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Chapter Four
Pound the Table
Chapter Four


My alarm clock went off at five in the morning. It was an absolutely miserable hour, an hour earlier than I was used to waking up, but today was going to be so busy that I needed the extra time.

I slapped the top of my alarm clock to shut the damn thing up, then pulled the blankets off. A simple motion shucked my nightgown, and I padded into the bathroom to turn on and step into the shower. (I barely remembered my shower cap—I'd washed my hair yesterday, I did not want to go through the hassle of drying it today too!)

While in the shower, I let my mind wander, thinking over the agenda for the day. I'd need to pick up Matthew at the firm, and get one of the firm's company cars. Much as I hated driving in New York City, there was enough to acquire that carrying it was not an option. My Polaroid and any replacement film I'd need to carry was bulky enough, and that was before we got to the possibility of acquiring actual, physical evidence. I wanted a few things from that alleyway if they were still there, just to demonstrate the level of control St. John had over his powers. So flammable materials that were barely burnt, for example.

I'd also need to get his hospital records, and would need to bring my tape recorder and a few blank tapes for interviewing the ER attending physician and any nurses… actually I may need the tape recorder for my conversation with the parents too. That wasn't anything that needed turning over to the other side, but it would still be good to have so I can refer back to it.

I shut the shower off, letting the water run down my body before reaching for a towel and continuing my morning routine.

What about safety? I asked myself. I'd be on the streets of Brooklyn with nobody other than a blind man (an admittedly well-trained one) for company, in a location that likely had some measure of criminal activity. I was small, not even five feet tall; it wouldn't take more than one hit to completely incapacitate me, and that's even if I saw it coming.

My thoughts drifted to the tools I had available to me: pepper spray, my powers — my magic. The magic I couldn't use properly without a focus.

A focus, of which I had four, all sitting on a shelf in my closet, collecting dust. And this because I'd been told that if I kept using them the way I had been, I would forever be limiting my capacity to shape and focus my abilities in the mystic arts.

There were times I wanted to slap the man who gave me that advice. But the point was that he was correct: my skill with magic had grown by leaps and bounds, even though my strength had stalled out, and progressed at a glacial pace. It was a trade off, to be sure.

But right now, it was a choice to make: carry a rolling pin-sized object in my briefcase, or just hope I didn't run into a situation such that I'd need to spend twenty seconds gathering magic, then refracting and guiding light into a laser?

There was, of course, another option.

I was a small, fragile, relatively-wealthy white woman, accompanied by a young, disabled white man. If anything happened to us, anything at all, the police would be on top of it in… well, a New York minute. Just the possibility of that kind of disproportionate police response should discourage criminal attention.

I could trust that if something happened to me, law enforcement would rush to my defense.

Hmm…

Well, actually?

As my current case had already shown, this was only true for as long as they didn't know I was a mutant. Because if there was one thing that galvanized police against you more than being a "dangerous" minority, it was being a dangerous minority.

And yes. There was a difference.



"Remind me to never get into a car with you behind the wheel," Matt said as he exited the car, letting his feet rest flat on the pavement as he gripped his cane like a lifeline. "Stop and go and stop and go, thought I was gonna be sick."

"Don't be such a drama queen," I said, stepping around the front of the car.

Have you ever tried to drive in New York City? Because believe me, there are better purgatories to suffer through on your way to better things. Every time you think you can move forward – a cab swerves into the lane, honking all the while. You're crossing the street? No you're not, the pedestrian is. And don't even think about trying to take a left turn, just suffer through three rights. It's easier on your blood pressure.

But don't forget about the last part of the trip: finding parking. It was a minor miracle that I managed to find a parking spot as close to our destination as I did. Though even that was debatable, because I'd been circling the block for fifteen minutes, and still had a meter to pay.

And all of this before we think about the car itself: a too-big, too-boxy sedan more than twice the size of my own car.

"I'm sorry you didn't like the ride over, but this car wasn't made for people as short as I am. Do you have any idea how much of a pain in the butt it is to try and reach the pedals in these Lincolns?"

"No," Matt said with a knowing smile. I rolled my eyes and led on, knowing he could follow my footsteps, and not wanting to linger on the humorous oops I'd made. Instead, the two of us walked two blocks, and arrived at our destination.

The alleyway we needed was between two old apartment buildings, which I instantly placed as primarily Section 8 housing by the scarcity of window AC units and the poor quality of what few remained. The alley between them was utterly disgusting, littered with cigarette butts, discarded fast food containers, empty bottles and cans, and more soiled diapers than I was comfortable smelling in one place. It was wide enough for three people to walk shoulder-to-shoulder, and that was after you accounted for the dumpsters lined up along the wall.

Most striking, though, was the identical pair of deep black scorch marks on either side of the alley, starting at roughly a third of the way in and flaring back towards the center. The way that you could draw an almost perfect straight line up at one spot was telling me things, but I'd need to know more before I drew any conclusions.

"Smell anything burnt?" I asked Matt. "I know it's been a week, but if we can find anything scorched during the initial altercation, it could help." In the meanwhile I took out my Polaroid and started taking pictures of the alley from every angle, and was especially careful to get good pictures of the scorch marks on the walls.

"All I'm getting from this is diaper, mold, and cigarette," Matt admitted, one hand up over his nose and mouth. I reached into my bag and pulled out a handkerchief, which I handed to him. "Thank you – God, it smells rancid here."

"Welcome to New York in May," I said. It had been raining every single day last week, for at least thirty minutes at a time. It was pretty regular for the month, but it also made our lives significantly more difficult.

Once I had the pictures I wanted, I pulled and put on a pair of latex gloves, followed by an umbrella and trash bag. The trash bag went over the umbrella before I used it to poke at the contents of the dumpsters, searching for whatever was a little lower in the bins. Mildew, mold, and other muck was most of what awaited… but I did find something. With the hand that wasn't holding an umbrella, I held up my Polaroid to get a picture. Then, the Polaroid hanging by a strap around my neck, I reached in to grab what I saw.

It was a magazine with just its cover burnt black, and save for a bit of darkening on the first page, the rest of it was completely untouched. Moreover, it had been underneath several pizza takeout boxes that had, themselves, been filled with used napkins, which all soaked up enough of the rain from the past week that the magazine was almost completely dry.

Once I had the magazine out from the dumpster, I took another few pictures of it with my Polaroid, then retrieved a ziploc bag (thank goodness those were already around, I don't know what I would have done without them) and stored it away inside. A quick label went on the bag so I could write in what it was, where and when it was found, and by whom, then I put it away into my bag.

"Anything on your end?" I asked Matt.

"Nothing," he said. "Rain washed away most of the blood I could've smelled, and everything else here is just making it worse."

"Hmm…"

I turned around to look from the alleyway to the street, the one that the hooligans had followed St. John from, and then ran back out into after his display of pyrotechnics. Specifically, I looked across to the construction site, covered up by tarps, and still drying out from the past week.

"John said that the four thugs who attacked him ran back out this street," I said, walking out of the alley. Matt, smart cookie that he was, took the hint and followed me. "What do you wager that if they had anything, they tossed it in the construction site over here? Like, say, a bloody beer bottle?"

"Good odds," he said.

The two of us walked across the street to the construction site, eyeing it. There was a relatively short fence set fifteen feet back from the street. It stood about six and a half feet high, separating the general public from the pit dug for the building's foundations. The fence was a flimsy thing though, just chain-link supported by a measly three posts. If somebody came careening into this thing, they'd probably knock it over in a heartbeat and… fall in.

I frowned. Neither the prosecution nor the judge had offered any indications about the nature of the injuries St. John's 'victim' had suffered.

Matt walked up and ran his cane along the fencepost, listening to something I couldn't quite pick up.

"There's a whole bunch of stuff down there," he said. "Lots of metal and plastic, but… there's only one thing made of glass. You don't think...?" He didn't finish the question, instead letting it hang in the air.

"It's worth a shot," I said. I found a payphone on the street and called the number listed on the sign in front of the lot, the construction company's number. Thirty minutes later the contractor arrived, let us in, and we found exactly what we were looking for, which I photographed, bagged, and tagged.

After which, I found myself on the payphone again, calling my boss.

"Prosecution made their disclosure," Lieberman told me once his secretary transferred the call. "Please tell me you found something you can use out there."

"Maybe, but I won't know for sure until I can get it looked at," I told him. "Can you have Antonia make a few copies of the prosecution's records, two for me, one for a box I can take to the printer's to get in braille?"

Even as I spoke into the payphone, I kept my eyes squarely along the street in front of me. A few people were milling along the street, staring at the two of us. That wasn't altogether surprising; people in suits didn't tend to wander down Brooklyn alleyways, let alone walk out with Polaroids, or carrying bloodstained beer bottles in plastic bags.

"What else do you have to do today?" Lieberman asked, his voice tinny on the payphone's speaker.

"Uh… I need to talk to the parents, bring them with me to the hospital so I can get the client's ER records. Talk to the ER doc and any nurses." I sighed, rubbing a hand over my forehead. "I need to see the alleged victims' medical records after this. Also when I say I found something, I mean I found some evidence that was hopefully missed, but most likely never looked for it beyond the alleyway. Took a Polaroid, signed and dated it, bagged the evidence."

"Given it was raining all last week? Probably didn't look very far. Regardless, get that down to the courthouse for disclosure as soon as you've gotten it worked up, along with any report you get," Lieberman told me, his tone growing firm and commanding. "Trust me, if that isn't there by the end of the week, Young will try to get you infracted for a Rule 16 violation. In the meantime, I'll get those documents to the printer for a copy for Murdock, get those and a photocopy in your office. I also called ahead to your building's doorman, he'll bring another set up to your condo."

"That's... wow," I said, for lack of anything else to really add. I had to wonder how much work he was putting off on his own cases just to help me out… and how long he'd hold this over my head afterwards. "Thank you, sir."

"You owe me for this one, Schaefer, and believe me when I say I will eventually be calling this favor due. Now get to it."

The phone clicked.

"Well that answers that," I said to myself, then nudged Matt with a shoulder. "Come on. The Allerdyces live a few blocks away."

"I'm not looking forward to this talk," Matt said, but fell into step beside me anyway.

"This isn't even the long talk," I told him. "This is just a preliminary follow-up. Outlining what we're doing, what we need from them, and bringing them with us so we can get our clients records with fewer hoops to jump through. Patients and parents of minor patients can request their records and get them a lot more quickly than if we'd filed a record request."

"How much slower are they normally?" Matt asked.

"Hang a left here." I took the inside track of the turn, though I had to skip around a step to avoid a smushed, half-eaten pizza slice on the sidewalk. Days like these, when I had to go on-site while building a case? They made me glad I kept a pair of flats handy. "As for how much slower? Procedure gives them two weeks to produce the records on their own with just a faxed request form. But if they don't send them to you, and most don't, then you need the judge to subpoena the records, and then wait up to another two weeks."

"And we can't spare four weeks on this, can we?"

"No, we cannot." And I was already outlining my official complaint to the state judiciary for that scheduling choice.



"Take a form and fill out your info then bring it back up here, and we'll see you as soon as possible," the nurse at the ER desk, a middle-aged hispanic woman, said, not even bothering to look up from her paperwork.

I looked to my side and offered both Matt and the Allerdyces a knowing look, then pulled a folder out of my briefcase and slid it in front of the orderly.

"My clients are here to retrieve copies of their son's medical records in connection with an ongoing court case," I told the nurse, who finally deigned to look up from her own paperwork. "All appropriate release and request forms are in the folder. Additionally, I need to speak to the on-call or attending who saw my client on the date listed on the form."

Once the nurse flipped open the folder to reveal legal-length paper, I knew she would do what I'd asked of her with no complaints. A lot of people get intimidated when the paper put before them isn't a regular 8.5x11, even more so when it has legal letterhead with an address on Central Park West. Sure enough, she stood up from her chair and went into the back, at which point I started a mental countdown. I estimated… five minutes.

"So what happens now?" Jonathan Allerdyce asked. I turned to look up at him, and had to suppress a frown at the deep bags that sat under his eyes. Yesterday's events clearly weighed heavily upon both him and Linda, but at least she had cosmetics to help hide it. He had no such recourse, and his exhaustion lined his face with heavy crevasses.

"A little bit of divide and conquer. Mr. Murdock will accompany the two of you to the hospital administration, who will furnish you with a copy of your son's records. At the same time, I'll be interviewing the doctor who stitched up your son."

"Are we not supposed to be there?" Linda Allerdyce asked, the Australian in her accent heavier than it had been yesterday.

"Not for a first interview, no," I responded. "I want to talk to the doctor when he's just speaking to another professional, somebody without a personal connection to the patient."

"But what about—"

"Mr. and Mrs. Allerdyce?" The nurse came out from the back. She wasn't alone though: a caucasian man in his 40's, wearing a doctor's white coat over scrubs, followed her out.

"Yes?" Jonathan asked.

"This is Dr. Harry Michaelson, he was the attending who saw to your son the other day."

"Dr. Michaelson," I said, taking the initiative while the opportunity presented itself. "My name is Noa Schaefer, an attorney representing your patient St. John Allerdyce. Would you mind if we retreated to an office for a brief interview, while the nurse accompanies my colleague and client's parents to retrieve a copy of his records?"

There was a brief moment of silence as everybody looked at each other. Once again, I was treated to the reality that nobody expects the petite blonde waif to speak as though she's in charge, but the way I spoke brooked no argument.

"O-of course," the doctor said, recovering first. "Nurse Mendoza, could you take these three to the records room?" His eyes flicked down to my left hand, and frowned when he saw no ring. "If you could follow me, Miss?"

"Meet back up just outside afterwards," I told Matt and the Allerdyces. I very deliberately did not say anything about the doctor's mode of address for me, and instead followed him through the hospital. He moved quite a bit faster than he should have been with somebody following him, holding a pace more akin to if he was doing his rounds than leading somebody, and there were a few times where I had to break into a light jog to keep up.

And unfortunately, because I was presenting myself to the public, I'd had to switch my flats back out for a pair of heels.

When we arrived at the office, my feet hurt, and I probably had a new blister or two. But I ruthlessly suppressed any indignation, instead keeping my expression carefully neutral as the doctor closed the door behind me and sat down.

"So, how does this work?" Dr. Michaelson asked, browsing a file cabinet beside his desk. "Allerdyce, Allerdyce… Allerdyce, St. John, there it is." He pulled out his copy of my client's chart, and set it on the desk in front of him.

"If you would give me a moment…" I pulled out one of the two chairs opposite his desk, and set my briefcase down on the other. From my briefcase I retrieved a tape recorder, a legal pad, and several pens. "The way this works is that I interview you about when you saw my client, you describe for me the nature of his wounds, and answer any questions I need. Keep in mind opposing counsel may contact you as well in the coming weeks, and you will be subpoena'd to appear in court on…" I checked my planner. "Make sure you're not busy the week of July 17, you will likely be called to testify."

"What if I can't come into court that day?"

I just gave the doctor a look.

"You could have been elbow deep in a patient's abdominal cavity for twenty hours prior to the trial, and the judge, especially this judge, would still put you in jail for contempt of court," I told him.

"... oh." Seeing a forty-year-old man look almost exactly like a chastised grade schooler would likely be the highlight of my entire month.

I offered him a small smile, then pressed the record button.

"This is Noa Schaefer, defense counsel for St. John Allerdyce, conducting an interview with Dr. Harry Michaelson, at the Brooklyn Hospital Center Emergency Room."

I rattled off a few more perfunctory bits of information: date, time, date of the incident in question, and then got to business.

"Dr. Michaelson, in what condition did Mr. Allerdyce arrive at the emergency room?"

Immediately after I asked the question, Dr. Michaelson's bearing shifted: he sat up straight, shoulders back, head looking straight to the chart on his desk. He flipped to the front of the chart, read it for fifteen seconds or so, then began to speak.

"St. John Allerdyce presented with a moderately large laceration to the left temple. The wound was bleeding severely, and he was brought back immediately. Given the location of the wound, I assessed whether or not he'd received a concussion. Pupillary reflex was normal, he was able to follow my finger, and patient was awake, aware, and alert. I determined the likelihood of a concussion was minimal, but told his parents to keep him home from school for the next two days, and bring him back immediately if anything changed."

"What course of treatment did you follow?" I asked.

"We applied pressure to staunch the bleeding, then cleaned the area with sterile water. Afterwards, I applied topical anesthetic, followed by local anesthetic, and sutured the wound shut before applying gauze and bandages. We have a photograph of how his wound looked immediately after cleaning in his chart, you should be receiving a copy of it with his other records," Dr. Michaelson explained.

"How many stitches did his wound need?" I wrote a note to myself on my legal pad; a picture of the wound when it happened would go well with the one I took in the courthouse yesterday.

"Mr. Allerdyce's wound could have been closed with anywhere between nine and twelve sutures," the doctor said. "Given that the patient is a young teenage male, I erred on the side of caution and used twelve sutures."

"Was there anything else that comes to mind with regards to the hospital visit itself?" I asked.

"Nothing in particular, no," he told me. "Mr. Allerdyce had a follow-up with me three days later, at which point I noted that the wound was healing up well, and the sutures would dissolve on their own in two weeks' time."

I blinked at that; I didn't think self-dissolving sutures were a thing yet, but I was rather glad to be mistaken. It meant that I didn't have to worry about a particular shoddy juvie doctor botching the removal of St. John's stitches, at the very least.

"Very well then." I reached into my bag again. "At this point, I would like to ask you some questions that are more speculative in nature, Dr. Michaelson."

"Of course," he said, though he kept the chart flipped open. "Fire away."

"Regarding the positioning of the wound, could you comment on what kind of blow would be needed to cause that kind of damage?"

"From what I've seen here in the ER, you'd need a relatively hard object, swung directly at the head." He flipped through the chart to show me the initial picture of St. John's injury. "You can look at the edges of the wound to tell that this was caused by a rounded object, as opposed to a sharp one, so the skin was torn more than cut. For a wound this size, I would say that Mr. Allerdyce is actually quite lucky."

"How so?" I asked.

"The location of the wound tells me he was struck approximately an inch and a half above the outside of his left eye, and so the blow landed, essentially, on the far outside of his forehead. If whatever struck him had hit an inch and a half further back, it would have struck him in the temple, which is a much thinner part of the skull." Dr. Michaelson brought up a finger to his own face, and used that to demonstrate the positions he was talking about.

"What kind of injury would have resulted if that had been the case?"

Dr. Michaelson exhaled sharply, his hands coming up before he let them flop on the desk. "Kid would probably have never left that alleyway," he said. "You said you're a defense attorney?" he asked.

"That's correct," I said, arching an eyebrow at him.

"So I'm guessing you're defending him cause he fought back, and hurt his attacker." I nodded. "If this had landed on his temple, you wouldn't be working for him, because he'd either be dead, braindead, or beaten black and blue by whoever hit him in the first place."

"One last thing for this interview." I reached into my bag and produced a Polaroid photo of the glass bottle Matt and I found in the construction site, the one that still had traces of a dried, crusty, red-brown substance on it. "Would this have been sufficient for causing the wound you saw on Mr. Allerdyce?"

"Let me see that?" I handed him the photo, and Dr. Michaelson flipped back through the chart, comparing the image I handed him with the one in St. John's chart. "I can't be one hundred percent certain, but I would be willing to say that yes, this could cause an injury of that scope."

"Understood." I reached over and stopped the recording. "Dr. Michaelson, thank you very much for your time. And I do apologize in advance that I will have to call you away from your work at least three times in the next two months."

"I may not like it, but you're just doing your job," he said with a shrug, closing the chart on his desk. "I have to ask though, how did the kid manage to defend himself? He never told me that part."

Uh-oh.

"I'm afraid I'm not at liberty to divulge that information at this point in time," I said, working my way around the issue. "Not until I've had the time to review the prosecutor's interviews and compare what they say with what Mr. Allerdyce said.

"You think your client's lying?" Dr. Michaelson frowned and leaned back in his chair, crossing his arms over his chest.

"Doctor, until we get them under oath, and sometimes even then, somebody is always lying," I told him as I gathered my things and stood, smoothing out my skirt. "The hard part is finding out who, and why."



By the time Matt and I got done at the hospital and made it back into Manhattan, it was already past noon. I treated him to lunch, retrieved his braille copy of the documents the prosecution handed over to us (bound into a pair of large binders, which thankfully fit into his backpack), and had him take them home.

"I want you to form what conclusions you can on your own time," I told him. "If I'm in the room when you review this, you're going to ask me my opinion, or what I'm getting from this. I want you to read over the interviews, compare that with what we have and what we know, and form a theory of the case. Put together a series of events, determine who is at fault, and then I want you to think about how you prove that your series of events is correct."

Then I sent him home. I gave him thirty dollars to treat himself to both dinner and breakfast on the firm's dime, deliberately ignoring his protests that this was too much, called a limousine company that the firm used daily, and had them drop him off back at his apartment in Hell's Kitchen.

And then I was alone in my office. I locked the door, pulled a cassette player from my bottom desk drawer, put a Rolling Stones cassette in, and pressed play.

Then I rewound the tape a bit, because you don't start in the middle of Paint it Black.

Once I had some background music, I opened up the box on my desk, and got to work.



The first thing I went for was the interviews with the four thugs that jumped St. John. All of them were… remarkably consistent: all four of them claimed they saw him go into the convenience store, take a soda, and leave without paying. Their testimony went on to say they chose to confront St. John because of this, and when they stopped him in the alleyway, he used his powers to throw fire at them like a flamethrower.

The four say they ran, and one of them, a Mick Samuelson, allegedly got tagged by a gout of flame and tried to shuck off his now-on-fire… shoes? Shorts? Mick himself just said clothes, but he was the one allegedly on fire; it was the other three who only now decided that they couldn't agree on anything.

It was while the alleged victim was removing these clothes, he claimed, that he fell into the construction site, landed badly, and broke his leg in three places.

I compared the photographs taken, both the ones I had with my little Polaroid and the copies the prosecution sent over. I looked over the medical records of the assailants. I checked what was described with what I knew of the area, and rebuilt the alleyway and street as best I could with just my office and some Polaroid photos.

I played out the events, both in my mind and in pantomime, trying to determine what this meant for my approach – a plea deal was off the table for the moment, but maybe during the course of the trial…

I stood in St. John Allerdyce's shoes. I cast my mind back to the alleyway – his anxiety and fear, then pain, then the need to fight. I considered the outburst he had, the control he'd displayed, how he must have been feeling. I let myself take Mick Samuelson's testimony at face value, allowed him the benefit of the doubt, and played out the events again, this time from the opposite angle. I compared the two, trying to see which one made more sense, which one had more proof behind it, then tried to see how I'd go about showing that.

And through it all, I came to one inescapable conclusion.

By the time I was done, my office was in a state of disarray. A run down to the supply room yielded yarn, post-its, paper, and a white board, all of which I'd managed to spread around the space in a haphazard arrangement that only really made sense to me. Six more cassette tapes had joined the first, an array of Beatles, Duran Duran, Van Halen, and Metallica, all of which spoke to what I was thinking at the time, how I'd been thinking. Reaching under my desk to swap my flats out with my heels, I groused at just how long it would take to get my office presentable again. But that was something for later.

I gathered up only what I needed, went up the elevator, and walked straight into Sam Lieberman's office.

"Well?" he asked.

I didn't actually have to say anything. I just slid my notepad and the documents I received from the prosecution across the desk, spreading them out the way I knew he liked to arrange his own case documents. Then I just pulled a chair out from his desk, crossed one leg over the other, and waited.

Thirty minutes passed. For thirty minutes, I was treated to my boss taking in the facts, putting them together, identifying inconsistencies, and building a narrative. All of this played out in the furrow of his brow, the tension of his jaw and neck, the pitch of his breathing, and the pressure of his fingers on the page.

After those thirty minutes, Lieberman stood up from his chair and walked over to the floor-to-ceiling window behind his desk, staring out over Central Park.

"You think you can win."

It wasn't a question. My boss was making a statement. He'd been my boss for most of a decade now; he knew exactly how confident I must have been to bring this information upstairs.

"This is the most open-and-shut self-defense case I have seen in a very long time," I told him, standing and walking around the desk to rest beside him. "I've never seen an easier source of reasonable doubt. We have detailed information about the scene of the crime. We know exactly what was done, and by whom. We know who went where. We have both the victim's and our client's medical records. We even found an improvised weapon at the scene with dried blood on it. And I would bet good money that we find the alleged victim's fingerprints on it."

"What about witnesses?" Lieberman asked.

"I'm already drawing up a motion in limine against two of the alleged victims under rule 403," I told him. "The ER doctor has already agreed to testify on behalf of the client, so I should only need the subpoena to make the hospital play ball on his schedule. The parents also suggested several candidates for character witnesses, friends of the client who already know about his power, and can attest to how he uses his power in ordinary circumstances; that said, I'll have to get a similar list from the client, and look into any discrepancies. I'll interview them to decide which and how many I want, but past experience tells me one, maybe two at most." A flock of birds flew out of the trees in Central Park, turning to wing their way off the island of Manhattan. "It's going to depend on how hard Lou Young and Judge Andrews make getting the testimony across."

"And the jury," he reminded me.

"And the jury," I agreed with a sigh.


This chapter was mostly a plot vehicle. Next chapter should have a few more interesting events, and character beats, I promise.
 
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Loving it! I really enjoyed the interview with the doctor, and the investigation of the crime scene. Well-written, I could see everything happening, and put together some of the pieces myself. Looking forward to more!
 
Takes a deep breath*

Okay... so... a few things. This might be, "the most open and shut" self defense case the MC has seen in a long time, but there are still several factors that I can completely derail their chances. The first factor that comes to mind is that, the kid is still a mutant. Which most people in the Marvel universe despise. Probably at least half of the Jury is going to try to throw him in jail for that fact alone.

The second factor that could derail their chances in this fight is Magneto, or just outside interference in general. If another mutant gets arrested then that will probably sour the jury towards the kid.

The third is the family and the kid himself. The little family was shaken extremely badly from their first call to court, and as far as I can tell from the chapter, Noa hasn't reassured them at all. Noa left them to go talk to the doctor, leaving them with Matt, you know, the blind kid, to go and get their child's medical records. From the way the chapter skipped over the rest of the hospital visit and the way that St. John's father never got to finish his question... I have a feeling that the small family is probably getting really stressed out... and people have a tendency to make bad decisions and have terrible ideas when they are stressed out...

I'm looking forward to the next chapter, have a wonderful day, and may you always be inspired!
 
The thing that stands out to me is the claim that the alleged victim ran into the construction and/whilst removing burning clothing. The bottle was found in the site, which means he carried the bottle there, meaning that despite desperately removing burning clothing he still had a hand free to carry the assault weapon. It's not a smoking gun, but it is a discrepancy that could be used to reveal an attempt at perjury by the alleged victim if tries to dissemble about the weapon.
 
I just finished taking Evidence so this is a really cool story to read.
Seeing all the pieces fit together. Expert testimony, rules, everything.
Thanks for writing this story!
 
I just finished taking Evidence so this is a really cool story to read.
Seeing all the pieces fit together. Expert testimony, rules, everything.
Thanks for writing this story!
I will also recommend you take administrative law, just to have that out of the way. Also trusts & estates.

Just, when you're picking classes, make sure to get at least one course that's on the bar exam per semester. Less to learn from scratch during bar review.

Noa: I can win this.
Judge: Hates her
DA: Anti-Mutant
Society: 'No More Mutants!'
Noa: …I might win this.
Basically, this.
 
I have to say as a practicing attorney, I love the way that you make all the facts and evidence line up perfectly, and yet the trial outcome is still in doubt. Feels very realistic, even if the more common outcome is that the facts and evidence don't line up to just one narrative.
 
I've been playing with the thought of a mutant SI and I think your work is pushing that closer to the forefront. Interested in where you take this.
 
I just want to say I keep thinking back to this story because it is really entertaining and interesting. I'm engaging quite a lot with it and want to see how it goes.
 
Chapter Five
Pound the Table
Chapter Five


[Three Weeks Later]

"Here we are, pastrami on rye!" Two plates slid onto my table: one with a sandwich piled so high with pastrami that I'd have to take off half the meat just so it would fit in my mouth, the other with a few extra slices of rye bread. "I'll be right back with a go bag for whatever leftover you got."

"Thanks again Becka," I told her, sliding two singles across the table to the woman who'd brought my food over, which she slipped into a pocket in her apron in a single practiced movement.

"Just make sure to actually eat this time, you're too skinny, I can see your arm bones! I swear Noa, how you don't freeze in the winter I'll never know." And with that the neighborhood yenta, Rebecca Kaplan, went back behind the counter to annoy her husband. I just smiled to myself and went about setting up my sandwich the way I liked it, glad that for once she hadn't tried to recommend another local "nice Jewish boy". Was it annoying? A bit, sure, but finding a Jewish deli with an attached diner, particularly one that was open at the hours Kaplan's was, had been a godsend for my sanity.

After all, where else could I go at three am on a Thursday to get actually good matzah ball soup with kreplach?

But today wasn't Thursday. Today was Sunday, and I was taking a day off.

It seemed irresponsible of me to not be doing anything while my client sat in juvie, waiting for the day that would determine the course of the rest of his life, didn't it? Well, when I first started out as an attorney, I would have agreed with you. It's very easy to let the job become your life, to let the duty you owe to your clients consume everything else.

This lasts about as long as it takes for you to miss a very obvious argument or piece of evidence that you overlooked because your eyes glazed over, and makes having it pointed out by your supervising attorney just that much more embarrassing.

One of the hardest things to do in the profession is to let yourself take a step back. Yes, your work is incredibly important. Yes, people are counting you. But you can't do your best work if you're firing on all cylinders all day, every day, with no breaks. If you want to stay in peak form, you need to take some time for yourself occasionally. More than that, stepping away for a bit gave you enough time away from whatever you were working on that you can look at it with (relatively) fresh eyes.

And in an internet-free world, there were a hell of a lot more obligatory social activities. Trivia nights, amateur sports leagues, book clubs… and I was getting tired of having to rewind the tapes on my answering machine.

And so it was that I occasionally left my pager at home, told the firm to let any callers know I'd be back in the next day, and gave myself twenty-four hours to myself.

This was that day for me to recharge my batteries, and it was well-earned. A talk with the bodega owner, one Alejandro de Soto, confirmed St. John's account of what happened. Moreover, Mr. de Soto confirmed that the four thugs that jumped my client had a bad reputation in the area, which meant that between him and St. John, I could slip that fact into the record with little to no difficulty.

(I also left the bodega with an amazing cubano, which I genuinely felt guilty about enjoying when I passed by the synagogue on my way back to the office… sorry Rabbi Rivkin.)

Beyond that, the lab we worked with for handling physical evidence finished processing the bottle we found. Sure enough, the dried blood on the bottle was the same blood type as St. John's, and the fingerprints were the victim's. Unfortunately, I had to share the report and hand the bottle over to the prosecution for processing, so I had no idea what changes they would make to Mick Samuelson's testimony based on that bit coming to light.

What I did know is that I would be raking him over the coals for leaving it out of his initial interview. That, and grilling him on where his clothes allegedly got lit on fire; we'd finally received that bit of evidence for ourselves yesterday, and I sent it out for testing.

Waiting on that to come back left me in a bit of a "hurry up and wait" scenario. So, rather than think myself into the ground with six more weeks to trial… I decided a day off was in order.

"And Spider-Man has defeated the Vulture once again!" My gaze shifted to the TV mounted in the corner of the diner, a bulky 10-inch CRT sat on an alcove that looked to have been carved out specifically for it. "Spider-Man, over here! Spider-Man, that device you used to stop Vulture from flying, who did you get it from? Iron Man? Mr. Fantastic?"

I'd thought the hero would just swing away, but much to my surprise, he actually made a picture-perfect landing right next to the reporter, whose lack of flinch made me realize this wasn't an uncommon occurrence. Adding to my surprise was that Spider-Man's suit was red and black, not red and blue.

Wow, I really needed to watch the news more, didn't I?

"Oh, that thing?" Spider-Man shifted, his body language exaggerated, but clearly reading as bashful. "I built that myself actually. It took about three days, little embarrassed about that, but hey! At least it worked!"

"Well I'd say it worked pretty well, the Vulture dropped like a rock!"
The reporter, a pretty little redhead, said this with a titter. Spider-Man, for his part, looked more than a little uncomfortable. "While I have you, anything you'd like to the people of New York?"

"Oh! Uh, well! Stay safe, don't do drugs, go Mets! Alright gotta go bye!"
An instant later Spider-Man was gone, and the report on the Vulture's shenanigans in Harlem continued. But the good-natured booing from almost everyone else in the Manhattan diner remained.

Personally, I thought as I finished the first quarter of my sandwich and flipped open my copy of the Times, I thought he had it right. Let's go Mets.

Captain America Joins Avengers!

I had a feeling this cover story was coming sooner rather than later, but it was still fascinating to read. Though the reporter could absolutely have done without trying to set up a rivalry narrative between the Avengers and Fantastic Four. Really, they couldn't just let the Avengers have their day in the limelight, could they? Seriously, when you can live out the rest of the news cycle in the shadows of the Baxter Building and still wind up with something second- or third-page worthy every day, you can save manufacturing a rivalry for tomorrow's—

"You look like you could use some company."

I looked up from the newspaper to see a familiar man standing beside the booth, an amused expression on his face. More of his hair was silver than when I'd last seen him, which meant I still couldn't tell whether he was dying his hair brown or actually going gray. He slid into the other side of the booth with a mostly-suppressed wince, helping himself to the back half of my Sunday paper.

"Hello again Erik," I said, looking up at him from over the top of my newspaper. "Why yes, take a seat, please. Of course you can have that half of the paper, thank you for asking. Oh, lunch is your treat, you're such a gentleman."

"Ah, Noa," he said with a smile and a put-upon shrug of his shoulders. "Moments like this I wonder why I continue to put up with you." A waitress in the diner came over with a menu, which Erik accepted with a polite thanks. "You've been busy these past few weeks, I see."

"If you came to New York just to bother me, please leave," I told him, reaching for my sandwich. "This is the only day off I've allowed myself in the past three weeks, and if it's all the same to you I'd rather at least try and relax."

"I do need a brief bit of your help again," he said, folding the half of my newspaper he'd claimed and draping it over his right leg. "But I mainly came because it is my turn to do you a favor."

I frowned, and followed his actions. "Right leg?"

"Knee," he confirmed.

I sighed, but reached my hand under the table and beneath the newspaper to rest my hand on his knee, catching the wince on his face when my fingers found their mark. Then, with a deep breath and sharp focus, I pulled at my magic, and let it flow from the center of my being.

Light flowed from my fingertips, hidden from prying eyes by the newspaper, and entwined in strands around Erik's leg before sinking beneath the fabric of his slacks. I let the magic permeate his flesh, allowing it to heal him without trying to control the process. The spell already followed my intent; trying to control the exact course of the sorcery would only weaken the end result, according to the good doctor. So instead, I just allowed it to happen.

And moments later, Erik's knee was good as new. I withdrew my hand and leaned back into the booth, eyes closed, doing my best to ignore the sharp increase in my hunger. Using magic without a focus always took a lot out of me, but it was a lot more flexible and discrete. That, and the current downside was easily mitigated, as I picked up the larger half my pastrami sandwich and tore into it, letting Erik sit in silence as I ate (though he did order a sandwich of his own).

"So what's the excuse this time," I asked once the waitress left to put in his order. "Alpine skiing? Whitewater rafting?"

"Trying to fly through a tornado," he said, his expression totally neutral. I raised an eyebrow at him in as derisive a manner as I knew, to which Erik scowled. "Not my finest moment."

"And somehow all you got from that monumental display of stupidity was a bum knee," I said with a smirk. "Consider yourself lucky."

"More so than you have been of late." This time, it was my turn to scowl. "I do try to pay attention to the news beyond just the first page, Noa."

"Well then I'm not sure what you want me to tell you," I said, fingers circling the rim of my water glass. "I can't tell you what I know you want me to. If I do, that voids the attorney-client privilege. And if that happens… well, suffice to say I can't let that happen." I looked up from my water to look Erik in the eye. "Go ahead and ask. I'll answer what I can, but don't press your luck."

"I wouldn't dream of it," Erik said with a smile.

And so, he began to ask. His sandwich arrived, I bagged mine, and through it all, I kept having to repeat a familiar refrain: "I can't answer that."

For twenty minutes this went on. Twenty minutes of watching the disappointment spread further across Erik's forehead, of having to put a hand on my silverware to keep even the subtle rattle he managed to keep it from becoming audible.

"I don't know what I expected," Erik said, his plate cleaned (and my own leftovers hidden in a takeaway bag on my side of the booth). "But I dare say I expected to get a little more than this."

"You shouldn't have," I scolded. "I am a professional, Erik, and professionals have standards we need to follow. Everything I told you just now, you could have gotten by going down to the courthouse and paying a nominal fee for publicly-available documents."

"And you are certain that—"

"Yes, Erik." I interrupted him immediately, refusing to let him get any further down that line of thought. "Look. I understand why you see things the way you do," I said with a meaningful glance at his left arm.

"Then you must see that I am right." His voice came out in a hiss, low and dangerous.

"I think that you're cynical," I fired back.

"I have always been optimistic about mutantkind's future," Erik said, sitting up straighter in the booth. "Always. Even at the most dismaying of times."

"Then put your money where your mouth is and prove it," I challenged. "Right now, this is my battle to fight. If you want to help, fine. But you play by my rules, not yours." I slid out of the booth and picked up my leftovers and purse. Erik rose with me, instinctively grabbing his hat, as well as both our checks. "Now if you'll excuse me, I have roller derby tonight, and I'd like to enjoy the rest of my one day off for the next two months."



Character evidence is a very tricky thing. In a he-said she-said matter, the jury is going to believe whoever they find to be more trustworthy, and character evidence is one way that you can establish somebody is trustworthy. Normally, I wouldn't even bother with character evidence in support of my client – in a self-defense case, you're allowed to offer reputation or opinion evidence regarding the victim, which can be used to explain why the defendant felt the need to fight back. That wasn't a problem. I didn't have to fight to get that on the record.

The problem here? We had a mutant defendant and a human victim.

At the current time, there existed no binding precedent regarding how a mutant power is to be viewed in the eyes of the law. California, DC, and upstate New York all considered the actual effect of a mutant power before determining whether to class it as a deadly weapon. Meanwhile, multiple states in the south all viewed them as deadly weapons unless the defendant can prove that it was impossible to use as a weapon – such as if somebody's mutation was just the ability to see in other spectrums of light.

These were not binding precedent, however. There were no higher court rulings in the state of New York to give me a definitive answer regarding how you view a mutant power. And worryingly, all of the persuasive precedent argued against St. John.

All of this meant that if we didn't get somebody willing to stand in St. John's corner, then unless I put him on the stand – and believe me, you do not put the defendant on the stand in a case like this except as a last resort – nobody would be able to explain how St. John was most likely to use his powers in any particular circumstance.

So, during a visit with St. John, I asked him if he had any friends who knew he was a mutant, who he had used his power around, and who he thought would be willing to go to bat for him in court.

He gave me a list of twenty names. And after phone calls and preliminary interviews with all twenty of them, I could indeed confirm that yes, each and every one of them would gladly stare down a jury for him. In all fairness? I should've expected this response.

I was, after all, a theater kid myself.

Unfortunately, much as I would love to have twenty witnesses all get up on the stand and explain what kind of person St. John Allerdyce was, and why it was patently ridiculous to assume he'd actively assault somebody… I couldn't do that. Given that I was trying to exclude two of Mick's three fellow thugs under Rule 403, the exact same would be used against me. Knowing this judge, I could get at most two character witnesses, and that was being optimistic.

I wasn't paid to be optimistic. So I gave myself one character witness. And that's where it got hard.

See, the theater crowd is often made up of the misfits, the outcasts, the oddballs, the 'quirky kids' that don't fit in anywhere else. This was based on a number of factors, yes, but the one that worried me the most was appearance. A person's appearance is the first impression the jury gets, and if they thought the witness looked like a misfit or a rascal, there was a real chance my witness's testimony got disregarded entirely. I needed somebody whose appearance wasn't threatening, someone who looked immediately respectable.

So with this in mind, I settled on the one that reminded me of myself: a nice Jewish girl from the Midwest, come to the big city on an opportunity. She came in accompanied by her grandfather, a kind old man who, like Erik, wore long sleeves even on a summer day.

I was very glad I could convince him to stay outside for the mock cross.

"You've only known the defendant for two years," Matt said, pacing. He was on the far side of the well of the firm's moot courtroom, opposite both the jury and the stand. I had to hide a smile at his technique; this was exactly what you were supposed to do on cross examination. During a direct, you stand directly in front of the jury box, so the witness is looking at the jury when they answer. On cross, however? You stand on the far side, so the witness has to turn away from the jury to answer you.

"Why does that matter? He's still my friend!" Our character witness, with whom Matt was conducting a mock cross examination, on the other hand? Well... remember how I said she reminded me of myself?

As it turns out, this was in more ways than one.

"The witness will answer the question," I admonished, serving the role of the judge for the moment.

"Wha—fine, yes! Okay?"

"And you have only been friends for less than half that."

"Why do you care how long we've been friends!?" She slammed both hands down on the stand and stood up from her chair. "What, is it not allowed to just be his friend!?"

"Shit," I murmured under my breath, and slammed the gavel down on the bench. "Alright, everybody calm down, we're taking a break." Our teenage witness threw herself back in her chair with a huff, arms crossed over her chest, giving Matt the nastiest glare she could manage before spinning the chair to face the wall. "Mr. Murdock, could you give us a moment alone? Maybe update her grandfather on what's happening?"

"I can do that," Matt said with a nod. He made his way out of the room, and I barely heard him address the elderly gentleman just outside before the door closed.

I stepped down from the bench, and leaned against the counsel's table.

"Katherine," I began, "if you don't think you're cut out for this, there are a few backup candidates I can ask."

"No, I can do this!" Katherine stood up from the witness's seat and stepped down from the stand, then took to pacing the well of the moot court with a frantic, nervous energy. "It's just, that was horrible! He's just parroting what I said back at me, but it all sounds wrong!"

"That's what a cross examination is like," I told her, sighing. "The other side has listened to your testimony, and is now going to try and poke holes in it. He's going to imply that you haven't known John long enough to defend him, or that maybe you don't know him as well as you thought you did, or any number of other things. They want to try and trip you up, get you to go back on something you've already said, and look like a liar on the stand."

"And I'm just supposed to sit there and let him?" she asked, glowering.

"You? Yes. Me? No." I picked up a small booklet and tossed it to her. "These are the federal rules of evidence. This is the rulebook. If he breaks the rules, or even gets close to it, I get to interrupt him. I will do this as much as I can, but in between objections, I need you to keep your cool."

"So I just have to take it?" Katherine asked. "I have to just sit there and let them say that my friend's a monster, and I have no choice but to let him twist my words and hope people still believe me?"

"That is exactly what you have to do," I told her. "The judge may have granted my motion, but John still has two people who are going to try their level best to make him look like a demon out of hell. And I guarantee that there will be at least four people on that jury who will believe them, for no other reason than that your friend was born a mutant."

"But that's not fair!"

"You're right," I told Katherine. "It's absolutely not fair that he's being judged because of what he was born as. And guess what? You get to experience some of that too. If you respond in any way that's not unfailingly polite, at all, the jury will stop caring about what you say. They'll say you're hormonal, or you're irrational, or that the witness stand made you fall into hysterics."

"They what?" Katherine asked, utterly aghast. "But, but that's so stupid! Anyone would get upset if they were treated like this!"

"It is stupid," I said. "Believe me, I would know, because it's even worse when you're the attorney."

"But why!?"

I sighed, and walked over to the moot court stand and bench again. She probably didn't realize it, but Katherine had asked a rather insightful question, one that really didn't have a right answer, let alone a good one.

Why was it so hard to get people to respect you for who you are, as opposed to what?

"Because for a long time, society decided where we fit into it, and even now that we're able to make our own places, there is still pressure to let ourselves fall right back into that niche they've carved out for us. If you want to get anywhere, it's not enough to just be among the best. You also have to carry yourself with dignity and poise, maintain perfect behavior, make yourself unassailable."

I sighed, unable to keep the frown from my lips.

"Trust me when I say this. I've fallen afoul of this problem more than once. I'm sorry to have to introduce you to this side of the world while you're still a teen, but if John is to have a chance, any chance at all, he's going to need you at your absolute best."

Katherine sat down on the floor, knees pulled up to her chest.

"... how do you do it?" Katherine asked, her voice quiet, confused. "How do I get them to listen to me?"

"You remember exactly one thing," I said, favoring the girl with a smile. "Deep down, they are afraid of the potential societal change we represent. And you want to prove that fear right."

Katherine looked up, and after a few seconds, she met my smile with a shaky one of her own.

"Now, you're stuck with me for a bit more time," I told her, leaning back against the table. "You ready to give this another go?"

"Um, before that," Katherine started, voice hesitant. "You, uh… look, I don't want to be rude here, but you're really okay with John being a mutant, and that's… kinda weird?"

"Is it really?" I asked. I raised one hand up, and with a snap of my fingers, my glamour shattered into prismatic shards, and I was treated to the sight of Katherine's eyes growing wide as saucers.

"Whoa," she whispered.

"Mhmm." I flicked out one hand, light shimmering in my palm, and twisted it back around myself. Moments later, I resembled a baseline human once more. "Does that answer the question to your satisfaction?"

"Y-yeah," she stammered. "S-sorry, that was… super cool, oh my god—"

"Focus, Ms. Pryde," I admonished. "I'm about to call Matthew back in. Are you ready?"

"Sorry, sorry!" Katherine put a hand to her chest, closed her eyes, and took a slow, deep breath. "Alright, yeah. Ready."

"Excellent." Once Katherine got up and took her place on the witness stand once again, I walked over and opened the door to the moot courtroom. "Break time's over, Matthew. Let's go another round."



So, this chapter was meant to also have jury selection, but… the first scene got away from me. Like, it really got away from me. So rather than have a bloated, almost 8-10k word chapter, we're just going to… cut it off here.
 
"... how do you do it?" Katherine asked, her voice quiet, confused. "How do I get them to listen to me?"

"You remember exactly one thing," I said, favoring the girl with a smile. "Deep down, they are afraid of the potential societal change we represent. And you want to prove that fear right."

Katherine looked up, and after a few seconds, she met my smile with a shaky one of her own.

"Now, you're stuck with me for a bit more time," I told her, leaning back against the table. "You ready to give this another go?"

"Um, before that," Katherine started, voice hesitant. "You, uh… look, I don't want to be rude here, but you're really okay with John being a mutant, and that's… kinda weird?"

"Is it really?" I asked. I raised one hand up, and with a snap of my fingers, my glamour shattered into prismatic shards, and I was treated to the sight of Katherine's eyes growing wide as saucers.

"Whoa," she whispered.

"Mhmm." I flicked out one hand, light shimmering in my palm, and twisted it back around myself. Moments later, I resembled a baseline human once more. "Does that answer the question to your satisfaction?"

"Y-yeah," she stammered. "S-sorry, that was… super cool, oh my god—"
Kitty's meeting her first lesbian mentor early in this timeline, I see.
 
"Is it really?" I asked. I raised one hand up, and with a snap of my fingers, my glamour shattered into prismatic shards, and I was treated to the sight of Katherine's eyes growing wide as saucers.

"Whoa," she whispered.

"Mhmm." I flicked out one hand, light shimmering in my palm, and twisted it back around myself. Moments later, I resembled a baseline human once more. "Does that answer the question to your satisfaction?"

Effortlessly cool :p

That conversation with Katherine was great, pretty motivating stuff. She'll be fine on the stand, I reckon, unless the prosecution get really nasty.
 
KITTY!

Sorry, my knowledge of X-men is pretty limited but Kitty Pryde is one of the few I actually know relatively well. And everything I know about her indicates that she's awesome.
 
Oh geez.

Noa just outed herself to a teenager. Apparently she is Kitty Pryde, but she still outed herself to a teenager who is going to be under extreme pressure. I'm absolutely certain that this is not going to come back to bite you at all. Yep, that is one hundred percent a great decision. Very good logic, Noa.

Ribbing aside, I passed over it in the last chapter, but Noa has magic. That is a thing, that she can do. Combine that with her ability to "Glamour" herself and I am left with some very "Fey" vibes. Of course that doesn't necessarially mean anything when it comes to a comic universe, but it does push the mind in that direction...

Regardless, thank you for the chapter, and may you always be inspired.
 
Noa just outed herself to a teenager. Apparently she is Kitty Pryde, but she still outed herself to a teenager who is going to be under extreme pressure. I'm absolutely certain that this is not going to come back to bite you at all.
To be fair Kitty Pryde can handle pressure pretty well from what I understand, though that may be future Kitty. Don't know how old she was when she phased a giant bullet through the Earth lol.
 
Oh geez.

Noa just outed herself to a teenager. Apparently she is Kitty Pryde, but she still outed herself to a teenager who is going to be under extreme pressure. I'm absolutely certain that this is not going to come back to bite you at all. Yep, that is one hundred percent a great decision. Very good logic, Noa.

Ribbing aside, I passed over it in the last chapter, but Noa has magic. That is a thing, that she can do. Combine that with her ability to "Glamour" herself and I am left with some very "Fey" vibes. Of course that doesn't necessarially mean anything when it comes to a comic universe, but it does push the mind in that direction...

Regardless, thank you for the chapter, and may you always be inspired.
Actually in my head Noa looks like Crossbreed Priscilla.. The tail, the horns the scales.. She's just missing SUPER FLUFFY from her description and she can be just like Priscilla.. She can even do the same invisibility trick with her light manipulation.

 
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That conversation with Katherine was great, pretty motivating stuff. She'll be fine on the stand, I reckon, unless the prosecution get really nasty.
Unless they get really nasty? Unless?

The better way to put it is "hopefully she'll be fine on the stand when the prosecution gets really nasty". Because, man... nobody does scummy quite like an overly-ambitious attorney.

This holds true for BOTH sides, by the way.

KITTY!

Sorry, my knowledge of X-men is pretty limited but Kitty Pryde is one of the few I actually know relatively well. And everything I know about her indicates that she's awesome.
She is pretty great, isn't she? Nice Jewish girl from the Midwest... and then she opens up a can of whoopass on you.

And let's not forget in the comics it was her who went back in time for Days of Future Past, not Wolverine as in the movie.

Ribbing aside, I passed over it in the last chapter, but Noa has magic. That is a thing, that she can do. Combine that with her ability to "Glamour" herself and I am left with some very "Fey" vibes. Of course that doesn't necessarially mean anything when it comes to a comic universe, but it does push the mind in that direction...
Oh she is absolutely meant to have some fey vibes going on, thematically speaking. Somebody who deals with the word and letter of law and regulations, casts illusions to hide her true self... yeah, that's on purpose.

If you're trying to use that to determine the source of her magic though, then it's a rather fetching shade of herring you've got there.

Actually in my head Noa looks like Crossbreed Priscilla.. The tail, the horns the scales.. She's just missing SUPER FLUFFY from her description and she can be just like Priscilla.. She can even do the same invisibility trick with her light manipulation.

Noa looks like this.
I thought she was just another nightcrawler honestly.
Nope. But Noa is old enough to be Nightcrawler's mom, if a teen pregnancy thing happened...

... which it didn't, but how often does Kurt see fellow mutants that 1) have similarly classical 'demonic' features, and 2) have powers that don't necessarily match or result from their apperance?
 
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