Except for sociopolitical ones, based on such a procedure being available (assuming it is economically viable)... what other consequences would there need to be?

Well, it would depend on the setting/contrivance - but pulling souls back from the "Engine of Reincarnation/Dissolution Into Nothing/Void/Heaven!/Hell!/Whatever!" might cause all kinds of bizarre effects.

A dead soul might come back wrong, regardless of how perfectly rejuvenated and functional their former corpse is.

Or it could cause disruptions in the underlying metaphysics of the setting - gods might start losing power or prestige (fewer worshippers to turn into angelic warriors or somewhat-more-nubile-worshippers), Fate might start to hiccup when it assumes a dead soul will obviously reincarnate (causing a soulless baby to be born).

You could write an entire setting where its main defining feature is the new and easy availability of resurrection, which then results in major problems. Of course, the standard moral would be "accept that death is right and proper" and the heroes would show the sadly misguided Resurrectionists the error of their ways... but a far more interesting story would result from trying to patch reality.
 
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Week 3 - A Question of Need
"I think I may have overdone it."

You and Gai-sensei stood there for a long moment, staring at the merrily burning remains of what was mere moments ago a wooden target dummy. You had attempted to use your not-chakra to help make your kunai more debilitating by infusing them with a negligible amount of your own chakra.

It was not a resounding success.

"Well my hip young student, every piece of training is a success in its own wa-"

One of the arms of the target dummy disintegrated in a shower of sparks "Gai-sensei..."

"Yes, you did." He shifted into what you knew was his 'heartfelt encouragement' pose, "But don't give up Tenten! A technique like this takes time, and you have already made great strides in understanding the true nature of Hard Work!"

You sighed and pulled out a kunai. With it you managed to scrape out the remnants of your thrown kunai from the target dummies funeral pyre. Like you expected it was broken into half-melted pieces. You'd put way more chakra into it than you'd intended which caused...all this. You're just lucky it hadn't exploded in your hand.

The idea was from watching Neji train. If you could imbue your weapons with just the slightest edge of your own chakra so that they transferred it to whatever you hit, you could disrupt their chakra network momentarily. On top of whatever physical damage you caused. Of course, Neji's style had all the fluid grace and precision of a surgeon's scapel. Your idea had all the elegance of a sledgehammer to a support beam, but seeing as you lacked a dojutsu that gave you perfect vision of everyone's internal chakra network and the capability to process their information in real-time sledgehammer would have to do.

You had to rely whatever the not-chakra was though to help though, since your normally you wouldn't have the chakra control to even attempt something like this. Too little chakra and it was worthless, too much and well...you glanced to down at the molten remains of the kunai. It turned into an unstable grenade with no pin and an uncertain timer. Not exactly something you were comfortable holding.

So you had to rely on the not-chakra. You still weren't exactly sure what it was, just that it made you better, but even with that it was still tricky to get down. You were never the best at chakra control, it just wasn't something you enjoyed practicing, especially after your attempts to be a medical-nin fell through and your practical motivation to improve had tanked.

Your fingers closed around your intact kunai, none of those thoughts now. You wanted to improve, you had to improve. Even if it meant doing something unpleasant, you could do this, you knew you could. That faint whisper of possibility that hadn't left you since the preliminary fight. It was just a matter of getting there. You pushed yourself up and focused on the remaining quartet of target dummies.

Gai-sensei gave a blinding smile you could practically feel on your back "That's the spirit!"

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As you descended the elevator leading down to the main complex of Konoha Intelligence you idly rubbed your hand. By the time the finals ended you'd definitely be sporting some new callouses on your hands, but for now you just had to deal with the bloody bandages currently wrapped around your dominant hand.

Still, your own injuries weren't the reason you were here. No, you were here to visit Kin. You had meant to do it earlier, but a combination of more pressing matters and the fact that you were sure you could (or should) had stayed your hand. Now though, you'd gotten permission from Gai-sensei, who'd in turn gotten a visit approved for you.

Which left the only obstacle between you and a friendly visit to the girl you...recruited? was passing the security check to actually enter the underground complex that formed the backbone of Konoha's Intelligence Services. A process that involved getting finger-printed, having your blood tested, stuck with a chakra needle designed to disrupt henges and genjutsu, and those were just the parts you weren't blindfolded for.

Gai-sensei had briefly explained the issues caused by defections during a hosted chunin exam, a fact that was covered by the various treaties that allowed these to happen in the first normally. Not that anyone actually followed those provisions, but an image of compliance had to be maintained. So Kin was confined to special quarters reserved for handling and debriefing defectors until the Chunin Exams had completed, both to protect her person, and her value as an intelligence asset.

Which led you to a nondescript metal door in a nondescript hallway, its only defining feature was the fact that it was one of the few doors with visible guards standing near it. Your guide stopped to talk quietly with one of the guards.

You however hesitated, did she even want to see you? She'd been in a bad spot the last time you'd seen her. Had T&I done anything to her?

The guard nodded, and you saw a keycard swipe across a pad and the faint sound of the door unlocking. Hesitantly you knocked, and it was with a faint stab of disappointment that you didn't get an answer. The guard rolled his eyes and motioned to the doorknob.

Oh.

You pushed open the door, wincing slightly as the obviously unoiled hinges let out a soft groan, to find...an apartment; A very nice apartment.

It was nicer than yours at least. Nicely carpeted, with no lack for furnishings, and a clearly used bed in the back that was almost twice as large as yours. The only thing it lacked was a kitchen. Oh, and the view that added almost 1000 ryo to your rent. And in the center of it all, gazing down at a book, was the person you came here to see.

She looks much like you remember her, even if they'd given her a change of clothes, trading in her flak vest and cargo pants for a konoha green t-shirt and sweat pants. Her Sound hitai-ate is nowhere to be seen, which you suppose is a good sign.

She glances up, and you see a faint flash of confusion on her face before her eyes widen in recognition.

"Hi." You give an awkward little wave.

She closes her book, Konoha and the Will of Fire, and sets it carefully on the table in front of her before responding. "Hey." there's an odd edge in her voice you can't quite place, "Why are you here?"

"Well, um, I just thought I'd come visit, see how you were doing you know?" You sat down in one of the chairs opposite her, doing your best to give her the brightest smile you could. The faint look of confusion on her face though tells you she probably doesn't.

"Oh."

The silence dragged on as you tried to think of something to say. Come on Tenten, what would Le-no wait bad idea Nej-okay even worse. Ino! Ino is good at this kind of stuff, what would Ino sa-

"Why?"

You blinked at the sudden interruption, "Why what?"

"Why...w-why did you help me?" Her voice cracked slightly and she gestures to the book on the table in front of her, "I'm trying to understand, but I just...can't...why me? Why help me? I'm just-...I'm not-..." She opens her mouth like she wants to say more, but nothing else comes out. She just looks at you, and you can see fear, and pain, and some very, very broken in her eyes.

How are you going to answer this?
[ ] It was the right thing to do.
[ ] Because everyone deserves a second chance.
[ ] You looked like you needed it.​
[ ] Stunt?​

Right so, because you chose the Kin Interlude, she's managed to recover just a touch from what you witnessed in there. She had a nice long chat with Hiruzen, which helped a little bit. Don't get me wrong, she still has capital-I Issues though.

Oh, and I hope everyone is happy with how I'm interpreting how Joint Wounding Attack works.
 
[x] It was the right thing to do.

I'm voting for this unless or until someone comes up with a better write in or stunt.
 
I've a question, what second chance is Kin supposed to be receiving from the Leaf or from Tenten? I'm pretty sure this is her first chance, and she hasn't fucked up yet to need a second chance. Unless you think that Snake Face was her first chance, but that doesn't really make sense in this context.
 
[X] You looked like you needed it.
-[X] And I... I knew that look in your eyes that night. I used to see it a lot... in my mirror.
Tenten is an orphan too isn't she?
 
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So if we learn to control that explosion, how useful would it be?
That depends on how useful it is to be able to blow stuff up on demand. Also if we could blow stuff up on demand how quickly do you think Gai-sensei would order it to be a sealed technique? We are after all not allowed explosive tags due to a noodle incident.
 
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Well we have a reserve of xp for situation like this one!

I'm not good whit write-in but if you write one you increse r Presence and/or apropriate chams i vote your plan.
Investigation charms would likely be better right now. Find out what makes her tick.

Cost: 5m, 1wp
Mins: Investigation 4, Essence 1
Type: Simple (Speed 5 in long ticks)
Keywords: Combo-OK
Duration: One story
Prerequisite Charms: Any Investigation Excellency

The Lawgivers see into others' hearts. This Charm allows the character to make an Investigation-based roll to profile someone's personality. The character need not interact with the target, but must have sufficient material evidence of the target's personality to estimate the target's nature. If the target deliberately sends out misleading cues, subtract an external penalty of ([the target's Manipulation + Socialize] ÷ 2) from the successes on the Investigation roll. Corrupted or incomplete evidence can also impose an external penalty.
If the roll succeeds, then each success reduces external penalties on dramatic, social and mass combat actions the character takes against the target. This Charm cannot reduce external penalties by an amount greater than the Solar's Essence. The Exalt can have only one profile of a given target. The crispness of the profile—that quality that reduces external penalties—lasts only as long as the committed Essence. The Lawgiver's player cannot roll again to build a new profile unless the story ends or a new piece of evidence allows a dramatic reconceptualization of the target's personality.
 
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Well we have a reserve of xp for situation like this one!

I'm not good whit write-in but if you write one you increse r Presence and/or apropriate chams i vote your plan.
Nope. As far as I'm aware, and I'm really tired right now so someone might want to double check, you can only flash-buy (that is buy without some sort of training period even if just in a fluff sense) favored and caste abilities.
 
I think Orochimaru might have something like this
Cost: 5m, 1wp
Mins: Investigation 4, Essence 2
Type: Reflexive
Keywords: Combo-OK, Servitude
Duration: Instant
Prerequisite Charms: Courtier's Eye Technique, Judge's Ear Technique

In the savage world that is Creation, everyone has a price. Even those whom jade coin cannot buy will sell themselves for something—sex, fame, the reclaimed honor of an ancestor or the salvation of the world. The Exalt uses this Charm immediately after interacting with a target. The Solar's player rolls (Perception + Investigation). The difficulty for this roll is 1, but subtract an external penalty of ([the target's Manipulation + Socialize] ÷ 2) from the successes on the Investigation roll. On a success, this Charm forces the target's player to declare the target's price. If the Exalt meets that price, this Charm invokes an unnatural Servitude effect—the target becomes loyal to the Exalt and must spend one Willpower per scene to act in a knowingly disloyal fashion. This servitude lasts until the Exalt betrays the bargain—as by reclaiming an object given as the price—or the target has spent a total of 10 Willpower to act disloyally.
If we want minions we should get it. Also very useful for figuring out what makes people tick.
 
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