Shards of a Broken Sun [Megaten/Shugo Chara/Exalted]

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Nero is suggesting that Amu takes over sometimes when she seems overwhelmed (something Midori will support knowing the full context behind this) if she is capable, which should help at least a little bit.
I was going to comment on that edit by saying that, if you're going to offer to do that, might as well just go the whole mile and try to find Yui's Heart's Egg.

Then Yui will be able to take care of herself without needing periodic Mind Control maintenance from anyone.
 
OOC it is still a open question whether said Egg exists, and whether if it existed bringing it back is even relevant to the type of backlash small-Yui got from whatever Asahina did?
So is the possibility of Amu being able to help with the upkeep. And we don't even know what exactly it is that Kana does to Yui.

Between Amu offering to perform an unknown and unspecified procedure involving Shadows and Personas and things that Amu has no knowledge of, versus offering to help via a procedure Amu has personally conducted before, which do you think is more believable?
 
Between Amu offering to perform an unknown and unspecified procedure involving Shadows and Personas and things that Amu has no knowledge of, versus offering to help via a procedure Amu has personally conducted before, which do you think is more believable?
The former, because we can learn quickly and already have dots in the required skills, and because the latter is potentially matching apples to oranges?

Though we have moved offtrack from trying to figure out what to vote for given what we know, we should probably return to that and table this discussion until it is relevant (since there is absolutely no reason why we can't offer both options and let Kana pick the one she likes more).
 
I suspect the actual best thing for smol!Yui would be to take her to the JPs, who clearly have some level of knowledge regarding mental injuries and a much wider range of resources to call on then us.
 
The former, because we can learn quickly and already have dots in the required skills, and because the latter is potentially matching apples to oranges?

Though we have moved offtrack from trying to figure out what to vote for given what we know, we should probably return to that and table this discussion until it is relevant (since there is absolutely no reason why we can't offer both options and let Kana pick the one she likes more).
We don't actually know we have the required skills. We know Kana has more dots in Mind Control than Amu and may have specialties besides.

Though realistically speaking, Amu would be offering both - to find Yui Heart's Egg in the long-term and to help look after Yui in the short-term before that can happen. They aren't mutually exclusive.

Both ideas are still "granting the Shadow's desires", however, so it won't lead to "permanent acceptance". And of course, it still uses Yui as a bargaining chip, so to speak.
 
smol!Yui would be to take her to the JPs
It would be, but sadly my inference that JPs is not part of Manticore because JPs know more about what they are doing than Manticore had many holes poked through it by the QM; and if we can't rule that possibility out passing smol!Yui to JPs could theoretically just be giving Manticore leverage on the Scavengers - and obviously Kana and Naomi is not going to agree with that if there is such a risk.

Both ideas are still "granting the Shadow's desires", however, so it won't lead to "permanent acceptance"
Yeah, although the latter isn't exactly necessary as long as things don't get so extreme we get into this situation again, since obviously people with Shadows/Personas can change normally and not suffer from such problems - there must be a qualitative difference somewhere.

Pistachio, do you mind nulling your vote while we continue to discuss?
 
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I suspect the actual best thing for smol!Yui would be to take her to the JPs, who clearly have some level of knowledge regarding mental injuries and a much wider range of resources to call on then us.
QM commented in this idea before:
I'm sure she would have used one if she knew such a thing would help. I'm not confirming that it would have, nor even that one wasn't used. I think you might be overestimating them; the room JPs put Saaya in is designed to isolate the patient from the world outside, and that helps in some cases.
Apparently, such a thing "might be overestimating them".

We know they definitely can't deal with Grade 5 Mental Abrasion. We don't know what stage Yui is at.

I am skeptical about it being Grade 1 or 2.
Pistachio, do you mind nulling your vote while we continue to discuss?
I'll update my vote so that it first tries to convince Kana to accept her desires and tell her they aren't wrong, but I'm keeping the offer of finding Yui's Heart's Egg at the end. Need to find a way to word it, would probably involve showing off her own multiple Charas.

Though I am somewhat doubtful about permanent acceptance being possible in the span of a single scene without resorting to beating her up or UMI, however.
 
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Actually.
This is a really obvious question in hindsight, but if Kana's priority was rescuing small-Yui, why exactly has her priorities suddenly shifted to killing her own Shadow at expense for the former? (Kana has no reason to believe anyone else is going to come in to help afterwards)
UMI?

Though I am somewhat doubtful about permanent acceptance being possible in the span of a single scene without resorting to beating her up or UMI, however.
I agree, in a more realistic interpretations of things you can't shore up a psychological weakness in one talk and have it stick; though you can build the foundation to have it gradually be more resistant over time.
 
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Here's what I'm thinking:

[X] Plan Friendship
-[X] Amu:
--[X] Make cake and chocolate milk, like we had with Kana the day we first met. Offer her some.
--[X] Ask for her side of the story. Listen to it.
--[X] Emphasize her self-worth, and the legitimacy of her feelings. (Not just the feelings she's suppressing, either.)
--[X] Offer to share her burdens.
-[X] Naoto and Utau:
--[X] Protection duty.

Even with the flashback we just got, we still don't know enough about the situation to get particularly concrete.

(Kinda wondering if I should specify a safety-oriented meal setup. "Pre-cut cake, spoon only - no knives. Paper plate. Milk in a cardboard carton - no glass or ceramics.")
 
[X] Plan Friendship
Sure, feel free to edit the plan if required to avoid the hassle of multiple plan versions lying around.

Something like "Hi Kana, we've been waiting for you to show up, want some cake?" as an opener might be distracting enough to confuse Kana to going for it after all.

(Though I do not want the vote to be closed anytime soon, we still have more things to hash through right now; I may still change my mind in the future)
 
Actually.
This is a really obvious question in hindsight, but if Kana's priority was rescuing small-Yui, why exactly has her priorities suddenly shifted to killing her own Shadow at expense for the former? (Kana has no reason to believe anyone else is going to come in to help afterwards)
UMI?
Because it's a Midnight Channel type place that allows / causes the Shadow split to happen.
We see this in P4 where Chie has her Shadow encounter despite being there to save Yukiko, and Yosuke when they are looking for Saki.
Getting side tracked by their own issues is why they get their Personas.

Kana likely got lost in here, had time for the Shadow process / mechanic to kick in, and then started arguing with her Shadow-self.
Upon realising what the Shadow is / represents, she started rejecting or trying to kill Shadow Kana.
Alternatively, Shadow Kana just knows Kana well enough to predict she'll try and kill her, and booked it the second she 'spawned' because she isn't willing to kill Kana. (Since the desires that make her up specifically includes not fighting/killing)

Which leads us to now. The Lighthouse trick basically speedrun skipped us to the boss fight, and got us a pre-interview with the Shadow, but the big 'you are not me' argument is proceeding as normal, just with both sides being UMI using mind readers.
Though I am somewhat doubtful about permanent acceptance being possible in the span of a single scene without resorting to beating her up or UMI, however.
I'm using Mitsuo as the baseline example here, he lost the 'goodness' in him, for lack of a better word, when he continued to reject the Shadow past the boss fight completion.

Permeant acceptance isn't needed, but if we walk away from here without her accepting the Shadows / those supressed desires, then she will lose all the bits the Shadow represents, which seems to include her desire not to kill.

I think any solution that doesn't involve her keeping that particular fetter is a bit of a non-starter, imo.

I also think within a single scene is a bit much, but the point of these sorts of things is the acceptance of the desire, not actually working on them. In P4, the "I accept you are me" bit is the first step on the road, and a commitment to working on it.
The social link usually then covers them actually working at it and finding which bits they actually want on balance, rather than the overblown super dramatic version that the Shadow portrays.

EDIT: It's also some weird mental merging process that involves unlocking a Persona. Any unrealistic speed to the resolution can probably be put down to the place they are and the Shadow Split / Persona forming process having consensual UMI effects on someone that accepts their Shadow.
 
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Hm, @Baughn is Kana counting on the coma part, or the 'wrong-think' erasure parts, or is either fine to her?
She'd probably be fine with either—um, now. But it's probably more the latter. While Shadow Kana is obviously in a privileged position, she can't read her mind; attempts at doing so give wrong results such as "Kana would never want to abandon Yui-chan".

You'll have to decide how much you trust her.
 
I should point out that I don't think we shouldn't try and also help Yui.
It's just that helping or not helping Yui doesn't (as far as I can tell) meaningfully effect the conflict between the Kana's.

Kana has a Shadow at least in part because she won't accept that she wishes she didn't have to help her.
If we go back a bit to the interlude as an example:
Yes!" Kana snapped; gripping the phone tight enough to hurt. "I was there! I helped carry her to the nurse!"

Yui had been crying! She was worried!
It's not a case of Kana not wanting to help Yui2, it's that she doesn't want it to be a responsibility placed on her (like her mother placed it on her, and her 'failure' to fix the damage).

To paraphrase: Kana's happy to carry her to the nurse and keep her company, but she wants to not be the surgeon fighting to keep her alive. Again.

As an aside, the way Shadow Kana phrases how she joined the Scavengers is telling here:
"I made everything worse. And mom was going to throw her away. Even though half of her was Yui. ...that's when Naomi got to me."
Naomi 'got to her'.

Shadow Kana probably doesn't see joining the Scavengers as a positive, she's sees it as something she was talked / tricked into in a moment of desperation. Considering how much Kana's identity is focused around being part of the Scavengers and her role in the group. (Her usefulness to the group), this is likely the bigger part of the Shadow's make up, IMO. The rejection of being a Scavenger.

Before she joined (The timespan from the end of interlude to the break out) she wasn't happy, but she was with her mother at least, who genuinely did seem to love her.

She wasn't an experiment like the others and her mother was willing to format a 'test subject' to try and copy Yui1's mind across, so Kana was likely much better treated than any of the other Scavengers, and that separation seems like it left a mark.

I'd wager quite a bit on a guess that Kana was closer to a sympathic scientist than a fellow inmate, in Manticores structure.
 
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I'd wager quite a bit on a guess that Kana was closer to a sympathic scientist than a fellow inmate, in Manticores structure.
I don't want to kill people like Riku anymore
Baughn, was this person a guard, test subject, scientist or some other position?

You'll have to decide how much you trust her.
Right, better recalibrate closer to the middle then?
 
Alright, this is my best attempt at "convince Kana to accept herself".

Name of the plan comes from the lyrics of Shugo Chara's opening song and translates roughly along the lines to mean: "It's OK to be who you want to be, just one is boring".

...According to the song, it's typically supposed to be a Guardian Chara encouraging the user to be who they want to be, not a Shadow-Human like Amu, but I guess Amu's been around enough of them by this point to try acting as one for Kana in the moment.

[X] Plan - "Naritai Youni Nareba Ii Jan, Hitotsu Dake Ja Tsumannai"
-[X] Tell Kana that it isn't wrong to want to not to have to fight or hurt people or save them or even be a good person. Tell her it also isn't wrong wanting to fight, hurt and save people. It's fine for someone to want both at once.
--[X] Show Kana telepathically the fight you had at Nikaidou's lab long ago. Amu, as Amulet Heart with Ran, wanted nothing more than to brain Nikaidou with a heavy rod for kidnapping her Charas. But Su wanted to help him instead, to heal and save him despite his sins. Despite differing mindsets, neither parts of Amu were "wrong".
--[X] Chara-change in turn with Ran and Su, displaying the proof that it is fine for someone to want to be 2 or even 3 or more different things at once: after all, you and Utau live it every day. Just being one is boring.
--[X] Remind Kana you didn't give up on Utau, despite everything she did, and you won't give up on Kana either. So if Kana doesn't want to give up on her mother too despite everything, that's also fine. Whatever she decides, you'll help her.
-[X] Inform Kana there may be a way to heal Yui, if she wants to try, but it will require Kana's willing help.
--[X] Show Kana how you retrieved your own fragments from the Road of Stars - Ran, Miki and Su - and offer to either lend her Dia's assistance or put her in touch with Tsukasa, who seems to have his own way of getting there, to try the same thing.
--[X] Offer to help take care of Yui in the meantime, regardless of whether she wants to try.
 
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Baughn, was this person a guard, test subject, scientist or some other position?
Security guard. Riku was there to keep roving bands of (perfectly ordinary) children from deciding that the office building next to the park is a fun place to play.

So, y'know, someone with absolutely zero insight into the dark side of Manticore. There's a tendency to think that everyone involved with an 'evil organization' is themselves evil, but most people are just looking for a paycheck. For something like what Manticore is doing, the fewer people who know everything, the better.

You especially wouldn't want someone who isn't themselves doing it to be involved with its dark side, since they become a potential whistleblower. A surgeon who has already killed children is 'safe'; they can't turn on Manticore, as they'd be locked away forever if the reality comes out.
 
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Security guard. Riku was there to keep roving bands of (perfectly ordinary) children from deciding that the office building next to the park is a fun place to play.

So, y'know, someone with absolutely zero insight into the dark side of Manticore. There's a tendency to think that everyone involved with an 'evil organization' is themselves evil, but most people are just looking for a paycheck. For something like what Manticore is doing, the fewer people who know everything, the better.

You especially wouldn't want someone who isn't themselves doing it to be involved with its dark side, since they become a potential whistleblower. A surgeon who has already killed children is 'safe'; they can't turn on Manticore, as they'd be locked away forever if the reality comes out.
Just to clarify, is this the guy who went to get Kana from the station, or someone else?
 
You especially wouldn't want someone who isn't themselves doing it to be involved with its dark side, since they become a potential whistleblower. A surgeon who has already killed children is 'safe'; they can't turn on Manticore, as they'd be locked away forever if the reality comes out.
Though this is why initiation rituals and "blooding" are a thing. Get that previously-clean surgeon to try an "experimental procedure" on promise of fame and recognition that ends up killing a child and he's liable to end up feeling guilty enough to be persuaded that he's already in too deep to back out. (....Which come to think of it, might be what both Asahi and Naomi ended up doing to Kana.)

That said, I was expecting most of the armed men were mercenaries or similar who just follow their orders and only the commanding officers have any clue of the bigger picture. I was suspecting mercenaries/private military more likely than official troops, due to the fact they had snipers willing to shoot children. Feel like most regular Japanese military troops would have balked at those orders, so if it was legitimate military, they were black-ops units already in deep. Figured it was more likely to be hired guns with no morals, who would take money to shoot a child no questions asked.

That said, speaking of named side characters....

That "Yuna" who Asahi lied about Yui being at the house of - her last name wouldn't happen to be "Yuki", would it?
Just to clarify, is this the guy who went to get Kana from the station, or someone else?
Probably someone else, since according to the driver his usual job involved this:
"Yeah," the man replied after a second or so; driving with a careless ease that spoke of a long experience behind the wheel. "I'm an assistant to one of the section heads. Doing odd jobs, mostly. Stocking the coffee machine. Filing papers. That sort of thing." He hesitated slightly, glancing at her in the mirror. "Fetching lost kittens, on occasion."
So, likely not a security guard.

....Though then again, it doesn't mean he didn't also meet the same fate.
 
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Just to clarify, is this the guy who went to get Kana from the station, or someone else?
Someone else. He isn't, um, important...

Shadow-Kana plucked out a random name. I'm sorry to say that this isn't some unique tragedy that will inevitably come up later.

That "Yuna" who Asahi lied about Yui being at the house of - her last name wouldn't happen to be "Yuki", would it?
That would hit too close to home. I couldn't borrow her character without making you think I borrowed the (already rather similar) cosmology. :p
 
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It would be, but sadly my inference that JPs is not part of Manticore because JPs know more about what they are doing than Manticore had many holes poked through it by the QM;
QM commented in this idea before:
1) I think we have other indications that the JPs are not secretly backing Manticore 2) the relevant comparison is between us and the JPs, not between the JPs and Manticore 3) our standard for "success" is to keep smol!Yui from being killed by her Shadow, whereas Asahi was probably only interested in the survival of big!Yui - note that Kana seems to have managed this alone, it doesn't seem to be all that hard, comparatively speaking 4) I actually think these experiments (and especially the failures) are an indication that Manticore doesn't really understand what they're doing
 
3) our standard for "success" is to keep smol!Yui from being killed by her Shadow, whereas Asahi was probably only interested in the survival of big!Yui - note that Kana seems to have managed this alone, it doesn't seem to be all that hard, comparatively speaking
Is she still being killed by her Shadow? We still don't know what Kana actually does to Yui when she sleeps, I got the impression Yui's Shadow trying to kill her was a one-off event, not necessarily what happens every time Small Yui goes to sleep.

Still not entirely sure on what Small Yui even really is, besides containing half of Big Yui somehow. An actual kid who got lobotomized? Some artificial Shadow copied from Big Yui using magic?

EDIT: OK, nevermind, the reduced summary clarified it - they tried to implant bits of Big Yui into another kid and ended up lobotomizing her, resulting in Small Yui.
 
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1) I think we have other indications that the JPs are not secretly backing Manticore
Like? It's not (just) us questers you need to convince, it's Kana and "It's not paranoia if they are really out to get you" Naomi here.

2) the relevant comparison is between us and the JPs, not between the JPs and Manticore
I was using "JPs are competent, Manticore aren't" as a basis for that conclusion (because if they were linked they would have shared), and Baughn pointed out the apparent difference might not be true, so...



Since we technically don't know what Kana is actually going to do...

[X] Plan Tricologe
-[X] Amu:
--[X] Make cake and chocolate milk, like we had with Kana the day we first met. Offer her some.
--[X] Ask for her side of the story. Listen to it.
--[X] Emphasize her self-worth, and the legitimacy of her feelings. (Not just the feelings she's suppressing, either.)
--[X] Tell Kana that it isn't wrong to want to not to have to fight or hurt people or save them or even be a good person. Tell her it also isn't wrong wanting to fight, hurt and save people. It's fine for someone to want both at once.
---[X] Show Kana telepathically the fight you had at Nikaidou's lab long ago. Amu, as Amulet Heart with Ran, wanted nothing more than to brain Nikaidou with a heavy rod for kidnapping her Charas. But Su wanted to help him instead, to heal and save him despite his sins. Despite differing mindsets, neither parts of Amu were "wrong".
--[X] Chara-change in turn with Ran and Su, displaying the proof that it is fine for someone to want to be 2 or even 3 or more different things at once: After all, you and Utau live it every day, and surely both of us are fine regardless?
--[X] Remind Kana you didn't give up on Utau, despite everything she did, and you won't give up on Kana either. So if Kana doesn't want to give up on her mother too despite everything, that's also fine. Whatever she decides, you'll help her; we don't mind talking to Naomi on your behalf if necessary.
--[X] Offer to help take care of Yui in the future if Kana would like to share some of her worries and troubles.
--[X] Inform Kana there may be a way to heal Yui, if she wants to try, but it will require Kana's willing help.
---[X] Show Kana how you retrieved your own fragments from the Road of Stars - Ran, Miki and Su - and offer to either lend her Dia's assistance or put her in touch with Tsukasa, who seems to have his own way of getting there, to try the same thing.

Pistachio's plan was missing a way to convert a fight into a conversation, and Quine's plan doesn't take advantage of Utau narratively being good with words, so I decided to merge the two and slightly modify? (Plan name is also a song title that may be relevant)

Might need to apply a calcinator to it though, it's a very long plan as-is.

Edit: Still long, but slightly shorter now
 
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And that may just be enough to convince Kana, who also lacks knowledge about Charas, to believe in the possibility too and accept that particular desire from her Shadow.
The former, because we can learn quickly and already have dots in the required skills, and because the latter is potentially matching apples to oranges?
Interestingly enough the idea of using chara might indeed be a pathway that could help. In the story post it was noted that Yui was just missing parts and thus in implication wasn't complete enough to work anymore. Chara meanwhile are entities that have in principle enough working parts, see for instance Miki managing to transition to an increasingly real girl. So if one could recover a chara of some kind and then merge them with help of the locket, perhaps with some help from the key as well for precision editing... Then it certainly in theory would grant a pathway to fixing a broken person.

Though it is worth noting in this that if you're filling in with chara elements... the person will probably never be completely the same as before. They are after all taking on aspects of potential people they could become, rather then who they became. Still, a person they could become is at least in range of the person itself, rather then merging elements from completely different minds.

They are certainly some things one could place some question marks on though, like if early chara really do hold all the elements a person needs to live. If they don't you'd need some luck that it overlaps with parts you need... though one could try for more chara variants I guess in such a case.

Another thing to mention on this is that you might need to travel a bit down mind heal, dream walking and possibly precog... in case that helps boosts Dia up more. (Dream walking is due to potentially needing to make spiritual matter to fill in gaps, rather then just steal it from others)


I guess if one was very radical one could also try to see how far one could go with retrocog. As in... could you find parts of a persons mind map if you could but see the past well enough. Or if one could study how each piece of damage occurred, could one traverse the reverse path with sufficient mind heal skill.
I was using "JPs are competent, Manticore aren't" as a basis for that conclusion (because if they were linked they would have shared), and Baughn pointed out the apparent difference might not be true, so...
Assuming JP is anything like the one from the original series, then I'd say child experimentation excludes them as being someone who'd work with Manticore. After all, just after the apocalypse happened even parts of their top leadership still balked at the idea of recruiting powerful teenagers to their fighting force for reasons like that it would be dangerous to them. Of course they also weren't part of the org in the first place, etc. So there are more reasons, but still, they were trying to protect them.

So if those people are still the same, it's hard to see how they could get along with how Manticore operates. And thus in extension it's kind of hard to see how JP could get along with Manticore. Heck, I don't think Hotsuin would necessarily get along with them either then, for some what other reasons then, but he never really took away peoples ability to choose. And there this Hotsuin if anything seems some what nicer then original Hotsuin, it seems even more dubious to me.


Over all, can Manticore and JP even be friends with each other with these kinds of differences?
 
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