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Reverse Engineering For Fun and Profit (Planetary Annihilation/Multicross SI)

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Logos01 said:
The whole reason it was called a Stand-Alone Complex was that the case was nothing but a series of copycats without an actual original. People seem not to grasp that even in today's world of memes.

Also @TikiTau -- you've got the voices of the GitS characters spot-on in my book. Damn fine work.
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Right. Which is where I was trying to go with it, but I think I was still groggy from the sleeping pills I took last night.

Still, the point that "leaving this data out in the open is dangerous, look what happened last time" stands, i think?
Also, agreed, they sounded right to me too.
 
TikiTau said:
They're tough enough to survive into melee range with my killbots, and Sir Asimov is an impartial, if dangerous, bastard.
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You mean Sir Newton. Asimov was a sci-fi author not a physicist. Asimov was also not a knight.

TikiTau said:
Fudge and Brownies. I knew there was another shoe in the air.
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More than one, given he was waiting to meet the Nerazim to deal with the Cerebrates, but then forgot to mention them to anyone.

TikiTau said:
Captain Kem'Xafal nas Striker
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Typo - that nas should be a vas.

TikiTau said:
I really needed to order White to defrag some of the intelligences in the Legion, honestly. What sort of report summary is "Sorry, Boss, we Accidentally a Solar System", anyways?!
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All star systems are Solar Systems the same way all cities are New York - they're not. The star system Earth is in is the Solar System because it's the star system containing the star named Sol. Other star systems do not contain Sol.

TikiTau said:
Aramaki clicked the control again, bringing up the map. "It's a bit weak, but he's the only lead we have right now on this case. Saito, Boma. I want you to follow up on where our Mr. Erickson has been.
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Let me guess - Agent Black's curse strikes again? :o
 
Gindjurra said:
You mean Sir Newton. Asimov was a sci-fi author not a physicist. Asimov was also not a knight.



More than one, given he was waiting to meet the Nerazim to deal with the Cerebrates, but then forgot to mention them to anyone.



Typo - that nas should be a vas.



All star systems are Solar Systems the same way all cities are New York - they're not. The star system Earth is in is the Solar System because it's the star system containing the star named Sol. Other star systems do not contain Sol.



Let me guess - Agent Black's curse strikes again? :o
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While it's nice to check story for grammar mistakes - there's not enough beta readers in the world - this story and thread has been dead for quite some time.
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I'm real sad now cause I thought this was a new fic (or an old one what's had an update) so I binge-read it, but now I see I was deceived!
 
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Doccer said:
You know with openings like this I have no choice. I...must...not...


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You've bollixed up the images. Here's what you've currently got:
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[SPOILER][img]URL unfurl="true"]https://images.app.goo.gl/RMnz4ZiJgjDXNHRVA[/URL][/img][/SPOILER]
You need to remove everything inside the [img tag except the image URL.
 
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Darnit! I deleted the bits that said 'url'.
Can you show me what was supposed to be deleted?

macdjord said:
You've bollixed up the images. Here's what you've currently got:
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[SPOILER][img]URL unfurl="true"]https://images.app.goo.gl/zGcU1KHnLgSfeMrQ6[/URL][/img][/SPOILER]

[SPOILER][img]URL unfurl="true"]https://images.app.goo.gl/RMnz4ZiJgjDXNHRVA[/URL][/img][/SPOILER]
You need to remove everything inside the [img tag except the image URL.
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Doccer said:
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Darnit! I deleted the bits that said 'url'.
Can you show me what was supposed to be deleted?
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No, you deleted the right bits. It looks like the problem is that Google Image Search doesn't let you hotlink images from its results page. You need to rehost those images on a site link imgur.
 
damn it Tau, it's been three years since I started reading fan fiction and this was the first one I ever read , first one I've read all the way though. I've read some that are better than this one some that are far worse.

But this fic, this fic was the first.

So for what it's worth, thank you and go stub your toe cause it's sure as hell a horrible habit to have. Damn instant gratification monkey won't even let me finish wheel of time because there's always another free fic out there.

Agh lol
 
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