Yeah, sure, that works. I'll have to redo the build a bit (hopefully not a lot) given that I was using the wrong book. Still, that's a great name, and I'll keep working on the idea.
Question: does the description as given counts as having a bottleneck (in which case I'll need to do additional redesigns), or is this ok?
If so, my current rebuild is
Large
Difficult terrain 0
Pockets of Safety +2
Balanced Ecosystem
Eartly Fauna 0 (I'll redo the description of alien fishes a bit)
Earthly Flora 0
Resident devil -1
Advanced Social Structures 0
Advanced technology -2
Committed -2
Exclusive Transportation -1
Not enough points for fanatical population or gaols, sadly. Lower granularity in play, I feel.