Game of the Year: A Naruto Quest

Hmm... We're almost 20 updates in, yet haven't gotten to use any Narrative XP yet. Do we have to graduate from the Academy first?

Regarding the remaining 40 XP... Honestly, other than ticking off Practiced Swim just for the 12 Practiced Skill Achievement, there's nothing to immediately rank up.
 
@Vesvius, 10 to sense motives and 40 to manipulation. Let's rank up both just in time for Ino time.
Done!

Hmm... We're almost 20 updates in, yet haven't gotten to use any Narrative XP yet. Do we have to graduate from the Academy first?

Regarding the remaining 40 XP... Honestly, other than ticking off Practiced Swim just for the 12 Practiced Skill Achievement, there's nothing to immediately rank up.
Imma level with you here: I kinda forgot I said that that existed. So... I'm going to remove it entirely. I'm really enjoying how this is going so far.
 
So... Our only reward for taking out Tokei, solo, is 1 point of Kenjutsu and a nice yet mundane sword the audience could of easily got rid of? I swear there are underwhelming RPG Bosses like that, but none come to mind. Like, shouldn't we have gotten a Perk at least, or is that similar to the deal with Narrative XP?

Oh, regarding the 40 XP, Escape Artist is a good idea.
 
The difference between special jounin and jounin is huge.
ELITE jounin. Basically Gai, Kakashi and maybe Asuma. A normal jounin would probably average to expert, while special jounin are expert only in their specialization

If you're asking for it, note that using ninjutsu and kenjutsu / taijutsu together is a problem. So, I reccomend asking for a perk ( I think 50 XP was enough for a weak perk) that does something like this :
  • Sealess Mastery : After learning a E-rank ninjutsu with handseals, Daisuke may spend three additional weeks to master that ninjutsu without using any handseals. Only for E-rank ninjutsu.
E rank ninjutsu aren't game breaking, but are very useful even at high levels. Some of their effects like Transformation / Replacement will be very useful to combo with Taijutsu - imagine shaping ourself into a shuriken and demorphing at will once we get close to a foe, or using Replacement's burst of speed to dodge.

E: oh wait, saw your new post. Pls ignore.
it probably wouldn't have been accepted. I think sealless jutsu would come simply as a result of MASTERING the jutsu.

Techniques are graded as follows:
  • Basic (250 XP): You are capable of the technique and can use it comfortably in controlled situations.
  • Intermediate (500 XP): You are far more practiced with the technique, and are comfortable using it outside of the training ground and in live combat situations.
  • Advanced (750 XP): You have honed this technique to a fine edge, and can use it whenever you'd like instinctively.
  • Master (1000 XP): You are the unquestioned king of this technique, and can employ it in ways lesser users can't even comprehend.
a mastered Kawarimi would probably be sealless, and a mastered Transformation would probably be what Naruto does, from his sexy jutsu to changing into shuriken, Akamaru or small rocks.

He actually transformed in Akamaru without handseals i think

Regarding the remaining 40 XP... Honestly, other than ticking off Practiced Swim just for the 12 Practiced Skill Achievement, there's nothing to immediately rank up.
escape artist to student i suppose. Not immediately usefull, but it's a possible choice if you're aiming for an immediate rank-up
 
So... Our only reward for taking out Tokei, solo, is 1 point of Kenjutsu and a nice yet mundane sword the audience could of easily got rid of? I swear there are underwhelming RPG Bosses like that, but none come to mind. Like, shouldn't we have gotten a Perk at least, or is that similar to the deal with Narrative XP?

Dude, stop. You're acting incredibly entitled right now. Fucking hell, man.
 
Hey, Pittauro, are you interested in trying more omakes in the future? I have ideas I'm not good enough to write, and I'm kind of amused by Daisuke being freakishly skilled pre-Genin.

EDIT: Perks are said to be by consistent action or impressive deed. Soloing Tokei with his own sword should count.
 
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Entirely possible that higher Nin/Genjutsu results in faster XP gain, and that techniques with enough similarity benefit.
 
Hey, Pittauro, are you interested in trying more omakes in the future? I have ideas I'm not good enough to write, and I'm kind of amused by Daisuke being freakishly skilled pre-Genin.

EDIT: Perks are said to be by consistent action or impressive deed. Soloing Tokei with his own sword should count.
you're selling yourself a bit short i think, your omake were good. I'd say better than mine actually, if in a completely different direction.

I'll probably write a few more, and I'll listen if you want to propose some ideas, but i mostly write when the idea just... comes to life in my mind i'd say. gets me inspired.

I'm not really good at planning them in advance, so i mostly go with the flow.

Still, no reasons we can't exchange ideas.



I'll probably go with an omake about someone else's point of view of the lesson. Ino, Shika, maybe Iruka or Hinata. Or something about Gai ( i like Gai, he deserves more love :D)


Unless i think of something else before i start them of course :p
 
Nah, I was kind of cheating by not focusing on existing characters. I don't write fanfiction because I'm bad at fitting within others' scripts. Besides, I don't wanna act pretentious and be rudely surprised when I fail.

Mainly though, "Squirrel Sage Daisuke" isn't something I can do because my comedy is all about reactions and literalizations. "Master Actor, Lord of Forms" would basically be Daisuke as the ultimate actor- any form and voice. In that timeline, I figure he would of gotten tips from Naruto and incorporated Sexy Jutsu.

Then there's my omake idea for Daisuke's brother, but the aim would be canonical status- thus I would fail. Essentially it boils down to him noticing things implying Iron is still dealing with the ramifications of Daisuke's existence, such as his mother only wanting more kids to make it harder for Daisuke or any future illegitimate child to usurp the throne.

I kind of want to see a fluffy What-If where Daisuke gets with either Ino or Tenten. Gosh, I can see his mom being a super-smug grandmother.
 
So... Our only reward for taking out Tokei, solo, is 1 point of Kenjutsu and a nice yet mundane sword the audience could of easily got rid of? I swear there are underwhelming RPG Bosses like that, but none come to mind.
We also got to keep our life.

Pretty sure (given the Very Hard/Insane) that isn't gonna be the last fight with those odds, and that reward, :V
 
I've played enough games to know, oftentimes, your reward is just continued progress. I just find it weird that our first Boss Fight was like that. I don't think Ves explained the sword's attributes, and I don't recall an equipment section. Plus, I honestly wanna know if Perk gain has been changed. By the definition provided, Daisuke should of got one for Tokei.

I honestly wasn't trying to be offensive or anything, I just thought most of our Tokei reward was Narrative XP and was left confused when that stopped being a thing. I know perfectly well to not think I'm entitled to anything.
 
Hah! Heartily enjoyed. Take 40 XP. No canon, obviously. Also, still waiting on a title for your last one.
On, forgot to tag you and say it, rather than just edit it. It's called A Samurai's honor.

Also, for my XP, I'm saving it for now, as I want to raise one of our attributes to simple. Probably intelligence, but maybe wits or charisma.
 
So I've been working on some basic info for all the characters in our class. Trying to figure out the basic shape of their character with the limited information we currently have. I think I may have some pretty good theories about some of the characters so I will probably be posting something on that sometime. But right now I wanted to mention something about Yui that is probably unintentional, but it's a little too coincidental for me to ignore.

One of the things I've been analyzing is the characters' names. Yui's first name does match up with what we've seen of her character thus far, but I'll get into that at a later date. No it's her family name of Hazakura. The translation of that name is cherry tree in leaves and it describes a Sakura tree after the famous bloom. My first thought was 'that must be why Ves had her wear a pink kimono, kind of like how Sakura's name is why her hair is pink'. And immediately after that something clicked in my head regarding the update. Sakura finished her test right before Yui. In other words...

After the pink cherry blossom was done came the cherry tree in leaves.

Goddammit @Vesvius that thought has been stuck in my head for the last 2 hours at work, at least tell me if it was intentional. Because, if it was, it was really witty, but really fucking subtle.

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Her name even comes directly after Sakura with them alphabetically sorted!
 
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Some Characters are in the Anime
Ami, Fuki and Kasumi are in the anime in Sakura childhood scene. Ami is the purple hair girl in the front row. Tobio is also in the anime, he bumped into Naruto and caused him to kiss Sasuke. Hibachi and Unagi are in Naruto's childhood scene where he scared them in the cemetry.
 
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The Chains of Commanding by Magnive (canon)
The Chains of Commanding

Given the present company, Hiruzen permits him to let out a bone-weary sigh, as he lets his eyes cross the papers in front of him. One from the Iron Daimyo, requesting that his bastard son be allowed to live in Konoha, exiled. Another a long rapport, based on the observations from the various watchers assigned to the Satomura household over the years. A third, the Uchiha Police rapport on the incident that had seen the young Daisuke kill the man who was supposed to be his protector.

And finally, a seemingly innocuous slip of paper, a simple Academy Registration form, Hundreds of which crosses Hiruzen's desk every year.

This one, however, might well be the cause of a war one day.

Not for the first time since his attention was brought to this debacle, Hiruzen curses Gai. If the overenthusiastic jounin hadn't decided to skirt the rules and provide... guidance for a child, this entire mess wouldn't exist.

Hiruzen is tempted to reprimand Gai and give him a chain of "penance missions", simply due to the inconvenience the man's actions has brought the aging Hokage, but he knows that politics will not permit him to do so.

"Would we be in violation of our agreement?" he asks, despite knowing the answer already.

It's Homura that answers, not bothering to look down at the printed-out copy that lies on the table. "We merely promised to provide shelter and protect them from external assassins," when they had signed it, they had politely pretended to not know that the child's guardian was also his possible executioner, "with no provisions dictating what the child could or could not do."

After a few seconds of pause, Koharu adds her thoughts on the matter. "If anything, one could easily argue that Lord Imagawa has broken the laws of Konoha, by attempting to carry out an assassination within our walls."

Just barely, Hiruzen manages to suppress a scoff. If the assassination had succeeded, this discussion wouldn't have been taking place, a child would be dead, and relations between Fire and Iron wouldn't be any worse. Perhaps a bit better, as a potential thorn in the side for the next Iron Daimyo would be dead.

But the child didn't die. Instead, he signed up to become a Konoha shinobi, killed his guardian-turned-executioner, and seems to have a drive and talent rarely matched within the Academy.

In other words, if he manages to survive the next ten years, his face might well be plastered across Bingo Books across the Elemental Nations, with every Hidden Village - and by extension, the various other Daimyo - knowing his background.

"What are our options for preserving good relations with Iron?" Hiruzen asks, not expecting any ideas he hadn't thought of already, but nevertheless hoping to be pleasantly surprised.

His old teammates exchange glances, and he recognizes the warnings in their eyes, seeing that they do not support the ideas they are about to float. "We could potentially save the Iron Daimyo some possible embarrassment by ensuring that the child fails the Academy."

With a headshake, Hiruzen dismisses the idea. He'd considered it, but while he might be willing to sabotage a child's development, no matter how much it went against everything he believed in, Gai's rapport painted a picture of a boy talented and driven enough to be able to succeed despite that.

"We could deny the registration, citing security concerns, but the Daimyo wouldn't like it," Koharu says, and the room's three other inhabitants have no trouble realizing the words that she's not saying, namely that it would be the Daimyo's advisors that wouldn't like it, and that covering up something like this from their nominal ruler would be difficult and perilous.

And then his old - and likely current - rival speaks up, his voice calm in a stark contrast to his words. "Kill the boy, and make it appear as if it was the Samurai who did it, but then committed Seppuku afterward. The mother will either have to have her mind adjusted or preferably merely killed." Danzo paused for a few seconds, as if just now realizing another possibility. "Or we could let him graduate, and then make sure that one of his first missions outside of the village goes wrong."

Hiruzen gives Danzo a hard stare but shakes his head. "I will not have a citizen of the Leaf killed when they have done nothing wrong, particularly not when it's a child."

Given how his old rival doesn't push the point, Hiruzen instantly knows that Danzo didn't actually want that to happen.

"Very well. If you will not have him killed, then let me train him. He shall disappear from the streets, learn to stalk in the shadows, and become a true Shinobi. For all the outside world will know, he would be dead."

It speaks to Hiruzen's desperation with this entire situation that he actually considers condemning the child to Danzo's tutelage. It would remove the child from the sight of the Iron Daimyo's spies. If they were all ten years younger, he would deny the request immediately... but by the time the child would be grown enough to be a useful pawn for Danzo, the man himself might well be dead of old age.

With another weary sigh, Hiruzen shakes his head, waiting a few seconds before speaking. "No. You will not take another promising child. We will let the child attend the Academy, and send a private envoy to the Iron Daimyo that we condemn the attempted assassination within Konoha's walls, and warn him that another such action will be viewed as an attack on Konoha herself."

In other words, the relations between Iron and Fire would be stained for decades, possibly even generations, unless the child is put in place of his father or half-brother, and even then, the population will likely still resent Fire for the usurpation.

Once more, Hiruzen curses Gai. Why couldn't the man have developed an interest for any other child?
 
Hmm, I think it might be nice to be a natural talent with the sword (Starting at practiced or higher). The irony of Daisuke being born for the blade, but not allowed to touch it until he slew his guard/executioner is good.

Narratively, it could be read as Daisuke's 'inheritence'/bloodline, reinforcing that his origins have shaped him on even this level.

The bitter irony that one whose blood sings of the sword/samurai, would only have that aspect of himself unlocked on the road towards becoming a shinobi.
 
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[X] Sakura. The quiet girl is sitting on her own in a corner of the classroom, reading a book. You think you've read that one at home before. It's a conversation starter!
 
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