Flagship Name

  • Spirit of Fire

    Votes: 21 47.7%
  • Vigilance

    Votes: 23 52.3%

  • Total voters
    44
  • Poll closed .
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.
 
*Unlock Planetary Education – 1000 PP +0.1% PP per facility (One per planet)*
*Unlock Universities – 10k PP 1% chance of random research completing Requires Planetary Education*
Note: If you have 2 universities, you have a two 1% chances of unlocking a tech, not one 2% chance.
*Unlock Galactic University – 10 million PP. Research DCs set to 0 for all loyal Primarchs. Requires 1000 Universities*

So, this is some pretty interesting stuff. Planetary Education isn't too special. Its nice, another source of .1%PP is great, especially since this seems to stack indefinitely. Though the cost is pretty significant.

Universities are absolutely incredible. Though, possibly too much so. If we do get the 1000 universities necessary for the galactic university. Well, that's 1000 1% chances. That's basically 10 tech per turn. Sure it'd cost an absurd amount of PP to make happen. But honestly, it'll get research done as fast or faster than the Primarchs.

That galactic University is pretty cool. And it'd probably be amazing... if normal universities can't do paragon/transcendent tech. Otherwise just having more universities would be better.
 
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.
 
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.
 
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.
 
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.

Never give in. Never give up. We are the Eternal Wardens and we will hold the line.
 
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.
 
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.
 
a Friend in high places


A Glimpse of Future: Eastern Continent Part Four

Alright, Omake rewards now that I am free once again. For the first, we have a nice characterization of Kelbor. I like how you portray him as both knowledgeable about technology as well as being a good politician. Interestingly enough, there were actually some things brought up in the Omake that I do have going on in the background. For your rewards:

[] +10 to a roll of your choice
[] Mark IV Armor will be rolled out early in Year 30 instead of Year 60
[] -10 to ????

Next up is an omake on the purity rune. I like the description of Kesar's thought process as he makes it, and the solutions he finds to it. For your rewards:

[] Purity Rune checks auto succeed
[] 3 Years of Progress for Purity Rune Complete
[] Holographic Purity Runic Pattern - ??????

Lastly, is another nice cultural Omake. Once again, I love the attention to detail and the descriptions. It feels like something that can occur. For your reward:

[] +10 to a roll of your choice
[] +15 to a Valhallan roll of your choice (Art, sculpting, religion spread, drama, poetry, literature)
[] -10 to ???
 
Next up is an omake on the purity rune. I like the description of Kesar's thought process as he makes it, and the solutions he finds to it. For your rewards:

[] Purity Rune checks auto succeed
[] 3 Years of Progress for Purity Rune Complete
[] Holographic Purity Runic Pattern - ??????

What does that mean by Holographic? Like, a hologram ala Lea asking for help? Or like holographic cards?
Also, would that Holographic Purity Runic pattern be a tech? Something that could be applied to other runes maybe?
 
What does that mean by Holographic? Like, a hologram ala Lea asking for help? Or like holographic cards?
Also, would that Holographic Purity Runic pattern be a tech? Something that could be applied to other runes maybe?

No, it would be an upgrade to just the Purity Rune, not a tech. When I say holographic, I meant like one of those cards where if you look at it from different angles, you see different things. What the upgrade does, I'll reveal when the rune is finished.
 
A Call For Assistance
A Call For Assistance
The Vigilance, flagship of the Eternal Wardens, loomed mightily beyond the gravity well of Melchia V, a recently industrialized Agri-World that had sworn its allegiance to the Imperium shortly after its discovery by the Sons of Kesar Dorlin. However, the usually jovial primarch was absent from the planetside festivities. In fact, he had not even set foot on the world, having assigned Oriacarius to bring the planet into compliance.

This was unlike the normal behavior of the Daemonsbane, who would normally ensure compliance in person if he were in the system. It was speculated that this was caused by the declaration of Lorgar Aurelian's status as Excommunicate Traitoris. While it would be an understatement to say that there was resentment between them, Kesar had never imagined that such a thing could happen again. He never believed that a day would come when a second plinth beneath the roof of the hegemon could be made empty. Prior to Lorgar's betrayal, the Wardens' Genesire had even stated that although he did not agree with his brother's views, he wished that their differences had not divided them so. It is no surprise then that many believed Kesar Dorlin to be grieving over the Aurelian's betrayal and taking time to collect himself.

However, this was not all there was to the Daemonsbane's absence. While still grief-stricken over the fate of his brother, Kesar refused to merely wallow in his despair. Instead, he channeled his anguish into determination, and dove into his work with a greater intensity and focus than ever before. Nearly all of his time was spent in his laboratory, aided by the most powerful Librarians from both the Eternal Wardens and the Thousand Sons in his quest.

In particular, Kesar worked to finally create the long sought-after Rune of Purity, hoping that it may either free his brother from the Dark Powers that had taken him or, should that fail, give him a peaceful death. However, that goal still eluded him. No matter the shape, arrangement, foci, or components used, a Purity Rune would fail to form. It was as though the Warp itself resisted its completion. Despite all his efforts, he lacked the resources to bring Purity into being. It was then that the Primarch of the Eternal Wardens chose to ask for assistance, hoping that he might either acquire the materials needed to finally add Purity to his Legion's Runic Library or find that one of his brothers could succeed where he had failed.

Under the advisement of his Thousand Sons attachment, he decided to contact Magnus the Red, who possessed the wisdom of Prospero's Great Libraries as well as complete knowledge of Kesar's own previous Runic creations. Their discussion was not an easy one to have. Their Astropathic Choirs lost contact several times as the Warp seemed to swirl and churn and roil with a far greater intensity than was normal. In the end, it required Magnus and the Librarians of both Legions to force back the rumblings of the Immaterium personally in order for the two Primarchs to communicate.

"Brother, it has been quite some time," said Kesar. "How have you been?"

"I have been well, brother," replied Magnus. "The Occulus you sent me has done wonders for my research. Now, shall we discuss the real reason you contacted me?"

"Magnus, I don't mean to-"

"Brother, maintaining this connection is very tiring. I would prefer to skip the pleasantries for the sake of expediency if at all possible."

"Very well then. I come to you with a matter of great urgency. You know of my method of Runic creation, do you not?"

"Of course I do. Why do you ask?"

"I have been attempting to create a new Rune for my Legion and yours to utilize. Specifically, a Rune of Purity. However, despite all my efforts, I have been unable to complete it thus far. I would like your aid in this endeavor."

"I would be honored, brother. What has prevented you from completing it before?"

"Simply put, it is as if the Warp rejects its creation. Despite all the components being individually compatible, some strange force seems to be preventing them from coalescing. It is as if their natures are made to repel each other whenever they approach unification."

"This is highly troubling, Kesar. Especially given the state of-"

"Yes, I had suspected as much. You believe this to be the work of them as well?"

"... Possibly. I would rather not jump to conclusions but that does seem the most likely reason."

"So what should be done about this, brother? I fear there is no place I can go where this problem would be solved."

"Kesar... if you would allow me to I could see if I can create the Rune you seek."

"Truly? Thank you Magnus, I-"

"However, I regret that I must make one request of you in return."

"What is it?"

"No matter what happens, do not die for this. I have already lost one brother, and now it is almost certain that I will lose a second. Promise me that you will not follow."

"Very well. I promise."

"Then it is done. Well, now I shall see if my Warding Runes are as powerful as I theorized."

"Wait, you finished it?"

"Only the prototype. Now all that is necessary is some... stress testing."

"You never cease to amaze me, brother."

"I could say the same of you. Farewell, brother."

"Goodbye, Magnus."

When their conversation was finished, Kesar looked around to find that all the Librarians around him were panting, with only the Thousand Sons able to stand, if barely. Their Navigator informed them that the Warp had become more turbulent, a clear sign that something was upset. And that was perhaps the greatest indication that Kesar had done the right thing.​
 
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A Call For Assistance

Well, looks like we have another nice Omake, this time from a new person. I like how you portray Magnus, and the conversation. For your rewards, I couldn't really reduce them down to three options since these all fit in my opinion:

[] GM Explains what Magnus has researched so far
[] +10 to a roll of your choice
[] DC for Kesar's trait gain from this vote reduced to DC80 from DC90
[] Purity Rune checks auto succeed

Well dang. Now I've gotta go for the holographic thing I think.

Nice job, the Purity Rune is upgraded to a Grandmaster Rune when it finishes.
 
What does that do? It was +10 at master right? Does it effect a wider variety of things, or just give a higher bonus, or strengthen that which is attached to, or how's that work?

It does both. Basically, instead of just a rune of purity, it's effectively a Rune of Cleansing. Provides +15 against daemons, +10 corruption resistance, +10 to Witch Hunters in your domain. Also something hidden.
 
[X] Resolution. The Archdaemons are responsible for corrupting your brother, your sons, and countless others. These foul creatures enslaved the minds and souls of so many. These abominations must never be forgiven. You will fight them until your dying breath.
 
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