Well Charles did certainly taught humility to Henry... Henry has been making half assed malformed plans with his meta knowledge. Yeah he managed to collect the void mages, they are indeed powerful tools (more like Joseph is a powerful Void mage because his signature void spells are HASTE, EARTHQUAKE and ILLUSION) but they are pointless without the national treasures.

Instead he should have tried to buy the zero fighter from Siesta family and reverse engineer the engines. Have Colbert research and modify the technology to use fire stones as fuel for the propellers (a fire stone is pretty much a hand sized nuke, so the fuel efficiency is going to be ridiculous).


Anyways others have pointed out why its in Charles best interest to not kill Henry or Raven, so the fight was unlikely to ever go there because Charles is a competent Gary stu.
 
I feel the need to say that Charles not killing Henry is , like most of the updates, a choice based on narrative rather than logic or plot relevance.

This story as a whole is one made to make you feel emotions. Any given event is thus not really or even necessarily logical or smart. Henry could have guilted Charles, Joseph could have without warning took the fall, Joseph could have stop this somehow by being cute.

However in any case, the events that would have occured would be one meant to be satisfying to read rather than something plot reliant.
 
To everyone saying he had a change of heart and decided not to maim/murder either of them after all and that's why they both survived, the dude is not an idiot.

TLDR: I don't think it was compassion that stayed the Duke d'Orleans hand.
...I'm gonna be real clear here: Square mages are not a dime a dozen. Charles being a Square mage is pretty frigging important. Much like Karin the Heavy Wind, Charles can pretty much do as he pleases and unless the queen-to-be wants to watch her army get destroyed she really doesn't have much recourse that won't ruin her as well. The fact that most of the nobility would immediately side with Charles and he could take Isabella hostage with trivial ease certainly wouldn't help.

'King' or 'Queen' are nice words, but throughout history there have been many political situations where they don't mean jack because the council or regent or church or whoever has the real power. If Joseph did die right now, from choking on a chicken bone or a 'hunting accident' or a giant icicle, who do you THINK would be Regent? Charles. You can bet your ass it would be Charles. And if Isabella proved to be a problem for the future, she wouldn't have a future.

You're talking about Henry and Isabella and Joseph intimidating Charles. They don't intimidate him, and he just got done proving that. The lesson that Charles intended to serve, from the start, was not to fuck with him or his family. Henry may have delusions that his kidnapping the daughter-in-exile and making her family think she was dead was a noble thing, but it was actually pretty shitty from a lot of POVs. Josette wasn't a slave working in a whorehouse, she was just living in a convent with nuns to protect her from Joseph and political schemers just like Henry. Not the worst of futures, whatever Henry might say. Henry, upon discovering her, shortly afterward made her parents think she'd been eaten by a goddamn minotaur.

Frankly, civil war is ugly, but I am not sure I could have stopped myself from killing him if I were Charles. Yes, Josette would have hated him for a while, but she honestly hasn't spent more than a few hours with Henry, and the Joseph/Henry/Isabella trio is an ugly prospect on a future throne from what Charles has seen of them.

Don't let narrative bias and fluff blind you to the fact other people in the setting see Henry and his family very differently from the sugarbowl that we are reading.
 
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I think we can all agree that this whole situation is a clusterfuck of good intentions gone wrong.

So everyone chill out, Charles comes off as quite cold in the past few chapters but we really don't know what he's thinking or what his intentions were.
 
Chapter Ninety-One

The shores of the Ragdorian lake were quiet. The lake itself did not have many waves, and the few it had crashed against the shore silently. The silence between the two involved parties was deafening. My breast pocket had, as a good luck charm, Isabella's handkerchief within. By my side, Raven stood patiently, eyes beady and ready.

"Please, stop at first blood," Isabella managed to yell out from the sides, standing on the back of a dragon that the most trustworthy of knights of her retinue rode. Her hands tensed around a handkerchief that she was to let go to signal the countdown. She was twisting it with her fingers, her nervousness clear. "Beneath the Founder's gaze-in the name of the gods, let this duel be just, and the victor decided by the will of the gods-" she choked slightly on her next words, "may whoever wins be proved righteous, and whoever loses make peace with the gods."

She then extended the piece of cloth from her gloved hand, and let it go. As the dragon and the knights flew away to a safe distance, the handkerchief fluttered in the air for a bit, and then, softly, landed on the ground after what felt like ages, but had been perhaps a minute or less. This gave the time for both parties

Whips of water rushed forth from the tip of Charles' wand with such strength that they ruptured the ground upon their passages, the sound barrier shattering with sonic booms near instantaneously as shards of rock swiftly became deadly shrapnel within the nearby proximity, engulfed by the water whips themselves and thrust forward at blinding speeds.

Raven took flight hastily while a shield of iron emerged thick and tall in front of us, only for it to be cut to shreds within mere seconds, the shrapnel drilling holes into it with such a ferocity that it was clear that First Blood was a synonym for Maiming Wound or I am going to hurt you so badly you wish this duel was to the death.

I wasn't there though, having taken the wise way of disappearing below ground. If the enemy can't see you, he can't skewer you now, can he? Raven's altitude increased sharply, my commands to him pretty clear.

I couldn't dally down beneath the ground though, since my honor depended on it.

Also, the ground itself shook as the next chant of Charles shattered the spot I had been before, large pillars of stone and rock bursting forth and bringing my hiding spot into the light of the day. Unfortunately for him, I had finished my own chant, and as a shield of wind surrounded my frame, the incoming javelins of ice shattered against it, my teeth gritted as I held the shield up.

Any moment now, Raven.

Any moment now would be nice.

From the very heavens, descend did the Raven with talons sharp. Although, rather than slice with the sharpness of his claws, first it opened them to release the falling swords conjured prior to the duel, and left for him to use within it. This was kind of a grey area in the dueling code, but it wasn't said anywhere that one couldn't do it. The victor would decide on the fairness of such a method, since at the present, I was trying my hardest to hold on to my wind shield.

The blades fell rapidly in the direction of the Duke, but this didn't make the Duke stop his chanting. He simply moved away, using his swordwand to deflect the incoming blades with a grace that had me stare in wonder for a brief second. How could a man do something like that? Was he perhaps on drugs? Did he have superhuman reflexes? Was this what facing a Gary Stu was like? It did make him alter his target to Raven, who kept swooping down towards him.

In that instant, I ran forward closing the distance.

Two against one, hardly fair, but truly guaranteed to-

Imagine a tsunami. Imagine a tsunami of ice. Imagine a tsunami of ice that leaves the tip of a wand and increases to unforeseen heights and widths, with the edges sharp, spikes of ice emerging from the side that is coming at swift speed against you. Imagine that you can feel it coming, that you can feel the cold, frozen winds come for your own life-if this was a First Blood meant to skewer and hurt, then I dreaded thinking about what he'd do to people he wanted to actually kill. It was a First Blood that would easily mean months of rehabilitation if it had hit head-on, and I wasn't looking forward to any of that.

"Burning flames!" I bellowed as twisting fires left the tip of my wand, impacting against the incoming spikes long enough to melt them from sharp-beyond-believe to bluntness, which slammed yet against my frame, taking away my breath as I found myself thrown on the ground once more amidst the screams from the sides.

So this was the power of Square magic. Truly, a terrifying power.

What sort of deal with the devil did I need to sign in order to get my hands on it? No, seriously-this was my fault, wasn't it? I had grown lazy, complacent-faced against such a thing, with such a difference in power unmistakable-I was being humbled, or perhaps, tortured into humility.

Raven's cawing caught my attention, the agonizing sound wrenching something in my heart as my eyes snapped to where I had last seen in. Sharp javelins of ice had buried deep into his frame, blood spurting out of the wounds as the ice began to melt. Charles hadn't wasted time, and since Raven had flown away as fast as possible, he hadn't been able to dodge the incoming projectiles. I rushed in his direction, "No, no, no-wait!" I came to an abrupt halt by my familiar's side, his breathing hard and gasping as his feathers were now slick with blood. "Healing water-"

"Furious winds," came the voice of Charles, utterly emotionless, utterly uncaring. Twisting tornadoes lashed out in our direction, and as I turned to face them and bring up an iron shield, the ice kept melting, and thus the blood kept pouring out. The Duke's voice was monotone, so used to dueling in the name of his brother, had he perhaps grown used and callous to the pleads of mercy of his opponents? I looked at the blade of my swordwand, and grabbed it with my left hand, slicing my palm alongside its edge.

"See here! First blood-you've won!"

The twisting tornadoes stopped briefly, and the Duke stared, his face hard. "As the offended party...I am not satisfied yet."

His wand came up once more, and just as he restarted his chanting, I sharply turned to start my own. Even if it wasn't long enough, if I could at least stop the bleeding-

"Henry-" Raven cawed, coughing even as his wings flapped. "Henry-fly away-"

"Healing waters that are born of the Founder's mercy, the kindness extended by the gentle powers of the elements of Water are unquestionable-I shall nurture and help you along the way-let there not be wound that cannot heal with compassion and faith, let there not be-" as I chanted furiously, the blood stopped flowing out, the wounds began to close-it was working, if only it could work faster.

A billowing tempest of ice, a snowstorm by all means, no-a skewering filled with sharp, deadly edges of ice and crystal. This was Charles', whose runic name was The Ice, signature spell. A blizzard of unparalleled dimensions, a snowstorm that was meant to rip and shred with merciless precision, who spoke of ice age cold winters and devastating, frozen storms-and as it came towards me, towards us, towards Raven's wounded body and my pitiful frame, I heard it.

I heard the wind's hollowing screams and the agony it felt.

"Be at peace, be calm," I whispered as I changed my chant, turning my wand from Raven's prone body to the incoming deadly blizzard, "Winds that rupture and bellow and scream, rest your weary selves. Peace be upon you-" the ice began to freeze my fingers, sharp edges slicing a hundred cuts on my extended arm, "And in the name of the Founder, tranquil breezes-take their place!" I roared over the blizzard itself, over the ice and the snow that suffocated my breathing, that clutched my throat.

The blizzard's winds stopped screaming as the ice fell uselessly on the ground like sharp razors and knives, thumping as they hit the dirt one after the other. I snorted, and compacted snow and ice left my nostrils, caked in the blood of the cut skin. There was blood on the ground, but I didn't hurt, because ice had dulled the nerves. No, it wasn't that it didn't hurt, it was that it burned, it burned all over. Thus, because it burned, the sensation of burning took precedence over everything else.

Raven's breathing was ragged and short, but he'd live if attended to. He had been wounded, but not that deeply, not that much. The wounds had already closed, the ice had melted off his frame. He was resting now, his eyes closed.

By the time I stood back up on my feet, a water whip had reached ultrasonic speed and came cruising for my swordwand, shattering it in a thousand bits, driving deep gouges in my right hand -the product of the very handle of the swordwand exploding in my grip from the concussive force of the blast. I held back the screams even as my hand burned and bled, the blood now pouring down freely from the deep cut. I looked at the Duke D'Orleans. He wasn't showing any emotions, like a proper noble during a duel should. This-it was funny in hindsight. I really should have chosen a champion for this, right?

He didn't really want to kill me, did he?

I should have chosen someone else.

Then why hadn't I? There had to be a limit to my foolishness. Perhaps it was contagious?

I could feel the blood trickle down my hand, fall on the ground, even as I-even as I thought the Duke wouldn't aim to kill me...even as I thought that...I had misjudged the man's character. Of course he would kill me. Was it his wife who actually hid Josette? Not him? And if so-did she hide her...from him as well? Behind those smiles-was there a heartless foe? Had I been right? Was he going to silence me because of my remarks about buying retainers and-and...everything else?

The next blow would probably be for my neck. Now I stood there, defeated and lacking a wand. If he'd start chanting once more, then it would make his intentions clear.

I really should have brought a spare wand. Ah...I felt something wet lick my bleeding hand. It was Raven's tongue, perhaps he was trying to console me in these last moments of ours? Well-what do you say in times like these?

"Sorry," I whispered as I heard the Duke D'Orleans chant once more. "I shouldn't have dragged you down with me, my friend."

"For those...we cherish," Raven croaked, "We die...in glory."

The chant finished, and the noise of another whip surpassing the speed of sound echoed. I saw it come, I saw it come faster than the blinking of my eyes. I saw it come, and stared with pure fright as the black of Raven's feathers moved to protect me with his whole frame, his wings clutching me in his last embrace. I closed my eyes. I closed my eyes and I screamed.

And then I heard it crash against the ground.

"Now, I am satisfied," Charles said sharply, sheathing his swordwand with a sordid click.

I gasped for air as I fell down on my knees, all strength leaving my body as relief washed over my features.

I was alive.

I was alive and all was well.

I was alive, all was well, and no one had died.

I chuckled at first, and then I began to laugh even as I tightly held on to Raven's body and hugged him for all of his worth.

"We're alive!" I cried out against Raven's plumage. "We're alive!"

"Alive!" Raven yelled back with a joyful cry of his own. "Alive! I love you! I love you!"

"I shall be going back first," and with those words said, the Duke D'Orleans soared in the air with a simple spell, rushing back to the mansion while, at the same time, a flock of knights came in the opposite direction of him, Isabella being at the lead of them.

That was how she found me.

Laughing vicariously with Raven.

She didn't look pleased of my state, but I couldn't have cared less.

She definitely wasn't pleased when I engulfed her in a hug that was a mixture of sweat, blood and grime and black feathers, which stained her dress irremediably, as she yelled at me even amidst my arms and Raven's wings.

I couldn't care less.

Because I was still alive.

Still alive.

I kinda feel you lost a little too easily there. Was expecting more underhanded tricks and last minute dodging and you ultimately being defeated because you wore yourself out.

Oh well, hopefully, this inspires you to train much more fastidiously. Maybe even achieve Square rank.
 
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Time to develop a high powered elemental caster rifle to remove Charles as a threat if the requirement should ever become necessary.
 
If one can summon a familiar then can one summon an arcane artifact of power from beyond the aether to wield in your quest to unite the world under your golden throne of skulls and bones?
 
One of the reasons Charles is pissed is that it cost him undue heartache. He lost some face, and the crown as well, sort of.

Prince Charles was a swell guy who wanted to have his claim to the throne (because he'll certainly be a better king than Joseph, that's for sure. His mum said so too!). And he did not want his daughter killed after his wife's plea. So he took the middle path by disappearing Josette. Henry threw a wrench into all that by finding her.

But despite the drama, not a single hair on Josette's head was harmed. The incident doesn't warrant a life in turn, and Charles knows this. Henry's also too important to kill due to various reasons and will warrant retribution in the form of the Heavy Wind leaving down army-shaped bloody smears.

The duel was probably a way for Charles to assess Henry too; I assume he didn't fail too badly in both terms of character and skill. There's the fact that he chose not to name a champion to fight for him and faced the consequences himself. He cares for his familiar enough not to callously sacrifice it- and Henry could actually stop that blizzard at the end with his own wind magic. Nullifying Charles' signature spell was no mean feat though he could barely stand afterwards.

When? I thought he was still Line.
The same chapter he got married. Quite a while ago, I think.
 
There's not much he could do tbh. Henry was outmatched in every respect, considering it was a duel of honor, underhanded tricks would have just dug his grave deeper. Also, how does one dodge a blizzard?

By being really, really, fast. Henry has a Wind specialization after all and if he was able to move quickly enough the Duke wouldn't have really been able to hurt him. Up until Henry ran out of steam.

As for Under-handed tactics, well, unconventional tactics probably would be a better descriptor for what I had in mind.

Henry might really want to work on casting without incantations though. That, or alternative chants that he can say really quickly under his breath. It might be heresy, but he should be fine so long as no one else finds out.

Hey Shade, is Henry ever going to work on learning Lightning spells? I kinda remember Wardes using a Lightning spell that let him clone himself and it seems like Henry would find that invaluable.
 
This is really the best solution. Regardless of what Charles intended, his actions hurt Josette deeply. Regardless of what Henry intended, his actions hurts Charles and his wife and daughter deeply. Even if Charles killed Henry it would not have helped. Both Charles and Henry will probably be upfront with each other from now on. They might hate each other but this in the dark secret shit; all it did was hurt everybody.

Both Charles and Henry got a lesson in humility here. Henry in that his actions could have resulted in complete disaster for everyone because he thought himself a spy and Charles in that for all of his power he can't fix anything with it.
 
This is really the best solution. Regardless of what Charles intended, his actions hurt Josette deeply. Regardless of what Henry intended, his actions hurts Charles and his wife and daughter deeply. Even if Charles killed Henry it would not have helped. Both Charles and Henry will probably be upfront with each other from now on. They might hate each other but this in the dark secret shit; all it did was hurt everybody.

Both Charles and Henry got a lesson in humility here. Henry in that his actions could have resulted in complete disaster for everyone because he thought himself a spy and Charles in that for all of his power he can't fix anything with it.
Bullshit. While Charles lost everything he worked for and is living in exile out of shame, Henry has benefitted handsomely from his actions. In exchange for a painful but brief duel, he has guaranteed himself the crown of Gallia in a few years and was able to build up his own personal army.
 
That will motivate him to train a bit more now.
Kind of sad all that tension kinda went nowhere. I was expecting some serious injuries, Raven's death or something like that.
He's known for months that taking Josette would likely result in (possibly) lethal retaliation from Charles, and yet he couldn't be bothered to train more. I don't think Henry has it in him.
 
"Beneath the Founder's gaze-in the name of the gods, let this duel be just, and the victor decided by the will of the gods-" she choked slightly on her next words, "may whoever wins be proved righteous, and whoever loses make peace with the gods."
Oh yeah, btw: Isn't the Church of Brimir a Monotheist religion? Just thought that Isabella's word choice was strange.
 
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Bullshit. While Charles lost everything he worked for and is living in exile out of shame, Henry has benefitted handsomely from his actions. In exchange for a painful but brief duel, he has guaranteed himself the crown of Gallia in a few years and was able to build up his own personal army.

I'm sorry but can you please explain which part of my post your calling bullshit on? Not being sarcastic here, I am honestly confused. I know you make a good point in regards to what they both lost and gained but I think you are calling bullshit on more than just that right?
 
f Joseph did die right now, from choking on a chicken bone or a 'hunting accident' or a giant icicle, who do you THINK would be Regent? Charles.
Isabella is of age already, and she does carry the heirloom. If Joseph died, she becomes queen instantly.

You're talking about Henry and Isabella and Joseph intimidating Charles. They don't intimidate him
No they don't.
What intimidates him is the fact that killing Henry would put him and his immediate family at odds with Tristain, his future liege, a large part of Galia, and whatever other shady contacts Henry had. The boy did snuff out his daughter whereabouts mere months after arriving in Galia.

And in a case of suggested home war between Isabella and Charles, he would be likely on the loosing side.
Remember that his lands are smack in between Duchies owned by Isabella [crown owned, and Brittany should Henry die], Valliers, and Guldenhorf.
Brittany was saddled with many formerly fallen nobles, and likely is home to many Petite Arme troopers.
Isabella also has the lands owned by the crown, thus in spitting distance of her palace knights.
Valliers would demand blood, and without the queens direct orders [and we have a regency there], she will have time to sally.
Guldenhorfs are a vassal, but with a large degree of independence, and lack any unpleasant blood spills with Valiers, thus can be bought to allow "volunteers" to join Vallier.

While a Vallier intervention would be technically an invasion, it would not be the case if she had permission, or outright commission as mercenaries from Isabella.

I guess, for him its that moment when he truly decides if his a kid, fighting only over his slights, or an adult, responsible for his family.
 
No, they are polytheistic. Brimir is not a god, he's their Jesus/Muhammad equivalent.

And now you know one of the problems between sects in the Church.

Some say he is the most important god, some say he is a saint and son of god... Welcome to religion, leave your common sense THERE and kill each other over silly interpretations of thousand year old "events".
 
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