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I made it up.

I had to make a lot of things up for that story.

That was one of them.

I don't have a canon source from which I derived the idea. That's just how I decided they worked for the purposes of my story.

EDIT: The idea behind the premise was that different societies that worshiped different gods tended to have different outlooks on the things those gods represented. The idea was, "what if the reason for that was because their god of war/harvest/fertility/whatever influenced their worshipers."

So if a society worshiped a god of war that emphasized honor and straightforward trials of strength, then they'd tend to fight their wars that way, and their way of fighting wars would be reinforced by their god.

So when you swap out one god for another, their personality would influence the manifestation of their portfolio.

Again, this was just an idea implemented for IBN. It has no basis in canon.
Ah, thank you, glad to have that cleared up.

By the way, I like your story. I mean, somehow the power stacking is even crazier than a New God with two power rings plus Apokalyptian tech and a army of awakened followers or orange-enlightened ring user with the Ophidian willing to do whatever he wants, but you make it work, and it works well.
 
Renegrayven is doing conquest all FateZero!Alexander style! At least, in some respects and against some foes.

 
Do-Over (part 14)
13th August
19:27 GMT -6


Recruitment stage two.

I had assumed that my Corps could limp on without a Maltusian, just staying in the Vega region and recharging directly from the Orange Central Power Battery. Guy told me that he never had any problem recharging from the Green Central Power Battery, and I've never had much of a problem with the orange light's addictive qualities. Personal lanterns would be better and we'd need them eventually, but they weren't a priority.

Having actually encountered the Orange Central Power Battery now, I'm forced to conclude that that isn't a viable option. If the blasted thing could entrance me then I'd dread to think of the effect of putting it on an inhabited planet.



Maybe that's a bit much. The Okaarans have had it on their planet for the entirety of their history and while I don't consider their present civilisation as something I'd want to emulate they aren't crazy avarice monsters. But I want to put it in -or at least near- a major city, and that will be rather different to Larfleeze's hole in the ground in the middle of nowhere.

So. While Koriand'r oversees the disbursement of the prisoners and Komand'r reviews Tamaran's census records, Ghia'ta and I step through a hush tube and out into a Maltusian street. Airborne vehicles fill the air above us and tall buildings form a respectful circle around the Controllers' centre of operations, and through windows or just walking around I can see individuals from -quick head count- seventeen different species. Armoured caterpillars appear to be the most numerous, but the partial database I took from Jordan marks several of the others as belonging to species whose worlds the Reach has overrun.

"You're confident that this is the right place?" Because wouldn't that be embarrassing.

Ghia'ta nods, taking in our surroundings without much concern. "Yes. The building was constructed before the peoples of Maltus separated. My aunt told me that she used to visit it frequently."

I take another look around. We don't seem to have set off any alarms… "Remind me: what sort of terms are the Zamarons and the Controllers on?"

"We have little to do with one another. I have never met a member of another Maltusian faction." She gives me a nervous smile. "I am looking forward to serving as an Ambassador between our peoples."

"Well spoken, sister."

I look up as a blue skinned man in red, orange and yellow robes descends from the sky. And why his robes aren't flapping around his face due to air resistance I don't know. I suppose that when you're as powerful as Maltusians are supposed to be little things like that are just beneath you. He lands lightly, smiling at us-. No, at Ghia'ta as he does so.

"Or should I say niece? I hadn't realised that our Zamaron sisters were breeding."

"Niece would be more accurate. I am far less powerful than my aunt or her sisters."

"Your aunt?" He tilts his head slightly to the side. "Aga'po?"

"Yes!" Ghia'ta's smile is almost painful in its earnestness. "Do you remember her?"

"I never knew her well, but I do remember her. Tell me, are you-?"

"Sorry to interrupt-" I'm not. "-but I'm here to speak to the Controllers. Are you one?"

He focuses on me, and I can feel something push against my divine resistance. "And an Apokoliptian." And he looks notably less happy about it. "Curious. Is your maleficent overlord turning his attention in our direction?"

"Don't know, don't care. Controllers?"

"You are aware that the Controllers represent only a minority of the Maltusian population? "

"Fine. Do you know anything about orange power rings?"

"Power rings were never my field of study. You should probably talk to Krona, that was always more his sort of thing."

"I'm reasonably sure that the Guardians executed Krona for trying to look at the alpha event and fucking up the universe."

"Oh." He negligently waves his left hand. "Then try Ganthet."

"Ganthet's a Guardian, I'm an Apokoliptian. If I go to Oa with an orange ring and a yellow ring they'll thank me for my time and destroy them both. And possibly me along with them. They certainly wouldn't help me."

"And Hinon can't help so it looks like you're out of luck. Oh well, never mind." He returns his attention to Ghia'ta. "Do you intend to stay long? There are some lovely parklands to the south of here where we've recreated the original-."

"Hinon who?"

"Hinon Hee Hannanan, and I doubt very much that my Controller brothers would let you see her, especially carrying a piece of the Anti-Life Equation."

"Never heard of her, and if you can get it out of me you'll have my thanks."

He shakes his head. "I'm afraid that isn't my field of study. If you would like-?"

"To talk to someone capable of being helpful?" I turn away, striding in the direction of the Controllers' building. "Yes. Have fun, Ghia'ta."

I hear her sigh. "Grayven, you are being you again."

"Yeah, well, this guy just told me he didn't know anything useful and couldn't help. I've got no reason to waste time on him." Hm. There's been some nice landscaping here. The colours of the leaves and flowers are a nice complement to the-.

The Maltusian man zips through the air to take up station just ahead of me, floating backwards to maintain the distance between us. "They won't let you in, especially if you try treating them as rudely as you are me."

"They're useful, you're not, I have a Central Power Battery."

He stops in surprise, barely managing to drift out of my way as I stride past. "You have a what?"

"The Orange Central Power Battery. It's mine, I own it, but it needs a service. Three billion years, one careless owner. I assume that you're incapable?"

"I don't know enough about the Central Power Battery, no. You would need to speak to Hinon directly."

"Excellent." I take the steps up to the front entrance two at a time. "Then I'll know who to ask for. Thank you for your help, you may be on your way."

He flits ahead again-. I'm not going to get rid of him, am I? "I can take you to her, but I doubt that she'll be able to give you what you want."

"If a leading expert can't make a power ring then I'm never coming back here because you're all totally worthless."

"She's been in a coma for… Let us say three billion years."

"What a remarkable coincidence." I reach the front door and give it a push. No, not moving. Hm. YOU WILL NOT DEFY ME!

The doors explode inwards, granting me access to what looks like a fairly generic-looking office lobby. I smile smugly to myself as I stride inside, two… Oh, that's what proper Controllers look like, looking up. They don't appear to be alarmed. Actually, they look somewhat vacant. Bah, I have the name of the one I want.

"You, purple guy on my left. I'm here to speak to Hinon Hee Hannanan. Which way?"

"Our sister is not here for your entertainment, Apokoliptian. And I-." He stops for a moment, the jewel thing on his forehead glimmering. "Or perhaps I am mistaken. Please, follow me."
 
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Of course, Grayven gets into a dick-waving contest with the first Controller he meets, only to get bored when he sees his opponent is unarmed... God of Conquest indeed!
 
Ghia'ta is clearly the best Grayven Ship. He just needs to properly actualize her as a Maltusian and voila, instant awesome.

Also, @Mr Zoat, now that we know all of Tyran'r's backstory and the bits and bobs and other curlicues it added to the origin of Power Rings, are you going to do anything with him and possibly Rami? I mean, it's clear that Tamaraneans are going to be somewhat important in both timelines, so having Ancient Tamaranean Neanderthal Conan pop up could be cool.
 
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Also, @Mr Zoat, now that we know all of Tyran'r's backstory and the bits and bobs and other curlicues it added to the origin of Power Rings, are you going to do anything with him and possibly Rami? I mean, it's clear that Tamaraneans are going to be somewhat important in both timelines, so having Ancient Tamaranean Neanderthal Conan pop up could be cool.
Never heard of them. Post-Flashpoint?
 
Of course, Grayven gets into a dick-waving contest with the first Controller he meets, only to get bored when he sees his opponent is unarmed... God of Conquest indeed!
To be fair, Maltusian dude was just as rude to Grayven as vice versa.
Only when Grayvy mentioned that he owned a Central Power Battery did he pay attention to him, as opposed to schmoozing/hitting on Giata.
 
Never heard of them. Post-Flashpoint?
Mhm, post-Rebirth actually. He's one of the major supporting characters of the current arc of the Green Lanterns comic book. I wouldn't blame you for ignoring it completely, but the arc actually does depict the Guardian exodus from Maltus, so it might be useful for all the various issues with it (like the fact that apparently Earth EXISTED 10 Billion years ago). It's rather interesting actually, we get to see A) some of how Power Rings were originally developed, B) why the Guardians took so long to actually adapt them for their agents despite having access to the Emotional Spectrum for a very long time, and C) a number of characters from various facets of DC as Green Lanterns, including but not limited to the First Plant Elemental, an ancient member of Stel's species, a Goddess of the 3rd world, and the aforementioned Tyran'r.

Really, it's been a fun ride, and there's probably a fair bit you could mine from it. The only thing that probably needs to be changed to adapt it is probably mucking with how far back it was, because 10 Billion years makes very, very little sense given ... well... everything.
 
It truly is strange to see Grayven go from being cunningly diplomatic to being an utterly impatient dick just because he can be.
It's a bad habit of his. He's decided he needs a Maltusian. So since he's not trying to win them over as a group, he's gone all undiplomatic again. He'll probably be a lot smoother towards Hinon, or some other Controller if Grayven or Hinon decides an association isn't worth it.
 
I have to say, do-over is quickly becoming one of my favorite arcs. The contrast of both this vs how Pavlos handled Vega and this vs how Grayven handled his takedown of the light are both really interesting, and I'm loving the way the Renegade's power base and party members contribute and influence his strategies.
 
It truly is strange to see Grayven go from being cunningly diplomatic to being an utterly impatient dick just because he can be.
Think of it this way.

You show up on campus with a hot female friend/acquaintance. You obviously arrived together. Dude approaches the both of you, and starts chatting up the chick without so much as a hi to you. He doesn't pay you any mind until you speak, talks to you like something scraped off the bottom of a shoe, then attempts to scan you intimately, and only starts showing interest when you mention that you are worth, like, a couple billion dollars.

Not to say Grayvy isn't being a petty dick. But dude started it.
Consider the difference between FirstDude and the actual Controllers, who actually pay attention to him despite his rudeness, discern that he is of interest, and talk to him, not around him.

Admittedly, I suspect this whole convo would have gone differently if MotherBox or Sphere had been around.
 
Controllers' centre

She shows me

as am Ambassador between out peoples
as an Ambassador between our peoples

I suppose that

more of his sort of thing
more his sort of thing

returns his attention on
returns his attention to

are some lovely parkland
are some lovely parklands/is some lovely parkland
 
So remember Hinon's reaction to Paragon showing up?

A wave of orange light passes through her, her eyes slowly opening to take in my face.

She blinks, then tries focusing again.

Then she sees me.

Her face remains neutral as she considers me for a moment.

"You shall have to do."

I can only await with popcorn how she's going to react to Renegade. :p

EDIT: Points if it's just chucking the ring back into the Bleed portal and going back to the coma.
 
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Pauls all like "Let me go out of my way to get contacts that can introduce me, by doing favours so the whole process goes smoothly and all according to plan."

Grayven like " "
 
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