Furthermore, in your current arrangement, there are certain volatile factors that need to be balanced.
Note for later: Do not place Kyouko in any team with explosive Distortions, they might get excited by the heat and explode.
What do you mean, not that kind of volatile?
"Haven't you seen enough? What about everything you've seen so far makes you think that becoming a Magical Girl will do anything other than hurt you?" Homura's voice remains flat, though her frustration is apparent in her words. And yet, there's a trace of resignation in the way she starts to turn away before Madoka has even responded. She's had this argument before, and already knows how it ends.
"I know it'll be hard. But even then, shouldn't I do what I can to help people?" Madoka answers. Homura doesn't respond, already moving further in through the Barrier.
About what I expected, we need to have our talk with Madoka and present alternatives, as is, her wishing is a certainty sooner or later, she wants to help, needs to help to not feel pointless, we need to give her a way to release that, the abnormality book is a step, but with the lack of them recently, it isn't helping as much as it could.
We also need to find a way to have Homura explain her circumstances to Madoka, knowing that someone would be deeply hurt by her wishing would help reduce her wants to be a martyr.
"If you don't have anywhere else to go… would you like to stay over at my house tonight?"
"Yes." Homura's delivery is flat and passionless, but the speed with which she replies gives away her real reaction. You quietly step away, leaving the two to head back together. The night has fallen, and that means only one thing for you.
Progress! Not as much as I hoped, what with not having a long talk, but that's a very good step in the right direction, Madoka is interested in Homura as a friend, and that's a good thing, for both of them.
Character interactions are difficult, and I haven't had as much practice writing Madoka as I have other characters. This chapter was a bit of a challenge.
.... You'll be happy to learn that I still am thinking on having that deep conversation with Madoka and Homura for this vote? More time to get her voice is good, right?
After distorting, Jae-heon remarks about becoming confused with all kinds of thoughts, and losing his way for a while until Argalia found him. That is similar to my personal interpretation of normal witch thought processes in canon. Definitely conscious, but in a sort of hazy dreamlike state.
The hazy-dreamlike interpretation seem to be the case from what little we get of direct witches thoughts in canon, both in descriptions from the cards and what little we get from Homura in Rebellion right as she witches out.
And because I said I would do it:
[x] Actually, go back and see Madoka and Homura, you need to have a conversation with the both of them. It's also about time you meet Madoka's parents!