Awwwwww it's over. :(

Great story. I have stayed up till dawn waiting for this to update before. :)

Wonder if those students at the end are related. The professor too. Wonder if Henry Jr became the player like mommy wanted.
 
Congratulations for ypur work Shade, that was the best Familiar of Zero fanfic I've ever read and it was impressive beyond words.
 
Happy/sad it ended. It was a great run. Congratulation on keeping that insane chapter output. 172 chapters + the omakes and the epilogue in a little more than 2 months. That's really impressive. And the chapters where from 1200 to 3000 words.

So, thanks for writing this, as always, can't wait for the next story.

Edit: 2 not 3 months
 
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I like the ending. The thing about adventures is that they end. Everyone eventually tires, wants to rest their feet. Henry's story ended once the elves came to the table. The story after that was a fluff filled Family Rom/Com called The Familiar's Adventures featuring a series of ridiculous comedic events that happen to the Valliere/Gallaia family.

Maybe you will come back for that story, with tons of laughs that eventually fade into content passing and bitter tears as the character we know and love age and then pass on.

EDIT: You know what? I will gift you something as thanks for this great story. Expect it later tonight!
 
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— So, what can be better, than new chapter of ShadeNight's fic?
— Thirty three chapters of it!
— Sounds about right.
 
@shadenight123 Unfortunate that it had to end so quickly but not unexpected, and at least it came to an-if not the greatest-conclusion. Still a joy to read though.

Also if you ever get your muse back for this I for one would enjoy reading about The Adventures of JoJo and Anne: Demons of the Wandering World.
 
Thanks for the tale, Shade. It was a fun ride while it lasted, and considering the state of the LNs and the death of the author it's likely best to end without a specific ending for how, exactly, you solved the spirit pacifying and such.
 
Anticlimax, the one hundred and seventy two chapter Epic.

Your writing speed is INSANE. I am unable to properly nitpickcritique your style because I don't know how you write this much and can't even begin to understand your creative process. Can you give us a little overview on how you plan out your stories?
 
*claps* Ahhh, job well done Shade. It has, as always, been a joy to have read your story. I'm especially grateful that you didnt try to prolong this or place in hiatus trying to prolong this. Better to see it finished than be left floundering *glances at Hope Bearer*

ANYWAY, you picking up the Materia one?
 
Happy/sad it ended. It was a great run. Congratulation on keeping that insane chapter output. 172 chapters + the omakes and the epilogue in a little more than 3 months. That's really impressive. And the chapters where from 1200 to 3000 words.

So, thanks for writing this, as always, can't wait for the next story.

The story began the 25th of July.

It is now the 28th of September.

Two months and three days, not three months.

U_U Let us be precise on this, shall we?

*Chuckles*
 
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