herself up for this hell, ignorant of the details and didn't look into them)
4. Homura (Made everything just that little bit worse with the time travel shenanigans)
"I know that she's at least trying-!"

Your weaker self leaps off your arm with her blades still entangling your own, yanking it away with force garnered from the leverage of another platform-assisted leap. As your weapon tumbles from your grip, she rotates in the air-

"-so there's no way I'm gonna just let you KILL her!"
Good kid. Strong kid. If this situation can get unfucked, she's got one hell of a future in store for her. Hell, even if she's stucks with Ashtaroth forever the future has many possibilities.

I also think she might be getting just a bit of feedback from Oktavia. Sure, it doesn't take a genius to figure out she was trying to kill Ashtaroth, but I got this notion in my head that Sayaka knew why Oktavia was trying to kill her. Something about the reactions, I dunno.
Smoke leaking from your gaze, you glare down at your weaker self as she falls back to the floor. As she lands and begins to rise once more, your rage crescendos — and so, you reach for the inherent connection you share, and force a portion of your anguish through it.
Now this is interesting. As I above, I suspected Sayaka's Soul Gem had cracked. That didn't kill Sayaka, in fact it doesn't seem to have really done anything to her on its own, but her and Oktavia are still linked, and Oktavia very much thinks they're the same person, in a way that, despite having been subsumed, Oktavia and Ashtaroth are not. Maybe it's a difference without a distinction, but I feel there's more to it.

Also I can now see why Ashtaroth could send her Grief back at Tira a while back. If they can handle their own pain, they could inflict it on someone else as a Doppel attack, or it would stun them into unconsciousness.
She trembles on her feet for a scant second longer, swaying unsteadily, before suddenly screaming just as you did, a perfect C sharp note-

And then collapsing, unable to bear the weight of her own pain.

How very fragile you are...
And man oh man, but Oktavia does not like Sayaka.
As your mind and vision fade once more, you give your weaker self a final, lingering glance.

One day, you will make her see...
Hmm, maybe it's simple. Despite everything that's happened, Sayaka hasn't really given up on herself or her situation. She's pretty fucking miserable, but she's willing to keep trying to improve what she has left. As a witch however, Oktavia is defined by having given up. And that's what she hates about Sayaka, that she's not wallowing in that same despair.
When you awaken from the trance(?) you'd fallen into, the first thing that you see is Tira, standing atop Novella with her arms crossed, anxiously tapping her foot against the book's open pages. Candeloro has left her neck in favor of hovering over her shoulder, and has her ribbons wrapped loosely around Tira's waist in a strangely comforting manner.
Wow, I've never seen Tira this agitated. This is almost Sayaka like behavior.
"In that case, perhaps you could enlighten me as to what the hell just happened, Ashtaroth-san."
I didn't know she could even say that word!
"...true." she admits. "I suppose that despite how truly catastrophic this was, the only known alternative would hardly have been preferable."
Oh right, yeah. She was really focused on the whole witch thing and not having that happen to her. Yeah, that tracks.
(She was you, you were her, yet you hated yourself; were fully ready to commit suicide/murder for the simple sake of release-)
Wacky.
This didn't happen the first time Sayaka had a major freak out after you subsumed her, or even just a bit ago when Tira had her own personal breakdown of the day, so why now? What changed...?
Hmm, my guess would be the accompanying anger, and possibly having a direct target. Sayaka really fucking wanted Kyubey dead.
Have to admit that you might be no safer from yourself than Sayaka and Tira are from you...
Hmm. Maybe. They're still a lot better off then before, and the three of you are only learning more and more about how how your underlying systems work, and how they're connected to each other.

But the main thing I'd say, is that worrying never added a day to anyone's life. Problems come up and you solve them. If they can't be solved, mitigate and avoid. Do what you can with what you have. And you do have a few paths forward now. So wake up Sayaka, let her call her parents, then get to work.
 
Though your first instinct is to grab the eavesdropping little bunny rat and punt him across your barrier like an oddly-shaped soccer ball, you force yourself to quash it, too many questions arising from what he just said — along with the fact that he even could say it to you, for that matter — to let yourself act on it in this moment.
Wouldn't that be throwing Kyubey, due to her lack of legs? How would Ashy punt anything without feet? Maybe if she controls Sayaka or Tira?

You're too taken aback to even say anything as you stare down at Sayaka, the hilt of the figuratively-smoking cutlass still held tightly in her grip.

Did... did she actually just kill Kyubey? Holy- like, you were obviously mad at him too, but not to the point of doing-!
Yeah, Sayaka isn't screwing around. Just flat-out murder as her first reaction. Any interaction with Mami in this timeline will be interesting.

<You cannot permanently kill me, and attempting to do so will only waste resources,> Kyubey states whilst rapidly devouring his previous self, causing Tira to nearly heave, <so I would prefer that you not try that again.>
Maybe not kill but Jubey is proof that it can be changed. Also, another in-character reminder that Kyubey only cares about resource management.

<On the contrary,> Kyubey says calmly, <I have already learned quite a lot from you simply by being present for the past several minutes. The insight you've provided into the nature of one of the other Irregulars presently residing in this city has been particularly valuable. I now understand why I possess no memory of Homura Akemi's contract, as well as the most likely mechanisms of her magic. You've been most helpful.>
Kyubey is aware of Homura's time travel. On the bright side, it probably found out relatively quickly during Homura's early loops so there shouldn't be much it can do about it.

But Kyubey might use the knowledge that Ashy is back too as a bargaining chip with Homura.

It's a simple request, yet you don't immediately follow through, abruptly realizing that you may have a bit of an issue here. If Kyubey isn't already sure of what your name is, and he's not using your forgotten human name either, then he presumably hasn't worked out your former identity yet... and while that's one of the biggest subjects you'd like to inquire about, you're honestly not sure that you should help him piece it together. You were assuming he already knew who you are, or at least were — but if not, is he going to go back to giving you the cold shoulder if he finds out?

Considering you don't even know why he was doing that in the first place...
Strange, he should be able to work out Ashy's magical girl identity. He knows how fast she can move, that she hasn't been a Witch for long(due to the low number of "unique" Familiars), and that she had regular interactions with Kyubey.
That should create a pretty short list of candidates.

<I have no records of a magical girl bearing that name within the past millennium, and you match no descriptions of the few witches known to have persisted for longer than a century. If you truly originate from a parallel timeline however, that is by no means unexpected.>
... I would like to note that this doesn't say, at any point, that Kyubey doesn't know Ashy's magical girl identity. Only that there wasn't a magical girl named Ashtaroth.

<However, all known historical attempts to do so have resulted in failure, typically producing flawed facsimiles of the original self at best. This suggests that a true reversion of the nature you propose is indeed "impossible".>
Based on Witches that already were insane from the transformation. There are several magical girls that were somewhat sane even afterward due to preparations made before becoming a Witch. Isabeau(somewhat) due to being part Incubator before becoming a Witch and Lapin due to her magical girl power, which she had before becoming a Witch.

<You are asking for specific precedent?> he questions, apparently rhetorically. <One particularly noteworthy instance of a wish made to regress a witch beyond its own birth resulted in it being forced back into the husk of its former body. From this, she regained her abilities from her time as a magical girl, but remained a witch in both mind and soul, desiring naught but destruction.>
Yeah, Isabeau. Whos fault was that again?

<-but has also already destabilized a dozen times prior, and is thus likely doomed as a matter of course.> Kyubey concludes. <By contrast, your mind appears strangely stable, despite your otherwise typical nature as an entity of pure negative emotion. I fully expected this experiment to fail.>
Kazumi gets around that issue at the end with a Wish that keeps her from destabilizing. Being subsumed by Novella might get a similar result. And that Ashy's mind is different from other Witches' minds is another point in favor of the "Ashy is the magical girl that created the Witch and then got subsumed by her instead of the Witch of Subsumption itself" theory.

<This is the first time I have succeeded in forging a telepathic connection with a witch that did not instantly result in either the corruption or destruction of my current terminal.> he eventually replies. <Your familiar's actions aside.>
Technically, Isabeau and Kazumi were both Witches.

<Indeed.> Kyubey confirms, finally turning his attention to the girls. <You are quite unusual yourselves, perhaps even more so than your parent witch. Not only do you appear to share her human-like mentality, but whereas most familiars that arise from the concept of magical girls appear as indistinct shades, you two were obviously born of the memories of specific ones. In this world, Sayaka Miki has yet to form a contract, while Tira Narumi became a witch approximately twenty two minutes ago->
Ah, Ashy has a reason to visit the Tira of the next timeline as early as possible. Probably after subsuming the Witch version of her, just in case Mami finds her.

Falling back on what you did before, you shove a sizable clump of the surplus grief away, the sensation of it tearing away granting you a measure of relief.
𝄡 ...no...
-and then the clump inexplicably returns, and plunges right back into you, nearly doubling you over as it slams back into your grief stores like some sort of ethereal cannonball. Huh-?!
You twist and spasm as the grief continues to swell, trying over and over to shove it away, but it's as though something is holding it, forcibly keeping it in place, something that you don't think is actually you, or if it is then it's a part that's currently rebelling-
Wait, why are we-
"Sayaka-" Tira tries, wide eyes rapidly flickering between her fellow magical girl and your escalating contortions.
"What's next, we get teleported straight into HELL?!" Sayaka almost cackles, ignoring the other girl, and seemingly everything else around her as well. "Oh wait, no need, we're ALREADY THERE!!!"
𝄡 ...won't... be... this...
In growing desperation, you start throwing out illusions as fast as you can think of them, fantastical landscapes shifting into existence in one moment only to vanish in the next, music shields erratically forming all around you while penswords repeatedly fall from your grip, but it's not enough, it barely feels like it's making a dent, you can't-!
But we already are...
-outside! Yes, you just need to tear open a portal to your barrier's central area; make some illusions where they'll cost enough to quickly use up all this grief, stop you from overflowing, stop you from exploding-!!!
𝄡 ...no longer.
From beneath the empty hollow of your three-eyed helmet, you glare out at the target of your weaker self's wrath.

𝄡 Go to Hell with your squires

<...what-?>
So the extra Grief was enough for Oktavia to become more than just a vague dream and become self-aware enough to differentiate herself from the Witch of Subsumption.

Maybe if Ashy had directed the Grief at a different Witch? Or she has to blow up Shemesh to be on the safe side.

"She may only be second to Kyubey for why everything has gone wrong for me lately-!"
Haven't looked in the mirror yet, huh Sayaka?

In returning to your counterpart what was hers to begin with, you sacrificed too much of what little you had left.
RETURN
Her dominion is already reasserting itself.
And the Witch of Subsumption overpowers her again.

One day, you will make her see...
...That's a horrible pun based on how Oktavia got defeated this time.:V

Possibly even more so, arguably. This didn't happen the first time Sayaka had a major freak out after you subsumed her, or even just a bit ago when Tira had her own personal breakdown of the day, so why now? What changed...?
No outlet for the Grief(Shemesh), already full Grief tanks for Ashy, and being inside the Canvas?

Or maybe I've missed something important and everything I just wrote is completely and utterly wrong. I'm sure there will be much suffering either way.
Oktavia pretty explicitly refers to Sayaka as herself or her counterpart. She also flat-out states that the Grief that makes her up is Sayaka's and that "giving it back" forced her to de-manifest. She even assumes destroying Ashy would kill her instead of releasing her Grief Seed, implying that she and Sayaka still share a soul. Or whatever the Witch of Subsumption defines as her own sub-souls.

This would mean that Ashtaroth isn't the witch, she's what's controlling the witch. The witch herself just provides information and the occasional strong urge to do something.
Well, yeah. There is a reason why I always assumed the Witch of Subsumption was its own being, while Ashy is what was left of the magical girl that formed the Witch but got subsumed before she died.
 
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Well that's incredibly gory, but hopefully also kinda cathartic.

Wow, he grossed out the witch. Even the witchtinces didn't seem interested anymore after that display.

I feel ya Sayaka. There's no satisfaction in reducing something into red paste if they just get back up without even commenting on the pain.

Have I recently mentioned how much I like your Sayaka? She's got a way with words.

Yeah that's a shame, but you knew it was a long shot anyway.

Of course she's interested, she's still being eaten up by guilt.

Yeah, hearing she's even less of a person then she thought she was, and as a reminder she thinks she's a zombie, was not something she was going to respond well too. Nor should she.

Though I'm gonna point out that Kyubey is spouting guesswork and ideas, not facts. He thinks Sayaka and Tira are familiars, but how the novela categorizes them suggests otherwise. Likewise, he doesn't know why there's an extra Sayaka and Tira, just that their witch came from an alt timeline.

Honestly I wouldn't be surprised if was just saying things that would piss her off in hopes that she'd let some information slip.

Poor girl's emotions really are just chew toy.

Interesting.

Okay.

'Something cracks', at least, implies that her Soul Gem just broke. I was pretty skeptical that her Soul Gem was around, but that much was confirmed at least.

So this has lots of implications. Um. I don't know if I know the words for this.

Trying this out. Ashtaroth's mind can and is dominated by whatever has the most power inside her. This is why our, the readers, perspective doesn't change, but Oktavia gets to be in charge. This would mean that Ashtaroth isn't the witch, she's what's controlling the witch. The witch herself just provides information and the occasional strong urge to do something.

On Oktavia, she was definitely carrying out Sayaka's will, that is turning Kyubey into hamburger. She herself was also mega pissed at Kyubey, and she could use the telepathy network, and could speak. Which I'm sure is only possible because of Ashtaroth, Oktavia is very run of the mill far as Witches are concerned.

And Kyubey was just confused plain old confused, which is nice.

Wow, okay, Okky is just bein all sorts of down on Sayaka, which is herself, according to her. I guess having an external version of yourself you can safely pin all your issues on makes it easier to not be self-loathing?

She doesn't seem to have a problem with Tira, but what happened to Mami is just not something she can handle, weirdly enough.

I can't tell if this is just suicide or an attempt at defiance that will end in a murder-suicide. It's like she wants to exist in a state of constant despair, but only on her terms.

Just said this, but I must say again, I really like this Sayaka. She just such a good kid at heart, even with all the shit that's happened to her.

Again, really can not emotionally face what happened. So weird.

Hmm, so the list is like:
1. Kyubey (Source of damn near all this misery)
2. Ashtaroth (Source of this specific subset of misery)
3. Sayaka herself (The one that ultimately signed herself up for this hell, ignorant of the details and didn't look into them)
4. Homura (Made everything just that little bit worse with the time travel shenanigans)

Good kid. Strong kid. If this situation can get unfucked, she's got one hell of a future in store for her. Hell, even if she's stucks with Ashtaroth forever the future has many possibilities.

I also think she might be getting just a bit of feedback from Oktavia. Sure, it doesn't take a genius to figure out she was trying to kill Ashtaroth, but I got this notion in my head that Sayaka knew why Oktavia was trying to kill her. Something about the reactions, I dunno.

Now this is interesting. As I above, I suspected Sayaka's Soul Gem had cracked. That didn't kill Sayaka, in fact it doesn't seem to have really done anything to her on its own, but her and Oktavia are still linked, and Oktavia very much thinks they're the same person, in a way that, despite having been subsumed, Oktavia and Ashtaroth are not. Maybe it's a difference without a distinction, but I feel there's more to it.

Also I can now see why Ashtaroth could send her Grief back at Tira a while back. If they can handle their own pain, they could inflict it on someone else as a Doppel attack, or it would stun them into unconsciousness.

And man oh man, but Oktavia does not like Sayaka.

Hmm, maybe it's simple. Despite everything that's happened, Sayaka hasn't really given up on herself or her situation. She's pretty fucking miserable, but she's willing to keep trying to improve what she has left. As a witch however, Oktavia is defined by having given up. And that's what she hates about Sayaka, that she's not wallowing in that same despair.

Wow, I've never seen Tira this agitated. This is almost Sayaka like behavior.

I didn't know she could even say that word!

Oh right, yeah. She was really focused on the whole witch thing and not having that happen to her. Yeah, that tracks.

Wacky.

Hmm, my guess would be the accompanying anger, and possibly having a direct target. Sayaka really fucking wanted Kyubey dead.

Hmm. Maybe. They're still a lot better off then before, and the three of you are only learning more and more about how how your underlying systems work, and how they're connected to each other.

But the main thing I'd say, is that worrying never added a day to anyone's life. Problems come up and you solve them. If they can't be solved, mitigate and avoid. Do what you can with what you have. And you do have a few paths forward now. So wake up Sayaka, let her call her parents, then get to work.

If your idea of ashtaroth controlling the witch is true........
Mayhaps that's why our dear witch doesn't remember much of the before
Her mind split in twain between her magical self and mundane self
And her mundane self has become a Drosselmeyer, not the nutcracker one but the princess tutu one
Which is bad
Would explain why this is a faux quest though
We the questers are the witch
It just so damn happens we have a backseat driver overidding our autonomy
Also if ashtaroth the entity isn't the mundane self but something else well mayhaps this could shed some light on the mystery
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Astaroth

Astaroth is a Crowned Prince and Great Duke of Hell, who is one of the most prominent demons in the Infernal Council. Astaroth is also the twenty-ninth spirit listed in the Ars Goetia. He is an exceptionally powerful Duke of Hell assisted by four demons: Aamon, Barbatos, Rashaverak and Pruflas...
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Astaroth

Astaroth, formerly known as Esther, is a Crowned Prince of Jinnestan and Great Duke of Hell. Astaroth is also the twenty-ninth spirit listed in the Ars Goetia. He is an exceptionally powerful Duke of Hell assisted by four demons: Aamon, Barbatos, Rashaverak and Pruflas. Astaroth is one of the...
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Yes!!! The Best PMMM fic is finally back!!!

...Hopefully we won't have to wait as long for the next chapter.

Eheh, sorry about that — this chapter has actually been done for a while, but I was extremely anxious about actually posting it, which delayed its release by like, a month and a half. So yes, hopefully that won't be the case for the next one. ^^;

This is a nice plot, I hope to see more in the future.

Good news, you get to see more right now! :D

Lots of trauma to go around this chapter, as befits literally anything Kyubey is involved in.
More mass traumatization of MG, as is PMMM tradition! And Kybuey ruining everything is what he must do by the nature of his existence, as always.... yup, pretty much as expected.

Yeah... I worry this story has been too grim lately. I really need to get it back on a proper schedule so we can get to some lighter elements to go along with that soon. This may be a PMMM fic, but there needs to be balance. ☯️

Seems their souls can still witch despite the fact they're inside Ash. Verrry interesting.
Hello Octavia!
How nice to see that the witches of the magical girls Ashtaroth subsumes still exist, hopefully the team figures out that the MGs experiencing overwhelming negative emotions can summon them if Ash can't spend all that grief quickly enough, it may be useful if they are being outmatched by more magical girls or hostile witches in the future, as a last resort sort of option.
Honestly, the explanation here seems pretty simple to me; Sayaka got super upset, upset = grief, fucktons of grief equals ash being forced to fart out a new witch

Oh no, Ashtaroth gathered it was a grief overload — but as you may recall, Tira quite recently had a similar breakdown with Candeloro that also overflowed Ashtaroth's capacity to hold said grief, and this did not happen. So the question is, what changed?

That may explain why she remembers being a magical girl but not anything before that as the witch is 'conceived' at the time of the contract

(Or I could be remembering the old version of this and be mixing up my fanon, so correct me if I'm wrong)

No, that's correct. She remembers no personal or historical details beyond the point of her own wish.

Ouch, poor new-timeline Tira.
New Friend Time? : P
I say we subsume Tira's Witch so we can see if anything fancy happens. It's the perfect opportunity to find out.
Here comes Izabel. I wonder if they'll go pick her up. If not this time round, maybe a future loop.
Maybe, but we should run that by Tira first.

The potential is there, to be sure - though somehow I doubt that's any of our trio's main priority right now.

It only means that all previous attempts have ended in failure due to a lack of knowledge. The makeup of a witch and how to manipulate that structure is a mostly unexplored area of science.

If Ashtaroth were to consume one of those priests who incarnate that one witch as a magical girl she would gain the access to the knowledge on how to do that herself as well as providing her new familiar a unique testbed to further refine that process so that future attempts don't fail. She might also be able to trade Kyubey for that information.

The end result of the series itself was basically "keep trying and failing until you don't".

*blinks* Priests...? Wha- oh, you mean the Saints. As an aside, for those interested, the MG primarily responsible for that would be Niko Kanna (though there's an implication that the other Saints somehow contributed to this as well, as Kazumi has access to all of their personal magic).

However, it seems it would be possible to create a human shell for a Witch to inhabit, which, hey at least it let's Ashy get some sun.

Time to go ask the Pleiades Saints to succeed at something they've demonstrably failed at 12 separate times now! Better hurry, they're not scheduled to last too long past that. :rolleyes:

I owe someone on this thread an apology; they were technically correct about something akin to a doppel being possible.

I'll note that this story beat has been planned for a while, but the introduction of doppels to the series canon, even if in another universe entirely, did make this slightly more... complicated to plan. :oops:

Even when it doesn't try to, Kyubey can't help but spread misery, huh.

It would be interesting to see a Kyubey detached from the asshole network. Maybe it'd learn empathy or something.

I'm not sure a Kyubey detached from the "asshole network" would even function — not without something else driving the body, at least.

Hmmm. Interesting. Shame that Sayaka flew into a rage, that conversation was promising, but I suppose that was inevitable. Kyubey is the source of pretty much everything bad in her life.
Sayaka! We were getting knowledge!

Indeed... albeit from a tainted source, who's likely to tell you the whole truth about many things just so he can slip in a misleading fact exactly where it would best screw one over, so actually maybe that was for the best.

One of my favorite stories on the site back from the dead! I was worried you'd abandoned it in favor of Most Omnipotent Goddess, which while decent, feels like it requires you to have more knowledge of the setting beforehand to make sense of it.

Nah, I'm not abandoning any of my stories in favor of the others, even if it sometimes feels like it. As I've said before, this is the story of mine you should likely be least concerned about ever permanently dying.(*^-^*)

A wild Octavia von Seckendorf appears!

Quick, someone give her a harmonica!

Funnily, she almost has one of those built into her chest already. In fact, while it's not the route I chose to go here, the implication is that she actually sees through that grill, rather than out of her helmet, at least going by her various doppel forms. But, there's no actual proof of that, so I wrote it this way instead.

So Ashtaroth still hates herself? That's so sad...

Kinda, yeah. As demonstrated in this chapter. :V

Eh, if Flair counts The Different Story as canon, it's certainly possible. Near the climax of that side-manga, Madoka wished to turn Oktavia von Seckendorff back into Sayaka. And it worked. True, the need for Madoka levels of potential is a bit of sticking point, but it's possible. And it's also possible to artificially inflate someone's potential to the Madoka-tier levels needed; it's how Madoka has Madoka-tier levels of potential. Not likely to ever be explored within this story, but it's at least theoretically possible for a Witch to be turned back into a Meguca.

Indeed — but this timeline's Kyubey would never have seen that, now would he?

Hmmm, that's false, Lapin in Tart magica was perfectly able to reverse from witch to magical girl with no problems and she would be included in that statement, Kyubey cannot say that because he has proof it isn't the case.

Do note the wording of Kyubey's rebuttal to Ash's question of "all known historical attempts to do so". Lapin's wish was aimed at Isabeau, for whom the attempted reversion didn't work. That Lapin happened to end up with magic that let her do that for herself, personally, was completely incidental - and thus, not a working attempt. ;)

...wait a fucking second, Ashtaroth asked if they could be turned Human and Kazumi magica shows that he doesn't consider magical girls humans, he points that out when he tells Kazumi that wishing to be human is *stupid* because she'll instantly become a magical girl and won't be human anymore.

Well, if that was voluntary, I applaud you for, that little misdirection is a very good one. Beaten by a case of taxonomy, one wrong word dashing their hope despite the truth.

I also had to look back through Kazumi Magica in order to make sure I was describing Kazumi's situation correctly, and yes, wouldn't you know it?

(Writing Kyubey is extremely difficult. But if you're looking closely, you'll find he uses exactly this kind of "technically correct, from my perspective/with this wording" speech in essentially every appearance he's had in this fic thus far.)

Given that, according to Kyuddles, Ashtaroth is the most coherent witch ever seen, it does lend a lot to the theory that there is more knowledge on witch psychology, and opportunity for witch participation in testing, than has ever been available before...

Hmm. Did he say that, exactly? :whistle:



Also, a few comments I didn't get to before:

So what happens if Ashtaroth attempts to use the weapon of a Puella Magi with an incomplete entry?
I would assume that she only gets the bits she got. So in Homura's case? No time-travel, no storage, no time-stoppage, no, uhh, actually using a shield to block stuff(?)... but I expect that she can pull off amazing hair-swishes! *insert image of sad Homura finally having a bad-hair day*
On the other hand, because homura's magic is activated with her shield, Ashtaroth should be able to use most of her abilities if she fully subsumes her and decides she cares enough to take control.
Why in the world would that be the case? The only ability Ashtaroth got from Sayaka was her magic platforms, and all she got from Tira was her pen brush. And we know if she takes full control of either of them she can't use their magic. The same should be true of Homura if she's fully subsumed.
Homura's shield is both her weapon and the source of most of her magic. She uses her magic by physically turning the shield. Homura stops time by turning her shield 90 degrees so that the hourglass inside of it stops. Turning it 180 degrees will flip the hourglass over, resetting it and causing her to go back in time. Because it works using physical movement, Ashtaroth should be able to use homura's shield the same way she can use Sayaka's sword.
Can Ashtaroth use Sayaka's sword? We've never seen her do that. Besides, it's very much a leap of logic to assume the blatantly magic shield works simply because of a 180 twist.

There's no mention of a twist here, just that she grabbed for her shield. In this story at least, we have no idea how her 'time travel' works.
Ashtaroth can move Sayaka's arm around while she has her shield out, so yes she can use it. And yes, that is how Homura's shield works, according to no less than Gen Urobuchi.
Huh. Must've missed that, fair enough. Still think it's dumb.

Romka is correct; Homura's shield has an hourglass in it, within which the "sands of time" can be reversed by twisting the shield to turn the hourglass. However, it's a bit of a stretch to say that just having the shield would give Ashtaroth the ability to use all its functions — note that her version of Tira's penbrush automatically becomes a sword as soon as she produces it, preventing her from using it in any other way.
 
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Would the difference in situation be that Tira's breakdown was -before- they went back in time, and so there wasn't another Tira soul around to turn into a witch...? Honestly forgetting the timeline of events here, I need to do a reread.
 
Would the difference in situation be that Tira's breakdown was -before- they went back in time, and so there wasn't another Tira soul around to turn into a witch...? Honestly forgetting the timeline of events here, I need to do a reread.
That would be better than my assumption, where in also forgetting the timeline I assumed it was after they went back in time, and... Well. I just checked, and past Sayaka isn't a Puella Magi yet, since she's still carrying around the baseball bat Mami enchanted for her. And past Tira has now witched out where she didn't in the previous timeline. I think Tira's Grief burst did make a witch, just not here.
 
Do note the wording of Kyubey's rebuttal to Ash's question of "all known historical attempts to do so". Lapin's wish was aimed at Isabeau, for whom the attempted reversion didn't work. That Lapin happened to end up with magic that let her do that for herself, personally, was completely incidental - and thus, not a working attempt. ;)

Remember people, Kyubey may never tell something not true, but he is still a lying liar who lies.

Though technically, Isabeau's attempt did make her a magical girls once again, but well, this is not human for Kyubzey, and she suffered from the same problem as Kazumi: Memories made her reverse, so he can still not count it as *successful*, in his words at least.

(Writing Kyubey is extremely difficult. But if you're looking closely, you'll find he uses exactly this kind of "technically correct, from my perspective/with this wording" speech in essentially every appearance he's had in this fic thus far.)

I mean, this is canon, he is, for all intent and purposes, an alien Fae. Just look at what he said when Kyouko asked if she could reverse Oktavia into Sayaka, *I wouldn't be surprised*, from something that can't feel surprise, is very much not a good indicator. Then he does the same in reverse to madoka when she asks about it, telling *yeah, Kyuoko couldn't have done it*, removing the *with the way she was doing it* and *as far as I know* to make it seems worse than it was.
 
*blinks* Priests...? Wha- oh, you mean the Saints. As an aside, for those interested, the MG primarily responsible for that would be Niko Kanna (though there's an implication that the other Saints somehow contributed to this as well, as Kazumi has access to all of their personal magic).
I would assume their contribution was their memories of Michiru(and with that a "flavor" of their magic)? Something to jog any memories left in the Witch they used as the source for their work.

Time to go ask the Pleiades Saints to succeed at something they've demonstrably failed at 12 separate times now! Better hurry, they're not scheduled to last too long past that. :rolleyes:
They didn't fail as such. They just couldn't keep their earlier attempts stable. Kind of like how the modern world has fusion technology, but that only works in experiments for a few seconds.

In fact, while it's not the route I chose to go here, the implication is that she actually sees through that grill, rather than out of her helmet, at least going by her various doppel forms. But, there's no actual proof of that, so I wrote it this way instead.
Symbolic for Sayaka deciding things with her heart and ignoring her head?

Would the difference in situation be that Tira's breakdown was -before- they went back in time, and so there wasn't another Tira soul around to turn into a witch...?
I think Tira's Grief burst did make a witch, just not here.
Wasn't Tira's Grief explosion before Shemesh got revived? Potentially even being what revived Shemesh?
 
Ha Ha! Ashtaroth's story continues! Glad to see another update.
Kyubey does as they are want to do- be an infuriating sack of not-marshmallow stuff.

The grief/witch mechanics revealed here are really interesting, even if it took me reading other's commentary for things to make sense.
So this has lots of implications. Um. I don't know if I know the words for this.

Trying this out. Ashtaroth's mind can and is dominated by whatever has the most power inside her. This is why our, the readers, perspective doesn't change, but Oktavia gets to be in charge. This would mean that Ashtaroth isn't the witch, she's what's controlling the witch. The witch herself just provides information and the occasional strong urge to do something.
I'd argue that Ashtaroth is the witch, but the personality we've been following is not Ashtaroth. She doesn't remember her name, and just *knew* that Ashtaroth is what she's called now, much in the same way she's found out about all the other functions of her witch-self.


Oh no, Ashtaroth gathered it was a grief overload — but as you may recall, Tira quite recently had a similar breakdown with Candeloro that also overflowed Ashtaroth's capacity to hold said grief, and this did not happen. So the question is, what changed?
Would the difference in situation be that Tira's breakdown was -before- they went back in time, and so there wasn't another Tira soul around to turn into a witch...? Honestly forgetting the timeline of events here, I need to do a reread.
That would be better than my assumption, where in also forgetting the timeline I assumed it was after they went back in time, and... Well. I just checked, and past Sayaka isn't a Puella Magi yet, since she's still carrying around the baseball bat Mami enchanted for her. And past Tira has now witched out where she didn't in the previous timeline. I think Tira's Grief burst did make a witch, just not here.
I'm gonna point out that the first grief overload was, indeed, after they went back in time. It could have even been only twenty-odd minutes ago to boot. It may not seem like it, but the only things that have happened since then are a fair amount of conversation, Sayaka and Tira going for a walk, the phone call to Madoka, and then the convo with Kyubey. Personally, I'd attribute that to a bit more than 20 min, but then again I lose track of time a lot.

Still, I think Beowolf has it here- Ashtaroth didn't revive Shamesh with the overload (I kinda think he came back with the time jump. Ashtaroth can't keep tabs on him, and didn't even know he exsisted in the first place until she was book-to-orb), she sent it to the only other place Tira-aligned grief could go- Tira's soul gem. It just so happens that this soul gem wasn't contained within Novella, 'cause timy-wimy things interact weirdly with souls and whatnot. And when Ashtaroth tried to do the same thing with Sayaka-aligned grief, there was no quantum-linked soul gem to send it to, as Sayaka has yet to make a contract.

Also, jeeze this thread is a lot more active than the SB one.
 
...huh. Both on topic in advance, and a good reason for me to actually post this image:


Welcome home! Won't you stay for some tea...? <3

(Art once again commissioned by @Pheonix14, and drawn by Kerubii on Deviantart. As for whether or not this will be relevant to the story later... think I'll leave that up to you all to guess. ;))

Oh hey, it's the cutie again! You did actually post that here already. :p :lol:
 
How would Ashy punt anything without feet?
Well, Ashtaroth, er... that is... Tome, is rather... well-built... so if Ashtaroth can fly Tome up at an angle, and her stalk down, and then hold a fulcrum of her stalk in place, then gravity should be able to provide a solid blow to anything in Tome's path.
Maybe not kill but Jubey is proof that it can be changed.
Extensions can be changed, but Kyubey is still around and very much not Jubeyed, at least as far as I can tell from all the way over here having no knowledge of Jubey aside from a dash of wiki reviewing...

So "Kyubey can't be changed" seems accurate, because Kyubey-as-kyubey is unchanged, even if a kyubey was changed.
 
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I finally have time to go over the new chapter. I'll go over the Kyubey bits in even more detail at the end.
Though your first instinct is to grab the eavesdropping little bunny rat and punt him across your barrier like an oddly-shaped soccer ball, you force yourself to quash it, too many questions arising from what he just said — along with the fact that he even could say it to you, for that matter — to let yourself act on it in this moment. As satisfying as it would undoubtedly be, you'd like to at least know how much he heard of your conversation just now before acting, so you suppose you'll simply have to restrain yourself, at least until-

*SHCK-!*

Kyubey is abruptly replaced by a shower of blood as a sharp length of metal passes through his head at roughly Mach 2. Tira is unable to withhold a shriek as little chunks of flesh spray across the otherwise pristine Canvas, tainting the floor with spatters of red.

You're too taken aback to even say anything as you stare down at Sayaka, the hilt of the figuratively-smoking cutlass still held tightly in her grip.

Did... did she actually just kill Kyubey? Holy- like, you were obviously mad at him too, but not to the point of doing-!
Ashtaroth restrained herself but Sayaka couldn't. Makes sense for someone who acts on her feelings so much, especially after all that Kyubey has done.

Tira bites her lip and silently forms a penbrush behind her back, while you struggle to throw off your surprise. For all the things you know about Kyubey that others evidently don't, you hadn't the slightest idea that he could just... revive himself at will, or whatever just happened. You kind of figured that a being who goes around granting reality-warping wishes on a daily basis might have a trick or two in reserve, but self-resurrection wasn't really one that you-
Well, its not quite self resurrection, but close enough.

Your shock abruptly flips over to disgust as Kyubey runs up to his barely half-intact former body and promptly begins eating it. Oh, what the fu-
What? Can't a guy eat himself without be judged for it? I figured Ashtaroth of all people would be okay with that.

A familiar feeling suddenly washes over you, excess despair welling up inside your body like water being poured into an already full cup. Oh- damn it, you may have wanted to experiment with this earlier, but this doesn't exactly seem like the best time to start doing familiar creation tests... not that you seem to have any real choice in the matter, because you have to expend this somehow, so, uh-!

Falling back on what you did before, you shove a sizable clump of the surplus grief away, the sensation of it tearing away granting you a measure of relief.
𝄡 ...no...
-and then the clump inexplicably returns, and plunges right back into you, nearly doubling you over as it slams back into your grief stores like some sort of ethereal cannonball. Huh-?!
Well that isn't good.

"If I feel I've been tricked?!" Sayaka shouts over him, somehow still escalating in volume. "Ever since I agreed to your screwed-up contract, things have just kept going from bad to worse, and worse, and WORSE! And every time I think I'm starting to get a handle on the latest bit of misery I've got no choice in, and that maybe things can finally start getting at least a little better, something else happens to show me EXACTLY how wrong I was!"

You twist and spasm as the grief continues to swell, trying over and over to shove it away, but it's as though something is holding it, forcibly keeping it in place, something that you don't think is actually you, or if it is then it's a part that's currently rebelling-
Wait, why are we-
"Sayaka-" Tira tries, wide eyes rapidly flickering between her fellow magical girl and your escalating contortions.

"What's next, we get teleported straight into HELL?!" Sayaka almost cackles, ignoring the other girl, and seemingly everything else around her as well. "Oh wait, no need, we're ALREADY THERE!!!"
𝄡 ...won't... be... this...
In growing desperation, you start throwing out illusions as fast as you can think of them, fantastical landscapes shifting into existence in one moment only to vanish in the next, music shields erratically forming all around you while penswords repeatedly fall from your grip, but it's not enough, it barely feels like it's making a dent, you can't-!
But we already are...

It seems Tira has noticed that something is happening and its related to Sayaka's rage. Sayaka on the other hand is blind with rage.

-outside! Yes, you just need to tear open a portal to your barrier's central area; make some illusions where they'll cost enough to quickly use up all this grief, stop you from overflowing, stop you from exploding-!!!
𝄡 ...no longer.
"It's All."

Something surges.

"Your."

Something cracks.

<SaYaKA-!>

"FAAAUUULLLT!!!!!!"

The crack bursts, and you can do nothing but silently wail as the enormous mass of grief now outright forces its way up and out of you. Novella bucks as though kicked by a giant, pages flipping wildly as a massive, tar-black cloud pours out of them, hanging in the air like an ocean of acrid smog. It hurts-!

You know, I recall something from earlier in the story about a horrible magic chestburster. I guess Ashtaroth's fears were well founded. Weird that it didn't happen when Sayaka was first subsumed though.

The cloud begins to rapidly condense, solidifying into a massive suit of armor grasping an equally massive sword. A ragged blue cape enshrouds her upper back, and the spined, flowing tail of a betta fish extends from beneath her waist, cutting through the air as easily as water. A quintet of swords placed atop a curved musical staff crowns the top of her heart-shaped collar, while numerous frayed, reddish-pink ribbons splay outwards from its seams, their other ends still tethered to the volume they emerged from, where they fade to translucent white. The remaining ribbon tied around both her your collar and neck like a noose, along with the tasseled, bookmark-like cords restraining her your arms, are ignored as the erratically-shifting background stabilizes into a replica of her your concert hall, the haunting sound of the violin you so treasured beginning to echo from both within and without.

From beneath the empty hollow of your three-eyed helmet, you glare out at the target of your weaker self's wrath.

𝄡 Go to Hell with your squires
Ah, this is like those doppels from magia record. Except Ashtaroth is the doppel. Also interesting to that Oktavia view Sayaka as her weaker self. And is the last line in reference to Kyubey or Ashtaroth. She's glaring at Kyubey but the sentence seems much more relevant to Ashtaroth. If it is meant for Ash, it would make Kyubeys confusion more reasonable, since that doesn't make much sense directed at him.

You turn. Far below, your weaker self gapes up at you like the fool she is, suddenly bereft of the grief and rage that brought you to the surface in the first place. To her side, the artist cowers, while the doll she holds stares up at you without even a spark of recognition.

Memories like cracked glass surge to the forefront at the sight of the latter, sharp enough to cut steel; bearing down on you with the weight of the world.

You look away.

Completing your revolution, you finally gaze upon the still form of the one who now chains you. Lays claim to you. Prevents even the concert of your memories from ever truly beginning, allowing only this barren facade of it to even briefly exist. Drowns you in the present, even as you wish for nothing but the past.

Though your fate is tragedy, it shall not be this one.

You raise your sword over your helm. You cannot simply sever the connection she has forced upon you, cannot simply leave now that she has bound you so. You are as much a part of her as she is of you now; a reality as inescapable as any other.

But you would rather die in chains, than be forced to eternally move forward with her story.
Sayaka is shocked, Tira is afraid, Oktavia is still sad about Mami, and she wants to be free from Ashtaroth, even if it means death.

The artist bounds to her in worry, carefully laying your weaker self's unmoving shell flat on its back, while the doll erupts from her collar, glaring up at you with a fury to rival your own — but it doesn't matter. In returning to your counterpart what was hers to begin with, you sacrificed too much of what little you had left.
RETURN
Her dominion is already reasserting itself.

Your strength falters as what wisps of grief you still retain rapidly stream away, flowing out of you and sinking back into the surrounding demesne. Your formerly loose bindings abruptly turn taut — perhaps strengthened further by the will of the doll — and begin to pull at you in earnest, inexorably dragging you back into the world below.

Back into her world...
Attacking your other self with the stuff that lets you exist wasn't the best idea now was it?

When you awaken from the trance(?) you'd fallen into, the first thing that you see is Tira, standing atop Novella with her arms crossed, anxiously tapping her foot against the book's open pages. Candeloro has left her neck in favor of hovering over her shoulder, and has her ribbons wrapped loosely around Tira's waist in a strangely comforting manner.
Aww, Candy is giving Tira a hug.

<I wish.> you groan, too exhausted to even be surprised by Tira's uncharacteristic language. <Ugggh, what even was that...?>

Whatever it was, it sucked, in every sense of the word. Your grief stores seem to have stabilized, no longer feeling like they're on the verge of rupturing, but they ache like nothing you've ever felt.
Oh wow, even after all that Ash still feels sore and groggy.

Now for the obligatory going over Kyubey's words with a fine comb:

<That was rather rude.>
Smashing someone's remote controlled meat drone is indeed rather rude, if not unjustified under the circumstances.

Your shock abruptly flips over to disgust as Kyubey runs up to his barely half-intact former body and promptly begins eating it. Oh, what the fu-

<You cannot permanently kill me, and attempting to do so will only waste resources,>
Kyubey states whilst rapidly devouring his previous self, causing Tira to nearly heave, <so I would prefer that you not try that again.>
Attempting to kill him could also make his attempted murderers feel better, though as an emotionless being he honestly wouldn't take that into account.

<My initial intent was simply to investigate the origin of the peculiar phone call that Madoka Kaname recently received. The discovery of a magical anomaly such as yourselves, however, has changed this.>
Unsurprising, but Kyubey did hear that phone call. He probably cut it off the first time too. The call went like this:

You're unsure at first whether or not the phone will even work in your barrier, but after a moment the call connects. The other end rings… and rings… and rings…

"Um… hello?"

"Madoka! It's-"

"You've reached the phone number of Madoka Kaname. I'm sorry I can't talk to you right now, but if you leave a quick message, I promise I'll call you back as soon as I can!"

"Oh come on, pick up Madoka!"
The initial "Um... hello?" line flows differently from the rest of the message. It seems unsure, like the sort of thing you'd actually say if you picked up an unknown number. Usually if you started a voicemail greeting like that you'd just delete it and try again until you got a more put together sounding message. Which is exactly how the second part of the message sounds.

So, I think Madoka picked up the phone, Sayaka said two words, and Kyubey cut the call so he could investigate wtf a Sayaka sound alike was calling Madoka on Tira Narumi's phone.

Anomaly...?

Wait a moment.

<Is... that what an Irregular is?> you slowly, tentatively ask, trying to ignore the auto-cannibalistic act still going on below. <A witch that breaks the common conventions of magic?>

<Correct,>
Kyubey casually replies, confirming both your statement and that he can indeed hear your silent "voice" as the last of his prior body vanishes down his throat, and he turns back around to face you, <though the term also encompasses aberrant present and prospective magical girls. Irregular witches are even rarer than these exceptions however, and often wholly unique, warranting further observation whenever possible.>
Not much of note here.

<On the contrary,> Kyubey says calmly, <I have already learned quite a lot from you simply by being present for the past several minutes. The insight you've provided into the nature of one of the other Irregulars presently residing in this city has been particularly valuable. I now understand why I possess no memory of Homura Akemi's contract, as well as the most likely mechanisms of her magic. You've been most helpful.>
That's actually pretty bad. If Kyubey knows Homura's a time traveler, he can pull his "you're actually just making things worse" card on Homura, which will make her give up on time travelling and probably witch out.

<Your name was "Ash", correct?>

You pause.

He... doesn't already know?

<If my inference is incorrect, do tell me.>

It's a simple request, yet you don't immediately follow through, abruptly realizing that you may have a bit of an issue here. If Kyubey isn't already sure of what your name is, and he's not using your forgotten human name either, then he presumably hasn't worked out your former identity yet... and while that's one of the biggest subjects you'd like to inquire about, you're honestly not sure that you should help him piece it together. You were assuming he already knew who you are, or at least were — but if not, is he going to go back to giving you the cold shoulder if he finds out?

Considering you don't even know why he was doing that in the first place...

<Technically,> you finally reply, for once actually glad that your telepathy doesn't naturally include a voice to identify you by, <it's Ashtaroth.>

Kyubey cocks his head to one side in a way that you still can't help but find cute.

<I have no records of a magical girl bearing that name within the past millennium, and you match no descriptions of the few witches known to have persisted for longer than a century. If you truly originate from a parallel timeline however, that is by no means unexpected.>

...interesting that's how he interpreted your half-truthful response. Does Kyubey even know that witches have their own names...?
Actually, this doesn't necessarily mean Kyubey doesn't know Astaroth's human name. He could just be referring to her witch name and bringing up the lack of magical girls with that name to mislead Ash.

He's also never said there were no magical girls with that name more than a millennium ago. And he didn't say that Ashtaroth didn't match the description of witches that persisted for less than a century, which would include most witches.

<The specific abnormalities of Irregular witches are highly variable.> Kyubey replies whilst preening like a cat, as though that will fool any of you at this point. <You specifically qualify as one due to being the first I've known to retain such an impressive clarity of thought.>
Highly variable, but not entirely. And Ash is the first Kyubey has known to be so sane. Not the first he has known of. He could have heard of others based on encounters others of his kind have had.

<My second question then.> you say, your trepidation growing with every word. <Is it... possible for a witch to ever become human again? Say, by way of a wish, or other magical means?>

Kyubey seems to muse on the matter for a moment before responding.

<Perhaps.>

Your nonexistent heart metaphorically stutters — but then Kyubey continues.

<However, all known historical attempts to do so have resulted in failure, typically producing flawed facsimiles of the original self at best. This suggests that a true reversion of the nature you propose is indeed "impossible".>
Note that depending on how strict you are in defining the original self, Ashtaroth herself could be a flawed facsimile. After all, she's missing many of her memories, and even her personality may have changed. This does not necessarily imply that a witch cannot become a normal sane person. Or in other words, 'flawed' might be good enough for Ashtaroth.

<You are asking for specific precedent?> he questions, apparently rhetorically. <One particularly noteworthy instance of a wish made to regress a witch beyond its own birth resulted in it being forced back into the husk of its former body. From this, she regained her abilities from her time as a magical girl, but remained a witch in both mind and soul, desiring naught but destruction.>

You perk back up a bit. That... sounds bad, but could maybe still work in your case, assuming you can find your body...

<If you would prefer a more proximate example, the Pleiades Saints of Asunaro have access to a unique form of reconstruction magic, which they have used to revive a certain witch as a sort of magical homunculus. The resulting entity is still alive today, and exhibits a surprisingly human sense of self, not entirely dissimilar to you->

Your attention shoots through the roof.

<-but has also already destabilized a dozen times prior, and is thus likely doomed as a matter of course.>
I'll be honest, I don't actually know that much about side stories, so I'll just let other people examine this.

<By contrast, your mind appears strangely stable, despite your otherwise typical nature as an entity of pure negative emotion. I fully expected this experiment to fail.>

<This is the first time I have succeeded in forging a telepathic connection with a witch that did not instantly result in either the corruption or destruction of my current terminal.> he eventually replies. <Your familiar's actions aside.>
"Familiars?!" Sayaka snarls, her fury flaring back up so fast you'd swear it was visible.

<Indeed.> Kyubey confirms, finally turning his attention to the girls. <You are quite unusual yourselves, perhaps even more so than your parent witch. Not only do you appear to share her human-like mentality, but whereas most familiars that arise from the concept of magical girls appear as indistinct shades, you two were obviously born of the memories of specific ones. In this world, Sayaka Miki has yet to form a contract, while Tira Narumi became a witch approximately twenty two minutes ago->

Tira reels back as though slapped.

<-but from what I have observed thus far, I am inclined to believe you to be near-perfect recreations of them, perhaps even more precise replicas than those manufactured by the Mirror Witch of Kami->
Note that Kyubey might genuinely be mistaken here. Remember, He hasn't seen Ashtaroth subsume anyone, and we haven't even mentioned that power. By all appearances, he doesn't know its something we can do, he just sees that we have copies of Tira and Sayaka with us. He might have assumed that Tira and Sayaka were just that, rather actually having Tira and Sayaka's souls through us.

I guess they could be seen as familiars if you allow that their souls are a part of Ashtaroth now, and they are therefore made of Ash's soulstuff, but I think they are sufficiently distinct to warrant a new classification. Then again, it is Kyubey, so maybe he's just calling them familiars to make them suffer.

Also Oof Tira.

<I reiterate, you are incapable of inflicting me with any form of enduring harm->
<I neither lie to, nor deliberately deceive those with whom I speak. If you feel that you have somehow been tricked->
<That you find yourself dissatisfied with your present existence is no fault of mine.>
More generic Kyubeyisms. Probably reads them off a script or something.

𝄡 Go to Hell with your squires

<...what-?>
And Kyubey genuinely wondering what's happening

Overall, this was a conversation full of oofs. Kyubey implied Ashtaroth would never become human again, Told Tira her alternate self recently became a witch, and called her and Sayaka familiars. The thing is, Kyubey chose to phrase things that way. Based on what other users have said about witch - human reversions in side stories, it seems he has deliberately downplayed the possibility of Ash becoming human again. Telling Tira that her counterpart just witched out was also secondary to the point he was making. And he could have noted that Tira and Sayaka were also very unusual without calling them familiars.

This could just be Kyubey explaining things in the most accurate way he can by the standards of his emotionless race, but there also might be more to it than that. Remember, Kyubey considered forming a telepathic link with a witch to be an experiment. This whole conversation is basically just him gathering data. Perhaps Kyubey is trying to cause as much pain as possible to see what happens if any of the three very sane despair monsters despair. If that was his plan then he probably got his wish.
 
What would happen if ash absorbed kyubey tho? Now that has me curious.

Maybe take control of kyubey? Become a virus that starts infecting the hive mind?
 
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If anything astaroth would be able to pull an isabeau or if any of you are familiar with another witchs antics ( the spider witch from witch quest, gave a wish to hitomi and basically created a cursed pocket watch of sorts that is facismile of soul gem) the spider witch, in short probably gain kyubey's grant a wish trick and possibly gain his 'drone' as a pseudo familiar...... it could also mutate to fit astaroths nature making it distinctly different than the normal baseline, jubey was different and so was the little bugger from magia record, what do you think an astaroth altered kyubey would look like?

This does give me a question, could astaroth theoretically offload her greif to one of the others to temporarily assume a truly human form much like the spider witch

And if astaroth dies and homura turns back time/jumps universes would the dead astaroth be merged with the new one

The thing to remember is that homuta isn't simply a time traveler but a timeline jumper, it's the entire reason the minute differences exist in each loop, it looks like a loop from an in universe perspective but from ours it's actually a coil or spring
 
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Oh no, Ashtaroth gathered it was a grief overload — but as you may recall, Tira quite recently had a similar breakdown with Candeloro that also overflowed Ashtaroth's capacity to hold said grief, and this did not happen. So the question is, what changed?

Hypothesis: When Tira's grief overload occurred, two things were different; 1) Shemesh had not yet been revived, and 2) the underlying desire was penitence for a perceived wrong on her part toward someone else (Candeloro). By contrast, during Sayaka's grief overload, Shemesh existed, and the underlying desire was hostility toward a particular individual that she felt had wronged her (Kyuubey). I think the hostility had more to do with what happened than Shemesh though. In other words, because the nature of their respective overloads was polar opposites, different outcomes occurred.
 
I think this chapter confirms for us that Witches cannot become Magical Girls again. Admittedly a lot happened and the Oktavia situation is new, but just from what I've gathered I do not believe it will be possible.

Oktavia is able to form even with Sayaka still separate and alive (well, as alive as she can be). The description of Oktavia's formation tells us that Grief isn't uniform; it's specific to the Magical Girls who produce it. Sayaka produced enough Grief to form Oktavia, and so Oktavia appeared.

Under normal circumstances, a Magical Girl's Soul Gem is transformed into a Grief Seed. However, we actually get a very good look at Sayaka's transformation into Oktavia in the original show. There, we see her Soul Gem fill with Grief and then shatter to reveal a Grief Seed inside it.

This leads into my present theory: Witches are in fact separate entities from Magical Girls. They might absorb certain traits and feelings from the Magical Girl who they are born from, and Ashtaroth has enough of these to have a human-like consciousness, but they aren't the same people. A Magical Girl is normally killed by the Witch erupting from their Soul Gem, but right now Sayaka and Tira's Soul Gems don't exist physically outside of Ashtaroth and so remained untouched. Thus, a Witch is born while allowing the Magical Girl to remain alive.

Of course, this is a very bad revelation for Ashtaroth. She still believes she's the same person as the Magical Girl who birthed her, despite only retaining some of her memories. I can't see her taking this revelation well.

Or maybe I've missed something important and everything I just wrote is completely and utterly wrong. I'm sure there will be much suffering either way.

If Mami and Oriko having visions of their witch selves in TDS and SP, along with the various Doppel training events from MegiReco are any indication, then it would seem that witches really are separate entities from the magical girls they were spawned from rather than just the girls warped and twisted by grief.
 
In general a witch is born from a magical girl but it doesn't mean the magical girl no longer exists
It's possibly an inversion of sorts when the girl is at her nadir then the witch is at her zenith thus trapping her in the witches own 'shadow' so to speak
Much lik ash the witch the main character who has no control of her fate with it always being in the hands of others and Ashtaroth 'the author' manipulating poor protagonist from 'backstage'
 
<If you would prefer a more proximate example, the Pleiades Saints of Asunaro have access to a unique form of reconstruction magic, which they have used to revive a certain witch as a sort of magical homunculus. The resulting entity is still alive today, and exhibits a surprisingly human sense of self, not entirely dissimilar to you->
So I'm guessing a trip to Asunaro is in order for the future

<Indeed.> Kyubey confirms, finally turning his attention to the girls. <You are quite unusual yourselves, perhaps even more so than your parent witch. Not only do you appear to share her human-like mentality, but whereas most familiars that arise from the concept of magical girls appear as indistinct shades, you two were obviously born of the memories of specific ones. In this world, Sayaka Miki has yet to form a contract, while Tira Narumi became a witch approximately twenty two minutes ago->

<-but from what I have observed thus far, I am inclined to believe you to be near-perfect recreations of them, perhaps even more precise replicas than those manufactured by the Mirror Witch of Kami->

Interesting that Kyubey would automatically assume Sayaka and Tira were familiars created by Ash. Then again, Kyubey never saw the two of them get eaten and he wouldnt have the memories of his alternate self anyway. Without the knowledge that Ash had taken their soul gems, it wouldnt be a big leap to assume that Sayaka and Tira were famiscles created by the witch particularly when there is a witch (Mirrors) capable of creating near perfect copies of people. Of course, I wouldnt put it past Sayaka or Tira to come to the worse case conclusion that they were really were just copies with memories of the real Sayaka and Tira created by Tira. After all, neither of them have soul gems on their person and they cant leave the barrier

Sayaka! We were getting knowledge!
TBF, the viewers and Homura have the benefit of a third party perspective and ~100 time loops to know that Kyubey doesnt lie or at least give out false statements while as far as Sayaka is concerned Kyubey may just be spouting more untruths
 
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That's actually pretty bad. If Kyubey knows Homura's a time traveler, he can pull his "you're actually just making things worse" card on Homura, which will make her give up on time travelling and probably witch out.
Homura is pretty wise to the cabbit's ways, and is quite adept at shooting it before it can say much. I wouldn't say she is safe by any means, but I suspect that she is better than most. If she's lucky, it might just about be enough to give up on witching her, and instead make a new time-travelling witch, with multiple Madokas for maximum unlimited grief escalation. I mean, Madoka is the real prize of Homura's activities, so more of that would be desireable.
 
Shower thought after discussion of Ashy's leglessness. Since her move speed is limited by Tome's hover speed, could she speed up by grabbing swords and trying to ski-push off the ground? Or maybe using Sarr's fan as a boost. Blow into a compression chamber, dump fuel, afterburner time.
 
Homura is pretty wise to the cabbit's ways, and is quite adept at shooting it before it can say much. I wouldn't say she is safe by any means, but I suspect that she is better than most. If she's lucky, it might just about be enough to give up on witching her, and instead make a new time-travelling witch, with multiple Madokas for maximum unlimited grief escalation. I mean, Madoka is the real prize of Homura's activities, so more of that would be desireable.
Hm. This seems like a setup offering a non-zero chance for Homura to get weirded out by the fluffy bunny-cat of doom suddenly trying to be helpful to a degree. If the thing got it in its head that there could be some possibility of exploiting alternate realities to the benefit of the timeline that it cares about, then though Madoka could still be firmly in the crosshairs as a contract to be realised, Homura might end up with some utterly bizarre circumstances to her with random other magical girls coming out of the woodwork to protect her under the impression that Homura is on a super-important mission or something. The situation might not last past a single loop, maybe, but it could definitely stand to be one of the stranger loops.

Shower thought after discussion of Ashy's leglessness. Since her move speed is limited by Tome's hover speed, could she speed up by grabbing swords and trying to ski-push off the ground? Or maybe using Sarr's fan as a boost. Blow into a compression chamber, dump fuel, afterburner time.
Homura uses gratuitous explosions; Tome is the thing to put in the way of explosions... and is what Ashy uses for hover movement. Pulse detonation explosion surfing! Nyoooom!
 
Great chapter! the implications are getting bigger and possibilities are starting to expand even more! I wonder what will come next and how Sayaka will live through this. And pretty neat what you just did here, in fact I am planning to make another omake related to something you just featured in there.

Besides...
The first thing that you see is Tira, standing atop Novella with her arms crossed, anxiously tapping her foot against the book's open pages. Candeloro has left her neck in favor of hovering over her shoulder, and has her ribbons wrapped loosely around Tira's waist in a strangely comforting manner.

This deserves to be drawn, is just too cute XD

Not by me, unfortunately. I don't have the skills
 
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Hello Octavia!
How nice to see that the witches of the magical girls Ashtaroth subsumes still exist, hopefully the team figures out that the MGs experiencing overwhelming negative emotions can summon them if Ash can't spend all that grief quickly enough, it may be useful if they are being outmatched by more magical girls or hostile witches in the future, as a last resort sort of option.
Probably still a net negative. If there aren't any other targets when the witch spawns then it will attack them, and even if there are the sort of breakdown that creates a witch might be difficult to trigger on demand. Plus the whole drowning in despair thing.

Eh, if Flair counts The Different Story as canon, it's certainly possible. Near the climax of that side-manga, Madoka wished to turn Oktavia von Seckendorff back into Sayaka. And it worked. True, the need for Madoka levels of potential is a bit of sticking point, but it's possible. And it's also possible to artificially inflate someone's potential to the Madoka-tier levels needed; it's how Madoka has Madoka-tier levels of potential. Not likely to ever be explored within this story, but it's at least theoretically possible for a Witch to be turned back into a Meguca.
Hey now, I can think of two methods by which Ash could get a madoka tier potential, though admittedly, those methods might not agree with Ash using them.

A wild Octavia von Seckendorf appears!

Quick, someone give her a harmonica!
Octavia used grief attack on Sayaka! It was Super Effective!

Ashtaroth threw a pokeball!
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Octavia was caught!

On Oktavia, she was definitely carrying out Sayaka's will, that is turning Kyubey into hamburger. She herself was also mega pissed at Kyubey, and she could use the telepathy network, and could speak. Which I'm sure is only possible because of Ashtaroth, Oktavia is very run of the mill far as Witches are concerned.

And Kyubey was just confused plain old confused, which is nice.
Actually, I don't think Oktavia could speak, I think that was just her internal narration, which Sayaka possibly understood anyway due to their connection.

Hmm, maybe it's simple. Despite everything that's happened, Sayaka hasn't really given up on herself or her situation. She's pretty fucking miserable, but she's willing to keep trying to improve what she has left. As a witch however, Oktavia is defined by having given up. And that's what she hates about Sayaka, that she's not wallowing in that same despair.
So essentially, Oktavia wants Sayaka to be more of an emo edgelord like she is.

I didn't know she could even say that word!
Shocking, I know. Next you'll tell me that Madoka knows how to say damn.

Oh no, Ashtaroth gathered it was a grief overload — but as you may recall, Tira quite recently had a similar breakdown with Candeloro that also overflowed Ashtaroth's capacity to hold said grief, and this did not happen. So the question is, what changed?
A pretty simple explanation for Ash would be that when Shemesh is already intact there's nowhere else to send the grief. I'm more confused about why Ash didn't even have a grief overload when she first subsumed Sayaka. That had to have produced more despair than this incident.

Romka is correct; Homura's shield has an hourglass in it, within which the "sands of time" can be reversed by twisting the shield to turn the hourglass. However, it's a bit of a stretch to say that just having the shield would give Ashtaroth the ability to use all its functions — note that her version of Tira's penbrush automatically becomes a sword as soon as she produces it, preventing her from using it in any other way.
Actually, I was thinking of Ashtaroth using Homura's version of Homura's shield through Homura's own arm, rather than using any penbrush style copy of the shield that she would get personally.

Would the difference in situation be that Tira's breakdown was -before- they went back in time, and so there wasn't another Tira soul around to turn into a witch...? Honestly forgetting the timeline of events here, I need to do a reread.

That would be better than my assumption, where in also forgetting the timeline I assumed it was after they went back in time, and... Well. I just checked, and past Sayaka isn't a Puella Magi yet, since she's still carrying around the baseball bat Mami enchanted for her. And past Tira has now witched out where she didn't in the previous timeline. I think Tira's Grief burst did make a witch, just not here.

I'm gonna point out that the first grief overload was, indeed, after they went back in time. It could have even been only twenty-odd minutes ago to boot. It may not seem like it, but the only things that have happened since then are a fair amount of conversation, Sayaka and Tira going for a walk, the phone call to Madoka, and then the convo with Kyubey. Personally, I'd attribute that to a bit more than 20 min, but then again I lose track of time a lot.

Still, I think Beowolf has it here- Ashtaroth didn't revive Shamesh with the overload (I kinda think he came back with the time jump. Ashtaroth can't keep tabs on him, and didn't even know he exsisted in the first place until she was book-to-orb), she sent it to the only other place Tira-aligned grief could go- Tira's soul gem. It just so happens that this soul gem wasn't contained within Novella, 'cause timy-wimy things interact weirdly with souls and whatnot. And when Ashtaroth tried to do the same thing with Sayaka-aligned grief, there was no quantum-linked soul gem to send it to, as Sayaka has yet to make a contract.
So to summarize, the grief Ashtaroth sent away during Tira's breakdown either went to Shemesh or Tira's current timeline self who subsequently witched.

Timelines do differ from each other, so its possible that Tira witched naturally in this timeline, but I'm still inclined to say it happened as a result of Ashtaroth shoving the grief away. For one thing the timing is just too good. Tira witched approximately 22 minutes ago, which is suspiciously close to when our Tira's breakdown happened.

For another thing, Ashtaroth has never been shown to have control over familiar spawning in the past. It seems to be automated, with Astaroth's conscious attempts to do it failing. It would be strange for this one instance to be the exception. Plus, partially subsuming Homura fully restored her, and added to her form on top. With so much grief from that I would have expected Shemesh to be restored there.

Homura is pretty wise to the cabbit's ways, and is quite adept at shooting it before it can say much. I wouldn't say she is safe by any means, but I suspect that she is better than most. If she's lucky, it might just about be enough to give up on witching her, and instead make a new time-travelling witch, with multiple Madokas for maximum unlimited grief escalation. I mean, Madoka is the real prize of Homura's activities, so more of that would be desireable.
The problem is this exact scenario happened in canon. When Kyubey found out Homura was a time traveler he told her that she was responsible for Madoka's increasing potential. When she failed to defeat Walpurgisnacht she decided that it was pointless to go back again and would have witched if Madoka hadn't preempted her by erasing the concept of witches.
 
Timelines do differ from each other, so its possible that Tira witched naturally in this timeline, but I'm still inclined to say it happened as a result of Ashtaroth shoving the grief away. For one thing the timing is just too good. Tira witched approximately 22 minutes ago, which is suspiciously close to when our Tira's breakdown happened.
To be fair, is more possible to me that Tira wasted all of her energy fighting Saar. That is the event that happened around those times I believe.
 
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