I thought this was the penultimate arc rather than the very last one. The one to wrap up some of the team's side issues so that the last arc would tie up Jamelia's story. As it is, it feels like Donald stole both the multi-sphere jack of trades role Jamelia had going on and her mission to contact and bring in the VEs, which seems to invalidate the whole point of sending her off.

Also TBH I don't know why Sera, Henriette, and Rose are meeting anyway. With Sera's current role and need for secrecy, it feels like a lot of risk for an indulgence.

Speaking of Rose and Henriette, what exactly is their role in the assault now? They took their original reduced role to find Donald, when it was something that seemed was going to take longer. But since that resolved so quickly, it feels like they are at loose ends. (Maybe that's why they have time to meet Sera.)
 
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Also TBH I don't know why Sera, Henriette, and Rose are meeting anyway. With Sera's current role and need for secrecy, it feels like a lot of risk for an indulgence.

As it stands, the reason I gave in the write-in was that she needed to a) give Rose her memories of I-50-B31 back, and b) at the same time stick a large data dump of other things about Transhumans and Transhuman-biotech she and Alicia have developed together from i) those memories and ii) Alicia's analysis of the Seraclone body she's using, which she told Sera that she stole the data.
 
I haven't been actually useful for hundreds of pages now.

If this is actually the last arc, I'm now doubting stuff like will we ever see Alice meet Jamelia and/or Harlan (on-screen) again. (Or even that she has any real confirmation that Serafina is okay after Mexico.) Or, hell, that Serafina will ever realize her best friend turned out to be her boss's daughter.
 
I haven't been discussing things because while I do enjoy this quest, none of my ideas are relevant to the current plot, none of the characters I can actually write or conceptualize well are present in the current plot, and I don't know enough about the current side of things to really argue for one thing or another.

Worse, I am not a smart man- I mean I'm fantastic at breadth of information, or data regurgitation or whatever if I know the material, but coming up with plans and schemes that are more than 'so simple everybody thinks it's stupid and therefore worthless' is generally beyond me.

I'm really good at the bad plan, but unfortunately the current plot, even if it is moving into endgame, has so many moving parts, and so many delicate components, that I'm stalling out because I just don't have the capability to do anything than stick my huge meaty fingers onto the canvass and mush everything together.

Moreover, I don't have the emotional connection to these characters that I do with some of the other characters, which in turn means that I don't necessarily feel that it's appropriate I should be encouraging one course of action over another when their very real fictional existence is at stake, and there are people who are much more personally invested in them than I.

I played mage for combat, adventure, discovery, and lots and lots of punching people in the face. The current events are- at least right now- none of those. I don't feel I have anything substantial to contribute that hasn't already been said, or that I have any particularly unique insights into the current events that will add or advance the quest.

As far as arcs go, it feels like this is the penultimate arc, even though it seems to actually be the last arc. We haven't quite come full circle yet- but maybe that's just the world this game is set in- you don't come home again, there's no final big reunification, resolution of sideplots and character arcs- I don't know.



In any case, my one current contribution will be: @EarthScorpion the use of the term 'perched' in your last sentence is at odds with your use of the term 'slumped'. You can be perched or slumped, but not both at the same time. Perching is all about being light, while slumping is all about being heavy- together it creates a very incongruous image which is hard to reconcile. I know that probably isn't the criticism you were looking for, but really it's all I have.
 
I'm mainly here as a reader of a story than than a player of a quest, to be honest. About the only thing I'd actually want to take a hand in shaping is a character arc that it's plain wouldn't happen even if there was time for it.
 
I haven't made any effort to understand the game mechanics of this quest so I've generally figured it's best if I don't join in the voting.
 
If it actually is the last arc, I'm pretty disappointed. I've been trying to pinpoint why I've felt disengaged from this quest because this used to be one of my favorite quests but it's not anymore. I think we made a mistake in focusing on Serafina so much. Somewhere along the way, our protagonist, Jamelia, went from focal point and well, actual protagonist, to damsel in distress in arc 4 to background character in arc 5 to Ms.-Not-Appearing in arc 6. In retrospect, I think we should have always chosen to follow whatever it is that Jamelia was doing.

As it is, I think somewhere along the way the protagonist role transferred to Serafina and then Donald. (I think there's a joke to be made here about what happens to female POC MCs ... beaten out by the white female MC ... who is then usurped by the white male MC. I'm somewhat amused that Serafina is basically a plot mcguffin at the moment once Donald took over.) I think Donald is the main problem with arc 6 by the way. Donald should be a supporting character in this arc. He doesn't really have any connection to the themes of this arc except by association to Rose's arc and probably should have been replaced by Jamelia if Yinzheng was going to be a factor in this arc.

The themes surrounding this arc was supposed to be a wrap up of Serafina, Rose, and Henriette's character arcs and of those three, the MC should be Rose. Sera's already had her time to shine in the Mexico City journey - this is just the playing out of her already made choices and doing so on a stage where other people are recognizing it. Henriette's had several character developing moments already and her sister / family arc for Autoplanet is mostly done. Shinji is the cleanup and like Sera, this is Henriette's chance to show her change. Her choices have already been made.

Rose is the only one that hasn't changed much since the beginning of Panopticon Quest. Despite being here from the beginning, she's still the woobie vampire murder machine, but she hasn't received any closure on Reina / Anathema / Iteration X, Thorn / Progenitor, the Construct subplot - anything really. She's received a trauma where she was forced to change - this is pretty important by the way: forced to change instead of choosing like Sera and Henriette - but nothing's happened on that front. If this arc had to happen, it should have been driven by her where she made the transition from victim to active agent and protagonist followed by a triumph over her opposition where she showed off how this change helped her succeed.

But Rose hasn't done anything this arc really. She's been a follower who's gone to ask Donald for orders, been forced out of a plot confrontation by Donald, and begged Henriette for help when she doesn't know what to do. All of this is even sillier in hindsight. Some of these could have been reworked to make Rose the driving agent: a subordinate who receives orders and then has to consciously go off script when something unexpected happens like the Warden being delayed at the Tower and having to solve the Blight, a mentor who sacrifices himself like Gandalf so that Frodo can go on, or a mentor / colleague who gives advice and options while she makes the decision / action like Yoda or Obi-Wan to Luke. These are stock tropes for a protagonist but all of these were framed the opposite way so Rose basically is the perpetual victim. Even the last write-in scene with Sera is Rose being too passive and an object for Sera and Henriette to do things to.

The actual driving actor of this arc has been Donald. He's the one who comes up with the plans and gets the chances to shine where he outwits the opposition (LA's traffic switching, he does the talks with Bastion, Japan and Yinzheng, Henriette's monitoring of him). I think part of the problem is that he picked up way too many spheres during the off-screen hell bar arc or whatever. The whole entropy (narrative) sphere is played straight and without Jamelia there, he's the only one who provides that. His spheres / skills and relative emotional stability and seniority means the story warps around him. He has the most tools to solve problems and so he does. He even got the 'hard man making hard decisions' protagonist scene down where he casually destroys the VE subplot, a subplot we basically spent several arcs dancing around and trying to solve. At this point, it's either going to be solved off-screen or it's going to be solved on-screen by him, both of which are unsatisfying payoffs.

But hindsight is clearer for a reason. At this point, if the VE call goes through, I think his arc needs to be that he dies - and not in a way that ends up with Rose either crashing into a pit of despair or that helps her to overcome her current obstacle. Both results end up warping Rose's narrative in a way that leaves her to suffer a final indignity wherein her success or failure is attributed to Donald. I think he needs to die in a way that is specifically related to calling the VEs in because the VE subplot should not be solved so easily or callously: it's pretty much a mockery of everything since arc 2. Donald's hubris should enact a price - and to be honest, I'm not sure what, if any, arc he has left (or had in the first place if the end result is he made the exact same choice as he did when he joined the Technocracy). The man who would not change and who thought he knew best for all dies because he never developed past that is ... well, not a character arc for him but is a plot arc.

Anyway, I also think this arc was just over-long in general and I'm not sure how much of these detours were really that necessary. It felt like a lot of hamster spinning wheels.
 
I will admit to feeling a bit disengaged with the story as well, but this also isn't really a medium conducive to creating the most polished stories so I'm willing to give it a significant amount of slack.
 
It seems like a lot of people are lost, confused or afraid to say anything. (Quotes below serve as evidence, bolding mine)
I've honestly just lost track of the plot a few dozen updates ago.

I know this is humorous, but like...

You have here a tremendously complex quest with a ridiculous number of moving parts (like @NonSequtur, I actually cannot track everything that's happening right now) that is highly reliant on a specific set of posters who provide incredibly lengthy write-ins, deep insight, etc. With those people not as active for their various reasons, things are going to slow down dramatically. I get that it's sucky when posts drop and voters don't discuss things - I hate it when it happens in my own quests too - but in this case you are expecting a lot more than is reasonable from your readers.

Yea p much. I have to third the statement that this quest has gone above and beyond the average quest in terms of well... everything.

Don't get me wrong. That's a really good thing. It's just that nobody wants to stick their hands into this really complicated grandfather clock when they have no idea what is going on anymore.

This quest is absolutely amazing and I love reading it. I also never vote because while Mage enables absolutely amazing stories, the powers are even more complicated than the social interaction, and I can't handle the second of those, let alone the first. There not really anything besides those two topics that get voted on, since combat tactics rely utterly on what the person in question is capable of.

I like stories like these even though I have have lost track of everything going on because I trust that the author will wrap it all up in the end and along the way remind me of all the lose threads. There's a certain joy to that, "Oh yeah! I remember that part! This has totally been in the works the whole time!" feeling.

Now, I'm often slow on the uptake. But I also just finished reading this through, like, a couple months ago I guess. And I don't know where any of the characters are at who have not been recently mentioned, including the protagonist who is my favorite character in this story. I have no idea how people who experienced the stuff written a year ago a year ago keep track. I figure they've got notes or they're just better at things like that.

For, you know, whatever the words of Johnny-come-lately are worth.

I do really enjoy this story. It's got me feeling like running Mage again, something I've only done once in the past decade. And I do look forward to the conclusion.

Hey, that's my line.

Pretty much given up on being involved in the planning for most of a year already. I've little idea why we wrote ourselves here or what we intend to do next anymore.

The last time I got involved in the actual how and why of the quest, I got fucking banned.

I'll stick to dumb jokes, please and thank you. :V

I haven't been actually useful for hundreds of pages now.

If this is actually the last arc, I'm now doubting stuff like will we ever see Alice meet Jamelia and/or Harlan (on-screen) again. (Or even that she has any real confirmation that Serafina is okay after Mexico.) Or, hell, that Serafina will ever realize her best friend turned out to be her boss's daughter.

Discussion is necessary for me to actually write the next updates because even if your specific votes don't win, oftentimes the tone of the discussion will shift the options and the plot. It also helps keep this quest active and engaging for me, which is important.

Newsflash. My write-ins often involve stealing and prettying-up other people's ideas. Talking about things gets me persuaded in your direction. Just making Shinji Wank jokes doesn't help one goddamn bit.
The main Authors want people talking to get moving. So the meta problem is: How do we get people talking when no one knows what's going on? If I might be so bold, I have a suggestion. I think people should start asking questions about what they are unsure about and we'll utilize the collective wisdom of the thread to answer them. If you have a question, probably someone has an answer. I'll start by answering some myself. (feel free to add corrections, insight, and more questions. Me, and hopefully some other people will try and answer them.)

1.) Who is here and how did we get into this situation?
Answer:
Rose is a combat construct, specifically made through the EXEMPLAR program. The EXEMPLAR program was designed to bring back famous figures in the Union's history by cloning them, and giving the clones the closest memories to the originals that was possible. Rose was considered a "failure" when she failed to exhibit the personality of Reina Lior. Reina Lior was in charge of the International Brotherhood of Mechanicians (IBM). IBM was like a proto-Iteration X. Reina was heavily involved in the creation of the Computer. The Computer became in charge of Iteration X, and was possessed by a spirit from the planet Autocthonia. No one noticed this because Iterators are bad at Spirit/Dimensional Science. Rose later developed a personality of her own. Serafina and the other EXEMPLARs looked after Rose. To the other EXEMPLARs Rose was like a younger sibling. To Serafina Rose was like a child.

Serafina worked on this project at some point after she left Damian. Damian is a Technocracy school that Serafina, Alice, and Alicia went to. Alicia is Serafina's Avatar, who first appeared as an imaginary friend when Serafina was alone and needed to get out and do things. Alice is Jamelia's daughter, and was taught at Damian to be a Psycic NWO agent. I forget the name of who taught her, but it was a senior NWO agent personally grooming her. The 3 got into trouble at Damian. Serafina made a boyfriend for herself. The boyfriend's name is Cross, and he is now in a senior position in Damage Control. Damage Control is a Progenitor agency that goes after Progenitors messing with things they shouldn't. Alice ran away from Damian. Serafina's parents found out about Alicia, and decided she was a problem. They enlisted neurosurgeon Leon Gregor to help fix this "hallucination". It mostly succeeded and it would be years before Alicia would resurface.

Eventually, Gregor was enlisted by Control. Control was in charge of the Technocracy, in some form or another, for most of it's entire history. In 1999 the Techocracy killed an ancient vampire called an "Antideluvian". An organization known as Ragnarok Command was formed to deal with the vampire. (General Starborn is currently in charge of Ragnarock Command) This Antideluvian had godlike powers and ultimately required spirit nukes to defeat. These spirit nukes caused a massive storm in the spirit world/other dimensions. This storm was known as the Avatar Storm, or the Dimensional Anomaly. In this storm Control (and many other members of the Union) were stranded from the rest of the world.

Control had largely become out of touch with the rest of the Technocracy because it was so far away from the Earth. Also, in the man made spirit worlds Control lived in, they could control the environment to allow for science not possible or feasible back on Earth. That level of control over their environment could sometimes also contribute to being out of touch with the practical limitations of Earth.

It's not healthy to be trapped in the Spirit World, especially when the Avatar Storm is occurring. This lead to a process known as Void Adaption, where Control basically became spirits. Spirits are a lot less flexible than regular humans in how they operate, and are prone to falling into extremes and stereotypes of their former forms. The spirit form of Control became known as Threat Null. Threat Null believes themselves to be the rightful leaders of the Union and wants to return home to be in charge of the Union's affairs.

In Threat Null, the Progenitors became the Transhumans. The Syndicate became the Residents. The NWO became the Agency. Iteration X became the Autopolitans. The Void Engineers became the Subjugation Corps.

A woman named Catherine Nichols, who left the Union back after the challenger disaster, created the Nichols Relays to keep Threat Null at bay. The Nichols Relays perpetuate the Avatar Storm/ Dimensional Anomaly. The Void Engineers lost their Star Trek-like leadership in the Dimensional Anomaly and ended up becoming paranoid Space Marines to fight Threat Null.

The other Conventions also changed after the Dimensional Anomaly. The Syndicate lost a Methodology (a Methodology is a subdivision of a Convention) known as the SPD. The SPD or Special Projects Division was in charge of R&D in the Syndicate. The SPD subcontracted most of this R&D out to a company known as Pentex. Pentex was formed in a merger between Proctor Investment house and Premium Oil. Proctor Investment house was founded by Proctor, a Syndicate bigshot who was instrumental in the organization of the modern Union. Premium Oil was secretly run by a powerful corruptive spirit with a hatred for Werewolves who specifically promotes pollution and immoral behavior. Pentex's true leadership went undiscovered by the Syndicate for over a hundred years (because again the Syndicate doesn't really have people who know Dimensional Science aka Spirit). Pentex's corruption was finally discovered by Donald Sykes.

Donald Sykes was a member of the Cult of Ecstasy. The Cult of Ecstasy is a member of the Traditions (an ancient cabal of magic users and science the Union cast off) dedicated to sex, drugs and rock and roll. The Cult of Ecstasy is supposed to be about using these mediums to look at the world through different perspectives to transcend barriers of space, time, and the laws of physics in hopes of reaching higher levels of understanding of the universe (Enlightenment, aka Arete).

Donald was tired that the Cult of Ecstasy claimed high ideals of Enlightenment, but in practice mostly sat around played music and consumed drugs. This came to a head when the guys Donald hung out with tried to summon a Spirit abomination of some kind. Donald decided then to turn his back on everything and everyone he knew to join their hated enemies, the Technocracy. The Technocracy has the personnel and resources to actually make a difference in the world. Donald alerted the Void Engineers about the spirit abomination and requested to join the Technocracy.

In the Technocracy, Donald was placed into the SPD and, from his experience on the other side, discovered the spiritual corruption others had missed. To shut him up, he was promoted to a position in the Financiers as a CEO.

Someone else should probably explain Henriette, Jamelia, and Kessler.
Also I'm still a little confused as to what this was supposed to mean:
"Robert Yi. Born San Francisco, California 1946. Died 1969. Former SFPD officer and Reality Deviant. Confirmed KIA in Eureka, California, by HELMETSHRIKE Operation ARGENT PAPERCLIP. Classified ORCON/VIGILANCE. Officer in Charge: Director Julius Butcher.
Can someone go through and try to make sense of the references? I think there's supposed to be a reference to General Aleph of Panopticon in here and I remember that HELMETSHRIKE and VIGILANCE have something to do with Jameila, but I don't remember the details.

Someone else should probably go over the above in more depth, but at least it's a start to understanding what's supposed to be going on in this vote.

WARNING. By committing to this action you will initiate the endgame. All sidequests and secondary missions will be canceled.

Interrogation, Part 2:
Donald knows he has to be part of the assault. At a distance, anyways. He will manage to get there by...
[ ] Convincing Rose that he needs to be able to help, and just because he's gotten hurt again and again is no reason to keep him from helping this time.
[ ] Convincing Cross that he's undermanned and underequipped and needs all the help he can get.
[ ] Wildcard Write In Option: Win Piero's respect? Talk to General Starborn? Who knows? Well, you do.

Reunion:
Serafina is coming back. How is she going to react to Rose? To Donald? To everything that's happened that they can tell her? Discuss.
[ ] Discuss.
PS: Who exactly is Piero again?
 
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Is Aleph working for Threat Null? As the head of Panopticon I'd think he would be, but I thought I remembered something saying at one point that he wasn't.
 
Is Aleph working for Threat Null? As the head of Panopticon I'd think he would be, but I thought I remembered something saying at one point that he wasn't.
That's... a little complicated.

Basically, he was working for Control, but lacked the full picture. This caused him to commit suicide when he realized that they were inhuman space ghosts, but he kept getting brought back to life wiped of those memories, so he was working for Control again.

However, recently he's taken a different path, and is investigating Miss Clock and through her Control's various shenanigans as a third party to this whole affair, and is more or less currently doing his own thing. Yinzheng is actually subordinate to him, even if Clock thinks otherwise (she may or may not) which is probably why Donald is still alive and (probably) unconverted right now

So he's generally a background actor that's working to see how deep this rabbit hole goes, and when he does get everything will probably stand against Control, because he was so disgusted by them as to commit suicide when he found out before. As far as we can tell, anyway.
 
Serafina worked on this project at some point after she left Damian. Damian is a Technocracy school that Serafina, Alice, and Alicia went to. Alicia is Serafina's Avatar, who first appeared as an imaginary friend when Serafina was alone and needed to get out and do things. Alice is Jamelia's daughter, and was taught at Damian to be a Psycic NWO agent. I forget the name of who taught her, but it was a senior NWO agent personally grooming her. The 3 got into trouble at Damian. Serafina made a boyfriend for herself. The boyfriend's name is Cross, and he is now in a senior position in Damage Control.

Not quite. Firstly, Ms Clock was the instructor - the approximately-as-evil-but-following-orders clone of Jamelia made by her total asshole of a mentor after Jamelia failed him massively.

Secondly, Cross was not the Blando boyfriend. Cross is an EXEMPLAR II - a clone of Paris. The Blando is a noodle incident that has never been detailed fully, but it's implied that Serafina incorporated significant transgenic elements in and didn't think things properly because she was trying to make someone cool with a tragic backstory [1] and as a result it was rather less a generic male protagonist and rather more a xenomorph.

[1] Or something. Look, she was a teenager. Her taste was likely lacking.

That's... a little complicated.

Basically, he was working for Control, but lacked the full picture. This caused him to commit suicide when he realized that they were inhuman space ghosts, but he kept getting brought back to life wiped of those memories, so he was working for Control again.

However, recently he's taken a different path, and is investigating Miss Clock and through her Control's various shenanigans as a third party to this whole affair, and is more or less currently doing his own thing. Yinzheng is actually subordinate to him, even if Clock thinks otherwise (she may or may not) which is probably why Donald is still alive and (probably) unconverted right now

So he's generally a background actor that's working to see how deep this rabbit hole goes, and when he does get everything will probably stand against Control, because he was so disgusted by them as to commit suicide when he found out before. As far as we can tell, anyway.

Things are also made more complicated by the damage that 'Melia did to the timeline, because she basically gave the Agency brain-damage from choking it of information at birth. And Panopticon are so secretive that they can be changed in more notable ways by a history alteration than other organisations, because so little they do directly interacts with the Sleeper Consensus.
 
Things are also made more complicated by the damage that 'Melia did to the timeline, because she basically gave the Agency brain-damage from choking it of information at birth. And Panopticon are so secretive that they can be changed in more notable ways by a history alteration than other organisations, because so little they do directly interacts with the Sleeper Consensus.
This is true. I didn't actually talk about it because time travel makes everything more complicated, but IIRC this was floated as the reason Aleph is now actually working to properly get to the bottom of this and deal with the issue instead of killing himself a lot. It would make sense that that caused the change, after all, but we can't be certain.
 
It seems like a lot of people are lost, confused or afraid to say anything. (Quotes below serve as evidence, bolding mine)



















The main Authors want people talking to get moving. So the meta problem is: How do we get people talking when no one knows what's going on? If I might be so bold, I have a suggestion. I think people should start asking questions about what they are unsure about and we'll utilize the collective wisdom of the thread to answer them. If you have a question, probably someone has an answer. I'll start by answering some myself. (feel free to add corrections, insight, and more questions. Me, and hopefully some other people will try and answer them.)

1.) Who is here and how did we get into this situation?
Answer:
Rose is a combat construct, specifically made through the EXEMPLAR program. The EXEMPLAR program was designed to bring back famous figures in the Union's history by cloning them, and giving the clones the closest memories to the originals that was possible. Rose was considered a "failure" when she failed to exhibit the personality of Reina Lior. Reina Lior was in charge of the International Brotherhood of Mechanicians (IBM). IBM was like a proto-Iteration X. Reina was heavily involved in the creation of the Computer. The Computer became in charge of Iteration X, and was possessed by a spirit from the planet Autocthonia. No one noticed this because Iterators are bad at Spirit/Dimensional Science. Rose later developed a personality of her own. Serafina and the other EXEMPLARs looked after Rose. To the other EXEMPLARs Rose was like a younger sibling. To Serafina Rose was like a child.

Serafina worked on this project at some point after she left Damian. Damian is a Technocracy school that Serafina, Alice, and Alicia went to. Alicia is Serafina's Avatar, who first appeared as an imaginary friend when Serafina was alone and needed to get out and do things. Alice is Jamelia's daughter, and was taught at Damian to be a Psycic NWO agent. I forget the name of who taught her, but it was a senior NWO agent personally grooming her. The 3 got into trouble at Damian. Serafina made a boyfriend for herself. The boyfriend's name is Cross, and he is now in a senior position in Damage Control. Damage Control is a Progenitor agency that goes after Progenitors messing with things they shouldn't. Alice ran away from Damian. Serafina's parents found out about Alicia, and decided she was a problem. They enlisted neurosurgeon Leon Gregor to help fix this "hallucination". It mostly succeeded and it would be years before Alicia would resurface.

Eventually, Gregor was enlisted by Control. Control was in charge of the Technocracy, in some form or another, for most of it's entire history. In 1999 the Techocracy killed an ancient vampire called an "Antideluvian". An organization known as Ragnarok Command was formed to deal with the vampire. (General Starborn is currently in charge of Ragnarock Command) This Antideluvian had godlike powers and ultimately required spirit nukes to defeat. These spirit nukes caused a massive storm in the spirit world/other dimensions. This storm was known as the Avatar Storm, or the Dimensional Anomaly. In this storm Control (and many other members of the Union) were stranded from the rest of the world.

Control had largely become out of touch with the rest of the Technocracy because it was so far away from the Earth. Also, in the man made spirit worlds Control lived in, they could control the environment to allow for science not possible or feasible back on Earth. That level of control over their environment could sometimes also contribute to being out of touch with the practical limitations of Earth.

It's not healthy to be trapped in the Spirit World, especially when the Avatar Storm is occurring. This lead to a process known as Void Adaption, where Control basically became spirits. Spirits are a lot less flexible than regular humans in how they operate, and are prone to falling into extremes and stereotypes of their former forms. The spirit form of Control became known as Threat Null. Threat Null believes themselves to be the rightful leaders of the Union and wants to return home to be in charge of the Union's affairs.

In Threat Null, the Progenitors became the Transhumans. The Syndicate became the Residents. The NWO became the Agency. Iteration X became the Autopolitans. The Void Engineers became the Subjugation Corps.

A woman named Catherine Nichols, who left the Union back after the challenger disaster, created the Nichols Relays to keep Threat Null at bay. The Nichols Relays perpetuate the Avatar Storm/ Dimensional Anomaly. The Void Engineers lost their Star Trek-like leadership in the Dimensional Anomaly and ended up becoming paranoid Space Marines to fight Threat Null.

The other Conventions also changed after the Dimensional Anomaly. The Syndicate lost a Methodology (a Methodology is a subdivision of a Convention) known as the SPD. The SPD or Special Projects Division was in charge of R&D in the Syndicate. The SPD subcontracted most of this R&D out to a company known as Pentex. Pentex was formed in a merger between Proctor Investment house and Premium Oil. Proctor Investment house was founded by Proctor, a Syndicate bigshot who was instrumental in the organization of the modern Union. Premium Oil was secretly run by a powerful corruptive spirit with a hatred for Werewolves who specifically promotes pollution and immoral behavior. Pentex's true leadership went undiscovered by the Syndicate for over a hundred years (because again the Syndicate doesn't really have people who know Dimensional Science aka Spirit). Pentex's corruption was finally discovered by Donald Sykes.

Donald Sykes was a member of the Cult of Ecstasy. The Cult of Ecstasy is a member of the Traditions (an ancient cabal of magic users and science the Union cast off) dedicated to sex, drugs and rock and roll. The Cult of Ecstasy is supposed to be about using these mediums to look at the world through different perspectives to transcend barriers of space, time, and the laws of physics in hopes of reaching higher levels of understanding of the universe (Enlightenment, aka Arete).

Donald was tired that the Cult of Ecstasy claimed high ideals of Enlightenment, but in practice mostly sat around played music and consumed drugs. This came to a head when the guys Donald hung out with tried to summon a Spirit abomination of some kind. Donald decided then to turn his back on everything and everyone he knew to join their hated enemies, the Technocracy. The Technocracy has the personnel and resources to actually make a difference in the world. Donald alerted the Void Engineers about the spirit abomination and requested to join the Technocracy.

In the Technocracy, Donald was placed into the SPD and, from his experience on the other side, discovered the spiritual corruption others had missed. To shut him up, he was promoted to a position in the Financiers as a CEO.

Someone else should probably explain Henriette, Jamelia, and Kessler.
Also I'm still a little confused as to what this was supposed to mean:
Can someone go through and try to make sense of the references? I think there's supposed to be a reference to General Aleph of Panopticon in here and I remember that HELMETSHRIKE and VIGILANCE have something to do with Jameila, but I don't remember the details.

Someone else should probably go over the above in more depth, but at least it's a start to understanding what's supposed to be going on in this vote.

PS: Who exactly is Piero again?
HELMETSHRIKE was Jamelia's old unit, of quirky mini-bosses who were sent to problem zones to clean up traditionalist messes. Basically FOXHOUND . Including Jemalia, Harlan, Winston (a possible Kessler alternative), and Ami (who is Janice's current avatar), and the guy who was later converted into Doshman's Atlas Unit.

VIGILANCE I'm pretty sure was the secret operation where the HELMETSHRIKE members were used as manchurian candidate-style assassin's by Control against union assets without their having knowledge of the operations. Secret activation codes, mind wipes, the whole deal.
 
HELMETSHRIKE was Jamelia's old unit, of quirky mini-bosses who were sent to problem zones to clean up traditionalist messes. Basically FOXHOUND . Including Jemalia, Harlan, Winston (a possible Kessler alternative), and Ami (who is Janice's current avatar), and the guy who was later converted into Doshman's Atlas Unit.

VIGILANCE I'm pretty sure was the secret operation where the HELMETSHRIKE members were used as manchurian candidate-style assassin's by Control against union assets without their having knowledge of the operations. Secret activation codes, mind wipes, the whole deal.
Actually, IIRC the operatives did actually remember VIGILANCE while they were a part of it. There was a secret activation code, but it shut down the minds of everyone else in the room. Jamelia had her memories of it wiped, but only during Invisible Bear, after she'd gone haywire and could no longer be trusted.

So the people who weren't Jamelia did remember the whole thing.

On another note, also present was Starling, the Nephandus who ruined everything.
To add to this, VIGILANCE was what became Panopticon.
Yeah, it was the precursor organization. Which is kind of also partly why Miss Clock is on it, because she was also part of the original.
 
I thought this was the penultimate arc rather than the very last one. The one to wrap up some of the team's side issues so that the last arc would tie up Jamelia's story. As it is, it feels like Donald stole both the multi-sphere jack of trades role Jamelia had going on and her mission to contact and bring in the VEs, which seems to invalidate the whole point of sending her off.

I... don't follow. Why is this the final arc?

I read it as "this is the endgame for this arc", just as, say, when we started the "wiping out the IBM" fakeout in Moscow was the endgame for the Moscow arc and we couldn't do any of the other sidequests for Moscow.

(Well, at least until we went back there much later and recycled one of them)
 
This is almost certainly not the last arc because we haven't really set the stage for a) the dramatic confrontation with Alice/Alissa/Elissa or b) the one-on-one knife fight that ends with one Illiyeen alpha-fork lying on the ground with the Barnes-Sykes in her chest and the other standing and no way to tell which one survived. This is the 'clear every non-Jamelia plotline as much as possible' penultimate arc, I'm guessing.
 
This is almost certainly not the last arc because we haven't really set the stage for a) the dramatic confrontation with Alice/Alissa/Elissa or b) the one-on-one knife fight that ends with one Illiyeen alpha-fork lying on the ground with the Barnes-Sykes in her chest and the other standing and no way to tell which one survived. This is the 'clear every non-Jamelia plotline as much as possible' penultimate arc, I'm guessing.

Pretty much, yes. There are probably two locations and arcs coming after this. I say probably because things change.
 
I... don't follow. Why is this the final arc?

Yes, I thought going in that this was the penultimate arc but the way people were talking about bringing in other characters, that now Control is going to be in one of the bodies, and the usage of the word 'endgame' meant it was going to be the final arc.

I don't think this invalidates the rest of my thoughts on this arc (nor as well the fact that it's been about 3 arcs since Jamelia has actually been the driver of the plot).

Anyway, for this arc...

Rose needs to be much more active in all things. One of the issues with Charmer is that she's stuck in a perpetual rut where nothing is ever happening and she can't move on. If Rose was a (monstrous) child at the beginning of the quest, this needs to be her rebellious teenage years where she actively clashes with her 'mother' figures both in Serafina and the Technocracy as she strives to define herself as who she wants to be for the future (the adult Rose). Her faith in both has been shaken and she's been abandoned or abused by both. I think in a way, even the Charmer / Idealist would have been better for her because idealists are some of the scariest people around, especially if they survive the crucible testing their ideals. Idealists, whether battle-forged or broken, don't listen to authority because at the end of the day, an idealist values their own ideals more than others'. They have a view of the world and when you can't trust that your authority figures will do right by these ideals, you can only depend on yourself and act yourself.

As it is, Rose's current virtue / vice is ... too passive. She's regressed: she's a tool for others, not her own person. I think we can still work it around if we tortuously follow the reasoning that Rose would know Serafina expects her to be angry at her so she acts angry. (And whether she's a little happy to accept this version of reasoning and is ignoring other possible reactions... Well, self-delusion is practically a mage required skill.)

I'm really unhappy that Yinzheng got pulled out to pull Donald in for a presumably Panopticon meeting. I think that entire thing was a mistake. Panopticon may be everywhere, but it's supposed to be a sinister, secretive organization. As it is, it's popped up in successive arcs now, and it loses some of its mystique when it's a recurring villain of the week. We really shouldn't even know when it acts in general (Act 2's 'subverted' force aside). Both Yinzheng and Vigilance => Panopticon are part of Jamelia's arc, and it's getting diluted. Serafina... ok, I guess, they had her anyway, and that was due to Aleph wanting to meet Alice, who's notable for being Jamelia's daughter. Donald? ... Uh.

Throwing Blanc or Blake in also seems problematic in dilution and seems like a mismatch with Leon's really obvious revolt. One way to get both Yinzheng and Blanc out is that no one really knows who holds Yinzheng's loyalties (and she doesn't seem to know herself). For that matter, she seems to have several masters at once, which may account for any schizophrenic action on her part. This operation seems like it's too exposed for NWO-types (and seems to be Leon's brainchild running off his hubris without approval from Clock) - it's an all-or-nothing gamble but doesn't appear to have cut-outs or back-up plans, ways to ensure that the Agency still wins even if it fails. Easiest way is for Clock to apparently requisition (or quietly order, whatever she thinks will work best with Leon running amuck) Yinzheng for another operation but have her sneak out an Exemplar with Blanc's upload and have Yinzheng erase any details of this being done or that there ever was an additional clone in the first place. If Leon succeeds, well, Blanc and Clock can just come back in later. If it's a failure, at least Clock secured Blanc and Yinzheng out of it. I mean, Clock is running out of people at this rate...

Who actually needs to be here is Anathema for Rose's Reina arc (and Henriette's Autoplanet arc) and ... I'd say one of the evil space Progenitor leaders, but the only one we've met is ISOBEL and they're a hive mind anyway so I suppose technically, ISOBEL is also a evil space Progenitor leader. And in any case, ISOBEL's arc was basically dropped, and Rose actually had some interesting reactions to ISOBEL's interactions with Donald. Now that Rose has seen the vagaries of the Technocracy and she's had Thorn, a Verbena, yammering in her ear, if somewhat more helpfully, Rose probably needs to resolve her issues with the Progenitors - or, at least, decide her own reaction to the Progenitors. Whether that goal is she's going to become the leader and voice for the Constructs or that she gives up on them entirely and leads an exodus to the Syndicate enforcers, thus forcing the discussion / issue ... who knows, but she needs to choose and do so herself. Isobel and Thorn are both foils to her in their own way so she deserves to have them there at the climax of her character arc.

And the VE call, if it goes through... OK, I have no idea there. TBH, VEs should be on scene already. This operation against Leon had the authorization from all of Command, and Leon is known to be both Panopticon and a subordinate of someone that looks like Jamelia Belltower, both of which we know the VEs were already keeping an eye on. So what it really does is probably just blow the shaky cover of how much Team Belltower knew in the first place and disrupt whatever Jamelia was trying to accomplish in Eastern Europe.

Donald was already an antagonist in this arc since the Yinzheng meeting. Maybe it just makes it explicit that he's an obstacle to be overcome? Well, I mean, I already think Donald should die for the arc, but how it should be done... Maybe he falls on his sword when the VEs try to determine whether it was just him that figured it out or Team Belltower or sets up that contingency in his files and makes sure he dies, helping Rose to overcome Anathema and Isobel, in a way that he can't be brought back to be questioned. It's tricky because Rose has been so passive that if she lives through this arc, this needs to be a win for her and a win specifically accomplished by her, but as she and Donald are now, it's hard for Rose to do anything without it being linked back to Donald's contributions. It would have been less hard if Rose had already done some things on her own so that it was a more equal relationship ... but well, she hasn't.
 
Who actually needs to be here is Anathema for Rose's Reina arc (and Henriette's Autoplanet arc) and ... I'd say one of the evil space Progenitor leaders, but the only one we've met is ISOBEL and they're a hive mind anyway so I suppose technically, ISOBEL is also a evil space Progenitor leader. And in any case, ISOBEL's arc was basically dropped, and Rose actually had some interesting reactions to ISOBEL's interactions with Donald. Now that Rose has seen the vagaries of the Technocracy and she's had Thorn, a Verbena, yammering in her ear, if somewhat more helpfully, Rose probably needs to resolve her issues with the Progenitors - or, at least, decide her own reaction to the Progenitors. Whether that goal is she's going to become the leader and voice for the Constructs or that she gives up on them entirely and leads an exodus to the Syndicate enforcers, thus forcing the discussion / issue ... who knows, but she needs to choose and do so herself. Isobel and Thorn are both foils to her in their own way so she deserves to have them there at the climax of her character arc.
Point of order: Isobel is dead. She was hunted down by the Technocracy and killed, or maybe she killed herself.

But she's almost certainly dead unless I'm remembering things very wrongly.
 
As it is, Rose's current virtue / vice is ... too passive. She's regressed: she's a tool for others, not her own person. I think we can still work it around if we tortuously follow the reasoning that Rose would know Serafina expects her to be angry at her so she acts angry. (And whether she's a little happy to accept this version of reasoning and is ignoring other possible reactions... Well, self-delusion is practically a mage required skill.)

I strongly disagree about that. Firstly, she still has Willpower - she's not like a spirit trapped to her Vice. She has already been forcing down Charmer, like she did when she opened up to Henriette. Masochist effectively rewards her and allows her to Charmer-suppress when she pushes down her limits.

Her lack of confrontation with Serafina is a much more meaningful limit than most physical things.

Secondly... why do you think I've been pushing for Rose to get those memories back? Those memories include the bit around her Seeking, with Serafina's tearful confession that she "sold out" Rose and let her be turned into a weapon rather than pushing for demilitarisation when she wasn't sure if she could get it.

The entire scene is being constructed for a flaming row between the two of them, fed by Masochist on Rose's part and Serafina's realisation that with Leader rather than Dabbler, she probably could have got the demilitarisation.

And the VE call, if it goes through... OK, I have no idea there. TBH, VEs should be on scene already. This operation against Leon had the authorization from all of Command, and Leon is known to be both Panopticon and a subordinate of someone that looks like Jamelia Belltower, both of which we know the VEs were already keeping an eye on. So what it really does is probably just blow the shaky cover of how much Team Belltower knew in the first place and disrupt whatever Jamelia was trying to accomplish in Eastern Europe.

Uh... Jamelia already had made contact with the VEs when we left her, because she was speaking directly with them. Like, face to face, "I know lots of shit" contact. That's why Wufan went off with DonRoseHenri - he wasn't there to keep an eye on Jamelia any more.

There is no cover, at least from the top level. He's hardly announcing this out of the blue. It's not like we can cram the cat back in the bag [1].

Plus, Wufan knows that Donald and the Tyrants ran into an Agent in Los Angeles, on top of that.

[1] Ceres can escape from almost all kinds of bags.
 
Pretty much, yes. There are probably two locations and arcs coming after this. I say probably because things change.

Ah! That changes many things.

As far as endgame-for-this-arc goes... yeah. Rose. Rose has been reactive. She keeps being reactive, and reacting to what's immediately in front of her. She has a lot of raw effectiveness, but relatively little agency, and she's done very little this arc in spite of it being in some ways her arc.

- She played dumb construct while translating high-end progenitor technobabble as part of a Donald plan.
- She infiltrated a Progenitor construct... no, wait, that was Henriette.
- She got pushed out of an encounter with Yinzheng Li by Donald
- She managed to wield a bit of influence on Cross and then be somewhat helpful in finding Donald as part of a Henriette plan with minimal opposition
- Now she's interacting with Serafina a bit, spendng most of it unconscious, and declining to have a major emotional moment, letting Sera and Henriette talk about how to manage her.

So... to improve the situation, I think we could do to see some personality change, and for her to gain some agency. She went Masochist/Charmer because that's what she had to do to get everyone to survive the Spy's Demise. Now she doesn't have to do that anymore, and she's also getting a major reintegration moment where she gets her memories back and finally gets read in on what's actually been happening. She finds out that they didn't trust her and that now they do and why and so forth... and these are potentially very powerful things. Se also has a Reina in her head who cares about her at least somewhat, and who has been seeing her tear herself to pieces unnecessarily for quite some time. She probably still wouldn't take over, but she absolutely would be willing to step in and talk about things while Rose is under, getting her memories back. Worth noting that this is Reina finally finding out some of this truth as well. Among other things, finding out that it wasn't just Friend Computer that went crazy in bad ways is going to be emotionally pertinent to *her*. Anyway, she's pretty good at putting broken soldiers back together again, if I recall correctly.

So that cues the question of where Rose goes from here... and I almost want Rose herself to be the one who asks it (probably of mindscape-Reina). Then Reina turns it back on her, says "Well, who do you want to be?" and Rose gets to express some real agency again, in deciding who and what to make herself into. She's not Reina, she's not the weapon the Technocracy made her into, she's not the weapon Reina pushed her to become, she's the person she wants to be going forward. At that point, I see her ditching Charmer altogether, and possibly ditching Masochist. Not sure where it goes from there, but she'll come out the other end a lot mroe prepared to stand up and Do Things.

I don't think that Donald ought to die merely for the sin of being a white male who's soaked up some agency. I do think that he should have deeply reduced screentime going forward... like being recruited by Aleph and dropping off the face of the earth while appearing to be dead. He can go off and do Aleph things that we'll probably never hear about except maybe as an aside in the endgame when one of the scheduled Horrible Surprises suddenly isn't anymore. It would finish out his arc nicely and then get him out of the way.
 
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