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Didn't the Ophidian recognize them as being weapons she'd seen before though?

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Yes she did.
To be fair, the Ophidian is plugged into the desires of the entire universe, so depending on how deep that connection goes, I'd be surprised if she didn't recognize something. If someone has ever coveted something, she'll likely recognize it. She might not understand it, mind you, but she'd recognize it.
 
I don't believe I said that those used zeta beams.

Sivana's system is far larger, uses far more power and takes longer to acquire the target. It also has far greater maintenance requirements.

Huh. I guess I always just figured that Earth 12 and Earth 50 used a different variation on the zeta beam to teleport. My mistake then.
 
@Mr Zoat here are the epubs I made up to now.
The Season 1 epub is completed and up to date as of 05/06/2016
The Season 2 epub up to date with the latest chapters and corrections

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epub for Season 2 (Episodes 27-46) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (chapters up to 06/10/2016)
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@Mr Zoat here are the epubs I made up to now.
The Season 1 epub is completed and up to date as of 05/06/2016
The Season 2 epub up to date with the latest chapters and corrections

epub for Season 1 (Episodes 01-26) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (corrections added up to 05/06/2016)
epub for Season 2 (Episodes 27-46) [MediaFire][MediaFire Alt. Formatting][GoogleDrive] by @Chris6666 (chapters up to 06/10/2016)
Note: The Alt versions have background color deep blue and default text color white. Also the transparent text has a darker color as both the background and the text color, and it is also in black borders.
Also both versions have XenForo like threadmarks between episodes while the Alt Versions has similar threadmarks on the individual chapters
Thank you, updated.
 
Omake: Cake

"CONFIRMED. YOU ARE
CAKE MAN." Oh goody! I am famous! "SUPERVILLAIN."

I jump away as the plasma shot almosts blows my head. Thank the devil I got that slight upgrade or that would have killed me.

"Doctor, you invited me here, remenber?" I said slightly annoyed as I keep dodging the plasma bolts, normally it would be lazer fire, but good for him for getting some variety.

Mister Atom Mark IV then stops and I can hear Doctor Silvana Sr voice.

"Apologies Mister Cake Man, I haven't had time to update my database yet."

"Well, what's some friendly fire around allies Doc? Say, come here to meet me in person and I promise I won't bake you into a cake until AFTER be backstab each other."

"Very well."

Doctor Silvana opens a heavy reinforced door and lets me finally meet him in person. Damn the guy is ugly, but so is my face, so who cares?

"Nice to meet you in person Doc, but I dunno why you wanted to hire me. Captain Marvel is not the type of foes I can easily deal with."

And even if I could, I would not bake him into a Cake. Unlike the clown I don't get my jollies by beating kids to death with a crowbar. I draw the line at kids, hence why Damian just got to see the fun loving Cake Man, not the Nightmare on Elm Street one.

"Oh I know that Mister Cake Man, have you heard about something called the Injustice League?"

Oh goody I am in the big leagues now! Daddy is going to finally get his own Cakemobile!
 
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seriously. from a practicality standpoint, a gauss flayer is a not-quite pathetically inefficient weapon considering the Necrons/Necrotyr ARE THE MOST ADVANCED SURVIVING RACE IN THE 40K UNIVERSE. but i get that's what comes from Prioritising Sadism/cruelty over Efficiency >.>

i mean, the Dark Eldar do the same, but they at least have SOME (thin) Pragmatic justification for their Degradation into Murderous Sadists, which is completely negated due to them being
responsible for the Sharding Eye of Terror. frikking elves >.>

random fact: the Fact that Imperial lasweapons make the Cracking sound they do is, according to SOME sources, due to a similar background psionic effect as the one responsible for Red Orkish Vehicles having a higher maximum speed, and Purple trousers causing people to assume you're streaking
 
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Omake: Cake

"CONFIRMED. YOU ARE
CAKE MAN." Oh goody! I am famous! "SUPERVILLAIN."

I jump away as the plasma shot almost blows off my head. Thank the devil I got that slight upgrade or that would have killed me.

"Doctor, you invited me here, remember?" I said, slightly annoyed as I keep dodging the plasma bolts. Normally it would be laser fire, but good for him for getting some variety.

Mister Atom Mark IV then stops and I can hear Doctor Sivana Sr's voice.

"Apologies, Mister Cake Man, I haven't had time to update my database yet."

"Well, what's some friendly fire around allies, Doc? Say, come here to meet me in person and I promise I won't bake you into a cake until AFTER we backstab each other."

"Very well."

Doctor Sivana opens a heavy reinforced door and lets me finally meet him in person. Damn the guy is ugly, but so is my face, so who cares?

"Nice to meet you in person Doc, but I dunno why you wanted to hire me. Captain Marvel is not the type of foe I can easily deal with."

And even if I could, I would not bake him into a Cake. Unlike the clown I don't get my jollies by beating kids to death with a crowbar. I draw the line at kids, hence why Damian just got to see the fun-loving Cake Man, not the Nightmare on Elm Street one.

"Oh, I know that. Mister Cake Man, have you heard about something called the Injustice League?"

Oh goody, I am in the big leagues now! Daddy is going to finally get his own Cakemobile!
Some proofreading for you. Amusing!
 
random fact: the Fact that Imperial lasweapons make the Cracking sound they do is, according to SOME sources, due to a similar background psionic effect as the one responsible for Red Orkish Vehicles having a higher maximum speed,
I prefer the fluff which suggests that the Mek just builds the red ones differently.
and Purple trousers causing people to assume you're streaking
HULK NOT UNDERSTAND WHY HULK ARRESTED. HULK ALWAYS MEET PUBLIC DECENCY LAWS.
 
If the sword is teleported into them or they're teleported into the sword it'd cause more than physical damage, since the sword "targets" the soul.

Except in this series instead of the First of the Fallen literally surviving thanks to act of God Zoat is going with the option that the sword just isn't actually capable of killing beings beyond a certain limit, so while I imagine say Zauriel or Swamp Thing are below that limit, that's not something you can really test scientifically.

Also, there's a higher ordinance option- telefrag the sword through an area to turn the sword into a teleportation based bomb.

But like the pineapple trick, something you can only do once, unless the sword is self repairing.....

What's the white shape in the bottom left corner of the second picture?

Sorry no idea, I was only looking for pictures of Kingdom Come Dr Fate, since I was aware of that version not having a host, only to find the first decent picture of Fate without a host being from New Earth instead.

Seeing as the guy he was confronting was Mordru, probably something not good though. :)
 
Except in this series instead of the First of the Fallen literally surviving thanks to act of God Zoat is going with the option that the sword just isn't actually capable of killing beings beyond a certain limit, so while I imagine say Zauriel or Swamp Thing are below that limit, that's not something you can really test scientifically.
I remember him saying that its ability to kill of things was absurdly high.
But like the pineapple trick, something you can only do once, unless the sword is self repairing.....
I doubt it'd be that simple to damage. Unless it's teleported into something that'd have an unique protection.
 
Family Day (part 16)
25th April
10:31 GMT -6


The gantry above the Huntsman creaks, straining against its mooring as he exerts a far greater pull than it was designed to withstand just by walking past it. Beautia's having to anchor herself as down suddenly moves to the wrong direction. I think and her construct armour becomes sticky on the base of the feet. Great, now how to deal with Mister Atom? Ah. Maybe?

"Oh, what a relief! My leader, the Sheeda Huntsmaster is here! Surely he will save me from this robot!"

Immediately Mister Atom's hands drop and his head rotates to allow him to look at the new intruder.

"ORANGE LANTERN IS NO THREAT. NEW TARGET FILE NOT FOUND. BUT I HAVE NO INSTRUCTION TO LEAVE YOU ALIVE."

I dismiss my shield construct, then replace it with a fresh one. Okay, Mister Atom- He opens fire with proton cannons and electrolasers. -is occupied. Huntsman… He looks slightly irritated, maybe? That might just be because his increasing local gravity caused the Praexis Demons to get stuck to him again. Actually… I just gave Beautia non-magnetic magnetic boots and I can fly. Why hasn't Mister Atom fallen over? Mister Atom Mark One didn't have a flight system, but I suppose this fellow does? I'm not seeing any exhausts, magnetic field is about what I would expect-.

Gravity suddenly reverts to normal as the Praexis Demons are pancaked against his outer surface for a moment before dissolving. Ring, don't bother recreating them.

Compliance.

Mister Atom plays the electrolaser over the Huntsman's face for a moment before shutting it down. The proton cannons hitting him in the chest on the other hand remain active. "CURIOUSLY RESILIENT. BUT NOTHING COMPARED TO THE POWER OF THE ATOM." The small red marking on his upper chest shines and then ah crap.

I fly as fast as possible to Beautia and stick a shield around both her and the graviton flux detectors as Mister Atom fires a beam of gamma radiation that makes the amount I used on Mister Hagen look trivial. He maintains the beam for a second, then switches to alpha radiation, followed by a blast of beta radiation. Ah, maybe I should give him a clue.

"Quick, master! Use your gravity powers on this foolish robot!"

"WHAT LUNACY IS THIS?"

"BETRAYED BY THE MOUTH OF YOUR OWN ASSISTANT. MY WEAPONS SYSTEM ALLOWS ME TO COUNTER ANY THREAT."

The Huntsman holds his right arm out to the side and a… A trident apparently made of the same material as the rest of him appears in his hand. Shapeshifting? Some sort of storage ability?

"YOU WERE MADE BY SIVANA. I RECOGNISE THE DESIGN. I KNOW ITS FLAWS."

"I HAVE NO FLAWS."

A plate on his crotch armour slides aside and a small ray projector extends itself, three circular fins whose purpose I can't immediately identify leading to a small bulb at the end. Then the fins light up in pale blue and a beam of bent space connects it to the Huntsman. He staggers, blue dust pouring off him.

"NONE WILL STAND BEFORE THE MIGHT OF MISTER ATOM."

"Is the radiation back down to normal?"

"Yes? Oh." I drop the bubble shield and Beautia thrusts five graviton flux detectors at me before hurrying along the gantry. It looks like she wants to get behind the Huntsman, though I'm not sure how much-.

The Huntsman raises his left hand and makes a fist, Mister Atom's crotch cannon crumpling in response. Okay then. Ring, closest weapon to that?

Based on appearance and observable effect, graviton nullifier is closest match.

Edging towards concluding that he's a walking black hole here…

It is extremely unlikely that entity designated 'Sheeda Huntsman' is a 'walking black hole'. Peak output observed so far is two hundred thirty nine times normal Earth gravity over a small area. The gravitational pull of a black hole-.

I'll take your word for it.

Compliance.

Mister Atom takes a step back as the Huntsman strolls forwards, brings his left arm up over his head and then drops to a crouch, smashing the fist into the Huntsman!

"Magnificus, still with us?"

"Yes?"

"Exactly how do you want these sensors arranged?"

"Ah, the optimal disposition would be at variable known distances from the subject. Surrounding him in all directions if at all possible."

"Right." External surface looks fairly durable. I transmute a small amount of adhesive onto the wall and stick one of the sensors there. "Are you getting data from these?"

"Yeah, they've got a connection to the habitat's systems. I'm going over it now."

"We're going over it now."

"Soft subject."

Thaddeus Junior and Georgia on the case. I suppose that's a good thing. Considering the circumstances.

The Huntsman has been driven to his knees, hands on either side of the haft of his trident as he uses it to block Mister Atom's fist. Right, they're both fully occupied on that end of the hangar… I fly to the opposite end, near that storage area, and plant another sensor. "Do I need to tell you the distances, or-?"

"No, it's all automatic."

On the other side of the hangar I see Beautia toss one down the lift shaft before leaping over the wrecked gantry to the far side. I fly to the right side of the room, plant one on the wall and turn to check on the combatants. The Huntsman seems to be stuck-. No, he's sliding his left hand along the haft and there's a noise of tearing and crumpling metal as Mister Atom's left middle finger collapses in on itself. Next comes another bolt of green lightning from his forehead, but that skitters harmlessly across Mister Atom's armoured chassis, no more effective than Mister Atom's shots were. I create a construct hand and use it to reach to just behind Mister Atom, depositing another sensor.

"CURSE YOU." Mister Atom brings his right hand down in a chopping motion. The Huntsman has to compress to cope with the force of the impact, but almost immediately he starts to straighten again. Mister Atom points his left forearm at the Huntsman and-.

Alert! Anti-matter detected!

Oh dear.

Beautia continues running around the side of the room as Mister Atom thumps his damaged left fist into the Huntsman's chest. Okay okay, it should just be an explosion, and that's if the anti-matter encounters matter. If his body isn't comprised of matter -which is what my Crumbler negative impacts suggest- then probably nothing will happen. Whatever, they're both fully occupied. I take hold of another sensor with a construct hand and have it carry it around the side of the room, depositing it behind the Huntsman.

Where else? The ceiling? Okay, but then I think we should be heading up to warehouse seven. I really don't feel comfortable with-.

There's a brilliant flash of light from the Huntsman! The rings react immediately to dim my vision as I frantically look for Beautia! She's up above me, no closer to the centre of the blast than I am. Okay, her armour construct should hold-.

"yAAAAAAAGH!"

It fails. I'm by her side in an instant, a bubble shield going up around both of us. Idiot! The filament connection wasn't tough enough. Okay, burns, doesn't.. look like anything she can't heal.

"Magnificus, I'm heading up to warehouse seven."

"It would be better if you could plant one or two more-."

"Beautia's hit. She should be okay, but we need to move."

"Of course, then. Let me know when you arrive."
 
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ok, mr atom isn't best robot because of dani, but he is coming surprisingly close for a supervillain made one. Also, holy hell it's throwing around stuff like gravity negators and anti matter! when sivana builds a giant death robot he does not fuck around.

"It would be better if you could plant one or two more-."

"Beautia's hit. She should be okay, but we need to move."

"Of course, then. Let me know when you arrive."

daww, supervillain or not they do care.
 
"Oh, what a relief! My leader, the Sheeda Huntsmaster is here! Surely he will save me from this robot!"
Huh. That's pretty clever.
Idiot! The filament connection wasn't tough enough. Okay, burns, doesn't.. look like anything she can't heal.
Antimatter reactions put out quite a lot of gamma radiation, and lots of ionising radiation in general. Unless Dannering heals cancer, she should get a quick orange heal even if she can heal the burns.
 
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