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So, The Team now has a giant orange kitty, a soon-to-be-giant wolf, and a giant dog.
Actually, with no Venom Buster in her system there's no reason to assume that Wolf will grow beyond normal Wold size.
Will this be the first time Wolf and Teekl mets Beton Brut in person?
I think so.
If Brut picks a fight with Wolf or tries be all Alpha Male, Teekl will assume demon lion form and go Mama Bear on his ass. Wolf is her "kitten" i.e. surrogate son.
Daughter. Also, Wolf is stronger than Brut.
 
Daughter. Also, Wolf is stronger than Brut.
Strength alone doesn't mean anything if you don't have the skill and experience to use it properly.

I assume Brut has undergone intense Apokoliptian-style training, while Wolf has had a relatively peaceful and sheltered life.

Wolf: :cry: "Auuuuu~!" (trans: "Mama! He's picking on me!")
Teekl: :rage: "TEEKL SMASH!!!"
 
Speaking of Jamie, where is she? I haven't seen her at all lately. Anyone knows what's up?

Crushing lack of motivation to do anything, really. I've asked a few times that people remind me to work on whichever of my stories they want more of, but nobody does that, so I mostly do nothing at all.

Best guess is that one of her enemies caught up to her and she's now embroiled in a fight that, to her opponent, is a desperate struggle for the ages, but to Jamie is Tuesday.

Right, this is what I meant to say. Stupid autocorrect!
 
When is the next Renegade chapter?

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"So you want to learn shapechanging to turn into a talking pony sized unicorn?"

"Is my real body but... yes?"

"How do feel about helping me with with little kids parties?"

"What? Loki is in the kids entertainment business?"

"I like kids. I am both a father and mother you know. And is not like the giants are interested in invading Asgard since they figure how to get Internet."
 
Crushing lack of motivation to do anything, really. I've asked a few times that people remind me to work on whichever of my stories they want more of, but nobody does that, so I mostly do nothing at all.



Right, this is what I meant to say. Stupid autocorrect!
*hugs* Aw, don`t worry. It`ll pass, I`m sure.

(If you want my opinion, Violet SI is better than others.)
 
"Do you think we could have a game later?" M'gann smiles with what must be affected innocence. "Conner's been showing me how it works, but I'm sure there are plenty of things I'm missing."

Not exactly Korean-level myself… "Of course. I'd be delighted."
Also add the component of telepathic information warfare, and the game gets much more interesting. Yes, it's lopsided in M'gann's favor because even if she completely loses she only has as much information as she did before and OL didn't get any, but OL has years more gaming experience. If you'ever watched someone try out a strategy game as some of their first gaming experience, you'll know how large an advantage that is, at leat until the new person gets the controls figured out.
"So while Oh El does that in three seconds, what are the rest of us doing?"
Glad someone took note of how much the team relies on OL. Maybe segue this into a two or three segment part of an episode of other team members trying out how to use an orange ring? Just for them to see what it's like, and what OL went through in the early days.
Since you elected to approve his membership-"

"Recognised, Canis Minor, B one seven, Beton Brut, C zero six."

"-Canis Minor will be joining you."
Are we going to get a brief bit where Canis demonstrates his powers and skills? Like, in this episode.
 
Crushing lack of motivation to do anything, really. I've asked a few times that people remind me to work on whichever of my stories they want more of, but nobody does that, so I mostly do nothing at all.
If that is enough motivation to get you you to do so, then I for one would love to see For Hearts Long Lost updated, because it was the most interesting Lanterns story I've read that wasn't this one, and as such have been waiting and hoping you would write more of it.
 
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"But Krieger is a Nazi!"

Prince Jon shrugs. "What does that matter to Odin? Neither the people the Nazis killed nor the Nazis themselves worshipped the Aesir."
See, this is a laudable, SoD-maintaining attitude and I wish more authors would use it in fiction. The complete *lack* of outrage helps highlight their alien - by modern standards - moral compass.
 
Guys! I realized something hilarious.

Canis Minor is going to fight followers of a guy who went on a genocidal rampage because he was a shitty artist, alongside a viewpoint character who can personally attest that Hitler's art was bad.
 
Guys! I realized something hilarious.

Canis Minor is going to fight followers of a guy who went on a genocidal rampage because he was a shitty artist, alongside a viewpoint character who can personally attest that Hitler's art was bad.
"What is this? This is what classifies as art? I prefer that he left the field, at least he ended up doing something of actual influence, something that truly drew the eye of the world."
 
"However, Orm's Purebloodist supporters were mostly captured after his defeat, and those who remain are wise enough to remain silent about their affiliation."

Did Orm form a Purebloodist cult from a population with no such bias? If not, there will be tons of unaffiliated sympathizers -- people who weren't willing to help an armed rebellion but dislike non-Purebloods, people who sent money but didn't otherwise help. Getting rid of all of them would be a great purge and probably would have received some remark.

On the other hand, a lesser but still moderately comprehensive purge, one that had caught most of the combatants and the largest backers -- that could have gone well enough that Prince Kaldur'ahm would say what he said, even if the impression it leaves isn't as honest as it could be. He's a representative of his government, so some amount of propaganda is expected.
 
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So, I got bored of waiting, so I went to visit the Story Only Thread.
Congrats @Mr Zoat, you officially broke 100,000 reputation!

(Funny thing. When I checked you were at 99,983 and after I liked a page (25 likes) you were at 100,067. So someone else may have had the same idea. Shucks. I was hoping to be the 100,000th customer. Maybe get a cookie. Oh well...)
 
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