Right, so I've got a stunt for this. It's... wordy, not gonna lie - I might see if I can edit it down a bit - but I think it strikes the right tone (and also helps build the scene, I hope), and I've put quite a lot of thought into it, which I'll go into afterwards. Feedback is more than welcome.
[X] Answer as a Queen
- [X] "My own," you say forthrightly, drawing Cristos' eyes to yours for just a moment. "I offer this as Empress of the Fivefold Courts of Fate. As one who has the vision to see that the world need not be so cruel, and the means to help make it so. I offer this so that those who fall from the path might find their way back home, like a lantern in the dark."
- [X] You cast your gaze out across the wizards gathered here - the Wise, some would say, but with wisdom can so often come pain, and the weight of years you can see etched on many a face besides the man you address.
- [X] Finally, you bring your eyes back to Cristos - knowing that the lines upon his face bear guilt almost two centuries in the keeping - and you say your final words, daring to hope that you'll be able to inspire hope. "I offer this as one who wishes that those who have erred and gone astray need not bear that sin eternal. That, esteemed wizards of the White Council, is who I am, and why I am here today."
Like I said, uh... wordy.
Some of my thought process for this:
- First of all, Cristos: the obvious thing here is that he bears guilt from what he did - what he obviously thought was the right thing to do, even as he regrets it - in the Greek War of Independence as a young man. Part of this is phrased to appeal to that, to talk in terms of guilt and succour, and in notions of the world not needing to be so cruel as to have situations like that arise.
- Second, also Cristos: this might be more of a deep cut (and/or a reach, depending on what you think of it), but... he's a man who fought for his people, for his country and its independence. He was willing to do something that he regrets some eighteen/nineteen decades later for that cause.
That feels like a case where the notion of "home" - which I've always thought is an incredibly emotive concept in discourse generally (I have my biases here, as someone involved in a - thankfully nothing like Greece went through - independence movement of his own) - would be a powerful thing to appeal to. Thus, "find their way back home" as a specific turn of phrase.
- Finally, not Cristos this time: with the whole thing, but the last line in particular, I'm trying to firmly establish Molly with one of the major factions of the setting - as a power, yes, but moreover as a power with good intentions. This is about trying to sell the idea of the Book of Laws, sure, but also about saying, "I am trying to make the world a better place, that is who I am."
But anyway, thoughts, everyone? Anything glaring that I've missed or misunderstood? ...Typos?