Magical Girl Quest - The Fire That Burns
- Thread starter Rukia
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Either"Cerys'" or" Cerys's" (I'm not quite sure).
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[X] Una
Gonna need to juggle spending time with Morgan doing the stuff she likes with everything else going on. Fun.
One major thing about quests that I've noticed is that when everything's going well there tends to be very little critique of anything about it, unless the writing is really bad - and proper feedback is simultaneously one of the hardest things to get and one of the easiest. Players tend not to bother, but a good Beta Reader had damn well better. Not that a beta is necessary here, I don't think.
Lets give this a shot.
Always a tough question... we've only really gotten to see a few characters in any detail, but you've done a good job so far. Going to have to go with the Forest here though, it's sheer inhumanity was well conveyed.
I have no idea. I'm (almost randomly) going to go with the Demon of Due, as this could have been a fascinating quest about a Big Sister taking care of her Little Sister, but then a Demon had to show up and butt it's ugly mug into things.
Perfectly understandable, very Una-centric (it seems her entire life has been, which leaves a ton of room for character growth on both sides and you've shown that), and similar to what I probably would have been thinking under similar circumstances at her age, complete with the player-made decisions that were rather short-sighted (burning the house down, really, guys? It was a good idea at the time though!) and had consequences she didn't predict.
I think we need to get to know them more and watch them grow. Except for Karen; she's grown enough. I like Morgan, want to spend more time with Daifu and Cuifen, want to watch Una grow, and feel like Sabina needs a lot more hugs.
I think you've done a fantastic job of world building so far, and I don't think we'll get to explore that as much as I'd like, given all the stuff that's going to come. Alas.
To quote someone from earlier...
Sometimes I'm easy to please.
Hm, I'm not sure. Squeezing in world-building is a design job as much as it is a writing job, as if it doesn't make sense to include world-building in a scene it shouldn't be included, and game design and writing are two entirely different things.
Oh, there we go. Game Design seems to be something you could stand to learn more of, but that's true of everybody running a Quest that utilizes mechanics of some sort or another, as opposed to a Quest running solely off of narrative and write-ins.
Gonna need to juggle spending time with Morgan doing the stuff she likes with everything else going on. Fun.
One major thing about quests that I've noticed is that when everything's going well there tends to be very little critique of anything about it, unless the writing is really bad - and proper feedback is simultaneously one of the hardest things to get and one of the easiest. Players tend not to bother, but a good Beta Reader had damn well better. Not that a beta is necessary here, I don't think.
Lets give this a shot.
Always a tough question... we've only really gotten to see a few characters in any detail, but you've done a good job so far. Going to have to go with the Forest here though, it's sheer inhumanity was well conveyed.
I have no idea. I'm (almost randomly) going to go with the Demon of Due, as this could have been a fascinating quest about a Big Sister taking care of her Little Sister, but then a Demon had to show up and butt it's ugly mug into things.
Perfectly understandable, very Una-centric (it seems her entire life has been, which leaves a ton of room for character growth on both sides and you've shown that), and similar to what I probably would have been thinking under similar circumstances at her age, complete with the player-made decisions that were rather short-sighted (burning the house down, really, guys? It was a good idea at the time though!) and had consequences she didn't predict.
I think we need to get to know them more and watch them grow. Except for Karen; she's grown enough. I like Morgan, want to spend more time with Daifu and Cuifen, want to watch Una grow, and feel like Sabina needs a lot more hugs.
I think you've done a fantastic job of world building so far, and I don't think we'll get to explore that as much as I'd like, given all the stuff that's going to come. Alas.
To quote someone from earlier...
Sometimes I'm easy to please.
Hm, I'm not sure. Squeezing in world-building is a design job as much as it is a writing job, as if it doesn't make sense to include world-building in a scene it shouldn't be included, and game design and writing are two entirely different things.
Oh, there we go. Game Design seems to be something you could stand to learn more of, but that's true of everybody running a Quest that utilizes mechanics of some sort or another, as opposed to a Quest running solely off of narrative and write-ins.
A Wise Hermit
Well, Sometimes.
While I would like to see a naval vessel wrestled by the Kraken, I think more fluff is in order. While explosions are fun, This quest apparently has been hypnotized by the Dark Fluff lords. However, that is not enough to sway me from practically! ((I changed the vote))
[X] HMS Belfast
[X] HMS Belfast
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Spectral Waltz
Scatterbrained Writer
- Location
- Walking the Endless Corridors
[x] HMS Belfast
I'm actually half expecting the boat to be kinda like forestbro, a land spirit. Or possible a ship spirit. Either way I'm curious
Fire that Burns/Kancolle crossover when?
I'm actually half expecting the boat to be kinda like forestbro, a land spirit. Or possible a ship spirit. Either way I'm curious
Fire that Burns/Kancolle crossover when?
Spectrum
Tell me a secret~
- Location
- Behind you~
Gotta be explicit. Excuse me while I express salt. ;P
[X] Cuifen
Una's had her day in the sun in the long past, I want to see her POV.
- Location
- Earth
Well... if Una becomes a Magical Girl, her transformed state might be like this:
- Location
- The Garden
[x] HMS Belfast
Considering Rukia made Naron's omake on Una canon we did actually have a fairly recent pov from her.
Considering Rukia made Naron's omake on Una canon we did actually have a fairly recent pov from her.
[X] Una
FitForRivals
Or you can just say Fit for short.
- Location
- up state
[X] HMS Belfast
- Location
- Canada
[X] HMS Belfast
Lone Courier 6
Devilish Fool
- Location
- United States of Quests
[x] HMS Belfast
Magical ship Girl is a go.
Magical ship Girl is a go.
Thebigpieman
I've got this, I think.
- Location
- United States
[x] HMS Belfast
"A debt that shall be honored upon the seven seas! I am Magical Girl Belfast!"
"A debt that shall be honored upon the seven seas! I am Magical Girl Belfast!"
- Location
- The Garden
I am so sorry for forgetting to answer this.The what path in the where?
Seriously when was this an option? And what would the benefits have been?
Basically it was in the very beginning of the quest, when forest bro sheltered Cerys and Una it was there that we had the chance to become the shrine maiden of a continent spanning spirit. At least that was the start of it. I think. Rukia knows all of it.
If we explored a little bit more with FB and stayed we would be on that path but it was subtle and we were pressed for time so we pushed on.
As for benefits? I'm not sure.
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- Location
- Hug the Moebot; Save the world
While it would have been interesting im not unhappy with the route we took. We have still had an enjoyable(for us atleast) time so far.