Game of the Year: A Naruto Quest

Currently burning my way through this, on page 63 now.

Please tell me that, even if it was wrong, people at some point remember that Kakashi literally means Scarecrow. Aka, what a strawman is.
 
btw, the accidental parralels set up with My hero Academia (the outsider boy being taught How2Hero(Ninja) by the best puncher in the world) are great, since I started listening to You Say Run for the fight update.
 
Guys, seriously, we only have a few hours to out-vote the Write-In option that results in Daisuke castrating himself. I highly doubt they were trying to be sneaky not using the proper [IRON] tag, but I rather not risk that vote actually happening.

Though speaking of "Write-Ins"... How much is things settled on over in Iron? Because I kind of want to try writing a omake regarding the Iron Heir being a girl who keeps overhearing rumors and whatnot.
Adhoc vote count started by Kkutlord on Oct 11, 2018 at 1:54 PM, finished with 2328 posts and 121 votes.

Adhoc vote count started by Kkutlord on Oct 11, 2018 at 2:12 PM, finished with 2328 posts and 121 votes.
 
Guys, seriously, we only have a few hours to out-vote the Write-In option that results in Daisuke castrating himself. I highly doubt they were trying to be sneaky not using the proper [IRON] tag, but I rather not risk that vote actually happening.

Though speaking of "Write-Ins"... How much is things settled on over in Iron? Because I kind of want to try writing a omake regarding the Iron Heir being a girl who keeps overhearing rumors and whatnot.

It has one vote, just like the 'keep it but hide it' vote, it'd be pretty darn ridiculous if it was actually a thing.
 
It is listed under the Winning Tasks group when one checks the vote tally. So it doesn't seem to matter it only has one vote.
Adhoc vote count started by Kkutlord on Oct 11, 2018 at 2:28 PM, finished with 2330 posts and 121 votes.

Adhoc vote count started by Kkutlord on Oct 11, 2018 at 2:32 PM, finished with 2333 posts and 123 votes.
 
Annnd, caught up.

I'm not surprised, but I am sad we didn't grind at the Tokei stat more. Granted, this was pretty much inevitable the instant Daisuke agreed to be a ninja (even just training had Tokei start to disassociate himself mentally).

[X] [IRON] Nothing. You will do nothing about the Land of Iron. They're far away, and the best revenge is to forget about them entirely.

Frankly, I don't want that sort of psychological lever in our head.

[X] [SWORD] You will use it.

Use it. Because frankly Tokei was still kind of the closest think Dai has to a dad right now. To send it to the family is to invite trouble, to not use it is the equivalent of letting it rot/disrespecting the blade, and to destroy it is to do the equivalent of destroying his father figure's soul. No, the only thing to do is if there's any care is to use the blade.

(also, "a samurai's sword is his soul" combined with how easily it slew Tokei kinda has implication there, even if it is just a phrase)

also, loot.

Also, well:

THE BLADE OF YOUR DEATH LIES IN YOUR HANDS
DESTINY AND THE FEARS OF MEN, BOTH
SOUGHT TO END YOU WITH IT
YET YE STEPPED FORWARD AND SPURNED THEIR HOPES
YE TOOK THE BLADE AND ENDED YOUR KILLER
CLAIM THE BLADE AND RISE

Yeah, because that's the sort of feeling I'm getting here? IDK.
 
[X] [IRON] They made an assassin of the one you thought was your protector, drove you to kill a man, and hurt your Mother. You will see the entire country burn or be ground beneath your heel.
[X] [SWORD] You will destroy it.
 
No, it has reasonable basis- ie "Can't be a proper heir if I'm incapable of continuing the bloodline". Yet the fact they just typed "Iron" instead of [IRON] is the problem here, so it still counts as a Winning Vote for a Write-In.

I don't really care what anyone does, so long as it doesn't result in Daisuke gruesomely maiming himself.
Adhoc vote count started by Kkutlord on Oct 11, 2018 at 2:36 PM, finished with 2334 posts and 123 votes.
 
It is listed under the Winning Tasks group when one checks the vote tally. So it doesn't seem to matter it only has one vote.
There was no vote for a blank task. It's only in the lead because of the way the tally program works and Ves would have to be an excessively shitty to count one vote for a task that he didn't even call a vote for as one of the winners.
 
[X] [IRON] Nothing. You will do nothing about the Land of Iron. They're far away, and the best revenge is to forget about them entirely.


[X] [SWORD] You will send it to his family.
 
Ignore that vote btw. It's only being counted in the winner because the voter didn't format it right. Unless th majority votes for it, no need to freak out.
 
Hmm... What about my Write-In option of just having Daisuke double down on training and getting stronger? Seems like something he would probably do anyways.
Adhoc vote count started by Kkutlord on Oct 11, 2018 at 2:51 PM, finished with 2338 posts and 124 votes.
 
[X] [IRON] You don't know. Everything is too confusing, moving too quickly right now. You'll tuck your thoughts about everything into a little corner of your mind and ignore them. For now.

[X] [SWORD] You will destroy it.
 
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[X] [IRON] Nothing. You will do nothing about the Land of Iron. They're far away, and the best revenge is to forget about them entirely.



[X] [SWORD] You will use it.
 
[X] [IRON] You don't know. Everything is too confusing, moving too quickly right now. You'll tuck your thoughts about everything into a little corner of your mind and ignore them. For now.
[X] [SWORD] You will use it.

Just realised I hadn't voted!
 
And we're done here.
Adhoc vote count started by Vesvius on Oct 11, 2018 at 3:47 PM, finished with 2341 posts and 127 votes.
 
Aww yeah, sword time.


That reminds me, does Daisuke have BGMs? Because, as distracting as they might sometimes be, they'd be great for sensing the flow of battle or people (maybe he hears dark villain music or something).
 
And now a few messages I didn't get a chance to answer before:
@Vesvius What stats would we need to raise if we wanted to write as a hobby?
You'd have to unlock a different skill through actions. Though honestly, I'd really rather you didn't just from an authorial perspective. It seems like every time voters have the option, voters make my protags authors or people with writing dreams. Just ask Tommy.
Besides the fact it is a Samurai's sword, there are valid reasons to pursue Kenjutsu. One, typically more deadly and more reach than punching. There's gonna be all kinds of Jutsus and Tricks that would be especially dangerous at punching range.

Two, even once we do unlock Charka, having good Kenjutsu would let us avoid unnecessarily wasting Charka. Additionally, it gives us more options for Charka Flow techniques, than just punching people.

Three, we can't even hit Master rank and above without narrative reasons. So building up useful skills now, so we can switch to them once our current focus caps.

Besides, I'm sure we'll be able to spend Personal XP soon enough to artificially boost stats and create Perks. Actually...

@Vesvius: I feel overreaching, but I wanted to make sure you noticed. Besides my above question, I wanted to know if we could create skill-boosting Perks. Like "Gai's Student" accelerating our Taijutsu and Physical development, or "One Strike" giving us a bonus to successfully killing things with the first unsheathed strike of a blade.
And here, one quick note on making your own achievements. You keep bringing this up. I'm going to level with you: you can't make your own achievements like you're thinking. You can pitch achievements sure, and I might use them, but you can't write them yourself. The ones I have posted now are just the start; many more will be coming as things roll on. But no just making up your own.

Second thing: personal XP. Daisuke will be getting some of that soon. But if you want to speed up the process, feel free to reread the mechanics post. More specifically, how to earn more XP that you can spend yourself. I believe it involves entertaining me with fanwork.
Aww yeah, sword time.


That reminds me, does Daisuke have BGMs? Because, as distracting as they might sometimes be, they'd be great for sensing the flow of battle or people (maybe he hears dark villain music or something).

Finally: no, Daisuke does not at this time have BGM. If you want to find some though, feel free! Sounds awesome.

Now that's the old business taken care of. Onto the new stuff. Update is a simple one. Hopefully it'll be out later today.
 
[X] [IRON] You don't know. Everything is too confusing, moving too quickly right now. You'll tuck your thoughts about everything into a little corner of your mind and ignore them. For now.

[X] [SWORD] You will use it.
 
A Samurai's Honor by Magnive (canon)
I believe it involves entertaining me with fanwork.
Would the following qualify? :p

(Also, I'd like to preemptively apologize for some of the language used here, but this is how I think Tokei would think, in these circumstances.)



A Samurai's Honor

"Do you truly understand what's asked of you?"

Tokei has never liked Kanō Magoroku. The man had been granted a position at court by the previous Lord Imagawa after Kanō saved his brother from a bandit ambush, and in the years since then, the man had become more at ease with the battlefield of half-truths and flatteries than that of steel and blood.

Despite that, Tokei held a grudging respect for the man. Not enough to call him a Samurai - for as far as Tokei is aware, Kanō has not practiced with the sword for a decade or even sharpened it - but enough that when a page informed him that "Lord Kanō" wants to speak to him, he had stopped his preparations and come to Kanō's room.

For while Tokei would lay down his life to defend Lord Imagawa from any would-be assassin, he knows that such attackers are not the only ones threatening his Lord, nor are they necessarily the most dangerous. For despite their managing to keep the Shinobi out of their affairs for centuries, the Land of Iron is no stranger to coups, whether they be violent or velvet.

Such threats, instead, are handled by the former Samurai standing in front of him. While Kanō's hands have grown soft, more used to holding teacups than a sword, Tokei knows well that the now mildly chubby man could end his life without lifting a finger. Despite how difficult that is to imagine, as the man picks up a teakettle and gracefully poured two cups of tea, offering one cup to Tokei.

Rather than growling at Kanō's patronizing tone, Tokei takes the offered cup and inclines his head in thanks and acknowledgment of the question. "Yes, Lord Kanō. I am to protect the Lord's concubine and... her son," Tokei considers it a measure of his discipline that he managed to call the whore who had seduced his Lord and stained his honor by giving birth to his bastard child before his proper wife delivered him a son, "while she is in exile, and ensure that no harm befalls them." For no matter his personal opinion, Tokei is sworn to serve his Lord's wishes, and he has seen first-hand the love his Lord harbors for the whore.

He recognizes the look on Kanō's face, as one Tokei himself adopts whenever children flock to him, begging him to teach them his secret techniques. It is a look reserved for those who have not even begun to grasp at what is truly required to succeed at something.

And it is one that makes Tokei grit his teeth, even as Kanō sighs. Rather than speaking immediately, he takes a small sip from his cup, while Tokei pointedly ignores his own.

"That is what Lord Imagawa asked of you, in front of his concubine and the whole court," and based on Kanō's tone of voice, Tokei has no trouble deciphering that the man sees a hidden motivation behind it. "However, despite his love for Minami, it was hardly necessary for him to send you - one of his most loyal and capable Samurai - to guard her. After all, in Leaf, there is little that you could deal with that one of his less capable Samurai could not."

Kanō then shakes his head, sadness showing on his face. "No, my friend, the reason you were selected is that he knows that you will be able to protect his interests, even when doing so would stain your honor, and that you will not let the temptress subvert you." At those words, Tokei found himself straightening, even as his incomprehension showed on his face.

This time, when Kanō drinks from his cup, Tokei finds himself doing so as well, not realizing it until he holds the cup to his lips.

"So long as Daisuke lives, he may be a threat to Lord Imagawa's rightful heir. A faction wishing to displace the Lord's heir might be able to claim that as the firstborn, Daisuke should be the Lord's successor. Unfortunately, the Lord has refused to make sure that this does not happen. Instead, he is trusting you to ensure that this does not come to pass."

"You must ensure that Daisuke does not grow up to become a threat. He must live a quiet life. One without renown and without fanfare. One that ensures that words of his deeds never reaches Iron and that he grows up ignorant of his true lineage." Then, Kanō expression grows severe and his stare piercing, as the other man seems to measure Tokei's worth, giving a nod after several seconds of silent judgment, as if looking for flaws and finding none. "And if he deviates from that path, showing that he may one day be a threat to Lord Imagawa's heir... then you must make sure that never comes to fruition."

As Kanō says those words, he drops his now empty teacup, the expensive porcelain shattering into tiny pieces.

Tokei's eyes open wide and he lets out a shuddering breath. "You're asking me to potentially kill an innocent child." It's not a question. It's not even an accusation. Rather, it's a demand that Kanō looks him in the eyes and says it straight.

And the man does. He raises his eyes from the teacup - as if he had not dropped it on purpose - and looks straight at Tokei. "The succession must be secure. If Daisuke gathers fame and glory, he may threaten the sanctity of the entire Land of Iron. If he is on that road, you must kill him before he can become a threat to Lord Imagawa's children."

Then, he rises and goes to fetch another cup, easily avoiding the porcelain splinters on the floor, and returns to pour himself more tea. As minutes pass by, Kanō appears for all the world to be entirely content simply sitting and enjoying his tea, while Tokei agonizes over the man's words.

For while striking down a child would be dishonorable on its own, this is so much more. For this would be carrying out an assassination in the middle of Leaf. The Shinobi would not tolerate such an action being carried out within their borders. And even if not for the fact that Shinobi would kill him soon after he killed the bastard child, should it come to pass, Tokei's honor would demand that he kill himself. For no matter how necessary it was, he knew how much grief it would cause his Lord. The only way for him to atone would be honorable seppuku.

With a deep sigh, Tokei inclines his head. "I shall do what is required to protect my Lord."
 
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You'd have to unlock a different skill through actions. Though honestly, I'd really rather you didn't just from an authorial perspective. It seems like every time voters have the option, voters make my protags authors or people with writing dreams. Just ask Tommy.

I was mainly asking because a SI I been reading recently wrote stories based on DC and Harry Potter and gotten world popular (under the name Stan Lee). But I'll forget about it.
 
Indeed it would! Take 50 XP, and if you title it, I'll threadmark it. Tell me where you want the XP ASAP please, so I can take it into account.
I'll put it towards Kenjutsu, if that's acceptable? If not, taijutsu. After all, our heritage practically demands that we use a sword!

I'll give it a title in a few minutes. Gotta think of something first.

Also, voting.

[X] [IRON] You don't know. Everything is too confusing, moving too quickly right now. You'll tuck your thoughts about everything into a little corner of your mind and ignore them. For now.

[X] [SWORD] You will use it.

Edit: after reading the mechanics a bit more thoroughly, would it be possible to put it in constitution instead?
 
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I'll put it towards Kenjutsu, if that's acceptable? If not, taijutsu. After all, our heritage practically demands that we use a sword!

I'll give it a title in a few minutes. Gotta think of something first.

Also, voting.

[X] [IRON] You don't know. Everything is too confusing, moving too quickly right now. You'll tuck your thoughts about everything into a little corner of your mind and ignore them. For now.

[X] [SWORD] You will use it.

Edit: after reading the mechanics a bit more thoroughly, would it be possible to put it in constitution instead?
Sure. Constitution it is. 50 XP to it. Also, vote's closed.
 
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