Confringentur 2; a Madoka Magica / Fate/Stay Night sequel

Bravo to both @UNKNOWN01 and @Swedish15. However, I do have one small change I would ask that one or both of you make to your votes. The Archer half of the vote is fine, but for the Homura half of the vote, I need it to be condensed down a bit. It's currently 630 words, and if possible I would like to see it trimmed down to between 300 and 500. That's the longest I'll generally accept for really complicated votes unless there's absolutely no way to trim it, and it looks to me like there are a few places where this could be trimmed.

Enetious and I had a similar conversation about vote length once, long ago, and what I like to see is votes that are no longer than they need to be. If you need 300+ words to say it, that's fine, but if you can say it in fewer that's even better.
 
Well... I will leave that to @Swedish15, I suck at condensing things.

Besides, I don't have a good idea about what to cut...
 
I've tried trimming - is that trimmed enough? We have *seven* conversations that we need to, at least roughly, flesh out; if I should cut more, please let me know, though it would probably kill one of the talks.
 
Day 3 Chapter 3
[X] Plan: Let's take care of our friends and new teammates (part 1)



"You should talk to Kyouko when you get the chance."

You make a stop at Sayaka's desk on your way out of the classroom. She looks up, her head previously lolling about on her desk as the class waited for next period's teacher to arrive. "Oh, yeah, I probably should," she says. Sayaka pulls herself into something resembling an upright position, glancing over in the direction of Kyouko, who is still sulking. "I guess I don't really know what to say to her right now. I'm still having trouble wrapping my head around everything; I can't imagine how she must be feeling."

"Right now, I think knowing that her girlfriend is there for her is more important than any conversation topic in particular." You aren't Kyouko, but you know that if you were feeling down, knowing Madoka was there for you would make you feel better than anything else someone could say to you. "As long as you're there for her, I don't think she'll care that you didn't come with a conversation topic in mind."

Sayaka nodded. "Right," she said. "I'll talk to her next period."

"I'm sure she'll appreciate it." You turn to Madoka once you and Sayaka have finished, and you say to her "Alright, let's go."

You know the way to the nurse's office by heart now, but it's always better to go with Madoka than by yourself. By yourself, there's a good chance you'll get in trouble if you return from one of your talks with Nurse Ortensia after the next period has started; but with Madoka, the nurse's aide, at your side you're perfectly fine to return late and not get in trouble. Usually it doesn't come to that, but from now on, you have a feeling things will be different.

"Come to see me again?" Nurse Ortensia asks as you enter her office. "We simply must stop meeting like this."

"My memory isn't perfect, but I think you've already used that one." Your head turns to the side as you hear an annoyed snort coming from the corner; it's Assassin. She's discarded her elegant purple robe for a mundane skirt and shirt, and with one of Nurse Ortensia's lab coats draped over her shoulders she almost looks like she belongs in the office. She looks up from her magazine - you weren't even aware Japan had a horse racing industry, let alone a dedicated magazine for it - and sends a derisive eye your way before returning to her magazine. "At any rate, I was hoping you and Assassin would be willing to join the rest of us for a practice session later in the evening."

"Practice for what?" Nurse Ortensia asks.

"Combat." As if there were any other kind of practice your team needs right now. "We've just taken on four new teammates, and it's imperative that we all learn to work together if we're going to come out on top."

"I hope you weren't planning on having me fight those girls," Nurse Ortensia says. "The tools at my disposal are really only good for combating men and evil spirits, and I don't think our enemy girls are either of those things."

"We can help you, if you're lacking in good tools to fight them," you reply. "Oriko's servant is quite a good instructor of runic magic. I'm sure she could help you."

Nurse Ortensia rolls her eyes, sighing as she says "Of course; damn that cousin of mine." Another sigh accompanies the shaking of her head, and Nurse Ortensia says "I guess I don't have a choice then, do I? If it's not you inviting me, then I'm sure Oriko would have invited me sooner or later."

You nod, before turning to Assassin. "We never had a proper introduction last night," you say to her. "I'm Akemi Homura, master of our team's Archer. I hope we can get along going forward." Assassin makes no reply. You try again. "Are you interested in joining the rest of us for team exercises later in the evening?"

"What for?" Assassin doesn't even bother looking up from her magazine to answer you. "In life I was the greatest warrior in all of Alba. What use do I have for training with a bunch of children and their deceased hangers-on?"

"Because we're a team, and we need to learn to fight like one," you reply. "I'll understand if you're still upset at being summoned to an improper class. I'll understand if you're never not upset about that. But we need you. Being an Assassin gives you a class advantage over the enemy's Rider, and we desperately need your assistance to defeat him."

"You know how to flatter," Assassin says. "That's a good skill to have in the presence of your betters."

That's neither an affirmation nor a rejection of your offer you're hearing from Assassin, but you don't know enough about her to say if pressing the matter further is worth it, or even safe. At least she's chosen the office to sulk, and hasn't wandered off to be away from her master. You hope that's a sign of improving relations between Assassin and Nurse Ortensia, but you won't claim anything until you're sure. "I'm glad you're at least being civil with each other," you say to both at once. "It wouldn't be good to have you at each other's throats when we've already got enemies to deal with." Both Nurse Ortensia and Assassin snort at your words. "I know it's a long shot," you say to Nurse Ortensia, "But do you happen to have any information on the enemy masters we might be able to use? Or maybe the Church has some information on them?"

"Why would I?" Nurse Ortensia replies. "I've never met any of those girls before in my life. Asunaro's not my responsibility."

Well, you did say it was a long shot. Hearing that Nurse Ortensia doesn't have any useful information doesn't really surprise you. But she's not your only option at the moment, is she? You turn to Assassin, and dare to ask her "How good are you at scouting?"

"I have Presence Concealment, but since I'm not supposed to be an Assassin it's about as useful as a sheep that can't grow wool. Other than that? I was a warrior, not some skulking snitch. If you're asking me to hunt down an enemy fortification, I'd sooner raze it to the ground than sneak back with information."

"That might also be useful," you say. "For the moment, I'm just feeling for my options." In all this conversation, you've completely forgotten to take your medication. You down your pill and the water which follows, and make for the door. "Thank you. You've both given me plenty to think about."



You don't miss being trapped in an endless repetition of the same stretch of days. But you do miss how much easier school was when you knew everything without having to think about it. By the time you make it to lunch, your brain can hardly take much more. Add to that the crisis that was last night, and how unhelpful Nurse Ortensia and Assassin are being, and it's only when you sit down beside Madoka in the cafeteria that your mind feels at ease once more.

"You look exhausted, Homura-chan," Madoka says "Maybe you should go back to the nurse's office and get some rest."

"I don't know how much rest I'd get in there," you reply. "Those two might just start bickering at any moment."

Hitomi nods, chiming in with "I'm actually a little worried for Nurse Ortensia," she says. "I hope she and Assassin don't hurt each other."

You have to stop yourself from laying your head down on the cafeteria table. "I don't even want to think about-" You gesture to nothing in particular with a wave of your hand. "-This, right now. Let's think about literally anything else." Madoka. You'll think about Madoka. "When all of this is over, is there anything you want to do together?" you ask her. "Anything at all. You name it, and when winter break rolls around I"ll do my best to make it happen."

"It's a little early to be thinking about winter break, isn't it?" Madoka asks. "That's still two months away. Besides, I thought you were going to teach me archery, and that we were all going to go ice skating together."

"Nothing's saying you can't do it all," Sayaka says. "Besides, it's not like we're going ice skating every day of winter break; I'm sure there'll be plenty of time for you two to think of something romantic to do." Sayaka wraps her arm around Kyouko's shoulder, pulling her girlfriend in close as she says "Me and Kyouko are gonna hole up at my place and play videogames whenever we're not doing anything with the rest of you guys, aren't we?"

"Only if I get ta stick my tongue down your throat whenever I beat ya," Kyouko replies.

Sayaka rolls her eyes, saying "Please, that time at the dance machines was a fluke. I've got you beat, easy."

"If by fluke, ya mean it happens every time we play, then yeah." Kyouko sticks her tongue out at Sayaka, who lunges forward, attempting to bite the offending appendage off. "It's a fluke all right; a fluke so flukey it happens every time we play."

You're glad to see Kyouko sounding a little livelier than she was this morning; whatever they said to each other, Sayaka's talk must have done something. "Maybe we could do something similar?" Madoka asks. "We could get cozy at one of our places and marathon a bunch of anime together, if you wanted. I think you'd like the show Sayaka got me for my birthday."

"Symphogear, right?" you ask. "You said the main lead sounds like you?"

"Yeah! Her name's Tachibana Hibiki; she's voiced by Yūki Aoi, and she sounds just like me. That was actually the reason I started watching it, when I found out. It's a lot of fun, and the songs are really good, too. I think you'd like it." Madoka giggles, leaning closer to you as she says "Maybe we should find a series where Saitō Chiwa voices the main character, since she sounds so much like you do."

"Maybe." You said you didn't want to deal with any of this, but you find your mind won't let it rest. Ugh, typical. "Are you feeling any different from how you felt this morning?" you ask Hitomi. "Do you still have an abnormal appetite? Have you tried any magecraft since last night? If Saber's draining your supply of magical energy, it wouldn't be a bad idea to know where your new limits are."

"No, I haven't tried anything," Hitomi replies. "When I got home, I was so exhausted that I fell asleep as soon as I lay down. But don't worry about me; if something changes for the worse, I'll be sure to let you know."

You nod; but even as you do, another thought creeps up on you. Even if Saber proves to be too much of a drain on Hitomi for her to safely use magecraft, there might still be a way for her to help you out. She did some research for you awhile back; actually, it was her investigation that led to her wanting to learn magecraft in the first place. Maybe you could use her again? No, you shouldn't word it like that. It sounds like you're taking advantage of her. "Actually, I was hoping you might be able to do some research for me..."​
 
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I've tried trimming - is that trimmed enough? We have *seven* conversations that we need to, at least roughly, flesh out; if I should cut more, please let me know, though it would probably kill one of the talks.
We also don't need to address everything just because it's an option I've given us. They're called options for a reason. We've not talked to someone before if the people voting didn't feel we had anything to say to them.

Also in the future I won't be addressing "What are your hobbies" vote lines in conversations. If you want to know what a character's hobbies are, you can refer back to when Homura asked that question of them in the first quest.
 
Day 3 Chapter 4
[X] Plan: Let's take care of our friends and new teammates (part 2)



"I know we can't stop you, but I need to know that you're okay with this."

Between Saber, Rider, and Assassin watching over the school - though you still aren't completely sure how far you can trust that last one - you felt secure enough in the fates of Homura and her friends to go take care of some things. Currently, that means talking with Lancer about her role in the coming battles. "Sigurd..." Lancer utters the name as though it were her death rattle, her voice a shaking, husky mess. "I have to fight him... Have to kill him... Nothing else matters but Sigurd..."

"Be that as it may, it's not healthy for you to be going into fights with your mind all messed up like this," you say. "You need to keep a clear head if you want to actually beat him."

It is so hard to keep a clear head when I know Sigurd is out there," Lancer replies. "Is he thinking about me? Is he compelled to fight me the same way I feel compelled to fight him?"

"Mikuni is worried about you." You don't actually know that, but for as few pillars of emotional stability as Mikuni has in her life - Kirika, Lancer, her extended family in Italy whom she only sees once or twice a year - you feel confident that your guess is correct. "We all are."

"I know." Lancer is composed, but holding back, as if any moment the turmoil inside her will erupt and take over. You don't know how many Command Seals Mikuni had to spend to bring Lancer down to this state from where she had been the night before. "I wish it were easier to calm myself, but now that I know Sigurd is here, it takes everything just to hold myself back this much. I know my master would prefer to keep me from him, but every part of me is screaming; I need to fight him; to kill him; to quell the flames that threaten to devour me from within if I let Sigurd live for another day."

"Is there anything you can tell us about him that might let us help you defeat him?" you ask. You don't know if Lancer will even want your help, but you aren't going to let her face this by herself. She's at a disadvantage against him; not only does she have a class disadvantage, but she's also going to have a hard time just keeping her head on straight while fighting him. "I've got a class advantage over Sigurd, and Berserker is our strongest hitter who can match him with a sword. We're going to help you, if you'll let us-" Actually, you're going to help Lancer whether she wants it or not. "-but we need to know what Sigurd is capable of first. You knew him in life; what is he capable of?"

"His strength is exceptional," are the first words out of Lancer's mouth. "He has the strength to fight off an army, and the endurance to do so without ever tiring. He knows the ancient runes, too; I taught him everything he knows." Without any prodding from you, Lancer elaborates, saying "He is proficient with the Isa and Tiwaz runes especially; with them he can make blizzards, imbue his body with the strength to win any fight, or empower his sword to break through any barrier." Lancer shakes her head, adding "Not as though he needs the last one; within Gram is contained an anti-fortress Noble Phantasm. It is strong enough to slay a dragon in a single blow, or tear down an entire castle leaving not a single brick or defender behind."

"Is there anything else?" you ask. "What about what he's like as a person? Is there a way to, I don't know, defeat him without having to actually fight him?"

"Sigurd is perfect," Lancer says with the shaking her head. "Perhaps I could defeat him if my mind were not so clouded, but I am doubtful that Berserker would be so lucky. I do not know why Sigurd let Berserker live after I was forcibly withdrawn from the battle, and I cannot say whether his master will allow him to do so again. Perhaps he was only humouring Berserker to fight then, and now that he has chosen me as his opponent he has no interest in fighting another. He was always terribly stubborn like that." For a moment, a sad smile creeps up onto Lancer's lips as she speaks, as though the thought that Sigurd has chosen to fight her is a small comfort she can cherish, before the expression is wiped from her face. "How do you and Berserker plan to attempt to fight him?"

"Berserker has a pretty big sword, and I'm sure I can find something in my arsenal capable of punching through Sigurd's armour," is your response. "I can't speak for a finalised plan, but I think the idea is going to be that we let you set the pace when fighting him, and we'll do our best to keep up. Maybe if he's splitting his focus between you and Berserker, he won't notice me shooting at him from several kilometers away."

"What will you do if you are wrong?" Lancer asks.

"Then that's a bridge we'll have to cross when we get there." You really don't want to think about what might happen if you're wrong.



After ending your conversation with Lancer and leaving the Mikuni mansion, you make for Asunaro to see if you can gather any useful information on the enemy team. It's been a long time since your last visit to Asunaro, seventeen or eighteen months, you think, but the city doesn't look all that different from the last time you were here. You can still make out the same landmarks as last time; there's the town hall, the local shopping mall, a hot dog shack, a boutique clothing outlet, a hair salon, a large dome-shaped building which you once again presume to be a sporting arena because you never bothered to confirm what it was the last time you were here, an amusement park, and the sweets shop outside of which you met Kazusa Michiru the last time you were here. She was a nice girl, and you hope she hasn't gotten herself mixed up in of this mess; or worse.

You also spot some new things that weren't here the last time. There's a new building that proudly bills itself as a teddy bear museum - Wait, what? An entire museum, just for teddy bears? Is the owner for real? - and some very conspicuous construction occurring within a few hundred meters radius of the museum. Not the normal type of construction work, either; the kind you've gotten used to seeing in the wake of those witches that have been popping up in Mitakihara lately. Does that mean Asunaro also has a problem with that type of witch; or is there something else at work here?

You don't see anything on your first pass through the city, and are about to give up after your second pass when you spot someone exiting the sweets shop. It isn't Kazusa Michiru, but you'd recognise those low-hanging platinum-blonde twintails anywhere. The combination of a faded green hoodie, cutoff jean shorts, and boots makes Kanna Niko appear very much like Sakura Kyouko; but the backpack she's also wearing makes you suspect that she's cutting class, rather than just not attending school entirely.

Well, things just got interesting, and it looks like you've got a bit of investigating to do. Fortunately, you've got access to some of the best tools of the trade that Projection magecraft can make. You'll stay a fair distance behind her, keeping in spirit form as added precaution, and follow her to see where she winds up. Worst case, you just follow her back to whatever school she came from. Best case, you follow her back to the enemy's base of operations.

Your eyes follow her trail for a little under a half-hour, and in that time she never gives you a clear indication of her destination. She moves from intersection to alleyway, stopping once at a trash can in the local park to dispose of the iced coffee she had been sipping, before returning to her pattern of intersection and alleyway. You don't sense the presence of any servants nearby, neither friendly nor foe, but her movements - calm and deliberate, and yet at the same time without a single apaprent end destination in mind -
keeps your interest mounting. It's almost as if she's aware of your presence, and is making her moves in an attempt to throw you off her trail.

You follow her until what appears to be the end of her destination, the rear entrance of the apparent teddy bear museum. Either she's into that sort of thing, or there's more going on inside this "Angelica Bears" than meets the eye.

Do you
[ ] Keep watch for a little while longer; maybe she'll come out
[ ] Report back to Homura with news of her destination; if this is the enemy's hideout, she'll want to know
[ ] Go inside and have a look around for yourself; maybe you'll find something worth mentioning to Homura
[ ] Use your biggest swords and raze the museum to the ground; damn the collateral, there's an enemy inside
[ ] Other (write-in)

[Homura] Wat do?​
 
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It better Archer just spy on her and see where she going to. She may lead Archer to where the Saint home base is or she could be leading Archer on if she aware of it. Either way we may be able to gleam some information. Also it better not for Green Side to escalate things. If Archer attack any of Blue side member in broad daylight they may decided to do the same or even choose to harm Hitomi and Caren in response to the escalation.
 
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Got some rest now, and I can finally start crafting votes again.

[X] Plan: Scouting & Marking
-[X] Follow her to see where she lives, and try to find out places of importance or get any other information from her daily life. Obviously, if there are any Servants, try staying a safe distance away.
-[X] While doing this, project Carnwennan

I'm not sure if we're allowed to project Carnwennan since there's no examples of it in fate (though it is cannon, I'm pretty sure), and it won't let us get around the Servant Detection thing, but if Archer's caught it should let him get out faster, safer and hide which Servant he is, just to add that bit of uncertainty.
 
We want to find some home or base. Just keep trailing her for a while? I don't get why she would answer any of our questions when she could just attack us.
She's a moderately-skilled alchemist who's good at a few select but pretty difficult things to be good at; we're a servant. We would manhandle her eight days of the week in a fight between just us and her. She has no idea what our backup is, and if she suspects that our backup is better than hers she might just decide talking is the smarter choice. Alternatively, the fact that we're an Archer and could have ended her life from 4km away, but have instead chosen to come down and talk to her, means that we're likely not in a hostile position, in which case talking would be preferable to escalation.
I'm not sure if we're allowed to project Carnwennan since there's no examples of it in fate (though it is cannon, I'm pretty sure), and it won't let us get around the Servant Detection thing, but if Archer's caught it should let him get out faster, safer and hide which Servant he is, just to add that bit of uncertainty.
I'll allow it, because we've used it before.
 
[x] Plan: Direct info gathering
-[x] Follow Kanna Niko until she's somewhere people can't see her
--[x] then confront her
---[x] "Shouldn't you be in school young lady?"
---[x] "Mind filling a Servant in on why you're going to war? Normally this is fought over a knock off of the Holy Grail, but, as far as I'm aware, that doesn't exist any more so..."
 
Is confronting Niko really a good idea? I know she's alone but I find it unlikely she actually is, her teammates could jump Archer if we aren't careful.
 
[X] PlaguePaladin

Yep, she is alone and Servantless.

Way too good to be true.
 
[X] Enetious
Even if she is "Servantless" said Servant is one command seal away from being there and we don't know what Assassin's combat capabilities are like, I doubt they're that strong but it pays to be careful.
 
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[X] Plan PlaguePaladin's Secret
-[X] Follow her to see where she lives, and try to find out places of importance or get any other information from her daily life. Obviously, if there are any Servants, try staying a safe distance away.
-[X] While doing this, project Carnwennan and Secret of Pedigree to keep yourself concealed and to protect your identity

With Secret of Pedigree, it'll prevent anyone from discerning Archer's kit aside from basic parameters and class skills (not personal skills). Not to mention that it has an information erasure-like effect in preventing observers from identifying anything about what specific Noble Phantasms he's using at any given point. Also it'll prevent them from connecting this visitor to Asunaro with Homura's adoptive father.

Also I'm back, it's a Christmas miracle! Lots of bad stuff happened irl that prevented me from doing much, but thankfully that's mostly passed for now. Serious props to everyone that stepped up to keep this quest running! :)
 
*Ahem*

This is, actually, unironically, a literal Christmas miracle. I'm not normally a religious person- I've only prayed twice in my life, both times were to Madokami, and only one of them actually came to pass, but this might just have done the trick for me. So, uh, I believe this is appropriate for the occasion. Welcome back, you old bastard you.

EDIT: Oh, wait, I should also say-
With Secret of Pedigree, it'll prevent anyone from discerning Archer's kit aside from basic parameters and class skills (not personal skills). Not to mention that it has an information erasure-like effect in preventing observers from identifying anything about what specific Noble Phantasms he's using at any given point. Also it'll prevent them from connecting this visitor to Asunaro with Homura's adoptive father.
There's no way for the Saints to know that Archer is Homura's father, or even trace him back to her outside of him being one of the Mitakihara servants. I think we'll be fine if we don't give Archer a rockin' helmet.
 
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There's no way for the Saints to know that Archer is Homura's father, or even trace him back to her outside of him being one of the Mitakihara servants. I think we'll be fine if we don't give Archer a rockin' helmet.
Right now they have no idea of the capabilities of all of the Pleiades and their Servants without metagaming, ergo informational security just in case. For all the know one of the Pleiades' wishes turned one of them into a technopath or a clairvoyant of some kind. :p
 
Non-canon omake - Lorelei of Winter
Snow fell thick over Mitakihara that Christmas Eve, blanketing the city in a thick coat of white. The temperature was respectably cold outside, but the inside of the Akemi apartment was pleasantly warm. Maybe that was the heat from the oven in the kitchen, maybe that was the warm sweater Minako was wearing, or maybe the wine was finally kicking in, but it was comfortably warm. A tree, decorated and brightly lit, sat beside the television, on which Minako watched... Ah, it didn't really matter to her what she was watching. These Christmas specials were all the same, anyway. She had unwrapped her present early this year, and was currently wearing the red woolen sweater that accentuated her assets. Black jeans, a few glasses of wine, and her feet tucked snugly into the cushions of the couch completed her ensemble, and she smiled. She couldn't remember the last time she had gotten to experience a real Christmas; certainly not since the divorce, at any rate.

Homura poked her head into the living room, saying to Minako "Archer says dinner will be ready shortly."

"'Kay," Minako replied, finishing the last of her wine. "Are we expecting any guests, or is it just going to be us this year?"

"Kirika invited Oriko over for dinner, but other than that I think it's just going to be us."

Minako smiled again. "That's fine," she said. As long as she got to spend Christmas with her family, she was fine. *Ding-dong* rang the doorbell, and Minako asked Homura "That's probably Oriko now. Can you get that?"

Before Homura could respond, a red blur passed her in the hall calling out "I'll get it!" That would be Kirika, naturally, her senses attuned to any mention of Oriko's name. Unlike Minako or Homura, who were each wearing sensible attires, Kirika had opted to wear a fuzzy red Santa outfit, cropped short so as to reveal her midriff and her legs. Her fuzzy Santa hat flopped back and forth in front of her face as she dashed to the door, opening it to the less-than-enthusiastic statement, "You're not Oriko."

The girl at the door was short; no taller than Homura, with straight white hair and cherry-coloured eyes. She wore a less-than-festive purple coat and a hat to match, and in her hands she held several wrapped boxed, piled precariously high in her small arms; "And you don't look much like how Big Brother described you, either" she replied.

Kirika pursed her lips as she stared at the girl, saying to her "Listen, kid, I think you've got the wrong address."

"No I don't!" the girl pouted. With careful precision, she pointed to the name plate on the door, saying "This is the Akemi residence, isn't it; and you're Homura?"

"Oh," was all Kirika could say. Inviting the girl in, she called out "Hey Homura! There's a little girl with white hair here to see you! You got any idea what's going on?"

"I'm afraid I don't," Homura said as she approached the door. Her eyes met the eyes of the white-haired girl, and when she tried to say "Hello," she was cut off by a rather abrupt hug and forced to respond with a started "Uagh!" instead.

"Oh my gosh!" The white-haired girl exclaimed as her arms tightened their hold on Homura's body. "You're so adorable! You look just like Big Brother described!"

"Thank you," Homura managed to squeeze out. "Um, do you think you can tell me what's going on?"

"Oh, right, of course." That was enough to break the white-haired girl's embrace. She let Homura go, backing away a few steps to properly introduce herself. "My name is Illyasviel von Einzbern," she said, giving Homura a brief curtsy. "You might find this hard to believe, but I'm Big Broth- Er, Archer's, older sister." Illya was right; Homura did find that hard to believe, especially considering how different she looked from Archer. "So, I guess that makes me your aunt, doesn't it?" With a smile, Illya stepped aside to reveal the pile of wrapped boxed she had brought with her. "I brought presents. I wasn't sure what sort of things you'd like, so I guess I brought a little of everything. I've got chocolates and candy straight from Germany, some clothes that would look absolutely adorable on you, some videogames, if you're into that stuff..."

Illya's list went on, and it was more than Homura could imagine. Overwhelmed, she said the first thing her mind could think of. "Archer didn't say you were coming."

Illya shrugged at Homura's remark. "I felt like surprising you," she said, before surprising Homura with another hug. "It's so good to finally meet you! I really hope you like your presents."

"Hey dad!" shouted Kirika, who had been watching this all unfold. "Your sister's here. Did'ja know she was coming?"

"Wait, 'dad'?" Illya said, confused. "I thought Homura was Archer's adopted daughter. You mean he's got two kids now?"

"Eh, kind of," Kirika replied. "Archer's dating my mom, and me and Homura are basically like sisters anyway, so he's basically close enough to being my dad."

Illya's face fell at the news. "Oh no," she said, rushing to give Kirika a hug as well. "I'm so sorry! I didn't bring you anything! Um, maybe we can go shopping later if the stores are still open? I'll buy you anything you want; Auntie Illya's promise!"

"Uh, thanks?" Kirika said. "I mean, I appreciate the offer, but there's only one thing I really want for Christmas, and I'm already getting it." And speaking of getting it... *Ding dong* "I'll get it!" This time, when Kirika answered the door, it was the correct white-haired girl there to greet her. "Oriko! You came!"

Oriko had barely taken her shoes off before her lips were greeted by Kirika's own. "So, do you have someone special like that?" Illya asked Homura, gesturing to Kirika and Oriko. She laughed, adding "They look just like Big Brother and Tohsaka when they think no one's watching. I'm surprised I don't have more cute nieces like you two yet."

"If you don't mind me asking, Einzbern-san-"

"Please, 'Auntie Illya' is fine."

"Right." Homura corrected herself, saying "Aunt Illya, I was under the impression that Archer's sister was older than him; but you're, well..."

"Tiny?" Homura nodded. "It's... Complicated," Illya said. "The short version is, my grandfather did some weird magecraft stuff to me before I was born, and that ended up stunting my growth. I'm actually a few years older than my version of Big Brother, but since he's taller than me, well..." Illya shrugged, adding "It should be obvious. But then your version of Big Brother actually is older than me, so it all works out; and I've actually grown a bit in the past couple of years, too. I used to be even shorter, believe it or not. I don't think I'll be growing much more than this, though; I've been stuck at a hundred-fifty-eight centimeters for the past three years or so." Illya's eyes lit up as she spoke, and she enthusiastically added "But that just means we're the same height! I can buy you whatever clothes you'd like and I won't even have to guess what size you are!"

Homura couldn't help but laugh as Illya said that. "I suppose there's always an upside, isn't there?"

"Girls! Dinner's ready!" Archer's voice calling from within the kitchen is what ties the disparate stories of the Akemi household together. Minako snuggled up and warm on the couch, Homura and Illya, and Kirika and Oriko in the hallway, and Archer in the kitchen; dinner brings them all together. "Illya, it's nice to see you," Archer says as everyone files into the kitchen at the scent and call of dinner's allure. Turning to Minako, he adds "Minako, this is my sister, Illyasviel von Einzbern. Illya, this is my girlfriend, Kure Minako. I see the girls have already met her."

"Hey," Minako said, waving to the white-haired girl who wasn't her daughter's lover. "I didn't know we'd be expecting company. It's nice to meet you, though."

"It's nice to meet you too," Illya replied as Archer laid out the night's dinner spread, a whole chicken with an assortment of sides. "Do you like being with Big Brother? Is he treating you right?"

"He's been wonderful. Though, if he'd get off his butt and do a bit more to establish himself as a real, legal person, I'd like if we could be a little bit more than just boyfriend and girlfriend." Minako smiled as Archer poured her another glass of wine, adding "Ah, but maybe I should wait until my girls can get married first. It'd be unfair to them if I got married when they can't."

There was one more guest making her way into the Akemi kitchen for dinner; Amy. Her approach was silent, until she settled by her food bowl and gave a loud "Mew" to signal her desire to be fed. "Don't worry, there's plenty for you," Archer said. He leaned down, petting her as he placed a few pieces of chicken into her bowl. "Merry Christmas, Amy."

"Aw, she's so cute," Illya cooed. Her cooing face quickly turned into a pout, and she said to Archer "Jeez, just how many people did you not tell me I had to bring presents for? It's bad enough I didn't bring anything for your girlfriend, her daughter, and her girlfriend, now you're telling me I forgot to bring something for your kitty as well?"

"Homura's got Amy pretty well taken care of," Minako said; "And you don't need to get anything for me either; though I appreciate you wanting to get Kirika and Oriko something."

Illya pouted, crossing her arms to say "But I want to," like the small child her appearance made her out to be. She turned to Kirika, and to Oriko as well, saying to them "I really wasn't kidding about what I said earlier. If the stores are still open after dinner, I'd be happy to take you out shopping to buy you anything you want. You too, Homura. That way you won't feel left out."

"That's quite alright, Einzbern-san," Oriko said. "Really. I'm perfectly content to spend Christmas with my girlfriend and her family. I'm blessed just knowing them; I don't need anything more."

"Well, if you change your mind before dinner's done, don't hesitate to let me know."

"Oriko," Archer addressed Kirika's girlfriend as he finished laying out the night's assortment. "We're not usually religious, but since you're here, would you like to lead us in saying grace?"

"I'd be honoured to, Archer." Surrounded by family and friends, Oriko smiled, and brought her hands together in prayer. "Bless us oh Lord, for these thy gifts..."
 
Ah, bless you SVS, for my heart has ascended into fluffy bliss! It chafes. My heart is really sensitive and this fluffy fabric is uncomfortable. Send help.
 
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