Gestalt, A Worm x PMMM Faux-quest

Interlude: Rot und Gold.
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Interlude: Rot und Gold
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"I wasn't expecting to see you here."

It felt strange to speak her father's tongue again, the syllables feeling odd coming from her throat.

The other girl chuckles, kneeling, her hands clasped. The church was empty of even the pastor, but she knew the prayers by heart.

"Not that many churches left in Brockton Bay, Senpai," she quips. Her elder winces at the reminder.

"I mean... here," the blond corrects. She's wringing her hands. "In this city. Or... At all, if I'm honest."

The younger's smile slips off.

"... Yeah. Me neither." An admission, and then another. "I thought you were dead for a time, but..." A snort. "Well, then I remembered who I was thinkin' of. 'The Invincible'. ."

A pause.

"... I never liked that... title." Softly, almost hiding the resentment. "As if I never knew what defeat felt like. Or loss."

"You're still alive," the younger points out.

A smile that doesn't reach her eyes.

"I survived," she corrects, "Between survival and life lies a chasm deeper and wider than most people think."

"Darker, too," she adds, softly.

The redhead suppresses a shudder.

"Did I ever tell you that you're fucking terrifying?" she snarks. Her elder giggles.

"Only occasionally," she shoots back, the tone mildly teasing.

The redhead scoffs. The two fall silent, basking in the familiar companionship. Briefly, they remember the last time the two of them were like this; half a world a way, and what feels like an age ago.

Golden eyes glance away.

"I missed you."

The admission makes the redhead blink. She gets up to her feet, and there's a moment where the elder thinks she's gone too far.

"... I missed you too." The redhead sits down next to her. Neither dares to look at the other. "I was a..." She stops. A snort. Dark amusement. "Wasn't planning on going to confession today, but here goes: I was a bitch to you last time we met, and I was an extra salty bitch not to swallow my own stupid pride and come when you made the call."

"And I was a selfish, lonely fool not to understand that you needed to grieve," the blonde answers, rubbing the ring around her middle finger, "I knew exactly what you were going through, and all I could think about was that I didn't want you to leave me."

"Looks like we both fucked up, big time," the redhead quips, her voice dripping with levity that is only mostly false. More softly, she adds, "But it's... It's good to see you again." A pause. A very gently worded question. "What brought you all the way here, though?"

There's silence from the blonde. A silence with a certain weight to it. The redhead blinks, and turns her head just enough to look at the other girl.

"... Mami-san?"

"As much as I'd like to say that I just happened to end up here, Kyouko..." She closes her eyes. "I'm in Brockton Bay for... business, so to speak."

The redhead stares at her elder for a moment more, and then looks away, leaning back on the pew. The blonde wrings her hands again, not daring to look at her junior in the eye.

"Never thought I'd see you go mercenary, Mami-san," Kyouko says. Her voice is so soft it barely carries over to the other Puella Magi.

"Me neither," Mami Tomoe admits. She sighs. "Although I've made my limits quite clear to my... employer," she adds, her tone darkening.

Softly, she adds, "One of those being you."

Red eyes blink. "... Me?"

"... Well, anyone I consider a friend," Mami tells her, "Which includes you. It's... not a very long list." She wrings her hands. "I-"

Kyouko puts a hand on her shoulder, cutting off whatever Mami was about to say.

"Mami, did I ever give you the impression that I'd be the sort to give two shits about that?" she tells the older girl. A hand capable of crushing windpipes give Mami's shoulder a reassuring squeeze. "Because, let me tell ya, I don't give two shits about what you had to do." She shakes her head. Sighs. "Honestly, you worry way too much about what people think of you..."

It's Mami's turn to stare at Kyouko. A snort from the redhead. A familiar smirk. "Look at me, being all mature and shit... Bet ya thought you'd never see that, huh?"

Mami giggles, her mood buoyed considerably. "Ah, you say that, but... Hm. What was the wording you used back in the clinic? 'Next time I see that fucking bird, I'll shove it up your fucking ass'?"

"And that was a perfectly mature response to a lunatic who keeps an evil Bird Familiar as a pet," the redhead says dismissively.

The elder raises an eyebrow. "Aren't you being employed by said lunatic?"

The other girl shrugs. "Alice knows she's crazy," she drawls, "Not sure if being that self-aware makes the situation better or worse for her, but she doesn't mind us calling her out, even if she only really listens to Susan." She shrugs. "Plus, she pays well, and the room's not half bad... although the less you say about the view, the better." Her hands reach for the paper bag beside her, out of habit, but she manages to stop herself. She has some standards. "Brockton Bay's shit, but still better than Mitakihara."

"That's not saying much," Mami says, mildly, "A smoking crater would be an improvement over Mitakihara."

"Ain't that the truth..." Kyouko stands up, and Mami follows a moment later. "Walk with me?"

They leave the church together, and Kyouko waits until the instant her sneakers hit the pavement before digging an apple out of the paper bag she's carrying. She offers Mami another, and the blonde wordlessly accepts it; she's not feeling hungry, but she knows better than to refuse.

They pass a patch of graffiti, and Kyouko catches sight of Mami pursing her lips. A quick glance, and the redhead's not surprised to see that the subject of her former mentor's disgust is an ABB tag.

"Thinking of doing some cleanup on the side?" she asks, only half-joking. Mami's fingers twitch, and one can imagine the familiar muzzleloading rifles sliding out of her sleeves.

"I'm tempted," Mami admits. Something occurs to her. "Speaking of gangs... What do you know about that girl who was at the clinic today? The one who brought a potential with her?"

"The one with the evil as hell costume?" Kyouko further clarifies. "Yeah, that's Rachel; Brockton Bay's own friendly neighbourhood Fake Nazi."

Mami raises an eyebrow. "... 'Fake Nazi'?"

Kyouko chuckles. "Yeah; she kinda looks like one, but she isn't." She bites into her second apple, chewing thoroughly before swallowing. "Really, really isn't, or else Susan wouldn't be letting her into the trainyard. Not that it stops people from going with the first impression." She shrugs. "According to Missy, her costume used to be a thousand times worse when she started out."

Mami pauses, taking in this new information.

"I see," she says, "A case of costume regret?"

"The worst," Kyouko agrees.

"Where does she hunt?"

"Winslow," Kyouko answers at once, "She's got two neighbors besides Sarah, and both of them bitch about how they lost Winslow to her." She pauses. "Why do you ask?"

Mami smiles.

"I'd like to give her a visit."

[X] INTERLUDE END.
 
That does beg the question of "How did Taylor figure out something that most meguca don't figure out in their careers, in spite of them handling Grief Seeds and their own Soul Gems all the time?".
Probably a question of, yes they are obviously connected somehow, but to jump straight to thinking Soul Gem + X amount of Grief = Grief Seed/Witch is sort of hazardous in the way that if they consider the possibility, they'll search for a different one because it is a conclusion too horrible to reach. There are already alternate explanations for Witches and Soul Gems and their connections that Kyubey is implying whenever he talks about Witches and Megucas. Witches = Curses and Megucas = Wishes of humanity and Incubators introducing themselves as Messengers of Magic implies an almost immune response type situation where Humanity's subconsciousness/magic sends Kyubey to recruit megucas to fight against witches preying upon humans.
 
Suddenly, another update! Egads!

I started writing this while the actual story chapter was giving me headaches, and finished it before I did the same for the fight against Katarina. So, enjoy a double update!
 
Oh hey, Murder-Suicide Girl wants to meet up. Cough, being serious, Mami would actually be a pretty good contact.

Hmm… I still think it'd be hilarious if Ashley Taylor popped up to lay the smack down on the ABB, because a weebaboo white girl would be immensely ironic.
 
I started writing this while the actual story chapter was giving me headaches, and finished it before I did the same for the fight against Katarina. So, enjoy a double update!
Is that a Mami head joke I see? Is Taylor going to get a head full of Mami? Or maybe that's a head less of Mami.
Oh hey, Murder-Suicide Girl wants to meet up. Cough, being serious, Mami would actually be a pretty good contact.
Taylor could always use another unstable blonde friend. She can collect a ton of blonde friends. Rachel, multiple personalities; Lisa, unable to shut up; Riley, a crazy biologist with a terrifying case of enfant terrible.
 
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Probably a question of, yes they are obviously connected somehow, but to jump straight to thinking Soul Gem + X amount of Grief = Grief Seed/Witch is sort of hazardous in the way that if they consider the possibility, they'll search for a different one because it is a conclusion too horrible to reach. There are already alternate explanations for Witches and Soul Gems and their connections that Kyubey is implying whenever he talks about Witches and Megucas. Witches = Curses and Megucas = Wishes of humanity and Incubators introducing themselves as Messengers of Magic implies an almost immune response type situation where Humanity's subconsciousness/magic sends Kyubey to recruit megucas to fight against witches preying upon humans.

That seems to be their thing, huh? Deliberately let the Meguca make wrong assumptions and just hope none of them are suspicious enough to question the connection between Soul Gem & Grief Seed.

Like, yeah, it isn't at all obvious Grief Seeds are corrupted Soul Gems but I still think the bizarre similarities would be suspicious enough for Taylor to question things.

I just don't like the idea "no one in canon figured it out" as a justification, as that's implying things can't be learned unless others already do.

Sure, it'll probably be a trial for Taylor to get an explanation anywhere close to the truth, but I'm skeptical she wouldn't try to investigate whatever she could before making a Contract.
 
That seems to be their thing, huh? Deliberately let the Meguca make wrong assumptions and just hope none of them are suspicious enough to question the connection between Soul Gem & Grief Seed.

Like, yeah, it isn't at all obvious Grief Seeds are corrupted Soul Gems but I still think the bizarre similarities would be suspicious enough for Taylor to question things.

I just don't like the idea "no one in canon figured it out" as a justification, as that's implying things can't be learned unless others already do.

Sure, it'll probably be a trial for Taylor to get an explanation anywhere close to the truth, but I'm skeptical she wouldn't try to investigate whatever she could before making a Contract.
It's a matter of asking the right questions and watching the wording and implications. If Taylor has been told about how Kyubey always speaks in lawyer, she might have a chance as long as she keeps doubting each conclusion she reaches and doesn't just stop when she is satisfied with an explanation. I don't think Kyubey will try all that hard to keep the truth a secret as Taylor has the sort of personality that would allow her to contract despite the drawbacks. Plus with her sort of morals, she'll probably just wish for something world-changing if she can't think of something that's worth enough to her personally that she'll ignore all the good she could do with a wish and just break her Soul Gem if it starts to fill up too much. This is the Taylor who'll fight through despair, even when she thinks a situation is hopeless, she'll keep on fighting no matter what after all.
 
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I wonder if the rest of the Quintet is around.

That kind depends on a lot, as it's a good chance Madoka/Homura/Sayaka died because they didn't have Meguca Powers to escape the destruction Leviathan caused.

Like, realistically there should be other survivors, and honestly Mami & Kyouko would of had zero non-Meguca to worry about.

So nothing holding them down, they could focus purely on their own safety. The Pleiades Saints probably survived Leviathan, but their biggest problem was always themselves.

Ashley Taylor, being an American, should definitely be alive unless she's made some past Endbringer victim.

Any Meguca outside of Leviathan's destruction of Kyushu should probably be fine, and active Meguca would of had the highest chances of escaping alive.
 
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That kind depends on a lot, as it's a good chance Madoka/Homura/Sayaka died because they didn't have Meguca Powers to escape the destruction Leviathan caused.

Like, realistically there should be other survivors, and honestly Mami & Kyouko would of had zero non-Meguca to worry about.

So nothing holding them down, they could focus purely on their own safety. The Pleiades Saints probably survived Leviathan, but their biggest problem was always themselves.

Ashley Taylor, being an American, should definitely be alive unless she's made some past Endbringer victim.

Any Meguca outside of Leviathan's destruction of Kyushu should probably be fine, and active Meguca would of had the highest chances of escaping alive.

Mitakihara is located up near Sendai and Kamihama is even further north than that. Leviathan wouldn't have been anywhere close.
(The weather reports from MR season 2 confirm this)
 
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I wonder how many people here caught me foreshadowing Mami. I also wonder how many people recognized Kyouko when I sneakily introduced her at The Lounge.

Oh hey, Murder-Suicide Girl wants to meet up. Cough, being serious, Mami would actually be a pretty good contact.

Mami is...

... How do I put this?

Mami's problems are, first, that she suffers from a quite literally crippling amount of loneliness. It says something about her that her more impressive feats come from timelines where she does have friends. Second is the guilt she feels from her wish; she could've wished to save everyone in the car with her, but instead her wish was to save herself. It's this guilt that drives her to commit herself to being a magical girl as much as she does.

At the same time... Well, if you wanted to know what the magical girl equivalent of canon Taylor is in terms of creative use of powers, all you have to do is look at Mami Tomoe. The girl's magical power is making ribbons, and if she's not the most fiercesome Puella Magi in the series (excluding the two who ascended), it's not by much.

There's also that bit in Rebellion where Mami matches Homura blow-for-blow and then out-gambits her by making a copy of herself out of ribbons.

Is that a Mami head joke I see? Is Taylor going to get a head full of Mami? Or maybe that's a head less of Mami.

Let's not get ahead of ourselves here, she's barely arrived in the plot!

:V

Taylor could always use another unstable blonde friend. She can collect a ton of blonde friends. Rachel, multiple personalities; Lisa, unable to shut up; Riley, a crazy biologist with a terrifying case of enfant terrible.

Alice is cherry blonde, so that's another one for the pile.

Although something tells me Taylor would have to fight Best Girl to get her Mami.

(At one point, someone will write some sort of Crisis of Infinite Taylors, and all the blondes shall meet.)

It's a matter of asking the right questions and watching the wording and implications. If Taylor has been told about how Kyubey always speaks in lawyer, she might have a chance as long as she keeps doubting each conclusion she reaches and doesn't just stop when she is satisfied with an explanation. I don't think Kyubey will try all that hard to keep the truth a secret as Taylor has the sort of personality that would allow her to contract despite the drawbacks. Plus with her sort of morals, she'll probably just wish for something world-changing if she can't think of something that's worth enough to her personally that she'll ignore all the good she could do with a wish and just break her Soul Gem if it starts to fill up too much. This is the Taylor who'll fight through despair, even when she thinks a situation is hopeless, she'll keep on fighting no matter what after all.

You know, it's been a while since we've seen Kyuubey. What has that fluffball been up to, I wonder?

/人‿‿人\

Mitakihara is located up near Sendai and Kamihama is even further north than that. Leviathan wouldn't have been anywhere close.

One thing to point out about Mitakihara is that, even if it didn't get slapped by Leviathan or Walpurgisnacht, it's a lot like Brockton bay in that they're both port cities in a world with Leviathan in it. Maritime trade is kaput, to put it mildly, and the economy of places which depend on it is either stone-cold dead or on the way there.

Brockton Bay is a hellhole de facto divvied up by gangs, but it has a mostly-functioning local, state, and federal government behind it, and all that institutional power to prop it up.

Mitakihara... doesn't. And is that much worse for it as a result.



...

You know what? I'm just gonna say it; the more you've mentioned Ashley Taylor, the less I wanted her in my fic. I was gonna put her in as a minor character at one point, but she's now approaching "might get mentioned in the casualty list of an Endbringer battle" .

*gets poked in the back by Imp. With a knife*

"What is the magic word?"

"... can I look at least?"

Sorry I didn't answer this, but here's some more potential responses from Sarah:

"Abracadabra?"

"Hey, you can't just keep all of that to yourself!"

"Sorry! Forgot you were a thing again."
 
You know what? I'm just gonna say it; the more you've mentioned Ashley Taylor, the less I wanted her in my fic. I was gonna put her in as a minor character at one point, but she's now approaching "might get mentioned in the casualty list of an Endbringer battle" .

Sorry, she'd just seemed hilarious, I really wasn't trying to be annoying. She really doesn't deserve that just because I did stupid annoying things. I just wanted to offer what seemed like a neat idea, I'm just really sorry.

I wonder how many people here caught me foreshadowing Mami. I also wonder how many people recognized Kyouko when I sneakily introduced her at The Lounge.

Where was Mami foreshadowed? Like, I'm kind of curious?
 
Mami's problems are, first, that she suffers from a quite literally crippling amount of loneliness. It says something about her that her more impressive feats come from timelines where she does have friends. Second is the guilt she feels from her wish; she could've wished to save everyone in the car with her, but instead her wish was to save herself. It's this guilt that drives her to commit herself to being a magical girl as much as she does.

At the same time... Well, if you wanted to know what the magical girl equivalent of canon Taylor is in terms of creative use of powers, all you have to do is look at Mami Tomoe. The girl's magical power is making ribbons, and if she's not the most fiercesome Puella Magi in the series (excluding the two who ascended), it's not by much.
Driven by loneliness and guilt? You're just repeating yourself when you say she's the magical girl version of Taylor a paragraph later.
One thing to point out about Mitakihara is that, even if it didn't get slapped by Leviathan or Walpurgisnacht, it's a lot like Brockton bay in that they're both port cities in a world with Leviathan in it. Maritime trade is kaput, to put it mildly, and the economy of places which depend on it is either stone-cold dead or on the way there.
Well, Mitakihara also has to deal with the flood (no pun intended) of refugees from the island Leviathan did sink, which I'm sure tanked the Japanese economy pretty heavily.
 
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Where was Mami foreshadowed? Like, I'm kind of curious?

Mami:
You don't jump out of your skin. You almost do, and whirl around to find Alice grinning at you. She's significantly more scuffed up than she was when she burst into the Lounge, but she doesn't seem to care about that much, judging from the bird-shaped familiar in her arms, wrapped up in a net. You note that there's a yellow ribbon tied around it's beak, holding it shut.

And here's Kyouko "best girl" Sakura:
Just like Missy said, there's not a lot of people around; one redhead laid down on the loveseat, fast asleep and untransformed, and two more girls resting on the beanbags. You get stares from the last two as you walk in, but you can mostly ignore them, instead focusing on making your way towards the "bar" at the end of the room.
Behind you, the two girls who had been casting suspicious eyes towards you scramble to get out of the way as the flying creature divebombs them, and the redhead who had been sleeping is now on the floor, cursing in something that isn't english.
"... Should we help?" Taylor pipes up, flinching when something cracks, and Alice starts getting shouted at in what sounds like Japanese.


Sorry, she'd just seemed hilarious, I really wasn't trying to be annoying. She really doesn't deserve that just because I did stupid annoying things. I just wanted to offer what seemed like a neat idea, I'm just really sorry.

Apology accepted.

Driven by loneliness and guilt? You're just repeating yourself when you say she's the magical girl version of Taylor a paragraph later.

She really is, right down to having family member(s) die in a car accident. Although I imagine that Taylor would have a couple of objections to someone saying that Mami is basically identical to her.

A couple of very prominent objections.

A-Hem. :V

Well, Mitakihara also has to deal with the flood (no pun intended) of refugees from the island Leviathan did sink, which I'm sure tanked the Japanese economy pretty heavily.

Yeah, basically.
 
Why not just have Ashley Taylor be the Greg Veder of magical girls? Basically, have her be a weaboo who thinks japan is an anime, because if she's going to be a weaboo, might as well have her as a funny one. She can even accidentally offend Lung on PHO while she's at it. If you don't like her that much, just throw her away at the Brockton Leviathan fight. Rather, why not just have her replace Skitter-Taylor at the first Lung fight. You could even write an omake about her trying to get an autograph from Lung (and accidentally crippling him).
 
In which Taylor has an awkward conversation.
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Gestalt
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You are Taylor Hebert, and you are exhausted.

The alarm clock is blaring from your nightstand, and for a long minute you just lie on your bed, staring at the celiling, and the the exposed electrical wiring there. You roll to one side, and now you stare at the clock, and the time being shown on its blurry display; the idea of skipping school is so, so tempting. Fuck Emma. Fuck Winslow. Just lie back down and sleep.

Of course, you then think of what might happen as a result of that. The familiar concern of Dad finding out that something is wrong is joined by the possibility of Rachel getting worried and... well, that's an entirely different sort of worry. Especially now that you've seen what Rachel can do.

The alarm continues to blare, and you numbly turn over and slap on the button to silence it. Against your better wishes, you throw off the covers, painstakingly sit up and then, moving gingerly, you climb out of bed. You feel awful; sore in places you didn't think could even get sore, and... you have no idea how much sleep you got but it was clearly not enough. A miserable groan escapes your throat, and you paw at the bedside table for your glasses --no, those are your old pair, you can tell- there you go.

You look down at yourself. You're in the clothes you were wearing last night, having been just too tired to change out of them, and you suspect that the only reason you're under the covers is because either Rachel or Sarah tucked you in.

Eventually, you decide to change clothes. The process takes longer than it should've, especially when you realize that you've put everything on backwards, but you do leave your room looking merely somewhat worse than usual. Dad always puts some coffee before he leaves, and there should be-

"Morning Taylor."

You say something that might've been "Good Morning" to Dad. Where were you? Yes, there should be a-.

Wait.

Run that by yourself again.

"...Dad?" you ask, blinking owlishly at the man standing at the stove. He gives you a smile; it's not the same smile he had from before Mom died, more strained and forced and not quite reaching the eyes.

"Morning meeting got pushed back," he tells you, answering the question you weren't sure you could get out. "So, I... thought I could leave a little later." He glances at the stove. There's a pan there, and a pancake sizzling away. "Spend a little time together."

Like we used to, goes unsaid. The reminder stings, but not so much that you can bring yourself to make an excuse, so you sit down at the table.

Breakfast is only a little awkward. Dad asks questions; about school ("Fine," you say, which is almost the truth), about how you're feeling ("Better, actually," which more truthful). You make small talk, about the Docks ("I think we're not doing too bad," he tells you, and you can see the tiredness in his eyes), and about going-ons in the city ("Heard the Wards got a new member. Weld, I think?").

He asks about you being so tired. Well, what he actually does is comment that you look like you had a late night.

"Just doing a project for school," you tell him. It's the first acceptable thing that comes to mind. "It just... took a lot longer than I expected."

"Must've been a pretty tough one," he muses, "Are you doing it all on your own?"

"No," you answer at once, almost on reflex. "It's uh... I'm in a team."

"With Emma?"

You almost choke on a mouthful of pancake. Dad makes a move to get up, but you wave him away, managing to swallow.

He doesn't know. Of course he doesn't know. You haven't told him anything about Emma and the bullying and... well, everything, and the one good thing about the distance that had grown between Dad and you is that it was very easy to continue not telling him. Because he can't know.

"N-no," you manage to force out, "It's someone else. Her name's Rachel. Rachel Zoranski. She's... Uh..." You pause, wondering how to explain Rachel to your Dad. Panic starts to bubble up when you realize that just about every aspect of your relationship with Rachel involves things you would really rather he never learn about.

"She transferred over the winter and sort of just... became my friend?" you continue, hiding a wince at how lame that sounds, even to your ears. "She's nice."

Dad stares at you for a moment. Then he smiles.

"That's good!" he tells you. He reaches over and gives your shoulder a squeeze. "Just, er..." A pause. "She get along with Emma okay?" He asks.

No, she's basically waging a medium-sized war on Barnes on my behalf. That actual gunfire hasn't been involved is a minor miracle.

"Yes," you lie instead. "Why do you ask?"

There's some poorly-concealed relief on Dad's face. "Emma been your friend since kindergarten," he explains, "She doesn't strike me as a jealous person, but..." A shrug.

You nod, making a vaguely agreeing noise. Spearing another bit of pancake on your fork, you stuff it into your mouth. Focus on that and not how surreal it feels to present this falsehood to Dad. As if your house was in some alternate reality where-.

You abandon that train of thought. No.

Breakfast continues in silence, leaving you no way to distract yourself from what's raging in your mind. You have to tell him. You can't tell him. This is cruel. This is a mercy. This is ridiculous. This has gone on too long. It can hold a little longer, while you... What?

The idea of wishing that Emma Barnes was your friend again has crossed your mind. It's a regular visitor to your List, and every time you end up crossing it off, once the painful, nostalgic longing passes. Only for it to find itself there again, later.

Breakfast finishes quickly after that. Dad and you say your goodbyes, and soon enough you're out the door. Step over the broken step on your way down, and start walking.

It takes you five minutes to realize you're heading in the completely opposite direction, and you sheepishly turn back. You have the feeling that this'll be a long day.

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Duck!

Down you go. The wooden bat whistles through the space your head occupied a fraction of a second ago. Stand back up, step forward and bury your fist in his stomach. He's got at least two years and close to a foot on you, and none of that matters when he doubles over, the wind forced out of his lungs. An elbow between his eyes sends him falling backwards.

Dust yourself. Glare at the other wanna-be gangsters, who just watched someone get reduced to a moaning, insensate heap on the floor.

"Seriously?" you growl, "Again? You got your asses beat yesterday and wanna do this again!?"

One of them spits into the ground. This one, you realize, is not one of the ABB prospects from Winslow. He's older. Meaner. Moves differently.

Not a wanna-be gangster. He is, as they would say, the real deal.

Your name is Rachel, you're a Magical Girl, and you have the distinct feeling that this'll be a long day.

... It's gonna get worse, isn't it?

[] Yes. Much worse.
 
That took a lot longer than it should've. Sorry everyone!

Rachel, you live in a fused PMMM/Worm setting pre-Madokami's Ascension. It can and will always get worse.

Shhh! She hasn't figured that part out yet!

:V

Dammit Tay, at least tell him you and Emma aren't close anymore.

Taylor is the best at not telling her dad about things, and she's not about to stop now. Poor Danny, though.

Anyway, comments and criticism and general interaction is most welcome!
 
Anyway, comments and criticism and general interaction is most welcome!
Honestly, this chapter felt like nothing happened. There's an awkward conversation where neither says anything important (which is correct given their prior characterization but still is kinda boring), and the very start of a fight scene that's effectively a continuation of their previous fight with very little chance of anything going differently this time.

It's all very reasonable progression from before and would be a fine start to a chapter but as a chapter in and of itself it feels incomplete.

That being said it's good setup for the future and I continue to look forward to more.
 
Status update (25/11/2021)



I'd like to publically thank @Jefardi for comissioning this, and the artist, Almaadst, for her excellent work. This isn't the first time I've gotten artwork for something I've written (once for A Hero, another for Nameless Quest... all were for PMMM things, oddly enough), but it's impossible to not feel ecstatic about it.

As much as I wished I could follow that up with the next chapter, I've been very rather busy IRL as of late, so I haven't been able to write all that much. That being said, I'll try and get something up between now and Monday, so definitely stay tuned for that.

Anyway, happy Thanksgiving for all my northern friends!
 
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