Dmol8
The Undead Unhinged Lunatic of the Web
- Location
- Belgrade,Serbia
- Pronouns
- He/Him/His
"Data Flows are in Alignment," comes the soft almost bell-like voice of One Who Ascends the Ladder of Perfection, most skilled fate weaver in the City of Law, machine spirit of its major defense grid. A rare thing for the guardian to bother with any singular act of forging, but much like Ancient Luc, if with less pathos, it has taken umbrage at the notions that the weapons it counts on in defense of the city could be could be sabotaged by any of a handful of strange magicians from the Beyond
The underlined part is doubled up and you forgot to put the punctuation at the end of the paragraph.
A river a data flows though arcane circuitry designed to resonate in geomantic harmonies as infra-sounds start vibrating though the chill air, though seat of stone and into your very bones. It is nothing like calling on the knowlege within, alien and uncomfortable, but after a few moments you settle in and your hands begin to fly
In that moment you realize that you had been looking at this all wrong. There is no need to stop the saboteur cold, just make it impossible for him to copy his work over, as soon as the code is changed in a single weapon or other piece of technology the resonance would pass though all other devices in range alerting them that they should scramble their network protocols. A computer, a machine spirit of a kind that might have to legitimately work on the devices, say to repair them, would easily be able to decrypt the ad-hoc coding, but the wizard with only one human brain's worth of computing power would be utterly stumped
The underlined is knowledge not knowlege. Also a lack of punctuation at the end of both paragraphs.
In terms of gifts can we give Lydia something made of Opal? I'm asking because glass is associated with the release of death in certain Slavic myths, Fexts being the most famous ones on that note these days, and I'm wondering if giving Lydia a weapon or something else made from Opal would be helpful.