Are the walls going to be a mix of the Theodosian Wall and the Great Wall of China? Because if so then it would be almost impossible to breach
 
Are the walls going to be a mix of the Theodosian Wall and the Great Wall of China? Because if so then it would be almost impossible to breach

Exsept for these things called cannon. I would hope for her and the Dwarfs to introduce the slightly slanted uniform walls of later periods. Bonus points if key areas have starforts built into the big wall.

Eddit: Bonus ducks if they are controlled collapse walls.
 
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nice chapters thx for writing it
interesting progress being made with the war and winning it good to see the slayers having fun ^^
nice going with the spy master and having more female's in charge.
will be fun to see the legends grow with the building of the wall aka every player placing units on to ambush raiders in that place ^^.

nice meeting her first dragon to bad the head to removed would have made a nice piece above there throne
 
Yep, this is totally going to happen. If given enough time, they might actually manage to take over all the way down to the marshes of madness

I just realized how utterly broken Mordred's Aegis is. The thing provides protection at least as tough as leather covering the WHOLE body.
No mosquito bites. No ticks. Therefore the most frequent vectors for disease are neutralized within it.
 
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Will more Dragons show up? For a Grudge Match?
There might be a crazy or two wanting to just because, but, well... the SANE dragons will probably just go "One punch? While in human form and pregnant? Erm. Okay. Dragon by duel in her favour. Close enough. I'm not going to contest it."

However, there might be a few grumpy dragons willing and able to knock around anyone who brings it up. Because they are annoyed, and don't dare doing anything with it. Which annoys them more.
 
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I just realized how utterly broken Mordred's Aegis is. The thing provides protection at least as tough as leather covering the WHOLE body.
No mosquito bites. No ticks. Therefore the most frequent vectors for disease are neutralized within it.
only one they have to worry about are the rats, and bad food and water (Which is mostly caused by rats.) and Mordred isn't stupid enough to let people kill off their cats in superstition.
She is also liable to build baths, and implement basic hygiene.

That said, the Aegis only covers the cities, towns, and a couple of the larger outposts. Sadly, that means the fields, and the like are not covered.
 
only one they have to worry about are the rats, and bad food and water (Which is mostly caused by rats.) and Mordred isn't stupid enough to let people kill off their cats in superstition.
She is also liable to build baths, and implement basic hygiene.
In Warhammer Fantasy it isn't hard to get people to connect rats with "disease" and "poison". Just mention Skaven, and everyone will go "Oh, of course!". Then present cats as "murdering the rat infiltrators" and being clean as something to do to be less chaoslike and less skavenlike... Or for that matter: "Have you ever seen a clean ork?" Sure, actual knowledge about how diseases work will probably just be seen as "just another way Mordred fights chaos". But that's not a bad thing. Hygiene being "a thing to keep some types of chaos away" isn't actually wrong, considering Nurgle.

The Aegis is bound to cement the Cult of Mordred as very anti-chaos, with a reputation of being effective at it too - even without noticeable collateral damage. Which is something the other sane cults - like Morr, Shallya and Rhya - probably do appreciate.
 
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only one they have to worry about are the rats, and bad food and water (Which is mostly caused by rats.) and Mordred isn't stupid enough to let people kill off their cats in superstition.
She is also liable to build baths, and implement basic hygiene.

That said, the Aegis only covers the cities, towns, and a couple of the larger outposts. Sadly, that means the fields, and the like are not covered.

Well half of the reason why rats spread disease is that they have fleas which will also happily chomp down on humans.
I thought about how even nowadays with better hygiene mosquitos and ticks spread deadly diseases and people have little they can do against that aside from poisoning everything or keeping themself always fully covered.
 
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dragon demands you to stop calling yourself a dragon or it kills your unborn child

causally punches dragon like it was a filthy casual

everyone now calls you the goddess dragon queen
 
So, a question about "Thunder Mountain" the Volcano.

How well can they work with Lava?

I mean, they work with steam.

Can the Dwarves mine in the volcanic area & use it as a forge?

Remind me, what was the Iron Rock area on the map called?
 
Hmm, for Mordred's thoughts on wiping out the Lahmian Vampires... I can't help but hope she'll hold off on that for a century or so. Heh, the book that got me into Warhammer Fantasy was "The Vampire Genevieve", its MC was always so engaging for me. /sigh Unfortunately I hardly ever get to see her in fanfiction. While cursed, she did her best to maintain her morals. So I'm a bit curious as to how Mordred would react to meeting some of the other creatures out there who aren't from the "good" races, but end up being better than many members of said race.

As for Mordred's new "Stream of Power", yeah, she gonna be known as the Holy Storm Dragon, isn't she? Hah! She's gonna have to babysit her country for the rest of time now! Because I've got this niggling suspicion that she isn't the kind of person who could just sit back and ignore the prayers of people begging her to save them. Or at least she couldn't anymore. She may have been able to ignore all that while on Earth Bet by intentionally not getting invested in the people around her, but she's already made too many attachments in Warhammer. Plus, I don't think her ego would let the country she forged be annihilated.

Lastly, I just felt like pointing out how idiotic it was for the peasants of the Empire to flee to Mordred's realm knowing good and well what she is, yet still persist in wanting to "burn the witches!" Just... I know peasants aren't usually portrayed as being the brightest, but you'd think they'd have SOMETHING like survival instincts.
 
That will have to happen in a non-canon omake sadly, as hilarious as that would be. Another thing that would be awesome to see is this version of Mordred being summoned by chaldea and all the reactions from the various people that a version of Best Girl became a god-queen and did far better then her father as a ruler.
Of course the only reason you/Mordred will last long enough to become a god-queen is due to the Worm CYOA perks.

It's mentioned in 'Fate/Grand Order material III' that Mordred not only matured far faster than a human, her lifespan was far shorter due to her homunculus nature. While actual numbers are vague, the gist of it that I got was that she was fully grown by 10 and would have keeled over by the time she was 30.
 
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, I wonder if she also had Other Races and nations with her when she inspectioned MadDog Pass.

A couple dwarfs but that's it. almost all of them were there to escort her around as bodyguards, most of what she was doing was making sure what she wanted to do was feasible in an area she had never been in.

Will more Dragons show up? For a Grudge Match?

A couple because there is always some bad eggs but they'll get a clue soon enough.

So, she has taken over most of the Border Princes?

Everything that was said to be part of the borderlands is now hers. the disputed areas like near Tilea and other nations are still disputed.

Are the walls going to be a mix of the Theodosian Wall and the Great Wall of China? Because if so then it would be almost impossible to breach
Exsept for these things called cannon. I would hope for her and the Dwarfs to introduce the slightly slanted uniform walls of later periods. Bonus points if key areas have starforts built into the big wall.

Eddit: Bonus ducks if they are controlled collapse walls.

They are going to be designed for cannons because why build a massive defense structure that can't withstand your own artillery? I'm not anywhere near informed about walls beside that they are walls and that some walls are better then others at taking cannon fire. So, I'm just going to say that her people and the dwarfs have it in hand.

So, a question about "Thunder Mountain" the Volcano.

How well can they work with Lava?

I mean, they work with steam.

Can the Dwarves mine in the volcanic area & use it as a forge?

Well, according to this, it was in fact a hold for dwarfs before dragons and goblins got involved.

Remind me, what was the Iron Rock area on the map called?

Iron Rock was founded as an iron mine by the dwarfs before it was taken by the greenskins and then around 1706ish IC, it was cemented as a stronghold for greenskins by Gorbad Ironclaw which just so happens to be that Warboss Mordred oneshoted back in Chapter 1 of Arc 1.

Lastly, I just felt like pointing out how idiotic it was for the peasants of the Empire to flee to Mordred's realm knowing good and well what she is, yet still persist in wanting to "burn the witches!" Just... I know peasants aren't usually portrayed as being the brightest, but you'd think they'd have SOMETHING like survival instincts.

It's more that they mostly intellectually understand but they have been raised to fear magic and hate mages for over a thousand years now, closer to two thousand actually. They might have fled to Drachenreich because the empire was too dangerous, but that doesn't mean they feel that Drachenreich is all that safe. It takes longer then a couple of months for most people to get over a millennia of being taught magic means burn them all.

Of course the only reason you/Mordred will last long enough to become a god-queen is due to the Worm CYOA perks.

It's mentioned in 'Fate/Grand Order material III' that Mordred not only matured far faster than a human, her lifespan was far shorter due to her homunculus nature. While actual numbers are vague, the gist of it is that she was grown by 10 and would have keeled over by the time she was 30.

True, and technically her original lifespan could be used in an interesting way but I don't want to write a story where Mordred has done all of these things, has kids, everything is looking up and then she keels over because her time came up. She had 10ish years of OG life, then she spent another 10 on Earth Bet and then she has been on warhammer world about 5-6 years, that would mean by her OG lifespan, she would keel over when her kid turns 5 years old and that just sucks.

So, she gets a new chance at life as the god-queen of Drachenreich instead.
 
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whelp, can safely say ive caught up and im throughly enjoying this crazy shit-fest. Wonder what will happen next? also with how things are going mordred? better keep an eye on your delegations...and i truly hope chaos doesnt try anything funny with your kid otherwise...well...

i can see even Tzeentch looking at the results of that and going "Okay, that is NOT as planned, and NOT worth the effort. Next idea!"

khorne on the other hand would just throw another 64 blood thirsters at Mordred because she is the best fun they ever had (if they werent totally destroyed), and considers her a Worthy Rival.

(aka Khorne is the only one who is able to duel her among the chaos gods...and wants to fight her himself so he is busy punching the other three warp tumors so he can have a go at the new goddess to be.)
 
I have a question wasn't it stated that mc was a man before reincarnation unless he was gay why is she now willing to get on with dudes id stay virgin forever or be lesbian

And now my random unneeded rant is complete
 
I have a question wasn't it stated that mc was a man before reincarnation unless he was gay why is she now willing to get on with dudes id stay virgin forever or be lesbian

And now my random unneeded rant is complete

pretty sure it was a drunk threesome with 1 other guy and girl. I would assume the merging of personalities made them bi, if they weren't already.

Oh yeah, Wowow Cna you put a map with a scetch of where you want to put the map, Becfause I have an idea but I'm not sure if it correct or not. (Because based one the rive I could see two ways to build the wall, One would be shorter, but would require crossing the Main river to use a side branch, and the other is folling the main river all the way but is alout longer, So a map with a line showing 'wall here' would be nice)
 
I have a question wasn't it stated that mc was a man before reincarnation unless he was gay why is she now willing to get on with dudes id stay virgin forever or be lesbian
pretty sure it was a drunk threesome with 1 other guy and girl. I would assume the merging of personalities made them bi, if they weren't already.

Mordred can't get drunk because of her endurance stat but it is possible to get swept up into a parties atmosphere which is what happened with with Mordred there, the other two were drunk but Mordred was just horny and high on life.

The SI is myself and I guess I could be said to be conditionally bi? I don't really care to put much thought into since it is just easier to say I'm straight and be mostly correct. It is more that I am turned off by the sight of two very masculine men having sex in porn but I have no problem with say a masculine man fucking Astolfo as long Astolfo's feminine side is played up. Does that make sense? Anyways, calling SI!Mordred bi is close enough and probably won't be relevant to the story again.

Oh yeah, Wowow Cna you put a map with a scetch of where you want to put the map, Becfause I have an idea but I'm not sure if it correct or not. (Because based one the rive I could see two ways to build the wall, One would be shorter, but would require crossing the Main river to use a side branch, and the other is folling the main river all the way but is alout longer, So a map with a line showing 'wall here' would be nice)

Assuming you want me to draw a line of where the wall would be built on a map? Sure, just give me a bit to make it.
 
Rough map of where the walls would be.
Edit, Give me a sec, I just spotted something that had me faceplaming. I had been following the wrong section of the river because the map was at a different angle then what I was used to.
Edit #2, Here we go.
Edit #3, Please remember these maps I do are merely for a general idea, not made with precision in mind.
 
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Why not push the wall in the SE quadrant a bit further South? If it were set on Wreckers Run you'd get the double defense of a river, much like you're doing with the Blood River. Not to mention it would give Mordred clear control over all the land bordering the entire Lagoon of Tears. Both for trade/fishing purposes, and to make it harder for any invasion force to blockade her.

Plus, I still like the idea of how the map kinda looks like a dragon head...

Also, is it just me or does the area where the Silk Road, Khyperian Road, Trantio Road, and Pavona Road intersect seem like the perfect place for Mordred to set up a successful trade city? I mean, it even has a freshwater river and the bay right there.
 
huh your getting black-fire pass...a part of me wants to scream "MAKE MORANNON'S." but you kind of already are, especially if you use reinforcement+magic to ensure it flows together with all those castle stuff upgrades...essentially making the gates/walls of Dragon-Realm ridiculously hard to take from within and without.

A Excellent first line of defense...and once your lands are secure...well the internal threats of vampires and shit-head should be dealt with VERY quickly, i mean how will the lahmiens know when mordred is going to pop out of nowhere and lay waste to the entire blood-line of one of the wost-annoying-shit-headed-vampires around? This is going to be good...not to mention with shattered limiter, the longer your around the stronger you get, and eventually instead of brute force you will turn to sheer skill and restraints so you can have mordred find worthy foes.

almost makes me want to do something like this myself.

Edited: whelp, looking at the map above there is a skaven stronghold or lair in the border princes, and allot more of the rat-kin in the Vaults...so mordred may be having to deal with rat-kin invasions sooner or later...and i wonder if she can purify warp-stone? (which case it becomes part of her domain AND legend, as being one of the few beings that can truly purify warpstone in the world.)

also looking back on the whole banishment, me thinks Magnus is going to bust some heads to get mordred to go through the empire to help fight the incoming chaos invasion...problem is, not allot of people are happy with the empire, so Magnus really has his work cut out for him to try and get not only mordreds help, but also her people's help.
 
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Does her children carry circuits and share her lifespan? Is it possible for them to take dragon due to their bloodline?

Does origin and element effect apply on her children in warhammer fantasy?
 
also looking back on the whole banishment, me thinks Magnus is going to bust some heads to get mordred to go through the empire to help fight the incoming chaos invasion...problem is, not allot of people are happy with the empire, so Magnus really has his work cut out for him to try and get not only mordreds help, but also her people's help.
Not to mention that most of the wizards he would be pardoning, are already in Drachenruhe.
 
Edited: whelp, looking at the map above there is a skaven stronghold or lair in the border princes, and allot more of the rat-kin in the Vaults..

It is on the list, as mentioned in the latest chapter to start clearing out the rat problem at some point or at least set up some sort of defense system.

Why not push the wall in the SE quadrant a bit further South? If it were set on Wreckers Run you'd get the double defense of a river, much like you're doing with the Blood River. Not to mention it would give Mordred clear control over all the land bordering the entire Lagoon of Tears. Both for trade/fishing purposes, and to make it harder for any invasion force to blockade her.

That probably will happen if/when the wall is actually made, the placement of the walls not along the blood river is more suggestions for future buildings that might happen then anything else. I'm not a real map maker, I just draw on them to give myself and other people a vague idea of what I was thinking.

Also, is it just me or does the area where the Silk Road, Khyperian Road, Trantio Road, and Pavona Road intersect seem like the perfect place for Mordred to set up a successful trade city? I mean, it even has a freshwater river and the bay right there.

It really does look like a good idea and is something I'll keep in mind when I start fleshing out new cities for Drachenreich.

Does her children carry circuits and share her lifespan? Is it possible for them to take dragon due to their bloodline?

Does origin and element effect apply on her children in warhammer fantasy?

Her descendants will have circuits and thus access to Type Moon style magic but they will be static in number and quality like everyone not hopped up on Shattered Limiter. They will be part dragon and her kid will be a demigod since Mordred is turning into a goddess right now and that would effect them one way or another.

also looking back on the whole banishment, me thinks Magnus is going to bust some heads to get mordred to go through the empire to help fight the incoming chaos invasion...problem is, not allot of people are happy with the empire, so Magnus really has his work cut out for him to try and get not only mordreds help, but also her people's help.

Not to mention that most of the wizards he would be pardoning, are already in Drachenruhe.

No kidding, The vast majority of all magicals will end up in Drachenreich simply because it is the only place they are safe in the entire world, Bretonnia and Kislev is a death sentence for any male and causes all kinds of mental problems for the females. The empire is a death sentence all around.

And if they want her to lead an army in support of them then well...
I swear to take my forces and leave the empire, never to return unless the emperor of the time, supported by all of the elector counts allows me to do so."
Magnus would need to be the emperor and have universial support from every elector count for Mordred to step foot in the empire.

Luckily that doesn't stop Mordred from doing a quick jog via The Darklands into Kislev and thus never needing to step foot in the empire or she could just run across the ocean to Kislev, that works too. She might have problems with entering the empire but she can easily go to Kislev which is where the actual invasion happened. the Chaos army never actually made it to the empire, the empire had just gone to shit by itself. Honestly, it might actually be a problem that Mordred can do this since without the threat of invasion happening, Magnus would not be able to gather so many followers and become second Sigmar, I mean unify the empire.
 
Will origin and elements have an impact?

Also one can increase quality and quantity of circuits even in magic starved nesuverse. Still they can maintain quality. Look at royal blue blood circuits of barthmellori. Also with Age of God in effect I suspect quality of circuit will not decrease rather increase.
 
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