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It'd be very different if he threw up because of this bit:
Eh, I suppose that's a some-tea-with-your-sugar moment of excessive sweetness, I just found the whole thing amusing but you could be put off by it.
Yes, I get he's inferring it's a anti-homosexuality thing, but passive-aggressive, warrantless anti-anti-homosexuality/SJW-ing irritates me and i'm trying to call it out. You really think someone is gonna come here and say they hate gay people? Intolerance like that is near-universally shunned, and definitely shunned here. As I see it the original poster's intent was perfectly clear in context, and the next person implying hes hates gay people is just stirring up an argument.
 
How subtle were you expecting the difference in text to be? I didn't find it subtle at all, and thought that intentional.
 
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So, anyone else think that Paul approached Mother Mercy because her lotus eater stuff is just the sort of thing to help an aspiring Orange Lantern come to term with their desires?

Mother Mercy is also an empath of interplanetary range who wishes to ease suffering from the universe because she's tired of the vibes harshing her mellow

Which makes her rather obvious orange lantern material when the criteria includes "useful desires."
 

I am so confused right now
what happened when we werent watching.
 
I think it's funny that Paul is still telling his prospective lantern candidate how he went from helping pirates form an alliance, free several planets while utterly destroying the overlords in charge to the roots, and purposely have himself put into a lotus dream machine to convince the main source to join his cause. His happiest dream being in a foursome with a human-kryption hybrid clone, a white martian, and a semi-reform assassin.
 
I think it's funny that Paul is still telling his prospective lantern candidate how he went from helping pirates form an alliance, free several planets while utterly destroying the overlords in charge to the roots, and purposely have himself put into a lotus dream machine to convince the main source to join his cause. His happiest dream being in a foursome with a human-kryption hybrid clone, a white martian, and a semi-reform assassin.
Actually, it's noteworthy that his DREAM SEQUENCE FANTASY focuses not on salacious four-way sex, but on the companionable morning-after moments.
 
Actually, it's noteworthy that his DREAM SEQUENCE FANTASY focuses not on salacious four-way sex, but on the companionable morning-after moments.
To be fair, it would be rather out of character for this story to have a detailed sex scene like that. Just because we don't see it or focus on it doesn't mean it wasn't a critical part of his fantasy life.
 
I...will keep being blissfully ignorant of the happenings in that version of the story, I think. I like my nice, PG(-13) version here. :)
 
Basically Mr. Zoat decided to write a side story where Paul agreed to Holly's proposition of a threesome with her and her girlfriend Karon, about once a month a segment is uploaded, and the lead up to sex is very detailed and realistic. With Karon being nervous and afraid do to the fact that while she likes Paul she isn't sure about having sex with a man so he's very considerate of her feelings, Paul visiting the local adult store to buy condoms and asks the cashier which type should he buy, and him taking time to admire the work he did on their bathroom shower while the girls try to get into the mood with a bit of foreplay in the shower.

Basically Paul still being Paul in a methodical way and a getting a bit annoyed that once he gets to use his massage lessons on one thigh he can't help but be bothered that he didn't get to do the other.
 
Basically Mr. Zoat decided to write a side story where Paul agreed to Holly's proposition of a threesome with her and her girlfriend Karon, about once a month a segment is uploaded, and the lead up to sex is very detailed and realistic. With Karon being nervous and afraid do to the fact that while she likes Paul she isn't sure about having sex with a man so he's very considerate of her feelings, Paul visiting the local adult store to buy condoms and asks the cashier which type should he buy, and him taking time to admire the work he did on their bathroom shower while the girls try to get into the mood with a bit of foreplay in the shower.

Basically Paul still being Paul in a methodical way and a getting a bit annoyed that once he gets to use his massage lessons on one thigh he can't help but be bothered that he didn't get to do the other.
Interesting, I had no idea this was a thing. I'm... really not sure if I want to go read it or not. On one hand: more WTR. On the other: lewd WTR.
 
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