New general / default rule for building up backgrounds through weekly action: https://docs.google.com/document/d/...AIYl1cy50KEw2y75o/edit#heading=h.v0msb8boqaer

Reasonable. Seems a bit easy to me, though. Just takes time, and not even that much time; Exalts can generate a lot of successes if they put their minds to it.

Then again, most Backgrounds probably should be pretty easy for an Exalt who's willing to put in the time. If I have Socialize 5, and I spend a month just talking to people, I really should end up with some solid Contacts.

Perhaps there could be a difficulty per roll, representing the challenge of impressing the gatekeeper / defeating the rival. If it increased as the rating did, perhaps along with an increasingly long time per roll, it'd provide a reason for characters to stop before hitting 5.
 
Gives me Color Fixer energy. The Cerulean Wing or something
Honestly works pretty well! You don't hit Color without being a bit *insane* about it. This includes Red Mist as she is very not normal by every single standard in the city. If I plopped her into the city she would use fancy time bullets that mimic the time assassination tools. Limbus Spoilers There is some devices that force people to experience thousands of years in seconds.

Actual weapons would just be a fancy dagger and her bare fucking hands.
 
Perhaps there could be a difficulty per roll, representing the challenge of impressing the gatekeeper / defeating the rival.
No, the specific-NPC challenge is separate from the weekly roll. When Tepet Arada claimed the daiklaive Restless Wind, dramatic final part of that was presenting the severed head of a noteworthy Anathema... but he also had to do a lot of administrative work involving innovative army logistics as setup. If he'd bungled the logistics and destroyed the army on the way there, but somehow won the duel anyway, his parents wouldn't have been nearly as impressed.

Higher base difficulty on the roll would correspond more to "institutional bias" sorts of problems - personal stuff like scandals, cultural or linguistic mismatch, visible membership in disfavored category (gender, ethnicity, species), etc.
 
I've said it before but I really like her design. I don't know ebough about art to explain why but its really vool and evocative.

Also what is color fixer?
Its a Project Moon term, from a series of their games like Lobotomy Corporation, Library of Ruina, Limbus Company etc. Basically some insanely dystopian city and mercs get ranked from 9-1. 1 Being the best. But some people are so crazy good they get their own color name and are unbound from many traditional limitations.

Your commissions are consistently one of the best parts of this thread, thanks for always sharing em.
Thanks!!!!! 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏

Always worried I'm getting a little spammy. I'm not particularly good at writing (Working on that). So I like to show my vision of Creation through paid art. Have to give big thanks to @Renu as their adept at reading my brain rot and making initial designs for me.
 
Don't worry about spamming; fandoms like this one live and die on activity. Accelerator was unironically a positive force despite dragging the average post quality down more than you could ever hope to.

No, the specific-NPC challenge is separate from the weekly roll. When Tepet Arada claimed the daiklaive Restless Wind, dramatic final part of that was presenting the severed head of a noteworthy Anathema... but he also had to do a lot of administrative work involving innovative army logistics as setup. If he'd bungled the logistics and destroyed the army on the way there, but somehow won the duel anyway, his parents wouldn't have been nearly as impressed.

Higher base difficulty on the roll would correspond more to "institutional bias" sorts of problems - personal stuff like scandals, cultural or linguistic mismatch, visible membership in disfavored category (gender, ethnicity, species), etc.

The writeup makes the scenes sound pretty pro forma, though.
 
Might as well post some other stuff I gotten of Ishamel, the School Fish Exigent.

This would be his traveling outfit when he is walking from City to City on the Blessed Isle.

Artist

Imagine this, your a Dragonblood pretty far in your days. Worked in the legion, did your time over seas. Finally get to have a relaxing time focusing on your creative side. That is until a Black Helm comes knocking and politely asks for your help. Of course you answer, these folks tended to be competent and if they needed your help than it must be pretty important.

So you go down to the Black Helm station and find this guy trying to sell custom made perfumes with 'therapeutic' effects to the extremely unamused Black Helms. When asked how the perfumes smells. The Blue haired exigent will take a moment in deep thought, and then blast it in their own face. Some how getting into both their lungs and eyes sending them into a racking coughing fit that lasts a uncomfortable amount of time. To which he finally answers 'Kinda blue I guess'.

This is of course very strange behavior. So you carefully interrogate him. He gets the name of the city wrong four times in a row, and seemed to have gotten east and west mixed up as some point. Was he buying for time? Trying to lead you on? Making fun of your perhaps? So you spend hours speaking with him, and the entire time he takes it in good nature and keeps trying to sell you things. The local monk has to leave half way through cause Ishamel was so mildly annoying that he felt is faith straining against just throttling him.

Eventually you come to a startling discovery. He was not in fact a spy or someone against the immaculate faith. But in fact kind of air headed with more wits than good for them and none of the actual brain to capitalize it. Eventually you sigh and tell them to fuck off.

This immediately happens again the next city over.

I have a very strong vision of my Exigent LMFAO. He actually has okay Int and very good wits, he is just... like that.
 
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The writeup makes the scenes sound pretty pro forma, though.
Depends what you're going for, and who might prefer you not attain it. Jeremiah Johnson gets to punch bears, Indiana Jones gets to match wits with other scavenger lords, neither of which is typically risk-free. Somebody trying to set up a small business might face tax-and-permit bureaucrats, street gangs running protection rackets, or other businesses competing for the same customers. Seeking out a copy of the Broken-Winged Crane? Probably going to encounter some crazed yozi-cultists, and the kind of people who try to thwart them. DBs in secondary school try to impress professors and distant relatives, befriend or humiliate classmates, with career prospects at stake.
If the rival is too strong for you to beat in a direct confrontation, or the gatekeeper wants something you're unable or unwilling to give, that turns into a broader adventure hook. Lot of the plot of The Godfather, or Ghostbusters for that matter, is a succession of "here's somebody interfering with your organization's growth, what are you going to do about it?" puzzles. Glover & Glover
Point of making it sound somewhat pro forma is that such incremental progress doesn't necessarily need to involve a multi-session sidequest every single time, which @Exthalion can attest is a trap some STs fall into. Sometimes, next necessary step toward ruling the city with an iron fist is a simple matter of settling tax rates on non-green-leafed herbs Miamaska - C04P28 ...thus reassuring some key decisionmaker that you've actually got enough patience and follow-through to handle the responsibility. Miamaska - C06P42
 
Amazing fit. I really love the clothing design and the dynamism of the pose.
Thanks! I actually did a fair amount of research into historical dress (primarily sumerian but there is some ottoman influence and even a bit of academic regalia as well) when designing his look. Wanted to make sure I had a design which reflected his thematics (long story hosrt he's your typical Mad Scientist out to rule the world because he thinks he can do better but tranlsated into fantasy)

EDIT: The various bits of scienfiction flavoring where all the artist. I hadn't thought in those terms but I think they came out really well and will probably be a part of his design moving forward.
 
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Oh, we're sharing commissions!
Alia!
Ein!
Kaiya! (I stole her name lol)

And Patricia!
Spoilered for size.
 

Dramatis Personae - The Imperial Palace I


A city-within-a-city, the abode of The Scarlet Empress is The Realm in microcosm; a locus of power, culture, excess, intrigue, and wonder. In Creation, it is surpassed in grandeur only by the now-ruined abodes of the First Age god-kings. One could spend a lifetime in its walls and still not know everything about it, and the many beings, human or otherwise, who inhabit its precincts. Here are but a few of its myriad residents:

Even in the Imperial Palace, floors need to be scrubbed, kitchens must be staffed, and clothes must be laundered. For this and other menial tasks, the palace employs The Ostiarii, a small army of servants. Culled from slave children taken very young or born within the palace, they are indoctrinated to serve the Queen of All Creation with utmost discretion and obedience, each marked with a coiling dragon tattoo around their necks as well as submitting to certain sorcerous procedures to ensure their loyalty. It is popularly rumored that some Ostiarii are the Empress' personal assassins, spies, or lovers, but most display no special skills beyond being particularly well trained servants. According to the Realm's legal code, the Ostiarii are not precisely slaves, they have rights and draw a salary, but to leave the Imperial City they require special dispensation and are only eligible for retirement after years of indenture and a lengthy approval process. Having known little else, many remain in the palace and Imperial City their entire lives, forming a small caste of professional attendants who know the Imperial Palace better than most Dynasts. With the Scarlet Empress missing, the Great Houses have attempted to suborn the Ostiarii corps or insert their own agents into its ranks, with varying degrees of success.

Tokay-Of-The-Morning is the Ostiarios in charge of the southwest kitchens. A steel-eyed matron of far eastern extraction, she was born in the Palace and only leaves its walls to oversee food shipment deliveries. Her dour disposition belies a student of the culinary arts with a flair for exotic ingredients and flamboyant presentation. While she may be a mere servant, within her kitchens, she is god, and brooks disrespect from none save the Empress. Tokay is allowed to freely speak her mind in front of dynasts without fear of reprisal, a special privilege granted to her years ago by the Scarlet Empress after Tokay nearly died while foiling a poisoning attempt. More than one neophyte courtier has found themselves upbraided by the iron-willed head chef for attempting to rush her art or being rude to the other staff.

The soldier known only as Vanguard Captain Nine is one of the highest ranking Silent Legionnaires, currently assigned to guard the Empress's now sealed personal apartments. Distinguishable from the rank and file Silent Legionnaires only by a single red feather that adorns the crest of her helm, Vanguard Captain Nine has been known to deliver sealed scrolls, evidently written by the Empress before her departure, to various personages within the palace. She has a habit of doing this at times and places that seemingly enhances the dramatic effect, but her granite-faced expression displays no hint of the humor that lies beneath, if it indeed exists

Musicaa Daxandrios was the Empress's latest paramour, a foreign princess who visited the Imperial City shortly after her homeland became a satrapy and caught the Empress' eye. Their affair was a torrid melange of transactional politicking, carnal desire, and odd mutual understanding, at least that's Musicaa's read of the situation. Without the Empress however, the Threshold princess is without allies in a strange land, seen at best as inconsequential and at worst as a potential rival or pawn by the ambitious scions of the Scarlet Dynasty. Now, whatever promises Musicaa received from the Empress, genuine or otherwise, have gone up in smoke and she desperately seeks help extricating herself from the viper's nest of the capital.

The tea master Gregarious Starling is a monk who pursues one of the few indulgences allowed to him to its utmost. One of the leading experts on all things tea, his personal collection of blends and teaware is decadent enough to earn him censure if he didn't have imperial favor, and an ear to some of the most important meetings on the continent. The Immaculate Order tolerates his minor corruption in exchange for him spying on those who partake of his tea, and lobbying for the Palace Sublime under the guise of imparting wise aphorisms during tea ceremonies.

The savant Cathak Eveden was kept by the Empress as an artificer and amusement. Known for his ingenious clockwork, Eveden largely limits his ambitions to fantastical timepieces and windup toys which grace the sitting rooms of the Imperial Palace and the estates of particularly wealthy dynasts. A devotee of an obscure craft deity he calls The Great Maker, most think him a harmless eccentric whose only talent lies in making entertaining gadgets, a misconception for which he is eminently grateful. The last time the Empress commissioned Eveden to build a weapon, he did not speak for three months after its completion and subsequent interment in one of the sealed vaults beneath the palace.

At the age of 362, the retired outcaste general Yuda of Tumed is kept alive only by anagathic medicines and spite, confined to an artifact wheelchair by terrible war wounds. A self-admitted dog of war, in her youth Yuda spilled oceans of blood in the Empress's name and would spill oceans more if her ruined body were still capable of campaigning. As things stand she's been relegated to the role of imperial advisor and general curmudgeon to the other palace residents. The decrepit fire aspect speaks of the Empress with a bizarre mixture of worshipful adoration and barely disguised hatred, viewing her residence in the Imperial Palace as both reward for years of loyal service and an insult to her wish to die drowning in the blood of her enemies.

The seemingly nocturnal Stratus Amadha is thought by most to be a patrician doctor who happens to keep very odd hours. In truth she is one of the rare Dragon-Blooded to be born with an aptitude for necromancy, kept on retainer by the Empress as a personal consultant regarding matters of deathly aspect. Much of the air aspect's time at the palace has been spent researching ways to cheat death. Amahda's odd hours aren't just a matter of preference, but a side effect of a longevity ritual she performed upon herself; the sun makes her skin quite literally crawl. In recent years, she's been sometimes glimpsed heading down to the docks to make sacrifices to strange powers and names unknown to more orthodox occultists.

Sesus Yanan is the keeper of the imperial koi ponds. An introverted soul wholly unsuited for his family's cutthroat politicking and warmongering, he's more comfortable around animals than people, and enjoys his office for the opportunities it gives him to isolate himself from high society. Ornamental fish and waterfowl are one of the few subjects that will get the water aspect out of his shell, and if asked about them he'll talk for hours on end about their numerous positive qualities. Averse to politics, he hardly notices the Great Houses positioning themselves for war.

For generations, the door to the Plum-Snow-Pheasant Chamber has been guarded by the mysterious duo known as The Nashtarim. Towering figures clad in obscuring greathelms and black armor, wielding long-hafted warhammers of alien design, each Nashtari serves a twelve hour shift standing absolutely motionless in front of their guard post, exchanging places with their counterpart only at midnight. Where they go during their breaks isn't commonly known, they exhibit the uncanny ability to shake anybody attempting to tail them. Some mistake them for Silent Legionnaires from a distance, but the Nashtarim stand a head taller than even those mute giants and have been known to issue terse, monosyllabic warnings to those attempting to enter the Plum-Snow-Pheasant Chamber unauthorized.

A devil bound by sorceries and jade bands, The Leucrotine wanders the palace freely in the form of a striped hyena. It was the Empress's habit to keep the beast as an oracle, for it possesses the gift of clairvoyance and issues prophecies in dactylic hexameter. Long leashed by spells and forbidden to do physical harm to anybody, the palace staff keep it well fed with zebra meat and mead to prevent it from causing too much mischief. When bored, it has been known to deliver false prophecies, issued in the wrong poetic verse, that can lead naive visitors astray.
 
Oh, we're sharing commissions!
Alia!
Ein!
Kaiya! (I stole her name lol)

And Patricia!
Spoilered for size.
ooh, most of these are new to me! Share me thwir stories (save Loki, Loki I know)
 
Oh, we're sharing commissions!
Alia!
Ein!
Kaiya! (I stole her name lol)

And Patricia!
Spoilered for size.
>be me
>working on a concept for a RCW game
>starts with a wedding between Cathak and Mnemon scions as suggested in Heirs
>see this post

Well I know who the Cathak bride is now, stealing! :p (I kid, I'd at least ask first and *definitely* would not use someone else's commission as anything but inspiration)

Loklear looks mischevious... also when I initially looked at her I thought the sewn-on sleeves were sewed-on arms and thought 'Liminal?' before reading the name.

I like Ein, reminds me a bit of my Delzhan assassin. The cloak looks almost like tattered wings and from the look on his(her? their?) face, the situation is dire.

Alia looks beautiful, confident and impossibly smug. I'm not sure whether to fall in love or punch her.

Patricia looks like she won a staring contest with the abyss and I mean that in the best possible way. Kinda reminds me of Malzahar for some reason.
 
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