It happened in canon. Where when known as a void mage she was used in a hold the line scenario that garunteed death and had to be poisoned to be shipped off.

And the sad thing is that there's no Saito to trick her away from the battlefield, so she'd better level up real quick if she doesn't want to die when Tristain inevitably goes to war!

Thankfully, she has the Gamer.
 
I was under the impression that "Pentagon" spells are just a Super Special Secret Awesome Royalty Technique where two spells combine, and the ranks top off at Square.
That would make Louise becoming a Pentagon ranked mage... completely unprecedented. Like, she would be writing the book on it, and nobody would actually know what she could do with those spells.
Those aren't actually Pentagon techniques that was Louise describing the power of the hybrid spell using hyperbole to demonstrate it was beyond square in terms of power.
 
And the sad thing is that there's no Saito to trick her away from the battlefield, so she'd better level up real quick if she doesn't want to die when Tristain inevitably goes to war!

Thankfully, she has the Gamer.

If she raises her mana regen high enough, she'll be able to cast spells indefinitely. And every kill makes her stronger (I.e. exp) not to mention leveling skills and elemental affinities. In other words, Louise versus an army would be entirely unfair... for the army.
 
If she raises her mana regen high enough, she'll be able to cast spells indefinitely. And every kill makes her stronger (I.e. exp) not to mention leveling skills and elemental affinities. In other words, Louise versus an army would be entirely unfair... for the army.
If she can take out enough to avoid being surrounded, yeah.
 
No. It was two very powerful triangle spells. Like two tornadoes coming together and wrecking more haovk than... normal tornadoes already do...
Theoretically, a hexagon spell would be a whole different class of spell. Not two spells added to each each. Think multiply instead. instead of two initial strong tornadoes, you have a mega typhoon.

The proper analogy fails me.
Instead of having 2 strong tornadoes, you have a Sun tornado.
 
If she raises her mana regen high enough, she'll be able to cast spells indefinitely. And every kill makes her stronger (I.e. exp) not to mention leveling skills and elemental affinities. In other words, Louise versus an army would be entirely unfair... for the army.
Knowing that she can get powerful enough to slaughter an army, my greatest fear is not for her survival, but for her relationships. It's pretty much a given that she's going to be used, but how people react to that is going to hurt a lot more than grinding levels to survive will.

I can definitely see Henrietta pulling a self-righteous "you're a monster" speel, that girl has no sense of perspective. She'd start the war, use Louise to win, and be horrified at the result. Louise would be shattered by a rejection like that. Even if she has Gamer's Mind in this fic protecting her from PTSD or guilt, she can still be hurt emotionally. And she has the emotional fortitude of a potato chip at this point.
 
d'awww.

In any case, among the many, many things that make Gamer Louise OP as shit is that she doesn't get willpower depletion. It's a *Mana Based System*, so she's back at full after a single night. At this point, if she leverages that absurd learning curve and her own theoretical knowledge, she should be able to keep up with canon without ever learning a single Void spell or investing a single skill point.
 
Knowing that she can get powerful enough to slaughter an army, my greatest fear is not for her survival, but for her relationships. It's pretty much a given that she's going to be used, but how people react to that is going to hurt a lot more than grinding levels to survive will.

I can definitely see Henrietta pulling a self-righteous "you're a monster" speel, that girl has no sense of perspective. She'd start the war, use Louise to win, and be horrified at the result. Louise would be shattered by a rejection like that. Even if she has Gamer's Mind in this fic protecting her from PTSD or guilt, she can still be hurt emotionally. And she has the emotional fortitude of a potato chip at this point.
Now Henrietta can be a shitty friend but she's not shitty in that way or that kind of hypocrite. She just inherited her mother relationship sense.

Note her mother's sense is terrible and utterly corrupted her rule.
 
I know it's been awhile side I watched the anime, but... What?
Now Henrietta can be a shitty friend but she's not shitty in that way or that kind of hypocrite. She just inherited her mother relationship sense.

Note her mother's sense is terrible and utterly corrupted her rule.

This is based on her selfish and shortsighted actions such as:
A)the entire situation with the letter
B)starting a war with Albion bc she wanted revenge
C)became a drunk due to seeing consequences of B) and attacked her rescuers when zombie!wales kidnaps her
D)best friend almost starts a war, against direct orders -> makes her heir to the throne

B) and C) are why I could see her rejecting Louise after using her as a weapon.

The only reason Tristain hadn't been conquered because of her stupidity is because Louise saves the day with Voidhaxx. Henrietta is frankly a terrible queen.

I think she'd be a decent friend if she wasn't the queen, but as she is the careless use of that power has led to her taking advantage of Louise in a very scummy way for her own benefit.
 
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This is based on her selfish and shortsighted actions such as:
A)the entire situation with the letter
B)starting a war with Albion bc she wanted revenge
C)became a drunk due to seeing consequences of B) and attacked her rescuers when zombie!wales kidnaps her
D)best friend almost starts a war, against direct orders -> makes her heir to the throne

B) and C) are why I could see her rejecting Louise after using her as a weapon.

The only reason Tristain hadn't been conquered because of her stupidity is because Louise saves the day with Voidhaxx. Henrietta is frankly a terrible queen.

I think she'd be a decent friend if she wasn't the queen, but as she is the careless use of that power has led to her taking advantage of Louise in a very scummy way for her own benefit.
A)That's Wales. The letter was written as a love thing as a kid before all this trouble was even conceived. It was on him to burn that thing even if it's non binding. She sent top men. on that. Or what she had every reason to be beleive we trusty top men.
B)That war was already coming. Where she fucked up was launching a campaign up there instead repeating her miracle to shutdown any invasion.
C) became drunk cause that was really depressing and ended with large scale mind rape of her forces out of nowhere against custom. Now the Zombie wales thing is stupid and most people add a rider of mindrape magic because the magic that makes zombie wales is also used to mindrape an army.

D) Patently dumb to the tune of her love makes her make bad decisions. Though ultimately Louise is a Daughter of a bastard line, an accomplished war vet, and a mother fucking Void Mage. And well they took on an Elf. Still stupid but yeah.


Henrietta's prime character flaws are that her IQ and propriety takes a massive hit when it comes to close personal relations and that she's a bit of an idealist. She's otherwise competent, well liked, and able in deal making and politicking when the other party is playing the same game and shit doesn't run across the former.


She wouldn't turn on louise going the horror from her being a super war mage. Henrietta herself is a triangle who's seen battles and has hoar of murder bitches on her retainer who shoot and knife things. And she saw a lot of people die in the actual fighting that she led from the front.

Henrietta wouldn't do that you're a monster thing. She'd drink herself stupid over what she had Louise do while trying to make up for it at great personal sacrifice. Then probably be taken advantage of.
 
A)That's Wales. The letter was written as a love thing as a kid before all this trouble was even conceived. It was on him to burn that thing even if it's non binding. She sent top men. on that. Or what she had every reason to be beleive we trusty top men.
B)That war was already coming. Where she fucked up was launching a campaign up there instead repeating her miracle to shutdown any invasion.
C) became drunk cause that was really depressing and ended with large scale mind rape of her forces out of nowhere against custom. Now the Zombie wales thing is stupid and most people add a rider of mindrape magic because the magic that makes zombie wales is also used to mindrape an army.

D) Patently dumb to the tune of her love makes her make bad decisions. Though ultimately Louise is a Daughter of a bastard line, an accomplished war vet, and a mother fucking Void Mage. And well they took on an Elf. Still stupid but yeah.


Henrietta's prime character flaws are that her IQ and propriety takes a massive hit when it comes to close personal relations and that she's a bit of an idealist. She's otherwise competent, well liked, and able in deal making and politicking when the other party is playing the same game and shit doesn't run across the former.


She wouldn't turn on louise going the horror from her being a super war mage. Henrietta herself is a triangle who's seen battles and has hoar of murder bitches on her retainer who shoot and knife things. And she saw a lot of people die in the actual fighting that she led from the front.

Henrietta wouldn't do that you're a monster thing. She'd drink herself stupid over what she had Louise do while trying to make up for it at great personal sacrifice. Then probably be taken advantage of.
The examples are to show why I think she lacks a sense of perspective, it's not a condemnation of her character (though yes, it is a condemnation of her as a leader). Still:

A) Sent one proven mage, her childhood friend, and some dude they caught eavesdropping
B) Yes, that is the part I was pointing to as shortsighted and lacking perspective
C) In canon she was just drunk, but still attacked her own people. Saying it makes more sense if it had involved mindrape doesn't change that fact.
D) It was a hilariously poor move and showed a lack of understanding of politics

Anyway, even if it's just a 'rejection' in that Henrietta refuses to see Louise and/or starts drinking herself stupid(er) because she's horrified by what happened, it would still cause the sort of emotional harm I'm speaking of. Herietta doesn't need to scream "HURR DURR LITERALLY HITLER" for Louise to feel abandoned or isolated.
 
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The examples are to show why I think she lacks a sense of perspective, it's not a condemnation of her character (though yes, it is a condemnation of her as a leader). Still:

A) Sent one proven mage, her childhood friend, and some dude they caught eavesdropping
B) Yes, that is the part I was pointing to as shortsighted and lacking perspective
C) In canon she was just drunk, but still attacked her own people. Saying it makes more sense if it had involved mindrape doesn't change that fact.
D) It was a hilariously poor move and showed a lack of understanding of politics

Anyway, even if it's just a 'rejection' in that Henrietta refuses to see Louise and/or starts drinking herself stupid(er) because she's horrified by what happened, it would still cause the sort of emotional harm I'm speaking of. Herietta doesn't need to scream "HURR DURR LITERALLY HITLER" for Louise to feel abandoned or isolated.
a)Eh. She Sent Louise newly knighted magic eating boom canon. Her Super human familar. Wardes Square Mage Captain of an order of knights fiance trainee of Karin. Guiche son of a loyal general. Who can be ditched.
B) Yes. It was. I mean she really should have hooked up with Germania more tightly used Louise to clean up shop over their tightened down and sent a crack team ahead of the invasion to do shit subversion shit. Heavy subverison.
C)Ah.
D)Eh she knows politcs. The incedent was actually quiet ya know since it involved and elf. And Louise is the void Mage.
 
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"Well, time to get to work." Louise declared and pushed up her sleeves. She was still happy, and probably would stay that way for weeks, but that afternoon's events had generated as many questions as they had answered.

This was reflected in the dozens of small rectangles that hovered around Louise, waiting to be dismissed. She had already read them and knew, from her experience with that first skill, that dismissing the majority of them would only invite another rectangle with more information. Determined to understand what the figments were and what they did to her, Louise sat at her desk and prepared a quill and a few sheets for writing. Then she took out a paper that she'd worked on the evening of the past Voidsday. It had been that day she'd resolved to start marking down and keeping track of what the figments said and it had earned her more 1 of wisdom.

Louise agreed it was a wise decision.

The paper didn't have much. 'EXP' was easy to count since she apparently gained 10 per class, plus the occasional quest reward. Louise's eyebrows shot up and she quickly jotted down another plus 5 she'd gotten at the end of Professor Colbert's lesson, searching for and dismissing the corresponding rectangle. She totaled it up. 260 was a high number, a number whose meaning she had a few ideas about. But wisdom, vitality and strength, to her chagrin, she wasn't quite sure about. Was it really 4 on wisdom? And strength, vitality? 6, 7 or 8?

Nothing to do about it. She should have been more attentive before. She grabbed a new sheet and dipped her quill in ink. Then she started copying what the words said, dismissing and copying down the new rectangles as she marked which ones invited even more to appear. By the end of it, she had moved onto a new sheet and her wrist ached. Massaging it, she re-read her notes. It was a bunch of numbers and letters in combinations that made little to no sense when put together, apparently just quantifying phenomena.

However, Louise had managed to gleam something from that mess.

Every time she cast a spell for the first time, she 'learned a new skill'. Spells were 'skills', that described the effects of the spell. They had several numbers associated with them, like damage or chance of blinding. Plus an 'LV', a per cento amount of 'EXP' and an 'MP' cost. Finally, every spell she learned gave her 10 of the corresponding elemental affinity.

'LV', she'd discovered, meant level. Rank, in sum. Louise had discovered this because the flame, incandescence, fireball and levitation spells had all 'leveled up' and were marked as level 2 in their rectangles. So everybody had their rank displayed, which explained commoners generally having a lower number than mages, but Louise didn't quite think the correlation between level and a person's objective value was that simple.

Montmorency was a level 14 and as a line mage she was obviously better than a commoner guard, yet the ones that guarded the Academy were often 15 or 16. As veteran and skilled as they were, Montmorency was better simply because she was a line mage.

'MP' could only be Willpower. And 'EXP'…

Louise cleared a space on her desk and opened up the book she'd brought from the library. It was the fifth volume of the most complete Tristrainian dictionary available, more specifically, the letter E. If STR, VIT and WIS were all initials, then…

"EXN, EXO, EXP… EXPECTATION, Expectatif... EXPEDIER... Expedition, Expeditionaire... EXPERIENCE, Experimenté, Experimenter, Expert, Experimental, EXPIER... EXPIRER... EXPLIQUER, Expliqué, Explication, Explicable, Explicitement, EXPLOIT, Exploité, Exploitable, Exploitant, EXPRÉS, Expressíment, EXPRIMER, Exprimé, Expression..." She ran over the words again, deep in thought. She gained 'EXP' by going to classes and doing quests, and spells gained 'EXP' by being practiced, as attested to their higher number of 'EXP' when she had practiced them. Finally, enough 'EXP' made spells rise in rank.

Experience. It was the only one that made sense. Like mages needed practice, familiarity, experience with their magic to be able to stack more elements. To rise up in rank, dot to line, line to triangle, triangle to square. In level.

'EXP' and 'LV' measured Louise's progress. Her skill and ability.

She glanced up and frowned.

<The Gamer>
Lv1 Louise La Vallière

Level 1 was… pathetic. Even Guiche was a 9. Commoners had greater levels than her!

Well, that would change, she thought with a smile. It was only a matter of time, time Louise wasn't going to waste.

Although… she still had no clue why she was 'the gamer'. She didn't gamble or play any games in particular. Perhaps it too had a different meaning.

Thoughts for another time. Louise had been let out of the class early. She looked outside and verified with a start that night had fallen. The dormitories were still quiet, so supper should be being served. Louise frowned. She didn't feel like appearing late for supper. And well, it wasn't like she hadn't forgotten to eat before, buried in books and essays.

She'd just spend the time practicing magic. After all, she had levels to rise to.
 
This is based on her selfish and shortsighted actions such as:
A)the entire situation with the letter
B)starting a war with Albion bc she wanted revenge
C)became a drunk due to seeing consequences of B) and attacked her rescuers when zombie!wales kidnaps her
D)best friend almost starts a war, against direct orders -> makes her heir to the throne

B) and C) are why I could see her rejecting Louise after using her as a weapon.

The only reason Tristain hadn't been conquered because of her stupidity is because Louise saves the day with Voidhaxx. Henrietta is frankly a terrible queen.

I think she'd be a decent friend if she wasn't the queen, but as she is the careless use of that power has led to her taking advantage of Louise in a very scummy way for her own benefit.
a)That was fucking stupid but I don't think she understood how dangerous it was. Frankly if Wardes hadn't been a traitor they wouldn't have had much problems.
b) She didn't start the war with Albion. Albion started the war with her by flat out invading her nation and attacking her during her wedding. Her decision to launch a counter attack was controversial primarily because the population didn't know they had a void mage which makes the fight far more in their favor. Louise's fathers objection was he felt they shouldn't invade an island nation without 2 or 3 times their forces to account for defensive advantage, not that she was starting a pointless war, but that it was a better idea to force their enemies to come to them while building up forces.
C) That was fuck stupid but she wasn't exactly fully sane at the time.
D) The friend in question is now publicly known as a wielder of a lost holy magic only possessed by the founder of their religion and Henrietta's legitimacy as a ruler derives from being a descendent of that founder. Louise simply existing makes her a threat to the legitimacy of Henrietta's rule. Making Louise her heir removes that threat by tying Louise (and her claim to the throne) to the current administration. Also she risked starting a war with a neighbor who had been revealed to have been behind the slaughter of a allied royal family, an invasion of her nation, consorting with elves, and wanting to burn the world. Weakening his rule by saving an estranged and easily influenced potential claimant to his throne sounds a lot better when taken in that context.

Note that Henrietta also wasn't a Queen until after the failed invasion attempt by Albion, and she is working with a small nation and a crown who's authority had been weakened over years of her mother being a shitty absent ruler. (Also she is what 17, 18)
 
That was quite clever of her. I wonder what people would think of those notes, though. Elaborate cypher or crazed scribblings of an economist?

She'd just spend the time practicing magic. After all, she had levels to rise to.
The road to square mage begins!

Edit: @cyberswordsmen I'm not condemning Henrietta's character by pointing out her mistakes, merely explaining why I think she lacks a sense of perspective. There are justifications for whether she was right or wrong to argue over, but that won't change my interpretation of her character.
 
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It's good to see her starting to figure things out. Can't wait to see how she reacts when she manages to open up the menu for the first time...
Hi, just joined in reading this. I can't wait till she opens her status screen. I mean it shows a lot of info on there besides just her stats. Short Bio too I believe? And Inventory will be glorious.

Party will be a mindfuck. Well options/settings will too if it exists. Time to adjust the gamma or turn subtitles on! :p
 
a)Eh. She Sent Louise newly knighted magic eating boom canon. Her Super human familar. Wardes Square Mage Captain of an order of knights fiance trainee of Karin. Guiche son of a loyal general. Who can be ditched.

A) I'll break this up.
1) Louise was essentially given credit for Saito's work, her abilities were still factory default so her booms were borderline useless, granted, Henrietta didn't know that. Regardless, sending a mere Chevalier into a civil war to collect sensitive information is an act of tactical stupidity. Henrietta gave Louise the mission because she trusted her, nothing more.
2) And she knew this how? Not only that but as Louise's Familiar, he had no choice but to go.
3) The only logical choice which was also not her first. If memory serves, Wardes butted his way into the mission, if he hadn't taken the initiative then he likely wouldn't have gone. (I'll have to fact check this.)
4) A student line mage. Being the son of a loyal general is not in itself proof of competence, if anything, sending the son of a loyal general on a mission quite far out of his league is a good way of making a loyal general less loyal.

(Edit: According to Volume 2 Chapter 3 Henrietta appointed Wardes to the mission according to this quote: "I'm not your enemy. I'm under the orders of the highness to accompany you on your journey. The princess is worried about just having you few going to Albion, but then again sending a whole troop of soldiers with you will be too conspicuous. Therefore, I was appointed to accompany you all on this journey.")
 
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So, has Louise eaten anything since she got the skill? Because she should have gotten a message from that, unless the messages of health recovery don't show up when her Hp is full.
 
3) The only logical choice which was also not her first. If memory serves, Wardes butted his way into the mission, if he hadn't taken the initiative then he likely wouldn't have gone. (I'll have to fact check this.)
4) A student line mage. Being the son of a loyal general is not in itself a qualification of competence, if anything, sending the son of a loyal general on a mission quite far out of his league is a good way of making a loyal general less loyal.

I could be wrong but I think Wardes was planned to be sent with them from the start as an escort.

Guiche was the one who butted in, and at the time Agnes was considering executing him for espionage. him being the third and mostly useless
(and therefore completely disposable) son meant she could probably get away with it. it was volunteer and hope they say yes or his head on the chopping block.
 
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