I just had a wild idea, no clue if it's true or not. We're attributing the power upgrade to Black Swan being a rookie hero under duress, but what if it's actually from Scarlet Maturity? And him targeting the real core of Black Swan is part of the process for how his power enhancement works?
 
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[X] . . . go up. You will regenerate faster outside of the Earth's atmosphere. You can survive the vacuum of space. Can he?

I think this has an actual possibility to take SM out of play for a little while until he gets back to earth which would be amazing.

Definite arguments for either option though.
 
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[X] . . . go up. You will regenerate faster outside of the Earth's atmosphere. You can survive the vacuum of space. Can he?
I love that part with Blue Sky where he's like 'I know I'm supposed to murder you but I draw the line at being a transphobe'
 
[X] . . . go through. You have a hyper-dense core. You have enough juice for one light speed dash. Can he survive a direct hit at relativistic speeds? Let's find out.
 
[X] . . . go through. You have a hyper-dense core. You have enough juice for one light speed dash. Can he survive a direct hit at relativistic speeds? Let's find out.

But it's also the one spot he can't do any damage to whatsoever, because while he's absurdly, ludicrously strong... He's not "Can split a supermassive black hole" strong.

So why's he going for it?
Everybody is assuming SM has some good reason, but I'll play devil's advocate and say he just made a mistake. Even experienced metas can be wrong, and maybe he's fought other durability heroes with vulnerable cores before.

Actually at lightspeed how long would it take for BS to reach the closest planet other than the moon?
I actually got curious, so, Encyclopedia - Distances planets-Earth
Planet
minimal distance
in AU
maximal distance
in AU
Venus0.2661.736
Mars0.3722.671
Mercury0.5521.446

Venus is about 2 minutes up to 14.5 minutes. Mars is 3 minutes -- 22 minutes. And Mercury is 4.5 minutes -- 12 minutes.

An odd question occurs to me. As much of an utter bastard as Scarlet Maturity is, his power is actually insanely useful. Judging from Ete and Printemps, he basically gives you a new Keyword on your power. If we ever face another Movement level catastrophe, he could use his ability to enhance Black Swan and other high power Heroes to oppose the threat. He even would get something out of it himself too, given he gets stronger every time he uses his original power. Course, the question is - how desperate would SM need to be to consider buffing other heroes who don't work for him? Apparently, the Movement wasn't enough, which is immensely concerning.
I think this depends on SM's mentality, which I don't have a great grasp on. The Movement was certainly apocalyptic, but did SM think "well, I can probably survive this even if nobody else does"? In which case buffing other people might not have been worth it to him.

It's also possible the situation simply devolved too fast, with buffing either taking too long (hours+) or the time between him going "oh shit" and the Movement ending was too small for him to buff anyway.
 
I think Scarlet Maturity probably just gets stronger each time they are wounded. They like punching Black Swan's core because it hurts them and then they can heal from that to become stronger. Most other materials are not strong enough to wound them.
 
You are Menagerie Witch.

Echidna obeys your orders as if she thought with your own mind. Été conjures a battalion of soldiers made of flames, which Echidna barrels right through.
Wow, that's definitely a breakthrough. Before, it was orders, but Echidna and Maddie are almost two halves of the same whole.
Hiver replaces his barriers, face shining with sweat at the effort. "Look at her eyes. She's out of her mind. I've seen this before—I think Faust gave her and Printemps the stuff he threatened Lady Leizi with.

You squint and, sure enough, Été eyes are crazed. Her pupils are dilated, the whites of her eyes bloodshot. Printemps is in a similar state; you think he's drooling out of the sides of his out.

". . .what do those drugs do?" you ask.

"Uhhh, crap, what was it? Regeneration, stronger senses, increased tolerance to pain, umm, raised aggression . . . and withdrawal is fatal."
And withdrawal is fatal. Yikes. They're either addicts or are gonna be dead by year end.
You make a show of yawning and stretching while ignoring. "Hey Hiver, you ever see this skit Black Swan made in high school? Her acting sucks but the names are funny."

You open your screen and pull up that video Mona made you watch. As it plays in the background, you furiously write a message that you show to Hiver. He taps your back once in acknowledgement, and then you send it to its recipients.
Oh hey!!! That's my Omake!!! Cool!!!
Printemps' nose is a bloody mess as Hiver keeps him in an arm-lock. "I always told you to work on your CQC. I always . . . always told you and Gwen so much and you never listened. Never."

Hiver positions himself behind Printemps and encircles his right arm around Printemps neck, placing Printemps trachea in the crook of his elbow. Hiver grabs his left bicep with his right hand, puts his left hand behind Printemps head, and then brings his elbows together in an attempt to blood choke his cousin-in-law.
A blood choke? Goddamn, there is some genuine killing intent if that move's being used.
"Us?" Printemps roars, "You made her weak! She would have been perfect, married off to someone with connections and power! She would have been safe, we would have been secure, but you and that créature she dallied with filled her head with nonsense."
Safety? Security? The people that want those things at the cost of freedom will get nothing in the end.
"It's your fault! You scum! You swine! You pathetic, weak, disgusting little worm! Everything that has happened is your fault! Yours, Harrier—"

"That's not my fucking name!"
Oh damn.
11 + 0 + 5 (That's Not Her Name.) = 16. Major Success!
Oh damn. That dice roll genuinely made me sit up in my chair.
Then he made you repeat the maneuver like thirty times until you were bored.

You privately promise to help Dr. Ibis set up his dating profile when you get home, because that maneuver is the only thing keeping you out of Scarlet Maturity's grasp.
The Genius Dr Ibis strikes once again! Now with knowledge of flight techniques.
You jab your thumbs in his eyes and blast.
Straight for the eyes! I love it!
Scarlet Maturity is merely standing, looking at you with a glimmer of something new in his eye. You furrow your brow—but cutely!—and ready your next move.
"But cutely!" Oh, now we gotta bring her on the Magical Girl mission.
You rolled: 1.

1 - 3 = -2. Uh oh.
Uh oh will never stop being a funny reaction to obvious incoming disaster.
"I've seen this way of fighting before," he says, "You fight like a faster Novalight."

Scarlet Maturity lifts you out of the ground by your hair. He studies you for a second.

"In all our fights, Novalight never helped me grow stronger. By the end, she stopped trying to defeat me altogether."

He readjusts his grip and grabs you by the head once more. He steps out of the hold in the ground, dangling you above the ground.

"You're stronger than her. But you're more concerned with collateral damage. Scared of hurting anyone. That alone has lost you this battle." He rears back one arm and makes a fist. "That won't do. Let's change the venue."
Scarlet Maturity clocked Mona as Novalight in about… two minutes. Honestly pretty scary.
Your world becomes a fiery holocaust of metal and flame as the fuel inside the ship ignites, turning the sea to hell. You can't see out of one eye. With horror, you realize your construct-body has been so depleted that part of your true core on your head has been exposed. You erupt from the wreckage, screaming in terror and rage, and float in the sky trying to see him through all the smoke.
…how did you get so good at describing things? My descriptions aren't nearly as good! This writing's crazy compared to mine!
You are Opale Houdin-Reyes.
Yup, still sitting straight up. Also, is that Abigail's last name? If it is (which I think another user corroborated) that's cute.
You don't remember when it started, but it was sometime after you hit puberty. For some people it came earlier. For some it came later. For you, it happened when you were looking at yourself in a mirror and all you could think was "I look wrong."

Your hands didn't look like your hands. Your face didn't look like your face. Your body didn't look like your body. You stared and stared and stared, trying to make it look right in your head, but you couldn't. You started hyperventilating and the person in the mirror copied you, but they looked wrong in a way you couldn't explain. Your chest started hurting and you couldn't breathe. You sank to your knees, screaming to your grandmother that you needed to go to the hospital.
Oh. Agh, that one hurt to read. I'm cis but the whole feeling of being weird and wrong… ouch. Applied emotional damage straight to my heart.
"What if you didn't want to be a man?" Mami had just laughed and told you everyone must grow up one day.

That wasn't what you think you meant, but she didn't get it. You continued to grow up, and the wrongness never went away.

You eventually stopped looking in the mirror.

It was almost a relief when they found the cancer a few years later. At least then you knew for certain there was something wrong with your body.
This lady got cancer?!? Can someone give Ophale a break?!?
"Y-yeah, but—"

"Listen, Harry," Jean-Luc interrupted, "I hate to say this, but you're being selfish. You can't agree to help us with this after your sister spent our life savings on your treatment?"

"I-I'm sorry. I'm grateful, really, but—"

"Harry, don't do it for me," Gwen said, so soft and reasonable, "Do it for Ophélie. I don't want her to have the life I did growing up."

You had squeezed your eyes shut. Yeah, you did kind of rob Ophélie of stability, huh? But . . .
Oh. Man, I hate Gwen. So much of a control freak.

As a reader, I understand that she was traumatized and extremely affected by the poverty, which is why she acts like that.

As a human with base instincts, I'd like her to die.
Except he was wrong. Everyone noticed. Everyone.
Bruh. Bitterman. Why must you capture the feeling of being an outsider so well. Why must you hurt me like this.
He gurgles something, and you go to punch him, but Gwen creates a whip of fire and wraps in around your wrist. She yanks you off him, searing your arm, and stands over you with a flaming ax in her other hand.

"It's over, Harrier!"

"My name is Opale!"
You go, girl!
". . . Foxglove. Foxglove was there too."

Abigail tilted her head, confused. "The pollen lady, right? Causes hallucinations? Puts people to sleep and gives them good dreams so they don't want to wake up?"
Well. That's one way of cracking an egg.
"No, it was perfect. It felt right. It felt like . . . me."

"Oh. Oh!" Abigail's eyes widened in understanding.

"Abs, I think I'm a woman," you swallow the saliva in your mouth and speak quickly before you lose your courage. "I've had dreams like this before. They're . . . they're always nice, but this time it was so vivid. I-I've thought maybe that's what's been wrong with me, but now I know for sure. When I was dreaming, when I was her, for the first time in my life I felt right. It was like I was finally free."

You're crying. Even now, you can still feel the euphoria.

"Please don't leave me," you beg, "I know you've always wanted the suburban life—lots of kids, white-picket fence, husband coming home from work everyday. I know I'm not that, but I can't be. I can't go back anymore. I'll die. If I have to keep pretending it will kill me—"

"Snowdrop, Snowdrop, Snowdrop," Abigail lightly bops you on the forehead and then kisses it, "You're being silly. That's not what I want anymore. You're what I want. And I want you to be happy. I love you."

The rest of the night was the best night of your life. Neither of you went back to sleep. You just . . . stayed up all night talking. About you. About how you've felt your whole life, and about your future together. You even found your real name: Opale. It was more happiness than you had ever felt before, and you wound up sobbing again and begging Abigail to marry you while dripping snot all over her shirt.

It was very kind of her to give you a do-over.
Abigail is incredibly awesome for that. She completely deserved a happy life with Opale.

Also, @Bitterman, does Opale (the name) mean anything specific in French.
So you and Abigail made plans, imagined a future together, and you steeled yourself to pretend just a little longer. You could do it—there was one person who you could be yourself with, one person who loved who you really were. With Abigail, you could hold on just a little longer and then you could be you. Everything would finally be right.

Then the Leviathan began to move. And your life descended into hell.
Oh. That hurts to hear… a lot. God, whoever woke up the Leviathan's gotta pay.
"Can you, honestly, look me in the eye and say that you would have let me come out and live as myself if I had told you I was a woman? Can you?"

Gwen pales. You both know she can't.

"Y-you," she says, stumbling over your words, "You truly want to make me out to be a villain because I would not have indulged your . . . your . . . sexual perversion?"
Man, fuck you!

If we ever recruit Shelley, Fran, or Akemi, I do have an idea for an Omake now tho.
Oh, fuck that, boooo! Booooooooooooo! It sucks ass that you're on my team, fire-lady," Blue Skies shouts, "Hey, dudette, I support your journey of self-discovery even if I kinda have to try to murder you . . .sorry . . ."

"It's alright," you say, "And, hey, for what it's worth, I'm sorry too."

"Ah, no worries, girl! Wait, for what?"

"For doing this."
Blue Skies is very cool for that. Shame that he got concussed right afterwards.
You give her a sad smile and say, gently, "That's not my name."

"Quite right, darling."

Before Gwen can decapitate you, arm whips out and strikes her in the chest. The blow is followed by a flash of lighting that blinds you and burns Gwen. Gwen turns, even anger, only to have her attacker grab her head and shatter her nose with a knee to the face. Light flashes again and lighting burns appear all over Gwen's skin.

Lady Leizi turns to you, her coat turned into a makeshift sling on one arm, and gives you a smile.
She's here!!!
Why save you? Why fight Powers for you? Why do they care about you more than your family?

"Why?" Lady Leizi says, "What a curious question. You're a hero, Opale. And Justice Unlimited doesn't leave heroes behind. Now, let's be rid of here."
When we're not from her perspective, Lady Leizhi somehow seems even more confident. She's really internalized "you can be more."
Why does he keep punching your core? That's like, the least punchable part of you! It's kind of a good thing to be honest—it's allowed you to conserve what's left of your construct-body.
Either Scarlet Maturity is stupid (unlikely) or he's trying to devour Black Swan without realizing exactly what he's trying to devour.
". . . my pants?"

"Yeah, I just noticed they haven't even torn yet! And we've been blowing lots of stuff up. What are they made of?"

". . . it's a carbon-fiber nanoweave," he admits, "I custom order them from Allard-Kelso Industries. It's the same material they use in some of their spacecraft."

"Whoa! Space-pants!"

"It truly irritates me how likable you are."
Scarlet Maturity: Why are you such a main character?!?
 
Finally got around to reading. Man, fuck Gwen and Jean-Luc. Even Blue Skies looked at them like "what the hell, not cool". Before this arc, I was considering how those two are gonna end up; maybe the good result has Opale convincing those two to drop the ambush after being defeated and they disband in a more formal manner. Apparently that's too optimistic. Knowing more and more about what Opale and Ophelie had been through under them has me be "you know what, you two are fine being where you are now. Endlessly addicted to Lethal Anondyne's drugs, forever blind to one's own folly".

[X] . . . go through. You have a hyper-dense core. You have enough juice for one light speed dash. Can he survive a direct hit at relativistic speeds? Let's find out.

As convenient as regen would be for future missions, this feels cooler and respects Scarlet Maturity enough to tackle him head-on. Also Sufficient Velocity.
 
Finally got around to reading. Man, fuck Gwen and Jean-Luc. Even Blue Skies looked at them like "what the hell, not cool". Before this arc, I was considering how those two are gonna end up; maybe the good result has Opale convincing those two to drop the ambush after being defeated and they disband in a more formal manner. Apparently that's too optimistic. Knowing more and more about what Opale and Ophelie had been through under them has me be "you know what, you two are fine being where you are now. Endlessly addicted to Lethal Anondyne's drugs, forever blind to one's own folly".
We probably do want to capture them, if only so Powers don't have access to them.
 
Man, Opale is going to have a lot to catch up on when she fully joins.

Firstly, Dr. Ibis is alive, and the rumors around his death aren't real.

The she's going to have to explain the situation to Chaucer, who was going to be the best man at her wedding.

Rhys might also have words as someone who lost a member of Slayers he was romantically involved with to the Leviathan.

And then there's explaining Project Prometheus, Mona and Rhys's status as new heroes, Maddie's Petit Prince situation, the alliance with Wolong...
 
[X] . . . go through. You have a hyper-dense core. You have enough juice for one light speed dash. Can he survive a direct hit at relativistic speeds? Let's find out.

Let's do it to it!


We probably do want to capture them, if only so Powers don't have access to them.

Nah, we should totes kill em to get that tasty DNA! We'll put it to way better use than then!

Plus considering the whole "lethal withdrawal" thing, their days are numbered anyways.
 
Unfortunately, it's too late for that. I mean, Ete and Printemps already signed contracts with Faust, and another one to have their powers upgraded. At this point, the only we could ensure Powers doesn't have access to them would be to kill them.
Depends on the limits of Powers' teleporter, I think. We could imprison them, but just knowing "they're in our prison" might be enough to 'port them out (and worse, port someone in for an attack).

Theoretically the new Wonderland might be able to block their teleporter? But again that risks someone porting into Wonderland. And it's not built yet anyway.
 
Depends on the limits of Powers' teleporter, I think. We could imprison them, but just knowing "they're in our prison" might be enough to 'port them out (and worse, port someone in for an attack).

Theoretically the new Wonderland might be able to block their teleporter? But again that risks someone porting into Wonderland. And it's not built yet anyway.
I was actually referring more to the fact that Faust has used Lethal Anodyne's serums on the two, and we don't know if Mendicant can cure them of the resulting addiction. If we can't cure them, then really, our only two choices are killing the two (either personally or from the addiction withdrawal) and letting them go back to Faust.
 
Adhoc vote count started by Bitterman on Sep 10, 2024 at 3:39 PM, finished with 171 posts and 49 votes.


Two hour warning!

And nearly 50 votes? I didn't realize that many people read this quest!
 
Can Hiver use the barriers as platforms to run in the air as a pseudo flight?

Can she have them extend or move with her, or are they static unless dismissed?

I'm thinking of Gwen Tennyson in Alien Force and her "101 Uses For Pink Glass" fighting style for inspiration for tactics.
 
Adhoc vote count started by Bitterman on Sep 10, 2024 at 3:39 PM, finished with 171 posts and 49 votes.


Two hour warning!

And nearly 50 votes? I didn't realize that many people read this quest!
If you go to the first page of the thread, the box at the top has the number of people 'watching' the thread (currently 188) and the number of recent readers (216). Generally, you'll get a lot more people silently reading a story or quest than you will people who actively post in it. It takes less effort to just read something than to leave feedback; people who are only posting to make a vote are somewhere between those two.

The votes that tend to get the most people to vote are simple votes with high stakes. But you don't want every vote to be like that, so you'll usually only have the more active users participating in most votes.
 
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