Hmmph... this junior is a good seed [Cultivation Management Quest]

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Su Cheng [DEAD]- Good Seed Background
Good Seed submission:

@occipitallobe - My attempt at a good seed . I have to warn you and others english is my 3rd language i learned and im not a writer at all but i love the genre so im giving it a try.

Su Cheng .

He is a 21 year old 1st heavenstage qi cultivator form the Su clan . He arrived in the Golden Devil clan cause of the destruction of most of his clan to a great circle foundation forging poison master who was on a rampage since his life span was about run out and he needed materials to break through to core formations more easily. . The Jingshen clan ended up having to send a nascent soul elder to hunt the poison master cultivator down after he he killed a early core formation cultivator from the Jingshen clan who was sent hunt the poison master at first since he had already killed the su clan and another 3 similar sized clans in thier lands.

The Su clan was founded by a rogue cultivator from the plains but as a foundation stage cultivator had to escape the plains thanks to a young master of a powerful clan he had offended , he needed to escape the plains so eventually he ended up in the desert.Wich actually ended up being a fortuitous decision in hindsight since he found a core formation cultivation method the first year he arrived in the desert and in the year after that met his dao companion . He founded the Su clan soon after and ended up settling down in jingshen clan lands after he saved the life of a nascent soul elders great grandson from the jingshen clan . The founder of the Su clan went on to have 4 children of wich 2 died adventuring and Su Cheng himself is descended of the youngest child of the founder. The founder ended up dying about 300 hundred years after he arrived in desert as a late core formation cultivator, wich was about 900 years ago to a nascent soul cannibal sect elder.

His father was a great circle foundation forging cultivator and the clan leader and his mother had just broken through to late stage foundation forging and had hopes of breaking into core formation due to her talent
Su cheng had a happy childhood since he was considered the heir of the clan and his cultivation talent was very good atleast compared to the other su clan children with even her mother mentioning that she had hopes he could become a core formation cultivator hopefully. He broke through to the 1st heaventstage rather fast and was at the peak of the stage when he decided to adventuring in the nearby mountains . In the 2nd week of his adventuring he ended up having to flee from a 6th heavenstage beast after he had killed its youngling , he ended up being chased for three days and nights and several times he was very lucky to have survived and only escaped thanks to finding a cave with a rather scary aura to wich the beast wasnt willing to follow him.

The cave turned out to be a cave abode , the array was rather old and was left behind mainly to seek a inheritor in the qi refining stage to a early nascent soul cultivator who was preparing for getting revenge against the blood cannibals for killing his dao companion. The early nascent soul elder was a rather lucky person himself and as a foundation forging cultivator found a very domineering body refining cultivation method called Flood Dragon Body Refinement method wich usually makes the cultivator be near unbeatable against people with similar cultivations.Thats mainly thanks to the cultivation method requiring to have cultivated atleast to the 10th heavenstage in the qi refining stage wich he had done so already thanks finding a great pill when he was starting to forge his foundation . Su Cheng was impressed with the cultivation method and all it was required to swear a oath to forever oppose the blood cannibal sect and he started cultivating it immeditaly . The cave abode was set up before he went hunting for the blood cannibal who killed his dao companion.

Su Cheng ended up comprehending the tehnique for 2 months before leaving and was heading home in a great mood when he found the fate of his clan and thought for awhile that he was the only survivor . Then for about a month in living in the ruins of his clan he met his aunt who had heard about Su clans disaster and came to check things out and hoping for survivors. She only found her nephew half feral and some mortal relatives in a nearby city as the only survivors . For Su Cheng it was strange seeing someone who so resembles his mother since this has been the 2nd time in his life he met her and him not remembering the first time since it was just after his birth.

After Su Cheng arrives in the clan he asks his aunt her help to research his cultivation method and the elder behind it. The search took about a week but they found that elder died about 2400 years ago and was considered a great talent for the time since he wasnt from a big clan or a sect and still got to nascent soul stage at the age of 420 . The person who killed his dao companion turned out to be a great circle core formation blood cannibal cultivator who was preparing to break through to nascent soul at the time . He killed him rather easily after about a decade of hunting down his location but his fate then ran into a problem . The blood cannibal cultivator was the son of the sect leader of blood cannibals who was a middle stage nascent soul cultivator at the time and he vowed to hunt down and consume him in revenge . The sect leader hunted him for 3 years before finding him and they had a great battle , he injured the sect leader rather badly considering the situation but only managed to escape thanks to activating a secret tehnique wich had worsened his already bad injuries from the battle and he ended up dying two years later from his wounds.


Su Cheng has promised to someday rebuild the Su clan and thanks to that is rather interested in finding a dao companion to start rebuilding his clan with but has ruled out a bride with the golden devil bloodline to avoid inheriting the curse. Otherwise thanks to the ruination of his clan he is very dedicated to cultivation and is a training maniac to get as strong as possible since he sees a path to early nascent soul being available thanks to inheritance he found . He plans to get to 10th heavenstage atleast so he can keep cultivating his cultivation method and if his lifespan and talent allow get to 12th stage and then break through.

- The bonus would be - Faster cultivation speed compared to others please thanks to talent and the cultivation method he found.
- I hope my cultivation method Flood Dragon Body Refinement method is allowed . If nascent soul level isnt allowed i can downgrade it to core formation i guess.
- I also hope that the char sneaks into this turn and not the last turn before the upcoming trial please so that he has some time to grow please @occipitallobe
 
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Rina Callista 9 - Contemplation at the Manor Lake
Rina Callista
Contemplation at the Manor Lake

All good things must come to an end--and while her adventures with the other members of the Five were a grand change of pace, exploring the limits of Turtlebone Mountain and discovering all manner of treasures, defeating all manner of foes, and generally making a name for themselves, Rina ultimately had to make her excuses and return home for her final preparations.

Because the twenty year grace period had concluded, and her Cultivation hadn't advanced much at all with the rationing on Spirit Stones she had to work with to keep up with the pace of the adventure. It was disappointing but she had gained greatly in treasures, fighting experience, and mental state--and she made some good friends too!

Her return back home to hear of the events of the past twenty years though was of moderate concern. Child Corpse Gulper being slain by the Grand Elder was a great thing! And apparently they even used much of his remains to fund the establishment of a great fortress to ward off the incursions of the Devil Bees! All good! Word of the beginning of another Demon Suppressing War in the Great Battlefield? Less so--most of her friends lived there! She hoped they'd all be okay!

Then there's the Jingshen jockeying for position, and the Hundred Year Trials looming further onward--and Rina couldn't help but feel that even with her gains, it wasn't enough yet. Her Hundred League Boots still hadn't discharged their enchantment--which was good!

She absently rubbed the bracer she had picked up--a gift from Millet before they all departed--it served as a containment treasure for the drop of blood she recovered from the borders of the fortress. (Which had been dutifully recorded in the logs of the Clan's knowledge and a promise she would hear about it when the time came to investigate it)

Two great treasures--one to avoid an unwinnable battle, the other to take a battle that was just out of reach and turn it into one she could win. That was two emergency treasures, right?

"You seem troubled" A voice spoke up, Rina shifting from her seat with a start, looking up from the pond of the Callista Manor she had been staring into. Tall, barely touched by the Tarnish, more on the lanky side than anything else.

"Is it that obvious, Father?" Rina asked, shaking her head and looking back. "I just feel that events are getting out of control faster than I had feared. I don't regret the path I've taken--it's been rewarding so far…"

"But you're dissatisfied with how you can't participate more than this, hmm?" Jovi Callista mused, sitting down beside her. Middle of Foundation Establishment before he stalled out--a weaver of modest skill but no particular skill in combat save for the basic training expected of every cultivating adult of the Clan. "That's normal, for all that you've grown--you're still years away from even achieving the expected standard of anyone who reaches the next step"

"it almost feels like cheating." Rina shakes her head. "I've not found a match within Essence Gathering since I set down the Keystone of Physique." She raised her hands before her and clenched them tightly. "For goodness sake, I drew blood from a Foundation Establishment fighter with a single blow! My body has become a thing that can crush anyone in my own age group…. And yet there's still that wall standing before me."

"It's the fundamental failing of this world." Jovi mused. "You can be the most talented, the strongest of your generation, with skill that dwarfs anyone of your level." He snorts. "Then some snot-nosed kid half of your age finds the shopping list of some old monster, rises to Foundation Establishment, and cuts a swath before something puts him down. Effort is never rewarded as much as simple dumb luck is."

"That doesn't feel right." Rina disagrees, biting her lower lip as she chews through it. "I've seen all matter of other techniques in my travels--I've seen people invoke the Five Elements to bind, burn, and heal alike. I've seen people with superlative skill that can summon forth trees and meadows where their arrow lands. I've even seen insight so clever that simply gazing upon a possibility causes it to become real." She sets her hands down to her sides, and sighs.

"And yet, all of this effort, all of this skill--and how many of the Blood Path have I clashed with? Not even the disciples of one of the great Sects--simply rogue cultivators who found some piecemeal legacy somewhere! Cultivation is supposed to be hard!"

Jovi listens to Rina's remarks quietly, and takes a moment to think. "It is strange, is it not?"

"You know something?" Rina asked, turning her attention back to her father. He frowned. "I… speculate something. Just the talk around the scholae when we're throwing ideas around." He waits for Rina to gesture for him to continue.

"It's just from the pieces of lore we've picked up and analyzed over the years of our clashes against the Devil Bees and the Blood Cannibals, plus all of the other Rogue Cultivators who keep springing up like weeds." He wiggles his hand. "Fundamentally, when we compare their techniques with our own, and those of the other great powers we have insight upon, their Paths and approaches are as varied as any other. Most great powers favor a Source of Essence, and an approach."

"I've heard of this" Rina nods, following along. "Breath, Beasts, and Stone as the conventional sources, with Blood as the unorthodox."

"Yes, unorthodox." Jovi nods, getting into the lecture. "Breath, Beasts, and Stones are essentially interchangable, there is no great loss from switching from one to another--and so most organizations focus on the method that best suits the resources they have access to and adjust as matters change. Blood stands out, because once you begin employing it beyond the most superficial mechanisms--all other methods of accumulating Essence become useless. So one who begins on the Blood Path is forced to remain on the Blood Path forevermore. But many of us have been wondering why this is the case--because Essence is ultimately Essence--the source of it matters, but generally speaking, once ingested--one form of Essence is no different from the others."

"Isn't it supposed to be some kind of heavenly punishment?" Rina raises an eyebrow. "That they… 'Cast aside their humanity and are thus accursed?'"

"That's the answer most Righteous powers spit out, and I think that's a part of it--ancestors know that we certainly know that the Heavens can warp natural law to punish one group or another… But the Heavens tend to make their genuine displeasure very clear, as we know better than any others. it would be easier for the Heavens to simply restrict the effect of Blood Path once one is committed to it if the Heavens genuinely were offended by its presence. This does not happen."

"...' Rina furrowed her brow and tapped her chin. "Are you advocating that the Heavens encourage monsters to remain monsters by taking away all possible routes to veer off that path?"

"Not directly." Jovi shook his head. "What we know of the Heavens thus far--of the lore we have saved and found since--is that the Heavens seek bloodshed above all else."

Rina's mouth hung open for a moment at that as the implications dawned on her. "It needs a punishment for any who seek peace." She turns red. "A very easy method to create villains, that rapidly outscales any other cultivation method in perversity and power, and can be set upon with the smallest scrap of legacy that was missed."

"And the only solution to this is vicious suppression of the people to keep population numbers down, and constant military patrols and executions of any Blood Cults that begin to develop." Jovi concluded. "Our thoughts are that the Blood Path exists in order to ensure that any stable society that sees no need for war is turned into kindling for a new fire, that justifies the violence and oppression of the other Powers. It is a constant temptation whispering in the ears of all powers, that you can raise your fortunes by devouring those neighbours who are weaker than you. That most powers develop grand codes of conduct in order to limit this impulse is to their credit--even if we do not have the luxury of being able to abide by those codes ourselves."

"So…" Rina started. "There's basically nothing that can be done? We just have to accept that we're never going to be free of the monsters?"

"Not anytime soon" Jovi shrugged, then poked Rina's forehead. "That's for the likes of you to deal with. Ordinary people can't change the world--it's too well made and too comfortable in its status quo to change. It takes someone who has the will to push beyond the 'Obvious' path. There's too many cheats and legacies out there that will punish anyone who operates within the limits of this world."

"I'm not really the best choice for this, am I?" Rina whispered after a moment. But finds herself pulled into a hug. "You're Rina Callista, Cultivator of the Golden Devils and one of the most promising members of our generation. You have a very real chance of achieving the Four Olympian Keystones and rising to levels we've not seen before. As long as you don't lose that heart and compassion of yours on the way, you'll have a shot at it." He patted her on the back and broke it off. "On that note…" He reaches into the satchel at his side, and withdraws a coil of braided rope, tossing it towards the flummoxed and flushed Rina. "Your mother and I have been working on that the past twenty years. Empower it with your Essence and throw it at your problem, as long as they're not at Core Formation, it'll bind them for at least a minute. More than enough time to make good your escape. Those boots are pretty good but more safety nets are always for the best when you're going into a Secret Realm."

"Thanks?" Rina mumbled. "I'll try not to need it though!" She takes a deep breath, holds it for a moment, and lets it out, before slapping her cheeks. "Right! Thanks for the talk Dad! I'll be in there and out in a jiffy! I'll be ready for those trials before anyone knows it!"

"That's my girl!" Jovi smiled. "We'll be waiting for you on the other side!"

"Just try not to get into any trouble before I get back!" Rina hopped up to her feet. "If I'm going to do this champion of the clan thing, I'll need a Clan to come home to in the first place!"

She was as ready as she'd ever be for the next leg of her adventure! The Qiguai Secret Realm was a dangerous place, in a piece of space well beyond the Third Sea and its environs. Many had explored it in the past, few had plumbed the depths of its secrets. Many had been slain in their attempts to seek lucky chances outside the Third Sea, but others actually succeeded.

She had the training, she had the strength, and she had the tools to excel. If she couldn't make a killing here, who could?

Nobody, that was who!

She still held those thoughts in mind in the days ahead, as she travelled the desert roads to the Hard Shell Mountains, climbing the many peaks, and facing many a mighty beast on the journey to the Qiguai Clan's lands.

Of course, arrival turned out to be less… Full of gravitas than expected.

"Rules are simple" The bored guide claimed, yawning. "The Secret Realm opens for one year--Qi Condensation can enter once every twenty years, and one third of your material findings are to be remanded to the Qiguai Clan on departure if you want to have any hopes of coming back again. To compensate for immaterial gains, there is a list of treasures and contribution point values on one of those Jade Slips there." He gestured to a tray with several planted there.

"Long as you've got enough treasures to exchange a value of one third of your overall gains? We're happy, you'll be happy, and we'll welcome you back if you decide to return for the Foundation Establishment bracket--presuming you survive your Tribulation at any rate." He lowered the book he was reading, and raised an eyebrow.

"Golden Devil, huh?" He shrugs. "Most of the tribulation-effecting stuff has been cleaned out for this last little bit if that's what you're looking for."

"It'd be nice to have, but I'm just here to try my luck and see what happens" Rina smiles and bows her head. "Thank you for your assistance." She reaches into her satchel and counts out a few spirit stones, passing them over. "Huh, a courteous girl" He smiles and accepts the spirit stones. "I'll give you a little tip for what it's worth." He gestures up to a symbol on the top of the portal. "People tend to have better luck on arrival when the symbol there is pointing to the right. It's still up to luck for the most part--but most peopel don't end up getting spat out inside a beast's den at the very least. Be boring if your trip ended that soon, wouldn't it?" He grinned and sat back again. "Best of luck!"

"I don't need luck" Rina looked up at the doorway to the Secret Realm. "I'll make my own, with my own hands and my own preparations." She took a deep breath, steadied herself--and waited for the symbol to shift to the correct direction.

Then she flung herself into the gateway, and found herself in another world entire.

[Rina Callista has entered the Qiguai Clan Secret Realm.

Results have been rolled and provided to me already, further installments in this series will provide a dramatization of the events that unfold.

Please wait warmly until it's ready!
]
 
Our thoughts are that the Blood Path exists in order to ensure that any stable society that sees no need for war is turned into kindling for a new fire, that justifies the violence and oppression of the other Powers. It is a constant temptation whispering in the ears of all powers, that you can raise your fortunes by devouring those neighbours who are weaker than you. That most powers develop grand codes of conduct in order to limit this impulse is to their credit--even if we do not have the luxury of being able to abide by those codes ourselves.
Oh wow, that's a chilling take on the concept. Really like the impression of the Heaven Will being one with an actual sense of presence and menace.
[Rina Callista has entered the Qiguai Clan Secret Realm.

Results have been rolled and provided to me already, further installments in this series will provide a dramatization of the events that unfold.

Please wait warmly until it's ready!
]
Nice, another one entering the realm as well! May the rolls ever be in your favor 🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

@occipitallobe 2 questions if you don't mind.

For Good Seeds with Beast Companions, are the Beast Companions on the same cultivation level as the Good Seed ?

My Good Seed is entering the Qiguai Secret Realm this turn, can i add a line saying he's focusing more on his attention on ways to make his beast companion stronger so that a majority of the Positive Fate Rolls would be stuff like that ? Something like 70 for Qing Yun, 30 for Xiao Yi as an example.
 
Oh wow, that's a chilling take on the concept. Really like the impression of the Heaven Will being one with an actual sense of presence and menace.

I agree completley. @Alectai - it fits the world tremendously well. My original thought was simply 'why does blood path exist, and why don't people use it sparingly alongside other methods?', which is why Blood Path is exclusive. Of course, any worldbuilding thought that asks 'how can I keep the world in a state of relatively violent stasis' will ultimately lend itself to a conflict-promoting Heavens in-story.

Nice, another one entering the realm as well! May the rolls ever be in your favor 🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

@occipitallobe 2 questions if you don't mind.

For Good Seeds with Beast Companions, are the Beast Companions on the same cultivation level as the Good Seed ?

My Good Seed is entering the Qiguai Secret Realm this turn, can i add a line saying he's focusing more on his attention on ways to make his beast companion stronger so that a majority of the Positive Fate Rolls would be stuff like that ? Something like 70 for Qing Yun, 30 for Xiao Yi as an example.

I usually assume beast companions are roughly at the strength of the cultivator en masse. Which is to say if you have a thousand beasts, they're roughly the strength of the cultivator. If you have one, same deal. Fate is more random and Secret Realms are absolutely moreso - nobody who enters one gets something specifically tuned to them.

I wonder how Xianxia protagonist would react to the golden devil clan?

Your average xianxia protagonist would see these evil devils and punish them.

Long Chen would absolutely ally with the Golden Devils, fight for them, and ultimately take vengeance for our poor Clan after they were destroyed by one of his many enemies.
 
I agree completley. @Alectai - it fits the world tremendously well. My original thought was simply 'why does blood path exist, and why don't people use it sparingly alongside other methods?', which is why Blood Path is exclusive. Of course, any worldbuilding thought that asks 'how can I keep the world in a state of relatively violent stasis' will ultimately lend itself to a conflict-promoting Heavens in-story.



I usually assume beast companions are roughly at the strength of the cultivator en masse. Which is to say if you have a thousand beasts, they're roughly the strength of the cultivator. If you have one, same deal. Fate is more random and Secret Realms are absolutely moreso - nobody who enters one gets something specifically tuned to them.

I somehow get the feeling that we're gradually building up to confront the heavens directly, ICFTH. I Can Face The Heavens!

Also, thanks for the quick response! I will just leave it to say heading to the Qiguai realm in this case
 
Your average xianxia protagonist would see these evil devils and punish them.

Long Chen would absolutely ally with the Golden Devils, fight for them, and ultimately take vengeance for our poor Clan after they were destroyed by one of his many enemies.

That's...kinda depressing to hear but I can totally understand why the average xianxia protagonist would simply just kill our devils.

We're a demonic clan that doesn't hesitate to make use of every cultivator we kill as resources due to our horrible situation, most xianxia protagonists don't give a shit about the reasons behind the actions of demonic clans. They might learn more about it and feel sorry about it after they've done grievous damage to the clan, and maybe decide to right the wrongs that the heavens have done upon us but it'll just a footnote in their story.

Here's hoping our good seeds become strong enough to overturn the fate that Heaven has cursed us with.

Also awesome quest. I might just make a Good Seed myself.
 
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The Devilpine sap
Is it a lifesaving treasure or a fighting across realms treasure?

Visiting the secret realm has started to sound tempting, but the idea might be tempered depending on whether or not the two posters above gets turned into a bloddy mist or not.
 
@occipitallobe
1. What is the Heavenly Cloud Realm in the Organ Meat Desert?
2. Could a Spirit Severing person use the Qi-draining effect of the Organ Meat Desert to stay on the third turtle?
3. Who is Divine King Zhao?
 
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@occipitallobe
The Devilpine sap
Is it a lifesaving treasure or a fighting across realms treasure?

Visiting the secret realm has started to sound tempting, but the idea might be tempered depending on whether or not the two posters above gets turned into a bloddy mist or not.
I mean, narratively speaking it would be pretty epic if more Good Seeds choose to join in. It would convey the tone of US all risking ourselves in hopes of being better able to protect the clan during the Trials.

Personally, i decided to go because my Life-saving treasure should save me from anything that might end my good seed and i have another turn to grab another one before the Trials start. The gamble is if i get any worthwhile from the usage of my Life-saving treasure.

That's...kinda depressing to hear but I can totally understand why the average xianxia protagonist would simply just kill our devils.

We're a demonic clan that doesn't hesitate to make use of every cultivator we kill as resources due to our horrible situation, most xianxia protagonists don't give a shit about the reasons behind the actions of demonic clans. They might learn more about it and feel sorry about it after they've done grievous damage to the clan, and maybe decide to right the wrongs that the heavens have done upon us but it'll just a footnote in their story.

Here's hoping our good seeds become strong enough to overturn the fate that Heaven has cursed us with.

Also awesome quest. I might just make a Good Seed myself.
YESSS, Join ussss our Doors are open and the Clan welcomes all! Fight with us to break through the Desert and eventually challenge Heaven!

* Death and loss of limb guaranteed, Cultivators signing up might be turned into casseroles.
 
@occipitallobe
The Devilpine sap
Is it a lifesaving treasure or a fighting across realms treasure?

Visiting the secret realm has started to sound tempting, but the idea might be tempered depending on whether or not the two posters above gets turned into a bloddy mist or not.

The Devilpine Sap is a lifesaving treasure. It lets Demetrius take hits, but doesn't offer him any options for fighting across realms. I think from now on I'll notate that in brackets in future reports to make it clear.

@occipitallobe
1. What is the Heavenly Cloud Realm in the Organ Meat Desert?
2. Could a Spirit Severing person use the Qi-draining effect of the Organ Meat Desert to stay on the third turtle?
3. Who is Divine King Zhao?

1. The Heavenly Cloud Realm is known to be a true heaven for cultivators, but unreachable to all below Nascent Soul. A place where the Qi is as thick as any other Sea, where Spirit Herbs grow like grass. That's what the legends say, anyway.

2. Spirit Severing cultivators can stay, but maintaining their cultivation is a real issue. They basically need to strip entire areas of their resources relentlessly just to stay in Spirit Severing, and those resources are weak enough that they'll never advance. After awhile the question becomes 'do I strip my homeland to its bedrock for a few short years of survival, or leave the Third Sea and perhaps continue my path?'.

3. Even the Clan do not have records of Divine King Zhao. His anvil is over five thousand li tall, however, and his name is carved on the front of it. Many have tried to climb it, but no cultivator - not even the rare Spirit Severing cultivator who has attempted to do so - has ever returned.
 
Good Seed submission:

@occipitallobe - My attempt at a good seed . I have to warn you and others english is my 3rd language i learned and im not a writer at all but i love the genre so im giving it a try.

Su Cheng .

He is a 21 year old 3rd heavenstage qi cultivator form the Su clan who broke through to that thanks to a lucky encounter from a inheritance . He arrived in the Golden Devil clan cause of the destruction of most of his clan to a great circle foundation forging poison master who was on a rampage since his life span was about run out and he needed materials to break through to core formations more easily. . The Jingshen clan ended up having to send a nascent soul elder to hunt the poison master cultivator down after he he killed a early core formation cultivator from the Jingshen clan who was sent hunt the poison master at first since he had already killed the su clan and another 3 similar sized clans in thier lands.

The Su clan was founded by a rogue cultivator from the plains but as a foundation stage cultivator had to escape the plains thanks to a young master of a powerful clan he had offended , he needed to escape the plains so eventually he ended up in the desert.Wich actually ended up being a fortuitous decision in hindsight since he found a core formation cultivation method the first year he arrived in the desert and in the year after that met his dao companion . He founded the Su clan soon after and ended up settling down in jingshen clan lands after he saved the life of a nascent soul elders great grandson from the jingshen clan . The founder of the Su clan went on to have 4 children of wich 2 died adventuring and Su Cheng himself is descended of the youngest child of the founder. The founder ended up dying about 300 hundred years after he arrived in desert as a late core formation cultivator, wich was about 900 years ago to a nascent soul cannibal sect elder.

His father was a great circle foundation forging cultivator and the clan leader and his mother had just broken through to late stage foundation forging and had hopes of breaking into core formation due to her talent
Su cheng had a happy childhood since he was considered the heir of the clan and his cultivation talent was very good atleast compared to the other su clan children with even her mother mentioning that she had hopes he could become a core formation cultivator hopefully. He broke through to the 2nd heaventstage rather fast and was at the peak of 2nd stage when he decided to adventuring in the nearby mountains . In the 2nd week of his adventuring he ended up having to flee from a 6th heavenstage beast after he had killed its youngling , he ended up being chased for three days and nights and several times he was very lucky to have survived and only escaped thanks to finding a cave with a rather scary aura to wich the beast wasnt willing to follow him.

The cave turned out to be a cave abode , the array was rather old and was left behind mainly to seek a inheritor in the qi refining stage to a early nascent soul cultivator who was preparing for getting revenge against the blood cannibals for killing his dao companion. The early nascent soul elder was a rather lucky person himself and as a foundation forging cultivator found a very domineering body refining cultivation method called Flood Dragon Body Refinement method wich usually makes the cultivator be near unbeatable against people with similar cultivations.Thats mainly thanks to the cultivation method requiring to have cultivated atleast to the 10th heavenstage in the qi refining stage wich he had done so already thanks finding a great pill when he was starting to forge his foundation . Su Cheng was impressed with the cultivation method and all it was required to swear a oath to forever oppose the blood cannibal sect and he started cultivating it immeditaly . The cave abode was set up before he went hunting for the blood cannibal who killed his dao companion.

Su Cheng ended up cultivaiting for 2 months and broke through to the 3rd heaven stage and was heading home in a great mood when he found the fate of his clan and thought for awhile that he was the only survivor . Then for about a month in living in the ruins of his clan he met his aunt who had heard about Su clans disaster and came to check things out and hoping for survivors. She only found her nephew half feral and some mortal relatives in a nearby city as the only survivors . For Su Cheng it was strange seeing someone who so resembles his mother since this has been the 2nd time in his life he met her and him not remembering the first time since it was just after his birth.

After Su Cheng arrives in the clan he asks his aunt her help to research his cultivation method and the elder behind it. The search took about a week but they found that elder died about 2400 years ago and was considered a great talent for the time since he wasnt from a big clan or a sect and still got to nascent soul stage at the age of 420 . The person who killed his dao companion turned out to be a great circle core formation blood cannibal cultivator who was preparing to break through to nascent soul at the time . He killed him rather easily after about a decade of hunting down his location but his fate then ran into a problem . The blood cannibal cultivator was the son of the sect leader of blood cannibals who was a middle stage nascent soul cultivator at the time and he vowed to hunt down and consume him in revenge . The sect leader hunted him for 3 years before finding him and they had a great battle , he injured the sect leader rather badly considering the situation but only managed to escape thanks to activating a secret tehnique wich had worsened his already bad injuries from the battle and he ended up dying two years later from his wounds.


Su Cheng has promised to someday rebuild the Su clan and thanks to that is rather interested in finding a dao companion to start rebuilding his clan with but has ruled out a bride with the golden devil bloodline to avoid inheriting the curse. Otherwise thanks to the ruination of his clan he is very dedicated to cultivation and is a training maniac to get as strong as possible since he sees a path to early nascent soul being available thanks to inheritance he found . He plans to get to 10th heavenstage atleast so he can keep cultivating his cultivation method and if his lifespan and talent allow get to 12th stage and then break through.

- The bonus would be - Faster cultivation speed compared to others please thanks to talent and the cultivation method he found.
- I hope my cultivation method Flood Dragon Body Refinement method is allowed . If nascent soul level isnt allowed i can downgrade it to core formation i guess.
- I also hope that the char sneaks into this turn and not the last turn before the upcoming trial please so that he has some time to grow please @occipitallobe

@atrophy this is mainly fine - it adds some interesting plot hooks I think would go well in the story, too!

That being said, everyone starts at 1st Heavenstage - this just makes managing cultivation easier. If you want to tack a line about him being badly wounded and falling a few Heavenstages before arriving at the Clan to keep the story intact or something along those lines, that's fine.

Secondly, a powerful cultivation that makes you strong in the same small realm is fine - so is faster cultivation (note faster cultivation is a small bonus - you'll end up being roughly ~25% of a Heavenstage ahead of your peers on average), but not both.
 
I guess i ment it will be stronger when u reach foundation level since u have to get the 10th heavenstage and the later parts of the manual are reliant on that was my thought . Not the inherit tehnique itself and it defiantly is just a very good qi cultivation tehnique. But if that isnt okay just i can edit that part and want the cultivation speed instead.

I ment the speed of cultivation bonus please for my good seed.

Changed to first level but at the peak atleast considering his age ? Was hoping for higher for the trials but if he dies i guess i can do another there.

And please fit me into this turn so im on abit higher level for the trials.

The goal is atleast 10th stage so i can keep doing cultivating the tehnique and if things go well get into the 12th stage before breaking through.

Edited the things u asked - @occipitallobe and i doubt that i will write many more omakes and if i do i imagine they will be on the small side otherwise but answering questions and stuff is fine.
 
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Thanks @atrophy . If your Good Seed is in before the next report comes out, you're in for this turn - so no worries on that front. If it's a generic technique that's fine - I probably misread it.
 
Alright, I'm gonna start moving the stuff from my good seed, mainly the stuff I've done on Array's, onto the Wiki.

We should also make a 'small details' page where we can store tiny things, like specific foods or places with too little detail to have its own page on the wiki.
Edit: @occipitallobe you forgot to threadmark my seventh omake
 
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Hmmph… This Wiki is a Good Seed

Good Seed Quest now has a wiki!
Create pages for anything and everything related to this quest. Have some worldbuilding you want other people to reference? Write it down here.

Note that you do not need to make an account to edit pages, but please create one anyway, as this helps with tracking who made what edit.

@occipitallobe
 
Alright, I'm gonna start moving the stuff from my good seed, mainly the stuff I've done on Array's, onto the Wiki.

We should also make a 'small details' page where we can store tiny things, like specific foods or places with too little detail to have its own page on the wiki.
Edit: @occipitallobe you forgot to threadmark my seventh omake

Whoops! Done.

@occipitallobe how old are the Sarantapechos sisters?

They're both 605 years of age.


Adhoc vote count started by occipitallobe on Sep 17, 2020 at 8:31 PM, finished with 196 posts and 13 votes.

  • [X] Plan Firming Foundations
    -[X] Increasing Wealth - More trade, more mines, more growth. Aim to find more Spirit Stones, tax more from traders, whatever works to increase your Clan Wealth. Increases Wealth by an average of 5.
    -[X] Economic Activity - Carve arrays, scribe useful cultivation techniques onto scrolls, hunt down useful opportunities that might be dangerous to a Core Formation Elder. Make some money for the Clan.
    -[X] Invest in Colonisation (10 Wealth)
    -[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
    -[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
    -[X] Increasing Wealth - More trade, more mines, more growth. Aim to find more Spirit Stones, tax more from traders, whatever works to increase your Clan Wealth. Increases Wealth by an average of 5.
    -[X] Lecturing - You can simply lecture your many juniors on cultivation. Spend your time helping them grow, using less resources and ensuring better growth for the Clan.
    -[X] Invest in Colonisation (10 Wealth)
    -[X] Build up the Scorpion Road (5 Wealth)
    -[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
    -[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
    [X] Plan Rebuild and Grow
    -[X] Intrigue(Devil Bee Sect)
    -[X] Lecturing
    -[X] Invest in Colonisation (10 Wealth)
    -[X] Build up the Scorpion Road (5 Wealth)
    -[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
    [X]Plan: Build up for War
    -[X] Increasing Wealth - More trade, more mines, more growth. Aim to find more Spirit Stones, tax more from traders, whatever works to increase your Clan Wealth. Increases Wealth by an average of 5.
    -[X] Economic Activity - Carve arrays, scribe useful cultivation techniques onto scrolls, hunt down useful opportunities that might be dangerous to a Core Formation Elder. Make some money for the Clan.
    --[X] Focus on going for short but high paying jobs, one time contracts that can be quickly rushed through to make as much money as possible before the hundred year trials.
    -[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
    -[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
    -[X] Build Engines of War (5 Wealth)
    [X] Plan: infrastructure
    -[X] Fortifying (against the devil bees)
    -[X] Lecturing
    -[X] Build up the Scorpion Road (5 Wealth)
    -[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
    -[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
    [X] Plan Turtle
    -[X] Fortifying Earth Bounty City Spirit Mine
    ---[X] Revamp the security of the mine by instituting daily passcodes, build up arrays to hide and direct attention away from the mines. Prepare explosives to blow up the entrances of the mines to hide it while minimzing damage to the mining infrastructure.
    ----[X] Assign more Clansman to practice defending the mines and ensure that there is always a rotation of clansmen nearby
    -[X] Lecturing
    --[X] Lecture the juniors on common tricks and arts used by the Trial participants.
    ---[X] Teach them tricks and ways to survive against a stronger foe, such as the best ways to leverage the Clan's formations
    -[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
    -[X] Build up the Scorpion Road (5 Wealth)
    -[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
    [X] Plan Investment
    -[X] Increasing Wealth - More trade, more mines, more growth. Aim to find more Spirit Stones, tax more from traders, whatever works to increase your Clan Wealth. Increases Wealth by an average of 5.
    -[X] Economic Activity - Carve arrays, scribe useful cultivation techniques onto scrolls, hunt down useful opportunities that might be dangerous to a Core Formation Elder. Make some money for the Clan.
    -[X] Build up the Scorpion Road (5 Wealth)
    -[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
    -[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)


Not calling the vote just yet - there are a number of plans I think are all very close to one another despite being scattered.

Remember, all voting is Approval Voting. It's completely fine to look at several competing plans and think 'I like all of these better than #1, I'll vote for all of them!"

Normally in a quest I come out with arguments in favor of the unpopular options. This quest has kept me very busy, but I think I'll start giving my ancestors past quests some face and doing so here. Keep in mind these aren't reasons to change, and it doesn't mean I think one is better than the other - I'm just here to support the underdog, whether it be the Clan or the less popular plan.

Firstly, Scorpion Road vs Colonisation. Colonisation is good for longterm strength. Building up the Scorpion Road, however both increases income in future, and offers nice diplomatic options quickly. This opens up trading possibilities, 'giving hostages' to the Strength Purity Sect to help save some juniors from the Trials if need be, and safeguards a territory that is likely to be far weaker once the Trials plough through it.

Secondly, Lecturing vs Economic Activity. Lecturing is, broadly speaking, a better action if you're seeking to raise disciples. Manuel lecturing disciples is more efficient than Manuel earning wealth and transforming that wealth into training and power for disciples. Why? It's Manuel's speciality!

Lastly, Fortification vs Increasing Wealth. Increasing Wealth gives more options in future, but more Fortification across your territory means more places to bunker down during the Hundred-Year Trials.
 
Righttttt I forgot about this. It's the same as the leading vote but Manuel is lecturing instead of making money.

[X] Plan Sound Investments
-[X] Increasing Wealth - More trade, more mines, more growth. Aim to find more Spirit Stones, tax more from traders, whatever works to increase your Clan Wealth. Increases Wealth by an average of 5.
-[X] Lecturing - You can simply lecture your many juniors on cultivation. Spend your time helping them grow, using less resources and ensuring better growth for the Clan.
-[X] Invest in Colonisation (10 Wealth)
-[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
-[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
 
[X] Plan Maximal Investments
-[X] Increasing Wealth - More trade, more mines, more growth. Aim to find more Spirit Stones, tax more from traders, whatever works to increase your Clan Wealth. Increases Wealth by an average of 5.
-[X] Lecturing - You can simply lecture your many juniors on cultivation. Spend your time helping them grow, using less resources and ensuring better growth for the Clan.
-[X] Invest in Colonisation (10 Wealth)
-[X] Rebuild the Golden Eye Array (7 Wealth)
-[X] Regain Full Strength (6 Wealth)
 
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