Pokemon must be weakened or the catch rate is crapNow that you mention it, Sayaka was in a similar Situation.
Sure she tried to attack Ashy but she was also very close to becoming a Witch.
Pokemon must be weakened or the catch rate is crapNow that you mention it, Sayaka was in a similar Situation.
Sure she tried to attack Ashy but she was also very close to becoming a Witch.
quick balls, m80
From now on Sayaka's Dialog is replaced with Pokemon Talk (Saya Sayaka Saya Saya) in my Head.
I think Ashy prefers having someone she can talk to.
You combined the votes. Noice!> Use an illusion to distract the familiars while retreating towards the ceiling, then rain shatterwords down from above.
> ...but leave at least a few for Sayaka to deal with so she doesn't end up feeling totally useless.
They rely on smell. Dang. Charlotte has eyes, though. We might get the chance to use the illusion trick here.The familiars are ignoring your illusions. Completely, utterly ignoring them. Neither the Pyotr nor the nurses seem to care about the cheese in the slightest.
Ashy is a Kaiju in Candyland. She is literally towering over the familiars, and they are laying siege.Alright seriously, what IS this? It's like the familiars are laying siege to you!
Useless ribbon arms! They make great bookmarks, but a strong grip is impossible!You swipe at the Pyotr with your ribbons and jerk from side to side trying to get them off, but now that they've got a grip on you they're proving annoyingly persistent.
I approve the title. It's too good to not use.
Look's like the Illusions are going to stay expensive. Maybe if Ashy subsumes the right Magical Girl...You sway in a place, a bit staggered from the sudden loss of magic. Even as relatively small as that illusion was, that seriously drained you… still, if this stuff is as important to the familiars as Novella implied, it should be worth it. You're more trying to buy time here than win outright after all, so a distraction is probably the best way to go about this.
You scoot to the side and bring your ribbons down on the reverse zipline. Though surprisingly well anchored, the needle loosens and falls out of the wall after a couple of forceful hits. The Pyotr that were climbing the cable immediately plummet into the pit below, but even as they do, two more needles trailing string are shot up to replace the one you just sent down. Alright seriously, what IS this? It's like the familiars are laying siege to you!
The coordinated Familiars and the Fact that the Barrier itself now spawns Obstacles means Charlotte is probably paying Attention.A bunch of metal beds suddenly emerge from the gloom above, descending out of seemingly nowhere directly in your path.
Kyoko?
Odd simile to use for mice.
This could work, especially if Kyoko can apply her illusions on a large scale. Ashy's illusions are supposed to be aesthetically pleasing, but Kyoko's illusions are meant to actually fool people.Look's like the Illusions are going to stay expensive. Maybe if Ashy subsumes the right Magical Girl...
The familiars all have the same goals, so some coordination isn't unusual. As for the intelligent siege tactics, it's possible that the Polinas are commanding the Pyotr. The "SUDDENLY, OBSTACLES!" does seem suspicious, though.The coordinated Familiars and the Fact that the Barrier itself now spawns Obstacles means Charlotte is probably paying Attention.
Maybe, maybe not. Charlotte should be able to feel her domain to some extent.If she is organizing all this, then she is probably close by and it could all stop if Sayaka finds her.
According to Ashy's character sheet history, the unknown ability was available once Sayaka was nommed, so it's probably a Sayaka skill. I'm guessing that it's either the cutlass storm or the wheels of fate. Or maybe something sound-based?Or Ashy uses Tearful Storm or the ??? Ability and accidentally's her.
I highly discourage this. If Ashy even can turn upside-down, would she be able to maintain her balance?
This sounds like a good idea. I'll be stealing it, thanks.[X] Retreat back into Tome and try to squash them, or use Shatter Words to kill them.
Look's like the Illusions are going to stay expensive. Maybe if Ashy subsumes the right Magical Girl...
We already know it doesn't work like that. Ash got no new spells from subsuming Sayaka, just the Gem's Abilities and her magic storage. She only has access to Sayaka's magic through Sayaka. If she subsumed Kyoko, she'd have to convince her to help with the illusions. Not that it could work anyway, as Kyoko can't use her illusions anymore.This could work, especially if Kyoko can apply her illusions on a large scale. Ashy's illusions are supposed to be aesthetically pleasing, but Kyoko's illusions are meant to actually fool people.
Ah, well, magic's probably more efficient anyway. Just have to find the right magical girl or witch and get them to produce cheese. By the megaton, if we're to fulfill hillo's stated goal of filling Charlotte's labyrinth.If this ever does somehow turn into Cheese Quest, I guarantee you it will not be on quite that scale. There are some things beyond even the power of miracles to accomplish, and obtaining every piece of cheese in the world is one of them.
Profile Page>Find All Threads by Flairina. Each one, View All Threadmarks, copy down dates & wordcounts, then let Mathematica at it. Not a lot of work. In fact, here, have a graph. Black is Subsumption, light brown is Stand-In, green* is No-Leaf Clover, and that one red dot is the recent update to To Twist the Crimson Threads. Data starts with the first chapter of Stand-In, and does not include this most recent update....I cannot believe you took the time to work all of that out. I should still be writing faster regardless of all that but thank you for the reassurance!
I definitely overreached in saying "most people"; I believed that, but I did not have strong reasons to do so. Moreover, a quick google indicates that it is likely not true. Apologies for my overconfidence. EDIT: And thanks for prompting me to learn better. (Or not? Certainly, thanks here isn't socially inappropriate, but does the situation meet my stricter criteria for gratitude? …yes, I believe it does. Thanks.)...er, if you say so. You're gonna have to chalk it up to an oddity with the author in that case, because the way I think is... well, in words, but not really in any sort of voice? I mean, I can if I make the effort to, but when I'm just thinking or reading or what not I don't just intrinsically think of the words being said aloud or with sound. Might come from a childhood spent almost entirely reading books in favor of most types of social interaction. I'm sure if you try you can think without exactly "hearing" yourself, so just think of it like that.
There's a difference between voluntary and involuntary creepiness. Ashtaroth can't help being a giant soul-eating monster, but she doesn't have to do spooky voices on top of that.So are many other things about witches. Sayaka is just going to have to deal.
How many of them even know what a Riemannian manifold is, much less why I'd be worried about the completeness thereof?Ask the show creators. I plucked that directly from episode 3.
Yes; the reason was clear.Well, yeah, but they're for reference, and I don't have a picture of Ashtaroth with her arms freed from that point in time, so... yeah.
Yes, and I expect she did that. Just, you know… not the first time, and probably not the second, either.Well I mean, theoretically one could just turn off one's sense of pain for that since it's sort of a magical girl standard. Or shapeshift stronger bones for that sort of thing so it doesn't cause tons of broken bones. Or maybe other magic was involved. Just saying.
True. It doesn't feel right for a fakeout, but I've been wrong before.hillo315 said:Tira considered calling Mami, and then she picked up the phone. Who did Tira actually call? We don't know, and we may have been deliberately lead to a wrong conclusion.
Ah. Well, the good news is that there's only a few kilograms of that around, so it'll be a lot easier to acquire all of it.Nah. Charlotte deserves only the best cheese! Mami head cheese. Her favorite.
Parts of Ashtaroth: Tome, stalk, arms, Novella, galaxy. The stalk has grown, but only from the bottom. Her arms have grown and freed themselves from Tome, but otherwise remained them same. Novella has had entries added. And the galaxy has grown larger. When she ate Sayaka, she briefly gained "pointy growths … like tree branches".Tome is apparently the only unchanging feature. Ashy's ability to extend out of Tome depends on her spare body mass. The rest of her body is trapped in Tome until she noms more souls.
Is it plant-like, specifically, or is she simply being extruded? It may also be worthwhile to note that while Ashtaroth seems to grow from Tome, she subsumes things using Novella.That said, Ashy's growth is also seemingly plantlike. Tome is probably the seed and/or roots...
Blank, as far as we know, but Ashtaroth hasn't tried to look at any pages other than the ones she grows from (we haven't been explicitly told that they're blank, but I'm pretty sure we would have gotten a description of their contents if they weren't, and I don't recall any).Tome doesn't change on the outside... but what about its contents?
And captive food is captive food. But they're Ashtaroth's familiars now, so who knows if they'd give even the tiny amount of magic the Pyotr did?Shitposting aside, Ashtaroth might want to consider going back and clearing out the remainder of Saar's familiars at some point. Free food is free food, after all.
Of. Other fixes possible.Confrontation 14: The Cheese is a Lie said:
Tempting fate like this? She deserves what's coming.Well, that's annoying, but you suppose more mice shouldn't matter too much in the long run.
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The familiars most likely can't reach you up here, so you should be able to do this next bit continue unimpeded.
Free rein.
"Do this next bit" or "continue".
Well, not yet, but once she stops calling you evil she might.
If they're blind, how are they aiming?Novella also said that the Pyotr are BLIND, a factoid you read, noted, and then apparently promptly forgot. The nurses might even be too, since they have the exact same kind of head. If that's true, then of course none of them are reacting to it; you doubt your illusion smells like anything—
Something small and thin whizzes by your right.
It took me a second to realize she meant injections, not gunshots.They tear right through, but while the impacts sting—kind of like actual shots, come to think of it—
Probably magic.
A misallocation of firepower, I think. One hit on a line should be enough to cut it, and while they may be too small to aim at easily, the shrapnel from a hit on one of the climbing Pyotr may also do the trick. Some suppressive fire is fine, but maybe throw some shatterwords at the climbers, too?You take down several more of the trapeze-like lines, tossing your remaining shatterwords down at the bridge as you go to try and cut down on the rate of fire
I'm not sure "straggler" is the right word, though apparently it has uses I was previously unaware of which may fit. Also, yikes. I previously estimated the entire horde at 60–70 familiars, but even if there were twice that many, to have 36 be just a fraction of the climbers is a significant increase. Particularly as reinforcements are ongoing.Many of the Pyotr fail to find their footing once they land and end up dropping off of you nigh-immediately, but there's so many of them that it might as well not matter—by the time you manage to float back out of dive-bombing range, you've still picked up at least three dozen stragglers.
I see someone hasThe resulting sensation is something along the lines of having … a bunch of tiny cats attempt to scale your torso
But if she doesn't know when she's being creepy, she can't deliberately be less creepy. So whenever she's being creepy, someone needs to be creeped out and tell her she's being creepy.There's a difference between voluntary and involuntary creepiness. Ashtaroth can't help being a giant soul-eating monster, but she doesn't have to do spooky voices on top of that.
If finite, there isn't a specific number of souls. In addition to quantity, there is also quality. More magical potential means more growth.would it make sense for there to be a specific finite number of souls that she must eat, to be released/complete?
It's possible that Ashy can continue to assimilate souls after unlocking her final form and ceasing growth, for the same reason that we assume Walpurgisnacht can do the same.Likewise, I do not trust the pattern of growth to continue: consider what happens after Ashtaroth has eaten a hundred witches. Is she a thousand-foot-tall beanstalk monster with waving branches and a "head" of swirling lines the size of several city blocks, coming out of a relatively tiny book? Would that preserve her aesthetic?
Tome is the roots/seed and Novella is the leaves. Both are necessary for Ashy's continued survival and growth.Is it plant-like, specifically, or is she simply being extruded? It may also be worthwhile to note that while Ashtaroth seems to grow from Tome, she subsumes things using Novella.
I'm guessing that Ashy is the sum of Tome's contents. If that's the case, Tome is blank because Ashy is sticking out of it.Blank, as far as we know, but Ashtaroth hasn't tried to look at any pages other than the ones she grows from (we haven't been explicitly told that they're blank, but I'm pretty sure we would have gotten a description of their contents if they weren't, and I don't recall any).
Presumably smell. Or just magic.
It's hard to safely navigate to the witch while hostile familiars are flooding the path, and Sayaka's wellbeing may or may not depend on Ashy surviving siege warfare.I wonder what Sayaka's doing. Trying to heal, certainly, but other than that—would she even try to kill the familiars swarming us, or would she go after Charlotte while they're distracted?
She is one Possibility, but we know there are Non-Canon Magical Girls around like Tira so some others showing up is possible.This could work, especially if Kyoko can apply her illusions on a large scale. Ashy's illusions are supposed to be aesthetically pleasing, but Kyoko's illusions are meant to actually fool people.
The Problem is that the Polinas should be blind too.The familiars all have the same goals, so some coordination isn't unusual. As for the intelligent siege tactics, it's possible that the Polinas are commanding the Pyotr. The "SUDDENLY, OBSTACLES!" does seem suspicious, though.
I think the Beds were I bid to well aimed for it to be something unconscious.Based on what little I know of witch magic, I'm guessing the barrier may not always do exactly what the witch wants... but it definitely responds to the witch's emotions. If Charlotte is feeling threatened by Ashy, it makes sense that the labyrinth spat out extra defenses. Possibly like how Shemesh somehow knew to rescue Ashy from Sayaka just in time.
It doesn't work like that for Ashy and the only other Barrier that we have seen so far, Saar's, didn't either or Ashy would have been swarmed by Familiars.Maybe, maybe not. Charlotte should be able to feel her domain to some extent.
Self-healing maybe? It's not like Ashy got in any Situation she would have needed it yet, unlike with Tearful Storm.According to Ashy's character sheet history, the unknown ability was available once Sayaka was nommed, so it's probably a Sayaka skill. I'm guessing that it's either the cutlass storm or the wheels of fate. Or maybe something sound-based?
We did get a ??? Skill from Sayaka.We already know it doesn't work like that. Ash got no new spells from subsuming Sayaka, just the Gem's Abilities and her magic storage. She only has access to Sayaka's magic through Sayaka. If she subsumed Kyoko, she'd have to convince her to help with the illusions. Not that it could work anyway, as Kyoko can't use her illusions anymore.
-Tearful Storm (Saar): A colorful, directed cyclone that spirals out from the center of your galaxy lines, sending anything it hits flying with tornado-strength winds. Formerly possessed by the Witch of the Netherlands.
-???
I saw this fic a while back, but dropped it from lack of interest. I'm very glad I picked it up again; it's quite interesting now. As in, the moment Sayaka showed up, I thought, "Yes! This story now has a reason to exist."
Shitposting aside, Ashtaroth might want to consider going back and clearing out the remainder of Saar's familiars at some point. Free food is free food, after all.
With this update, we've hit an important milestone for story revisions: the word count has hit 62k, equaling the value from the previous thread (up to the limited precision of the word count display, and counting author's notes and other non-story text in story threadmark posts). Most rewrites don't get anywhere near this point. Congrats!
(Given the plot divergence, it's hard to say whether the new version has reached an equivalent level of plot development as the original, but I feel like it's not quite at that point yet.)
Multistage planning abilities, these things are smart and strong. Shockingly dangerous for familiars.
... Huh, now that I think on it, how did the Nurse things even know were Ash was? Ash seems to think they're blind, having the same target heads as the Pyotr and ignoring the illusion supports this, but Ash has been floating midair this entire fight over a huge chasm. She doesn't make any noise far as we're heard, and she's not in contact with the ground so they can't detect vibrations that way. How did they know where to throw the needles? Do they just sense magic or something?
I'm not sure "straggler" is the right word, though apparently it has uses I was previously unaware of which may fit. Also, yikes. I previously estimated the entire horde at 60–70 familiars, but even if there were twice that many, to have 36 be just a fraction of the climbers is a significant increase. Particularly as reinforcements are ongoing.
It's possible that Ashy can continue to assimilate souls after unlocking her final form and ceasing growth, for the same reason that we assume Walpurgisnacht can do the same.
I think the Beds were I bid to well aimed for it to be something unconscious.
Really? Wow, that is definitely not what I thought they look like. Maybe I missed the part where their appearance is described.Yeah, but the Faas are plants. Floating salads, basically. Who'd sign up for those? XP
Word of God confirms that Walpurgisnacht was originally just a single witch, and became powerful by assimilating other witches afterward. Witches are known to eat each other, but assimilating witches the way Walpurgisnacht does seems to be a special ability of some sort.I'm actually not certain; do we have any evidence Walpurgisnacht has continued to grow in strength throughout history? Or did she possibly just form that strong to begin with? There's the magical girl shades, but those could just be based on the girls whose witches ended up creating her, and you'd think that if she started out weaker someone would have taken care of her before canon came along.
Really? Wow, that is definitely not what I thought they look like. Maybe I missed the part where their appearance is described.
I would. Vegetables are delicious.Yeah, but the Faas are plants. Floating salads, basically. Who'd sign up for those? XP