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Well he is certainly enthusiastic.

Did Paul really not consider the meteorological effects of reversing the symptoms of global warming?

I would like to call Canis a git for how he spoke to the girl… but honestly she kinda deserves the treatment for reacting like that.
Either shrug it off or run, don't stand there panicking.
 
It's not Apokolips, just advanced technology recovered from the ships of various miscellaneous alien races that have crashed in Russia over the years. It's pretty damn weird how many different races have crashed on the earth considering how much of a back water earth is. For instance, China has a Durlan spaceship that's the source of a few of the Great Ten.
Logically there has to be something either natural or artificial that draws them in and/or causes them to have "accidents". Some hyperspace phenomenon perhaps, or maybe the Sheeda set up something that's drawing the ships in & breaking them somehow so they seed Earth with new technology for the Sheeda to steal later during a Harrowing.
 
Thank you, corrected.
Did Paul really not consider the meteorological effects of reversing the symptoms of global warming?
Over the whole of the planet, yes. In the immediate area, yes. But not the temporary ones over a medium area.
I would like to call Canis a git for how he spoke to the girl… but honestly she kinda deserves the treatment for reacting like that.
That was Canis being maximally polite.
 
"You must be Canis! I was wondering where you were hiding! That was an amusing test of my reflexes!" Sergeant Pushkin leans closer to him. "But don't try that again or I will put you over my knee, boy."

Well, Zoat certainly gave us a new character to cheer for. I like this guy. :)
I like this guy. Lets have some more of him. And we'll all hope that there isn't some sort of daft double cross in the offing.
I'll jump on that bandwagon. Very affable.
 
We're going to be feeling this in the morning.
Paul wants to have jet lag? Usually the Ring took care of such issues without needing a conscious command.
His face plate flickers and displays his face. It isn't designed to be removed, but it can use integrated holographics to display his face.
The "displays his face [...] display his face" repetition read a bit awkward. Maybe leave the first one away?
 
Hope Canis doesn't take it too seriously. Dmitri, better apologize or run fast.
No, I'm pretty sure Canis just realized the difference between a team member and a prospective League member. A few of the team could take Canis with varying amounts of difficulty. However, less then that can hold their own against a leaguer (with the exception of Green Arrow.) Yes, they did prove their strength at Christmas, but Canis was not involved then, and he hasn't really gotten buffed much by OL IIRC
 
Just wanted to let you know. There is a teh instead of a the in the second half.

Ed: "the helmet isn't designed to be removed while teh..."
 
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Canis blinks, stunned, as Brut rolls to his feet and shakes his head.

"You must be Canis! I was wondering where you were hiding! That was an amusing test of my reflexes!" Sergeant Pushkin leans closer to him. "But don't try that again or I will put you over my knee, boy."
Based on the way Canis was acting last chapter, I think he is going to be asking why Pushkin isn't a part of the league yet. A mighty warrior like him should be standing among the greatest.

All in all that sounded like a very friendly Apokolitian hello to me.
 
Just wanted to let you know. There is a teh instead of a the in the second half.

Ed: "the helmet isn't designed to be removed while teh..."
Thank you, corrected.
Based on the way Canis was acting last chapter, I think he is going to be asking why Pushkin isn't a part of the league yet. A mighty warrior like him should be standing among the greatest.
He regard the Justice League as being the best of the best. Not all of the Apokoliptian New Gods are part of the Elite, after all.
All in all that sounded like a very friendly Apokolitian hello to me.
Friendly Apokoliptian greetings are actually pretty friendly. They just don't give them out very often.
 
And so the Russians prove that they can threatenot Apokoliptians and get away with it.
 
Canis looks youthful.
He looks like a knight riding a war-hound the size of a small bus.
I keep picturing Canis as a younger, more human-looking Kalibak dressed as an armored knight, maybe a bit werewolf-ish rather than a troll, ogre, or Neanderthal.
"I hope so. Ah, I have a daughter your age. Maybe I could introduce you before you leave?"
"A daughter your age"? Uh-oh, incoming diplomatic incident!

Tropes check list:
=Bad boy? Check!
=Foreigner? Check!
=Her father doesn't like him? Double check!

Throw in a dash of "cultural rebel" (by Earthling standards), and you have a recipe for an ill-fated teen crush.
 
Logically there has to be something either natural or artificial that draws them in and/or causes them to have "accidents". Some hyperspace phenomenon perhaps, or maybe the Sheeda set up something that's drawing the ships in & breaking them somehow so they seed Earth with new technology for the Sheeda to steal later during a Harrowing.
Ridiculous by galactic standards concentrations of magic perhaps? Or maybe all those bloody scry wards preventing ships from noticing the planet until they're making physical contact with it?
 
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put you over my knee
I wonder how the metaphor translates into Apokoliptian.

Is it bad that I keep hearing Zangief's voice whever Red Rocket speaks?
Nah, I get the same vibe, possibly mixed with a bit of Reinhardt just from the big armor and jovial-but-tough attitude.

Why would OL need to feel this at all? You know, Power Rings are awesome.
Even if he did fix his own jet lag, saying "we" is still appropriate considering his teammates lack that benefit. (Unless, as mentioned, Wally invented something.)
 
It's not Apokolips, just advanced technology recovered from the ships of various miscellaneous alien races that have crashed in Russia over the years. It's pretty damn weird how many different races have crashed on the earth considering how much of a back water earth is. For instance, China has a Durlan spaceship that's the source of a few of the Great Ten.
Earth is also special in several ways. Most probably ultimately track back to it being the resting place of the Life Entity
 
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