Which of the other starter choices do you want to see interludes from most?

  • Dishonored

    Votes: 3 7.0%
  • Legend Of Zelda

    Votes: 9 20.9%
  • Shadow Of Mordor

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann

    Votes: 4 9.3%
  • Preacher

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • JoJo's Bizarre Adventure

    Votes: 8 18.6%
  • Fist Of The North Star

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Kill Six Billion Demons

    Votes: 12 27.9%
  • The Zombie Knight

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Mob Psycho 100

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Author's Choice

    Votes: 3 7.0%

  • Total voters
    43
  • Poll closed .
@Sivantic this is what were gonna text her in the morning. I'm sorry if my write in seems flippant but I wanted Jaune to come of as 'you can tell me your secrets when comfortable" instead of being "I want your secrets now". With me making the other person comfortable always ends up with them opening up more than just asking.
Considering my write-in was specifically against doing this for our own benefit("I want your secrets now") I must say that I am rather miffed that you concluded that to be my objective.

She needs a rock, someone to vent at. I really do hope that we can push to send the text now rather than later.
Sounds like a good start, but I'm ready to edit this later with when people come up with more ideas. I'm wondering if offering her a guest room in Casa de Arc is a good idea or if it's presumptuous, what do you guys think
Definitely. I just rather not let it be one light sentence.

Inviting her over is a bit much though
 
Alright so current bandwagon vote just sounds way too casual for something as serious as this. The trick here isn't just letting her know we're open, it's doing so in a way that doesn't piss her off because we think she's fragile now, while still not being callous.

Ada is a Huntress in training. She does not want to be treated like a delicate flower when she can shove a sword through an Ursa's spinal column, so dancing around the issue is the wrong choice. At the same time, we don't want to push, because this is still one of the most sensitive subjects in her life.

Unfortunately, I'm running around like a decapitated chicken, so I can't take as much time as I thought I could to phrase it exactly, but guidelines I'd use for this.

1) Keep it short. Don't linger too long on the subject; Jaune's more likely to filter into something foot-in-mouth-esque the longer we make him deal with something this far out of his comfort zone. Two sentences hard cap.
2) Be serious. The current bandwagon does this right, actually. We aren't joking, we aren't laughing it off, we're taking it seriously.
3) DO NOT PUSH. Ada doesn't normally have anyone to open up to. We're trying to be that person, sure, but we can't tell her to open up to us yet.
4) For the love of Dust, DO NOT APOLOGIZE AND DO NOT THANK HER. It's not our fault and any apology would be hollow to Ada. Thanking her for remembering how she lost her eye is just callous.

Say something like "I'm glad you can talk with me" instead of "thank you". Not those exact words, mind, but something to that effect. "Thank you" has the problem of being an almost subconscious phrase and using it could indicate a lack of interest in her well-being.

So maybe something like

[] I'm glad you feel comfortable enough to tell me. If you need to talk, I'm here.

Exact word choices are definitely up for debate (seriously this is not well phrased), but something like this puts the ball back in her court, gives her control over the flow of information with an option to tell us more, but not a request.

Edit: also, obviously, if she doesn't tell us more, we can bring it up next time we see her in private, but we do not broach this topic in front of anyone else ever.
 
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Inviting her over is a bit much though
Yeah, at least for now. I'm just paranoid that Boriah will come after Ada in her apartment building.
Cracking the door open a little, leaving the chain on, you see an old woman in grey waiting outside.

"Hello, Ada!" She chirps, still managing to sound bright and cheery at her age.

"Oh. Hey, Mrs Pearl. Hold on-" You close the door and quickly undo the chain lock, opening the door for the old woman. You like Mrs Pearl. She knows how to keep you grounded. And she lives right across from you, so, you know, might as well make friends with your neighbours.
It would be especially bad if Mrs Pearl gets caught up in it. Am I just paranoid? I mean, of course Boriah Lee would totally murder that sweet old lady, but would @Prok go through with something like that?

...Please tell me I'm just paranoid and nothing bad will happen to the nice granny. :(
 
Yeah, at least for now. I'm just paranoid that Boriah will come after Ada in her apartment building.

It would be especially bad if Mrs Pearl gets caught up in it. Am I just paranoid? I mean, of course Boriah Lee would totally murder that sweet old lady, but would @Prok go through with something like that?

...Please tell me I'm just paranoid and nothing bad will happen to the nice granny. :(
No clue Prok can get Deliciously dark when they want so it's up in the air
 
As far as how to respond to Ada goes...


[] ... I mean... you kinda have to say something, don't you? Maybe not right now, you're kind of going to bed, but in the morning... what?
-[] That bastard will get what's coming to him. And if he dares to make a move against you, I'll be right there to help you take him down. And you're always happy to talk to you about anything--or just listen, if you want. Carrying that kind of burden alone can wear you down--opening up to people you can trust helps more than you know. No pressure or anything--just know that my door's always open, so to speak.

[X] Special Option

Also, Special Option get!



Anyway, I really loved this update. The interaction between Juane and Ada was excellent and heartwarming (understandably awkward, but heartfelt and genuine), and the surprise introduction of Penny was fantastic. It occurs to me just how beneficial this relationship will be for all of them--Penny has other AIs to relate to and interact with, as well as a human friend who is clearly totally comfortable with AIs and would no doubt be fascinated by her. Interestingly, if Penny tells her father/Ironwood about Juane and the Transistor (and it being an AI, and a creation of Juane), they may take a huge interest in them, which could lead to all sorts of fascinating possibilities. After all, as far as Ironwood and Penny's father are concerned, Penny is the very first AI ever--so a boy who made an AI of his own would obviously be of immense interest.

It's also kind of sad that Penny was so lonely that she was just putting out clandestine static over the radio in the distant hope that there was another AI out there who could understand it and respond...and to her surprise, someone did, and was friendly.

...oh man, it occurs to me that Ruby is going to be practically drooling over Transistor (yes, I know the game refers to it as "the Transistor", but weapons in RWBY are named without 'the', and it follows that Juane would simply use 'Transistor' as its name here). A mind-bogglingly powerful supercomputer capable of analyzing and somewhat copying semblances, along with telekinetic control, built in sapient AI, and a whole lot of modification possible? Oh yeah.

---

We should definitely make sure we learn the ()Slice function. Combined with out normal sword and shield, telekinetically controlling Transistor and using it to slice from oblique angles while we attack with our sword and shield would be a pretty devastating combo in melee, not to mention the impressive damage output you'd get from that. With enough practice and training, we could get to the point where we could attack someone from the front with our sword while Slicing from their rear with Transistor. Sure, it's no guaranteed winning combination (to say the least), but it's tricky to deal with and a great way to keep even a skilled opponent occupied.
 
Oh god, the RNG. Why. If I actually had any money, I would probably spend my life in a casino with how much I'm addicted to luck gambles.
And so, without further ado...

[X] SDC OS Installation (1 week left, 8000 Lien, ???(?))
[X] Spreadsheet Training (2 weeks left, 2500 Lien, doesn't count towards a full slot- it's essentially free money at this point)
[X] Ada- ...
[X] Penny- You know what, yeah, this robot girl sounds interesting, if nothing else. Go talk to her, see what she's all about.
[X] SPECIAL OPTION
 
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I really wish I liked Pyre better tho', just couldn't into it. Loved what it tried to do ofc.
I think most people's problems with Pyre was the gameplay itself. One review i read on Steam said "Loved Pyre, hated Pyreball."
I didn't mind the gameplay that much myself. Sure, the controls were a bit frustrating at times (cough) Tiko's challenge rites and THE ESSENCE OH MY GOD THE ESSENCE'S LIBERATION RITE MADE ME RAGEQUIT SO HARD I HAD TO LOWER DIFFICULTY TO EASY AND REMOVE ALL MY TITAN STARS NEVER AGAIN YOU FILTHY CHEATING BASTARDS JUST HAD TO MOVE CLOSE TO THE ORB (cough) but overall the game was quite the treat, noticeably different than from the usual mechanics that Supergiant employs.
Also, Darren Korb and Ashley Barrett; still gods.
 
@Prok Can [] Spreadsheet Training be taken as an 8th choice? And if so will it have some secondary impact for doing that?
It can be taken as an 8th choice, yes- essentially, Jaune would just work on it whenever he has a spare moment, something which is much easier for him considering, well, he has a keyboard underneath his fingertips at all times, and if I say something doesn't take up an entire slot, that means it doesn't take up any significant chunks of time like, say, coding, or socialising. It is, essentially, free money. The only real impact I can think of is that you would get the money at the very end of the week, instead of just before any point where you'll be spending it.

@Prok, can you clarify this option? Can we go shopping for multiple things in multiple stores or is it just one of the three options offered?
GOD BLESS SLEEP DEPRIVATION LAD

Ok, path of least resistance, path of least resistance- ah!

You'll get a list of everything available in each shop, but the winning vote is what'll have actual development thrown at it. On top of whichever sisters decide to accompany you.

BECAUSE WE DON'T HAVE ENOUGH CHARACTERS ALREADY APPARENTLY

Okay, that Penny scene was awesome. It's interesting how distinct the Transistor AI is from both Royce and Bracket. And y'know, I've never really thought about it, but the Transistor doesn't HAVE sensors outside Analyze(), and that's a function of Jaune's Semblance. It's for Jaune, not Royce/Bracket/Transistor. Yeep.
Well, really, it's for all three of them. It has no physical sensors, like cameras, or microphones, so all its information comes from a sourceless font of near-limitless information. They don't feel what way up they are, they're just told what way up they are.

As for the sheer distinction between them, I wanted to find a happy medium between Blue and Bracket, on top of trying to give the feeling of something... entirely more than the sum of its parts, in the same way a Culture Mind is so much more than its avatar.

Good stuff! You're definitely on the right track to getting a perfect score here- there's a few other things people should be able to figure out, and just this once I'm willing to throw my own advice out there if people are genuinely struggling, but between you and Sivantic, I don't think it's going to be a problem.

Speaking of-

[X] Write-in: Ask her how long she has been holding this in. Ask if she like it if we were to call her instead of text. Ask her to start from the beginning and let it play out. What she says/texts is actually unimportant. What matters right now is giving her somewhere to finally vent upon and giving her that. Regardless of what she says, stay calm. Once she is done, then thank her for telling you. Ask her if it is okay to meet up again tomorrow. Admit that you are a little tired and want to be able to give her your full attention. If not, ask when would be an appropriate time to call her again.
I just want to address this very quickly.

I'm... looking at the texting write-in with a very specific mindset- namely, I have been in this situation more times than I can count, so I like to think that I have... if nothing like an education in therapy, at least a decent grasp on how these things should be handled. That's what I meant when I said the write-ins would be judged purely on what you say- because, for once, I actually do know what I'm talking about, and I have a handle on how Ada, as someone who is currently opening herself up to you about something terrible that's happened to her, will react to different things being said.

I'm picking on you right now because your suggestion is actually... startlingly close to how I responded pretty much the first time I had to do this.

I'm still trying to figure out if that's a good thing or not.
 
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GOD BLESS SLEEP DEPRIVATION LAD

Ok, path of least resistance, path of least resistance- ah!

You'll get a list of everything available in each shop, but the winning vote is what'll have actual development thrown at it. On top of whichever sisters decide to accompany you.

BECAUSE WE DON'T HAVE ENOUGH CHARACTERS ALREADY APPARENTLY
Should we just use the "Go into town-" option if we want to go shopping or doesn't it matter?
 
Should we just use the "Go into town-" option if we want to go shopping or doesn't it matter?
It doesn't really matter. The 'Go into town' option was more...

You know what, I don't even know what that was.

Anyway, so long as at least one shopping option wins, you'll get your shop option. Your... shoption, if you will.

(You should not because I'm a fucking disgrace to humour everywhere}
 
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Anyway, so long as at least one shopping option wins, you'll get your shop option. Your... shoption, if you will.

(You should not because I'm a fucking disgrace to humour everywhere}
Alright, that's one problem solved. Now I just have to convince people to delay the Penny meeting by a week because her need for a friend just isn't as urgent as Creme's problem with her brother joining a terrorist organization.

I hope it's just because people forgot that plot was a thing (since it was last mentioned two months ago) or that they disagree with me how pressing the issue is, and not that they simply don't care about the OCs when measured against the canon cast. That's an issue with some fans, but I think people here are better than that.
I thought he was wearing Blue's jacket over jeans and a black shirt, a la Collar Bone Shatteraxia?
That's technically only a recolour of Red, mind. While a nice idea of what he'd look like with the Transistor in tow, and perhaps a nice idea for a wardrobe change, should people be so inclined, I'm currently sticking with canon clothing for now. Not that you won't have the option to change before Beacon rolls around, but right now the armour-obscured Pumpkin Pete hoodie and jeans is what you've got.
As a random aside, are we planning to pick up an extended wardrobe if we go shopping? Maybe some better armour?
 
[X] Plan: Undefeated of the Priest
[X] ... I mean... you kinda have to say something, don't you? Maybe not right now, you're kind of going to bed, but in the morning... what? (Note: this is a roll-free write-in. What this means is that what you say will be judged purely on what it says, with no random chance to screw you over or help you. If you're going to say anything, say it carefully.)
-[:V] Eye see.
-[X] Do you believe in gravity? I too, will confide. This is something I'd tell you in person. I think you'll be amazed, in a good way. It's part of my semblance, and I'd like to keep it secret, because it would bring me endless trouble, from The World trying to take advantage of me if word got out. For you friend, I'll work miracles. Everyone else can have Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap. That's not an allusion to crime, nor prostitution, by the way.

[X] SDC OS Installation
[X] Ada
[X] Creme
[X] SPECIAL OPTION
[X] Computer Store

Pucci and D4C (crosses fingers while texting to Ada)
 
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[X] I'm glad you feel comfortable enough to tell me. If you need to talk, I'm here.

This is a better text it's straight to the point doesn't pry and force her to tell us more than she's comfortable with

[X] Hyper Arcade (Permanent, 9000 Lien per slot)
[X] SDC OS Installation (1 week left, 8000 Lien, ???(?))
[X] Spreadsheet Training (2 weeks left, 2500 Lien, doesn't count towards a full slot- it's essentially free money at this point)

[X] Lumen- Hang out with Lumen for a day. Just chill, do stupid shit, stuff like that.
[X] Creme- {... Touch the tail-} FUCK OFF NO- Hang out with Creme! She seems nice! Maybe she can help you out with Ada or something! {... Ok but what's the tail feel like-} AAAARGH-
[X] Ada- ...


[X] Computer Store- Woah mama. This... this is your place. Your domain. I mean, I'm not saying you could probably find everything in here blindfolded and Transistorless, but... you totally could. And it's also where you buy stuff for upgrading the Transistor's MEM banks. Go figure.
 
[X] I'm glad you feel comfortable enough to tell me. If you need to talk, I'm here.

[X] Hyper Arcade (Permanent, 9000 Lien per slot)
[X] SDC OS Installation (1 week left, 8000 Lien, ???(?))
[X] Spreadsheet Training (2 weeks left, 2500 Lien, doesn't count towards a full slot- it's essentially free money at this point)

[X] Lumen- Hang out with Lumen for a day. Just chill, do stupid shit, stuff like that.
[X] Creme- {... Touch the tail-} FUCK OFF NO- Hang out with Creme! She seems nice! Maybe she can help you out with Ada or something! {... Ok but what's the tail feel like-} AAAARGH-
[X] Ada- ...


[X] Computer Store- Woah mama. This... this is your place. Your domain. I mean, I'm not saying you could probably find everything in here blindfolded and Transistorless, but... you totally could. And it's also where you buy stuff for upgrading the Transistor's MEM banks. Go figure.
 
Alright, that's one problem solved. Now I just have to convince people to delay the Penny meeting by a week because her need for a friend just isn't as urgent as Creme's problem with her brother joining a terrorist organization.

I hope it's just because people forgot that plot was a thing (since it was last mentioned two months ago) or that they disagree with me how pressing the issue is, and not that they simply don't care about the OCs when measured against the canon cast. That's an issue with some fans, but I think people here are better than that.
I think if people had a problem with OCs over canon cast, this quest would have died before you were out of the Signal test. But yes, you have a lot of stuff to do, character-wise.

Anyway, I'm going to close the votes here- @Redshirt Army's plan wins, so you'll be dealing with an SDC OS installation in ssssssomewhere, writing up a spreadsheet tutorial for a company, meeting Penny for the first time, hanging out with Ada again, the mystery option, and the computer store!

As for the response vote... I'm going to leave that for a bit. Another day or so, maybe, because, and don't take this the wrong way, what some of you have is a great start, but I really... really want you to think this through, because this is important, and I don't want you to shoot yourselves in the foot.

Consider this a moratorium so you can discuss- tomorrow at eight o'clock, I'll close the response vote.
 
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How complete of a response do you want here? Because this is something where I'd skip the text message and just call.
I'm not expecting a full script, just Jaune's, if not immediate response, then the one he eventually settles on. Calling her is an option if you feel it's necessary, but the only real criteria are...

You need to give me a write-in that'll convince me that Jaune can deal with this, at least to the point where he's not going to alienate her, and also set his tone during the conversation with it. If you give me something initially curious, he'll end up being curious, asking her questions, albeit tactfully, to try and get her to open up more, if you give me something passive, he'll mostly stay silent while he lets her get it off her chest, letting her take the flow of the conversation, and if you try to have him come across as genuinely empathetic, then... he'll try his best, at least. I can't really say that this is something most people could empathise with.

I'll give you all one piece of advice, though.

You might think that's too vague, or too open-ended, and that's somewhat intentional because there is no perfect answer. Hell, there's no correct answer. There are better answers, there are worse answers, but there is no objectively right answer where you have to hit all the right notes like you're filling out a checklist.

You just have to eyeball these kinds of things and hope for the best, and as such, aside from asking for some measure of sobriety when approaching it, there is very little structure to what I really want from this write-in.

Convince me with the winning vote that Jaune can handle this, by example, not by explanation, and try to set the tone of the conversation with it. Simple enough, if you ask me.
Adhoc vote count started by Prok on Nov 25, 2017 at 6:05 AM, finished with 1598 posts and 21 votes.

  • [x] Plan: Redshirt Army
    [x] Ada- ...
    [x] SDC OS Installation (1 week left, 8000 Lien, ???(?))
    [x] Spreadsheet Training (2 weeks left, 2500 Lien, doesn't count towards a full slot- it's essentially free money at this point)
    [X] SPECIAL OPTION- Ok look, I know you lot and this particular shade of red have had something of a rocky relationship in the past, but it promises it's changed, and it wants to try again. In exchange for three timeslots, you will get a Mystery Function- the only thing I'm going to tell you about it is that it is essentially an entirely new system in and of itself, and the cost is entirely justified for what you'll get.
    [X] I'm glad you feel comfortable enough to tell me. If you need to talk, I'm here.
    [x] Computer Store- Woah mama. This... this is your place. Your domain. I mean, I'm not saying you could probably find everything in here blindfolded and Transistorless, but... you totally could. And it's also where you buy stuff for upgrading the Transistor's MEM banks. Go figure.
    [X] Creme- {... Touch the tail-} FUCK OFF NO- Hang out with Creme! She seems nice! Maybe she can help you out with Ada or something! {... Ok but what's the tail feel like-} AAAARGH-
    [X] SPECIAL OPTION
    [x] Penny- You know what, yeah, this robot girl sounds interesting, if nothing else. Go talk to her, see what she's all about.
    [X] Swordsmanship- SLASHY STABBY (C- 9/120)
    [X] Hyper Arcade (Permanent, 9000 Lien per slot)
    [X] Lumen- Hang out with Lumen for a day. Just chill, do stupid shit, stuff like that.
    [X] Write-in: Ask her how long she has been holding this in. Ask if she like it if we were to call her instead of text. Ask her to start from the beginning and let it play out. What she says/texts is actually unimportant. What matters right now is giving her somewhere to finally vent upon and giving her that. Regardless of what she says, stay calm. Once she is done, then thank her for telling you. Ask her if it is okay to meet up again tomorrow. Admit that you are a little tired and want to be able to give her your full attention. If not, ask when would be an appropriate time to call her again.
    [X] Thanks for telling me, I'm open to listening if you want to vent about it
    [X] Try and finish what you've got? Cache.
    [X] Plan: Redshirt Army 2.0
    [X] Computer Store- Woah mama. This... this is your place. Your domain. I mean, I'm not saying you could probably find everything in here blindfolded and Transistorless, but... you totally could. And it's also where you buy stuff for upgrading the Transistor's MEM banks. Go figure.
    [X] Plan: Undefeated of the Priest
    [X] ... I mean... you kinda have to say something, don't you? Maybe not right now, you're kind of going to bed, but in the morning... what? (Note: this is a roll-free write-in. What this means is that what you say will be judged purely on what it says, with no random chance to screw you over or help you. If you're going to say anything, say it carefully.)
    -[X] Do you believe in gravity? I too, will confide. This is something I'd tell you in person. I think you'll be amazed, in a good way. It's part of my semblance, and I'd like to keep it secret, because it would bring me endless trouble, from The World trying to take advantage of me if word got out. For you friend, I'll work miracles. Everyone else can have Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap. That's not an allusion to crime, nor prostitution, by the way.
    [X] SDC OS Installation
    [X] Creme
    [X] Computer Store
 
Anyway, I'm going to close the votes here- @Redshirt Army's plan wins, so you'll be dealing with an SDC OS installation in ssssssomewhere, writing up a spreadsheet tutorial for a company, meeting Penny for the first time, hanging out with Ada again, the mystery option, and the computer store!
Disappointing, but I suppose I'll just have to hope that ignoring Creme's problems for yet another week won't end up biting us in the ass.
You just have to eyeball these kinds of things and hope for the best, and as such, aside from asking for some measure of sobriety when approaching it, there is very little structure to what I really want from this write-in.

Convince me with the winning vote that Jaune can handle this, by example, not by explanation, and try to set the tone of the conversation with it. Simple enough, if you ask me.
Alright, keeping this in mind, can we make something coherent out of the current suggestions?
[X] Thanks for telling me, I'm open to listening if you want to vent about it.
[X] Write-in: Ask her how long she has been holding this in. Ask if she like it if we were to call her instead of text. Ask her to start from the beginning and let it play out. What she says/texts is actually unimportant. What matters right now is giving her somewhere to finally vent upon and giving her that. Regardless of what she says, stay calm. Once she is done, then thank her for telling you. Ask her if it is okay to meet up again tomorrow. Admit that you are a little tired and want to be able to give her your full attention. If not, ask when would be an appropriate time to call her again.
[] I'm glad you feel comfortable enough to tell me. If you need to talk, I'm here.
[] ... I mean... you kinda have to say something, don't you? Maybe not right now, you're kind of going to bed, but in the morning... what?
-[] That bastard will get what's coming to him. And if he dares to make a move against you, I'll be right there to help you take him down. And you're always happy to talk to you about anything--or just listen, if you want. Carrying that kind of burden alone can wear you down--opening up to people you can trust helps more than you know. No pressure or anything--just know that my door's always open, so to speak.
 
Alright, keeping this in mind, can we make something coherent out of the current suggestions?

What's here is a good start, if you pick one and run with it. I wouldn't recommend pulling from more than two, though- most of them go in such different directions that trying to fit them all into one response would probably end up sounding like an incoherent mess of emotions.

... Which would probably be the most realistic option, honestly.
 
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What's here is a good start, if you pick one and run with it. I wouldn't recommend pulling from more than two, though- most of them go in such different directions that trying to fit them all into one response would probably end up sounding like an incoherent mess of emotions.
According to the tally, "[] I'm glad you feel comfortable enough to tell me. If you need to talk, I'm here." is in the lead, but you can crib from the others to add in more stuff if she does feel the need to talk.
... Which would probably be the most realistic option, honestly.
On the scale of social awkwardness, how would you rate Transistor!Jaune compared to canon!Jaune?
 
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