EvaUnit01
Kept you waiting, huh?
That'll do.
Rosario and Joestar
- Thread starter EvaUnit01
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RoninLawst
Professional N.E.E.T.
- Location
- USA
...I must exist outside the universe or something, because I never had to deal with any drama as a teen!
Crappy joke aside, I really enjoyed this chapter! Succubae is gonna talk to Pinkie and Juice-box, Splaty is a helpful boi, and Snowflake wants some reassurance. What is poor Cap-hair going to do?
...Anyway! I'm gonna wait a bit to vote. There will probably be more options to choose from later on, and I'd rather not put all my eggs in one basket!
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Nawaf
Lurker who likes while lurking.
- Location
- Bangladesh
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
- Location
- Buttfuck, Nowhere, Iceland
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
Jotaro is not a wordy kind of guy so, made this to be a more to the point sort of vote
[X] *inhale, exhale* "Mizore, I love you and I want to do right by you"
-[X] "Fatherhood scares me since I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, it makes me afraid to let you down"
-[X] "Having that in mind, I am willing to go as fast or as slow as you feel like"
[X] *inhale, exhale* "Mizore, I love you and I want to do right by you"
-[X] "Fatherhood scares me since I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, it makes me afraid to let you down"
-[X] "Having that in mind, I am willing to go as fast or as slow as you feel like"
- Location
- United States
[X]...I'll be honest Mizore, I do love you, and you have no idea how grateful I am that your giving me this extra time to get my shit together, but...I just don't know how to BE a father. My mother raised me all by herself, and once I hit my teens, I was taking care of her just as much as she was taking care of me. I don't have any father figures to base myself off of, I don't know what a father should do for his sons, and definitely not any daughters. I want to be happy with you, for the rest of my life, but I'm not sure if I'll ever manage to even be a decent father, let alone a great one like one our kids should have.
One side is stone-faced idiot who don,t know how to 'Feelings', the other is recuperating Kuudere/ Yandere/ Something.
You can go with drama....
Or you can go with comedy of errors.
[x] Mizore POV: Even as situation became more oppresing, I'm waiting. And I keep waiting, even as his brows furrowed into concentration, and his face turned into 'stone-faced delinquent ready to demolish your face and your house and your parents and your little dog, too'. He's not angry, that's just the how Kujo-Senpai looked like thinking things overly hard. Which is good, because Kujo-Senpai actually thinking and considering his answer.
Ah, and now he starts emoting with his hand. That's new.
...Wait, why he starts breathing like... that? ...Is he channeling Hamon?
...Is this really hard for Kujo-senpai?
...Why he started to clutching his head and- is he having nosebleed- "KUJO-SENPAI, STOP!!"
"I don't know how to father!"
That's the first sentence he spurted out. And he realized that as well, because he start putting his mouth in his hand.
And slowly, but surely, I can just tell that his body started to relax, releasing most tension in his body. Well, most. He's not Senpai without his tension.
And even then, I can felt it. Senpai... certainly at the most vulnerable, at least emotionally, since we were... getting around together. Part of me felt some shame for causing his vulnerability. Some part of me-ohmygodsenpaisocuteiwannahughimandkishimandgethis-
Okay, focus. Senpai had said it. He didn't hate you or thinking of you as nuisance. He loved you, he's fond of you, that's for sure. He just said he don't know to... father? Wait. What is that actually-
"My old man... rarely at home as far as I can remember. He's... famous musician. He's travelling world. A lot."
Oh. Oh. That's... kinda makes sense.
"He's responsible, and not a harsh, or cruel man. Because Gramps-"
"-Would kick his ass so hard he'll kiss the sun?"
"Something like that, yes."
Sempai smiled. I can't helped but giggle, too.
The laughing toned down, but the happy atmosphere held on.
"And you never talked to him? Or wasn't he asking you... anything?"
Sempai face makes a scrunch. Oh. Ooops?
"That's... ugh... like...."
Suddenly, it clicked.
"They act like lovebirds you can't help but... kind of... distant?"
Sempai face softened.
"Something like that, yes. Ugh, that's still gave me shiver...."
Both of us laughed again.
You can go with drama....
Or you can go with comedy of errors.
[x] Mizore POV: Even as situation became more oppresing, I'm waiting. And I keep waiting, even as his brows furrowed into concentration, and his face turned into 'stone-faced delinquent ready to demolish your face and your house and your parents and your little dog, too'. He's not angry, that's just the how Kujo-Senpai looked like thinking things overly hard. Which is good, because Kujo-Senpai actually thinking and considering his answer.
Ah, and now he starts emoting with his hand. That's new.
...Wait, why he starts breathing like... that? ...Is he channeling Hamon?
...Is this really hard for Kujo-senpai?
...Why he started to clutching his head and- is he having nosebleed- "KUJO-SENPAI, STOP!!"
"I don't know how to father!"
That's the first sentence he spurted out. And he realized that as well, because he start putting his mouth in his hand.
And slowly, but surely, I can just tell that his body started to relax, releasing most tension in his body. Well, most. He's not Senpai without his tension.
And even then, I can felt it. Senpai... certainly at the most vulnerable, at least emotionally, since we were... getting around together. Part of me felt some shame for causing his vulnerability. Some part of me-ohmygodsenpaisocuteiwannahughimandkishimandgethis-
Okay, focus. Senpai had said it. He didn't hate you or thinking of you as nuisance. He loved you, he's fond of you, that's for sure. He just said he don't know to... father? Wait. What is that actually-
"My old man... rarely at home as far as I can remember. He's... famous musician. He's travelling world. A lot."
Oh. Oh. That's... kinda makes sense.
"He's responsible, and not a harsh, or cruel man. Because Gramps-"
"-Would kick his ass so hard he'll kiss the sun?"
"Something like that, yes."
Sempai smiled. I can't helped but giggle, too.
The laughing toned down, but the happy atmosphere held on.
"And you never talked to him? Or wasn't he asking you... anything?"
Sempai face makes a scrunch. Oh. Ooops?
"That's... ugh... like...."
Suddenly, it clicked.
"They act like lovebirds you can't help but... kind of... distant?"
Sempai face softened.
"Something like that, yes. Ugh, that's still gave me shiver...."
Both of us laughed again.
SpiritualSlacker
Nurse God of Mischief
- Location
- Grandma's attic
Not to rain on those excellent write-ins, but we should take care to finish our spiel on a more positive/hopeful note, since we're trying to also reassure Mizore, not just simply unload on her. Not that some of you aren't already doing that, just as something to keep in mind going forward.
Finagle007
[Verified Great Old One]
- Pronouns
- He/Him/His
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
DIO: Do you believe in "Teen Drama"?
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
DIO: Do you believe in "Teen Drama"?
- Location
- Parts Unknown
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
Thozmp
Gets my kicks above the waistline, Sunshine.
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
Well, got anything specific you'd like added/changed?
- Location
- Israel
...Fuck... I have two options I like. I'll write both down, with one option being my default and the other is in case the first isn't approved by Eva.
Option 1:
[X] *inhale, exhale* "Mizore, I love you and I want to do right by you"
-[X] "Fatherhood scares me since I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, it makes me afraid to let you down"
-[X] "Having that in mind, I am willing to go as fast or as slow as you feel like"
Option 2 (If option 1 is vetoed):
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
Option 1:
[X] *inhale, exhale* "Mizore, I love you and I want to do right by you"
-[X] "Fatherhood scares me since I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, it makes me afraid to let you down"
-[X] "Having that in mind, I am willing to go as fast or as slow as you feel like"
Option 2 (If option 1 is vetoed):
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
SpiritualSlacker
Nurse God of Mischief
- Location
- Grandma's attic
I figured something along the lines of: "I frankly can't see myself taking care of a kid and not screwing it up, but I want to make you happy and goddamnit I'm gonna try as hard as I can to be the best father I can be."
Although to be honest, this
is pretty close to what I had in mind. I mainly just wanted to suggest some advice to other potential write-ins.
- Location
- Skyrim
Let's see if I can maintain my streak of vetoes.
[x] "I think I'd be a shitty father, I've got more problems with showing emotion than most guys."
-[x] "We've got an ass-ton of other problems that keep cropping up at school, but I'm going to be trying to learn some shit about how to raise a kid. By the time you graduate, I plan to know enough not to screw up too bad."
-[x] "This is important, and this school is pretty messed up. It'll be safer for you and our kids to wait until I've either beat the stupid out of this place or we're leaving."
I figure Jotaro saying 'our kids' like that, is as close to 'I want to have babies with you' as is character appropriate, and Mizore will probably get what he means.
Also, EvaUnit, what are your thoughts on us voters trying to work a gradual character arc of Jotaro learning to express himself and communicate better?
[x] "I think I'd be a shitty father, I've got more problems with showing emotion than most guys."
-[x] "We've got an ass-ton of other problems that keep cropping up at school, but I'm going to be trying to learn some shit about how to raise a kid. By the time you graduate, I plan to know enough not to screw up too bad."
-[x] "This is important, and this school is pretty messed up. It'll be safer for you and our kids to wait until I've either beat the stupid out of this place or we're leaving."
I figure Jotaro saying 'our kids' like that, is as close to 'I want to have babies with you' as is character appropriate, and Mizore will probably get what he means.
Also, EvaUnit, what are your thoughts on us voters trying to work a gradual character arc of Jotaro learning to express himself and communicate better?
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- Location
- Israel
What really? You're just going to cram in all the School Protection Committee Arc and the Anti-Thesis Arc and the Halloween Arc? That's a lot of material and many fights man, you sure you're up to the task?
- Location
- his hidden lair
[X]...I'll be honest Mizore, I do love you, and you have no idea how grateful I am that your giving me this extra time to get my shit together, but...I just don't know how to BE a father. My mother raised me all by herself, and once I hit my teens, I was taking care of her just as much as she was taking care of me. I don't have any father figures to base myself off of, I don't know what a father should do for his sons, and definitely not any daughters. I want to be happy with you, for the rest of my life, but I'm not sure if I'll ever manage to even be a decent father, let alone a great one like one our kids should have.
Exterminatus
Tsukumogami User
- Location
- Southern California
[X] *inhale, exhale* "Mizore, I love you and I want to do right by you"
-[X] "Fatherhood scares me since I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, it makes me afraid to let you down"
-[X] "Having that in mind, I am willing to go as fast or as slow as you feel like"
-[X] "Fatherhood scares me since I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, it makes me afraid to let you down"
-[X] "Having that in mind, I am willing to go as fast or as slow as you feel like"
EvaUnit01
Kept you waiting, huh?
Have to veto this specific line because of Mizore being.... herself, basically.
On mobile now, I'll address other commentary and such when I can latet.
Sir Plusse
Overly Vicious Quester
- Location
- Kansas
Yeah, I was considering mentioning that, knowing her, that line would lead to "RIGHT NOW."
EvaUnit01
Kept you waiting, huh?
Pretty much. And Jotaro knows it, and Mizore knows that Jotaro knows it and isn't ready for it, which is the reason for "I'll wait until I graduate so you have some time to be ready."
It took me several seconds to realize that wasn't a plural, and thus also wasn't a grammatical error.
Considering that bastard used to instigate it, hell yeah I do.
Or did you forget about a certain stolen first kiss?
Have to veto the bolded line. Jotaro knows he's got daddy issues, but he also sincerely (mistakenly) believes that he's sufficiently expressive enough that literally anyone who isn't intentionally being an idiot can read what he's thinking/feeling on his face.
The rest of this is okay, and I'm magnanimous enough to just ignore the bolded bit above.
They're mysterious.... Terribly mysterious.
Especially since I've been planning such an arc for over a year and it's already started....
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- Location
- A Place Miserably Bereft of Cats
Hora delivered on the hora.
RazielOfSecrets
Verified Homo Sapiens
- Location
- Lansdale, Pennsylvania, USA
[x] "...My father didn't play a big part in my life. Most of the care I got, came from my mother. Hell, the closest thing I have to a father figure would probably be my grandfather, because he at least taught me something about myself."
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
Is anyone planning on doing fanart for Jotaro's and Mizore's eventual kids?
-[x] "I want to do right by you, to make you happy, to have a family, because yes I love you Mizore."
-[x] "But I do worry that I honestly don't know how to properly do it. I don't know how a good father is supposed to act, what they are supposed to say or do. So as much as I love you, I know I won't be perfect."
Is anyone planning on doing fanart for Jotaro's and Mizore's eventual kids?