Which of the other starter choices do you want to see interludes from most?

  • Dishonored

    Votes: 3 7.0%
  • Legend Of Zelda

    Votes: 9 20.9%
  • Shadow Of Mordor

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann

    Votes: 4 9.3%
  • Preacher

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • JoJo's Bizarre Adventure

    Votes: 8 18.6%
  • Fist Of The North Star

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Kill Six Billion Demons

    Votes: 12 27.9%
  • The Zombie Knight

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Mob Psycho 100

    Votes: 2 4.7%
  • Author's Choice

    Votes: 3 7.0%

  • Total voters
    43
  • Poll closed .
[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)

[X] Moleskin Diary and Cards. (Deep layered thumps and scritches, the sound of 52 cards and 150 pages moving in tandem.)
 
IT LIVES!

Music, with Professor Port of all people, is held on the basement level, along with Dust Alchemy, and the Weapon Maintenance classes. You're beginning to think Ozpin just keeps anything big, loud, dangerous, or annoying down here.



I know music probably falls under "annoying" in this set, but the idea of music classes being moved down there after one year someone with a sound-related semblance took the course is amusing to me.

"Well- have at it," Port says.



Ah, improvised weaponry time.

[X] The Cello (watch out for your foot, and your scrotum)

[X] The Marbles. (Low and warm, glass and metal rolling across wood, scrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr-)

[X] The Jacks. (Little metal snowflakes, tinkling away against the table and each other.)

[X] Moleskin Diary and Cards. (Deep layered thumps and scritches, the sound of 52 cards and 150 pages moving in tandem.)


[] Root Vegetables. (Snap! Crunch!! But you can only use each one once. Who ever heard of an instrument you can only use once?)


Not actually voting for this last one, but. Explosives. Specifically, gunpowder, used to make a cannon go off.

Yes, a cannon is a musical instrument, I will die on this hill (by cannonfire :V).
 
Yay!

[X] The Marbles. (Low and warm, glass and metal rolling across wood, scrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr-)

They can make all sorts of wonderful clacks, taps and clinks based on what you bounce them off of.
Tap them on each other. Cup your hands and shake a handful of them for a rattle. A very versatile instrument.
 
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[X] Moleskin Diary and Cards. (Deep layered thumps and scritches, the sound of 52 cards and 150 pages moving in tandem.)
[X] The Marbles. (Low and warm, glass and metal rolling across wood, scrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr-)
 
We need someone to set the tempo either the cards or brass gears, Weiss with the tin, the marble needs to roll, and the root vegetable needs to be used to make a snap after all others have gone.

I can't figure out who needs what other than Weiss, if anyone has an inkling of who should do what, this should be a winning rhythm.
 
It's always awesome to see this update.

@Prok did you intend for Jaune to say his two uncles' names are both Janus?

I quite liked Cardin here. As Blue says, he may be racist, but Jaune's fully human and unlike canon, well trained and talented so there'd be no reason to bully him, plus having some shared interests ie working out means he could have a casual, dare I say it, enjoyable even time with him just hanging out.

It doesn't change that Cardin's a jerk who needs an attitude adjustment in regards to Faunus, but it adds depth to him and shows how he could make it to Beacon and be a team leader ie hard work ethic and a personable personality when you're not a target of his.

[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)
[X] The Marbles. (Low and warm, glass and metal rolling across wood, scrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr-)

I do wonder if Ironwood's seen the video of the meeting, I'd love to have a POV of his after he's watched it and is internalizing it.

Presumably, the Process' few limits to assimilation is Dust and grimm. I wonder if the Process is implanted into Atlas, could they assimilate enough matter, and emulate enough technology to allow the Staff of Creation to be safely removed while keeping the city afloat.
 
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Fantastic to have you back, @Prok . Was about to go to sleep but had to write up a comment when I saw this pop up.

As for the instrument selection...

[] The Cello (watch out for your foot, and your scrotum)

If someone's trained in it, or isn't comfortable messing around with the sounds of household items, leave it to 'em. Neither of those apply to Jaune, so I don't really see a need to go for it.

[] The Marbles. (Low and warm, glass and metal rolling across wood, scrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr-)

Very versatile - you can get a humming sound from rolling, a sharp clack or chime against other marbles or a solid surface, a rattle or rainfall patter if you put them in a bag...

It's great on a technical level, but I'm not sure it "fits" Jaune in particular?

[] The Rosary. (Tiny little tandem staccato beats, tiktiktiktiktiktik-)

A lot less versatile than the marbles. Being made of wood does give them a warmer timbre, but its a lot harder to get much variation out of them - not even just outright different use cases, but even notes within the main use case.

[] The Jacks. (Little metal snowflakes, tinkling away against the table and each other.)

Similar to the marbles, but I suspect they'll be a fair bit quieter.

[] The Little Metal Cup. (You should probably leave this to Weiss, she has better nails to tinktatinktatink against this thing.)

Cups are great instruments. Rapping against the side, as Jaune suggested, sure, but there's also tapping the whole cup against something, rolling it around, blowing over the lip, filling it up with stuff to change the sound it makes, stretching something over it and using it as a drum...

[] Moleskin Diary and Cards. (Deep layered thumps and scritches, the sound of 52 cards and 150 pages moving in tandem.)

A fair amount of versatility here, if not as much as the marbles or cup, but I kinda like how it ties into Jaune as a person. Write out some math in the notebook, Jaune! :V

[] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)

Tempting to wildly speculate that it's some secret Ozpin contraption or something, but I'm betting it's just a fidget spinner. Could maybe get some neat sounds out of it if it's hollow inside, but a solid metal cube is hard to get a lot of music out of, and gear meshing noises are alright but limited.

[] Root Vegetables. (Snap! Crunch!! But you can only use each one once. Who ever heard of an instrument you can only use once?)

Kinda ties into the idea of audio sampling there - in a real production Jaune could easily just use the Transistor to sample audio from the outside and then loop and distort it. I'm guessing that would be firmly against the spirit of the exercise, though - something along the lines of "music is all around us, it isn't something that's rigid and only found in one place or that relies on specific tools or methods".

[] … Sunglasses? (You'd be better off just wearing them, honestly.)

Can't get much sound out of sunglasses period unless you smash them, but there's a ton of music you can make with just the human body. Singing, obviously (and what I expect Weiss to settle on in this exercise, honestly, since she's got proper training in it and it fits the lesson), but also clapping, humming, slapping your knees...

[] The Bass (Any idiot can play the bass, but it takes a special kind of idiot to play it well.)

Another proper instrument.

My general thoughts are something like: There's no need to reinvent the wheel if you don't have to, and the bass and cello are ultimately literally designed to make pleasing sounds when played. If someone has experience with brass or strings, they should grab those.

Weiss can just sing, fivehead. Or she might be the one on bass or cello, I could see her musical training extending to that.

For the people who don't have existing experience with brass or strings, they aren't likely to get much better sound out of the bass and cello than they would out of the marbles or cup, so they should go for those and try to stir up their creativity, at least.
 
[x] Little Brass Gear Cube
[x] The Marbles

Gears fit Jaune's aesthetic, marbles are versatile... currently imagining Jaune building a Marble Machine with sixty million complicated marble manipulation mechanisms...
 
I mean, WE can make the vegetables useful again whit reboot, but honestly using massive amounts of energy to create a facsimile of reversing entropy in order to play music sonds... Westeful.

[X] The Marbles
 
[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)

We're an inventor of sorts already, might as well stick to theme.
 
[X] Little Brass Gear Cube
[X] The Rosary. (Tiny little tandem staccato beats, tiktiktiktiktiktik-)

The first feels… thematic
The second makes be think of how the cells would sound if they walk
 
[x] Little Brass Gear Cube
[x] The Marbles

Gears fit Jaune's aesthetic, marbles are versatile... currently imagining Jaune building a Marble Machine with sixty million complicated marble manipulation mechanisms...
If Jaune can make this, or Blue and Bracket look it up online and he's allowed to build one via the Process, I'm switching my vote to Marbles.

Besides, this might be a good teaching moment to the Process, show them some art and music
 
I mean, WE can make the vegetables useful again whit reboot, but honestly using massive amounts of energy to create a facsimile of reversing entropy in order to play music sonds... Westeful.
tbf, art is a fundamentally wasteful exercise. It's not ABOUT efficiency. It's all about aesthetic.
Can we turn the Transistor into an electric keyboard or something? Put up some holokeys and the Transistor just makes the noise?
Kind of defeats the point of the exercise to create music creatively if our default is "make an instrument ex nihilo"
 
[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)

Glad to see you are back. And here's hoping we see more chapters soon. Perfect is the enemy of good enough, after all. I'm always happy with the work you put out.

Also as an aside, no option to use the Transistor as an instrument? Jaune could pioneer music trackers or a fully coded DAW if they don't already exist in universe. Take some samples during the lesson and lay it all out in a tracker, could be fun. With all that processing power man could make some of the most unfathomable industrial/techno ever to grace Remnant.
 
[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)
-[X] Offer to use the sound of gears to set a tempo for the others to build off of.
 
[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)

[X] Moleskin Diary and Cards. (Deep layered thumps and scritches, the sound of 52 cards and 150 pages moving in tandem.)
 
Hey there nice to see you again, loved the chapter anyways my vote.

[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)
[X] The Marbles. (Low and warm, glass and metal rolling across wood, scrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr-)
 
Welcome back!

[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)

[X] Moleskin Diary and Cards. (Deep layered thumps and scritches, the sound of 52 cards and 150 pages moving in tandem.)
 
YUUUUS
ITS
BACCCC!
YEEEEEeeeeee

"One, hundred, kilograms, total."

Nothin like another gym bro for synergistic motivation!

I want some leg curls. 10 reps of 10.

Haaaaaaa your thighs are burning already-

Dew it! Know that without magic, without tech, and without aura, your only hope of doing damage is your sord and your fists!

All of which needs to pull power from your legs.

HeeuuurrRRRRGH-

"Yo, come on, J-Man! You got this!" Cardin yells, prompting you to look back and see him watching you.

WITNESS!

It radiates off him for a moment, washing over you and pulling some hidden resolve that makes those last three reps the easiest you've ever done. Even the last press comes down smooth, feeling zero urge to rush yourself and get sloppy.

WITNESSSED!

Yea now I'm pumped enough to get back to the treadmill. Lets gooo!


Beeg Solid Sord of Maeth, please make me a
 
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Welp, time to do my biannual reread! Good to see this back!

[X] Little Brass Gear Cube. (You genuinely have no idea what this is, but you know what sound gears make.)
 
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